2025高考英语写作(建议信)写作指南
一、题型剖析
建议信是高考英语写作中常见的应用文体,旨在针对他人的问题、困境或计划,给出合理的建议和解决方案。它要求考生不仅能准确运用英语表达观点,还需展现出清晰的逻辑思维和解决实际问题的能力。例如,题目可能设定同学在学习方法上遇到困难向你求助,或学校组织活动征求改进意见,你需以书信形式给出针对性建议 。
二、写作框架
(一)开头
1. 表明身份:简要介绍自己,若与收信人熟悉可省略。如 “I am Li Hua, a classmate of yours in Senior Grade 3”(我是李华,你高三的同班同学) 。
2. 引出话题:提及对方的问题或情况,表达关心。常见表达有 “I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your English learning”(很遗憾听说你在英语学习上遇到困难) ;“Knowing that you are planning to organize a cultural festival, I am writing to offer some suggestions”(得知你正计划组织一场文化节,我写信来提供一些建议) 。
3. 说明目的:直接表明写信是为了提供建议 ,如 “I am writing to give you some suggestions on how to solve this problem”(我写信是为了给你一些解决这个问题的建议) 。
(二)主体
1. 提出建议:这是核心部分,要具体、有条理地阐述建议内容 。可以使用 “firstly, secondly, thirdly”“in the first place, furthermore, lastly” 等连接词来罗列 。比如,建议同学提高英语听力,“Firstly, listen to English podcasts every day for at least 30 minutes. This can help you get familiar with different accents and speaking speeds”(首先,每天至少听30分钟英语播客。这能帮助你熟悉不同的口音和语速) ;“Secondly, watch English - language movies with subtitles at first, and then gradually try to watch without them to train your listening comprehension”(其次,一开始看带字幕的英语电影,然后逐渐尝试不看字幕以训练你的听力理解能力) 。
2. 阐述理由:每个建议后紧跟理由,增强说服力 。例如,建议学校增加体育设施,“I suggest that our school add more sports facilities, such as basketball hoops and badminton courts. The reason is that more and more students are interested in sports, and sufficient facilities can meet their needs and promote their physical health”(我建议我们学校增加更多体育设施,如篮球架和羽毛球场。原因是越来越多的学生对体育感兴趣,充足的设施可以满足他们的需求并促进他们的身体健康) 。
(三)结尾
1. 表达期望:希望对方考虑并采纳建议,如 “I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into consideration”(我真诚地希望你能考虑我的建议) ;“I am looking forward to seeing these suggestions being adopted and the situation getting better”(我期待看到这些建议被采纳,情况得到改善) 。
2. 提供帮助:表明愿意提供进一步帮助,“If you have any questions or need further discussion, please feel free to contact me”(如果你有任何问题或需要进一步讨论,请随时与我联系) 。
3. 祝愿鼓励:送上祝福或鼓励的话语,“Wish you every success in your studies”(祝你学习一切顺利) ;“May you solve the problem soon and make great progress”(愿你早日解决问题,取得巨大进步) 。
三、高分技巧
(一)语言运用
1. 丰富词汇:避免重复使用简单词汇,运用高级词汇提升文章档次 。比如,用“recommend”“propose”代替“suggest” ;“beneficial”“advantageous”代替“good” ;描述问题严重用“severe”“grave”代替“serious” 。如 “I highly recommend that you participate in this activity, which will be highly beneficial to your personal growth”(我强烈推荐你参加这个活动,这对你的个人成长非常有益) 。
2. 多样句式:
虚拟语气:使建议更委婉、礼貌 。“If I were you, I would start preparing for the exam in advance”(如果我是你,我会提前开始为考试做准备) 。
定语从句:对事物进行补充说明 。“The book, which is written by a famous scholar, can provide you with in - depth knowledge on this subject”(这本书是一位著名学者写的,可以为你提供关于这个主题的深入知识) 。
状语从句:表达因果、条件等逻辑关系 。“Since you are interested in history, I suggest you visit the local museum”(既然你对历史感兴趣,我建议你参观当地的博物馆) ;“If you follow my advice, you will surely make great progress”(如果你听从我的建议,你肯定会取得很大进步) 。
(二)逻辑连贯
1. 合理分段:严格按照开头、主体、结尾三段式结构写作,每段表达一个明确主题,使文章层次一目了然 。
2. 巧用连接词:在段落之间和句子之间使用连接词,如“moreover”“in addition”“however”“therefore”等 ,使文章过渡自然、逻辑紧密 。例如,“The current situation is not optimistic. However, with proper measures, we can still improve it. Firstly, we should raise public awareness. Moreover, relevant laws and regulations need to be strengthened”(当前形势不容乐观。然而,通过适当的措施,我们仍然可以改善它。首先,我们应该提高公众意识。此外,相关法律法规需要加强) 。
(三)内容详实
1. 针对性强:紧密围绕题目所给问题或情境提建议,避免跑题和泛泛而谈 。如针对同学数学成绩差,就从数学学习方法、时间管理、课外辅导等方面提建议,而非谈其他学科 。
2. 结合实际:给出的建议要切实可行,能在现实中操作 。比如建议学校举办英语角,要说明时间、地点、组织方式等具体细节 ,“I suggest setting up an English corner on the school playground every Friday afternoon. Students can gather there to practice English conversations under the guidance of English teachers”(我建议每周五下午在学校操场设立英语角。学生们可以在英语老师的指导下聚集在那里练习英语对话) 。
四、常见错误及应对策略
(一)语言错误
1. 错误表现:语法错误,像主谓不一致、时态混乱、词性误用 ;词汇拼写错误 ;中式英语表达 。例如,“He go to school by bike every day”(应改为“He goes to school by bike every day”) ;“I very like English”(应改为“I like English very much”) 。
2. 应对方法:平时加强语法和词汇学习,多做专项练习题 ;写作时认真检查语法和拼写错误 ;积累地道英语表达,通过阅读英语文章、观看英语电影等培养语感 。
(二)逻辑混乱
1. 错误表现:建议顺序杂乱无章,段落之间缺乏过渡,句子之间逻辑不清晰 。比如先讲一个复杂的建议,接着突然跳到另一个不相关的小建议,没有按照重要性或关联性排序 。
2. 应对方法:写作前列提纲,规划好建议的先后顺序 ;使用连接词和过渡语,如“first of all”“in the first place”“secondly”“last but not least”等 ,体现逻辑层次 ;写完后通读文章,检查逻辑连贯性,调整不合理之处 。
(三)内容空洞
1. 错误表现:只给出笼统建议,没有具体内容和理由 。如“你应该努力学习”,却不说如何努力、努力的方向等 。
2. 应对方法:每个建议都要详细阐述具体做法和原因 。例如,“You should make a detailed study plan. First, divide your study time into different periods for each subject. For example, allocate two hours a day to math, focusing on doing exercises and reviewing key knowledge points. This can help you arrange your study time effectively and improve your learning efficiency”(你应该制定一个详细的学习计划。首先,将你的学习时间分配给每个学科。例如,每天分配两个小时学习数学,专注于做练习题和复习重点知识点。这可以帮助你有效地安排学习时间,提高学习效率) 。
五、真题示例剖析
(一)真题呈现
(2023·[省份]·高考真题)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom对中国传统文化感兴趣,打算来中国参加相关活动,但不确定选择哪个城市。请你给他写一封建议信,内容包括:
1. 推荐一个城市;
2. 推荐理由(如文化特色、相关活动等);
3. 表达祝愿。
(二)参考范文
Dear Tom,
I am delighted to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture and plan to visit China for related activities. I would like to recommend Beijing to you.
Beijing, the capital of China, is rich in cultural heritage. It has the Forbidden City, which was the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties, showcasing magnificent ancient architecture. Also, the Temple of Heaven is a symbol of ancient Chinese imperial sacrifices, representing unique religious and cultural traditions.
Moreover, there are various cultural activities throughout the year in Beijing. For instance, during the Spring Festival, you can experience the lively temple fairs, with traditional performances like lion dances and acrobatics.
I sincerely hope you will have a wonderful time in Beijing, immersing yourself in the charm of Chinese culture.
Best regards,
Li Hua
(三)范文分析
1. 结构清晰:开头表明写信目的,引出推荐城市;主体详细阐述北京的文化特色和相关活动作为推荐理由;结尾表达祝愿 ,符合建议信结构 。
2. 内容具体:列举了故宫、天坛等文化遗迹,以及春节庙会等文化活动,使推荐理由充实有力 。
3. 语言准确丰富:运用“be rich in”“showcase”“represent”等高级词汇和短语 ;使用定语从句“which was the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties”,提升了文章语言水平 。