（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇（含答案解析）-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习培优专项外研版

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2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习专项外研版
（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．某英文网站正在开展以“我最想感谢的人”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈谁是你最想感谢的人，他/她是怎样帮助你的，以及你的收获。
提示词语: trouble, encourage, improve, stick to
提示问题: .
·Who do you want to thank most
·How did he/she help you
·What have you learned from him/her
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot .______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．家是温馨的港湾，家是幸福的源泉，家是永远的依恋，每年5月15日是世界家庭日(International Day of Families)。学校英语校刊举办征文活动，请结合自身的成长经历，破解家庭幸福的“密码”，写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 你对家庭幸福的理解；
2. 你家发生的一件有意义的事；
3. 促进家庭和谐幸福的几点建议(请列举两到三条具体做法)。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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3．小时候，你一定有很多玩具吧。有没有一件玩具是你保存至今的？请你以“My favoritetoy”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的玩具。
提示：
1. What’s your favorite toy
2. How long have you had it
3. Who gave it to you
4. Why do you love it
写作要求：
（1）语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范；
（2）词数70左右;
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。
My favorite toy
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4．我们都收到过礼物，每个礼物的背后或多或少都有一些故事。那么，你最喜爱的礼物是什么呢？你拥有它多长时间了？对你来说，它有什么特殊的意义？请以“The Story Behind My Favorite Gift”为题写一篇英语短文。
提示词：favorite gift; have had
要求：
1. 参考提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于60词。
The Story Behind My Favorite Gift
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5．每个人都有过一些经历，有做过的，也有没有做过的，请你写一篇短文，向同学们叙述一下你所做过的或没做过的一些经历，可以适当发挥。
内容提示：1. ride a bike, not take a plane
2. read the book Journey to The West, not read the book Three Kingdoms
3. eat dumplings, not make dumplings
4. play basketball, not play tennis
要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
2.词数不少于80词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My Experiences done and undone
Hello, everyone. I have many experiences done and undone. Let me tell you something about them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假如你曾经去过阜新的海棠山（Mount Haitang），请根据下面的内容提示，向同学们介绍一下旅游经历，可适当发挥。内容包括：
(1)by car, last Sunday, my parents, southeastern Fuxin, strange stones, old pine tree, 400 years, inscriptions on precipices (摩崖石刻)；
(2)your feelings；
作文要求：
(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
The Trip to Mount Haitang
Hello, everyone!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．身边的许多事情能牵动我们的心情，环境、天气、大灾难等。在遇到不如人意的事情的时候，有时会让人伤心欲绝，对人的身心健康造成威胁。我们应该怎样积极面对？请你结合以上提示，以How to deal with sadness为题写一篇短文。要点如下：
1．在生活中导致悲伤的一些原因；
2．悲伤情绪对我们有何影响；
3．我们应如何面对悲伤，请提几点建议(至少3点)。
注意：
1. 词数80～100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：灾难disaster; 积极地positively
How to deal with sadness
There may be too much sadness in our life.
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8．假如你是王治，从小就希望做一名宇航员。请看下面的思维导图并以“I Want to Be an Astronaut”为题，写一篇短文，内容包括你想做航天员的原因以及你打算如何去做。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I Want to Be an Astronaut
Why How
1. walk in space like Nie Haisheng 2. … 1. study hard 2. …
要求：
1. 词数：80左右，开头已给出不计入总词数；
2. 行文连贯，可自由发挥。
I Want to Be an Astronaut
I’m Wang Zhi. I want to be an astronaut when I grow up.
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9．何其有幸，生于华夏。我们每一个中国人都为伟大祖国骄傲自豪。假如你是李雷，请根据提示，给你在美国的笔友Dave写封信，向他介绍你的祖国。
提示：
1. What do you know about China
2. What are the Chinese people like
3. ...
要求：
1.短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，并适当发挥。
2.短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3.词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Dave,
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Yours,
Li Lei
10．假如你梦想着当一名宇航员去太空旅行。请你根据以下提示，以My dream为题写一篇英语短文，内容提示：
1. 在很小的时候你就对各种飞机感兴趣。
2. 从此之后，你经常在收看太空新闻，经常阅读关于太空旅行方面的书籍。
3. 10岁时你开始做宇宙飞机模型，现在你已经做了2个飞机模型，大家都说你做的模型很独特，新颖，去年你还参加了飞机模型比赛并获了一等奖。
可能用到的词汇：interested, news, space travel, make model planes, win the first prize
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
2.词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My dream
Everyone has a dream. My dream is to be an astronaut.
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11．太空是浩瀚的、神秘的。人类对宇宙一直不断地探索，请根据你所学的太空知识，描述一下你心目中的宇宙。再结合你自己的感想，向同学们说说你未来的打算。可适当发挥。内容包括：
(1) universe, galaxy, solar system, earth, moon;
(2) scientists, do research about, Chinese space station;
(3) astronaut, in the future.
作文要求：
(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everybody! It’s my turn to tell you something about the space.
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12．一百、一千、一万……即使有再多的零，没有了一，一切都归零。在我们的生活中，如果没有了健康，财富、地位等一切也都失去了意义。请以“Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，参照下图的信息，用英语写一篇80词左右的文章。
注意：1. 书写清晰、字迹工整、行文流畅，语句通顺。
2. 包含所给内容，并适当拓展补充。
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13．健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢？请根据下面的信息提示，写一篇短文，首句已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：健康饮食，多吃水果蔬菜；早睡早起，不熬夜，保证充足睡眠；参加运动，强身健体。
参考词汇：熬夜stay up; 增进，加强build up
要求：
（1）条理清晰，把握要点，适当发挥；
（2）书写工整，卷面整洁；
（3）80词左右。
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
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14．健康生活是我们中学生的学习保证。假如你是 Lily，你的好友 Alice来信说她最近感觉很疲劳，很紧张，很容易生气，这些症状对她的学习生活造成了很大困扰。请你给 Alice写一封回信，从睡眠、饮食和运动等方面给她提一些建议。词数80词左右。
要点:
1)你对 Alice 状况的了解；
2)你的建议；
3)你对 Alice的祝福。
提示词： nervous 紧张的 enough sleep 充足睡眠 regular exercise 规律运动 relax放松
Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems.
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Yours,
Lily
15．近年来，中小学生健康习惯问题开始引起人们的关注。保持健康对于中学生来说是很重要的，为了保持健康，我们应该做些什么呢？请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题从以下几个方面写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
1. Food: eat healthy food
2. Exercise: run, play balls...
3. Good habits: go to bed early and get up early
…（补充至少一条）
要求：
1.字数80个词左右。
2.短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
3.文中不能出现真实的姓名、地名、校名。
How to keep healthy
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16．2023年起宁夏中考体育将提高分数，这意味着学生的体质健康更加得到了重视。那么作为中学生，我们应该如何保持健康的生活方式呢？请你根据以下提示要点，以“How to keep healthy ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，和同学们分享一下你的建议。
要求：
(1)语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；
(2)包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
注意：
(1)词数80词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
How to keep healthy
As we all know, health is the most important in our life. However, do you know how to keep healthy Here is my advice.
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17．Write about a book you have read or a film you have seen. Use the following questions to help you.
Questions: 1. What is the name of the book/film
2. What kind of book/film is it
3. Who is the hero
4. What is the story
5. Did you enjoy it Why or why not
要求：
1、短文须包含以上主要内容，80—100词；
2、结构完整，语句通顺正确，上下文连贯，书写认真。
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18．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike对中国传统文化非常感兴趣，他来信想让你介绍有关中国传统文化。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 表达写信目的：
2. 介绍一项中国传统技艺：
3. 表达邀请和期盼。
注意：
1. 词数 80—100。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to receive a letter from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．你最喜欢的动画片人物是谁？请你根据提示内容，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，向大家介绍一下孙悟空。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：give up放弃
The Monkey King 1. born from a stone (石头); change himself into 72 different shapes (形状); travel 108,000 li at a time 2. protects Tang Seng; solves many difficulties (困难) and dangers 3. learn ... from him
The Monkey King is the main character in Journey to the West, a very famous Chinese book.
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What’s your favourite cartoon hero Why not tell us
20．假如你们班最近做了一项关于“我最喜欢的电影类型”的调查问卷，请你根据自己的情况回答所调查的内容，写一篇英语演讲稿并在英语课上分享。
Questionnaire (调查问卷)
Q1: How often do you go to the movies
Q2: What’s your favorite movie type
Q3: Why do you like that kind of movie
要求：1. 短文须包括调查中的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hi, everyone!
I’d like to share my favorite movie type with you.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. My mother is my role model. I admire her very much.
My mother is responsible and careful. She is not only busy with her work but also takes good care of our family. What’s more, She did a lot for me when I was upset. Once I failed a singing competition and felt very upset. I was crying in the corner of the hall when my mother came to me. She handed me a piece of tissue and hugged me tenderly. She kept comforting me and encouraged me till I stopped crying. From her words, I became calm and found confidence again.
I love her and I will learn from her. She makes me know the importance of diligence. I will work hard and try my best to help others.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我最想感谢的人”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“身份、事件、感悟”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①admire钦佩
②diligence勤奋
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I was crying in the corner of the hall when my mother came to me.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②She kept comforting me and encouraged me till I stopped crying.（till引导的时间状语从句）
2．例文
Family is the source of happiness and the harbor of warmth. To me, a happy family means mutual respect, understanding, and support among all members. One meaningful event in my family was when we all worked together to prepare a surprise birthday party for my grandmother. Everyone had a role to play, and the joy on her face was priceless.
To promote family harmony and happiness, I have a few suggestions. First, spend quality time together, such as having meals or playing games. Second, communicate openly and honestly to understand each other’s feelings and needs. Lastly, show appreciation and gratitude for each other’s efforts and contributions. By following these steps, we can create a loving and supportive family environment.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一和第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体介绍对家庭幸福的理解；
第二步，具体描述家庭中发生的一件有意义的事；
第三步，最后提出促进家庭和谐幸福的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①the source of……的来源
②prepare for准备
③show appreciation for对……表示感谢
[高分句型]
①One meaningful event in my family was when we all worked together to prepare a surprise birthday party for my grandmother.（表语从句）
②To promote family harmony and happiness, I have a few suggestions.（动词不定式作目的状语）
3．例文
My Favorite Toy　　
I have a lot of toys and I like the toy bear best of all. I’ve had the toy bear since my fifth birthday. My father gave it to me as my birthday gift. My toy bear is white and it’s about half a meter tall. I never want to part with it because I like it very much, especially when my parents are away. I stay with it almost every day. In the day I often take it out to play with my good friends. At night, I even sleep with it. It’s meaningful to me because it brings me a lot of happiness.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的玩具是什么；
第二步，讲述谁给的这个玩具，拥有这个玩具多久等等；
第三步，介绍喜欢这个玩具的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①give sth to sb把某物给某人
②at night在晚上
③a lot of许多
[高分句型]
I never want to part with it because I like it very much, especially when my parents are away.（原因状语从句）
4．例文
The Story Behind My Favorite Gift
My favorite gift is a book named The Old Man and the Sea. I have had this book for half a year.
When I received the book on my eleventh birthday, I was a little surprised. I was happy, too. I didn’t pass the exam a few days ago. I felt very upset those days. My mother wanted to encourage me to be strong and not to give up so she bought me that book. I finished reading it the next day. I learned a lot from the book and understood the love my mother gave me.
Since then, I never give up. I think it is the best gift I have ever received.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：围绕“礼物背后的故事”进行写作，注意条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的礼物是什么以及拥有它多久了；
第二步，讲述这个礼物背后的故事；
第三步，讲述这个礼物的特殊意义。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb. (not) to do sth.鼓励某人（不要）做某事
②give up放弃
③finish doing sth.完成做某事
[高分句型]
①When I received the book on my eleventh birthday, I was a little surprised.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I think it is the best gift I have ever received.（省略that的宾语从句；省略关系代词的定语从句）
5．参考范文：
My Experiences done and undone
Hello, everyone. I have many experiences done and undone. Let me tell you something about them.
I have ridden a bike before but I haven’t taken a plane. I have read the book Journey to The West but I have not read the book Three Kingdoms. So if I have free time I will read the book because it’s very interesting. I have eaten dumplings but I haven’t made any dumplings so I’ll learn it from my mother. I have played football but I haven’t played tennis. Maybe one day I’ll learn it.
These are my experiences done and undone. What about yours
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据提示内容，具体描述你所做过的或没做过的一些经历；
第二步，对自己的经历简单做个总结。
[亮点词汇]
①learn from向……学习
②try to do尝试做
③make sb+adj.使得某人……
[高分句型]
So if I have free time I will read the book because it’s very interesting.（if引导条件状语从句和because引导原因状语从句）
6．例文
The Trip to Mount Haitang
Hello, everyone! I have been to Mount Haitang. It’s very beautiful and famous in Liaoning. It’s in the southeastern part of Fuxin. Last Sunday, I went to Mount Haitang with my parents by car. I have seen many strange stones on the mountain. They are very beautiful. I have also seen an old pine tree. It is very old. It’s about over four hundred years old. I have also seen some inscriptions on precipices, and there are many kinds of inscriptions on precipices.
It’s a very unforgettable experience to me. I love Mount Haitang very much.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中向同学们介绍一下去海棠山旅游经历的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“向同学们介绍一下旅游经历”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“位置、景色、感受等”几个方面重点介绍向同学们介绍一下去海棠山旅游经历的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我非常喜欢海棠山”的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①last Sunday上周日；
②by car乘坐汽车；
③strange stones怪石；
④many kinds of各种各样的。
[高分句型]
I have also seen some inscriptions on precipices, and there are many kinds of inscriptions on precipices. (“there be”句型)
7．例文：
How to deal with sadness
There may be too much sadness in our life. We might be very sad because of the terrible environment, bad weather, big disasters and so on. If we can't face it positively, it will affect our emotional and physical health.
Everyone can't be happy all the time. But it is useless to be sad! When we have some sadness, we'd better talk to our teachers or our classmates. We shouldn't be alone every day. After school, we should play with our friends. Why not listen to soft music or take part in activities We may feel much better. We can also talk to our parents and deal with sadness together. We should cheer ourselves up. Study hard and we will forget sadness.
In a word, sadness is everywhere. If we keep it out, we will have a better life!
【解析】1. 题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是以“How to deal with sadness”为主题展开讨论，内容按照题目中所给的要点提示进行描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是如何应对悲伤进行描写，包括悲伤的原因，对自己的影响以及应对的一些建议等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。
8．例文
I Want to Be an Astronaut
I’m Wang Zhi. I want to be an astronaut when I grow up. Because I want to walk in space like Nie Haisheng. I want to fly a spaceship to the moon. And I want to live on the moon. But I know I can’t do that without working hard. So I must study hard now. And I must do exercise every day.
I hope my dream can come true one day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，写短文谈谈自己想成为一名宇航员的愿望、原因及如何做。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明想要成为一名宇航员，并谈谈有这个愿望的原因及打算为实现愿望做些什么；
第二步，希望梦想成真。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do sth. 想要做某事
②work hard 努力工作
③do exercise 做运动
[高分句型]
But I know I can’t do that without working hard.（省略that的宾语从句）
9．例文：
Dear Dave,
I’m happy to be your pen pal. I’d like to tell you something about China.
China is the biggest country in Asia. China has a population of more than 1.3 billion in the world. The Yangtze River is one of the longest rivers in the world. China has a long history of over 5,000 years. The Chinese people are hard-working and friendly. China has a much longer history than the United States. There are also many places of interest and delicious food in China.
I love China very much. Welcome to China and play with me.
Yours,
Li Lei
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，形式为书信；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，以“我想告诉你一些关于中国的事情”引出下文；
第二步，按照要点提示，介绍自己对中国的了解，如人口、地理位置等；接着介绍中国人民的特点，然后适当补充介绍更多关于中国的信息，如历史，风光等；
第三步，结尾总结，表达自己对祖国的爱，并欢迎对方来中国。
[亮点词汇]
①more than 超过
②one of the longest rivers 最长的河流之一
③places of interest 名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①There are also many places of interest and delicious food in China.（there be句型）
②The Yangtze River is one of the longest rivers in the world.（“one of+the+形容词最高级+名词复数”）
10．例文：
My dream
Everyone has a dream. My dream is to be an astronaut in the future. When I was very young, I was interested in different kinds of planes. Then I often watched the news about the space travel on TV and on the Internet. I like the shows very much. Sometimes I also read some books about the space travel, too. At the age of ten, I began to make model planes alone. I have made two model planes so far. Many people say they are quite unique and new. I feel very proud. Last year, I also entered a model plane competition. I also won the first prize for it. I decided to study harder to be an astronaut in the future.
I hope that my dream will come true soon.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏要点，注意正确使用人称和时态。
[写作步骤]
第一步，概述自己的梦想；
第二步，结合自己的经历具体介绍对太空的热爱；
第三步，表达作者希望自己的梦想成真。
[亮点词汇]
①alone独自
②so far到目前为止
③different kinds of各种各样的……
④begin to do sth开始做某事
[高分句型]
①I decided to study harder to be an astronaut in the future.（不定式结构“to be an astronaut”表达目的）
②I hope that my dream will come true soon.（that引导的宾语从句）
11．例文：
Hello, everybody! It’s my turn to tell you something about the space. As you know, the universe is very large. There are many galaxies in the universe. For example, the galaxy has billions of stars. The sun is one of them in the solar system. The earth goes round the sun and the moon goes round the earth.
So far, scientists have done a lot of research about space. Especially, our Chinese astronauts have been to the space many times. We have built a great space station. Now, they are working in our own space station. I am very proud of our country. So I will study hard. I will be an astronaut in the future. What about you
Thanks.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③ 提示：文章的要点是通过关键词的形式给出，因此考生应注意围绕中心和关键词来对要点进行拓展，并符合逻辑结构，重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，可用“轮到我来给你讲一下太空”来引出主题，即关于宇宙的介绍；
第二步，围绕关键词串联起科学家所做的事情，注意此处文章时态可以“现在完成时”为主；
第三步，结尾总结，表明自己想成为宇航员的意原，去探索宇宙。
[亮点词汇]
① billions of上十亿的
② one of其中之一
③ so far到目前为止
④ be proud of为……自豪
[高分句型]
① It’s my turn to tell you something about the space.（it’s ones turn to do sth表示轮到某人做某事）
② The earth goes round the sun and the moon goes round the earth.（并列连词and连接的两个并列句子）
12．例文
Ways to Keep Healthy
Health is very important in our lives. Without it, everything else becomes meaningless. There are many ways to keep healthy.
First, we should get enough sleep. A good rest helps our body recover and stay energetic. Second, eating healthy food is important. We should eat more vegetables, fruits, and less junk food. Third, doing exercise regularly can make us stronger and improve our mood.
Besides these, we should also keep a happy mind and stay away from bad habits like smoking. Only in this way can we live a healthy and happy life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明健康的重要性，引出下文关于保持健康的方法；
第二步，列举具体的保持健康的方法；
第三步，总结全文，强调通过这些方式可以过上健康快乐的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①meaningless无意义的
②energetic精力充沛的
③regularly有规律地
④stay away from远离
[高分句型]
Only in this way can we live a healthy and happy life. (运用部分倒装结构)
13．例文
I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of foods. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先要多吃水果蔬菜；
第二步，其次早睡早起，不熬夜，保证充足睡眠；
第三步，参加运动，强身健体。
[亮点词汇]
①be very important for us对我们很重要
②during the night在夜间
③be bad for our health对我们的健康有害
④twice a day 一天两次
[高分句型]
①Staying up late is bad for our health.（动名词作主语）
②If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.（if引导的条件状语从句）
14．例文
Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems. You said you felt tired, nervous and easy to get angry. These symptoms have caused great trouble to your study and life. I think it is important for you to have enough sleep, healthy diet and regular exercise.
First, you should go to bed early and get up early to have enough sleep. It is bad for your health to stay up late. Second, you should eat more vegetables and fruits. You shouldn’t eat too many hamburgers because they are unhealthy. Third, you should do more exercise. It is good for your health.
I hope my advice can help you and you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Lily
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点和开头已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头表明收到来信并对Alice的状况表示同情，引出主题；
第二步，详细给出从睡眠、饮食和运动方面的建议；
第三步，结尾表达希望建议有用，祝福Alice尽快好转。
[亮点词汇]
①cause great trouble to… 对……造成很大麻烦
②be bad for 对……不好
③stay up late 熬夜
[高分句型]
①You said you felt tired, nervous and easy to get angry.（宾语从句）
②You shouldn’t eat too many hamburgers because they are unhealthy.（原因状语从句）
15． How to keep healthy
It’s important for us to keep healthy. Here are some tips.
First, eat more fruits, vegetables, and balanced meals. Avoid junk food and sugary drinks. Second, exercise daily, such as running or playing basketball. It keeps us active. Third, go to bed early and get up early. Enough sleep helps our body recover. Finally, stay positive. Talk to friends or family when you feel stressed.
Let’s follow these steps to live a healthy life!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图，引出下文“如何保持健康”；
②第二步，具体阐述“如何保持健康”；
③第三步，书写结语，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①balanced meals均衡饮食
②positive积极的
③stressed紧张的
[高分句型]
Talk to friends or family when you feel stressed. （状语从句）
16．例文：
How to keep healthy
As we all know, health is the most important in our life. However, do you know how to keep healthy Here is my advice.
Firstly, we should have a healthy lifestyle. We should get enough sleep and eat a balanced diet. Avoid junk food and eat more fruits and vegetables.
Secondly, take an active part in PE classes. Exercise regularly in class and improve our physical fitness.
Finally, do some interesting outdoor activities at weekends. We can go hiking, cycling or play ball games. These activities can make us stronger and more energetic.
In conclusion, a healthy lifestyle is essential for our well-being. Let’s take action and keep healthy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，注意大小写，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述保持健康的建议；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁养成保持健康的好习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①a balanced diet均衡的饮食
②take an active part in积极参加
③be essential for对……是必不可少的
④in conclusion总之
[高分句型]
①Avoid junk food and eat more fruits and vegetables. (祈使句)
②These activities can make us stronger and more energetic. (运用形容词比较级)
17．Possible answer:
I saw the film Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone last year. It is a fantasy film about a boy and his friends, and their magic adventures at a special school. The hero is called Harry Potter, and he can do wonderful magic. His friends are called Ron and Hermione. In this story, the three friends meet at their new school and then they try to solve a dangerous mystery. They don’t know who their enemy is, but they think it is a teacher called Snape. At the end of the film, Harry discovers who the bad person is, with help from his friends. I think it is a good film, but it is very complicated too. I like it very much because it takes me on a thrilling journey into a magical world filled with friendships and adventures.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：提示问题已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己看的电影的名字；
第二步，介绍电影的类型及电影中的英雄；
第三步，介绍电影中的故事情节；
第四步，表达自己对此电影的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
① try to do sth试图做某事
② at the end of在……的结尾
[高分句型]
① They don’t know who their enemy is, but they think it is a teacher called Snape.（who引导的宾语从句）
② I like it very much because it takes me on a thrilling journey into a magical world filled with friendships and adventures.（because引导的原因状语从句）
18．例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to receive a letter from you. Knowing from your letter that you are wondering Chinese traditional culture, I am writing to introduce some knowledge about Chinese Peking Opera.
As the most influential opera in China, Peking Opera has a history of nearly 200 years, and it takes historical stories as the main performance content. There are four kinds of roles in the Beijing Opera: male roles, female roles, painted roles and clowns. Different roles wear different kinds of clothes. To make you feel the charm of Chinese traditional culture, I invite you to watch a Peking opera performance next Sunday afternoon at Chang’an Grand Theatre. I am sure you will have a better understanding about Peking Opera after watching the performance.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达写信目的；
第二步，介绍一项中国传统技艺；
第三步，表达邀请和期盼。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 不同种类的
②invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
③look forward to 期盼
[高分句型]
①Knowing from your letter that you are wondering Chinese traditional culture, I am writing to introduce some knowledge about Chinese Peking Opera. (现在分词短语作状语)
②I am sure you will have a better understanding about Peking Opera after watching the performance. (宾语从句)
19．例文：
The Monkey King is the main character in Journey to the West, a very famous Chinese book. He is someone like a hero in my heart. In the book, the Monkey King was born from a stone. He is able to change himself into 72 different shapes like a tree, a bird, or an animal. He can also travel 108,000 li at a time. Along with Zhu Bajie and Sha Seng, the Monkey King protects their master — Tang Seng on their way to the Western Paradise. The Monkey King solves many difficulties and dangers along the way, and helps Tang Seng through 81 adventures.
My classmates and I like him very much. One of the main reasons is that he is strong in mind and never gives up.
What’s your favourite cartoon hero Why not tell us
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，写短文介绍孙悟空。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明是介绍孙悟空的来历、本领等；
第二步，介绍孙悟空保护唐僧、克服重重困难和危险；
第三步，写从孙悟空身上能学到什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be able to 能够
②along with 和……一起
③alone the way 一路上
④give up 放弃
[高分句型]
①The Monkey King solves many difficulties and dangers along the way, and helps Tang Seng through 81 adventures.（and连接并列结构）
②One of the main reasons is that he is strong in mind and never gives up.（that引导表语从句）
20．例文：
Hi, everyone!
I’d like to share my favorite movie type with you. I go to the movies twice a month and I like cartoons best. Here are three reasons why I like them.
First, cartoons usually have interesting pictures, funny dialogs and good stories. They can bring me happy feelings. Second, songs of cartoons are usually beautiful and they are easy to sing along with. Last, most cartoons are meaningful. I can always learn something useful from them. For example, I’ve learned from The Lion King that I should never give up when I meet difficulties.
In a word, I love watching cartoons a lot. They bring me much fun.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：提示问题已给出，向同学们介绍喜欢的电影类型。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，第一段引出话题，介绍最喜欢的电影类型是卡通片；
第二段，介绍喜欢卡通片的原因；
第三段，总结发言，首尾呼应。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②give up放弃
③in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①Here are three reasons why I like them.（why引导限制性定语从句）
②For example, I’ve learned from The Lion King that I should never give up when I meet difficulties.（that引导的宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句）
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