湖南浏阳市2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练（1）及答案
【2016高考训练】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下书信。书信
中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir，
Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school. As for your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends. Of all the subject I’m learning at school, I like English better. I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly. So I really hope to take this chance to improve it. If possible, I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in England, what I’m particularly interested in. I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear Sir，
Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school. As for
inviting
your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this
my
will allow me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends. Of all the
and
subject I’m learning at school, I like English better. I had been learning English for
subjects best have
eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly. So I really hope to take this
poor
chance to improve it. If possible, I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in
order that I can know some customs in England, what I’m particularly interested in. I
which
believe I will have? wonderful time this summer.
a
Yours truly,
Li Hua
2012模拟短文改错N
Of all my teachers ,Mr. Moore is the one who impress me 1_____
most. He is 34, so he looks young for his age. And he’s one of 2______
the most popular teacher in our school. Mr. Moore pays more 3______
attention to his way of teaching, comparing with other teachers. 4_______
He tries different ways to make his classes actively and lively. 5______
In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but understand 6______
“why”. So, instead giving us answers immediately, he encourages us 7______
to think by myself whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, 8______
we’ve learned from how to settle problems. He leads us to such a 9_____
wonderful world of “why” as we all admire and respect him. 10_____
【参考答案及解析】
1. impress改为impresses考查主谓一致。此处先行词one前有the，故其后定语从句的谓语动词应和one保持一致，用单数。
2. so改为but 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据语境此处应为转折关系。
3. teacher 改为teachers 考查名词的单复数。根据句中的one of 可知，后面的名词应用复数形式。
4. comparing改为compared 考查固定短语。和。。。相比应用compared with/to。
5. actively改为active 考查形容词的用法。此处make 后接形容词作宾补。
6. 正确 经分析本句正确。
7. instead后加of考查固定短语。根据后面的giving可知，其前应用介词of。
8. myself改为ourselves 考查代词指代一致。根据文意反身代词应和us相一致。故用ourselves。
9. 去掉from 考查动词的用法。learn from意为：向。。。学习，此处不合文意。
10. as改为that 考查固定句型。此处考查such。。。that。。。句型。
短文改错
There are advantage for students to work while 1. _______
studying at school. One of them was that 2. _______
they can earn money. For the most part, 3. _______
students working to earn money for their own 4. _______
use. Earning their own money allow them 5. _______
to spend on anything as if they please. 6. _______
They would have to ask their parents for 7. _______
money or for permission to do things by 8. _______
the money. Some students may also to save 9. _______
up for our college or future use. 10. _______
答案及解析
1. advantage改为advantages。应使用可数名词的复数形式。
2. was改为is。时态和整篇文章的时态不一致。
3. 此行无错误。
4. working改为work。此句缺少谓语动词。
5. allow改为allows。主谓不一致， 动名词做主语谓语用单数。
6. 删除if。此处please作不及物动词， 意为“喜欢， 想要”， as引导定语从句， 修饰先行词anything。
7. would 后添加not。上下文逻辑有误。
8. by改为with。by表示“使用”时， 其后不能使用定冠词the， 故改为with。
9. 去掉to。may为情态动词， 其后应使用动词原形。
10. our改为their。代词的指代不一致， 指代第三人称复数形式的物主代词应为their。
短文改错。
It’s easy to go downhill than to climb uphill：so it’s 1．____ easier to fall into bad habits than into good one 2．____ Bad habits don’t come suddenly．It come little by 3．____ little．Schoolboys first picks up a little in school and on 4．____ the streets．When they cannot write their homework， they 5．____ copy from their schoolmate．If they see bigger boys 6．____ smoking， they also want learn to smoke．When they 7．____ get bigger， the habits become stronger or 8．____ stronger， so that they can not longer get rid of 9．____ them．What necessary it is that we get rid of the bad 10．____ habits in the beginning！
【参考答案】Key 11
1．Easy--easier 2．(one)-ones 3．It--They 4．picks-pick
5．right 6．Schoolmate-schoolmates 7．to learn 8．or--and
9.not--no 10．What-How
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（） 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river. We found the water very dirty that we could hardly catch any fish in it. A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straightly into the river, which made the river polluting. In this way most of the fish in the river was killed. Unless the rivers all over the country are polluted like this, no living things will be exist in the water. As we all know, environmental pollution do great harm to living things. Now more and more people have realized what serious this problem is. Our government is doing her best to take measure to fight against pollution. We expect that water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.
【参考答案】
very →so
straightly →straight
polluting →polluted
was →were
Unless →If
be →be
do →does
what →how
measure →measures
water →the water
短文改错
Fred and I haven’t many in common. I sometimes 1. __________
wonder why we were friends at all. Fred is 2. __________
always busy make things. Everything he makes is 3. __________
so perfect that I sometime feel envy at his skill. 4. __________
My trouble is that I’m one of those lazy people. 5. __________
Outside my work at the office, the only thing which 6. __________
interests me is listening to the music. I have a 7. __________
big collection of records but all day long the 8. __________
only thing I can think is when I’m going to 9. __________
get home listen to a new piece. 10. __________ 【参考答案】Key 12 1) many--much 2) were--are 3) make -- making 4) sometime--sometimes
5) right 6) which – that 7)去掉 the 8) but -- and
9) think 后加about10) listen 前加to
湖南浏阳市2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练（2）及答案
【2016高考训练】短文改错。
请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Editor,
I used to be a physician in the children’s department of a hospital. Form time to time I treated children who had poisoned by medicine with older family members. The children didn’t know the medicine was danger ; they just knew it tasted sweet. Children easily open the bottle what we now use in China.
Some days before I talked about medicines with an American. He showed me a sort of plastic bottle. The design was quite simple and I’m sure our Chinese factories could produce these bottles. The top of the bottle can be opened by pressing down on them while turning. This is difficult for most young children to do so , though grown-up can open these bottles very easily.
I’m certainly that the expense of making such tops would be very small. As a doctor , I’d love to see this doing. And most parents would be grateful.
Sincerely yours
Li Hua
短文改错
had 后面加been
with—for
danger—dangerous
what ---that/which/去掉what
before—ago
them—it t
to do so 去掉so
grown-up---grown-ups
certainly---certain
doing—done
2012模拟短文改错O
Time seem limited for us Senior Three students. 1_________
Therefore, more and more student are studying from early 2_______
morning till lately afternoon, even during the ten-minute 3_________
break. In my opinion, Take a break between classes is 4_________
not necessary. Otherwise, we will feel tired both physically 5_________
and mentally. During the break, we should do something 6_________
to get rid of tiredness. What they need is to have a real rest, 7_________
instead getting more tired. My break is always pleasing. 8_________
Sometimes I take some simple exercise. Sometimes I had a free 9_____
chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. While the 10_____
next class begins, I feel fresh again.
【参考答案及解析】
1. seem→seems 考查主谓一致。此处time是主语，谓语动词用单数。
2.student→students 考查名词的单复数。根据后面的are可知用复数形式。
3.lately→late 考查形容词、副词的用法。修饰名词afternoon应用形容词。
4.Take→taking考查动名词的用法。此处动名词短语作主语，故用动名词形式。
5.去掉not 考查语境的理解。根据文意应为肯定意思。
6. √ 经分析本句正确。
7 they.→we 考查代词指代一致。通篇文章都在谈论我们的事情，故用we。
8. instead 后加of 考查固定短语。根据后面的getting可知用instead of。
9.had→have 考查动词时态。根据时间副词sometimes可知用一般现在时。
10.While→When考查状语从句的连接词。根据文意用when“当。。。的时候”。
短文改错
At first I was not quite willing to sit down and
watched the 90-minute football match. Usually I just 1. _______
checked the results because I thought that was dull 2. _______
to watch a game in which players kicked a ball each 3. _______
other. Therefore, my father loves football. During the 4. _______
World Cup in 2002, my dad stays up late just to watch 5. _______
his favorite sport. Seeing his strong interest in this 6. _______
game of 22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit down 7. _______
to watch the game. I found the game excited, and my 8. _______
dad explained for the rules. We shared our joy. Football 9. _______
is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad! 10. _______
答案及解析
1. watched改为watch。“and”连接两个并列的不定式“to sit down”和“(to)watch”， 所以要用动词原形。
2. that改为it。it作形式主语， “that”不行。
3. each之前添加to。“把球互相踢来踢去”， 要在“kick a ball”后加上介词to。
4. Therefore改为However。由上下文可知“therefore(因此)”与句义不符， 应改为 “however(然而)”。
5. stays改为stayed。考查时态一致， 时间状语“in 2002”， 应用一般过去时。
6. 此行无错误。
7. run改为running。running为现在分词作定语， 修饰“22 men”， 相当于定语从句“who run”。
8. excited改为exciting。要用“exciting”修饰“the game”， 表示
“令人兴奋的”， “excited”用来修饰人。
9. 删除for。“explain”是及物动词， 直接跟宾语， 无须加介词。
10. badly改为bad。be动词后用形容词作表语， 不能用副词。
【西南师大附中】
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
When I was a small child my parents didn’t have many money 76．_______________
and I had a very few Christmas gifts. My cousin was 10 and he 77．_______________
had gone out singing Christmas carols and made quite a bit 78．_______________
money. With telling anyone he went to the shop and spent almost 79．_______________
every penny of his money on a teddy bear; then he using the 80．_______________
change to buy a little necklace with a glass charming on them. He 81．_______________
came to my house and told my parents what he had bought these 82．_______________
things for me as Christmas gifts. Twenty-five years late the 83．_______________
moth-eaten teddy bear has long since been thrown away, but I even 84．_______________
have the little rusty necklace in my jewelry box to remind of my cousin’s kindness. 85．_________
短文改错：
76. many→much 77. 去掉 a 78. bit 后加of 79. with→without
80. using→used 81. them→it 82. what→that 83. late→later
84. even→still 85. remind后加me
短文改错
Dear doctor,
My name is Wang Lin. I’m a middle school student.I have
a problem and I’m writing to ask you for some advices. 1._________
I’m just 1.57 meters high, and my weight is 71 kilos.Many 2.__________
Students often make fun me.Some boys are unfriendly to me. 3._________
They called me “ Meat Ball”. That makes me feel unhappy. 4._________
I’m now worry about my weight. Though I am a bit too fat, I 5.__________
feel rather good. I enjoy my meals. I love eating meat very 6._________
much. And I like sweet food, either. I often have sugar with 7._________
tea, milk, porridge, and even hot water. In the past two months 8._________
I have put off 5 kilos. I’m worried about this problem, 9.__________
but I don’t know what to lose weight quickly. Please help me, 10_________
dear doctor!I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.
With best wishes,
Wang Lin
【参考答案】Key 9
1 advices –advice 2 and—but 3of 4 called –call
5 worry—worried 6 good –well 7 either –too 8 right
9 off –on 10 what –how
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.
【答案】
I like eating fruit and vegetables what （改为which/that）are of great benefit to our healthy（改为health）. Not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉into） ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow（改为following） the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going（改为goes）, “ An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike（改为disliking或在dislike前加who） fruit and vegetables. On（加the） contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were（改为are） crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改为 stronger）. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.（改为 it）
湖南浏阳市2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练（3）及答案
【2016高考训练】短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(︿))，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉.修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均限一词。 2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Rob,
I saw your note yesterday evening. You suggested that we went to the concert this Sunday. I'm terribly sorry, and I have to say good-bye for my uncle. He is going to England to do him PhD and he will leave off this Sunday. To be honesty, I'd like to go with you to the concert. I hear the performance will last two week. so how about go there next Saturday? Please let me know that it will be OK. Give me call.Thanks
Li Hua
短文改错 （每小题1分；满分10分）
Dear Bob,
I saw your note yesterday evening. You suggested that we went to the concert this Sunday.
go
I’m terribly sorry, and I have to say good-bye for my uncle. He is going to England to do him PhD
but to his
and he will leave off this Sunday. To be honesty, I’d like to go with you to the concert. I hear the
honest
performance will last two week, so how about go there next Saturday? Please let me know that it
weeks going if/whether
will be OK. Give me ^call.
a
Thanks.
Li Hua
2012模拟短文改错P
The other day my father called me, that at first made 1._______
me very glad because of he seldom calls me. I was extra 2.______
happy for that day was his birthday and I thought he 3.______
remembered the date. But to my disappoint, our talk was 4._______
so short and ended so soon. My father called only tell me 5.________
that he has put another 1,000 yuan to my account, then hung 6.________
up after I could even tell him that it was my birthday. Tears 7._______
of sadness came to my eye. Honestly, I understand that he 8._______
loves me just as true as my mom, but I’d prefer to hear 9.________
him say it out to me on my birthday． 10._________
【参考答案及解析】
1.that改为 which 考查非限制性定语从句的关系词。 此处which替代前文整个句子的内容。
2.去掉of 考查状语从句的连接词。根据后面的句子he seldom calls me可知用because。
3. his改为my 考查代词指代一致。根据文意应是“我的生日”。
4. disappoint改为disappointment 考查固定短语的用法。此处to是介词，其后用名词。
5. only后加to 考查不定式作目的状语。父亲给我打电话只是告诉我。。。。
6.has改为had 考查动词时态。根据文意“存钱”在“打电话”之前，故用过去完成时。
7. after改为before 考查句意的理解。我还没有来得及告诉他那天是我的生日就挂掉了。此处before意为：没来得及。。。就。。。
8. eye改为eyes 考查名词的单复数。此处指双眼用eyes。
9. true改为truly 考查副词的用法。修饰动词love用副词。
10. 正确 经分析本句正确。
短文改错
It is bad manners in the classroom to look for what our 1. _______
neighbor had written, or try to see what mark he has received 2. _______
without being permitted. It is good manners for them to help 3. _______
each other if we have the same desire and the teacher allows to it. 4. _______
In examinations and in certain kinds of written work, it is dishonest 5. _______
and foolishly to help or to ask help from others. When one student 6. _______
does so, much larger values are destroying. One may not agree 7. _______
to examination system, but at present it is basically the only 8. _______
measure that the teacher and the rest of the world can depend to 9. _______
decide if or not each of us meets the requirement. 10. _______
答案及解析
1. for改为at。在教室看邻座所写的是不礼貌的， look for为寻找， 通常指失去的找回来。
2. had改为has。此处主从时态应一致。
3. them改为us。考查代词一致。由本句后文“if we have...”可判断。
4. 删除to。考查动词allow为及物动词， 后面的介词to应删去。
5. 此行无错误。
6. foolishly改为foolish。and 连接的两个形容词在形式上应该保持一致。
7. destroying改为destroyed。考查动词语态，“much larger values”应被摧毁。
8. examination system之前添加the。“examination system”此处特指下文中的“the only measure”。
9. depend后添加on。 “depend on”为固定短语， 指依赖、 依靠。
10. if 改为whether。考查if和whether在表“是否”时用法的区别。if不能与or not连用。
短文改错
Women，present and ancient， at the home and 1．______ abroad,wear long hair,that adds to their beauty．But few 2．______ people realize it affects her brains．Hair grows constantly． 3．______ It takes in nourishment(营养) constantly．If it was short 4．______ of nourishment,it’ll die and falls off．Body supplies hair with 5．______ nourishment,it can’t be stopped even in a minutes．If it takes in 6．______ too many,that means hair has already used too much 7．______ nourishment which body gives it to the head．As time passes， 8．______ brain is relatively short of nourishment．It leads dizziness 9．______ (头昏)．Therefore one’s brains will be weakened． 10．______
【参考答案】Key 10
1．去掉the 2．that─which 3．her─their 4．was─is
5．falls─fall 6．minutes—minute
7．many─much 8．去掉it 9 lead后加to 10．√
短文改错
Today is Sunday. We had not lessons. After breakfast 1.________
I wanted to do with my homework when Li Lei rang me. 2.________
He asked me to go to the cinema with he. I agreed, but3. 3.________
I have to finish my homework first. About an hour later， 4.________
we went out. In the way we saw Kate; she was mending 5.________
her bike. She looked very worry.“Let us help you.” Li Lei 6.________
and I all said. “All right.” And we stopped to help her. 7.________
There was nothing much wrong with the bike, so it cost 8.________
us only several minutes time to finish it. Kate was very 9..________
thankful. When we hurried to the cinema, the film had 10.________
been on for ten minutes. But we felt happy.
答案与解析：
1．not→no “没有课”应是have no lessons或don't have any lessons。
2．去掉with do是及物动词，直接跟名词作宾语。
3．he→him 介词后跟代词时要用宾格。
4．have→had 本文是叙述过去发生的事情。
5．In→On “在……途中”是on the way。
6．worry→worried “她看上去很着急”，应该用形容词作表语。
7．all→both 因为只有我和李蕾两人。
8．cost→took “花费时间做什么”要用It takes some time to do something。
9．去掉time 有具体的时间名词minutes，无须再用time。
10．√
短文改错
Today I showed some foreign friend around our city. 1.________
We started off in car from the Friendship Hotel at 8:00 a. m. 2._______
We first got to Jinshan Park. We are all struck by its 3._______
beautiful flowers on show. Then, we visited the City Museum. 4._______
We saw plenty of valuable things, from that we learned a lot 5.______
about the city. After that, they drove to Jinshan Temple. That is 6._______
a beautiful place of interest in our city, but there we enjoyed 7._______
the wonderfully scenery of the sea. We had a delicious lunch at the 8._______
seafood Restaurant and we returned back at noon..All the foreign 9.______
friends were pleased with my arrangement. We did have the 10_____
wonderful time today.
KEY 2
1.friend-friends 2.in –by 3.are—were 4right
5.that—which 6.they-we 7.but—and
8.wondefully—wonderful 9 back/ 10 the—a
短文改错
My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________
and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________
will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.________
have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________
as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________
think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________
we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________
and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________
medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________
some food for picnics. I'm sure that we will have fun.10.________
答案与解析：
1．am→are 本句的主句是my father and I，所以谓语动词用复数形式。
2．but→and 此处表示的是顺承关系，而不是转折关系。
3．删去第二个the 一般情况下，表示国家的单个词语前不加冠词。
4．spend→cost 本句的主语不是人，而是it，所以用cost。
5．had→have 短文全篇叙述的都是现在和将来的情况。
6．what→that/which或删去what “that/which we are going to drive”是定语从句，修饰先行词the car，关系代词在从句中作宾语，可以省略。
7．them→us 根据文章的开头部分可知这里指的是作者本人和作者的父亲，因此应用us。
8．possibly→possible as...as possible表示“尽可能……”。
9．prevent前加to 此处是不定式短语作目的状语。
10．√
湖南浏阳市2016高考英语短文改错训练及参考答案
【2016高考训练】短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Ten years ago, I had worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and could see nothing. Lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. They searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. In the end, I am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that caused the accident.
短文改错
81 去掉had 82.of后面加the 83.and改成but
84.lucky改成luckily 85.late改成later 86.car改成cars
87.去掉for 88.tried 改成trying 89. am改成was 90.that改成which
2012模拟短文改错M
Today we went to climb the West Hill．Early in morning 1．______
we started out and arrived an hour late．Then we began 2．______
to climb．The hill was high and some of us got tired 3．______
soon, and all of us were very excited．We cheered 4．______
happily when we got the top．We had our lunch there 5．_______
and had enjoyed ourselves very much．Unfortunately， 6．________
when we walked down the hill，We were caught by 7．_______
a rain．We remained calmly，shared umbrellas and 8．_______
raincoats and walked carefully．Finally we both reached 9．_______
the parking lot safely．In spite of the unexpecting rain 10．______
and wind，we had a good time．
【参考答案及解析】
1. morning前加the 考查冠词的用法。注意习语in the morning。
2. late改为later 考查副词比较级的用法。此处表示“迟到了一小时”，故用比较级。
3. 正确 经分析本句正确。
4. and改为but 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据文意此处为转折关系。
5. got后加to或got改为reached 考查动词的用法。此处the top作宾语，故改为got to 或及物动词reached。
6. 去掉had 考查动词时态。根据句中的and可知，前后是并列关系，时态应一致。
7. by改为in 考查介词的用法。解题关键：掌握动词catch的用法，be caught in意为：遭遇。。。。
8. calmly改为calm 考查形容词的用法。此处remain为系动词，其后接形容词。
9. both改为all 考查代词的用法。根据文意没有两者的范围。
10. unexpecting改为unexpected考查分词的用法。此处unexpected意为：意料之外的。
短文改错
Dear Ralph,
I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 1. _______
describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 2. _______
it seems always difficult for me to do things well as 3. _______
them. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as 4. _______
a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 5. _______
Besides, I have few friends. I don’t know that they 6. _______
don’t like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 7. _______
very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8. _______
once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t 9. _______
seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 10. _______
Yours,
Xiao Wei
答案及解析
1. of改为from。of表示所属意义， 此处应为“来自一个小城镇”。
2. quietly改为
quiet。describe后接名词或代词+ as +名词或形容词， 其中as +名词或形容词作宾语补足语， 表示“把…描写成什么/什么样子”。
3. well前加as。as well as“跟…(做得)一样好”。
4. to改为at。laugh to...意为“对…大笑”。laugh at...意为“嘲笑”， 有明显的、 有意的敌意的含义， 根据后文and see me as a fool， 故应用laugh at才对。
5. 此行无错误。
6. that改为why。that引导宾语从句， 本身无意义， 只起连接作用。
7. talked改为talk。整篇文章叙述的都是现在的情况。改为现在时， 使其与上下文一致。
8. stranger改为strangers。与句子主语we一致。
9. since改为but。根据上下文， 前后句之间为转折关系。
10. 删除about。tell的结构为：tell sb. sth. “告诉某人某事”， 表示直接意义； tell sb. about sth. “告诉某人有关某事的某些内容”， 表示间接意义。
短文改错。
As the world enters the 21st century, the development in the 1 _____
science and technology will bring us much more new hopes and 2_____
chance we`ve never imagined before.People are hoping have 3_____
a peacefully and highly developed world.To catch up with 4_____
the new development and to be success in the new century the 5____
younger generation is required to have different kind of skills 6____
and abilities, such like the computer science and the English 7____
language.Otherwise one will be left behind.Young people should 8____
study even hard at school and prepare themselves mentally 9____ and physically to meet with the challenge of the new century 10____
【参考答案】Key 14
1.in the science –in science 2.much—many 3.hoping to
4.peacefully-peacful 5.success—successful 6.kind—kinds
7.like—as 8 right 9 hard—harder 10去掉 with
【重庆八中】
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如有错误（每行只有
一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜
线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：每行都有一个错误。
I was a honest child indeed．I didn’t dare to tell lies 76．
because of my eyes often let the secret out ．I remembered 77．
telling a lie to my parents, and I could hard fix my eyes on 78．
my father’s face, let alone my mother eyes．I glanced 79．
here and there, up or down, nervously． 80．
However, after I came to Beijing, I no longer have to 81．
worry my eyes because everything I wanted to say 82．
was sent by letter．I found myself often tell small lies．I 83．
wrote, “I’m fine in Beijing．I enjoy the food selling at the 84．
university．And at the weekends, I often buy fried chickens 85．
or pork to eat．”
短文改错:
76．a改为an 77．删去of 78．hard 改为hardly
79．mother 改为mother’s 80．or改为and
81．have改为had 82．my前加about 83．tell改为telling
84．selling改为sold 85．chickens改为chicken
短文改错
Mark Twain was born in a small town of Horid.When he is only 1___
twelve years old, his father died.Late he became a river boat pilot.2_____
Mark Twain was her pen name.During the American Civil War 3_____
He worked as a reporter and write a lot of stories.Gradually he 4____
made his mark and his work were popular.He became one of the 5_____
best known writer of the 19th century in the U.S.A.In his life 6____
Mark Twain wrote the number of stories and novels, on which 7____
“Adventure of Tom Sawyer” is the most famous one.His writings 8____
have been translated to many other languages, and they are 9_____
deeply love by the readers all over the world. 10 ___
【参考答案】Key 15
1is—was 2 Late-later 3.her—his 4.write—wrote
5 work—works 6.writer—writers
7.the—a 8.right 9 to—into 10.loved
短文改错。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 1______
Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in 2______
English.My pronunciation was terribly.I could 3_____
only speak a few words.But one and a half year later, 4_____
I now think English fun to learn.I got a lot from your 5____
encouraging words.I will always remember what you 6.____
said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve 7____
had pleasant journey home and will come to china 8_____
again sometimes in the future.I will write again 9_____
and send you the photos we take together 10______
KEY 3
1.with—for 2.not—no 3 terribly—terrible 4. years—years
5. is 6. Right 7. /to 8 a
9 sometimes—sometime 10 take –took
湖南浏阳市2016高考英语短文改错训练及答案
?【2016高考训练】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）?
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。?
增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。???
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。?
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。???
注意：1.?每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；?
???????? 2.?只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This term our school has offer more than ten optional courses with which students can choose. The courses are given from 4:00 to 5:30 every Thursday afternoon. Students show interest in optional courses. Their favourite are computers, speaking English, arts and so on . They say they have learned a lot about that is not taught in text books and they have got a great deal of practice. Therefore, students are not quite satisfied. They hope that more optional courses will be offered or the homework will be less. They suggest more trips and visits should organized so that they can learn more about what's going on inside school.
参考答案
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offered from
students can choose. The courses are given from 4:00 to 5:30 every
加on
Thursday afternoon. Students show interest in optional courses. Their
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favourites spoken
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practice. Therefore, students are not quite satisfied. They hope that more
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optional courses will be offered or the homework will be less. They
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suggest more trips and visits should organized so that they can learn
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more about what's going on inside school.
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2012模拟短文改错L
Mother’s Day was around the corner. My good friend 1. _____
Alice, Jenny and I get together, discussing what we should do to 2. ______
our respect for. Alice was planning to buy some flowers with 3. ______
his pocket money in honor of her mother. Jenny was going to buy 4. ______
vegetables to cook delicious dinner for her family on that day, because 5. _____
she wanted to experience how many her mother does for her family 6. ______
every day. As for me, I’d like to make a greeting card, said 7. ______
“Happy Mother’s Day”, in which I would also tell my mother 8. ______
to pay attention to health or promise her to study harder. 9. ______
We are looking forward to Mother’s Day. 10. ______
【参考答案及解析】
1．friend --- friends 考查名词的单复数。根据后为可知应是两人，故用复数形式。
2．get --- got 考查动词时态。根据上文可知事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。
3．去掉for 考查介词的用法。此处what作do的宾语，for是多余的。
4．his --- her 考查代词指代一致。根据文意Alice是女名，故用her。
5 cook 后加 a 考查冠词的用法。此处dinner是可数名词，其前应加a。
6．many --- much 考查词义的区别。此处do much for为。。。做得多。
7．said --- saying 考查现在分词作定语。此处相当于定语从句which says “Happy Mother’s Day”
8．in --- on考查介词的用法。此处on which相当于on the card。
9．or --- and 考查句意理解。此处and表并列。
10．V经分析本句正确。
【2015·四川】
Hi, Janice,
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
2015年四川卷 【答案】与【解析】
试题分词：文章主要通过一封求助信，写出了写信人的困扰。作者交了三个新朋友，经常一起去卡拉OK唱歌，但其实作者并不喜欢这样，他想知道自己该怎么做才不会失去这段友谊。
1．【答案】在第一句中的want后加to【解析】want意为“想要”时后面必须接动词不定式作宾语，不能和动词原形连用。第一段：want后加to want to do为固定搭配，故在want后加to。加上to 考查动词want的用法，want用不定式担当状语，故加上to。句意为：我真地很想和你分享一下我经历的问题。
2．【答案】第二句的tell→told【解析】根据句子的时间状语last time可知谓语动词应该用过去式。第二段第一句：tell→told根据时间状语last time可知，本句时态应为一般过去时，故将tell改为told。tell→told 考查时态。根据时间状语last time可知，此句需要用一般过去时，故把tell改成told.句意为：正如我上次告诉你的那样。
3．【答案】第二句的friend→friends【解析】three后接可数复数名词。第二段第一句：friend→friends句中three表示复数概念，后面的名词应为复数形式，故将friend改为friends。考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意为：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。
4．【答案】第四句的sing→singing【解析】spend sb+时间或钱+doing sth．花费某人时间或钱做某事。第二段第三句：sing→singing spend some time(in)doing sth．为固定搭配，故将sing改为singing。考查动名词担当宾语。本句考查句型spend?（in）doing sth结构，故把sing改成singing。
5．【答案】第五句的many→much【解析】many表示可数概念或用来修饰复数可数名词，但是此处cost的宾语应该是钱，而钱是不可数的，所以应该用much指代“很多钱”。第二段第四句：many→much much在此处为代词。表示消费量，为不可数概念，而many为可数概念，故将many改为much。考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意为：那真的花费很多。
6．【答案】第七句的so→but【解析】so意为“因此”，表结果，显然不合逻辑，因此应该用but表示前后两部分是转折关系。第二段第六句：so→but根据“我不想再去了”和“我害怕失去他们的友谊”可知，此处应为转折关系，故将so改为but。考查连词。上一分句意为：我不想再去；下一分句意为：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。
7．【答案】第八句的How→What【解析】how不能作宾语，因此应该改为what来作动词do的宾语。第二段第七句：How→What在此句中，特殊疑问词充当第二个do的宾语，故将How改为What。考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，表示事情，故用what而非how。注意首字母要大写。
8．【答案】第九句的are→were【解析】根据would you talk to him可知，本句是一个含有if条件句的虚拟语气。表示与现在或将来事实相反时从句动词应该用过去式。第二段第八句：are→were条件从句与现在事实相反，谓语动词使用过去式，故将are改为were。查虚拟语气。根据句子可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不相符，故把are改成were。句意为：如果你是我,…。
9．【答案】第九句的him→them【解析】本题属于代词的指代不明。应该将him改为them这样才与前文的their一致，指代前文的朋友。第二段第八句：him→them根据上文可知，这里指作者的三个新朋友，此处代词指代错误，故将him改为them。考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them而非him。句意为：你会和他们说吗？
10．【答案】第十句去掉help后的with【解析】help为及物动词直接加宾语。第三段：去掉with help为及物动词，与me构成动宾结构，因此，with在此处多余，故去掉with。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意为：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。考查动词。
短文改错。
Dear Anish，
Here are the information about Manchester University.1.________
It is about 200 miles far away from London, and it 2.________
has a very big schoolyard. You can live in the school3.________
or near the school. They have all sorts of course.4.________
I'm sure you will find one you like it. I know you5.________
are particular interested in human rights. So I will 6.________
see that there is anything on their website(网址).7.________
I'll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport8.________
when you arrived. You met him a few years ago, but he 9.________
has changed a lot since then. Both your aunt or I look10.________
forward to seeing you again.
See you soon.
Peter
答案与解析：
1．are→is information是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式。
2．去掉far far通常不与表示具体距离的数词连用。
3．√
4．course→courses 根据句中的all sorts of可知，这里要表示的是各种各样的课程，因此应用复数形式。
5．去掉it “(that) you like”是定语从句，修饰先行词one。在从句中，关系代词that作like的宾语，所以it多余。
6．particular→particularly interested是形容词，应使用副词修饰。
7．that→if/whether 根据上一句中的内容可知这里的意思是看网络上“是否”有相关信息。
8．meet前加to 此处是不定式表示目的。
9．arrived→arrive 如果主句是一般将来时，时间状语从句通常用一般现在时。
10．or→and 此处是“both...and...”结构，表示“两者都”。
【重庆市万州二中】
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
??? Late in April, a photo show was held in our school. ?
??? It lasted a week and was great success! All the photos were taken 76. ________
by the students themselves. They were most color photos, but 77. ________
some were black-and-white ones, presented our school life, the beauty 78. ________
of nature, festival activities and so on. All the work of art were 79. _______
at show in the reading-room on the second floor. Every day a large 80. ________
number of students went to enjoy them, but they were surprised to 81.________
find the photos were such wonderful that some teachers also were 82. ________
present. Those whose photos were chosen the best are given different 83. ________
prizes. In the short, this photo show really made our life more colorful. 84. ________
We hope we will have much more activities like this in our school. 85. ________
76. was 后加a 77.most---mostly
78.presented----presenting / 在presented前面加which
79.work---works 80.at---on 81.but---and 82.such---so
83.are---were 84.删掉the 85 much--- many
passage ***
Mary was an university student. She didn’t have much 1 ____
money and her parents were not rich, and she had an uncle 2. ____
who had been fortunately enough to collect great wealth. 3. ____
He always give her valuable Christmas and birthday presents. 4. ____
When her uncle’s birthday came round, Mary wanted buy him 5. ____
something really special, but because she was rich, she did not 6. ____
know how to get him. She went into the best shop in her 7. ____
town and explained what her problem was to one of helpful 8. ____
shop assistants. Finally she asked, “What do you have for 9. ____
someone who has already got everything he wants or needs. 10
The assistant sighed deeply and answered, “Envy, only envy.”
【参考答案】Key 13
an—a 2 and—but 3 fortunately—fortunate 4 give—gave
5to buy 6.she—he 7how-what8the helpful.
9 assistant -- assistants 10 right
