（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇（含答案解析）-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习培优专项北师大版

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2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习专项北师大版
（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．时代在进步，科技在发展，我们的生活正在发生着日新月异的变化。你校英文周刊以 “Changes in Our Life” 为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 简述家乡、家庭、学校中的若干变化；
2. 展望未来生活及如何为此努力。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes in Our Life
Many changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
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2．随着科学的进步，社会的发展，未来的生活将会变成什么样子呢？请以“The life in the future”为题写一篇文章，按下列提示完成。
1. 想象一下未来生活会是什么样子；
2. 具体介绍一下未来的生活：很多事情都由电脑和机器人完成。例如：料理家务、购物、看病，孩子们通过网络把课堂搬到家里，人们可以活到200岁等；
3. 为了未来美好的生活，我们现在应该怎么做？80词左右。
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3．某英文报举办“我的家乡”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。
过去 生活条件差，道路狭窄。污染严重，垃圾很多。
现在 生活：住房宽敞明亮；道路宽阔干净； 许多人有自己的汽车；旅游：每年有许多游客； 有许多漂亮的公园，可以享受自然美景； 可以尝到许多当地美食；
将来 希望……（两点）
要求：1、语句通顺，书写整洁。
2、不得出现真实姓名和班级。
The Changes in My Hometown
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4．假设你是陈露，你收到美国好友 Lily的一封信，想了解你对未来学生生活的预测。请认真阅读下面的来信，根据信中内容给她回一封80词左右的信。请注意书写工整，不出现真实个人信息。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chen Lu, How is everything going I’m wondering what students’ life will be like in 50 years. How will they get to school Or will they just study at home. When will they get up and what subjects will they learn What will they do after school There are so many things about future to think about. I really want to know your ideas about students’ life in 50 years. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Lily
Dear Lily,
It’s great to hear from you and I’m doing well.
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Yours,
Chen Lu
5．一系列的“新”已成为大家关注的热词，学校教育也将翻开新的篇章。未来的教室会是什么样呢？请你以“My Dream Classroom”为题，根据思维导图提示写一篇英语短文，向同学们介绍你理想的教室。
My Dream Classroom What will it look like What will make it “new”
How will the students study
What do you think of the dream classroom
注意：1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80字左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人真实信息，否则不予评分。
My Dream Classroom
Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my dream classroom to you.
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6．地庶业旺山水在鉴，湘西巨变心秤可衡。近年来，我们的家乡湘西发生了翻天覆地的变化。请以“Great Changes in Xiangxi”为题谈论近年来湘西的变化，并说说你的感受。
过去 1. 生活艰难，房屋破旧…… 2. 道路狭窄，河流不干净…… 3. 交通不便，游客很少……
现在 1. 生活：居住条件更好；许多家庭有自己的汽车。 2. 环境：政府采取行动改善环境，空气更新鲜，河流比以前干净多了。 3. 交通：高铁开通，飞机场建成，交通更加便利，每年有成千上万来自各地的游客。 ……
将来 请你展望家乡的未来（至少2点）。
参考词汇：生活艰难 live a hard life；狭窄的 narrow；方便的 convenient；居住条件 living condition高铁 high-speed railway；飞机场 airport
要求：
1. 包含以上要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，语意连贯；
2. 不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Great Changes in Xiangxi
In the past few years, great changes have taken place in my hometown Xiangxi. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．假定你是李华，为庆祝中华人民共和国成立75周年，你校将举办主题为“展开时光画卷，共绘盛世华章”的双语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：
1. 回顾过去 (①交通； ②……) ；
2.描述现在 (同上)；
3.展望未来。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
Good morning. I am honored to deliver a speech on the topic of “The Great Development of Our Motherland”. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
8．某英文报社正在就“中学生是否应该带手机进校园”这一话题进行征稿。假如你是李华，请你用英文写一篇文章向报社投稿，简单介绍你对手机的看法，并说明你对此话题的观点并说明原因
提示词语： useful, popular, call, receive messages, waste time, properly
提示问题：
·What do you think of mobile phones
·Do you think it is good for middle school students to bring mobile phones to school
·Why
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9．假定你是李华，你校本届英语节活动正在举办主题为“畅想未来生活”的短视频作品征集活动。请根据下面的提示，为你的视频配一段英文解说词。
畅想未来生活
1. 总述 更智能， 更便利。
2. 具体描述 学习方式， 请举例说明。
日常出行， 请举例说明。
3. 感想 ……
要求：
1. 要点齐全，可以适当增加细节；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
4. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Welcome to my video about the future world.
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This is the the future world in my mind. Are you looking forward to it
10．阅读理解A篇提及的智能家居展中有很多给生活助力的AI 产品。人工智能(AI)的崛起对我们的生活产生了重大影响。假如你是李明，学校的英语杂志正在开展以“人工智能与我们的生活”为主题的征文活动，请你就这个主题进行英文投稿，结合以下思维导图写一篇80词左右的短文。
参考词汇：product 产品；convenience 便利；advantage 优点； disadvantage 缺点。
注意：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名；
2. 包含表格所有要点，并发表自己的观点；
3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As we all know, AI has changed our life greatly.
With the development of science and technology, we can see different kinds of AI products in our daily life.
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11．在乡村振兴背景下，新时代农村发展日新月异，美丽乡村建设也步入了快车道。某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示，以“The changes in my hometown”为题，谈谈你家乡的变化。
The changes in my hometown
过去 现在 将来
生活贫困，房屋破旧。 污染严重，垃圾遍地。 交通不便，游客很少。 住房宽敞明亮，许多人有了自己的汽车。 山更绿了，水更清了，天更蓝了。 每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客。 请你展望家乡的未来。
注意：（1）文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；
（2）使用 正确的时态 让书写美观，条理清晰，层次分明；
（3）文中请勿使用真实人名，校名和地名；
（4）词数：80词左右。
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12．芳菲四月，春和景明。众多学生在清明小长假期间回乡祭祖，踏青赏花。请你帮助李华完成他的假期日志。
An unforgettable holiday
第一天 回乡祭祖，感受家乡变化……（举例说明）
第二天 旅游踏青，参观风景名胜……（举例说明）
第三天 徜徉书海，阅读经典名著……（适当发挥）
参考词汇：祭祖pay respect to ancestors
注意事项：（1）内容必须包括表格中的要点，并适当发挥；
（2）词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
An unforgettable holiday
The three-day Qingming holiday was unforgettable.
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13．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike对中国文化很感兴趣。这次他想在五一假期来中国温州游玩，请你给他写一封信，分享你的经历并介绍一两个游玩点（可介绍其特点，游玩交通方式等等）。
要求：
1. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
2. 100词左右。
3. 开头已经给出，不计入词汇。
参考词汇：visit places of interest, try local food....
Dear Mike,
May Day is coming.
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．今年暑假很多同学都有自己的假期计划，假设你叫李华，请根据以下提示，以“My summer holiday plan”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你暑假即将做的事。内容包括：
1. 在家帮父母做家务，如：洗衣服、煮饭等；
2. 每天做一些作业、看书；
3. 和朋友进行户外运动，如：踢足球、做游戏等；
4. 在暑假期间，和父母一起去看望爷爷奶奶，一起吃饭……。
要求：
1. 内容必须包含要点中的所有信息；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露个人信息；
4. 词数 80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：wash clothes (洗衣服), summer holiday (暑假), in the open air (在户外), together (一起)
My summer holiday plan
Hello, everyone, I’m Li Hua.
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15．五一假日即将来临，如何度过这个假日，家长们和孩子们有着各自的想法。请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文，并将其发表到你校的英文论坛上。
parents children your opinions
take after-school classes do housework … take a break go on a trip volunteer… …
要求：
1. 以上表格信息必须阐述，可以根据内容适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于70，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等。
Parents and kids have different opinions about how to spend the May Day holiday.
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16．假如你是李华。去年暑假你和家人一起去乡下的爷爷奶奶家。请以My Vacation为题写一篇短文。字数80词左右。
1. 乡下的空气很好，天气也不错；
2. 你和爷爷去爬山、钓鱼，和堂弟去游泳，奶奶每天都给你做好吃的；
3. 你们过得很愉快。
要求：
1. 内容必须包括所有提示信息；。
2. 条理清晰，可以进行合理拓展使文章连贯。
My Vacation
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17．寒假即将来临，你有那些计划和安排呢？假如你是李华，请你给英国朋友Jack写一封信，告诉他你的假期安排。
去年寒假 待在家里看电视、玩电脑游戏
今年的寒假计划 至少读完三本书； 学会游泳，而且每周锻炼身体三次； 每周看一部英语电影，提高英语水平； 帮父母做家务。
要求：1.包含表格中所有要点,可以适当发挥；
2.70词左右（开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数）。
Dear Jack,
The winter vacation is coming soon.
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What’s your plan for the winter vacation I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
18．假如你是刘璐，刚刚收到了你的笔友Jim的来信。他想知道你是如何过春节的。请你根据以下信息，给他写一封回信，简单说一说过春节的意义，并邀请他明年来中国过年。
写作要点：
1．过除夕的心情。
2．过春节的具体情况：
（1）春节前：你在业余时间帮忙做家务；
（2）春节期间：给爷爷奶奶等亲戚拜年。
3．说一说过春节的意义。
Dear Jim,
How is everything going
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Liulu
19．假如你是Li Hua, 前段时间结识了新笔友John，临近开学，你想写一封邮件给他描述你的寒假生活以及你在新学期的计划，请围绕这两个话题完成一封英文邮件。
要求：
1.内容不定，按照自身实际情况自由发挥。
2. 80词左右 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。)
3. 不得出现真实人名。
(提示：new term 新学期)
Dear John,
I had a wonderful winter vacation
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Looking forward to your e-mail.
Yours,
Li Hua
20．暑假即将来临，很多同学已经开始计划如何度过一个有意义的暑假。假如你是李华，请你以“How to Spend a Safe and Meaningful Holiday”为话题，给你的好友Mike写封信，要点如下：
1.尝试做一些志愿者工作（举例说明做什么志愿者工作），通过志愿者工作提高自立能力(develop one’s independence)。
2.保护(protect)自己，远离(keep away from)河流等危险的地方。
3.多读书，锻炼，强健体魄。
4.帮父母干家务活。
注意：
1. 字迹工整，词数90—100词。
2.可适当发挥使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
4.开头结尾已给出不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How are you going I am writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How will you spend your holiday I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Changes in Our Life
Many changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
In my hometown, many paths have become wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old houses. Today they can not only learn from books but also through computers.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder now so that I can realize my dream.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”。描述现在的变化用一般现在时，展望未来用一般将来时。
③提示：考生需注意涵盖家乡、家庭、学校中的变化，且不能遗漏要点；同时要对未来生活合理展望并提及努力方向，适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步：开篇点题，承接给出的开头句，表明生活发生诸多变化。
②第二步：具体阐述变化。从家乡、家庭、学校几个方面描述变化。
③第三步：展望未来并表明努力决心。如表达对未来美好生活的期待，以及阐述自己当下为实现目标如何努力。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②as a result因此
③instead of代替，而不是
④not only...but also...不但……而且……
⑤in the future在未来
[高分句型]
①Many changes have taken place in our life in the past few years. (现在完成时表示过去到现在的变化)
②People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. (used to do...but now... 结构，对比过去和现在)
③I will study much harder now so that I can realize my dream. (so that引导目的状语从句)
2．例文
The life in the future
In the future, life will be very different from what it is today. With the development of science and society, many things will change for the better.
Imagine a world where computers and robots do most of the work. They will take care of our houses, do the shopping, and even help us see doctors. Children won’t need to go to school. They can study at home through the Internet. What’s more, because of medical advances, people may live to be 200 years old!
To enjoy such a wonderful life in the future, we need to work hard now. We should study science and technology to make these dreams come true. At the same time, we must learn to use technology wisely and protect our environment. Only in this way can we ensure a bright future for ourselves and generations to come.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章需围绕三个核心点展开：对未来生活的想象、具体描述未来生活场景、以及当前为实现未来美好生活应采取的行动。考生应确保覆盖所有提示要点，同时保持逻辑清晰，内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇即提出主题，以此引出对未来生活的探讨。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先，概述未来生活的总体想象；接着，详细介绍未来的生活场景；
第三步，书写结语。强调当前行动的重要性，提出对未来美好生活的展望。
[亮点词汇]
①be different from与……不同
②for the better向更好的方向发展
③take care of照顾
④medical advances医学进步
[高分句型]
Imagine a world where computers and robots do most of the work. (定语从句)
3．
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.
Now great changes have taken place in myhometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍家乡过去的状况和现在的变化，并提出对未来的希望。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①live a poor life过着贫穷的生活
②take place发生
③from all over the world来自世界各地
④thousands of 成千上万
[高分句型]
①The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here. (并列句)
②I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future. (宾语从句)
4．例文
Dear Lily,
It’s great to hear from you and I’m doing well. I believe that students’ life in 50 years will be quite different from what it is now. They might go to school by using flying cars or perhaps study at home through virtual classrooms. I imagine they will start their day later, maybe around 9 a.m., and have a curriculum that includes subjects like robotics, space exploration, and environmental science. After school, students might take part in activities such as virtual reality sports or online club meetings. The future holds so many exciting possibilities!
Yours,
Chen Lu
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容预测未来学生的生活，包括上学方式、起床时间、学习科目、放学后活动等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达回复信件；
第二步，预测未来学生的上学方式、起床时间、学习科目、课后活动等。
[亮点词汇]
①virtual classrooms 虚拟教室
②curriculum 课程
③virtual reality sports 虚拟现实运动
[高分句型]
①I believe that students’ life in 50 years will be quite different from what it is now.（宾语从句）
②I imagine they will start their day later, maybe around 9 a.m., and have a curriculum that includes subjects like robotics, space exploration, and environmental science.（宾语从句，定语从句）
5．例文
My Dream Classroom
Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my dream classroom to you.
It will be a large and bright room with large windows and plenty of natural light. The walls will be painted in calming colors like blue and green. What makes it “new” is the advanced technology it will have. There will be interactive whiteboards, tablets for each student, and virtual reality headsets for immersive learning experiences. Students will study in a more engaging and interactive way, using these tools to explore subjects in depth. I believe this dream classroom will make learning more enjoyable and effective for everyone.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你理想中教室的外观；
第二步，介绍教室中使其“新”的先进技术；
第三步，说明学生将如何利用这些技术进行学习；
第四步，表达你对理想教室的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①large and bright 宽敞明亮
②natural light 自然光
③interactive whiteboards 互动白板
④virtual reality headsets 虚拟现实头戴设备
⑤immersive learning experiences 沉浸式学习体验
[高分句型]
①I believe this dream classroom will make learning more enjoyable and effective for everyone. (省略that的宾语从句)
②Students will study in a more engaging and interactive way, using these tools to explore subjects in depth. (现在分词作状语)
6．例文
Great Changes in Xiangxi
In the past few years, great changes have taken place in my hometown Xiangxi. Here are some changes.
In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a hard life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was serious and there was rubbish everywhere. The rivers were so dirty that few fish lived there. The roads were narrow and the traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People’s living conditions are becoming better and better. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. The government has taken action to improve the environment, so the air is fresher and the rivers are much cleaner than before. What’s more, the traffic in Xiangxi becomes more convenient because there is an airport, a high-speed railway station and several super highways. Evey year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit Xiangxi.
In the future, I’m sure there will be more trees, flowers and grass in my hometown. The environment will be better and better. I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful. There will be more tourists coming to our hometown. I love my hometown.
【解析】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格中的要点提示，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山，引出话题：家乡发生了巨大变化；
第二步，描述家乡过去的情况；
第三步，描述家乡现在的情况；
第四步，畅想未来。
［亮点词汇］
① take place 发生
② take action 采取行动
［高分句型］
① In the future, I’m sure there will be more trees, flowers and grass in my hometown. (宾语从句、there will be)
② The rivers were so dirty that few fish lived there. (so…that引导结果状语从句)
7．例文
Dear teachers and fellow students,
Good morning. I am honored to deliver a speech on the topic of “The Great Development of Our Motherland”.
In ancient China, transportation relied heavily on the uses of horses and carriages which were very inconvenient. In recent decades, China has witnessed a transportation revolution with the rapid expansion of its road and air networks. The construction of modern highways and high-speed railways has significantly reduced travel time and improved connectivity between cities. In the long history of the past, people communicated with people who were far from them only by letters. Now a great number of people communicate with others on the Internet. In short, there are various communication methods in modern world, which bring great convenience to people.
Looking into the future of China, I see a country that is rapidly developing and moderning.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍演讲主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍了过去和现在祖国的一些变化；
第三步，书写结语，展望未来。
[亮点词汇]
①rely on依赖
②a great number of大量
③in short总之
[高分句型]
①In the long history of the past, people communicated with people who were far from them only by letters. (who引导的定语从句)
②In short, there are various communication methods in modern world, which bring great convenience to people. (there be句型)
8．One possible version:
Mobile phones are becoming more and more useful and popular in the world. We can not only use them to send text messages to our friends but also call our parents when we are far away from our home. Besides, we can receive messages no matter what we are doing.
In my opinion, it is not good for middle school students to bring mobile phones to school. That is because most students like to chat online. So if they spend more time sending text messages or chatting with their friends online, they will not have enough time to study. And some students can’t even listen to their teachers carefully in class because they often check their phones.
In a word, we should use mobile phones properly.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明观点，介绍你觉得手机怎么样；
第二步，介绍你对中学生把手机带到学校的看法；
第三步，介绍原因。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more越来越
②no matter what无论如何
③be good for有益于
[高分句型]
①We can not only use them to send text messages to our friends but also call our parents when we are far away from our home.（not only…but also…不但……而且……）
②So if they spend more time sending text messages or chatting with their friends online, they will not have enough time to study.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③And some students can’t even listen to their teachers carefully in class because they often check their phones.（because引导的原因状语从句）
9．例文
Welcome to my video about the future world. With the development of science and technology, our lives will be smarter and more convenient.
Firstly, future learning will be very different. With VR glasses, students will be able to do scientific experiments in a more interactive and inspiring way. Robot teachers will always be there to answer questions and offer help.
Secondly, when we want to go out, a new type of hydrogen car will be a great choice. It will not only drive at a high speed, but also be environmentally friendly, reducing pollution and saving energy.
Future life will be full of possibilities. With smarter learning tools and eco-friendly transportation, we will lead much more comfortable and easier lives.
This is the future world in my mind. Are you looking forward to it
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“为‘畅想未来生活’的视频进行英文解说”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍解说的主题内容是什么；
第二步，根据题干表格提示，具体描述未来生活的几个方面，并举例说明；
第三步，给出自己的感想，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be able to do能够做某事
②go out外出
[高分句型]
①Secondly, when we want to go out, a new type of hydrogen car will be a great choice.（when引导时间状语从句）
②It will not only drive at a high speed, but also be environmentally friendly, reducing pollution and saving energy.（not only…but also）
10．例文
As we all know, AI has changed our life greatly.
With the development of science and technology, we can see different kinds of AI products in our daily life. For example, smart phones can make work and study more efficient while the sweeping robots can help us do chores so that we can have more time to do other things. The advantage of AI products is that they all bring great convenience and progress to our society. However, with AI technology being widely used, we are sorry to see that many workers have lost their jobs. Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they have trouble in dealing with problems independently.
All in all, just as the saying goes, each coin has two sides. AI products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use AI in a correct way, it will bring us more convenient life in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料文，为说明文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中人工智能的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“人工智能产品、人工智能的利与弊；对人工智能的态度等”几个方面重点介绍人工智能的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②so that以便于
③rely on依赖
④deal with处理
[高分句型]
①The advantage of AI products is that they all bring great convenience and progress to our society. (that引导的表语从句)
②However, with AI technology being widely used, we are sorry to see that many workers have lost their jobs. (with的复合结构)
11．例文
The Changes In My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small, and people lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to our city.
I’m sure it will get richer and more beautiful in the future. I love my hometown.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍了家乡过去的状况；
第二步，描述家乡现在的变化；
第三步，展望家乡的未来，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②all over the world全世界
③in the future在未来
[高分句型]
①The mountains have turned greener, the rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer. (and并列句)
②I’m sure it will get richer and more beautiful in the future. (宾语从句)
12．例文
An unforgettable holiday
The three-day Qingming holiday was unforgettable.
On the first day, I went back to my hometown to pay respect to my ancestors. I noticed many changes there—new roads were built and the environment became cleaner. Then we visited my grandparents’ old house which was well preserved. The next day, my family visited a famous mountain nearby. We climbed to the top and enjoyed the beautiful cherry blossoms. There was also an ancient temple where we learned about local history. Finally, I spent a whole day reading Journey to the West. The Monkey King’s adventures fascinated me. I realized teamwork is important when facing difficulties.
This holiday gave me both family warmth and knowledge growth.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日志；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，作文开头已给出，应领悟首句内容衔接好下文；
第二步，根据提示材料，分别写出三天的行程和感受；
第三步，总结上文，表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①go back to回到……
②spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
③both...and...既……又……
[高分句型]
①There was also an ancient temple where we learned about local history. （where引导定语从句）
②I realized teamwork is important when facing difficulties. （省略that宾语从句）
13．Dear Mike,
May Day is coming. I’m so glad you’ll visit Wenzhou! It’s really interesting here. Let me tell you about two cool places.
First, there’s Jiangxin Island. It’s in the middle of the river. You can see an old temple there, which is very quiet and nice. To get there, you can take a ferry. The ferry ride is fun.
Second, there’s Wuma Street. It’s a busy street. You can find lots of yummy local food, like stinky tofu. You can walk around and have a great time. You can take a bus or a taxi to get to Wuma Street.
I hope you’ll love Wenzhou. Have a good trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一封写给笔友的书信，目的是介绍温州的游玩地点。
②时态：以一般现在时为主，用于描述景点的一般特征、交通方式等客观情况。
③提示：根据要求，需要介绍一两个温州的游玩点，包括其特点和到达的交通方式。写作过程中需遵循书信格式，避免透露真实个人信息，控制词数在 100 词左右。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇对 Mike 要来温州游玩表示高兴。
第二步，详细介绍江心屿，阐述其位于江心的位置特点，以及岛上有古老寺庙、环境静谧等，说明可乘坐渡轮前往。
第三步，介绍五马街，突出它是热闹的街道，有很多当地美食，说明可乘坐公交或出租车到达。
第四步，结尾表达对 Mike 游玩体验的期待。
【亮点词汇】①yummy 美味的
②ferry 渡轮
③busy 热闹的
【高分句型】①You can see an old temple there, which is very quiet and nice.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②You can find lots of yummy local food, like stinky tofu.（like 在此处用于举例）
14．例文
My summer holiday plan
Hello, everyone, I’m Li Hua. This summer holiday, I plan to do many things. At home, I’ll help my parents with housework, like washing clothes and cooking. Every day, I’ll do my homework and read some interesting books. I also want to play outdoor sports with my friends, such as playing football and games. During the holiday, I’ll visit my grandparents with my parents and have meals together. I believe it will be a wonderful summer holiday.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：文章主要描述的是未来的计划，因此主要使用一般将来时。
③提示：文章需要根据题目给出的四个要点进行写作，包括在家做家务、每天学习和阅读、与朋友进行户外运动以及与家人一起去看望爷爷奶奶。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据题目给出的开头，简要介绍自己的姓名和暑假的总体计划；
第二步，详细描述暑假的每个计划；
第三步，表达对家人的爱和期待。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do 计划做
②such as 例如
③during the holiday 在假期期间
[高分句型]
①I also want to play outdoor sports with my friends, such as playing football and games.（举例说明）
②I believe it will be a wonderful summer holiday.（宾语从句）
15．例文
How to Spend the May Day Holiday
Parents and kids have different opinions about how to spend the May Day holiday. Many parents want their children to take after-school classes or do housework, believing it’s a good time to study or learn life skills. However, most children hope to take a break, go on a trip, or volunteer, as they want to relax and explore the world.
In my opinion, holidays should be a balance of work and fun. Kids need rest and enjoyable activities after busy school days, but they can also learn useful things, like helping with housework or volunteering. A short trip with family could be a great way to relax and bond together.
What’s your idea Share your thoughts below!
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要运用“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开头指出五一假期中家长和孩子在如何度过上存在不同意见，引出文章要讨论的核心话题——五一假期的安排。
第二步，具体阐述。先分别详细说明家长和孩子的不同观点，让读者了解双方的想法；再阐述自己对于假期安排的见解。
第三步，书写结语。以询问读者想法的方式结尾，鼓励读者参与讨论。
［亮点词汇］
①May Day Holiday 五一假期
②opinion 观点
③take after-school classes 参加课外课程
④housework 家务
⑤life skills 生活技能
⑥take a break 休息一下
⑦go on a trip 去旅行
⑧volunteer 做志愿者
⑨explore 探索
⑩in one’s opinion 在某人看来
balance 平衡
rest 休息
enjoyable 令人愉快的
help with 帮忙做……
bond 增强（与某人的）感情
［高分句型］
①Many parents want their children to take after-school classes or do housework, believing it’s a good time to study or learn life skills.（宾语从句）
②However, most children hope to take a break, go on a trip, or volunteer, as they want to relax and explore the world.（as引导原因状语从句）
16．例文
My Vacation I remember my last summer vacation. My family and I went to see my grandparents in the countryside. The air there was fresh and the weather was good, too. I went to the mountains and went fishing with my grandfather. And I went swimming with my cousin. My grandmother cooked delicious food for us every day. We had a great time．
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍难忘的暑假和父母去看望乡村的爷爷和奶奶；
第二步，根据提示材料，具体介绍在乡村如何度过的，体验乡村清新的空气和奶奶做的美食；
第三步，总结上文，表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①in the countryside在乡村
②went to the mountains去爬山
③went swimming with my cousin和堂弟去游泳
④had a great time玩得很开心
[高分句型]
The air there was fresh and the weather was good, too. (and连接的并列句)
17．例文
Dear Jack，
The winter vacation is around the corner. Last holiday, I just stayed at home to watch TV and play computer games. It was meaningless. For this time, I make the meaningful plans. First, I am going to read at least three books. I’m going to learn to swim and exercise three times a week. In order to improve my English, I plan to watch an English movie every week. I also plan to help my parents with the housework.
What’s your plan for the winter vacation I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题,简单介绍去年寒假所做的事情。
第二步，介绍今年的寒假计划。
第三步，书写结语，表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①stay at home待在家里
②play computer games玩电脑游戏
③at least至少
④three times a week一周三次
[高分句型]
①Last holiday, I just stayed at home to watch TV and play computer games.（and连接的动词短语）
②In order to improve my English, I plan to watch an English movie every week.（in order to引导的目的状语）
18．范文
Dear Jim,
How is everything going I’m so glad to hear from you! Let me tell you how I celebrate the Spring Festival.
Before the festival, I usually help my family with housework in my free time. On New Year’s Eve, I feel excited and happy, as it’s the most important night for our family. We have a big family dinner, and everyone gathers together to celebrate. During the festival, I visit my grandparents and other relatives to wish them a happy new year. We eat delicious food and enjoy each other’s company.
The Spring Festival is a time for family reunion and honoring our traditions. It’s a special time for all of us to celebrate together, share love and happiness, and look forward to a better year.
I hope you can come to China next year to celebrate the Spring Festival with us! I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Liulu
【总体分析】① 题材：本文是一封书信作文；
② 时态：文章主要使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据题目要求，介绍春节前后的活动以及春节的意义，并邀请Jim来中国过年。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头问候Jim并表达感谢；
第二步，描述春节前后的具体活动，包括帮助做家务和拜年等；
第三步，解释春节的意义，强调团聚和传统；
第四步，邀请Jim来中国过春节，表达对他到来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① hear from 收到……信
② help sb with sth 帮某人做某事。
③ look forward to 盼望
④ have a wonderful time 玩的开心
[高分句型]
① On New Year’s Eve, I feel excited and happy, as it’s the most important night for our family. (原因状语从句)
② It’s a special time for all of us to celebrate together, share love and happiness, and look forward to a better year.（It作形式主语）
19．例文
Dear John,
I had a wonderful winter vacation. During the holidays, I spent time reading books and visited my grandparents in the countryside. I also played badminton with my friends and celebrated the Spring Festival with my family. As for the new term, I plan to focus more on my studies, especially in math and English. I also want to join the school’s music club to learn the guitar.
Looking forward to your e-mail.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍自己的寒假生活和新学期的计划；
第三步，期待对方回复并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in the countryside在农村
②plan to do sth计划做某事
[高分句型]
①As for the new term, I plan to focus more on my studies, especially in math and English.（不定式作宾语）
20．例文
Dear Mike,
How are you going I am writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday.
Firstly, I plan to try some volunteer work, like cleaning up the city parks or visiting the old to cheer them up. I believe through the volunteer work, I can develop my independence. Secondly, I will keep away from the dangerous places like rives and remember to protect myself. What’s more, I think it’s necessary to develop my body and mind. So I will read more books and get more exercise. Also, I plan to help my parents share the housework, because it’s also my duty to make our home clean and comfortable. I think my holiday will be colorful.
How will you spend your holiday I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要是一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，仔细阅读所给内容；
第二步，具体介绍你的暑假计划；
第三步，询问Mike的暑假计划。
[亮点词汇]
①independence自立
②keep away from远离
③necessary有必要的
④duty责任
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I think it’s necessary to develop my body and mind.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Also, I plan to help my parents share the housework, because it’s also my duty to make our home clean and comfortable.（because引导的原因状语从句）
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