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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习专项冀教版
（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Tom发来邮件，说非常想了解下你家乡春天的天气情况以及具有中国特色的春天的活动，请根据表格中的相关信息回复Tom.
The weather temperature, warm and rainy...
Spring activities (任选两个即可) play Tai Chi special clothes, health, get on well with nature...
fly kites colourful, different shapes, good luck...
drink spring tea green tea, good for eyes and teeth, move out heat (热量) from the body...
注意：
（1）回复邮件中须包括表格中的信息，活动任选两个即可，可适当发挥。
（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数70个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hi Tom,
I’m happy to know that you are interested in the spring in my hometown. Let me tell you something about it.
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Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．春天是一个绿色的世界，是一个充满芬芳的世界。假如你叫李华，请根据以下提示和要求，以“My favourite season—spring”为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：1. How is the weather in spring
2. What do people usually do in spring
要求：1.短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
2.词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My favourite season—spring
There are four seasons in a year.
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3．春天来到了。春是一个永恒的话题。请你根据下列提示写一篇有关于你家乡春天的短文。
写作提示：
1. 描述春天的特点，例如天气特点，气温等。(不少于两点)
2. 描写你在春天经常进行的活动。(不少于两种)
3. “一年之计在于春”，写出你在新的一年中的计划或决心。
4. 字数要求80字左右。(开头已给出，不计字数)
Spring has arrived in my hometown. I love this lively season…
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4．某英文报正在举行“家乡美”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“Beauty in my hometown”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成征文。
提示：(1) What is weather like in your hometown
(2) Which place do you like best in your hometown
(3) How is the food in your hometown
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（3）词数：80 词左右；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Beauty in my hometown
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5．某英文报正在举行“家乡美”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“Spring in My Hometown”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成征文。词数80左右。
提示：
1. What is spring like in your hometown
2. What do people in your hometown usually do in spring
3. How do you like your hometown in spring
要求：1．短文需包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥：
2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息：
3．文章80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Spring in My Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city in the southeast of Gansu.
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6．假如你是李华，植树节来临，请你写一封倡议书，号召大家多种树、爱护树。倡议书中要指出植树的益处，如：净化空气、美化城市、提供休息场所、防止风把泥土吹走等。
要求：
(1)条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺；
(2)70词左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
参考词汇：fulfill 满足
Dear class,
As Tree Planting Day is coming, we should _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
7．假如你是花草爱好者，要在学校为国际交流生讲解如何种花，请你根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的发言稿，发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
(1)养花是一种爱好。
(2)养花的步骤：把种子放在花盆中盖上土；注意浇水；放在阳光下。
(3)养花的益处。
Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to share my planting experience with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
8．根据提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。文章的标题和开头已给出。
1. 旅游是一种非常好的活动。你可以欣赏自然风光，可以呼吸新鲜空气，还可以交友。
2. 旅游有时很麻烦。天气多变。
3. 旅游时应做好充分的准备，需了解天气情况。有朋友在一起，可相互照顾；不要出事故。
Traveling
Traveling is a very good activity.
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9．假如你是李明。上周五早上，你班同学去格林农场参加实践活动，请你用英语给大家讲述一下这次实践活动。
内容要点：
1. 7点校门口集合，乘车前往；
2. 摘蔬菜，给植物浇水，和农民交谈；
3. 体验农场生活，活动约2小时。
注意：
1.词数：80词左右；
2.不要逐条翻译，内容要连贯；
3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Our class went to Green Farm to experience the farming life last Friday morning
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10．10月4日是世界动物日，你校组织以“I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals”为题的英语演讲比赛。假如李明将要参加比赛，请你以“李明”的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己。
内容如下：
1. 品质：善良，善待动物；
2. 爱好：…… (至少两点)；
3. 感悟：动物是人类的朋友，保护动物就是保护我们自己；
4. 打算：…… (至少两点)。
I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.
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Thank you for listening!
11．假如你是李瑞，最近阅读了网络上一篇有关保护濒危动物的文章而深受触动。请根据以下信息给美国好友 Mary写一封电子邮件，并说说作为一名中学生，你能为保护动物做些什么。
写作要点：
1. 告诉 Mary 许多动物正濒临灭绝的事实(例如：熊猫和鲸)
2. 介绍动物濒临灭绝的原因：
(1)没有足够的食物和居住的空间；
(2)树木被砍伐，河水被污染；
(3)遭到捕杀。
3. 至少写出两件中学生能为保护濒危动物所做的事。
写作要求：
(1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
(3)字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
(4)至少80词
Dear Mary,
How is everything going
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Waiting for your reply.
Yours,
Li Rui
12．熊猫是我们的国宝，它们憨态可掬的样子很是惹人爱，但是随着自然环境的破坏，大熊猫越来越少了，我们人类应该行动起来保护熊猫。请以“How to protect pandas”为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明保护熊猫的重要性以及怎样保护它们。
必须使用以下结构和要点：
How to protect pandas Introduction (介绍) national treasure, Sichuan, bamboo, lazy but cute, popular...
Current situation (现状) enough to eat...
Protection the importance of protecting pandas, not cut down, not throw food, rules on panda protection...
写作要求：
1.字数80词左右，可适当发挥；
2.字迹清晰、工整、美观。请先列提纲、打草稿；
3.注意时态、词句用法、标点符号、文段连贯性等问题。
How to protect pandas
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13．红毛猩猩是被列入《世界自然保护联盟濒危物种红色名录》的极危物种，许多动物和红毛猩猩一样，面临着灭绝的危险，它们的出路又在何方？
请你根据以下内容提示用英文写一篇短文，谈谈你对动物保护的看法和建议。
1，动物濒危的原因：
人类捕杀动物，砍伐森林，环境污染……
2，保护动物的措施：
政府应制定法律，人们不应该污染环境与捕杀野生动物……
3，呼吁：
已经看过关于保护动物的书。
喜欢熊猫，因为它们是最受欢迎的动物之一。
我们行动起来，一起努力保护动物。……
注意：
(1)可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息，注意时态。
(2)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯，词数80左右。
orangutan 红毛猩猩
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14．在当今世界，很多野生动物都濒临灭绝。在我国，老虎是重点保护动物。请根据以下表格所提供的信息，以“Tigers are in danger”为题, 写一篇英文短文, 号召大家行动起来保护动物。
外貌 大而强壮；黑条纹(dark stripes) ……
特点 跑得快；擅长捕捉其他动物
生存现状 人类捕杀：没有足够的食物……
拯救措施 减少森林砍伐……
要求：
1.文中必须包含所有要点，不能逐条翻译，可拓展思路，适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的班级与人名；
3. 条理清楚、字迹工整，词数80——100。
Tigers are in danger
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15．互联网在我们的生活中正变得越来越受欢迎，我们可以使用互联网做许多事情，如何正确使用互联网是一个值得关注的问题。请以“How to Use the Internet Properly (正确地)”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
1. What can we do on the Internet
2. What do you usually do on the Internet
3. How can we use the Internet properly
写作要求：
1．文中须包含提示中的要点，可适当发挥;
2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3．词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
How to Use the Internet Properly
The Internet is becoming more and more popular in our lives. We can do many things on the Internet.
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16．互联网早已融入人们的生活，变得不可或缺。它使我们与世界联接，但它的弊端也日渐凸显。请根据下面的表格提示，以“The Internet in My Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈一谈你生活中互联网的利与弊以及你的感想。
提示：
Advantages Disadvantages
Watch videos and listen to songs Chat online Do shopping online … Spend too much time playing games… …
Use the Internet properly
注意：
（1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（2）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Internet in My Life
The Internet plays an important role in my life.
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17．你的笔友Jerry想了解更多关于中国的传统节日的一些情况，请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题写一篇短文。
参考内容包括：
(1) What is your favorite Chinese festival When is it
(2) How do people celebrate the festival (food, activities...)
(3) Why do you like the festival
要求：
(1) 语句通顺，适当发挥；
(2) 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）
(3) 词数不得少于80词。
My Favorite Chinese Festival
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18．假如你是李华，在你校本月将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的中秋节。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。
The Mid-Autumn Festival☆Time: in September or October ☆Activities: express wishes and hopes, have mooncakes, enjoy the moon... ☆Meaning: symbol of being together, missing family members far away...
注意：1.发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息；
3.词数80左右；4.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
19．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike今年年底将作为交换生来中国学习，他将在中国度过第一个春节。为了更好的了解中国传统文化和适应在中国的学习生活，他来信向你询问春节的传统习俗以及如何学好中文的方法。请你结合以上信息，给他写一封回信。
内容包括：
(1)节日的名称，时间，传统习俗；
(2)至少两种学习中文的方法。
要求：
(1)80—100词 (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数);
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
参考词汇：团圆饭reunion dinner，春晚gala，对联couplet，压岁钱lucky money，红包red packet，放烟花set off fireworks
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20．春天是万物复苏、春暖花开的美丽季节。请以春天为主题，根据提示与要求写一篇英语短文，简单介绍一下这个季节的特点以及可以进行的户外活动。
提示：
1.春天到了，天气变暖和了，植物开始生长；
2.可以进行的户外运动有踢足球、放风筝、野餐、爬山等。
要求：
1.在包含提示要点的基础上，可以自由发挥；
2文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3.词数80个左右。
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Hi Tom,
I’m happy to know that you are interested in the spring in my hometown. Let me tell you something about it.
In spring, the temperature is around 15-20°C. It’s warm but often rainy. People here enjoy two special activities. First, many people who wear traditional silk clothes practice Tai Chi in parks. It helps keep healthy and connects us with nature. Second, flying kites is popular. We make colorful ones in shapes like dragons or butterflies, believing they bring good luck. Sometimes families drink green tea together too. It’s said to protect eyes and remove body heat.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍家乡春天的天气情况以及具有中国特色的春天的活动；
第三步，期待对方回复并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②good luck好运气
[高分句型]
First, many people who wear traditional silk clothes practice Tai Chi in parks.（定语从句）
2．例文
My favourite season—spring
My favourite season is spring. When spring comes, the weather becomes warm and sunny. The wind blows gently, and everything starts to grow. People often take off their heavy coats and go outside to enjoy the fresh air. In spring, people usually do many fun activities. Some fly kites in the park, while others plant trees or flowers. Children like running on the grass and playing games. I love spring because it brings hope and beauty. Everything looks colorful and full of energy. Spring makes me happy!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍春天的天气，人们的活动；
第二步，发表对春天的感悟并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①start to do开始做某事
②take off脱下
[高分句型]
①When spring comes, the weather becomes warm and sunny. （时间状语从句）
②I love spring because it brings hope and beauty.（原因状语从句）
3．例文
Spring has arrived in my hometown. I love this lively season.
The weather in spring here is really nice. The days get longer and it’s much warmer. The sun shines brightly, but it’s not too hot. Sometimes, there are light rains. They make everything look fresh and green.
I have a lot of fun in spring. I often go for a picnic with my family in the park. We bring delicious food and enjoy the time together. Also, I like to ride my bike around the neighborhood. The gentle wind on my face makes me feel so free.
“A year’s plan starts with spring.” This year, I plan to learn a new skill-painting. I will practice it regularly. And I’ll work harder at school to get better grades. I believe I can make great progress in this wonderful season.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍春天的天气特点。
第二步，介绍自己在春天经常进行的活动。
第三步，介绍自己在新的一年中的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①go for a picnic去野餐
②in the park在公园
③make great progress取得很大的进步
[高分句型]
I believe I can make great progress in this wonderful season. (省略tnat的宾语从句)
4．例文
Beauty in my hometown
My hometown is very beautiful. It is along the Changjiang River.
In my hometown, different seasons have different weather. It is often cool and comfortable in spring and autumn. Sometimes it is too hot and rainy in summer while it is too cold and dry in winter. I like the park best in my home town, where there are many treees and colorful flowers. There is a river around the park, where fishes always swim hanppily and visitors can boat. We can also see many people work out in the park. There are also lots of delicious dishes in my hometown, such as Hot Pot, roast duck, dumpling and so on.
My hometown is full of life and power. It gives us energy and hope. I love my hometown very much.
【解析】【总体分析】
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。引出“Beauty in my hometown”这一话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从家乡的天气、你最喜欢的地方以及家乡的美食等方面来具体介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达对家乡的热爱。
【亮点词汇】
colorful flowers多彩的花
work out锻炼
delicious dishes美食
【高分句型】
Sometimes it is too hot and rainy in summer while it is too cold and dry in winter.（while连接的并列句）
I like the park best in my home town, where there are many treees and colorful flowers.（where引导的定语从句）
5．例文：
Spring in My Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city in the southeast of Gansu. When spring comes, everything comes back to life and the climate becomes warm. People feel more comfortable than in winter. The mountains which are very high in my hometown become greener and greener. Most flowers blossom as the weather becomes warm. All of these scenes draw a beautiful picture.
People begin to climb mountains and have picnics near rivers. They also fly kites in the parks. They try their best to be close to nature and enjoy the beauty of it. Farmers start to sow and wait for a good harvest.
As far as I am concerned, spring in my hometown is full of life and power. It gives us energy and hope. I love the spring in my hometown.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡的春天是什么样的；
第二步，介绍春天家乡人们通常做什么；
第三步，表达自己对于春天的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①be close to nature 亲近大自然
②try one’s best to do 尽某人最大努力去做某事
③as far as sb be concerned 就某人而言
[高分句型]
①When spring comes, everything comes back to life and the climate becomes warm.（when引导时间状语从句）
②The mountains which are very high in my hometown become greener and greener.（定语从句）
6．例文
Dear class,
As Tree Planting Day is coming, we should plant more trees and take care of trees at the same time.
Trees are important to us human. Trees can not only clean up the air, beautify the cities, but also provide the place for human to rest. What’s more, trees can also stop the wind from blowing the soil away, which is really helpful for the environmental protection.
Let’s work together to plant more trees and protect our home.
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，号召大家多种树，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍植树节我们应该要多种树；
第二步，具体阐述植树的益处；
第三步，最后作小结。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②at the same time同时；
③provide sth for sb为某人提供某物
④what’s more而且
⑤work together一起工作
[高分句型]
trees can also stop the wind from blowing the soil away, which is really helpful for the environmental protection.（which引导的非限制定语从句）
7．例文：
Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to share my planting experience with you.
I like planting flowers in my free time. Planting flowers is a very enjoyable hobby and teaches me to have patience with everything.
But how can we plant a flower Here are some steps. First, put the seed into a pot and cover it with rich soil. Second, water it at the proper time. Don’t water too little or too much. Third, put it in the sun so that it can grow strong.
Planting flowers can not only bring us fresh air but also make us relaxed. It’s pleasant to plant flowers.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点所提及到的所有内容，讲稿以“养花”为主题展开，可适当添加细节，完善作文内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点明主题——养花；
第二步，介绍“养花”是一种爱好；
第三步，详述养花的步骤；
第四步，介绍养花的益处；
第五步，书写结语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① in one’s free time 在某人的空闲时间
② have patience with 对……有耐心
③ put sth. into... 把某物放进……
④ cover sth. with... 用……覆盖……
[高分句型]
① Third, put it in the sun so that it can grow strong.（so that引导目的状语从句）
② Planting flowers is a very enjoyable hobby and teaches me to have patience with everything.（动名词作主语）
③ Planting flowers can not only bring us fresh air but also make us relaxed.（“not only...but also...”句式）
8．例文
Traveling
Traveling is a very good activity. When you go to a beautiful place, you can enjoy the beauty of nature, breathe fresh air, meet different people and make friends with them. It’s good for your health as well.
But sometimes, traveling is not an enjoyable thing. For example, the weather can be changeable. There may be rain when you travel.
When you go on a trip, you must get everything ready. Firstly, you must have clear information about the weather. Secondly, ask a friend to go with you so that you can help each other. Thirdly, you must be careful everywhere and try not to cause accidents. If you do these things, you will surely enjoy your travel.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：所需要点已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意语句的通顺，使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，以“旅游是一项很好的活动”引出下文；
第二步，按照要点内容，介绍旅游的好处，也介绍旅游的麻烦之处，注意语句的通顺和行文的连贯；
第三步，结尾介绍旅游的准备，可使用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly之类的词语使得文章连贯，最后总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①the beauty of nature自然之美
②make friends with sb和某人交朋友
③an enjoyable thing一件享受的事情
④help each other互相帮助
[高分句型]
①When you go on a trip, you must get everything ready.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Traveling is not an enjoyable thing. （动名词作主语）
9．例文：
Our class went to Green Farm to experience the farming life last Friday morning. We met at 7:00 am at the school gate and took a bus there. After we arrived, we picked vegetables and watered the plants. We talked with the farmers about agriculture. We learned a lot from them. We realized that it was pleasant to work on the farm.We stayed there for about 2 hours. We had meaningful activities and they made our trip unforgettable. We had food there and we were looking forward to the next experience.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“内容要点”介绍实践活动的时间、地点、经过和感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍实践活动的时间、地点；
第二步，介绍实践活动的经过；
第三步，总结实践活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① talk with 与……交谈
② learn… from… 向……学习
③ look forward to 期盼……
[高分句型]
① After we arrived，we picked vegetables and watered the plants. (使用时间状语从句)
② We realized that it was pleasant to work on the farm. (使用宾语从句)
10．例文
I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.
I am kind to others. I am good with animals. I like to do extra things, too. I like playing football and the guitar. I have ever organized activities to raise money for Save China’s Tigers. And I keep some homeless little animals. Animals are our friends. We should love them. I am always thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves.
If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will call on more people to love animals like me. I must try my best to make the world more beautiful.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主，阐述打算时用“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生需按演讲稿要求写，涵盖品质、爱好、感悟、打算等要点，可适当添加细节，突出自身优势与决心。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇打招呼，介绍自己，并表明想要成为保护动物志愿者的意图；
第二步，详细描述自身品质和爱好，阐述对保护动物的感悟；
第三步，说明若成为志愿者的具体打算，最后书写结语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① be good with 和……相处得好
② organize activities 组织活动
③ call on 号召
④ try one’s best 尽某人最大努力
⑤ do meaningful things 做有意义的事
[高分句型]
① I am always thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves. (含有宾语从句的复合句)
② If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. (含有条件状语从句的复合句)
11．例文：
Dear Mary,
How is everything going I’m writing to share ideas from an online article about protecting endangered animals. It really moved me recently.
Many animals are in danger of dying out, such as pandas and whales. There are several reasons for this. Firstly, they don’t have enough food and living space. Secondly, people cut down trees and pollute rivers, which destroys their habitats. Moreover, some animals are hunted for their fur, meat or other parts.
As a middle school student, I believe I can do something to help. For example, I can join volunteer groups to clean up the places where animals live. What’s more, I will tell people around me the importance of protecting animals and ask them not to buy things made from animals.
Let’s work together to make the world a better place for these lovely creatures.
Waiting for your reply.
Yours, Li Rui
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，表明写作意图，引出“保护濒临动物”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“动物濒临灭绝的原因、如何保护濒危动物”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger of处于……的危险中
②cut down砍倒
③what’s more更重要的是
[高分句型]
①Secondly, people cut down trees and pollute rivers, which destroys their habitats. (非限定性定语从句)
②As a middle school student, I believe I can do something to help. (宾语从句)
12．例文
How to protect pandas
Pandas are our national treasures. They live in Sichuan. They are lazy but cute and very popular. But now they don’t have enough bamboo to eat. It’s very important to protect them. We should not cut down bamboo forests. And don’t throw food at them in the zoo. We should follow the rules on panda protection. Let’s take action to protect pandas together.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所有提示信息，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点出要介绍的话题——大熊猫；
第二步，介绍大熊猫的产地、特征以及爱好；
第三步，介绍如何保护大熊猫并呼吁大家一起行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①live in住在……
②cut down砍倒
③ follow the rules遵守法则
[高分句型]
①It’s very important to protect them. (it作形式主语)
②Let’s take action to protect pandas together. (祈使句)
13．例文
Many animals, such as orangutans, are listed as critically endangered due to human activities like hunting, deforestation, and environmental pollution. To protect these animals, governments should establish strict laws to prevent hunting and reduce pollution. Additionally, people should avoid harming wildlife and take steps to protect their habitats.
Personally, I love pandas because they are one of the most popular animals, and I have read books about animal protection.
Let’s take action together and make efforts to protect these precious creatures!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明动物濒危的原因，如人类捕杀、森林砍伐、环境污染等；
第二步，提出保护动物的措施，如政府制定法律、减少环境污染、禁止捕杀野生动物等；
第三步，呼吁大家行动起来，共同保护动物，并表达对动物的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
① endangered species 濒危物种
② deforestation 森林砍伐
③ environmental pollution 环境污染
④ take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
① To protect these animals, governments should establish strict laws to prevent hunting and reduce pollution.（动词不定式表目的）
② Personally, I love pandas because they are one of the most popular animals, and I have read books about animal protection.（because引导原因状语从句）
14．例文
Tigers are in danger
Tigers are the largest living cats in the world. They are big and strong. They have bright eyes. They have orange fur with dark stripes. They look so powerful!
Tigers can run very fast. They are good at hunting other animals for food. People think them as the king of the forest.
Now tigers are in danger because hunters are hunting them for their fur and bones. Also, tigers do not have enough food to eat. And people always cut down many trees and kill tigers so that get their fur. We should do something to help them. We should make some nature reserves for them. And we should not cut forests. We should not wear tiger furs or use their bones for medicine.
I hope tigers can live peacefully on earth with people.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍老虎的外貌和特点；
第二步，其次介绍老虎的生存现状；
第三步，介绍拯救措施。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②be in danger处于危险中
③cut down砍倒
[高分句型]
①Now tigers are in danger because hunters are hunting them for their fur and bones.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②And people always cut down many trees and kill tigers so that get their fur.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
15．例文
How to Use the Internet Properly
The Internet is becoming more and more popular in our lives. We can do many things on the Internet. We can send emails, chat with friends, search for information, watch movies, play computer games and so on. I often use the Internet to learn English. Sometimes I listen to songs on the Internet to relax. But some students can’t use the Internet properly. As a result, they don’t have much energy to study well. So it’s important for us to use the Internet properly. First, we can use the Internet to find information and learn new words. Second, we shouldn’t use the Internet to play computer games. Because of playing games at night, some students feel tired in class. At last, we shouldn’t spend too much time on the Internet, it is bad for our eyes. So we must use the Internet properly.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍我们可以用互联网做很多事情；
第二步，具体阐述作者用互联网做哪些事情；
第三步，阐述如何正确使用互联网。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②as a result结果
③be bad for对……有害
[高分句型]
①So it’s important for us to use the internet correctly. (it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语)
16．例文
The Internet in My Life
The Internet plays an important role in my life. It helps me a lot. I can use it to learn English. I often watch English videos and listen to English songs on the Internet. It makes learning English more interesting. I can also chat with my friends online. We can share our feelings and experiences. What’s more, I can do some shopping on the Internet. It’s very convince.
However, the Internet also has some disadvantages. Sometimes I spend too much time playing games, which affects my study.
In my opinion, the Internet is a useful tool. We should use it properly to make our lives better.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：需涵盖表格中所有要点，适当补充细节，注意逻辑衔接。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用已给句子引入话题，概括互联网的重要性；
第二步，列举互联网的优点；
第三步，分析互联网的弊端；
第四步：提出合理使用网络的建议，并表达个人态度。
[亮点词汇]
①use sth to do sth用某物做某事
②what’s more而且
③spend time doing sth花时间做某事
[高分句型]
Sometimes I spend too much time playing games, which affects my study.（定语从句）
17．例文：
My Favorite Chinese Festival
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival best.
It comes in January or February. It is time for family members to get together. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up late, hoping to have a new start in the following year. During the Spring Festival, people often visit their relatives and close friends.
The Spring Festival is my favorite festival because it can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：内容的要点提示已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的中国传统节日；
第二步，介绍该节日的时间，以及相关的庆祝活动；
第三步，讲述喜欢该节日的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① as we all know 众所周知
② get together 相聚
③ such as 例如
④ stay up late 熬夜
⑤ the importance of ……的重要性
[高分句型]
① As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. (there be句式)
② It is time for family members to get together. (it的固定句型)
③ The Spring Festival is my favorite festival because it can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family. (because引导原因状语从句)
18．
范文
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Mid-Autumn Festival.The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October when the moon appears the biggest and the brightest in the year. During the festival, Chinese people sit around the table with their family members and enjoy mooncakes as well as the beautiful moon. People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together. When seeing them, people will miss their family members far away. At the same time, they will express wishes and hopes for them. Does it sound interesting
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中中秋节的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出涛介绍的主题——中秋节；
第二步，介绍中秋节的时间；
第三步，介绍中秋节的活动和意义。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
②as well as以及
③thanks for感谢
[高分句型]
①The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October when the moon appears the biggest and the brightest in the year.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together.（that引导的宾语从句）
19．例文
Dear Mike,
I am glad to hear that you are going to study in China as an exchange student at the end of this year.
There are many holidays and festivals in China. One of them is the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is a very important Chinese festival. It is also called Chinese New Year. It falls on the lunar January 1st. On the day before the Spring Festival, we will paste couplets. On the eve of the New Year, all the family people get together to have reunion dinner, watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the Spring Festival, children will get lucky money from their parents. People usually set off fireworks. People usually send red packets to each other to celebrate the New Year.
For learning Chinese, my advice is to watch more Chinese movies and listen to more Chinese songs.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从节日的名称，时间，传统习俗等方面来介绍中国的春节。
第三步，结尾。给出学习中文的建议，并结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①one of……中之一
②get together to have reunion dinner聚在一起吃团圆饭
③watch the Spring Festival Gala观看春节联欢晚会
[高分句型]
①I am glad to hear that you are going to study in China as an exchange student at the end of this year.（宾语从句）
②There are many holidays and festivals in China.（there be句型）
20．例文 Spring
When spring comes, the weather gets warmer and warmer. The snow melts quickly. Everything begins to grow in spring. Trees are budding and different kinds of flowers are blossoming. They make our world more colourful and more beautiful.
Spring is the best season for people to go outdoors. Some like to play football or fly a kite in the park. Some may go for a picnic with their family or friends. Others can go mountain climbing. It’s also good for their health.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一下春天这个季节的特点；
第二步，描述在这个季节可以进行的户外活动；
第三步，表达这些活动的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①fly a kite放风筝
②go for a picnic去野餐
③be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
When spring comes, the weather gets warmer and warmer. (When引导的时间状语从句)
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1．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Tom发来邮件，说非常想了解下你家乡春天的天气情况以及具有中国特色的春天的活动，请根据表格中的相关信息回复Tom.
The weather temperature, warm and rainy...
Spring activities (任选两个即可) play Tai Chi special clothes, health, get on well with nature...
fly kites colourful, different shapes, good luck...
drink spring tea green tea, good for eyes and teeth, move out heat (热量) from the body...
注意：
（1）回复邮件中须包括表格中的信息，活动任选两个即可，可适当发挥。
（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数70个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hi Tom,
I’m happy to know that you are interested in the spring in my hometown. Let me tell you something about it.
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Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．春天是一个绿色的世界，是一个充满芬芳的世界。假如你叫李华，请根据以下提示和要求，以“My favourite season—spring”为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：1. How is the weather in spring
2. What do people usually do in spring
要求：1.短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
2.词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My favourite season—spring
There are four seasons in a year.
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3．春天来到了。春是一个永恒的话题。请你根据下列提示写一篇有关于你家乡春天的短文。
写作提示：
1. 描述春天的特点，例如天气特点，气温等。(不少于两点)
2. 描写你在春天经常进行的活动。(不少于两种)
3. “一年之计在于春”，写出你在新的一年中的计划或决心。
4. 字数要求80字左右。(开头已给出，不计字数)
Spring has arrived in my hometown. I love this lively season…
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4．某英文报正在举行“家乡美”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“Beauty in my hometown”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成征文。
提示：(1) What is weather like in your hometown
(2) Which place do you like best in your hometown
(3) How is the food in your hometown
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（3）词数：80 词左右；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Beauty in my hometown
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5．某英文报正在举行“家乡美”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“Spring in My Hometown”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成征文。词数80左右。
提示：
1. What is spring like in your hometown
2. What do people in your hometown usually do in spring
3. How do you like your hometown in spring
要求：1．短文需包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥：
2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息：
3．文章80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Spring in My Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city in the southeast of Gansu.
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6．假如你是李华，植树节来临，请你写一封倡议书，号召大家多种树、爱护树。倡议书中要指出植树的益处，如：净化空气、美化城市、提供休息场所、防止风把泥土吹走等。
要求：
(1)条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺；
(2)70词左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
参考词汇：fulfill 满足
Dear class,
As Tree Planting Day is coming, we should _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
7．假如你是花草爱好者，要在学校为国际交流生讲解如何种花，请你根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的发言稿，发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
(1)养花是一种爱好。
(2)养花的步骤：把种子放在花盆中盖上土；注意浇水；放在阳光下。
(3)养花的益处。
Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to share my planting experience with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
8．根据提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。文章的标题和开头已给出。
1. 旅游是一种非常好的活动。你可以欣赏自然风光，可以呼吸新鲜空气，还可以交友。
2. 旅游有时很麻烦。天气多变。
3. 旅游时应做好充分的准备，需了解天气情况。有朋友在一起，可相互照顾；不要出事故。
Traveling
Traveling is a very good activity.
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9．假如你是李明。上周五早上，你班同学去格林农场参加实践活动，请你用英语给大家讲述一下这次实践活动。
内容要点：
1. 7点校门口集合，乘车前往；
2. 摘蔬菜，给植物浇水，和农民交谈；
3. 体验农场生活，活动约2小时。
注意：
1.词数：80词左右；
2.不要逐条翻译，内容要连贯；
3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Our class went to Green Farm to experience the farming life last Friday morning
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10．10月4日是世界动物日，你校组织以“I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals”为题的英语演讲比赛。假如李明将要参加比赛，请你以“李明”的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己。
内容如下：
1. 品质：善良，善待动物；
2. 爱好：…… (至少两点)；
3. 感悟：动物是人类的朋友，保护动物就是保护我们自己；
4. 打算：…… (至少两点)。
I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.
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Thank you for listening!
11．假如你是李瑞，最近阅读了网络上一篇有关保护濒危动物的文章而深受触动。请根据以下信息给美国好友 Mary写一封电子邮件，并说说作为一名中学生，你能为保护动物做些什么。
写作要点：
1. 告诉 Mary 许多动物正濒临灭绝的事实(例如：熊猫和鲸)
2. 介绍动物濒临灭绝的原因：
(1)没有足够的食物和居住的空间；
(2)树木被砍伐，河水被污染；
(3)遭到捕杀。
3. 至少写出两件中学生能为保护濒危动物所做的事。
写作要求：
(1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
(3)字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
(4)至少80词
Dear Mary,
How is everything going
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Waiting for your reply.
Yours,
Li Rui
12．熊猫是我们的国宝，它们憨态可掬的样子很是惹人爱，但是随着自然环境的破坏，大熊猫越来越少了，我们人类应该行动起来保护熊猫。请以“How to protect pandas”为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明保护熊猫的重要性以及怎样保护它们。
必须使用以下结构和要点：
How to protect pandas Introduction (介绍) national treasure, Sichuan, bamboo, lazy but cute, popular...
Current situation (现状) enough to eat...
Protection the importance of protecting pandas, not cut down, not throw food, rules on panda protection...
写作要求：
1.字数80词左右，可适当发挥；
2.字迹清晰、工整、美观。请先列提纲、打草稿；
3.注意时态、词句用法、标点符号、文段连贯性等问题。
How to protect pandas
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13．红毛猩猩是被列入《世界自然保护联盟濒危物种红色名录》的极危物种，许多动物和红毛猩猩一样，面临着灭绝的危险，它们的出路又在何方？
请你根据以下内容提示用英文写一篇短文，谈谈你对动物保护的看法和建议。
1，动物濒危的原因：
人类捕杀动物，砍伐森林，环境污染……
2，保护动物的措施：
政府应制定法律，人们不应该污染环境与捕杀野生动物……
3，呼吁：
已经看过关于保护动物的书。
喜欢熊猫，因为它们是最受欢迎的动物之一。
我们行动起来，一起努力保护动物。……
注意：
(1)可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息，注意时态。
(2)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯，词数80左右。
orangutan 红毛猩猩
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14．在当今世界，很多野生动物都濒临灭绝。在我国，老虎是重点保护动物。请根据以下表格所提供的信息，以“Tigers are in danger”为题, 写一篇英文短文, 号召大家行动起来保护动物。
外貌 大而强壮；黑条纹(dark stripes) ……
特点 跑得快；擅长捕捉其他动物
生存现状 人类捕杀：没有足够的食物……
拯救措施 减少森林砍伐……
要求：
1.文中必须包含所有要点，不能逐条翻译，可拓展思路，适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的班级与人名；
3. 条理清楚、字迹工整，词数80——100。
Tigers are in danger
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15．互联网在我们的生活中正变得越来越受欢迎，我们可以使用互联网做许多事情，如何正确使用互联网是一个值得关注的问题。请以“How to Use the Internet Properly (正确地)”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
1. What can we do on the Internet
2. What do you usually do on the Internet
3. How can we use the Internet properly
写作要求：
1．文中须包含提示中的要点，可适当发挥;
2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3．词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
How to Use the Internet Properly
The Internet is becoming more and more popular in our lives. We can do many things on the Internet.
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16．互联网早已融入人们的生活，变得不可或缺。它使我们与世界联接，但它的弊端也日渐凸显。请根据下面的表格提示，以“The Internet in My Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈一谈你生活中互联网的利与弊以及你的感想。
提示：
Advantages Disadvantages
Watch videos and listen to songs Chat online Do shopping online … Spend too much time playing games… …
Use the Internet properly
注意：
（1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（2）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Internet in My Life
The Internet plays an important role in my life.
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17．你的笔友Jerry想了解更多关于中国的传统节日的一些情况，请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题写一篇短文。
参考内容包括：
(1) What is your favorite Chinese festival When is it
(2) How do people celebrate the festival (food, activities...)
(3) Why do you like the festival
要求：
(1) 语句通顺，适当发挥；
(2) 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）
(3) 词数不得少于80词。
My Favorite Chinese Festival
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18．假如你是李华，在你校本月将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的中秋节。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。
The Mid-Autumn Festival☆Time: in September or October ☆Activities: express wishes and hopes, have mooncakes, enjoy the moon... ☆Meaning: symbol of being together, missing family members far away...
注意：1.发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息；
3.词数80左右；4.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
19．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike今年年底将作为交换生来中国学习，他将在中国度过第一个春节。为了更好的了解中国传统文化和适应在中国的学习生活，他来信向你询问春节的传统习俗以及如何学好中文的方法。请你结合以上信息，给他写一封回信。
内容包括：
(1)节日的名称，时间，传统习俗；
(2)至少两种学习中文的方法。
要求：
(1)80—100词 (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数);
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
参考词汇：团圆饭reunion dinner，春晚gala，对联couplet，压岁钱lucky money，红包red packet，放烟花set off fireworks
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20．春天是万物复苏、春暖花开的美丽季节。请以春天为主题，根据提示与要求写一篇英语短文，简单介绍一下这个季节的特点以及可以进行的户外活动。
提示：
1.春天到了，天气变暖和了，植物开始生长；
2.可以进行的户外运动有踢足球、放风筝、野餐、爬山等。
要求：
1.在包含提示要点的基础上，可以自由发挥；
2文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3.词数80个左右。
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Hi Tom,
I’m happy to know that you are interested in the spring in my hometown. Let me tell you something about it.
In spring, the temperature is around 15-20°C. It’s warm but often rainy. People here enjoy two special activities. First, many people who wear traditional silk clothes practice Tai Chi in parks. It helps keep healthy and connects us with nature. Second, flying kites is popular. We make colorful ones in shapes like dragons or butterflies, believing they bring good luck. Sometimes families drink green tea together too. It’s said to protect eyes and remove body heat.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍家乡春天的天气情况以及具有中国特色的春天的活动；
第三步，期待对方回复并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②good luck好运气
[高分句型]
First, many people who wear traditional silk clothes practice Tai Chi in parks.（定语从句）
2．例文
My favourite season—spring
My favourite season is spring. When spring comes, the weather becomes warm and sunny. The wind blows gently, and everything starts to grow. People often take off their heavy coats and go outside to enjoy the fresh air. In spring, people usually do many fun activities. Some fly kites in the park, while others plant trees or flowers. Children like running on the grass and playing games. I love spring because it brings hope and beauty. Everything looks colorful and full of energy. Spring makes me happy!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍春天的天气，人们的活动；
第二步，发表对春天的感悟并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①start to do开始做某事
②take off脱下
[高分句型]
①When spring comes, the weather becomes warm and sunny. （时间状语从句）
②I love spring because it brings hope and beauty.（原因状语从句）
3．例文
Spring has arrived in my hometown. I love this lively season.
The weather in spring here is really nice. The days get longer and it’s much warmer. The sun shines brightly, but it’s not too hot. Sometimes, there are light rains. They make everything look fresh and green.
I have a lot of fun in spring. I often go for a picnic with my family in the park. We bring delicious food and enjoy the time together. Also, I like to ride my bike around the neighborhood. The gentle wind on my face makes me feel so free.
“A year’s plan starts with spring.” This year, I plan to learn a new skill-painting. I will practice it regularly. And I’ll work harder at school to get better grades. I believe I can make great progress in this wonderful season.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍春天的天气特点。
第二步，介绍自己在春天经常进行的活动。
第三步，介绍自己在新的一年中的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①go for a picnic去野餐
②in the park在公园
③make great progress取得很大的进步
[高分句型]
I believe I can make great progress in this wonderful season. (省略tnat的宾语从句)
4．例文
Beauty in my hometown
My hometown is very beautiful. It is along the Changjiang River.
In my hometown, different seasons have different weather. It is often cool and comfortable in spring and autumn. Sometimes it is too hot and rainy in summer while it is too cold and dry in winter. I like the park best in my home town, where there are many treees and colorful flowers. There is a river around the park, where fishes always swim hanppily and visitors can boat. We can also see many people work out in the park. There are also lots of delicious dishes in my hometown, such as Hot Pot, roast duck, dumpling and so on.
My hometown is full of life and power. It gives us energy and hope. I love my hometown very much.
【解析】【总体分析】
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。引出“Beauty in my hometown”这一话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从家乡的天气、你最喜欢的地方以及家乡的美食等方面来具体介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达对家乡的热爱。
【亮点词汇】
colorful flowers多彩的花
work out锻炼
delicious dishes美食
【高分句型】
Sometimes it is too hot and rainy in summer while it is too cold and dry in winter.（while连接的并列句）
I like the park best in my home town, where there are many treees and colorful flowers.（where引导的定语从句）
5．例文：
Spring in My Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city in the southeast of Gansu. When spring comes, everything comes back to life and the climate becomes warm. People feel more comfortable than in winter. The mountains which are very high in my hometown become greener and greener. Most flowers blossom as the weather becomes warm. All of these scenes draw a beautiful picture.
People begin to climb mountains and have picnics near rivers. They also fly kites in the parks. They try their best to be close to nature and enjoy the beauty of it. Farmers start to sow and wait for a good harvest.
As far as I am concerned, spring in my hometown is full of life and power. It gives us energy and hope. I love the spring in my hometown.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡的春天是什么样的；
第二步，介绍春天家乡人们通常做什么；
第三步，表达自己对于春天的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①be close to nature 亲近大自然
②try one’s best to do 尽某人最大努力去做某事
③as far as sb be concerned 就某人而言
[高分句型]
①When spring comes, everything comes back to life and the climate becomes warm.（when引导时间状语从句）
②The mountains which are very high in my hometown become greener and greener.（定语从句）
6．例文
Dear class,
As Tree Planting Day is coming, we should plant more trees and take care of trees at the same time.
Trees are important to us human. Trees can not only clean up the air, beautify the cities, but also provide the place for human to rest. What’s more, trees can also stop the wind from blowing the soil away, which is really helpful for the environmental protection.
Let’s work together to plant more trees and protect our home.
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，号召大家多种树，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍植树节我们应该要多种树；
第二步，具体阐述植树的益处；
第三步，最后作小结。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②at the same time同时；
③provide sth for sb为某人提供某物
④what’s more而且
⑤work together一起工作
[高分句型]
trees can also stop the wind from blowing the soil away, which is really helpful for the environmental protection.（which引导的非限制定语从句）
7．例文：
Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to share my planting experience with you.
I like planting flowers in my free time. Planting flowers is a very enjoyable hobby and teaches me to have patience with everything.
But how can we plant a flower Here are some steps. First, put the seed into a pot and cover it with rich soil. Second, water it at the proper time. Don’t water too little or too much. Third, put it in the sun so that it can grow strong.
Planting flowers can not only bring us fresh air but also make us relaxed. It’s pleasant to plant flowers.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点所提及到的所有内容，讲稿以“养花”为主题展开，可适当添加细节，完善作文内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点明主题——养花；
第二步，介绍“养花”是一种爱好；
第三步，详述养花的步骤；
第四步，介绍养花的益处；
第五步，书写结语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① in one’s free time 在某人的空闲时间
② have patience with 对……有耐心
③ put sth. into... 把某物放进……
④ cover sth. with... 用……覆盖……
[高分句型]
① Third, put it in the sun so that it can grow strong.（so that引导目的状语从句）
② Planting flowers is a very enjoyable hobby and teaches me to have patience with everything.（动名词作主语）
③ Planting flowers can not only bring us fresh air but also make us relaxed.（“not only...but also...”句式）
8．例文
Traveling
Traveling is a very good activity. When you go to a beautiful place, you can enjoy the beauty of nature, breathe fresh air, meet different people and make friends with them. It’s good for your health as well.
But sometimes, traveling is not an enjoyable thing. For example, the weather can be changeable. There may be rain when you travel.
When you go on a trip, you must get everything ready. Firstly, you must have clear information about the weather. Secondly, ask a friend to go with you so that you can help each other. Thirdly, you must be careful everywhere and try not to cause accidents. If you do these things, you will surely enjoy your travel.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：所需要点已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意语句的通顺，使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，以“旅游是一项很好的活动”引出下文；
第二步，按照要点内容，介绍旅游的好处，也介绍旅游的麻烦之处，注意语句的通顺和行文的连贯；
第三步，结尾介绍旅游的准备，可使用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly之类的词语使得文章连贯，最后总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①the beauty of nature自然之美
②make friends with sb和某人交朋友
③an enjoyable thing一件享受的事情
④help each other互相帮助
[高分句型]
①When you go on a trip, you must get everything ready.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Traveling is not an enjoyable thing. （动名词作主语）
9．例文：
Our class went to Green Farm to experience the farming life last Friday morning. We met at 7:00 am at the school gate and took a bus there. After we arrived, we picked vegetables and watered the plants. We talked with the farmers about agriculture. We learned a lot from them. We realized that it was pleasant to work on the farm.We stayed there for about 2 hours. We had meaningful activities and they made our trip unforgettable. We had food there and we were looking forward to the next experience.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“内容要点”介绍实践活动的时间、地点、经过和感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍实践活动的时间、地点；
第二步，介绍实践活动的经过；
第三步，总结实践活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① talk with 与……交谈
② learn… from… 向……学习
③ look forward to 期盼……
[高分句型]
① After we arrived，we picked vegetables and watered the plants. (使用时间状语从句)
② We realized that it was pleasant to work on the farm. (使用宾语从句)
10．例文
I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.
I am kind to others. I am good with animals. I like to do extra things, too. I like playing football and the guitar. I have ever organized activities to raise money for Save China’s Tigers. And I keep some homeless little animals. Animals are our friends. We should love them. I am always thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves.
If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will call on more people to love animals like me. I must try my best to make the world more beautiful.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主，阐述打算时用“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生需按演讲稿要求写，涵盖品质、爱好、感悟、打算等要点，可适当添加细节，突出自身优势与决心。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇打招呼，介绍自己，并表明想要成为保护动物志愿者的意图；
第二步，详细描述自身品质和爱好，阐述对保护动物的感悟；
第三步，说明若成为志愿者的具体打算，最后书写结语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① be good with 和……相处得好
② organize activities 组织活动
③ call on 号召
④ try one’s best 尽某人最大努力
⑤ do meaningful things 做有意义的事
[高分句型]
① I am always thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves. (含有宾语从句的复合句)
② If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. (含有条件状语从句的复合句)
11．例文：
Dear Mary,
How is everything going I’m writing to share ideas from an online article about protecting endangered animals. It really moved me recently.
Many animals are in danger of dying out, such as pandas and whales. There are several reasons for this. Firstly, they don’t have enough food and living space. Secondly, people cut down trees and pollute rivers, which destroys their habitats. Moreover, some animals are hunted for their fur, meat or other parts.
As a middle school student, I believe I can do something to help. For example, I can join volunteer groups to clean up the places where animals live. What’s more, I will tell people around me the importance of protecting animals and ask them not to buy things made from animals.
Let’s work together to make the world a better place for these lovely creatures.
Waiting for your reply.
Yours, Li Rui
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，表明写作意图，引出“保护濒临动物”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“动物濒临灭绝的原因、如何保护濒危动物”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger of处于……的危险中
②cut down砍倒
③what’s more更重要的是
[高分句型]
①Secondly, people cut down trees and pollute rivers, which destroys their habitats. (非限定性定语从句)
②As a middle school student, I believe I can do something to help. (宾语从句)
12．例文
How to protect pandas
Pandas are our national treasures. They live in Sichuan. They are lazy but cute and very popular. But now they don’t have enough bamboo to eat. It’s very important to protect them. We should not cut down bamboo forests. And don’t throw food at them in the zoo. We should follow the rules on panda protection. Let’s take action to protect pandas together.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所有提示信息，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点出要介绍的话题——大熊猫；
第二步，介绍大熊猫的产地、特征以及爱好；
第三步，介绍如何保护大熊猫并呼吁大家一起行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①live in住在……
②cut down砍倒
③ follow the rules遵守法则
[高分句型]
①It’s very important to protect them. (it作形式主语)
②Let’s take action to protect pandas together. (祈使句)
13．例文
Many animals, such as orangutans, are listed as critically endangered due to human activities like hunting, deforestation, and environmental pollution. To protect these animals, governments should establish strict laws to prevent hunting and reduce pollution. Additionally, people should avoid harming wildlife and take steps to protect their habitats.
Personally, I love pandas because they are one of the most popular animals, and I have read books about animal protection.
Let’s take action together and make efforts to protect these precious creatures!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明动物濒危的原因，如人类捕杀、森林砍伐、环境污染等；
第二步，提出保护动物的措施，如政府制定法律、减少环境污染、禁止捕杀野生动物等；
第三步，呼吁大家行动起来，共同保护动物，并表达对动物的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
① endangered species 濒危物种
② deforestation 森林砍伐
③ environmental pollution 环境污染
④ take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
① To protect these animals, governments should establish strict laws to prevent hunting and reduce pollution.（动词不定式表目的）
② Personally, I love pandas because they are one of the most popular animals, and I have read books about animal protection.（because引导原因状语从句）
14．例文
Tigers are in danger
Tigers are the largest living cats in the world. They are big and strong. They have bright eyes. They have orange fur with dark stripes. They look so powerful!
Tigers can run very fast. They are good at hunting other animals for food. People think them as the king of the forest.
Now tigers are in danger because hunters are hunting them for their fur and bones. Also, tigers do not have enough food to eat. And people always cut down many trees and kill tigers so that get their fur. We should do something to help them. We should make some nature reserves for them. And we should not cut forests. We should not wear tiger furs or use their bones for medicine.
I hope tigers can live peacefully on earth with people.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍老虎的外貌和特点；
第二步，其次介绍老虎的生存现状；
第三步，介绍拯救措施。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②be in danger处于危险中
③cut down砍倒
[高分句型]
①Now tigers are in danger because hunters are hunting them for their fur and bones.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②And people always cut down many trees and kill tigers so that get their fur.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
15．例文
How to Use the Internet Properly
The Internet is becoming more and more popular in our lives. We can do many things on the Internet. We can send emails, chat with friends, search for information, watch movies, play computer games and so on. I often use the Internet to learn English. Sometimes I listen to songs on the Internet to relax. But some students can’t use the Internet properly. As a result, they don’t have much energy to study well. So it’s important for us to use the Internet properly. First, we can use the Internet to find information and learn new words. Second, we shouldn’t use the Internet to play computer games. Because of playing games at night, some students feel tired in class. At last, we shouldn’t spend too much time on the Internet, it is bad for our eyes. So we must use the Internet properly.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍我们可以用互联网做很多事情；
第二步，具体阐述作者用互联网做哪些事情；
第三步，阐述如何正确使用互联网。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②as a result结果
③be bad for对……有害
[高分句型]
①So it’s important for us to use the internet correctly. (it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语)
16．例文
The Internet in My Life
The Internet plays an important role in my life. It helps me a lot. I can use it to learn English. I often watch English videos and listen to English songs on the Internet. It makes learning English more interesting. I can also chat with my friends online. We can share our feelings and experiences. What’s more, I can do some shopping on the Internet. It’s very convince.
However, the Internet also has some disadvantages. Sometimes I spend too much time playing games, which affects my study.
In my opinion, the Internet is a useful tool. We should use it properly to make our lives better.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：需涵盖表格中所有要点，适当补充细节，注意逻辑衔接。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用已给句子引入话题，概括互联网的重要性；
第二步，列举互联网的优点；
第三步，分析互联网的弊端；
第四步：提出合理使用网络的建议，并表达个人态度。
[亮点词汇]
①use sth to do sth用某物做某事
②what’s more而且
③spend time doing sth花时间做某事
[高分句型]
Sometimes I spend too much time playing games, which affects my study.（定语从句）
17．例文：
My Favorite Chinese Festival
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival best.
It comes in January or February. It is time for family members to get together. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up late, hoping to have a new start in the following year. During the Spring Festival, people often visit their relatives and close friends.
The Spring Festival is my favorite festival because it can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：内容的要点提示已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的中国传统节日；
第二步，介绍该节日的时间，以及相关的庆祝活动；
第三步，讲述喜欢该节日的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① as we all know 众所周知
② get together 相聚
③ such as 例如
④ stay up late 熬夜
⑤ the importance of ……的重要性
[高分句型]
① As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. (there be句式)
② It is time for family members to get together. (it的固定句型)
③ The Spring Festival is my favorite festival because it can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family. (because引导原因状语从句)
18．
范文
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Mid-Autumn Festival.The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October when the moon appears the biggest and the brightest in the year. During the festival, Chinese people sit around the table with their family members and enjoy mooncakes as well as the beautiful moon. People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together. When seeing them, people will miss their family members far away. At the same time, they will express wishes and hopes for them. Does it sound interesting
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中中秋节的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出涛介绍的主题——中秋节；
第二步，介绍中秋节的时间；
第三步，介绍中秋节的活动和意义。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
②as well as以及
③thanks for感谢
[高分句型]
①The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October when the moon appears the biggest and the brightest in the year.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together.（that引导的宾语从句）
19．例文
Dear Mike,
I am glad to hear that you are going to study in China as an exchange student at the end of this year.
There are many holidays and festivals in China. One of them is the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is a very important Chinese festival. It is also called Chinese New Year. It falls on the lunar January 1st. On the day before the Spring Festival, we will paste couplets. On the eve of the New Year, all the family people get together to have reunion dinner, watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the Spring Festival, children will get lucky money from their parents. People usually set off fireworks. People usually send red packets to each other to celebrate the New Year.
For learning Chinese, my advice is to watch more Chinese movies and listen to more Chinese songs.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从节日的名称，时间，传统习俗等方面来介绍中国的春节。
第三步，结尾。给出学习中文的建议，并结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①one of……中之一
②get together to have reunion dinner聚在一起吃团圆饭
③watch the Spring Festival Gala观看春节联欢晚会
[高分句型]
①I am glad to hear that you are going to study in China as an exchange student at the end of this year.（宾语从句）
②There are many holidays and festivals in China.（there be句型）
20．例文 Spring
When spring comes, the weather gets warmer and warmer. The snow melts quickly. Everything begins to grow in spring. Trees are budding and different kinds of flowers are blossoming. They make our world more colourful and more beautiful.
Spring is the best season for people to go outdoors. Some like to play football or fly a kite in the park. Some may go for a picnic with their family or friends. Others can go mountain climbing. It’s also good for their health.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一下春天这个季节的特点；
第二步，描述在这个季节可以进行的户外活动；
第三步，表达这些活动的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①fly a kite放风筝
②go for a picnic去野餐
③be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
When spring comes, the weather gets warmer and warmer. (When引导的时间状语从句)
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