（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习培优专项牛津译林版（含参考范文+写作指导）

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2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习专项牛津译林版
（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“changes around us”.请你根据下表中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。
注意事项：
1. 必须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可以适当发挥，使短文语言通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数100左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
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2．你校英语报正开展主题征文活动。请根据表格中的要点，以“Changes in our lives”为题写一篇稿件，简述社会、家庭、学校及个人生活中的若干变化，并谈谈你的愿望和打算。词数80至100。
变化 家乡 小道→大路
生活 步行、骑车→乘车、开车
学校 旧校舍→新教学楼
个人 主要通过书本学习→通过网络等多种方式学习
愿望 ……（自拟）
打算 如何实现自己的愿望（自拟）
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3．在过去二十年里，你的家乡已发生了巨大的变化。请根据表格中的要点，以“Changes in my hometown”为题，介绍家乡的过去和现在，并谈谈自己的感受。词数80至100。
过去 现在
小村庄，房子旧，人少 现代化小镇，高楼林立，人们搬进新公寓
道路又少又窄；人们步行或骑车 道路更多更宽；人们乘公交车、出租车，开小汽车
商铺较少 有超市、医院和现代化学校
感受……（自拟）
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4．改革开放以来，中国发生了巨大变化，令人振奋。请你以“Changes in people’s lives”为题，把家乡人生活的巨大变化及自己的感受写下来，与大家分享。文章必须包括以下要点，可适当发挥，词数不少于80。
过去 现在
居住 大家庭挤在小房子里 宽敞明亮的大公寓
交流 信件 手机、网络
娱乐 听收音机 看电视、上网
交通 骑自行车或步行 自己开车，乘坐地铁、公交车或出租车
Changes in people’s lives
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5．近些年来， 中国发生了巨大变化，令人振奋。假设你是海外华人Mr Li，回到了阔别许久的故乡，你把故乡人生活的巨大变化及自己的感受写在博客上，与大家分享。
过去 现在
居住 大家庭挤在小房子里 崭新、明亮的大公寓
通讯 书信 手机；网络……
娱乐 看电视，读报，听收音机…… 玩电脑；旅行，例如：去主题公园，享受自然之美……
交通 自行车；步行 公交车；地铁；出租车；自己开车
要求：
1. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯，表达清楚，语法正确。
2. 必须包括所有相关信息，可作适当发挥。
3. 字数在90词个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
4. 不出现真实姓名和校名等。
Changes in people’s lives
Great changes have taken place in people’s lives over the years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．俗话说：“读万卷书，行万里路。”你的英国笔友John对这句话深有感触。假如你是李华，请根据来信内容用英语给他写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua, Recently I have read a book about China. In the book, there is an old Chinese saying “Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles.” It means that it is important to read ten thousand books and walk ten thousand miles. Do you like reading Chinese students are often busy with homework. What are your reading habits Do you have any reading plans this year Do you enjoy travelling Could you tell me something about your favorite trip I hope to hear from you soon. Yours, John
要求：
（1）要点齐全，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
（3）卷面整洁，书写美观；
（4）120词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
Thanks for your letter. I share the same feeling with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
7．在英语课上，同学们就自己喜欢的旅游方式展开了讨论。请根据表格中的要点，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。词数80至100。
团队旅游 有导游，不会迷路；不必自己找旅馆；结识朋友，相互帮助
个人旅游 自由安排时间；选择自己喜欢的旅游景点；有机会学习照顾自己
你的想法及原因 ……(自拟)
参考词汇：团队旅游 travel with a group；个人旅游 travel alone；安排 arrange；机会 chance
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8．假如你是西蒙，请根据下表提示给你的朋友迈克写一封邮件，谈谈你的一次旅行经历。词数不少于80。
时间 上周六 地点 苏州 人物 我和父母 交通工具及车程 乘坐大巴2小时
活动 第一天：游览拙政园（Zhuozheng Garden）和狮子林（Lion Forest Garden）→欣赏美景、拍照等。 第二天：游览金鸡湖（Jinji Lake）→湖边散步, 湖上泛舟。 第三天：参观博物馆、购物、品尝美食等。
感受 ……（自拟）
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9．假如你叫李明，今年五一假期你要跟父母去青岛旅行，你打算告诉你加拿大的笔友Paul关于你的旅行计划。请你根据以下思维导图的提示用英语给Paul写一封不少于80词的信。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Paul,
How are you
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Do you have a May Day holiday in your country What’s your plan I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Ming
10．生活中不只有眼前的试卷和作业，还有诗和远方。暑假快到了，你们校刊的英文栏目正在征集“The place I want to go most”稿件，请你投稿吧！
写作内容：
1.你最想去的地方是哪里；
2.你为什么想去这个地方；
3.你打算在那里做些什么。
写作要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名字；
2.词数要求90左右。
The place I want to go most
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11．请根据以下要点, 以“Travelling”为题写一篇短文。词数80至100。
要点：
1. 旅游是一种非常好的活动。
2. 当我们工作或学习一段时间后，可以出游欣赏自然风光。
3. 旅游可以让我们忘记烦恼，交到朋友，有益健康。
4. 旅游有时也很麻烦，比如，我们可能因为糟糕的天气而打乱计划，也可能……（自拟）
5. 为了旅途安全愉快，我们最好在旅游前做好充分准备，而且……（自拟）
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12．在线旅行是一种寓学于乐的好方式。请根据以下要点写一篇短文，叙述一次在线旅行的经过以及感受。词数80至100，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥。
要点：1. 网上游览纽约，参观了华尔街、时代广场、中央公园等地。
2. 返回北京，游览了王府井大街、天安门广场、长城等地。
3. 我更喜欢北京， 因为北京的历史更悠久。我希望……（自拟）
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13．假如你是李萍， 一名中学生，你的笔友Mary来信，想了解关于中国的一些情况。请根据以下要点，写一篇80词左右的短文介绍中国。短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. 中国位于亚洲东部，有五千年的悠久历史；
2. 中国的首都是北京——一个现代化的大城市；
3. 中国有许多游览胜地。其中，长城是最著名的。每年，来自世界各地的百万游客游览长城；
4. 中国的气候 (climate) 各地不同。南方夏天热，北方冬天冷。
Dear Mary,
Glad to receive your letter. You said you want to know about China in your letter. Now let me talk about it.
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Yours,
Li Ping
14．在日常生活中，国际互联网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以“On the Internet”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
国际互联网的主要用途
信息 看国内外新闻，也可获取其他信息
通讯 发邮件、打电话
学习 上网上学校、阅览各种书籍、自学外语
娱乐 欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩棋牌游戏
生活 购物
On the Internet
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15．在我们的日常生活中，互联网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据下面的表格提示，以“On the Internet”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
互联网的主要用途
信息 看新闻，获取其他信息
通讯 收发电子邮件，打电话
学习 上网络学校，阅览书籍，自学外语
娱乐 欣赏音乐，观看体育比赛，玩棋牌游戏
生活 购物、聊天、交友
On the Internet
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16．你校正在举行“阅读周”活动，请你以“My reading habits”为题写一篇100词左右的短文，参加英语阅读俱乐部的交流活动。
要点：1. 我非常爱读书，每周花大约八个小时阅读。
2. 平时在早晨或课间读书。周末通常睡前读一个小时。
3. 我对不同种类的书感兴趣，例如科学书和历史书。我最爱的书是《时间简史》。
4. 我经常从学校图书馆借书。我父亲也爱读书，常和我讨论读什么，也会给我一些有关读书的好建议。
5. 我认为读书可以……（自拟两点看法）
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17．阅读对人的成长影响很大。“腹有诗书气自华”， 一本好书往往能改变人的一生。4月23日“世界读书日”就要到了，请根据以下要点写一篇文章，就如何养成阅读好习惯向同学们提些建议。词数80至100。
要点: 1. 选择适合自己读的书。（适当发挥）
2. 计划好自己的读书时间。（适当发挥）
3. ……（自拟一条建议）
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18．根据要点提示，以“My reading habits”为题写一篇短文，介绍自己的阅读习惯并发表观点，词数80左右。
要点：1.喜欢阅读不同类型的书， 最喜欢读什么书，每周花多长时间读书；
2.采用什么方式读书，例如，和朋友一起读书并讨论；
3.老师给我们许多关于读书的建议；
4.对阅读的看法。
My reading habits
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19．
愚公移山的故事在中国家喻户晓，在古代要人工搬移大山是一件艰巨而又难以完成的工作，你作为旁观者，对这件事情有何看法，请根据提示写一篇英语作文，发表你的观点。
提示：
1. Tell the story simply;
2. Do you agree with Yu Gong’s action Why or why not
要求：
1、要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2、词数 80 个左右；
3、文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称
We all know the famous Chinese story called Yu Gong Moves a Mountain. Once upon a time,
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20．假如你是李萍，一名初二学生。请根据以下要点写一篇80词左右的短文。 短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
要点：1. 业余时间喜欢读书；
2. 每周约花五个小时读书，每晚睡前读点书，周末读得多一些；
3. 喜欢读科学书籍，因为它们能提供许多知识；
4. 有时，去书店买书，有时，去校图书馆借书；
5. 希望长大后能当作家。
My name is Li Ping and I’m a student of junior 2.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．范文
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
As for travel, people now have fast and convenient ways to travel. Some people like travelling online and more and more people can afford to travel abroad. Our studies are also changing. We often do group work in class, which helps us learn from each other. Besides, thanks to the Internet, we can take online courses anytime and anywhere. Entertainment has greatly improved, too. Modern cinemas have comfortable seats and advanced technology, and more people choose to join outdoor activities on weekends to relax and stay healthy. Our environment changes a lot, too. The air is fresher and the water is cleaner.
In a word, our life is becoming better and better. We look forward to a better future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、点明主旨：我们周围的生活发生了巨大的变化；
第二步、根据提示要点，从旅行、学习、娱乐和环境等方面介绍发生的改变；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②as for至于
③on weekends在周末
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①We often do group work in class, which helps us learn from each other.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．范文：
Changes in our lives With the rapid development of China’s economy, great changes have taken place in our lives in the past few years.
In my home town, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they not only learn from books but also through computers.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder now so that I can realize my dream.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”、“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：本文应该主要用第一人称来写；该题目要求包含表格里的内容，写出家乡、学校、个人的变化，还有愿望、计划等。注意时态的运用，注意现在完成时，愿望和计划是一般将来时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头要表明写作内容和意图。说明本文是关于生活中的变化；
第二步，写出家乡、学校、个人的变化；
第三步，写出愿望、计划并进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①With the rapid development随着快速的发展
②take place发生
③in the future在将来
[高分句型]
①There they not only learn from books but also through computers.（not only ... but also ...句式）
②I will study much harder now so that I can realize my dream.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
3． Changes in my hometown
In the past twenty years, great changes have taken place in my hometown.
It used to be a small village with old houses and few people. The roads were few and narrow, and people usually walked or rode bikes. There were only a few shops. However, it has become a modern town now. Tall buildings stand everywhere and people have moved into new apartments. The roads are wider and more, and people can take buses, taxis or drive cars. Moreover, there are supermarkets, hospitals and modern schools.
I feel proud of these changes. They make our lives more convenient and comfortable. I believe my hometown will be better in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇根据给定要点进行对比描述的材料作文，主题为家乡在过去二十年的变化。
②时态：主要运用 “一般过去时” 描述家乡过去的状况，“一般现在时” 展现家乡现在的面貌。
③提示：题目明确给出了过去和现在家乡在居住环境、交通、基础设施等方面的特点作为写作要点。写作时需全面涵盖这些要点，并且可适当增添相关细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点明主题，引出家乡在过去二十年发生了巨大变化这一核心内容，让读者迅速了解文章主旨。
第二步，对比过去情况和现在情况进行了详细描述，使之一目了然，文章脉络更清晰。
第三步，写出作者的感受，并对家乡未来充满信心，使文章内容更加完整，富有情感。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去曾经是
②take place发生
③moreover此外，而且
[高分句型]
①It used to be a small village with old houses and few people.（使用used to be）
②I believe my hometown will be better in the future.（宾语从句）
4．范文
Changes in people’s lives
Great changes have taken place in people’s lives in the past 40 years. In the past, a big family had to live in a small house. People kept in touch with relatives and friends by writing letters. They listened to the radio for news and other information. Children used to go to school on foot or by bike.
Now more and more people live in big and bright flats. People can talk to others over the telephone or on the Internet. Almost every family has TVs and computers. Today, people go to work by car. They can also travel by bus, taxi, or underground. More and more families have their own cars.
In a word, people live better than before. I’m so excited to see these changes!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先总体介绍人们生活发生的变化，接着从住房、交流、娱乐和交通等方面介绍过去人们的生活状况；
第二步，介绍现在人们的居住条件，娱乐设施及交通状况等，新旧进行对比；
第三步，总结上文，表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①kept in touch with保持联系
② listened to the radio听收音机
③More and more families越来越多的家庭
[高分句型]
①Great changes have taken place in people’s lives in the past 40 years.（现在完成时态）
②In a word, people live better than before.（比较级）
5．范文：
Changes in people’s lives
Great changes have taken place in people’s lives over the years.
In the past, a big family had to live in a small house. People kept in touch with relatives and friends by writing letters. They watched TV, listened to the radio or read newspapers for news and other information. Children used to go to school on foot or by bike.
Now more and more people live in big and bright flats. People can talk to others over the telephone or on the Internet. Almost every family has computers. They often play computer games. Sometimes, they go travelling in their free time. For example, they go to some theme parks like Disneyland for a visit. They also enjoy the natural beauty in Jiuzhaigou. Today, people still ride their bikes to school or work, but they can also travel by bus, taxi or underground. More and more families have their own cars.
In a word, people live better than before. I’m so excited to see these changes.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”、“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：描述故乡生活的变化及个人感受，需包括居住、通讯、娱乐、交通等方面的对比，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引入主题，说明回到故乡后看到的变化。
第二步：具体描述居住、通讯、娱乐、交通等方面的变化，并加入个人感受。
第三步：总结感受，表达对故乡变化的欣喜与自豪。
[亮点词汇]
①keep in touch保持联系
②used to do过去常常做某事
③for example例如
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
①Now more and more people live in big and bright flats.（比较级+and+比较级，表达“越来越……”）
②Today, people still ride their bikes to school or work, but they can also travel by bus, taxi or underground.（but连接的并列句）
6．范文
Dear John,
Thanks for your letter. I share the same feeling with you. I’m very glad to tell you something about the Chinese saying “Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles”. It means that it is important to read ten thousand books and walk ten thousand miles. It tells us that reading and travelling can make us learn more knowledge. I like reading because I can learn a lot from books. I usually read after I finish my homework or before I go to bed. I also like travelling. The visit to Beijing last year was my favorite trip. I visited the places of interest in Beijing and learned about its traditional culture. I really understand the meaning of “He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man.”
Do you like travelling Have you ever been to China I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括来信中所提要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍回信的目的，从而引出话题；
第二步，解释“读万卷书，行万里路。”的含义，并回答笔友来信中的问题；
第三步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest 名胜古迹
②learned about了解
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①I like reading because I can learn a lot from books. (because引导原因状语从句)
②It tells us that reading and travelling can make us learn more knowledge. (宾语从句)
7． 范文
Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling. Here is the result.
Some students choose to travel with a group. With a guide’s help, they won’t get lost and they don’t need to look for hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends with other members and help each other while travelling. Other students like to travel alone. That’s because they want to arrange their time freely and choose their favourite sights. What’s more, it’s a chance for them to learn to look after themselves.
For me, I’d like to travel alone. I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like. In this way, I can enjoy my holiday better.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍去旅游的方式；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“团队旅游、个人旅游”两个方面进行介绍；
第三步，介绍自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①look for寻找
②make friends交朋友
③want to do sth.想要做某事
[高分句型]
That’s because they want to arrange their time freely and choose their favourite sights. (because引导的表语从句)
8．范文
Dear Mike,
How’s it going I’m writing to share my wonderful trip to Suzhou with you.
Last Saturday, my parents and I went to Suzhou. It took us two hours to get there by coach.
On the first day, we visited Zhuozheng Garden and Lion Forest Garden. The gardens were full of beautiful flowers and ancient buildings. We enjoyed the amazing views and took many photos.
The next day, we went to Jinji Lake. We took a leisurely walk along the lakeside and then went boating on the lake. The peaceful water and fresh air made us feel really relaxed.
On the third day, we visited the local museum, where we learned a lot about Suzhou's history and culture. After that, we went shopping and bought some special souvenirs. We also tried various delicious local foods, like Suzhou-style noodles and sweet osmanthus cakes.
This trip to Suzhou was truly unforgettable. I hope I can visit there again someday.
Best regards,
Simon
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇应用文，具体为邮件。用于向朋友分享个人旅行经历，写作时需注意采用亲切、自然的交流口吻。
②时态：主要时态为一般过去时，因为是讲述上周六发生的旅行经历。
③提示：写作要点已通过表格给出，涵盖时间、地点、人物、交通方式、每天具体活动及个人感受。考生需注意不能遗漏这些要点，可适当添加细节，如描述景点的具体景色、美食的味道等，同时突出旅行经历这个重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步、表明写作意图：可直接分享苏州旅行的经历。
②第二步、具体阐述写作内容：通过行程起始、每日活动且按时间顺序，分别描述具体景点。描述过程中可多使用细节描写，增加内容丰富度。
③第三步、书写结语：表达对此次旅行的感受，表达希望再次游览的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①wonderful精彩的
②leisurely悠闲的
③various各种各样的
[高分句型]
①It took us two hours to get there by coach. (“It takes/took sb.+时间+to do sth.”句型)
②We visited the local museum, where we learned a lot about Suzhou's history and culture. (where引导的非限制性定语从句)
9．范文
Dear Paul,
How are you
I have great news to tell you. This May Day, I’m going to Qingdao with my parents for holidays. We are going there by plane. We plan to stay there for about three days. When we are there, we will go sightseeing and go swimming in the sea. We will enjoy the sunshine on the beach. We also plan to go shopping and eat some delicious seafood. I believe that we will take a lot of beautiful photos there. I am really exited about the trip and I hope we can have a good time there.
Do you have a May Day holiday in your country What’s your plan I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据思维导图进行写作，注意不要遗漏要点。可适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明假期要跟父母去青岛旅行；
第二步，重点介绍旅行的交通方式，时间，活动和感受；
第三步，期待朋友的回信。
[亮点词汇]
① plan to do sth. 计划做某事
② be exited about 对……感到兴奋
③ look forward to 期待做某事
[高分句型]
①When we are there, we will go sightseeing and go swimming in the sea. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I believe that we will take a lot of beautiful photos there. (that引导宾语从句)
10．范文：
The place I want to go most
There are so many wonderful places to have a holiday. This time, the place I want to go most is Sanya.
As we all know, Sanya is a good place to relax ourselves. It has beautiful sea and clean beaches. The weather there makes people comfortable. Another reason I want to go there is Sanya’s hotels. Most of the hotels have wonderful condition and service. I really want to have a try.
If I go there, I’ll lie in the sunshine and swim in the sea. I’ll also taste seafood and try something new. I think a day is not enough for me, and Sanya is really the place where I want to go most.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点展开，适当发挥，注意条理清晰和语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最想去的地方是三亚；
第二步，介绍为什么想去三亚；
第三步，介绍打算在三亚做些什么；
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know众所周知
②have a try试一试
③try something new尝试一些新的东西
[高分句型]
If I go there, I’ll lie in the sunshine and swim in the sea. (if引导条件状语从句)
11．One possible version
Travelling is a wonderful activity that brings joy and relaxation. After working or studying for a long time, going on a trip allows us to enjoy natural beauty, such as mountains, rivers, and forests. It helps us forget worries, make new friends, and stay healthy.
However, travelling can sometimes be challenging. Bad weather might ruin our plans, and heavy traffic or lost luggage could cause stress. To ensure a safe and pleasant journey, we should prepare well before travelling. For example, check the weather forecast, pack necessary items, and plan the route carefully. Besides, staying polite and following local rules is also important.
In short, travelling makes life colourful if we face its challenges wisely.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章的标题和部分内容以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“自拟”这一部分要自己补全内容，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据提示的要点，具体介绍旅游的好处；
第二步，根据提示的要点，介绍旅游可能带来的麻烦，并介绍为了确保旅途安全能做的准备；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①for a long time长时间
②enjoy natural beauty欣赏自然美景
③make new friends交新朋友
④for example例如
[高分句型]
①Travelling is a wonderful activity that brings joy and relaxation.（动名词作主语）
②To ensure a safe and pleasant journey, we should prepare well before travelling.（不定式表目的）
③In short, travelling makes life colourful if we face its challenges wisely.（条件状语从句）
12．范文
Last weekend, I took an amazing virtual tour. First, I visited New York online, exploring Wall Street’s skyscrapers, the bright lights of Times Square, and the peaceful Central Park. Then, I returned to Beijing, wandering through Wangfujing’s busy streets, stood in Tian’anmen Square’s grand space, and climbed the Great Wall’s ancient steps.
Though both cities fascinated me, I prefer Beijing because its profound history. Walking along the Great Wall, I could almost hear echoes of ancient stories. I hope to visit these places in person someday, feeling their true charm.
【总体介绍】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，介绍纽约的游览；
第二步，介绍北京的游览；
第三步，点明偏好与愿望。
【亮点词汇】①a virtual tour虚拟之旅
②the bright lights of明亮的灯光
【高分句型】①Though both cities fascinated me, I prefer Beijing for its profound history spanning thousands of years. （though引导的让步状语从句）
②Walking along the Great Wall, I could almost hear echoes of ancient stories. （现在分词作伴随状语）
13．范文：
Dear Mary,
Glad to receive your letter. You said you want to know about China in your letter. Now let me talk about it.
China is in the east of Asia and has a long history of about 5, 000 years. Its capital is Beijing. It is a big and modern city in China. There are many places of interest in our country. Among them, the Great Wall is the most famous. Every year, millions of people from all over the world come to visit it.
The climate in China is different from place to place. It is hot in the south in summer and itis cold in the north in winter.
Welcome to China some day and I’ll show you around.
Yours,
Li Ping
【解析】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇书信作文。
时态：主要时态是一般现在时；
提示：需要根据给出的要点，以书信形式介绍中国的基本情况。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的，简单的问候；
第二步，从“地理、历史、旅游胜地以及气候”等方面介绍中国；
第三步，热情邀请Mary来中国，并承诺带她游览。
[亮点词汇]
①in the east of Asia亚洲的东部
②a long history悠久的历史
③places of interest旅游胜地
[亮点句型]
①Glad to receive your letter. (省略句)
②There are many places of interest in our country. (There be句型)
14．范文
On the Internet
The Internet is very important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can learn news both at home and abroad. And we can also learn all kinds of information. We can send emails to our friends by Internet. We can even make phone calls, go to net schools, read many books and learn foreign languages alone. If we are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess and cards on the Internet. We can do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them, too.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，写短文介绍国际互联网的主要用途。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总写互联网的重要性；
第二步，介绍互联网的主要用途。
[亮点词汇]
①at home and abroad 在国内外
②all kinds of 各种各样的
③do shopping 去购物
[高分句型]
If we are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess and cards on the Internet.（if引导条件状语从句）
15．One possible version:
On the Internet
The Internet is very important in our daily life.
On the Internet, we can learn about the news in the world. And we can learn all kinds of information. We can send and receive emails and make phone calls. We can go to an online school, read many books and learn foreign languages by ourselves. If we are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports games and play chess or cards. We can also do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends on the Internet.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体指出互联网的重要性；
第二步，分别从信息、通讯、学习、娱乐等不同的方面介绍互联网的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
① learn about了解
② all kinds of各种各样的
③ make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
If we are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports games and play chess or cards.（if引导的条件状语从句）
16．范文
My reading habits
I love reading very much. I spend about eight hours reading each week.
I read books in the morning or between classes on weekdays. At the weekend, I usually read for about one hour before going to bed. I’m interested in different types of books, such as books on science and history. My favourite book is A Brief History of Time.
I often borrow books from the school library. My father likes reading too. We often discuss what to read, and he always gives me some good advice on books.
I think reading can improve my knowledge and open up a whole new world to me. Good books are good friends.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的爱好是读书，以及你的读书时长；
第二步，介绍你读书的习惯和喜欢的书的类型；
第三步，阐述你和父亲之间关于读书的故事；
第四步，介绍读书的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①spend some time doing sth花费多少时间做某事
②be interested in对某事感兴趣
③borrow from从……借用
④such as例如
[高分句型]
①I think reading can improve my knowledge and open up a whole new world to me. (宾语从句)
②We often discuss what to read, and he always gives me some good advice on books. (并列句)
17．范文
How to Develop a Good Reading Habit
Reading has a profound impact on our growth. A good book can even change our lives. With World Reading Day approaching on April 23rd, here are some tips on developing a good reading habit.
First, choose books that suit you. If you’re interested in science-fiction, pick up books like Dune or The Three-Body Problem. If you prefer biographies, look for stories of great figures. This way, you’ll be more motivated to read.
Second, plan your reading time. Set aside a specific period each day, say 30 minutes before bed. Consistency is key. This regular routine will gradually turn reading into a habit.
Finally, join a reading club. Sharing ideas and feelings about books with others can make reading more enjoyable and give you new perspectives.
Let’s start reading and enrich our lives through books.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇话题作文，目的是向同学们介绍养成阅读好习惯的方法。写作时需采用清晰、有条理的语言，便于读者理解和接受建议。
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时，因为文章阐述的是一般性、常态化的建议和观点。
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括选择适合的书、规划读书时间，还需自拟一条建议。考生要确保涵盖这些要点，且可适当添加细节丰富内容，同时突出养成阅读习惯这个重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图：点明阅读对成长的重要性以及世界读书日即将到来，顺势引出关于养成阅读好习惯的建议。
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容：通过选书建议、时间规划并给出自己的建议，从而丰富阅读体验。
③第三步，书写结语：以呼吁性语言结尾，鼓励同学们行动起来养成阅读习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①profound深刻的
②motivated有动力的
③perspectives视角；观点
[高分句型]
①Reading has a profound impact on our growth. (简洁有力地表明阅读的重要性。）
②If you’re interested in science-fiction, pick up books like Dune or The Three-Body Problem. (运用if引导的条件状语从句，使选书建议的阐述更具逻辑性和条理性。)
18．范文：
My reading habits
I love reading different types of books and I am especially interested in history books. Every night before going to bed I read books for half an hour. It seems that I can’t sleep well if I don’t read for a while. I spend at least seven hours a week reading books. Some of my friends love reading too. We usually spend half a day in the city library at the weekend. Time always seems to go fast when we are reading interesting books. Our Chinese teacher gives us lots of advice on books.
Reading is great fun. Books help me learn more about the world.
【总体介绍】①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，首先说明自己的阅读喜好和每周花多长时间读书；
第二步，介绍自己喜欢的读书方式和老师的读书建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的对读书的看法。
【亮点词汇】①be interested in对……感兴趣
②half an hour半个小时
③at least至少
④give sb lots of advice给某人建议
【高分句型】①It seems that I can’t sleep well if I don’t read for a while. （固定句式It seems that...）
②Time always seems to go fast when we are reading interesting books.（when引导的时间状语从句）
19．范文
We all know the famous Chinese story called Yu Gong Moves a Mountain. Once upon a time, there was an old man named Yu Gong. His house was blocked by a big mountain, so he decided to move it with his family. They worked very hard every day, but the mountain was still there. Some people laughed at him, but he never gave up.
I agree with Yu Gong’s action. Although it seemed impossible to move the mountain, his spirit of never giving up is very important. Sometimes, if we keep trying, we can achieve our goals. Yu Gong’s story teaches us to be brave and persistent, no matter how difficult the task is.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍对愚公移山的看法，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍愚公移山的故事；
第二步，介绍自己对愚公移山的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②laugh at嘲笑
③agree with同意
[高分句型]
①Although it seemed impossible to move the mountain, his spirit of never giving up is very important. (让步状语从句)
②Sometimes, if we keep trying, we can achieve our goals. (条件状语从句)
20．范文
My name is Li Ping and I’m a student of junior 2. I like reading in my spare time.
Every week I spend about five hours reading. Before going to bed, I do some reading. At weekends, I do more reading. I like science books because they can give me a lot of knowledge. Where can I get these books Sometimes I go to the bookstore to buy books. Sometimes I go to the school library to borrow some.
I hope I’ll be a writer when I grow up.
【解析】[总体分析]
①本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，展望未来时用“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头说明自己业余时间喜欢读书，并引出下文；
第二步，介绍读书的具体细节，包括读书时间、读什么样的书、原因是什么，以及获取书的途径；
第三步，展望未来，希望成为作家。
[亮点词汇]
①in my spare time在我空闲时
②spend about five hours reading花费大约五小时读书
③going to bed上床睡觉
[高分句型]
①I like science books because they can give me a lot of knowledge. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I hope I’ll be a writer when I grow up. (省略that的宾语从句)
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