（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇（含答案解析）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期中复习培优专项仁爱科普版（2024）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期中复习专项仁爱科普版（2024）
（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．随着人们生活水平的提高，中学生的零花钱也越来越多了。同学们，你们都有零花钱吧，你的零花钱来自哪里？平时是怎样经营的？怎样花零花钱更加有意义？请结合以上内容谈谈自己零花钱的几种用法。以“My pocket money”为题写一篇英语作文。
注意：
1. 行文连贯，时态正确，书写工整；
2. 词数不少于80；
3. 文中不得出现与本人相关的姓名、校名及其他相关信息。
My pocket money
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2．假如你是Cindy，一周忙碌的学习生活结束了，你和好友们约定这个星期日去公园游玩并在公园吃自带的午饭。明天是周六，你打算去超市购买所需要的食品，为周日的午饭做准备。请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文。
提示：
1. What do you plan to buy
2. How many/much will you buy
要求：
1.须包含以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.条理清晰、意思连贯；
3.70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The weekend is coming. To relax, I’d like to go to the park with my good friends this Sunday and have lunch there.
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3．假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom对中国学生的购物习惯和节约用水情况很感兴趣。请你结合Unit 7 - Unit 8所学知识，用英语给他写一封信，介绍相关情况。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含购物习惯和节约用水两方面内容，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you something about our shopping habits and how we save water.
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I hope you know more about us through my letter.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
4．如何做一个聪明谨慎的购物者是我们需要掌握的一项重要的生活技能。请你结合下面的图示信息，以“How to Be a Smart and Careful Shopper”为题，向校刊的英语专栏投稿分享一下如何成为一个聪明谨慎的购物者。
写作要求：
（1）文中须包含以下图表中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）词数65词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
How to Be a Smart and Careful Shopper
It’s great fun knowing how to be a smart and careful shopper. Let me tell you something about it.
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Let’s be a smart and careful shopper!
5．假如你是康康，你们班级组织了一场如何在日常生活中省钱并做个明智的购物者的分享会。请根据表格内容，用英语写一篇短文和大家分享一下你在购物时是如何做的。
At the start of the month Plan how to spend money
…
Before shopping Look for stores with sales
At the store Check the ads and look for things you need
写作要求：1. 文中须包含以上图表中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
提示词：stores with sales 打折的商店
My name is Kangkang. I can get some pocket money and I always try my best to save money and be a smart shopper.
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6．假设你们班要举办一个派对，你的老师让你和李想同学负责购买本次活动所需的物品。请你结合所学内容，用英语写一篇短文介绍一下你们是如何完成本次任务的。
要点提示：
1.制定购物清单；
2.去打折的超市购买食物和气球；
3.去花店买花，和店家讨价还价。
参考词汇： list, balloon气球, store商店, bargain讨价还价
写作要求：
1.文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数70左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
There will be a party in our class. Our teacher asks Li Ming and me to go shopping for it.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．很多同学在购物的时候没有一个好的习惯，以至于浪费了金钱又耗费了时间。请结合所学知识，以“How to Be a Smart Shopper”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍如何做一个明智的购物者。
提示问题：
1.购物前你是如何做的？
2.购物时你是如何做的？
3.付款时你是如何做的？
写作要求：
1.文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数70左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇： habit习惯, choose to do sth.选择去做某事, discount折扣
How to Be a Smart Shopper
Many students don’t have a good shopping habit. So how to be a smart shopper
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8．树木为人类提供木材，为动物提供食物和居住的场所，树木还能影响环境和气候。但是在有些地方，人们砍伐太多树木。请根据以下提示信息用英语写一篇短文，倡议大家一起保护树木。
内容提示：（1）阐述树木的重要性；（2）提出保护树木的建议（两至三点）。
写作要求：（1）文中须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：provide提供；wood木材；cut down砍倒；one-off一次性的；chopsticks
筷子；waste paper浪费纸张；plant trees种树
Trees are very important to people and animals.
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9．阅读以下材料，然后根据材料内容，写一篇英语短文。
水是生命之源，我们的日常生活离不开水。然而，很多人没有节约用水的意识。有的人刷牙时不关水龙头，洗澡时间过长等。其实，我们可以通过一些简单的方法节约用水，比如刷牙时关上水龙头，重复利用水，缩短洗澡时间等。
要求：
1. 包含材料中的主要信息；
2. 呼吁大家节约用水；
3. 词数80左右。
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10．假如你叫康康，你打算做个关于如何节约用水的课前演讲。请以“How to Save Water”为题，根据以下的提示内容，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容提示：1. 水对人类、植物和动物都很重要；
2. 介绍如何节约用水（至少三条建议）；
写作要求：1. 文中须包含以上所有提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
提示词：bath盆浴
How to Save Water
Hello, I am Kangkang. We all need water.
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11．你们班举行了一次班会，会上大家就如何节约用水和保护水资源热烈讨论。请根据所学知识，以“How to Save Water in Our Daily Life ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下节约用水的方法。
写作要求：
1.至少介绍三种节水的方法；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数70左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
How to Save Water in Our Daily Life
Water is important to us. We cannot live with no water.
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12．无论在家里还是在外面，水对我们都至关重要。康康打算向校刊的英语专栏投稿，谈谈水的重要性。请根据下面图表，帮康康用英语写一篇短文。
写作要求：1. 文中须包含图表所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone. Water is important to us.
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13．水非常地重要。人类每天要喝大量的水，需要用水做清洁和烹饪，还需要水来种植食物。动物和植物也需要水才能生长。请你以“The Importance of Water”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下水的重要性。
写作要求：
1.文中须包含以上提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称：
3.词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：without没有，fall ill生病
The Importance of Water
Water is very important. Animals, plants and people all need water.
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14．
水对人类非常重要，而世界上的水资源是有限的，所以我们必须要养成节约用水的好习惯才能保证水资源的可持续性利用。请你结合所学知识，以“How to Save Water”为题，用英语写一篇短文，给大家介绍一些节水方法。
要点提示：
1. 记得关水龙头；
2. 快速地洗澡；
3. 重复利用水；
4. ……
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇： limited有限的， if possible如果可能的话
How to Save Water
Water is important to people, but water is also limited. So we should develop a good habit of using and saving water.
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Easy steps also count. Let’s save water together.
15．假如你是阳光中学的学生李平，你想邀请来自英国的交换生Tony参观你居住的社区。请根据以下要点，用英语发一封电子邮件向他介绍你的社区。内容如下：1. 社区所在位置；2. 社区环境、设施；3. 邻里关系。
要求：1. 电子邮件内容应包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：不少于70词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Dear Tony,
I am very happy to invite you to my community.
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Welcome to my community. I think you’ll have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Ping
16．假如你是李华，丹麦学生Tom即将作为交换生来中国并在你家居住两周。现在请你写一封邀请信，向他介绍苏州这座城市和你的社区生活。
邀请信需包含如下内容：
1.苏州是座什么样的城市？
2.你的社区有什么日常活动？（捐赠衣物、志愿服务……）
3.你打算和Tom一起做什么？（做剪纸、参观博物馆……）
注意：
1.词数80左右。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Tom,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Suzhou.
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Hope to see you soon in Suzhou.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
17．请以“My dream neighbourhood”为题，围绕以下三个问题，写写你理想中的小区：
1. How is the environment (环境)
2. What is its community like
3. How do neighbours help each other
注意: 词数在80个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My dream neighbourbood
A good neighbourbood is good for our mind and body. __________________
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18．假如你是Simon，你的英国朋友Tom来信向你询问你的社区情况。请根据以下提示，写一封电子邮件回复他。
社区情况 1．社区很大，位于市中心， 2．社区里有很多志愿者，他们友善且乐于助人；能帮助我解决各种各样的问题……（至少举一个例子）
周围环境 1．社区周围设施齐全，有超市、餐馆、学校、医院等； 2．离社区1公里处有一个公园，……（至少举一个例子）
居住条件 1．社区里有20多栋建筑，每栋有9层。住在6楼；有一个客厅，一个厨房，一间浴室和3间卧室 2．最喜欢的房间是……因为我可以……
感受 住在这样的一个社区……
要求：1．表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2．必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3．词数：不少于100词（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
4．不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Tom,
I’d like to tell you something about my neighbourhood.
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Yours
Simon
19．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日，某英文报正在举行题为“My neighbourhood”的征文活动。假设你是李华，住在阳光社区，请根据以下问题提示要点，完成一篇英文征文稿。
What is your neighbourhood like
What are your neighbours like
How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood
注意事项： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须回答上面问题，并作适当发挥，80词左右；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My neighbourhood
I’m Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Community. ________________
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20．假如你叫孟孟(Mengmeng)，住在欣欣社区，这是你们小区的地图。请根据以下要点提示和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文向大家介绍一下你的社区。
写作要点：
1）What is in your community
2）What do you think of your life in your community
写作要求：
（1）文中须包含地图所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, I’m Mengmeng. I live in the Xinxin Community.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
My pocket money
My pocket money comes from my parents. Sometimes my grandparents give me some. I often use it to buy some school things, like pens, exercise books and rulers.
I divide my pocket money into three parts. The first part is for my daily life. The second part is for the gifts to my parents, teachers and friends. It can be quite useful on the festivals. I save the third part in the bank. I’m sure my future life will be more colorful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要交代零花钱来自哪里；
第二步，具体交代平时是怎样经营这些零花钱的；
第三步，说明这样花零花钱的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②divide…into…把……分成……
[高分句型]
I’m sure my future life will be more colorful.(宾语从句)
2．例文：
The weekend is coming. To relax, I’d like to go to the park with my good friends this Sunday and have lunch there.
Tomorrow is Saturday. I plan to go to the supermarket and buy some things for lunch. I want to buy a sandwich and some bananas. I’d like to buy a kilo of tomatoes, two bags of milk and three packets of chicken. I also want to buy two bottles of apple juice. I may also buy a kilo of strawberries to share with my friends. That’s all I want.
I hope we can have a good time this Sunday!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要用“want to do”和“plan to do”等来表达将来做某事的意愿；
③提示：内容提示已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍本周日的活动计划；
第二步，介绍为了周日的活动而计划购物的东西；
第三步，表达对周日活动的期望。
[亮点词汇]
① would like to do 想要做某事
② want to do 想要做某事
③ have a good time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
① I hope we can have a good time this Sunday! (宾语从句)
3．例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you something about our shopping habits and how we save water.
When we go shopping, we usually make a shopping list first. This helps us not to buy things we don’t need. We also like to look for sales to save money. And we always check the prices and quality of things before buying.
As for saving water, we know it’s very important. We turn off the tap when we brush our teeth. We take a quick shower instead of a bath. And we reuse water to water the flowers.
I hope you know more about us through my letter.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：根据题目要求，介绍中国学生的购物习惯和节约用水情况。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述购物习惯，如列清单、寻找折扣和比价。
第二步，说明节约用水的措施，如刷牙时关水龙头、快速淋浴和重复用水。
第三步，总结并表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
① shopping list 购物清单
② sales 折扣
③ reuse 重复使用
[高分句型]
① When we go shopping, we usually make a shopping list first.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② We also like to look for sales to save money.（不定式作目的状语）
4．例文：
How to Be a Smart and Careful Shopper
It’s great fun knowing how to be a smart and careful shopper. Let me tell you something about it.
We can make a shopping list and only buy the things on the list. When we buy things, we can look for things on sale. We can also check different shops to look for the best price. Before making payments, we need to check the price again. If we can share something with our brothers or sisters, there is no need to buy it.
Let’s be a smart and careful shopper!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示信息写作，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示信息详细介绍如何做一个聪明的购物者；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make a shopping list列购物清单
②look for寻找
③on sale促销
④share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
①When we buy things, we can look for things on sale. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If we can share something with our brothers or sisters, there is no need to buy it. (if引导的条件状语从句)
5．例文：
My name is Kangkang. I can get some pocket money and I always try my best to save money and be a smart shopper. At the start of every month, I always plan how to spend money wisely. I always think carefully what I really need, and then make a shopping list. Before shopping, I look for stores with sales. At the store, I check the ads and look for the things I need. That way, I will not buy too many things.
It’s great fun being a smart shopper. You can share your stories and we can learn from each other.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据表格内容，注意不要遗漏表中的每一项内容，适当添加细节，使作文内容意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给出的开头，介绍自己在月初是如何花钱的；
第二步，介绍自己在购物之前做些什么，同时如何查看广告，寻找自己想要的东西；
第三步，总结，让我们都成为一个聪明的购物者，并相互学习。
[亮点词汇]
①make a shopping list制作购物清单
②look for寻找
③learn from向……学习
[高分句型]
①I always think carefully what I really need, and then make a shopping list.(what引导的宾语从句)
②It’s great fun being a smart shopper. （it作形式主语）
6．例文
There will be a party in our class. Our teacher asks Li Ming and me to go shopping for it.
First, we made a shopping list together. Then, we went to a supermarket to buy some food and balloons because there was a big sale. After that, we went to a flower shop to buy some flowers. We bargained with the shopkeeper and got a good price. Finally, we returned to school with all the things we needed. We felt very happy because we finished the task successfully.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明上周末的情况；
第二步，具体阐述上周六和周日所做的事情；
第三步，最后表达对于这个周末的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① make a shopping list做购物清单
② bargain with sb和某人讨价还价
[高分句型]
Then, we went to a supermarket to buy some food and balloons because there was a big sale.（原因状语从句）
7．例文：
Many students don’t have a good shopping habit. So how to be a smart shopper
First, we can make a shopping list before we go shopping, and think about what we need to buy. Second, read advertisements, and find which shop is on sale, then go there to buy what we need. Third, when making payments, we can choose to pay with our phones. Because there may be a discount for online payments. Last, always take a shopping bag then we don’t need to buy one.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，怎样成为一个明智的购物者，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍怎样成为一名明智的购物者。
[亮点词汇]
①make a shopping list制作购物清单
②on sale减价出售
[高分句型]
①First, we can make a shopping list before we go shopping, and think about what we need to buy.(状语从句+并列句+宾语从句)
8．例文
Trees are very important to people and animals. They provide wood for people. They are home to animals and they also provide food for animals. Trees are also important to the environment and the climate. But in some places, people cut down too many trees. That’s too bad. We must protect trees. We should not use one-off cups or chopsticks. We should not waste paper. And we should plant more trees and look after trees well. If everyone tries his best, we are sure to make a difference.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：仔细审题，不要遗漏要点，并进一步做出补充，并且在列举建议时注意衔接词语的使用，使前后过渡自然，行文流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点名主题，阐述树木的重要性；
第二步，列举保护树木的原因，即树木对我们非常重要，进而列举保护树木的建议；
第三步，进行总结，鼓励大家一起行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best尽某人最大的努力
②provide sth. for sb.向某人提供某物
③cut down砍倒
[亮点句型]
If everyone tries his best, we are sure to make a difference.（if引导的条件状语从句）
9．例文
Water is very important to our lives. We use it to drink, cook and clean every day. However, many people don’t know the importance of saving water. Some don’t turn off the tap while brushing teeth. Others take really long showers. This is a big problem.
But there are easy ways to save water. We can turn off the tap when brushing teeth. Reusing water is much better. Taking short showers also helps a lot.
Let’s all start saving water from now on. Every drop counts. Saving water is not only for us but also for our future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：围绕材料内容写作，可适当补充，使文章内容更充实；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍水对我们的重要性以及指出很多人没有节约用水的意识；
第二步，给出一些节约用水的建议；
第三步，呼吁大家节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关闭
②from now on从现在开始
③not only … but also …不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①But there are easy ways to save water. (there be句型)
②Taking short showers also helps a lot. (动名词作主语)
③Let’s all start saving water from now on. (祈使句)
10．例文：
How to Save Water
Hello, I am Kangkang. We all need water. Water is so important for us and we should save water.
Animals, plants and people all need water. If there is no water, we can’t live. So what should we do to save water First, we should turn off the tap after we use the water. Second, we should take a shower but not a bath. Third, we can reuse water, such as using the water from washing vegetables to sweep the floor.
Water is so valuable for us. Let’s work together to make a difference.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
④ 提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明水的重要性；
第二步，提出三条节约用水的建议；
第三步，总结并呼吁大家行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
① save water 节约用水
② turn off 关闭
③ reuse 重复使用
④ take a shower 淋浴
[高分句型]
If there is no water, we can’t live.（if引导条件状语从句）
11．例文：
How to Save Water in Our Daily Life
Water is important to us. We cannot live with no water. Do you know how to save water in our daily life
First, don’t keep the tap running when we don’t use the water. And don’t take long showers. Second, make full use of water. We can reuse water, After washing our clothes, we can use the water to sweep the floors. Third, try to collect rainwater when it rains. We can use it to water plants.
Let’s try our best to save water!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，主题为“如何在日常生活中节约用水”；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，因为是在描述一般性的节水方法和建议；
③提示：写作要求已明确给出，考生需要按照题目中的要求进行写作，要注意不要出现语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题。通过“Water is important to us. We cannot live with no water.”来强调水的重要性，从而引出节约用水的主题；
第二步，具体阐述节水方法。介绍至少三种在日常生活中可以实践的节水方法，如关闭水龙头刷牙、使用节水器具、收集雨水浇花等；
第三步，简短结语。呼吁大家共同行动。
[亮点词汇]
①save water 节约用水
②keep the tap running 让水龙头一直开着
③take long showers 洗长时间的淋浴
④make full use of 充分利用
⑤reuse water 重复使用水
⑥sweep the floors 扫地
⑦collect rainwater 收集雨水
⑧water plants 浇植物
[高分句型]
①Don’t keep the tap running when we don’t use the water. (时间状语从句)
②After washing our clothes, we can use the water to sweep the floors. (介词短语作状语)
③Let’s try our best to save water! (祈使句，表示建议或命令)
12．例文
Hello, everyone. Water is important to us.
When we are at home, we can use water to wash clothes and clean our rooms. We also use water to water plants. When we are outside, we can travel by water and play water games. Water is valuable for us. But there isn’t much clean water to use. So we must save water. Let’s work together to make a difference!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干思维导图的要点，介绍水在家和外面的作用；
第三步，发出合理利用时间的号召，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①wash clothes洗衣服
②water plants给植物浇水
[高分句型]
Let’s work together to make a difference!（祈使句）
13．例文
The Importance of Water
Water is very important. Animals, plants and people all need water.
People need to drink water every day. If we don’t drink enough water, we may not feel well or we may fall ill. We need water to clean or to cook. We also need water to plant the food. Animals and plants need water to live as well. With no water, people, animals and plants can’t live.
Therefore, we must protect and save water to ensure a healthy future for all living things.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，介绍水对人类、动物和植物的重要性。
② 时态：文章主要使用“一般现在时”来描述水的作用。
③ 提示：文章需要涵盖水在人们饮用、清洁、烹饪、种植食物以及对动植物生存的作用，并突出水对生命的重要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引出主题，强调水对所有生物的重要性；
第二步，具体描述水对人类的作用，如饮用、清洁和烹饪；
第三步，说明水对植物和动物的影响，强调水对生态系统的必要性；
第四步，总结水对生命的关键作用，强调没有水就无法生存。
[亮点词汇]
① fall ill 生病
② as well 也
[高分句型]
If we don’t drink enough water, we may not feel well or we may fall ill. (条件状语从句，强调水对健康的重要性)
14．例文
How to Save Water
Water is important to people, but water is also limited. So we should develop a good habit of using and saving water. Here are some tips for you.
First, remember to turn off the tap after you use it. You should not keep the water running when you do not use it. Second, try to take a quick shower, and don’t take a bath if possible. Third, reuse water if possible. We can collect the washing water and use it to sweep the floor. Fourth, collect rainwater. We can use it to clean rooms or water flowers.
Easy steps also count. Let’s start saving water from now on.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明水的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述一些保护水资源和节约用水的方法；
第三步，最后呼吁大家节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①remember to do sth.记得做某事
②take a bath洗澡
③if possible如果可能的话
[高分句型]
①You should not keep the water running when you do not use it. (when引导的时间状语从句）
②Let’s start saving water from now on. （祈使句）
15．例文
Dear Tony,
I am very happy to invite you to my community. It is in the west of the city, just a 10-minute ride from our school. The community is clean and full of trees and flowers. There is a small playground where kids can play. We also have a reading room and a gym.
The neighbors are kind. We often chat and share food. It feels like a big family.
Welcome to my community. I think you’ll have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Ping
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主。
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，即邀请Tony来自己的社区，让Tony知晓邮件重点。
第二步，详细介绍社区情况和邻里关系。
第三步，书写结语，表达对Tony到来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①in the west of在……西部
②full of充满……
③feel like感觉像……
[高分句型]
The community is clean and full of trees and flowers.（and连接并列成分）
There is a small playground where kids can play. （there be句型及定语从句）
16．例文
Dear Tom,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Suzhou.
Firstly, Suzhou is a beautiful city known for its classical gardens and modern architecture. It is called the “Venice of the East” because of its rivers and ancient bridges. Besides, our community is active and friendly. We often donate clothes to people in need and volunteer to help the elderly every weekend. What’s more, I plan to teach you how to make paper-cutting, a traditional Chinese art. We can also visit museums and ride bikes around the old town.
Hope to see you soon in Suzhou.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信的目的是邀请对方来自己的家乡；
第二步，介绍苏州这座城市、自己社区的日常活动及打算和Tom做的事情；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①because of由于
②in need处于困境中的
③plan to do sth计划做某事
[高分句型]
①We often donate clothes to people in need and volunteer to help the elderly every weekend. (and连接的并列结构)
②I plan to teach you how to make paper-cutting, a traditional Chinese art. (疑问词+不定式作宾语)
17．例文
My dream neighbourhood
A good neighbourhood is good for our mind and body. In my dream neighbourhood, the environment is clean and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers in the community. The air is fresh and the sky is blue. People live in harmony with nature. The community is full of warmth and care. Neighbours are friendly and helpful. They often help each other in times of need. For example, if someone is in trouble, others will offer a helping hand. In this community, everyone is like a big family. We share our joys and sorrows, and support each other. This is the neighbourhood I dream of, a place where everyone can live happily and healthily.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意写作提示中的要点，不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己理想社区的环境；
第二步，描述社区是什么样子的；
第三步，介绍邻居互相帮忙的事例；
第四步，书写结语，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①harmony 和谐
②be full of 充满了
③in trouble 处于困境中
④sorrow 悲伤
[高分句型]
①For example, if someone is in trouble, others will offer a helping hand. (if引导条件状语从句，“主将从现”)
②This is the neighbourhood I dream of, a place where everyone can live happily and healthily. (that省略的定语从句，where引导定语从句)
18．例文
I’d like to tell you something about my neighbourhood.
My neighbourhood is large and it is in the city center. There are many volunteers in it. They are friendly to each other, and they often help us solve all kinds of problems. Last week, There was something wrong with my computer. I asked for help. And they were willing to help me check and repair my computer.
Around the neighbourhood there are supermarkets, restaurants, schools, hospitals and so on. There is even a park near it. We can go for a walk and run slowly in the park. We all like it. There are more than 20 buildings in the neighbourhood, each has nine floors and I live on the sixth floor. There is a living room, a kitchen, a bathroom and three bedrooms in my home. I like the kitchen best because my mum often makes delicious food there.
I feel so happy to live in such a beautiful neighbourhood. Hope you can come here one day.
Yours
Simon
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍一下社区情况，周围环境和居住环境。
第二步，再写一下在这里的感受。
第三步，最后诚恳邀请对方过来玩。
[亮点词汇]
①asked for help寻求帮助
②makes delicious food做美味的食物
③go for a walk散步
[高分句型]
①We can go for a walk and run slowly in the park.（and连接并列成分）
②I like the kitchen best because my mum often makes delicious food there.（原因状语从句）
19．例文
My neighbourhood
I am Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Community. It’s a beautiful and quiet neighbourhood. There’s a beautiful park near here. People always take a walk in it. And there’s a supermarket in our neighbourhood, so it’s very easy for us to do some shopping.
My neighbours are kind and helpful. There are some engineers among them. They can help us repair things like broken bikes and computers. Some of my neighbours are college students. They can help younger students with their homework. They are patient enough to answer questions.
I feel very lucky to live in such a neighbourhood. I hope it will become better in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍社区的状况；
第二步，具体介绍邻居的情况以及邻里间互相帮助；
第三步，最后介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take a walk散步
②help sb with sth帮助某人某事
[高分句型]
①There are some engineers among them. (There be结构)
20．例文
Hello, I’m Mengmeng. I live in the Xinxin Community. Let me introduce my community to you.
On the left of my home, there is a sports center. We often do sports there. A library is on the right of my home. There are many kinds of books in it. My school is across from my home. There is a park next to my school. A supermarket is on the left of my school. We can buy a lot of things there.
My life in the community is very colorful. I like living here.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图是介绍自己的社区；
第二步，具有描述自己的社区里有什么；
第三步，表达自己对社区的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①do sports做运动
②across from在……对面
③next to紧挨着
[高分句型]
①Let me introduce my community to you. (祈使句)
②There are many kinds of books in it. (There be句型)
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