（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇（含答案解析）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期中复习培优专项外研版（2024）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期中复习专项外研版（2024）
（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．在你的成长过程中，父亲一定做了许多让你感动或者印象深刻的事情。Teen Times杂志正在组织“感恩父亲”的征文活动，请以“Father and I”为题写一篇短文，参加本次活动。
内容包含：
1. 描述一件发生在父亲和你之间的事情；
2. 你的感受或对你的影响；
3. 表达对父亲的爱和感激之情。
注意: 1.不能在文中出现真实姓名；
2.语句连贯，词数80词左右。
Father and I
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2．自实施“双减”政策以来，学生们拥有了更多的课余时间，丰富的社团活动也在如火如荼地开展。假如你是阳光中学七年级学生李华，请根据下列写作要点，写一封社团申请信。写作要点：
1.Which club would you like to join
2.Why do you want to join the club
①Personality(性格)：What are you like
②Ability：What can you do
③Hobby：What are you interested in
④Wish：What do you want to get from the club
要求：
1. 文中应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数不少于60，书写美观，注意单词的大小写和标点符号。
Dear teachers,
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Thank you!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
3．幸福是获得成功，是给予，是成长……你校英语校报正在开展以“幸福”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李辉，请你用英文，以“Happiness in My Life”为题，写一篇短文投稿，表达你对幸福的正确理解。
提示：
1. 你对幸福的理解；
2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事情 (需要交代时间、地点、过程与感受)；
3. 针对此事发表简单的看法和感想。
要求：
1. 语意连贯、层次清晰；
2. 词数70左右。
Happiness in My Life
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4．班级将举办英语演讲比赛，请根据思维导图，以“How to Be Happy”为主题，写一篇70词左右的演讲稿。开头和结尾已经给出 (不计入总词数)。
要求：
1. 短文应条理清楚、行文连贯、段落分明；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息；
3. 短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。
Good morning, everybody!
Today I want to talk about “How to Be Happy”. The following are my suggestions.
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That’s what I want to share with you. Thank you!
5．快乐是独自完成一项任务后的成就感，是绞尽脑汁解出一道数学题之后的喜悦，是走上领奖台掌声响起时的一份骄傲……假定你的英语老师要求全体同学以“________ Make(s) Me Happy”为题，写一篇英语发言稿，并进行班内分享。请根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
1.什么使你感到快乐？
2.它使你感到快乐的原因。
注意：
1.请补全标题，如hobbies、sports、reading或helping others等；
2.短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4.词数70～80。
________________ Make(s) Me Happy
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6．我们的生活中处处充满着爱，有父母的爱，有老师的爱，有同学的爱，有朋友的爱……请以“Love Around Me（我身边的爱）”为题，写一篇短文。内容要点如下：
爱你的人 爱的表现
父母 为你做早餐；送你上学……
老师 传授知识；照顾你……
同学 一起学习；和睦相处……
朋友 在网上交流；分享快乐与烦恼……
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7．爱他人先爱己，学会取悦自己也是非常重要的。心情能影响人的身体健康。最近很多网友在一些英文网站论坛上讨论如何拥有好心情，并发表了自己的观点。请你以“How to Be in a Good Mood”为题，根据提示并适当发挥，写出自己的相关看法，词数80左右。
内容提示：
1.保持好心情的重要性；
2.你是怎样让自己拥有好心情的。
参考词汇：sports, communication, volunteer...
How to Be in a Good Mood
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8．“国家喊你减肥了”，2025年国家实施体重管理三年行动，我们青少年应积极响应号召，行动起来，健康生活，一起“动”起来! 请你以“Doing sports”为题，从运动角度谈谈你对体重管理的做法，写一篇70左右英语短文。
写作要点：
1. What sports do you do in your school
2. What sports do you like
3. How often do you play the sport(s)
4. Why do you like the sport(s)
要求：
1.文章必须包含以上内容提示，可适当发挥，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
Doing sports
It is important for us to do exercise.
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9．Teens around the world是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人在交流网站上发布了一个帖子，假设你是大明，阅读下面原帖后，用英语回帖。
Teens around the world
Subject: sports heroes
Hey, guys. Everyone has his own favourite sports team or sports star. What about yours Do you know anything about it/ him/ her Why do you like it/ him/ her Please share yours with us. Amy, America
注意：
1. 70词左右；
2. 不要出现本人信息；
3. 禁止抄袭试卷中的语篇内容。
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Daming, China
10．假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom想了解你学校的布局。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件介绍你的学校。
提示： 学校很大很漂亮，有很多树和花；学校有一座教学楼，里面有很多教室；教学楼前面有一个操场，同学们课后经常在那里玩耍；图书馆在教学楼的左边，里面有很多有趣的书；你非常喜欢自己的学校。
要求：包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；词数：60—80词。
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11．俗话说，饭后百步走，活到九十九。假如你是李辉，请就此写一篇文章向学校广播站英语栏目投稿。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英语写一篇短文。词数70左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
In our school, many students do not like walking or doing exercise.
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12．现在，越来越多的人重视健康，他们选择通过运动来保持健康，但是运动安全也不容忽视。假如你是李华，请你给校报的英语栏目English Corner投稿，提醒同学们在坚持体育锻炼的同时必须保证安全，并提出一些关于运动安全的建议。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 必须包含表格中所有内容，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数70左右。(开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Now more and more people pay more attention to their health.
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In a word, we must pay attention to sports safety when we do exercise to keep healthy. Don’t hurt ourselves.
13．现在，越来越多的人重视体育锻炼。在闲暇时间或休息日，到处都是锻炼的人们。他们有的爱打羽毛球，有的爱踢足球，还有一些人喜欢游泳。你喜欢哪种锻炼方式呢？请你以“My Favourite Sport”为题，根据以下提示，用英文写一篇80词左右的短文介绍一项你最喜欢的运动。
提示：
1. 你喜欢的运动是什么？
2. 你什么时候开始做这项运动？
3. 你为什么喜欢这项运动？
My Favourite Sport
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14．假如你是李华，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“我运动，我健康”为主题的线上交流活动。请你根据以下问题提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你最喜欢的体育运动。
提示：
1. What sport do you like best
2. When and where do you usually do the sport With whom
3. How does the sport influence you
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
2. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
3. 不少于70词，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I’d like to share my favourite sport with you.
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15．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Frank来信询问如何使自己的生活过得更积极、健康。请你根据以下内容提示，给他回一封e-mail，谈谈自己的饮食、运动、作息习惯并给出建议。
内容提示：Do you have a balanced diet
What sports do you often do
What good do they bring you
How do you develop (养成) a good daily routine
Something more about your living habits and advice.
要求：（1）短文必须包括内容提示所有的要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）不得出现真实人名、校名和地名；
（3）词数80词左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Frank,
I’m happy to get your letter. As for how to live a healthier life, here are some of my habits and advice for you.
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Hope these can be helpful to you. I’m looking forward to hearing about your progress!
Yours,
Li Hua
16．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Dennis 给你发来了邮件。请你根据电子邮件内容，写一封60 词左右的回复。
TO Lihua@
SUBJECT Food
Hi Li Hua, I heard Chinese people eat healthily. So, what do you usually eat for dinner And what special food do Chinese people have on birthdays Can you tell me Dennis
要求：
1. 书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级及姓名。
Hi Dennis,
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Yours,
Li Hua
17．你校将开展“How to be a healthy student”的演讲比赛，假如你想参加比赛，请结合以下思维导图和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，给校公众号投稿。
写作要求：
1)文中须包含思维导图中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名或地名等信息；
3)词数60左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
How to be a healthy student
Hello, everyone! I’m happy to give a talk here.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
18．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom想了解你保持健康的方式，请你根据以下提示给他写一封邮件。
提示：1. 你喜欢的运动（如跑步、游泳等）及运动的频率；
2. 你的饮食习惯（如多吃蔬菜、少吃垃圾食品等）；
3. 你的作息时间（如早睡早起等）。
要求：1. 邮件内容须包含以上提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右。（开头结尾已给出，不计入邮件总词数）
Dear Tom,
How are you I’m very glad to tell you how I keep fit.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
19．你的学校即将再次和法国的圣马丁中学开启交流之旅，现需要选拔一名优秀学生作为赴法交流访问团的组长。假如你是李华，打算参加选拔，请给负责人Mr. Zhang写一封自荐信。
内容必须包括以下要点：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势 (了解法国、精通语言、性格、能力……)；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
(1) 词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Grade 7.
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Yours,
Li Hua
20．健康饮食与学生生活息息相关。请根据所提供的信息与提示词,以“How to Be Healthy”为，用英语写一篇短文。
内容要点：
1. 吃健康食品, 如鱼；喝健康饮品,如牛奶。
2. 不吃不健康的食品, 如汉堡包；不喝不健康的饮品，如可乐。
3. 每天做运动, 如踢足球、打篮球等。
提示词：such as例如；first第一；second 第二；third 第三；finally 最后。
写作要求：
1. 短文必须陈述以上三个方面的内容；
2. 所给的提示词都必须用上（可适当发挥），词数不少于60词；
3. 短文中不得出现真空的姓名、校名和地名；
4. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范
How to Be Healthy
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Father and I
We need love. We also need to love others. The person I love most is my father. I remembered it was a Sunday morning. It was a very sad moment because of a “C” in my English test. My father saw my sad face and wanted to help me. He invited me to climb a mountain. It was very high. Soon I felt so tired that I wanted to give up. My father encouraged me to be strong and gave me a hand when I felt like giving up. So I kept on climbing. At last, we reached the top of the mountain together. With the help of my father, I learnt that sticking to my dream is important. From then on, I studied hard and made great progress. Father’s love may be silent. But like a mountain, it is always there.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要感恩父亲；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点描述一件发生在父亲和自己之间的事情并介绍这件事对自己的影响；
第三步，书写结语。表达对父亲的爱和感激之情。
[亮点词汇]
①because of由于
②invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
④give up放弃
⑤stick to坚持
[高分句型]
①Soon I felt so tired that I wanted to give up. (结果状语从句)
②With the help of my father, I learnt that sticking to my dream is important. (宾语从句)
2．
Dear teachers,
I would like to join the Basketball Club. I’m not shy and I’m kind to my classmates. I am tall. I have a strong body and I can run fast. I can play basketball but I can’t play it very well. So I need to join the Basketball Club to practise playing basketball. I like basketball very much. I want to be a basketball player in the future. If I join the Basketball Club, I want to learn skills from other members. I hope to do better in the basketball games.
Thank you!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封申请信；
②时态：本文采用一般现在时；
③提示：写作应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己想要参加哪个俱乐部以及原因；
第二步，介绍自己的个人情况；
第三步，最后对自己加入这个俱乐部表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth想要做某事
②be kind to对……善良
③practise doing sth练习做某事
[高分句型]
①If I join the Basketball Club, I want to learn skills from other members. (if引导的条件状语从句)
3．例文
Happiness in My Life
Happiness is important in our lives. In fact, I think happiness springs from love in our hearts.
I’ll never forget an experience. Once, I had a bad mark in a maths exam. I was nervous and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home, my parents knew what happened, and they said to me, “It doesn’t matter. Remember we’ll always be beside you when you need help. We believe you can do better next time.” This touched me greatly and I decided to work harder. At last, I made great progress.
I feel happy. Whenever I’m in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child and the pride of my parents.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括3个方面的提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明主题，阐述幸福在生活中的重要性，并表明自己对幸福的理解；
第二步，讲述具体事例；
第三步，书写总结，表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①spring from起源于
②make great progress取得巨大的进步
[高分句型]
①Whenever I’m in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. (whenever引导的状语从句)
②We believe you can do better next time. (宾语从句)
4．例文
Good morning, everybody!
Today I want to talk about “How to Be Happy”. The following are my suggestions.
First of all, it’s important to keep healthy. Without good health, we will have nothing. So we should form good life habits, eat good food and try our best to take exercise every day. Next, we should have some hobbies. When we have hobbies, we can spend our free time doing things we like. And our life will be busy but meaningful. Finally, I think happiness springs from helping others. When we help those in trouble, we must know what we can do and who we can help. I believe that if we do so, we can have a happy life.
That’s what I want to share with you. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出演讲主题；
第二步，具体阐述保持开心的方法；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②keep healthy保持健康
③want to do sth.想要做某事
[高分句型]
①When we have hobbies, we can spend our free time doing things we like. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I believe that if we do so, we can have a happy life. (that引导的宾语从句)
5．例文
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life. Helping others can bring happiness to me. It is not just about giving a hand, but about sharing a part of myself. Helping others also brings me joy. When I lend a helping hand, I feel like I’ve made the world a better place, even in a small way. The joy comes from seeing others smile. In the future, I plan to make my efforts to help others.
Whether it’s giving a hand to a friend, or offering a kind word to a stranger, I will try my best to help others in need. After all, happiness lies in giving, not receiving.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍什么使你感到快乐；
第二步，具体阐述它使你感到快乐的原因；
第三步，最后介绍今后自己的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①give a hand伸出援手
②try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事
③after all毕竟
[高分句型]
①Helping others can bring happiness to me.（动名词作主语）
②When I lend a helping hand, I feel like I’ve made the world a better place, even in a small way.（状语从句）
6．范文：
Love around me
There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive love from my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends. In the morning, my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often share my pleasure and trouble. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decision to study hard and make great progress. Here, I should say to them, “Thank you for all your love.”
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己身边有很多“爱”；
第二步，分别具体介绍爱自己的人以及爱的表现；
第三步，书写结语，表达对这些人的感恩。
[亮点词汇]
①look after照顾
②get on well with和……友好相处
③not only…but also…不但……而且……
④in one’s spare time在某人的空闲时间
⑤make great progress取得巨大进步
[高分句型]
①There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. (There be句型)
②I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. (when引导的时间状语从句)
7．例文
How to Be in a Good Mood
It’s important for us to have a good mood, because moods can affect people’s health. Here are some suggestions about how to be in a good mood.
First, we can do sports, because it will make us healthy and happy. Second, travelling is a good way of relaxing and staying in a good mood. Third, we can do something meaningful like reading or volunteering. We can get a strong feeling of satisfaction when we learn a lot or hear thanks from others. Fourth, talking to others, especially our friends, can help us calm down and feel easy. Also, hanging out to see a film also makes us feel joyful.
All in all, when you are in a bad mood, just go out to enjoy the beauty of nature or try something that can make you calm, or find someone you trust to talk with to release your anxiety or sadness.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要是“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点，介绍如何保持好心情。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍好心情的重要性，引出下文具体建议；
第二步，具体介绍如何保持心情；
第三步，总结全文，让大家保持良好心情。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②talk with与……聊天
③all in all总之
[高分句型]
①It’s important for us to have a good mood, because moods can affect people’s health.(It固定句型)
②Here are some suggestions about how to be in a good mood. (倒装句)
8．例文
Doing sports It is important for us to do exercise. I do many sports in my school. I play basketball every day. And I can play football in my PE class. After class, I always take part in many sports, such as jumping rope.
Of all the sports, I like playing basketball best. I play it with my friends twice a week. I think I can learn many things from it. Playing basketball can teach me a lot of useful skills and help me to keep fit. I can know teamwork from it too.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，说明在学校里每天都会做什么运动；
第二步、介绍自己喜欢什么运动，进行这项运动的频率；
第三步、简述自己喜欢这项运动的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②twice a week一周两次
③keep fit保持健康
[高分句型]
① I think I can learn many things from it.(宾语从句)
9．例文：
Hi Amy,
My favorite sports star is Lin Dan, a famous Chinese badminton player. He is known as “Super Dan” because of his amazing skills and achievements. He won two Olympic gold medals and many world championships. I admire him not only for his talent but also for his hard work and never-give-up spirit. He inspires me to stay strong and keep trying in life.
Who’s your favorite athlete, everyone Let’s share more!
Daming, China
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动明星；
第二步，介绍喜欢原因。
[亮点词汇]
①is known as被称为
② because of由于
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
④inspire sb to do 激励某人做某事
⑤keep doing sth一直做某事
[高分句型]
①Let’s share more! (祈使句)
10．例文
Dear Tom,
How’s it going I’m glad to tell you something about my school.
My school is big and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers in it. There is a teaching building with many classrooms. In front of the teaching building, there is a playground. After class, my classmates often play there. The library is on the left of the teaching building. There are lots of interesting books in it.
I love my school very much. I hope you can visit it one day.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校的环境；
第二步，表达对学校的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①In front of在……前面
②on the left of在……的左边
③interesting有趣的
[高分句型]
I hope you can visit it one day.（宾语从句）
11．例文
In our school, many students do not like walking or doing exercise. They often sit for a long time every day. When they need to go out, they will go by bus or by car.
But I am different from them. I get into a habit of walking. I take a walk twice every day, often in the early morning and after dinner at night. Each time I would walk along the river behind our house for about 15 to 20 minutes. Because of this habit, I become healthier.
All in all, walking is very good for our health. Let’s try to take more walks to keep us fit and strong.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作意图开头已给出，写作时可直接描述学生的不良习惯。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“你自己的散步习惯及效果”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家健康生活，多散步。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②do exercise锻炼
③for a long time持续一段长的时间
④need to do sth需要做某事
⑤go out外出
⑥take a walk散步
⑦be different from与……不同
⑧because of由于
⑨all in all总之
⑩be good for对……有益
[高分句型]
①When they need to go out, they will go by bus or by car. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Let’s try to take more walks to keep us fit and strong. (祈使句)
12．例文：
Now more and more people pay more attention to their health. We can keep healthy by doing sports. When we do sports, the most important thing is to keep safe. Here is some advice on sports safety.
First, we should choose the sport that is right for us. Second, it is important to wear the sports clothes and sports shoes when we play sports. They help us feel comfortable and move freely. Third, in order not to hurt ourselves, remember to warm up before we take exercise. Finally, knowing about some rules of the sport also helps us stay safe.
In a word, we must pay attention to sports safety when we do exercise to keep healthy. Don’t hurt ourselves.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，引出话题；
第二步、根据提示，提出一些关于运动安全的建议；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②keep safe保持安全
③advice on…关于……的建议
④in order not to do sth.为了不做某事
⑤take exercise运动
[高分句型]
①First, we should choose the sport that is right for us. (that引导定语从句)
13．例文
My Favourite Sport
As we know, sports play an important part in our life. I am interested in sports and I do sports every day. Of all the sports, I like swimming most.
I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old. I was a little nervous in the water at first. With the help of my parents and the coach, I did well after some weeks. Now, I am very good at swimming. Swimming makes me feel free and happy.
I believe there will be more and more people who love swimming. Everybody can have a good time when going swimming.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇强调运动的重要性，引出主题：作者对运动的喜爱以及最喜欢的运动项目是游泳；
第二步，详细描述作者学习游泳的经历以及游泳给自己带来的感受；
第三步，书写总结，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important part in 起重要作用
②be interested in 对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I believe there will be more and more people who love swimming. (宾语从句、定语从句)
14．例文：
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I’d like to share my favourite sport with you. My favourite sport is basketball. I usually play basketball every Saturday afternoon in the park. I play it with my friends and sometimes with my classmates.
Playing basketball brings me a lot of benefits. I feel happy and full of energy after playing. It also helps me make new friends and learn to work in a team. I love basketball because it keeps me fit and brings joy to my life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最喜欢什么运动；
第二步，介绍你通常在什么时候和谁一起进行这项运动；
第三步，说明这项运动给你带来什么影响并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①bring sb a lot of benefits给某人带来很多益处
②full of充满
[高分句型]
①I love basketball because it keeps me fit and brings joy to my life.（because引导的原因状语从句）
15．例文
Dear Frank,
I’m happy to get your letter. As for how to live a healthier life, here are some of my habits and advice for you.
Firstly, remember to have a balanced diet. I eat lots of fruit and vegetables every day and hardly ever have soft drinks. It’s also important to drink enough water throughout the day. Secondly, exercise helps build up our bodies. It makes me strong and happy. Lastly, a good daily routine helps too. I go to bed and get up early every day. Having enough sleep helps me stay energetic in the daytime and I never feel sleepy in class.
Hope these can be helpful to you. I’m looking forward to hearing about your progress!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍自己如何保持健康的生活方式，并给出建议；
第三步，期待对方回复，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①a balanced diet均衡饮食
②build up建立
[高分句型]
①Firstly, remember to have a balanced diet. （不定式作宾语）
②It’s also important to drink enough water throughout the day.（it is adj to do sth固定句型）
16．例文
Hi Dennis,
I usually eat beef, tomatoes and rice for dinner. I think they are healthy. My mom cooks well, so the food is always delicious. In China, we always have long noodles on birthdays because they are a symbol of long life. It’s getting popular to have cakes on our birthdays. We usually make a wish before eating the cake. I also eat eggs and my mom says eggs are a symbol of life and good luck. I love to eat them.
What do you eat on your birthday Maybe, you can try long noodles and eggs!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据电子邮件的问题提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己通常吃什么；
第二步，介绍中国人在生日时会吃什么；
第三步，最后问对方生日吃什么。
[亮点词汇]
① a symbol of long life长寿的象征
② make a wish许愿
③ good luck好运
[高分句型]
In China, we always have long noodles on birthdays because they are a symbol of long life. (原因状语从句)
17．例文
How to be a healthy student
Hello, everyone! I’m happy to give a talk here.
Health is important for students. Here is my advice. First, we should have healthy living habits. Washing hands often before meals is a good habit. Second, we should do sports every day. We can play basketball, run, and so on. Third, we should have healthy eating habits and we should have more fruit and vegetables. Breakfast gives us energy for the morning. Also, we should drink enough water every day. Last, we should be happy. It is important for our health.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干思维导图的要点，详细介绍如何保持健康；
第三步，感谢聆听并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①do sports做运动
②and so on等等
[高分句型]
①Here is my advice.（倒装句）
②Washing hands often before meals is a good habit.（动名词作主语）
18．范文：
Dear Tom,
How are you I’m very glad to tell you how I keep fit.
I like running and swimming. I run three times a week and swim twice a week. I think they are good for my health. I also have a good eating habit. I eat a lot of vegetables and fruit. I seldom eat junk food. I go to bed early and get up early every day. It is important to have these good habits.
What about you How do you keep fit Please share your good habits with me.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件作文。
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”。
③提示：不可遗漏写作要点，要介绍自己保持健康的方式，并适当补充，使文章内容充实，行文应使用第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，表明自己讲分享如何保持健康；
第二步，详细介绍自己运动、饮食和作息等信息；
第三步，收尾，询问对方如何保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
①three times a week一周三次
②be good for对……有好处
③a lot of很多
[高分句型]
①I think they are good for my health.（宾语从句）
②It is important to have these good habits.（句中it作形式主语）
19．例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Grade 7. I’m so excited about the news that we’ll go to France for an exchange. I’m writing to ask the possibility of being a group leader of the team.
I like France and know about it very much. I have ever been there for 4 times before. It is an excellent country with a long history. It’s not hard for me to show my teammates around and help them learn about local culture. Besides, speaking French fluently and clearly is easy for me, too. I can translate for the team. Furthermore, I’m caring and wise. I am able to look after others well and skillful at making decisions. I will be a good manager and serve the team in a proper way.
Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①体材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：一般现在时、一般将来时、现在进行时以及现在完成时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，首先根据已给要点进行写作，其次适当补充发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：在第一段写明写信目的；
第二步：在第二段介绍自己的优势；
第三步：在第三段表达对胜选的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①it be adj. (for sb) to do sth (对某人来说) 做某事很……
②show sb around带某人参观某地
③help (sb) (to) do sth帮助 (某人) 做某事
④look after照顾
⑤thank sb for doing sth感谢某人做某事
⑥look forward to (doing) sth期待 (做) 某事
[高分句型]
①I’m so excited about the news that we’ll go to France for an exchange. (that引导的定语从句)
②I’m writing to ask the possibility of being a group leader of the team. (动词不定式表目的)
③It’s not hard for me to show my teammates around and help them learn about local culture. (it作形式主语)
④Besides, speaking French fluently and clearly is easy for me, too. (动名词短语作主语)
20．例文
How to Be Healthy
It’s important to stay healthy. How can we stay healthy
First, eat healthy food such as fish and rice. They are good for us. Second, don’t eat hamburgers or ice cream. They are unhealthy. Third, drink milk and juice, They are healthy drinks. Finally, don’t drink cola or coffee. They are not healthy. Doing sports is helpful, too. You can play football or basketball. If so, you will be healthy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，主题为“How to Be Healthy”。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生需围绕“健康饮食与运动”这一主题，从吃健康食品、避免不健康食品、以及进行日常运动三个方面进行阐述。同时，要求使用提供的提示词，如first、second、third、finally等，以增强文章的条理性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入主题。简要说明健康饮食与学生生活紧密相连，强调保持健康的重要性，从而引出下文要讨论的健康建议。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。使用“First”引出第一个要点，即吃健康食品；使用“Second”过渡到第二个要点，即避免吃不健康的食品；使用“Third”转向第三个要点，即每天做运动；
第三步，书写结语。使用“Finally”进行总结，强调保持健康需要综合饮食和运动两方面的努力，并可以表达希望读者能够积极采纳这些建议，享受健康生活的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①stay healthy 保持健康
②such as 例如
③be good for 对……有好处
④be helpful 有帮助的
⑤play football 踢足球
⑥play basketball 打篮球
[高分句型]
①First, eat healthy food such as fish and rice. They are good for us.（“such as”用于举例说明健康食物）
②If so, you will be healthy.（“if so”引导条件状语从句，表示“如果这样的话”）
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