高考英语概要写作高分句型与表达学案
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高考英语概要写作高分句型与表达
一、高频核心句型（精准概括）
1. 主旨总结句
文章/作者+核心观点
The passage mainly discusses...（本文主要讨论……）
例：The passage mainly discusses the impact of social media on青少年心理健康.
The author argues/claims that...（作者认为……）
例：The author claims that sustainable practices are essential for environmental protection.
研究/数据+结论
A recent study shows/indicates that...（研究表明……）
例：A recent study indicates that regular exercise improves academic performance.
Statistics reveal that...（数据显示……）
例：Statistics reveal that 80% of teenagers spend over 2 hours on digital devices daily.
2. 观点转述句
引用观点
According to the passage,...（根据文章……）
The article points out that...（文章指出……）
替换表达
argue → contend/maintain/hold the view that
important → crucial/significant/vital
solve → tackle/address/resolve
3. 逻辑衔接句
因果关系
Due to/Owing to..., ...（由于……）
Therefore/Thus, ...（因此……）
对比转折
However/Nevertheless, ...（然而……）
In contrast, ...（相比之下……）
递进补充
Moreover/Additionally, ...（此外……）
Furthermore, ...（更进一步……）
二、高分表达替换库（避免原词重复）
1. 动词替换
原文词汇 高分替换词 例句对比
show demonstrate, illustrate The graph demonstrates a steady increase.
use utilize, employ They utilize advanced technology to solve problems.
change transform, alter Climate change has altered ecosystems worldwide.
2. 名词替换
原文词汇 高分替换词 例句对比
problem issue, challenge, dilemma The article focuses on the issue of plastic pollution.
result consequence, outcome The study analyzes the consequences of overfishing.
idea concept, viewpoint The author introduces the concept of circular economy.
3. 形容词/副词替换
原文词汇 高分替换词 例句对比
very extremely, highly, deeply The project is extremely important for regional development.
quickly rapidly, swiftly Technology is evolving rapidly in the 21st century.
new innovative, novel Scientists have made novel discoveries in gene editing.
三、结构模板（三段式框架）
1. 开头段（主旨概括）
The passage/article titled "..." mainly discusses... The author highlights the importance of... and argues that...
例：
The article titled "The Rise of E-learning" mainly discusses the growing popularity of online education. The author highlights its convenience and flexibility, arguing that it will transform traditional teaching models.
2. 主体段（分点转述）
First, the passage mentions that... For example,...
Second, it points out that... According to the study,...
Additionally, the author emphasizes that... This is because...
例：
First, the passage mentions that e-learning provides access to global resources. For example, students can attend courses from top universities via MOOCs. Second, it points out that online learning offers personalized study plans. According to the study, 75% of learners prefer self-paced modules.
3. 结尾段（结论/影响）
In conclusion, the article suggests that... Its main message is that...
例：
In conclusion, the article suggests that e-learning will coexist with traditional education. Its main message is that embracing digital tools is crucial for adapting to future educational trends.
四、实战演练（附范文解析）
原文片段：
Climate change is a pressing issue affecting every corner of the globe. Rising temperatures have led to melting ice caps, rising sea levels, and more frequent extreme weather events. Scientists warn that human activities, such as burning fossil fuels and deforestation, are the primary causes. To address this, many countries have implemented policies to reduce carbon emissions, such as investing in renewable energy and promoting electric vehicles. However, global cooperation is still needed to tackle the challenge effectively.
概要范文：
The passage highlights the urgent issue of climate change and its impacts, including melting ice caps and extreme weather. It explains that human activities like fossil fuel use and deforestation are the main causes. While some countries have taken measures such as adopting renewable energy, the article emphasizes that international collaboration is essential for effective solutions.
解析：
主旨句：The passage highlights the urgent issue of climate change...
转述技巧：
pressing → urgent
implemented policies → taken measures
warn → explain
逻辑词：while 表对比，however 转换为emphasizes that 衔接结论
五、高分策略与避坑指南
1. 关键原则
去细节化：只保留主题句和支撑论点，删除例子、数据细节
错误：In 2023, a study by NASA showed that Arctic ice has decreased by 40% since 2000.
正确：A study indicates a significant reduction in Arctic ice due to global warming.
客观转述：避免加入个人观点，用the author argues/the study shows 等结构
字数控制：100词左右，约5-6句话，每句概括一个核心点
2. 常见错误规避
错误类型 案例 修正建议
照搬原句 Climate change is a pressing issue. 替换为The passage addresses the critical issue of climate change.
遗漏要点 只写原因，忽略解决措施 确保覆盖“问题-原因-措施”结构
时态错误 The author will argue that... 用一般现在时：The author argues that...
3. 高效训练法
三步法练习：
1. 通读原文，标记主题句（通常为首段或各段首句）；
2. 提取关键词（名词、动词、逻辑词）；
3. 用替换词和衔接句重组信息，确保语法正确。
对比分析：将自己的概括与参考答案对比，总结词汇和结构差异。
六、备考资源
1. 真题拆解：分析近5年高考真题概要写作，总结高频话题（如科技、环境、教育）的通用表达；
2. 同义词汇总表：整理50组高频同义替换词（如improve→enhance/boost），每日背诵；
3. 限时训练：每天用15分钟练习一篇概要写作，强化快速提取信息的能力。
关键提醒：概要写作评分核心为“内容完整度”“语言准确度”“逻辑连贯性”，训练时需优先确保覆盖原文所有要点，再追求语言高级表达。
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高考英语概要写作高分句型与表达
一、高频核心句型（精准概括）
1. 主旨总结句
文章/作者+核心观点
The passage mainly discusses...（本文主要讨论……）
例：The passage mainly discusses the impact of social media on青少年心理健康.
The author argues/claims that...（作者认为……）
例：The author claims that sustainable practices are essential for environmental protection.
研究/数据+结论
A recent study shows/indicates that...（研究表明……）
例：A recent study indicates that regular exercise improves academic performance.
Statistics reveal that...（数据显示……）
例：Statistics reveal that 80% of teenagers spend over 2 hours on digital devices daily.
2. 观点转述句
引用观点
According to the passage,...（根据文章……）
The article points out that...（文章指出……）
替换表达
argue → contend/maintain/hold the view that
important → crucial/significant/vital
solve → tackle/address/resolve
3. 逻辑衔接句
因果关系
Due to/Owing to..., ...（由于……）
Therefore/Thus, ...（因此……）
对比转折
However/Nevertheless, ...（然而……）
In contrast, ...（相比之下……）
递进补充
Moreover/Additionally, ...（此外……）
Furthermore, ...（更进一步……）
二、高分表达替换库（避免原词重复）
1. 动词替换
原文词汇 高分替换词 例句对比
show demonstrate, illustrate The graph demonstrates a steady increase.
use utilize, employ They utilize advanced technology to solve problems.
change transform, alter Climate change has altered ecosystems worldwide.
2. 名词替换
原文词汇 高分替换词 例句对比
problem issue, challenge, dilemma The article focuses on the issue of plastic pollution.
result consequence, outcome The study analyzes the consequences of overfishing.
idea concept, viewpoint The author introduces the concept of circular economy.
3. 形容词/副词替换
原文词汇 高分替换词 例句对比
very extremely, highly, deeply The project is extremely important for regional development.
quickly rapidly, swiftly Technology is evolving rapidly in the 21st century.
new innovative, novel Scientists have made novel discoveries in gene editing.
三、结构模板（三段式框架）
1. 开头段（主旨概括）
The passage/article titled "..." mainly discusses... The author highlights the importance of... and argues that...
例：
The article titled "The Rise of E-learning" mainly discusses the growing popularity of online education. The author highlights its convenience and flexibility, arguing that it will transform traditional teaching models.
2. 主体段（分点转述）
First, the passage mentions that... For example,...
Second, it points out that... According to the study,...
Additionally, the author emphasizes that... This is because...
例：
First, the passage mentions that e-learning provides access to global resources. For example, students can attend courses from top universities via MOOCs. Second, it points out that online learning offers personalized study plans. According to the study, 75% of learners prefer self-paced modules.
3. 结尾段（结论/影响）
In conclusion, the article suggests that... Its main message is that...
例：
In conclusion, the article suggests that e-learning will coexist with traditional education. Its main message is that embracing digital tools is crucial for adapting to future educational trends.
四、实战演练（附范文解析）
原文片段：
Climate change is a pressing issue affecting every corner of the globe. Rising temperatures have led to melting ice caps, rising sea levels, and more frequent extreme weather events. Scientists warn that human activities, such as burning fossil fuels and deforestation, are the primary causes. To address this, many countries have implemented policies to reduce carbon emissions, such as investing in renewable energy and promoting electric vehicles. However, global cooperation is still needed to tackle the challenge effectively.
概要范文：
The passage highlights the urgent issue of climate change and its impacts, including melting ice caps and extreme weather. It explains that human activities like fossil fuel use and deforestation are the main causes. While some countries have taken measures such as adopting renewable energy, the article emphasizes that international collaboration is essential for effective solutions.
解析：
主旨句：The passage highlights the urgent issue of climate change...
转述技巧：
pressing → urgent
implemented policies → taken measures
warn → explain
逻辑词：while 表对比，however 转换为emphasizes that 衔接结论
五、高分策略与避坑指南
1. 关键原则
去细节化：只保留主题句和支撑论点，删除例子、数据细节
错误：In 2023, a study by NASA showed that Arctic ice has decreased by 40% since 2000.
正确：A study indicates a significant reduction in Arctic ice due to global warming.
客观转述：避免加入个人观点，用the author argues/the study shows 等结构
字数控制：100词左右，约5-6句话，每句概括一个核心点
2. 常见错误规避
错误类型 案例 修正建议
照搬原句 Climate change is a pressing issue. 替换为The passage addresses the critical issue of climate change.
遗漏要点 只写原因，忽略解决措施 确保覆盖“问题-原因-措施”结构
时态错误 The author will argue that... 用一般现在时：The author argues that...
3. 高效训练法
三步法练习：
1. 通读原文，标记主题句（通常为首段或各段首句）；
2. 提取关键词（名词、动词、逻辑词）；
3. 用替换词和衔接句重组信息，确保语法正确。
对比分析：将自己的概括与参考答案对比，总结词汇和结构差异。
六、备考资源
1. 真题拆解：分析近5年高考真题概要写作，总结高频话题（如科技、环境、教育）的通用表达；
2. 同义词汇总表：整理50组高频同义替换词（如improve→enhance/boost），每日背诵；
3. 限时训练：每天用15分钟练习一篇概要写作，强化快速提取信息的能力。
关键提醒：概要写作评分核心为“内容完整度”“语言准确度”“逻辑连贯性”，训练时需优先确保覆盖原文所有要点，再追求语言高级表达。
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