（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期中复习培优专项鲁教版（五四学制）（含答案解析）
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期中复习专项鲁教版（五四学制）
（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的朋友Linda对中国的动物文化很感兴趣，计划举办一场动物主题派对，她向你询问如何融入中国元素。请你写一封信回复Linda，谈谈如何为她的动物主题派对 (Animal-themed Party) 加入中国特色元素。请根据以下写作提示完成写作。
写作提示：
1. What can you do to add Chinese celebrations to the party
2. Show Chinese animal-related short films.
3. Where can you have the party
4. What special gift can you give Linda and why
写作要求：
1. 内容包含所给提示信息，可适当拓展；
2. 语句连贯，书写规范，词数80左右。作文的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear you’re planning an animal-themed party and want to add Chinese elements.Here are my ideas.
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Hope your party will be a great success!
Best regards,
Li Hua
2．你的学校即将再次和法国的圣马丁中学开启交流之旅，现需要选拔一名优秀学生作为赴法交流访问团的组长。假如你是李华，打算参加选拔，请给负责人Mr. Zhang写一封自荐信。
内容必须包括以下要点：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势 (了解法国、精通语言、性格、能力……)；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
(1) 词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Grade 7.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你是李辉，你的笔友Mary来信，想了解关于中国的一些情况。请根据以下要点和要求，给她回一封电子邮件，介绍中国。
要点：
1. 中国幅员辽阔，历史悠久；
2. 中国有许多旅游资源，特色美食以及传统文化等（至少列举两个方面）；
3. 表达期待，欢迎她来中国游玩。
要求：80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
Glad to receive your letter. You said you wanted to know about China in your letter. Now let me talk about it.
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Yours,
Li Hui
4．俗话说，百善孝为先。尊敬老人是中华民族的传统美德。作为孩子，我们应该照顾老人，为老人多做些事情。假设上周末，你们班组织了一次去敬老院 （the Old People’s Home） 关爱老人的活动，请根据以下内容提示写一篇关爱老人的短文。
内容提示：activities (活动), in the morning, play games, at noon, cook lunch, in the afternoon, tell stories, feeling (感受)
要求：
1. 60—80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的真实名称。
3. 语句通顺，字迹工整。
Respecting the old people is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation
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5．假如你是Lily，你有一个英国笔友David，他写邮件告诉你想了解中国的一些风俗礼节和中国学校的一些校规。请你根据提示给他回一封电子邮件，解答他的疑问。（80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯）
提示：
1. 第一次见到别人时要微笑并握手。
2. 说话的时候注视对方，但不要离得太近，如果太近，会令人不舒服。
3. 挥手道别是礼貌的。
4. 不要谈论太私人的问题。
5. 课堂上回答老师的问题要起立，不能在课堂上吃东西。
6.上课不迟到。
7.对待老师要有礼貌。
参考词汇：风俗custom 校规school rules
Dear David,
How is everything going In your last letter, you said that you wanted to
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Yours,
Lily
6．每个人都有自己的爱好， 一些人甚至希望将自己的爱好变成未来的职业。假定你是学生李辉，即将参加学校组织的演讲比赛，请根据下列提示谈谈如何把爱好变成职业。
要点如下：(1)介绍你的爱好；
(2)此爱好对未来职业的帮助；
(3)表达希望。
注意：(1)词数为80-100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
Dear friends,
Everyone has a bobby and some people even want to change it into a future career. My hobby is
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7．新学期开始了，红星学校七年级开展了校篮球队的队长竞选活动。假如你是参加竞选的王伟同学，请用表格中的提示词表述你过去打篮球的经历，以及现在能为校篮球队做的事情。
要求：
(1)词数：40~60个。
(2)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Name Wang Wei
过去的经历 enjoy, start, join
现在能做的事情 score, win
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Wei. I’d like to be the captain (队长) of our school basketball team.
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Choose me as the captain of our school basketball team and everyone in our team can be the best!
8．暑假就要到了，John 想应聘一份做老师的社会实践工作，请你根据提示帮他设计一份60—80词的应聘信。要点如下：
1. 想得到这份工作，自我形象介绍；
2. 你的能力：会说英语，擅长运动，如篮球，足球，游泳等；
3. 去年暑假你曾经在少年宫（the Children’s Palace）担任过老师，带孩子们练过英语，和孩子们相处得很好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m John. I want to get a job as a teacher here.
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Yours,
John
9．According to the following information, write a letter of at least 60 words to Tom.（根据所给信息给Tom写一封不少于60词的信。开头已给出，不计入总词数，标点符号不占格。）
假设你是李华，和英国朋友Tom是刚认识的笔友，你们通过Email经常通信联络。请向Tom介绍一下你的家庭成员及他们的工作，并介绍一下最近你们家庭出游的一次经历。
Use the following points as a reference.（以下内容仅供参考）
1. How many people are there in your family What do they do
2. Where did you go together recently
3. How was the trip
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10．假设你是Li Daming，请你根据表格中所提供的信息介绍一下你的家庭情况。
Father Mother Me
Age 42 39 12
Job a policeman a nurse a student
Favourites sport basketball swimming swimming
要求：
①语言规范，书写认真，50词左右；
②内容需包含表格中所给信息，可适当发挥；
③文中不得出现真实姓名和学校信息；
④开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Daming. I have a happy family.
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11．Write at least 50 words about the topic “Life in the year 2050” (以“2050年的生活”为题，写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
The following questions are for reference only (以下问题仅供参考)
1. What will life be like in the year 2050
2. What will happen in the year 2050
3. What should you do for the better future
Life in the year 2050
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12．随着科技的进步和社会的发展，我们的生活日新月异。请你想象一下十年后的生活情景，以“My life in ten years”为题，根据以下提示写一篇短文。
提示：1.你的理想工作是什么？
2.为什么会有这样的理想？
3.未来的社会环境什么样？
要求：1.包含提示中的内容，可适当发挥；
2.词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My life in ten years
What will my life be like in ten years Here are my ideas.
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13．假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在举办以“Our future life”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示要点，写一篇演讲稿，参加此次的演讲比赛。
要点：
1.住房：以车为房，可旅行可居住；
2.交通：驾驶飞机，不拥堵更自由；
3.食物：……
注意：
1.词数70词左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Our future life
Hello, everyone. I’m very happy that I can share my ideas about our future life.
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I think my ideas can come true. And I hope our future life will be better.
14．学校将举办英语作文比赛，请根据表格信息，以“My life in the future”为题，写一篇英语短文，分享你对未来的憧憬。
要求:
1. 书写认真规范，词数不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文应包括表格内容，不要逐字翻译，语句通顺，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。
工作 成为一名医生。将努力工作，帮助病人(patients)
活动 1.每周锻炼来保持健康.
2.空闲时，将和家人看电视……为家人做美食……周末，邀请朋友在家里举办聚会。
城市 将住在上海。因为……。如果有时间将会周游世界。
梦想 将努力学习以实现梦想。
My life in the future
Life in the future is colorful. Everyone wants to know their future, but nobody knows it. I hope my life in the future will be like that.
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15．为了激发中学生创意灵感，提高学生学习英语的热情，举办了“My dream home”的演讲比赛。请你根据下面所提供的信息，完成演讲稿。
1. 房子大，有两层，可以和家人住在一起，后面有花园；
2. 房间多，至少有8个房间；一层有厨房、卧室等；二层有浴室、书房等；
3. 很舒适，放学后在书房做作业；早上在花园读书；可以和朋友在家聚会；
4. 其他。
要求：
1. 字数不少于80个。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 所写短文必须包括以上要点，省略处适当发挥使短文通顺流畅。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
4. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you about my dream home.
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That’s all. Thank you.
16．假如你是李华，你的笔友澳大利亚学生Selina对中国的传统节日春节很感兴趣，请根据下面的提示内容选择一个节日并写一封电子邮件回信。
内容包括：
1. 节日的信息、名称、日期……；
2. 你通常如何庆祝这个节日（穿新衣、吃团圆饭、给小孩压岁钱……）；
3. 在节日期间你有什么感受。
注意：
1. 词数为70左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：the Spring Festival（春节）；celebrate（庆祝）；traditional（传统的）；January（一月）；February（二月）
Dear Selina,
Glad to receive your email. I’m happy that you are interested in the Spring Festival in China. Let me tell you something about it
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All the best,
Li Hua
17．中国拥有悠久的历史和丰富的传统文化，中国传统节日更是传统文化的重要组成部分。假如你是李华，最近，你校英文杂志社发起了以“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”为主题的征文活动，请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival!”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点：
1. 你最喜欢的传统节日是什么；
2. 讲述该节日主要有哪些庆祝方式；
3. 说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数不少于70。
My Favorite Chinese Festival!
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18．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Amanda对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，她来信询问有关情况。请你根据下面的提示和要求，给她回一封信，介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
提示：
① What’s your favorite festival
② When is your favorite festival
③ What do people do in the festival
具体要求：
1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
2. 包含所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息；
4. 词数：70词左右。
Dear Amanda,
How are the things going I’m very glad that you are interested in Chinese festivals.
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I hope all is well with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
19．假设你是Li Ping，以下是你的美国笔友Tom发给你的邮件。请阅读邮件后回复。
Dear Li Ping, It was Dragon Boat Festival a few days ago. How did you and your family celebrate it this year What did you do What did you eat Write to me soon. Yours, Tom
注意：
（1）回复须回答邮件中的所有问题，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数60个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tom,
Glad to get your email.
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Yours,
Li Ping
20．一岁一端午，一年一安康！端午节作为中国重要节日之一，也是一家人欢聚的日子。假如你是李华，今年已经和家人度过了一个愉快的端午节。你的网友Peter想知道今年端午节这天你是如何度过的。请你参考以下内容要点，用英语写封电子邮件，分享你的愉快节日。
内容要点：
（1）我和父母看望了祖父母；
（2）和祖父母一起做了很多有趣的事（①观看了龙舟比赛；②包了美味的粽子；③……）；
（3）你的感受。
写作要求：
1.将节日名称补充在首句；
2.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.词数70 左右（首句已给出，不计入总词数）；
4.不得在文章中使用题目以外的校名，不得透露班级、人名等个人信息。
参考词汇：Dragon Boat Festival（端午节）， dragon boat race（龙舟比赛）， delicious zongzi（美味的粽子）
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your last e-mail. I’m very happy to tell you something about my ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope all is well with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
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1．One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear you’re planning an animal-themed party and want to add Chinese elements. Here are my ideas.
Celebrations: Decorate the party with red lanterns and paper-cuts of zodiac animals like dragons or tigers. Red means good luck in Chinese culture.
Short films: Show videos about pandas, China’s national treasure. You can also play clips from The Monkey King, a famous Chinese story with animal characters.
Location: Host the party in a park with traditional Chinese gardens or a room decorated with paintings of animals like cranes and koi fish.
Special gift: Give guests small panda key chains. Pandas are symbols of peace, and the key chains are both cute and meaningful.
By doing these, your party will be fun and full of Chinese culture!
Hope your party will be a great success!
Best regards.
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，需围绕派对的庆祝方式、播放影片、举办地点、特殊礼物等方面融入中国元素进行写作，可适当拓展，注意语言连贯规范。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，表明高兴得知朋友计划举办派对并想融入中国元素，引出下文的具体建议；
第二步，分别从派对装饰、播放影片、举办地点、特殊礼物等方面，给出融入中国元素的具体建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达按以上建议进行操作，派对会充满中国文化且有趣，并预祝派对成功。
[亮点词汇]
①decorate... with... 用……装饰……
②national treasure 国宝
③be symbols of 是……的象征
[高分句型]
① Pandas are symbols of peace, and the key chains are both cute and meaningful. (and连接的并列句)
2．例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Grade 7. I’m so excited about the news that we’ll go to France for an exchange. I’m writing to ask the possibility of being a group leader of the team.
I like France and know about it very much. I have ever been there for 4 times before. It is an excellent country with a long history. It’s not hard for me to show my teammates around and help them learn about local culture. Besides, speaking French fluently and clearly is easy for me, too. I can translate for the team. Furthermore, I’m caring and wise. I am able to look after others well and skillful at making decisions. I will be a good manager and serve the team in a proper way.
Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①体材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：一般现在时、一般将来时、现在进行时以及现在完成时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，首先根据已给要点进行写作，其次适当补充发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：在第一段写明写信目的；
第二步：在第二段介绍自己的优势；
第三步：在第三段表达对胜选的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①it be adj. (for sb) to do sth (对某人来说) 做某事很……
②show sb around带某人参观某地
③help (sb) (to) do sth帮助 (某人) 做某事
④look after照顾
⑤thank sb for doing sth感谢某人做某事
⑥look forward to (doing) sth期待 (做) 某事
[高分句型]
①I’m so excited about the news that we’ll go to France for an exchange. (that引导的定语从句)
②I’m writing to ask the possibility of being a group leader of the team. (动词不定式表目的)
③It’s not hard for me to show my teammates around and help them learn about local culture. (it作形式主语)
④Besides, speaking French fluently and clearly is easy for me, too. (动名词短语作主语)
3．例文
Dear Mary,
Glad to receive your letter. You said you wanted to know about China in your letter. Now let me talk about it.
China is a vast country with a long history of over 5,000 years. It has many famous tourist attractions, such as the Great Wall, where you can enjoy ancient buildings. Chinese food is also delicious—you must try Peking Duck, with its crispy skin, and Sichuan hotpot, known for its hot taste! In addition, traditional festivals like the Spring Festival, with colorful dragon dances and fireworks, show our rich culture.
I hope you can visit China soon. You’ll love it!
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍中国；
第二步，具体介绍中国的旅游资源，特色美食以及传统文化；
第三步，书写结尾，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①tourist attractions旅游景点
②such as例如
[高分句型]
①It has many famous tourist attractions, such as the Great Wall, where you can enjoy ancient buildings.（定语从句）
②I hope you can visit China soon.（宾语从句）
4．例文：
Respecting the old people is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. Last Saturday, we went to the Old People’s Home and spent a meaningful weekend with the elderly there. We played games with them in the morning. They also taught us some of the games of their time. We had never played them before, so we found it very interesting. At noon, we cooked lunch together and shared lunch with them. In the afternoon we told them some interesting stories. We also sang and danced for them. Although we were tired that day, we were very happy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引出话题，说明尊老敬老是中华民族的传统美德；
第二步，具体阐述在养老院里所做的事情，并列举具体的事例；
第三步，介绍活动带来的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional virtue 传统美德
②share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
③tell sb. stories给某人讲故事
[高分句型]
①Respecting the elderly is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation.（动名词作主语）
②Although we were tired that day, we were very happy.（although引导的让步状语从句）
5．例文
Dear David,
How is everything going In your last letter, you said that you wanted to know some Chinese customs and some Chinese school rules. Now let me introduce them to you.
Smile and shake hands with people when you meet them for the first time. Look at the person while you’re talking, but don’t get too close. If it’s too close, it will make them uncomfortable. It’s polite to wave goodbye. Don’t talk about personal problems. As for the school rules, stand up when you answer the teacher’s questions in class. You can’t eat in class. Don’t be late for class. Be polite to your teachers.
Yours,
Lily
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“中国风俗以及校规校纪”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“中国风俗习惯和校规校纪”等方面进行介绍；
[亮点词汇]
①introduce介绍
②make sb uncomfortable让某人不舒服
③as for关于
[高分句型]
①In your last letter, you said that you wanted to know some Chinese customs and some Chinese school rules.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Smile and shake hands with people when you meet them for the first time.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．
Dear friends,
Everyone has a bobby and some people even want to change it into a future career. My hobby is reading novels. When I am absorbed in reading, I can feel a sense of well-being and peace in mind. So I want to change it into my future job—a writer.
I think reading is of great help to my future job. Because it enables me to lay solid foundation for my writing. Besides that, reading not only broadens my eyes but also make me become a well-rounded individual.
I hope my dream will be achieved one day.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简述自己的爱好；
第二步，讲述此爱好对未来职业的帮助；
第三步，书写结语，表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be of great help很有帮助
②lay solid foundation打下扎实基础
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①When I am absorbed in reading, I can feel a sense of well-being and peace in mind.(时间状语从句)
7．例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Wei. I’d like to be the captain of our school basketball team.
Ever since I started playing basketball, I’ve enjoyed every moment on the court. My passion led me to join the team early on, where I developed a strong team spirit. Now, I’m capable of scoring key baskets to turn the tide of the game and helping us win. My goal is to unite our team, and we can achieve success.
Choose me as the captain of our school basketball team and everyone in our team can be the best!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，并重点介绍“过去的经历”以及“现在能做的事情”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表达想要竞选校篮球队队长；
第二步，具体阐述过去打篮球的经历以及现在能为校篮球队做的事情；
最后，表达个人希望，希望当选为篮球队队长。
[亮点词汇]
①start doing sth.开始做某事
②lead sb. to do sth.带领某人做某事
③be capable of doing sth.有能力做某事
④achieve success取得成功
[高分句型]
①Ever since I started playing basketball, I’ve enjoyed every moment on the court.（ever since引导时间状语从句）
②My passion led me to join the team early on, where I developed a strong team spirit.（where引导非限制性定语从句）
8．例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m John. I want to get a job as a teacher here. I am a student from No. 1 Middle School, and I am an outgoing boy. I know that you want a teacher, and I think that I can do that work well. Because I can speak English very well. And I can help with sports for English-speaking students. I am tall and very healthy, and I like to play sports. I am good at playing sports, such as basketball and football. I also like swimming. Last year, I worked as a teacher in the Children’s Palace. I taught the children English and played games with them. I was good with those children. I like them very much, and they love me, too.
I really hope to join you. If you think I’m suitable for the job, please tell me soon.
Yours,
John
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为应聘信；
②时态：主要是一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍自己；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“自我形象、能力、工作经验”等方面介绍自己；
第三步，书写结语。再次表示想要加入的意愿。
[亮点词汇]
①outgoing外向的
②help with在……方面帮助
③healthy健康的
④be good at擅长
⑤be good with善于和……相处，善于应付……的
[高分句型]
①I know that you want a teacher, and I think that I can do that work well.（that引导的宾语从句）
②If you think I’m suitable for the job, please tell me soon.（if引导的条件状语从句，省略that的宾语从句）
9．例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to tell something about my family. There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my father, my mother and me. Both my grandfather and grandmother are teachers. They teach English in a junior high school. My father is a worker and my mother is a doctor in a hospital. They love their jobs very much. We usually have a trip at weekends. Last Sunday, we climbed the Great Wall in Beijing. I took a lot of photos with my camera. I felt very tired but I was happy. I look forward to visiting it again.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏提示，注意时态运用，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家庭成员和他们的工作；
第二步，介绍家庭最近出游的经历及感受；
第三步，表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of 很多
②look forward to doing sth 期待做某事
[高分句型]
①Both my grandfather and grandmother are teachers.（both…and…连接主语）
10．例文
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Damig. I have a happy family. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is forty-two years old. He is a policeman. His favourite sport is basketball. My mother is thirty-nine years old. She is a teacher. Her favourites sport is swimming. I am a student. I’m twelve years old. I like swimming too. I love my family.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己和家人的基本信息；
第二步，具体介绍自己和家人年龄、工作和爱好；
第三步，书写结尾，表达自己对家人的爱。
[亮点词汇]
①favourite sport最喜欢的运动
[高分句型]
①There are three people in my family.（there be句型）
②I like swimming too.（动名词作宾语）
11．
例文2
Life in the year 2050
In the year of 2050 the high school students will nearly have no homework. They only need learn how to use computer and computer programs. If they were ill, they wouldn’t need to go to hospital to see the doctor. Why they don’t go to the hospital The computer can act as a doctor. In that time lots of people have been live in moon and Mark star, so we will visit to the moon and the Mark star. Now in common life we have a busy traffic. In the 2050 the earth will calm down instead of noisiness.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据所给话题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题——2050年的生活；
第二步，叙述2050年的生活的状况。
[亮点词汇]
①act as充当
②calm down平静
[高分句型]
If they were ill, they wouldn’t need to go to hospital to see the doctor.(if引导条件状语从句)
12．例文
My life in ten years
What will my life be like in ten years Here are my ideas.
In ten years, I think I will work as a reporter. Because I want to help the people in need. And I will live in a big and bright house with a beautiful garden. I will keep a dog in the garden, because I like cute animals.
There will be more trees and flowers in the city, and the air will be clean and fresh. People can fly into space and spend their holidays on the moon. Some people will live under the sea. With the help of robots, we will be able to travel under the sea easily. And they will help us do most of the boring or dangerous work.
There will be more e-schools, so children can study at home through the Internet or on TV.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的理想工作和原因；
第二步，介绍未来社会的生态环境和生活模式；
第三步，介绍未来的学校模式。
[亮点词汇]
① in need 在困境中
② clean and fresh 干净清新
③ With the help of 在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
① I will keep a dog in the garden, because I like cute animals.（because引导原因状语从句）
② There will be more trees and flowers in the city, and the air will be clean and fresh.（There be句型）
13．例文
Our future life
Hello, everyone. I’m very happy that I can share my ideas about our future life.
We will use cars as houses, which can be used for travel and residence. We will pilot the plane, without congestion and with greater freedom. We will eat green food. Perhaps some people choose to go on vacation to the moon or live underwater, which will make their lives interesting and colorful. In addition, in the future, perhaps every family will rely on robots to do household chores, and we will have more free time to develop our hobbies. More importantly, all materials can be recycled without wasting anything. Our environment will be much better than now.
I think my ideas can come true. And I hope our future life will be better.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：一般将来时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以住房、交通、食物等方面阐述未来的生活；
第二步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①go on vacation去度假
②rely on依靠
[高分句型]
Perhaps some people choose to go on vacation to the moon or live underwater, which will make their lives interesting and colorful.（定语从句）
14．例文：
My life in the future
Life in the future is colorful. Everyone wants to know their future, but nobody knows it. I hope my life in the future will be like that. I think I will be a doctor in the future. I will work hard and help the patients. I will do some exercise to keep healthy every week. In my free time, I will watch TV with my family and I will cook delicious food for my family. At weekdends, I will invite frinds to have parties at my home.
I will live in Shanghai. There will be less pollution in the future. So it will be more famous and more beautiful. If I have much free time, I will travel around the world. I will study hard to make it come true.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己未来的工作和活动内容；
第二步，阐述未来居住的城市以及如何实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①work hard努力工作
②in my free time在空闲时间
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①If I have much free time, I will travel around the world. （if引导条件状语从句）
15．例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you about my dream home. It is a large house in the country. It has two floors. My family can live together. There is a garden behind the house.
There are at least 8 rooms. On the first floor there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom. On the second floor there are two bedrooms, a bathroom and a study.
My dream home is very comfortable. After school I do my homework in the study. In the morning I read books in the garden and I can also grow some flowers in it. I can ask my friends to have parties, watch films or play games together in the house. It is great fun! I love my home.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍房子大，有两层，可以和家人住在一起，后面有花园；
第二步，介绍房间多，至少有8个房间；一层有厨房、卧室等；二层有浴室、书房等；
第三步，介绍很舒适，放学后在书房做作业；早上在花园读书；可以和朋友在家聚会；
第四步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想做某事。
②do one’s homework做家庭作业
③at least至少
④play games玩游戏
[高分句型]
①On the first floor there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom.（there be结构）
②I can ask my friends to have parties, watch films or play games together in the house.（ask sb. to do sth.让某人做某事）
16．例文
Dear Selina,
Glad to receive your email. I’m happy that you are interested in the Spring Festival in China. Let me tell you something about it.
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival. It usually comes in January or February. During the festival, we wear new clothes and have a big family dinner. Children get lucky money in red envelopes. We also watch fireworks and the Spring Festival Gala.
I always feel excited because the festival brings warmth and happiness to families. I really enjoy the lively atmosphere!
All the best,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，引出下文对春节的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“节日基本信息、庆祝方式以及节日期间自己的感受”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②lucky money压岁钱
③the Spring Festival Gala春节联欢晚会
[高分句型]
①I’m happy that you are interested in the Spring Festival in China.（that引导的宾语从句）
②I always feel excited because the festival brings warmth and happiness to families.（because引导的原因状语从句）
17．例文：
My Favorite Chinese Festival!
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. I like the Lantern Festival best. It’s on the 15th day of the first lunar month.
During the festival, we usually eat sweet dumplings, watch beautiful lanterns and enjoy the lion or dragon dances. The most interesting activity is guessing lantern riddles. We can have fun and learn something from it.
The festival brings us joy and makes us know more about our culture, so it’s my favorite festival.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何信息提示，并适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的传统节日；
第二步，介绍该节日主要有哪些庆祝方式；
第三步，说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① as we all know 众所周知
② traditional festivals 传统节日
③ guess lantern riddles 猜灯谜
④ have fun 玩得开心
⑤ learn something from 从……中学到某些东西
⑥ bring sb. sth. 给某人带来某物
[高分句型]
① As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. (there be句式)
② The most interesting activity is guessing lantern riddles. (动名词作表语)
③ The festival brings us joy and makes us know more about our culture, so it’s my favorite festival. (so连接的并列句)
18．例文
Dear Amanda,
How are the things going I’m very glad that you are interested in Chinese festivals. Now let me tell one of the traditional festivals to you—the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It is on August 15th in the Chinese lunar calendar. For Chinese people, all family members get together for a big dinner. At night, people enjoy traditional festival food such as mooncakes and enjoy the moon. Older people often tell stories about the festival, including the famous legend of Chang’e and Houyi.
In a word, both children and adults all like this festival because it is always great fun. I hope you can visit China and celebrate a happy Mid-Autumn Day with me next year!
I hope all is well with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中国传统节日的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达收到对方来信的心情和想要介绍中国传统节日的意愿；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“节日名称、时间、习俗”等几个方面重点介绍中国传统节日；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的欢迎和祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①let sb. do sth.让某人做某事
②lunar calendar农历，阴历
③in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.（one of+the+最高级+名词复数“最……的……之一”）
②I hope you can visit China and celebrate a happy Mid-Autumn Day with me next year!（省略that的宾语从句）
19．例文
Dear Tom,
Glad to get your email. I had a relaxing and happy Dragon Boat Festival.
We had three days off and I decided to stay at home to have a good rest. I didn’t go out to watch the boat race. My grandparents made zongzi and sent them to us. Dad cooked them. They were more delicious than the ones in supermarkets. My mum made special small bags for dad and me during the festival. I love the smell and wear it every day. It’s really relaxing to take our time to have good meals and talk at home. Look at the pictures I sent you. You will understand how happy I was during the festival.
Yours,
Li Ping
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：邮件开头以及要点已经给出，按照Tom的邮件内容进行回复，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接邮件开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据Tom的邮件内提出的问题进行回答，介绍你和家人今年如何度过端午节，包括参加的活动和所吃的食物等，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发端午节带来的感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②have a good rest好好休息
[高分句型]
①We had three days off and I decided to stay at home to have a good rest.（and连接两个并列分句）
②It’s really relaxing to take our time to have good meals and talk at home.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
③Look at the pictures I sent you.（省略引导词的定语从句）
④You will understand how happy I was during the festival. （how引导的宾语从句）
20．例文
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your last e-mail. I’m very happy to tell you something about my Dragon Boast Festival.
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on June 5th this year. On that day, I had a good time with my parents. In the morning, my parents and I drove to visit my grandparents who lived in the countryside. We did a lot of interesting things there. First, we watched the dragon boat races by the river. It was really fun and exciting. Then, we learnt to make all kinds of delicious zongzi and shared it together. In the afternoon, we fed the chickens, went fishing and played chess.
We all had a good time there! What a colorful and meaningful holiday!
I hope all is well with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般过去在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你如何度过端午节的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“端午节的日期、你参加的活动、你的感受等”几个方面重点介绍你如何度过端午节的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“多么丰富多彩的和有意义的节日啊”的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得高兴；
②learn to do sth学习做某事；
③all kinds of各种各样的；
④play chess下象棋。
[高分句型]
①In the morning, my parents and I drove to visit my grandparents who lived in the countryside. (who引导的定语从句)
②What a colorful and meaningful holiday! (感叹句)
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（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的朋友Linda对中国的动物文化很感兴趣，计划举办一场动物主题派对，她向你询问如何融入中国元素。请你写一封信回复Linda，谈谈如何为她的动物主题派对 (Animal-themed Party) 加入中国特色元素。请根据以下写作提示完成写作。
写作提示：
1. What can you do to add Chinese celebrations to the party
2. Show Chinese animal-related short films.
3. Where can you have the party
4. What special gift can you give Linda and why
写作要求：
1. 内容包含所给提示信息，可适当拓展；
2. 语句连贯，书写规范，词数80左右。作文的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear you’re planning an animal-themed party and want to add Chinese elements.Here are my ideas.
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Hope your party will be a great success!
Best regards,
Li Hua
2．你的学校即将再次和法国的圣马丁中学开启交流之旅，现需要选拔一名优秀学生作为赴法交流访问团的组长。假如你是李华，打算参加选拔，请给负责人Mr. Zhang写一封自荐信。
内容必须包括以下要点：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势 (了解法国、精通语言、性格、能力……)；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
(1) 词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Grade 7.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你是李辉，你的笔友Mary来信，想了解关于中国的一些情况。请根据以下要点和要求，给她回一封电子邮件，介绍中国。
要点：
1. 中国幅员辽阔，历史悠久；
2. 中国有许多旅游资源，特色美食以及传统文化等（至少列举两个方面）；
3. 表达期待，欢迎她来中国游玩。
要求：80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
Glad to receive your letter. You said you wanted to know about China in your letter. Now let me talk about it.
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Yours,
Li Hui
4．俗话说，百善孝为先。尊敬老人是中华民族的传统美德。作为孩子，我们应该照顾老人，为老人多做些事情。假设上周末，你们班组织了一次去敬老院 （the Old People’s Home） 关爱老人的活动，请根据以下内容提示写一篇关爱老人的短文。
内容提示：activities (活动), in the morning, play games, at noon, cook lunch, in the afternoon, tell stories, feeling (感受)
要求：
1. 60—80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的真实名称。
3. 语句通顺，字迹工整。
Respecting the old people is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation
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5．假如你是Lily，你有一个英国笔友David，他写邮件告诉你想了解中国的一些风俗礼节和中国学校的一些校规。请你根据提示给他回一封电子邮件，解答他的疑问。（80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯）
提示：
1. 第一次见到别人时要微笑并握手。
2. 说话的时候注视对方，但不要离得太近，如果太近，会令人不舒服。
3. 挥手道别是礼貌的。
4. 不要谈论太私人的问题。
5. 课堂上回答老师的问题要起立，不能在课堂上吃东西。
6.上课不迟到。
7.对待老师要有礼貌。
参考词汇：风俗custom 校规school rules
Dear David,
How is everything going In your last letter, you said that you wanted to
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Yours,
Lily
6．每个人都有自己的爱好， 一些人甚至希望将自己的爱好变成未来的职业。假定你是学生李辉，即将参加学校组织的演讲比赛，请根据下列提示谈谈如何把爱好变成职业。
要点如下：(1)介绍你的爱好；
(2)此爱好对未来职业的帮助；
(3)表达希望。
注意：(1)词数为80-100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
Dear friends,
Everyone has a bobby and some people even want to change it into a future career. My hobby is
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7．新学期开始了，红星学校七年级开展了校篮球队的队长竞选活动。假如你是参加竞选的王伟同学，请用表格中的提示词表述你过去打篮球的经历，以及现在能为校篮球队做的事情。
要求：
(1)词数：40~60个。
(2)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Name Wang Wei
过去的经历 enjoy, start, join
现在能做的事情 score, win
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Wei. I’d like to be the captain (队长) of our school basketball team.
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Choose me as the captain of our school basketball team and everyone in our team can be the best!
8．暑假就要到了，John 想应聘一份做老师的社会实践工作，请你根据提示帮他设计一份60—80词的应聘信。要点如下：
1. 想得到这份工作，自我形象介绍；
2. 你的能力：会说英语，擅长运动，如篮球，足球，游泳等；
3. 去年暑假你曾经在少年宫（the Children’s Palace）担任过老师，带孩子们练过英语，和孩子们相处得很好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m John. I want to get a job as a teacher here.
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Yours,
John
9．According to the following information, write a letter of at least 60 words to Tom.（根据所给信息给Tom写一封不少于60词的信。开头已给出，不计入总词数，标点符号不占格。）
假设你是李华，和英国朋友Tom是刚认识的笔友，你们通过Email经常通信联络。请向Tom介绍一下你的家庭成员及他们的工作，并介绍一下最近你们家庭出游的一次经历。
Use the following points as a reference.（以下内容仅供参考）
1. How many people are there in your family What do they do
2. Where did you go together recently
3. How was the trip
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10．假设你是Li Daming，请你根据表格中所提供的信息介绍一下你的家庭情况。
Father Mother Me
Age 42 39 12
Job a policeman a nurse a student
Favourites sport basketball swimming swimming
要求：
①语言规范，书写认真，50词左右；
②内容需包含表格中所给信息，可适当发挥；
③文中不得出现真实姓名和学校信息；
④开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Daming. I have a happy family.
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11．Write at least 50 words about the topic “Life in the year 2050” (以“2050年的生活”为题，写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
The following questions are for reference only (以下问题仅供参考)
1. What will life be like in the year 2050
2. What will happen in the year 2050
3. What should you do for the better future
Life in the year 2050
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12．随着科技的进步和社会的发展，我们的生活日新月异。请你想象一下十年后的生活情景，以“My life in ten years”为题，根据以下提示写一篇短文。
提示：1.你的理想工作是什么？
2.为什么会有这样的理想？
3.未来的社会环境什么样？
要求：1.包含提示中的内容，可适当发挥；
2.词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My life in ten years
What will my life be like in ten years Here are my ideas.
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13．假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在举办以“Our future life”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示要点，写一篇演讲稿，参加此次的演讲比赛。
要点：
1.住房：以车为房，可旅行可居住；
2.交通：驾驶飞机，不拥堵更自由；
3.食物：……
注意：
1.词数70词左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Our future life
Hello, everyone. I’m very happy that I can share my ideas about our future life.
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I think my ideas can come true. And I hope our future life will be better.
14．学校将举办英语作文比赛，请根据表格信息，以“My life in the future”为题，写一篇英语短文，分享你对未来的憧憬。
要求:
1. 书写认真规范，词数不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文应包括表格内容，不要逐字翻译，语句通顺，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。
工作 成为一名医生。将努力工作，帮助病人(patients)
活动 1.每周锻炼来保持健康.
2.空闲时，将和家人看电视……为家人做美食……周末，邀请朋友在家里举办聚会。
城市 将住在上海。因为……。如果有时间将会周游世界。
梦想 将努力学习以实现梦想。
My life in the future
Life in the future is colorful. Everyone wants to know their future, but nobody knows it. I hope my life in the future will be like that.
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15．为了激发中学生创意灵感，提高学生学习英语的热情，举办了“My dream home”的演讲比赛。请你根据下面所提供的信息，完成演讲稿。
1. 房子大，有两层，可以和家人住在一起，后面有花园；
2. 房间多，至少有8个房间；一层有厨房、卧室等；二层有浴室、书房等；
3. 很舒适，放学后在书房做作业；早上在花园读书；可以和朋友在家聚会；
4. 其他。
要求：
1. 字数不少于80个。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 所写短文必须包括以上要点，省略处适当发挥使短文通顺流畅。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
4. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you about my dream home.
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That’s all. Thank you.
16．假如你是李华，你的笔友澳大利亚学生Selina对中国的传统节日春节很感兴趣，请根据下面的提示内容选择一个节日并写一封电子邮件回信。
内容包括：
1. 节日的信息、名称、日期……；
2. 你通常如何庆祝这个节日（穿新衣、吃团圆饭、给小孩压岁钱……）；
3. 在节日期间你有什么感受。
注意：
1. 词数为70左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：the Spring Festival（春节）；celebrate（庆祝）；traditional（传统的）；January（一月）；February（二月）
Dear Selina,
Glad to receive your email. I’m happy that you are interested in the Spring Festival in China. Let me tell you something about it
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All the best,
Li Hua
17．中国拥有悠久的历史和丰富的传统文化，中国传统节日更是传统文化的重要组成部分。假如你是李华，最近，你校英文杂志社发起了以“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”为主题的征文活动，请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival!”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点：
1. 你最喜欢的传统节日是什么；
2. 讲述该节日主要有哪些庆祝方式；
3. 说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数不少于70。
My Favorite Chinese Festival!
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18．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Amanda对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，她来信询问有关情况。请你根据下面的提示和要求，给她回一封信，介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
提示：
① What’s your favorite festival
② When is your favorite festival
③ What do people do in the festival
具体要求：
1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
2. 包含所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息；
4. 词数：70词左右。
Dear Amanda,
How are the things going I’m very glad that you are interested in Chinese festivals.
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I hope all is well with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
19．假设你是Li Ping，以下是你的美国笔友Tom发给你的邮件。请阅读邮件后回复。
Dear Li Ping, It was Dragon Boat Festival a few days ago. How did you and your family celebrate it this year What did you do What did you eat Write to me soon. Yours, Tom
注意：
（1）回复须回答邮件中的所有问题，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数60个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tom,
Glad to get your email.
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Yours,
Li Ping
20．一岁一端午，一年一安康！端午节作为中国重要节日之一，也是一家人欢聚的日子。假如你是李华，今年已经和家人度过了一个愉快的端午节。你的网友Peter想知道今年端午节这天你是如何度过的。请你参考以下内容要点，用英语写封电子邮件，分享你的愉快节日。
内容要点：
（1）我和父母看望了祖父母；
（2）和祖父母一起做了很多有趣的事（①观看了龙舟比赛；②包了美味的粽子；③……）；
（3）你的感受。
写作要求：
1.将节日名称补充在首句；
2.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.词数70 左右（首句已给出，不计入总词数）；
4.不得在文章中使用题目以外的校名，不得透露班级、人名等个人信息。
参考词汇：Dragon Boat Festival（端午节）， dragon boat race（龙舟比赛）， delicious zongzi（美味的粽子）
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your last e-mail. I’m very happy to tell you something about my ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope all is well with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
参考答案及试题解析
1．One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear you’re planning an animal-themed party and want to add Chinese elements. Here are my ideas.
Celebrations: Decorate the party with red lanterns and paper-cuts of zodiac animals like dragons or tigers. Red means good luck in Chinese culture.
Short films: Show videos about pandas, China’s national treasure. You can also play clips from The Monkey King, a famous Chinese story with animal characters.
Location: Host the party in a park with traditional Chinese gardens or a room decorated with paintings of animals like cranes and koi fish.
Special gift: Give guests small panda key chains. Pandas are symbols of peace, and the key chains are both cute and meaningful.
By doing these, your party will be fun and full of Chinese culture!
Hope your party will be a great success!
Best regards.
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，需围绕派对的庆祝方式、播放影片、举办地点、特殊礼物等方面融入中国元素进行写作，可适当拓展，注意语言连贯规范。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，表明高兴得知朋友计划举办派对并想融入中国元素，引出下文的具体建议；
第二步，分别从派对装饰、播放影片、举办地点、特殊礼物等方面，给出融入中国元素的具体建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达按以上建议进行操作，派对会充满中国文化且有趣，并预祝派对成功。
[亮点词汇]
①decorate... with... 用……装饰……
②national treasure 国宝
③be symbols of 是……的象征
[高分句型]
① Pandas are symbols of peace, and the key chains are both cute and meaningful. (and连接的并列句)
2．例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Grade 7. I’m so excited about the news that we’ll go to France for an exchange. I’m writing to ask the possibility of being a group leader of the team.
I like France and know about it very much. I have ever been there for 4 times before. It is an excellent country with a long history. It’s not hard for me to show my teammates around and help them learn about local culture. Besides, speaking French fluently and clearly is easy for me, too. I can translate for the team. Furthermore, I’m caring and wise. I am able to look after others well and skillful at making decisions. I will be a good manager and serve the team in a proper way.
Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①体材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：一般现在时、一般将来时、现在进行时以及现在完成时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，首先根据已给要点进行写作，其次适当补充发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：在第一段写明写信目的；
第二步：在第二段介绍自己的优势；
第三步：在第三段表达对胜选的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①it be adj. (for sb) to do sth (对某人来说) 做某事很……
②show sb around带某人参观某地
③help (sb) (to) do sth帮助 (某人) 做某事
④look after照顾
⑤thank sb for doing sth感谢某人做某事
⑥look forward to (doing) sth期待 (做) 某事
[高分句型]
①I’m so excited about the news that we’ll go to France for an exchange. (that引导的定语从句)
②I’m writing to ask the possibility of being a group leader of the team. (动词不定式表目的)
③It’s not hard for me to show my teammates around and help them learn about local culture. (it作形式主语)
④Besides, speaking French fluently and clearly is easy for me, too. (动名词短语作主语)
3．例文
Dear Mary,
Glad to receive your letter. You said you wanted to know about China in your letter. Now let me talk about it.
China is a vast country with a long history of over 5,000 years. It has many famous tourist attractions, such as the Great Wall, where you can enjoy ancient buildings. Chinese food is also delicious—you must try Peking Duck, with its crispy skin, and Sichuan hotpot, known for its hot taste! In addition, traditional festivals like the Spring Festival, with colorful dragon dances and fireworks, show our rich culture.
I hope you can visit China soon. You’ll love it!
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍中国；
第二步，具体介绍中国的旅游资源，特色美食以及传统文化；
第三步，书写结尾，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①tourist attractions旅游景点
②such as例如
[高分句型]
①It has many famous tourist attractions, such as the Great Wall, where you can enjoy ancient buildings.（定语从句）
②I hope you can visit China soon.（宾语从句）
4．例文：
Respecting the old people is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. Last Saturday, we went to the Old People’s Home and spent a meaningful weekend with the elderly there. We played games with them in the morning. They also taught us some of the games of their time. We had never played them before, so we found it very interesting. At noon, we cooked lunch together and shared lunch with them. In the afternoon we told them some interesting stories. We also sang and danced for them. Although we were tired that day, we were very happy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引出话题，说明尊老敬老是中华民族的传统美德；
第二步，具体阐述在养老院里所做的事情，并列举具体的事例；
第三步，介绍活动带来的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional virtue 传统美德
②share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
③tell sb. stories给某人讲故事
[高分句型]
①Respecting the elderly is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation.（动名词作主语）
②Although we were tired that day, we were very happy.（although引导的让步状语从句）
5．例文
Dear David,
How is everything going In your last letter, you said that you wanted to know some Chinese customs and some Chinese school rules. Now let me introduce them to you.
Smile and shake hands with people when you meet them for the first time. Look at the person while you’re talking, but don’t get too close. If it’s too close, it will make them uncomfortable. It’s polite to wave goodbye. Don’t talk about personal problems. As for the school rules, stand up when you answer the teacher’s questions in class. You can’t eat in class. Don’t be late for class. Be polite to your teachers.
Yours,
Lily
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“中国风俗以及校规校纪”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“中国风俗习惯和校规校纪”等方面进行介绍；
[亮点词汇]
①introduce介绍
②make sb uncomfortable让某人不舒服
③as for关于
[高分句型]
①In your last letter, you said that you wanted to know some Chinese customs and some Chinese school rules.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Smile and shake hands with people when you meet them for the first time.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．
Dear friends,
Everyone has a bobby and some people even want to change it into a future career. My hobby is reading novels. When I am absorbed in reading, I can feel a sense of well-being and peace in mind. So I want to change it into my future job—a writer.
I think reading is of great help to my future job. Because it enables me to lay solid foundation for my writing. Besides that, reading not only broadens my eyes but also make me become a well-rounded individual.
I hope my dream will be achieved one day.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简述自己的爱好；
第二步，讲述此爱好对未来职业的帮助；
第三步，书写结语，表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be of great help很有帮助
②lay solid foundation打下扎实基础
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①When I am absorbed in reading, I can feel a sense of well-being and peace in mind.(时间状语从句)
7．例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Wei. I’d like to be the captain of our school basketball team.
Ever since I started playing basketball, I’ve enjoyed every moment on the court. My passion led me to join the team early on, where I developed a strong team spirit. Now, I’m capable of scoring key baskets to turn the tide of the game and helping us win. My goal is to unite our team, and we can achieve success.
Choose me as the captain of our school basketball team and everyone in our team can be the best!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，并重点介绍“过去的经历”以及“现在能做的事情”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表达想要竞选校篮球队队长；
第二步，具体阐述过去打篮球的经历以及现在能为校篮球队做的事情；
最后，表达个人希望，希望当选为篮球队队长。
[亮点词汇]
①start doing sth.开始做某事
②lead sb. to do sth.带领某人做某事
③be capable of doing sth.有能力做某事
④achieve success取得成功
[高分句型]
①Ever since I started playing basketball, I’ve enjoyed every moment on the court.（ever since引导时间状语从句）
②My passion led me to join the team early on, where I developed a strong team spirit.（where引导非限制性定语从句）
8．例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m John. I want to get a job as a teacher here. I am a student from No. 1 Middle School, and I am an outgoing boy. I know that you want a teacher, and I think that I can do that work well. Because I can speak English very well. And I can help with sports for English-speaking students. I am tall and very healthy, and I like to play sports. I am good at playing sports, such as basketball and football. I also like swimming. Last year, I worked as a teacher in the Children’s Palace. I taught the children English and played games with them. I was good with those children. I like them very much, and they love me, too.
I really hope to join you. If you think I’m suitable for the job, please tell me soon.
Yours,
John
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为应聘信；
②时态：主要是一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍自己；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“自我形象、能力、工作经验”等方面介绍自己；
第三步，书写结语。再次表示想要加入的意愿。
[亮点词汇]
①outgoing外向的
②help with在……方面帮助
③healthy健康的
④be good at擅长
⑤be good with善于和……相处，善于应付……的
[高分句型]
①I know that you want a teacher, and I think that I can do that work well.（that引导的宾语从句）
②If you think I’m suitable for the job, please tell me soon.（if引导的条件状语从句，省略that的宾语从句）
9．例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to tell something about my family. There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my father, my mother and me. Both my grandfather and grandmother are teachers. They teach English in a junior high school. My father is a worker and my mother is a doctor in a hospital. They love their jobs very much. We usually have a trip at weekends. Last Sunday, we climbed the Great Wall in Beijing. I took a lot of photos with my camera. I felt very tired but I was happy. I look forward to visiting it again.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏提示，注意时态运用，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家庭成员和他们的工作；
第二步，介绍家庭最近出游的经历及感受；
第三步，表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of 很多
②look forward to doing sth 期待做某事
[高分句型]
①Both my grandfather and grandmother are teachers.（both…and…连接主语）
10．例文
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Damig. I have a happy family. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is forty-two years old. He is a policeman. His favourite sport is basketball. My mother is thirty-nine years old. She is a teacher. Her favourites sport is swimming. I am a student. I’m twelve years old. I like swimming too. I love my family.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己和家人的基本信息；
第二步，具体介绍自己和家人年龄、工作和爱好；
第三步，书写结尾，表达自己对家人的爱。
[亮点词汇]
①favourite sport最喜欢的运动
[高分句型]
①There are three people in my family.（there be句型）
②I like swimming too.（动名词作宾语）
11．
例文2
Life in the year 2050
In the year of 2050 the high school students will nearly have no homework. They only need learn how to use computer and computer programs. If they were ill, they wouldn’t need to go to hospital to see the doctor. Why they don’t go to the hospital The computer can act as a doctor. In that time lots of people have been live in moon and Mark star, so we will visit to the moon and the Mark star. Now in common life we have a busy traffic. In the 2050 the earth will calm down instead of noisiness.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据所给话题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题——2050年的生活；
第二步，叙述2050年的生活的状况。
[亮点词汇]
①act as充当
②calm down平静
[高分句型]
If they were ill, they wouldn’t need to go to hospital to see the doctor.(if引导条件状语从句)
12．例文
My life in ten years
What will my life be like in ten years Here are my ideas.
In ten years, I think I will work as a reporter. Because I want to help the people in need. And I will live in a big and bright house with a beautiful garden. I will keep a dog in the garden, because I like cute animals.
There will be more trees and flowers in the city, and the air will be clean and fresh. People can fly into space and spend their holidays on the moon. Some people will live under the sea. With the help of robots, we will be able to travel under the sea easily. And they will help us do most of the boring or dangerous work.
There will be more e-schools, so children can study at home through the Internet or on TV.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的理想工作和原因；
第二步，介绍未来社会的生态环境和生活模式；
第三步，介绍未来的学校模式。
[亮点词汇]
① in need 在困境中
② clean and fresh 干净清新
③ With the help of 在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
① I will keep a dog in the garden, because I like cute animals.（because引导原因状语从句）
② There will be more trees and flowers in the city, and the air will be clean and fresh.（There be句型）
13．例文
Our future life
Hello, everyone. I’m very happy that I can share my ideas about our future life.
We will use cars as houses, which can be used for travel and residence. We will pilot the plane, without congestion and with greater freedom. We will eat green food. Perhaps some people choose to go on vacation to the moon or live underwater, which will make their lives interesting and colorful. In addition, in the future, perhaps every family will rely on robots to do household chores, and we will have more free time to develop our hobbies. More importantly, all materials can be recycled without wasting anything. Our environment will be much better than now.
I think my ideas can come true. And I hope our future life will be better.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：一般将来时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以住房、交通、食物等方面阐述未来的生活；
第二步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①go on vacation去度假
②rely on依靠
[高分句型]
Perhaps some people choose to go on vacation to the moon or live underwater, which will make their lives interesting and colorful.（定语从句）
14．例文：
My life in the future
Life in the future is colorful. Everyone wants to know their future, but nobody knows it. I hope my life in the future will be like that. I think I will be a doctor in the future. I will work hard and help the patients. I will do some exercise to keep healthy every week. In my free time, I will watch TV with my family and I will cook delicious food for my family. At weekdends, I will invite frinds to have parties at my home.
I will live in Shanghai. There will be less pollution in the future. So it will be more famous and more beautiful. If I have much free time, I will travel around the world. I will study hard to make it come true.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己未来的工作和活动内容；
第二步，阐述未来居住的城市以及如何实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①work hard努力工作
②in my free time在空闲时间
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①If I have much free time, I will travel around the world. （if引导条件状语从句）
15．例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you about my dream home. It is a large house in the country. It has two floors. My family can live together. There is a garden behind the house.
There are at least 8 rooms. On the first floor there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom. On the second floor there are two bedrooms, a bathroom and a study.
My dream home is very comfortable. After school I do my homework in the study. In the morning I read books in the garden and I can also grow some flowers in it. I can ask my friends to have parties, watch films or play games together in the house. It is great fun! I love my home.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍房子大，有两层，可以和家人住在一起，后面有花园；
第二步，介绍房间多，至少有8个房间；一层有厨房、卧室等；二层有浴室、书房等；
第三步，介绍很舒适，放学后在书房做作业；早上在花园读书；可以和朋友在家聚会；
第四步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想做某事。
②do one’s homework做家庭作业
③at least至少
④play games玩游戏
[高分句型]
①On the first floor there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom.（there be结构）
②I can ask my friends to have parties, watch films or play games together in the house.（ask sb. to do sth.让某人做某事）
16．例文
Dear Selina,
Glad to receive your email. I’m happy that you are interested in the Spring Festival in China. Let me tell you something about it.
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival. It usually comes in January or February. During the festival, we wear new clothes and have a big family dinner. Children get lucky money in red envelopes. We also watch fireworks and the Spring Festival Gala.
I always feel excited because the festival brings warmth and happiness to families. I really enjoy the lively atmosphere!
All the best,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，引出下文对春节的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“节日基本信息、庆祝方式以及节日期间自己的感受”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②lucky money压岁钱
③the Spring Festival Gala春节联欢晚会
[高分句型]
①I’m happy that you are interested in the Spring Festival in China.（that引导的宾语从句）
②I always feel excited because the festival brings warmth and happiness to families.（because引导的原因状语从句）
17．例文：
My Favorite Chinese Festival!
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. I like the Lantern Festival best. It’s on the 15th day of the first lunar month.
During the festival, we usually eat sweet dumplings, watch beautiful lanterns and enjoy the lion or dragon dances. The most interesting activity is guessing lantern riddles. We can have fun and learn something from it.
The festival brings us joy and makes us know more about our culture, so it’s my favorite festival.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何信息提示，并适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的传统节日；
第二步，介绍该节日主要有哪些庆祝方式；
第三步，说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① as we all know 众所周知
② traditional festivals 传统节日
③ guess lantern riddles 猜灯谜
④ have fun 玩得开心
⑤ learn something from 从……中学到某些东西
⑥ bring sb. sth. 给某人带来某物
[高分句型]
① As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. (there be句式)
② The most interesting activity is guessing lantern riddles. (动名词作表语)
③ The festival brings us joy and makes us know more about our culture, so it’s my favorite festival. (so连接的并列句)
18．例文
Dear Amanda,
How are the things going I’m very glad that you are interested in Chinese festivals. Now let me tell one of the traditional festivals to you—the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It is on August 15th in the Chinese lunar calendar. For Chinese people, all family members get together for a big dinner. At night, people enjoy traditional festival food such as mooncakes and enjoy the moon. Older people often tell stories about the festival, including the famous legend of Chang’e and Houyi.
In a word, both children and adults all like this festival because it is always great fun. I hope you can visit China and celebrate a happy Mid-Autumn Day with me next year!
I hope all is well with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中国传统节日的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达收到对方来信的心情和想要介绍中国传统节日的意愿；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“节日名称、时间、习俗”等几个方面重点介绍中国传统节日；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的欢迎和祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①let sb. do sth.让某人做某事
②lunar calendar农历，阴历
③in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.（one of+the+最高级+名词复数“最……的……之一”）
②I hope you can visit China and celebrate a happy Mid-Autumn Day with me next year!（省略that的宾语从句）
19．例文
Dear Tom,
Glad to get your email. I had a relaxing and happy Dragon Boat Festival.
We had three days off and I decided to stay at home to have a good rest. I didn’t go out to watch the boat race. My grandparents made zongzi and sent them to us. Dad cooked them. They were more delicious than the ones in supermarkets. My mum made special small bags for dad and me during the festival. I love the smell and wear it every day. It’s really relaxing to take our time to have good meals and talk at home. Look at the pictures I sent you. You will understand how happy I was during the festival.
Yours,
Li Ping
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：邮件开头以及要点已经给出，按照Tom的邮件内容进行回复，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接邮件开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据Tom的邮件内提出的问题进行回答，介绍你和家人今年如何度过端午节，包括参加的活动和所吃的食物等，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发端午节带来的感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②have a good rest好好休息
[高分句型]
①We had three days off and I decided to stay at home to have a good rest.（and连接两个并列分句）
②It’s really relaxing to take our time to have good meals and talk at home.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
③Look at the pictures I sent you.（省略引导词的定语从句）
④You will understand how happy I was during the festival. （how引导的宾语从句）
20．例文
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your last e-mail. I’m very happy to tell you something about my Dragon Boast Festival.
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on June 5th this year. On that day, I had a good time with my parents. In the morning, my parents and I drove to visit my grandparents who lived in the countryside. We did a lot of interesting things there. First, we watched the dragon boat races by the river. It was really fun and exciting. Then, we learnt to make all kinds of delicious zongzi and shared it together. In the afternoon, we fed the chickens, went fishing and played chess.
We all had a good time there! What a colorful and meaningful holiday!
I hope all is well with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般过去在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你如何度过端午节的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“端午节的日期、你参加的活动、你的感受等”几个方面重点介绍你如何度过端午节的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“多么丰富多彩的和有意义的节日啊”的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得高兴；
②learn to do sth学习做某事；
③all kinds of各种各样的；
④play chess下象棋。
[高分句型]
①In the morning, my parents and I drove to visit my grandparents who lived in the countryside. (who引导的定语从句)
②What a colorful and meaningful holiday! (感叹句)
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