Unit 10 Lending a Helping Hand
单元话题满分范文必背
基础语篇巩固练
1．假设你是李华，上周你参加了学校组织的去养老院的志愿者活动，请根据以下要点写一篇短文：
1. 介绍活动的基本信息（时间、地点、参与人员等）。
2. 描述在养老院的具体活动（如打扫卫生、陪老人聊天、表演节目等）。
3. 谈谈你对这次志愿者活动的感受和收获，以及对未来参加此类活动的想法。
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
3. 词数：70—100 词。
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2．“帮助他人，快乐自己”是新华学校李薇同学的生活理念，每个周末她都在自己的小区帮助老人们做一些事情。假如你是李薇，请根据提示信息写一篇词数70左右的短文，介绍自己上周六做过的事情。
时间 事件
周六上午 帮王奶奶买菜、包水饺
周六下午 帮李爷爷种花，打扫社区卫生
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3．“帮助他人，快乐自己”是第一中学夏悦同学的生活理念，每个周末她都在自己生活的小区里帮助老人们做一些事情。假如你是夏悦，请根据下面的表格信息写一篇英语短文，介绍自己周日做的事情。
时间 做的事情
周日上午 帮李奶奶买菜，包饺子。帮王爷爷做饭。
周日下午 帮刘爷爷打扫卫生。
提示词：weekend周末；make做；dumpling饺子；do some cleaning打扫卫生
写作要求：
1. 文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，字迹工整，不少于60词；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。
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4．你所在的社区正在招募志愿者，假如你是李华，想申请参加该活动。请用英文向社区中心负责人写一封自荐信。内容包括以下三点：
1.你的优秀品德有哪些？（至少两点）
2.你为什么想成为志愿者？（至少两点）
3.你能为社区做什么？（至少三点）
要求：
1.信中必须包括上述所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，字迹工整；
3.文章不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend myself as a volunteer for our community.
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I hope that you can offer me a chance. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
5．善良的人们常以自己的善举温暖这个世界，把爱与希望传递给他人。这样的行为不仅帮助了他人，也使他们在付出的过程中体验到了真切的快乐。亲爱的同学，你也是一个善良的人。请以“Be Kind, Be Happy!”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过善行温暖他人并从中获得快乐的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：
1. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁；
2. 词数不少于80；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Be Kind, Be Happy!
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6．继3月7日学校组织的慈善义卖活动后，你们班还想再组织另一个“援助之手”助人为乐活动，走进月牙湖养老院，提供力所能及的帮助。你承担了班级本次活动的策划，并和你英国的笔友Mike进行交流分享。
要求：1.请参考表格要点提示，完成给Mike的英文信。
2.条理清晰，语意连贯。
3.词数80左右，信的开头已提供，不计词数。
“Helping Hands” activity
Time on the afternoon of 19 March
Place Yueya Lake Nursing Home
Problems old people may have Problem 1: ... Problem 2: ...
Different kinds of help you will offer ...
Dear Mike,
On 7 March, our school held a successful charity sale. We raised a lot of money to help the poor students in Haizishan Middle School in Yunnan. We felt so happy!
We are going to have another “Helping Hands” activity. __________________
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Yours sincerely,
Wang Bin
7．请根据以下提示，以“Helping others is happy”为题目，写一篇70词左右的英语短文。
提示:
(1)我过去常常(used to)把零花钱花在买衣服和零食上。
(2)三年前老师告诉我们世界上有许多贫困儿童没有衣服和食物，更不能上学。
(3)从那以后，我将零花钱捐给(donate)一个名为UNICEF的组织，它主要帮助有需要的儿童。
(4)我为帮助别人而感到自豪，帮助别人很快乐。
Helping others is happy
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重难语篇拔高练
8． 假如你是Jimmy，你在海报上看到学生中心在招募志愿者的消息。每逢周末，你也想去帮助有需要的人，因为这既能锻炼自己，又能回报社会。请写一封信，申请一份你喜欢的志愿者工作。内容包括：
1.你想去什么地方做志愿，志愿工作的内容是什么
2.你的情况年龄，兴趣爱好，性格等以及你能胜任这份工作的原因（两点及以上）。
3.表达想要成为志愿者的愿望。
作文要求：
1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。
Dear sir or madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Jimmy
9．假如你是李华，上周六你们班组织了一次去养老院做义工的活动。作为校报的小记者，你打算用日记的形式把这次活动记录下来，发表在校报上，请根据以下提示写出这篇英语日记稿件。
1. 天气，时间，交通方式等；
2. 具体活动：打扫房间，洗衣服，讲故事等；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 词数60左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3. 日记格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Saturday, June 29th
10．你校团支部组织学生在业余时间参加社会活动。上周日你参加了志愿者服务活动“Volunteer now for our common future”，请你写一篇英语短文，向英文社团投稿, 记述本次活动，并谈谈你的感受。
要点提示:
①help old people
②clean up the street
③hold a charity bazaar(义卖)
要求：
1.词数为80词左右(首句已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.包含所有要点，适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯：
3.文中不能出现与考生相关的真实信息。
Our school organized us to take part in social activities in our spare time.
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单元话题满分范文必背
基础语篇巩固练
1．假设你是李华，上周你参加了学校组织的去养老院的志愿者活动，请根据以下要点写一篇短文：
1. 介绍活动的基本信息（时间、地点、参与人员等）。
2. 描述在养老院的具体活动（如打扫卫生、陪老人聊天、表演节目等）。
3. 谈谈你对这次志愿者活动的感受和收获，以及对未来参加此类活动的想法。
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
3. 词数：70—100 词。
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【答案】例文
Last week, I took part in a volunteer activity organized by our school. We went to a nursing home. Many of my classmates and I joined this activity.
When we got there, we first helped the old people clean their rooms. Then we sat down and chatted with them. We listened to their life stories and shared our school experiences. Some of us even performed shows like singing and dancing. The old people watched with big smiles on their faces.
This volunteer activity made me feel really good. I learned that the old people need our care and company. I also understood the importance of giving. In the future, I hope to take part in more such activities to bring more warmth to those in need.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述了参加养老院志愿者活动的经历；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”，用于叙述上周发生的活动；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括活动的基本信息、在养老院的具体活动以及个人感受和收获等，考生应确保涵盖所有要点，并适当发挥，使文章内容丰富且连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动的基本信息。开头简要说明活动的时间（上周）、地点（养老院）、参与人员（学校组织的志愿者，包括自己）等基本信息，为下文的具体活动做铺垫；
第二步，描述在养老院的具体活动。详细叙述在养老院所做的几件事情，如打扫卫生、陪老人聊天、表演节目等，可以适当添加细节，使描述更加生动；
第三步，书写结语。谈谈感受和收获以及未来想法。
[亮点词汇]
①took part in 参加
②organized by 由……组织
③nursing home 养老院
④clean their rooms 打扫房间
[高分句型]
①Last week, I took part in a volunteer activity organized by our school. (过去分词短语作后置定语)
②This volunteer activity made me feel really good. (make+宾语+宾补结构)
③I learned that the old people need our care and company. (宾语从句)
2．“帮助他人，快乐自己”是新华学校李薇同学的生活理念，每个周末她都在自己的小区帮助老人们做一些事情。假如你是李薇，请根据提示信息写一篇词数70左右的短文，介绍自己上周六做过的事情。
时间 事件
周六上午 帮王奶奶买菜、包水饺
周六下午 帮李爷爷种花，打扫社区卫生
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【答案】例文
Hi, I’m Li Wei from Xinhua School. I like helping other people. Every weekend, I always help the old people in our neighborhood. Last Saturday morning, I helped Grandma Wang buy some vegetables in the supermarket. Then I helped her make dumplings at home. In the afternoon, I helped Grandpa Li grow flowers. Then I cleaned the neighborhood. In the evening, although I felt very tired, I was very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍个人概况；
第二步，接着具体阐述周六一天帮助小区老人做的一些事情；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②in the supermarket在超市
③make dumplings包饺子
④grow flowers种花
[高分句型]
In the evening, although I felt very tired, I was very happy. (although引导的让步状语从句)
3．“帮助他人，快乐自己”是第一中学夏悦同学的生活理念，每个周末她都在自己生活的小区里帮助老人们做一些事情。假如你是夏悦，请根据下面的表格信息写一篇英语短文，介绍自己周日做的事情。
时间 做的事情
周日上午 帮李奶奶买菜，包饺子。帮王爷爷做饭。
周日下午 帮刘爷爷打扫卫生。
提示词：weekend周末；make做；dumpling饺子；do some cleaning打扫卫生
写作要求：
1. 文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，字迹工整，不少于60词；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。
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【答案】例文
Hi, I am Xia Yue. I like helping other people. Every weekend I always help the old people in our neighborhood. Last Sunday morning, I helped Grandma Li buy some vegetables in the supermarket. Then I helped her make dumplings at home. I help Grandpa Wang make meals. In the afternoon I helped Grandpa Liu do some cleaning. In the evening I felt very tired, but I was very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我喜欢帮助他人。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——周日上午和下午所做的事情等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
②make dumplings包饺子
③do some cleaning打扫卫生
[高分句型]
①Then I helped her make dumplings at home. (help sb. do sth.的用法）
②In the evening I felt very tired, but I was very happy. (but表转折)
4．你所在的社区正在招募志愿者，假如你是李华，想申请参加该活动。请用英文向社区中心负责人写一封自荐信。内容包括以下三点：
1.你的优秀品德有哪些？（至少两点）
2.你为什么想成为志愿者？（至少两点）
3.你能为社区做什么？（至少三点）
要求：
1.信中必须包括上述所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，字迹工整；
3.文章不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend myself as a volunteer for our community.
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I hope that you can offer me a chance. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend myself as a volunteer for our community.
I have many good qualities to be a volunteer. I’m a clever and helpful boy. I am good at all my lessons. I can use computers well, too. I am willing to help people in need. I think it’s our duty to help others. At the same time, helping others can make me happier.
If I become a volunteer, I can help children with their homework and do some shopping for the old people. I can also do the computer work for our community.
I hope that you can offer me a chance. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容写一封自荐信，应征去社区当志愿者。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己应征当志愿者的优秀品德；
第二步，说明应征当志愿者的理由；
第三步，罗列能为社区做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①helpful乐于助人的
②be good at擅长……
③at the same time同时
[高分句型]
①I think it’s our duty to help others.（宾语从句）
②If I become a volunteer, I can help children with their homework and do some shopping for the old people.（if引导条件状语从句）
5．善良的人们常以自己的善举温暖这个世界，把爱与希望传递给他人。这样的行为不仅帮助了他人，也使他们在付出的过程中体验到了真切的快乐。亲爱的同学，你也是一个善良的人。请以“Be Kind, Be Happy!”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过善行温暖他人并从中获得快乐的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：
1. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁；
2. 词数不少于80；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Be Kind, Be Happy!
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【答案】例文：
Be Kind, Be Happy!
I always believe being kind to others can make me happy. Here’s my experience of helping others.
One day, I met a foreigner on my way to the library. He got lost and didn’t find the way to his hotel. He asked me for help and I showed him the way. I was afraid he couldn’t find the right way, so I took him to the hotel directly. When we got to the hotel, he thanked me for my help. After saying goodbye to him, I went to the library happily. Suddenly I realized that helping the foreigner made me happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：要根据提示内容写作，适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出用善举温暖他人，自己也会获得快乐；
第二步，讲述自己曾经帮助他人的经历及感受；
第三步，总结提升，强调自己今后将继续帮助他人。
[亮点词汇]
①on one’s way to...在某人去……的路上
②ask sb. for help向某人求助
③get to到达
④thank sb. for sth.因某事而感谢某人
⑤say goodbye to sb.向某人告别
[高分句型]
①I always believe being kind to others can make me happy.（省略that的宾语从句）
②When we got to the hotel, he thanked me for my help.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．继3月7日学校组织的慈善义卖活动后，你们班还想再组织另一个“援助之手”助人为乐活动，走进月牙湖养老院，提供力所能及的帮助。你承担了班级本次活动的策划，并和你英国的笔友Mike进行交流分享。
要求：1.请参考表格要点提示，完成给Mike的英文信。
2.条理清晰，语意连贯。
3.词数80左右，信的开头已提供，不计词数。
“Helping Hands” activity
Time on the afternoon of 19 March
Place Yueya Lake Nursing Home
Problems old people may have Problem 1: ... Problem 2: ...
Different kinds of help you will offer ...
Dear Mike,
On 7 March, our school held a successful charity sale. We raised a lot of money to help the poor students in Haizishan Middle School in Yunnan. We felt so happy!
We are going to have another “Helping Hands” activity. __________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Wang Bin
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
On 7 March, our school held a successful charity sale. We raised a lot of money to help the poor students in Haizishan Middle School in Yunnan. We felt so happy!
We are going to have another “Helping Hands” activity. It will take place on the afternoon of 19 March at Yueya Lake Nursing Home. The old people there may face two problems: some have trouble moving freely, and others often feel lonely. To help, we’ll clean their rooms and assist with heavy tasks. Moreover, we plan to chat with them and put on performances, like singing and dancing. I’m sure these activities will bring them joy.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Bin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封信件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校组织的慈善义卖活动很成功；
第二步，介绍即将举办的“援助之手”活动的具体内容；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be going to do将要做某事
②take place发生
③plan to do计划做某事
[高分句型]
①We are going to have another “Helping Hands” activity. (be going to结构)
②I’m sure these activities will bring them joy. (省略that的宾语从句)
7．请根据以下提示，以“Helping others is happy”为题目，写一篇70词左右的英语短文。
提示:
(1)我过去常常(used to)把零花钱花在买衣服和零食上。
(2)三年前老师告诉我们世界上有许多贫困儿童没有衣服和食物，更不能上学。
(3)从那以后，我将零花钱捐给(donate)一个名为UNICEF的组织，它主要帮助有需要的儿童。
(4)我为帮助别人而感到自豪，帮助别人很快乐。
Helping others is happy
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【答案】例文
Helping others is happy
I used to spend most of my pocket money in buying clothes and snacks. Three years ago, my English teacher told us that there are so many poor children around the world. They are too poor to go to school. Some of them even have no clothes or food. From then on, I donate my money to UNICEF that helps children in need.
I’m really proud that I can help others. And helping others makes me happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍作者过去常常把零花钱花在买衣服和零食上；
第二步，介绍三年前老师告诉他们世界上有许多贫困儿童没有衣服和食物，更不能上学，从那以后，作者将零花钱捐给一个名为 UNICEF的组织，它主要帮助有需要的儿童；
第三步，最后表达作者为帮助别人而感到自豪，帮助别人很快乐。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常常
②around the world全世界
③go to school去上学
④in need贫困的
[高分句型]
①Three years ago, my English teacher told us that there are so many poor children around the world.（宾语从句）
②I’m really proud that I can help others.（宾语从句）
重难语篇拔高练
8． 假如你是Jimmy，你在海报上看到学生中心在招募志愿者的消息。每逢周末，你也想去帮助有需要的人，因为这既能锻炼自己，又能回报社会。请写一封信，申请一份你喜欢的志愿者工作。内容包括：
1.你想去什么地方做志愿，志愿工作的内容是什么
2.你的情况年龄，兴趣爱好，性格等以及你能胜任这份工作的原因（两点及以上）。
3.表达想要成为志愿者的愿望。
作文要求：
1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。
Dear sir or madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Jimmy
【答案】例文
Dear sir or madam,
My name is Jimmy. I’m 15 years old. I am outgoing. I like making friends with others. I like helping others very much. I can do some housework, such as cooking, washing clothes, sweeping the floor and so on. So I want to volunteer in the nursing home. I hope to help them clean up and tell them stories. I hope to be a volunteer to help them.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Jimmy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封信；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中的“提示信息”，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我是Jimmy”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——在哪个地方做志愿、志愿工作的内容、个人情况、胜任工作的原因等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我期待你的回复”。
[亮点词汇]
①do some housework 做家务
②look forward to 期望
③make friends with 与……交朋友
[高分句型]
① I can do some housework, such as cooking, washing clothes, sweeping the floor and so on. (such as用法）
② I like helping others very much. (动名词作宾语)
9．假如你是李华，上周六你们班组织了一次去养老院做义工的活动。作为校报的小记者，你打算用日记的形式把这次活动记录下来，发表在校报上，请根据以下提示写出这篇英语日记稿件。
1. 天气，时间，交通方式等；
2. 具体活动：打扫房间，洗衣服，讲故事等；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 词数60左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3. 日记格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Saturday, June 29th
【答案】例文：
Saturday, June 29th
It was sunny today. My classmates and I went to the old people’s home by bus at 8:00 am.
After we arrived there, some of us started to clean the rooms and some washed clothes. As for me, I read interesting stories for them. Time went quickly, we stayed there for about three hours. Then we went home by bus.
I was tired but happy. I think the old people need love and I will visit them often.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇日记写作，按照三个要点将班级的一次去养老院做义工的过程记录下来。
2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
10．你校团支部组织学生在业余时间参加社会活动。上周日你参加了志愿者服务活动“Volunteer now for our common future”，请你写一篇英语短文，向英文社团投稿, 记述本次活动，并谈谈你的感受。
要点提示:
①help old people
②clean up the street
③hold a charity bazaar(义卖)
要求：
1.词数为80词左右(首句已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.包含所有要点，适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯：
3.文中不能出现与考生相关的真实信息。
Our school organized us to take part in social activities in our spare time.
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【答案】例文
Our school organized us to take part in social activities in our spare time. Last Sunday, I participated in a volunteer service activity called “Volunteer now for our common future”. We helped old people by doing some housework for them and chatting with them. We also cleaned up the street to make our environment cleaner. Besides, we held a charity bazaar to raise money for those in need. Through this activity, I learned the importance of helping others and how to contribute to society. It was a really meaningful experience and I hope to participate in more such activities in the future.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇稿件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题，表明上周参加了学校的志愿者服务活动。
第二步，具体介绍上周日的志愿者服务活动；
第三步，谈一谈你参加志愿者活动的感受。
【亮点词汇】①participate in参加
②chat with sb与某人交谈
③the importance of……的重要性
【高分句型】①I participated in a volunteer service activity called “Volunteer now for our common future”.（过去分词做后置定语）
②We helped old people by doing some housework for them and chatting with them.（by+doing sth通过做某事）
