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Writing Lesson 4 健康类
健康是幸福快乐的基础,是国家文明的标志。健康的身心能使我们和谐相处,愉快地学习和生活。为此,学校英语广播站举行 "Healthy Living" 为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据所给提示和要求用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你的生活方式和饮食习惯。
提 示:
(1)Do you have a healthy lifestyle Do you think it is important to keep healthy
(2)What do you usually do to keep healthy
(3)Why do you do so
审题目(人称、时态、要点)
健康是幸福快乐的基础,是国家文明的标志。健康的身心能使我们和谐相处,愉快地学习和生活。为此,学校英语广播站举行 "Healthy Living" 为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华(第一人称),请根据所给提示和要求用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你的生活方式和饮食习惯。(一般现在时)
提 示:(要点)
(1)Do you have a healthy lifestyle Do you think it is important to keep healthy
(2)What do you usually do to keep healthy
(3)Why do you do so
审人称:第一人称
审时态:一般现在时
审要点:① 健康生活的重要性
② 怎样保持健康
③ 原因
列提纲——健康类-健康生活
第一段:点明主题+过渡句
第二段:介绍保持健康的方法并陈述原因
第三段:总结上文
遣词造句
第一段:点明主题--毫无疑问,我们有一个健康的生活是必要的。
遣词:毫无疑问,做某事(对某人来说)是……的
(There is no doubt that it is + adj. + (for sb.) to do sth.)
必要的 (necessary) 有一个健康的生活(have a healthy living)
造句: There is no doubt that it is necessary for us to have a healthy living.
过渡句--接下来我想跟你分享一下我的建议。
造句: I would like to share my tips with you.
第二段:介绍保持健康的方法,并陈述原因
1.首先, 我每天花费半小时进行运动。它会让我们保持活力和身体强壮。
遣词:做运动 (do exercise)
造句: First of all, I spend half an hour doing exercise every day, which helps to keep me active and strong.
2.其次,我认为有一个均衡的饮食很重要。因为这对我们的健康有益。
遣词:均衡饮食(have a balanced diet)
造句: I think it is very important to have a balanced diet, which is beneficial to our health.
最后,没有比充足睡眠更重要的了。
遣词:充足睡眠 (get enough sleep)
没有比……更重要的了(Nothing is more important than to do sth.)
造句:Last but not least, nothing is more important than to get enough sleep.
第三段:总结上文--总而言之, 我们越注意我们的生活习惯,我们就会越健康。
遣词:总而言之 ( all in all ) 越……就越…… (The+比较级,the+比较级)
注意 ( pay attention to) 生活习惯 ( living habits )
造句: All in all, the more we pay attention to our living habits, the healthier we will be.
句型总结
there is no doubt that it is + adj.+ (for sb.) to do sth.
毫无疑问,做某事对某人来说 ……(万能句型)
be beneficial to sth. 对……有益
Nothing is more important than to do sth. 没有比……更重要的了
all in all 总而言之
The+ 比较级, the + 比较级 越……就越……
大显身手
______________________________________________________(毫无疑问,我们有一个健康的生活是必要的).I would like to share my tips with you.
First of all, I _______________________(花费半个小时做运动)every day, which helps to _________________________(让我们保持活力和身体强壮). I think it is very important to _________________________(有一个均衡的饮食), which _______________________(对我们的健康有益). Last but not least, _________________________________________(没有比充足睡眠更重要的了).
All in all, _______________________________________________(我们越注意我们的生活习惯,我们就会越健康).
参考范文
There is no doubt that it is necessary for us to have a healthy living.I would like to share my tips with you.
First of all, I spend half an hour doing exercise every day, which helps to keep me active and strong. I think it is very important to have a balanced diet, which is beneficial to our health. Last but not least, nothing is more important than to get enough sleep.
All in all, the more we pay attention to our living habits, the healthier we will be.