（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇（含答案解析）-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习培优专项鲁教版（五四学制）
文档属性
| 名称 | （期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇（含答案解析）-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习培优专项鲁教版（五四学制） |  | |
| 格式 | docx | ||
| 文件大小 | 322.0KB | ||
| 资源类型 | 试卷 | ||
| 版本资源 | 鲁教版 | ||
| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2025-04-22 17:46:39 | ||
图片预览
文档简介
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习专项鲁教版（五四学制）
（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．Jack 是你的好朋友，在某些方面你们有相似之处，在另一方面，你们也有很多不同之处。
写作要求：
1.根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍你和你的朋友。
2.要求适当分段：语句通顺，逻辑连贯：可适当发挥。
3.字数： 90词左右 （开头已给， 不计入总词数）。
相同点 不同点
外貌和性格 外向而友好 Jack 比你高比你瘦
饮食和习惯 每个月吃1-2次垃圾食品 Jack 早睡早起；你常常熬夜，难得运动。
兴趣和爱好 喜欢相互帮助和一起阅读最喜欢 Blue Moon电影院及一条喜欢去的理由（使用比较或最高级）。 Jack 最喜欢动作电影，因为…… 你最喜欢……（电视节目类型），因为……
Jack is my best friend, now I’d like to introduce my best friend and me.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．你校新来的外教Tony想通过问卷了解学生的生活习惯。问卷中有关于你喜欢的食品、你的睡眠状况、空余时间的安排、个人清洁和运动等方面的问题。请你根据以下问卷问题用英文向 Tony作详细介绍。
Something about your lifestyle.
What do you think of your lifestyle
How should you improve your lifestyle
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数90词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’d like to introduce my lifestyle to you.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好，兴趣爱好对学生的成长至关重要。请阅读下面表格，并根据表格里内容提示，用英语写一篇是有关Tom的信息和爱好的短文。
年龄：13 学校：第九中学
爱好：收藏篮球，目前为止，已经收藏了5个篮球…… 理由：…… 梦想：成为一名体育明星
要求：1．词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2．合理增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Hello, everyone! I’d like to introduce my friend Tom for you.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假如你是Jim，你在海报上看到学生中心在招募志愿者的消息。每逢周末，你也想去帮助有需要的人，因为这既能锻炼自己，又能回报社会。请写一封信，申请一份你喜欢的志愿者工作。
内容包括：
1.你想去什么地方做志愿，志愿工作的内容是什么？
2.你的情况（年龄，兴趣爱好，性格等）以及你能胜任这份工作的原因（两点及以上）。
3.表达想要成为志愿者的愿景。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，80词左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear sir or madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Jim
5．作为新时代的中学生，我们要懂礼仪、有公德、有爱心，有理想。你的同班同学李明就是这样的一个人，请你根据以下信息写一篇100字左右的短文介绍李明，并号召全校学生向他学习。
懂礼仪 遇见同学老师问好，认为含食说话是粗鲁的。
有公德 总是排队等候，不插队；公共场所从不大声喧哗乱丢垃圾；如挡路，说抱歉；在公交车上主动给有需要的人让座。
有爱心 常参加慈善活动，是援助之手俱乐部成员；上学期组织了慈善演出为贫困孩子筹集资金；
有理想 梦想成为一名医生，理由：……（至少两条）
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．Tom上周做了一次演讲。在演讲中他感到紧张，不知道说什么。他给校杂志社的编辑写信求助如何做演讲。假如你是那位编辑，请给Tom写一封80词左右的回信。要求语法正确，句意通顺，逻辑关系合理，书写工整。
Dear Tom,
How are you going
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Editor
7．“绿城”南宁是广西的首府，近年来越来越多的外国学生到南宁旅游，因此南宁旅游局将选拔中学生旅游形象大使。假如你是李丽，想参加竞选，请根据以下表格内容，给该项目的负责人Mr. Wang写一封英文自荐信。
你的外貌 高个子，……
你的性格 友好的，……
你擅长的方面 说英语，讲故事，……
你可以做的事情 介绍当地文化，帮助外国人，……
写作要求：
1、内容必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2、意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3、文中不得透露个人信息；
4、词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：旅游形象大使tourism ambassabo，合适的suitable，介绍introduce，文化culture
Dear Mr. Wang,
Thanks for taking time to read my letter. My name is Li Li.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Li
8．过去这一段时间同学们都有了很大的变化和收获。Jack是你班上的一名同学，这学期他也变化了很多，学习进步很大，请根据下面表格提供的信息用英语写篇短文，向同学介绍Jack的变化以及他对未来的打算。
过去 现在
学习 大部分业余时间花在……；讨厌看书，认为…… 认真学习；热爱读书，因为……；每天花……读书；最喜欢看……，觉得……
环保 浪费水电，…… (自拟一至两点) 意识到环保的重要性
娱乐 喜欢下象棋，…… 热爱旅游，参观风景名胜；图书馆借书，和朋友们讨论读什么
爱心 不知道如何关心他人 ……
要求：
1. 100词左右，短文的开头已写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：浪费waste；电electricity
During the past few months, many classmates have changed a lot.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．One’s destination(目的地) is never a place, but a new way of seeing things. ——Henry Miller.
请以“Enjoy travel, enjoy life”为题写篇短文，分享你的某次旅行经历及对旅行的看法。
内容要点：
1.旅行地的介绍：你游玩了哪些景点、有没有印象最深的活劫、品尝了当地的什么美食……
2.对这次经历的感悟，如旅行的注意事项或意义等；
3.下一站计划去哪里 为什么
注意：
1.词数90左右，已经给出的部分不计入总词数；
2.短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实人名。
Enjoy Travel, Enjoy Life
Last summer, I went to
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．学校今年将开展暑期志愿者活动。假如你是Simon，你想和同学John利用暑假在儿童福利院做一些志愿者工作。请根据以下表格信息，以“Volunteering”为题，写一篇英语作文，谈谈你们的爱好、梦想，以及你们将要做的志愿者工作。
要点：
Names Simon John
students from No. 2 Middle School
Free time this summer holiday
Place a children’s home
Activities 1. 读故事； 2. 打扫卫生； 3. 一起唱歌、跳舞、做游戏； 4. ……
Feelings …
要求：
1. 词数80词以上；
2. 字迹工整，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．假如你是初二的学生李华，你酷爱足球，打算长大后成为专业的（professional）足球运动员。但你的父母认为花大量时间在足球上，就考不上好高中。请你给父母写一封信，和他们沟通，表达你对他们的理解，同时提出你的想法和解决办法。
要求：
1. 短文需包含所给提示，可适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文章中不得出现真实人名、校名。
Dear Mom and Dad,
I’d like to tell you how I feel these days.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Ho
12．过去的2023年是不平凡的一年，每个人都得到过社会的帮助，我们应该懂得感恩与回报。学校计划组织一次“走进社区，做一天志愿者(going into community and being a volunteer for one day)”活动。请根据以下所给信息，以“One-day Voluntary Work”为题写一篇短文向同学们介绍这一活动。
要点如下：
活动时间、地点：光明社区，下周日上午8:30在学校门口集合，乘公交车去光明社区(Guangming Community)
活动内容：
1. 分发口罩，捐赠物资(如生活必需品)
2. 给老人们表演节目，带来欢乐；教小孩做剪纸，了解中国文化
3. …… (自行补充一点)
4. 活动很有教育意义，呼吁同学积极参加。
注意事项：
1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章须包含所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥；行文连贯，条理清晰。
参考词汇： masks口罩； daily necessities生活必需品
One-day Voluntary Work
As middle it school students, we should be thankful to people who have helped us.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．假设你是李老师，你的学生Jammy通过班级选拔赛下周将代表学校参加南山区第十一届英语演讲比赛，主题是“I’m a spokesperson of Chinese Culture”。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一封邮件，告诉他演讲时应该注意的事项。
要点：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 注意： ①保持微笑；②与听众眼神交流，但避免一直盯着他人；③……；
3. 给与鼓励并表达期待。
Dear Jammy,
I know you will take part in an English speech contest next week.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Ms Lee
14．假如你是中学生李华，学校正在招募中学生亚冬会（Asian Winter Games）宣传（promote v.、promotion n.）志愿者，负责向中外游客解读2025年哈尔滨亚冬会比赛项目和比赛规则。你想申请成为一名志愿者，请给学校写一封申请信，并谈一谈你将如何做好志愿工作。
写作要点：
1、激动的心情
2、你的优势：
（1）了解冰雪运动
（2）良好的沟通能力
3、谈一谈你将如何做好志愿工作。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。
2.适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear sir/madam,
I hope this letter finds you well
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
15．一百、一千、一万……即使有再多的零，没有了一，一切都归零。在我们的生活中，如果没有了健康，财富、地位等一切也都失去了意义。请以“Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，参照下图的信息，用英语写一篇80词左右的文章。
注意：1. 书写清晰、字迹工整、行文流畅，语句通顺。
2. 包含所给内容，并适当拓展补充。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16．健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以“How to Keep Healthy ”为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。
要求：
1.文章必须包含以下表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥；
2.不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息；
3.词数80左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
should（√） shouldn’t（×）
do sports every day keep a balanced diet eat fruit and vegetables have enough sleep keep happy … refuse to exercise have junk food stay up too late play computer games a lot sit for a long time …
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, if we follow these ways, each of us will have a healthy body.
17．随着我国各方面高质量发展，我们愈发觉得未来可期，无论是国家还是个人，只有自己足够强大，才能不被外界所牵制。请以“How to Be a Better Self”为题写一篇短文，谈谈作为中学生，我们要怎样做才能让自己变得优秀与自信。
提示：努力学习；助人为乐；强身健体；……
要求：
1. 短文必须包括上述所有提示要点，并适当拓展；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 字迹工整、规范。
How to Be a Better Self
Where there is a country, there is a home. As a student, I think what I can do for my country is to make myself a better man.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18．扶危助贫一直是中华民族的传统美德，支持慈善是每个人都应该做的。下周学校英语俱乐部将举办题为“Let’s support charity ”的演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。
要点提示：1. Why should we support charities
2. How can we support charity
3. How do we feel
具体要求：（1）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
（2）词数：90词左右；（文章开头已给出，不计入总数。）
（3）内容须涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Let’s support charity
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about supporting charity here.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
19．假设你是李华，最近呼吸道传染病流行，请你根据提示，以“How to prevent the virus”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈我们怎样预防呼吸道传染病毒。
提示：
1. wash our hands often;
2. wear masks (口罩)
3. do some sports, such as...;
4. eat healthy food and drink more water;
……
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写公正；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、学校和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于80词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。
How to prevent the virus
I am sorry to hear that many people have the virus these days. What should we do to prevent it
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
20．今年4月22号是世界地球日，珍爱地球、人与自然和谐相处是今年的主题。节约资源，保护环境是每个公民义不容辞的责任，作为中学生的我们应从学校、家庭入手，从我做起，从小事做起，让家和学校更环保，更美丽。
Write at least 60 words on the topic “Things I can do to make my ________ greener and more beautiful”
（请以“我可以做些什么让我的________更环保更美丽”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。）Use the following points as a reference.（以下问题仅供参考）
1．What resources can you save
2．What can you do to protect the environment
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
参考答案及试题解析
1． 例文
Jack is my best friend, now I’d like to introduce my best friend and me.
We have several similarities. Both of us are outgoing and friendly, so we can easily make friends. In terms of diet, we eat junk food only once or twice a month as we know it’s unhealthy. Also, we love reading together and helping each other. Blue Moon is our favorite cinema because it has the biggest screens, providing an amazing visual experience.
However, we are different in many ways. Jack is taller and thinner than me. He has a healthy lifestyle, going to bed early and getting up early. Conversely, I often stay up late and rarely exercise. When it comes to hobbies, Jack loves action movies best for the exciting fight scenes. I, on the other hand, like talk shows most since they offer me lots of new ideas and make me think.
In conclusion, though we have differences, our friendship remains strong.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：属于人物对比介绍类文章，旨在通过描述自己与朋友 Jack 的异同，展现两人的特点及友谊。
②时态：以一般现在时为主，用于陈述当前两人稳定的外貌、性格、习惯、兴趣爱好等方面的情况。
③提示：给定了明确的相同点和不同点的要点，涵盖外貌性格、饮食和习惯、兴趣爱好等方面。写作时需严格按照要点，适当分段展开，做到语句通顺、逻辑连贯，并可合理发挥，使内容更丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一，开头引入，直接点明写作目的是介绍自己和朋友 Jack，简洁明了，引出下文。
第二部，分别阐述相同点和不同点，包括外貌、性格、饮食习惯、兴趣爱好，给人最直观的形象。
第三部，总结全文，强调尽管两人存在差异，但友谊依然坚固，升华文章主题，使结构完整。
[亮点词汇]
①in terms of就……而言，在……方面
②conversely相反地
③on the other hand另一方面
[高分句型]
①Blue Moon is our favorite cinema because it has the biggest screens, providing an amazing visual experience.（原因状语从句）
②He has a healthy lifestyle, going to bed early and getting up early.（现在分词短语作伴随状语）
③I, on the other hand, like talk shows most since they offer me lots of new ideas and make me think.（since引导原因状语从句）
2．例文
Dear Tony,
I’d like to introduce my lifestyle to you. First, I eat lots of vegetables and fruit, but sometimes enjoy fast food. I sleep 8 hours every night though I occasionally stay up late. I exercise three times a week by running or playing basketball. Besides, I always brush my teeth twice a day and take showers regularly. In my free time, I read books or listen to music. I think my lifestyle is healthy overall, but needs improvement. I should eat less junk food and go to bed earlier. Also, I plan to exercise more often.
If possible, I want to try new sports like swimming next term. Let’s discuss healthy recipes sometime!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍自己喜欢的食品，睡眠状况、空余时间的安排、个人清洁和运动等方面；
第三步，分享自己的计划并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of很多
②stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
I think my lifestyle is healthy overall, but needs improvement.（宾语从句）
3．例文
Hello, everyone! I’d like to introduce my friend Tom for you.
He is 13 years old and studies at No. 9 Middle School. Three years ago, he was very weak because of his illness, and he often got sleepy. Two years ago, he decided to join the basketball team. Now he is one of its best players. He also loves collecting basketballs and already has five. Basketball brings him hope and fun. And now he is very strong. In the future, he wants to become a sports star and share his love of basketball with others.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍Tom的信息，包括年龄及学校；
第二步、根据提示，介绍Tom的经历；
第三步、介绍Tom的爱好及原因、未来梦想等信息。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②get sleepy犯困
③decide to do sth.决定做某事
[高分句型]
①Three years ago, he was very weak because of his illness, and he often got sleepy.(并列句)
4．例文
Dear sir or madam,
Thanks for spending time reading my letter. I read the poster of our students’ center and now I’m writing this letter to tell you that I’d like to be a volunteer to teach English in the local after-school program.
I am a 14-year-old middle school student. I am going to be a teacher when I grow up. I think it’s a good chance for me to help the children and I can do what I love to do at the same time. First, English is my favorite subject and I can do well in teaching children. Second, I am outgoing and friendly. So I know how to get along well with kids. Moreover, I will come up with some interesting ways to help students to study easily and better.
I know it’s not easy to be a volunteer, but I’m ready to try my best to be a good volunteer.
Yours sincerely,
Jim
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中的“提示信息”，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己想去什么地方做志愿，以及志愿工作的内容；
第二步：讲述你的个人情况以及你能胜任这份工作的原因；
第三步：表达想要成为志愿者的愿景。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up长大
②at the same time同时
③be ready to do乐意做
[高分句型]
①I am going to be a teacher when I grow up.（时间状语从句）
②I think it’s a good chance for me to help the children and I can do what I love to do at the same time（宾语从句）
5．例文
Li Ming is a model student who sets an excellent example for all of us. Polite and well-mannered, he greets teachers and classmates warmly every day and never speaks with his mouth full, showing his respect for others.
What makes him remarkable is his strong sense of social responsibility. He always queues properly in public places and never cuts in line. He keeps his voice down in shared spaces and never litters. On buses, he is always ready to offer his seat to those in need.
Li Ming also has a heart full of compassion. As an active member of the Helping Hand Club, he regularly participates in charity work. Last semester, he successfully organized a charity performance that raised funds for children in poor areas.
His dream is to become a doctor, not only to help the sick but also to make society healthier. With his good manners, civic awareness, kindness and clear goals, Li Ming truly deserves our admiration.
Let’s all learn from Li Ming and strive to be better individuals!
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要运用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。文章开头直接指出李明是模范学生，引出下文对他优秀品质的详细介绍。
第二步，具体阐述。分别从礼貌、社会责任感、同情心三个维度，详细描述李明的行为表现和具体事例。
第三步，书写结语。总结李明的优点，强调他的梦想，突出其值得钦佩之处，最后呼吁大家向李明学习。
［亮点词汇］
①model student 模范学生
②set an example 树立榜样
③polite 有礼貌的
④well - mannered 举止得体的
⑤greet 打招呼
⑥warmly 热情地
⑦speak with one’s mouth full 嘴里塞满东西说话
⑧respect 尊重
⑨remarkable 卓越的；非凡的
⑩sense of social responsibility 社会责任感
queue 排队
properly 适当地
public place 公共场所
cut in line 插队
shared space 公共空间
litter 乱扔垃圾
in need 需要帮助的
compassion 同情心
［高分句型］
①Li Ming is a model student who sets an excellent example for all of us.（who引导的定语从句）
②What makes him remarkable is his strong sense of social responsibility.（主语从句）
6．例文
Dear Tom,
How are you going I’ve received your letter. In the letter you talked about your last speech. You felt nervous and embarrassed. You didn’t know what to say. Do you know how to make a successful speech Here is some advice.
Firstly, you can introduce yourself and tell them what your subject is. In order to break the ice, you can tell a small joke to make your talk humorous. Secondly, during your speech, you should try to avoid making mistakes. Mistakes can make people feel uncomfortable. Thirdly, you must be full of self-confidence. You must smile. Smile can make people feel relaxed.
I think you will make a perfect speech next time.
Yours,
Editor
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：针对所给的一些提示内容给Tom一些做演讲的建议，围绕主题，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明对方的问题以及引出建议；
第二步，具体给出对方建议；
第三步，最后作小结。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②avoid doing sth避免做某事
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①Firstly, you can introduce yourself and tell them what your subject is.（what引导宾语从句）
②I think you will make a perfect speech next time.（省略that的宾语从句）
7．例文
Dear Mr. Wang,
Thanks for taking time to read my letter. My name is Li Li. I am a tall girl with bright eyes and a warm smile. Being friendly and patient, I always enjoy communicating with people from different cultures.
I’m good at speaking English and telling interesting stories about Nanning’s history. As a tourism ambassador, I can introduce local culture by guiding foreigners to famous landmarks like Qingxiu Mountain. I’m also ready to help them solve problems during their trips, such as translating signs or recommending authentic local food.
I believe I’m suitable for this role because I truly love our “Green City”. Thank you for considering my application.
Yours,
Li Li
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍个人信息，包括外貌，性格以及擅长的事情等信息；
第三步，表达希望得到这个机会，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②such as例如
[高分句型]
①I’m good at speaking English and telling interesting stories about Nanning’s history.（动名词作宾语）
②I believe I’m suitable for this role because I truly love our “Green City”. （宾语从句，原因状语从句）
8．例文：
During the past few months, many classmates have changed a lot.
Jack is my classmate. He used to hate reading books and spend a lot of time playing computer games. But now he studies hard. He also likes reading books, because he gets a lot of knowledge from books. He likes reading books about animals best, because he thinks animals are so cute. He used to waste water and electricity. For example, he never turned off the light when he left the room. But now he realizes the importance of protecting the environment. He used to like playing chess, but now he likes travelling and visiting some places of interest. He often borrows books from the library and discusses with his friends what to read. He didn’t know how to care for others. But now he often cares and helps others.
In the future, he decides to do some volunteer work. He wants to help those in need.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从学习，环保，娱乐，爱心等方面介绍Jack的变化；
第二步，介绍他未来的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②used to do sth.过去常常做某事
③spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
④turn off关闭
[高分句型]
①He also likes reading books, because he gets a lot of knowledge from books.（because引导原因状语从句）
9．例文
Enjoy Travel, Enjoy Life
Last year, I went to Qingdao with my family. We went there to see the sunrise in the early morning. The sky was colorful and the sea was shining brightly. When we walked on the beach, we felt the soft wind. We had seafood which was delicious. All of us had a wonderful time.
As we all know, the outside world is wonderful. If possible, I want to visit Hong Kong. I want to see the Ocean Park there. I’m eager to know how the dolphins perform. Also, I’d like to visit the Hong Kong Disneyland. I want to see Snow White.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍游玩景点、印象深刻的活动和美食；
第二步，表达自己的旅行感受；
第三步，介绍接下来的游玩计划。
[亮点词汇]
①be eager to do 渴望做某事
②would like to do 想要做某事
[高分句型]
①When we walked on the beach, we felt the soft wind. (when引导时间状语从句)
②If possible, I want to visit Hong Kong. (if引导条件状语从句)
10．例文：
Volunteering
I’m Simon, my classmate John and I are students from No. 2 Middle School, where we have always been encouraged to participate in various social activities. This summer holiday, we plan to do some volunteering work in a children’s home.
I love reading, and my dream is to be a writer. So I’ll read interesting stories to the children there who are thirsty for knowledge and new experiences. John is good at singing and dancing. He wants to be an artist in the future. He will teach the children to sing and dance. Also, we’ll play games with them to bring more fun. Besides, we’ll help clean the rooms to make the children’s home a more comfortable place. I believe we’ll have a great time.
Volunteering not only allows us to do something we love but also gives us a chance to bring joy to those lovely children. It will surely be a meaningful experience.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己和同学John的身份，引出暑期去儿童福利院做志愿工作的计划；
第二步，分别阐述自己和John的爱好及梦想，以及对应在福利院要做的事；
第三步，最后表达对志愿活动的期待，强调志愿活动既能做喜欢的事，又能给孩子带来快乐，是有意义的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①be thirsty for渴望……
②be good at擅长……
③have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①So I’ll read interesting stories to the children there who are thirsty for knowledge and new experiences. (who引导的定语从句)
②I believe we’ll have a great time. (省略that的宾语从句)
11．例文
Dear Mom and Dad.
I’d like to tell you how I feel these days. I love football very much and dream to be a professional football player. But you think if I spend much time on football, I will not go to a good high school. So you stop me playing it in my free time. I understand that you care about my studies, and I want to promise you that I can balance both. Here are my ideas:
First, I will manage my time by making a timetable to make sure I have enough time for both studies and football. Second, I promise to study harder in my subjects and ask teachers for help when needed. Third, I’m sure that my homework will be finished on time.
Thank you for your understanding and support. This is very important to me. I promise I won’t let you down.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据提示的要点完成写作，可适当发挥，注意上下文连贯，语句通顺，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的爱好和理想，并表达自己对父母做法的理解，引出下文自己的解决方法；
第二步，列出具体的解决办法；
第三步，书写结语，做出保证。
[亮点词汇]
①dream to be梦想成为
②in my free time在我的空闲时间
③make sure确保
④ask sb for help向某人求助
⑤let sb down让某人失望
[高分句型]
①But you think if I spend much time on football, I will not go to a good high school. （if引导的条件状语从句）
②I understand that you care about my studies, and I want to promise you that I can balance both.（宾语从句）
12．例文
One-day Voluntary Work
As middle school students, we should be thankful to people who have helped us. Our school plans to organize an activity called “going into the community and being a volunteer for one day”. This activity will be held in Guangming Community. We are going to meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m. next Sunday morning. And then, we will go there by bus.
Firstly, we will arrange some students to hand out masks and donate daily necessities to the people in need. Secondly, we will visit the old in the community. We will sing and dance for them to make them happy. What’s more, we will teach children to make paper cuts and learn about Chinese culture.
It’s necessary for us to take an active part in such volunteer activities. It will make our life more meaningful.
I hope we will learn to give our love to everyone and society through this activity.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般将来时和一般现在时；
③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示，并在适当的地方补充和发挥，需要使用正确的词汇和句型，注意行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍学校组织的活动，引出对时间地点的介绍；
第二步，按照要点内容，介绍具体的活动内容，注意时态应用一般将来时，同时要注意补充活动安排；
第三步，说明活动的意义以及总结全文，希望能够为社会奉献更多爱。
[亮点词汇]
①hand out分发
②what’s more而且
③take an active part in积极参与
[高分句型]
①This activity will be held in Guangming Community. （一般将来时的被动语态）
②It’s necessary for us to take an active part in such volunteer activities.（it作形式主语）
13．
Dear Jammy,
I know you will take part in an English speech contest next week. And I am writing this letter to give you some advice on how to make a wonderful speech.
First, please keep smiling. I think it can show your confidence and make a good impression on the listeners. Besides, when you’re speaking, remember to make eye contact with your listeners. It’s the key to a successful speech. However, don’t stare at others because it’s impolite. What’s more, it’s necessary to use some gestures. It will help you express yourself better on stage. Last but not least, don’t forget to say thank you to your listeners at the end of the speech.
I am sure you can do a good job in the contest. I am looking forward to your success.
Yours,
Ms. Lee
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生需按要求写作写，涵盖写信目的、演讲注意事项、鼓励与期待等要点，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头表明写信目的，即给学生参加英语演讲比赛提建议；
第二步，分别阐述演讲时的注意事项，如保持微笑、眼神交流、使用手势、结尾致谢等；
第三步，书写结语，给予鼓励并表达对学生在比赛中取得成功的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加
② give sb. some advice on 就……给某人一些建议
③ keep smiling 保持微笑
④ make eye contact with 与……眼神交流
⑤ last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
① I think it can show your confidence and make a good impression on the listeners. (含有宾语从句的复合句)
② When you’re speaking, remember to make eye contact with your listeners. (含有时间状语从句的复合句)
③ I am sure you can do a good job in the contest. (含有宾语从句的复合句)
14．例文
Dear sir/madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m Li Hua, a student who is eager to become a volunteer for the 2025 Asian Winter Games. I’m thrilled to apply for this role because I deeply admire winter sports and wish to contribute to their promotion.
Firstly, I have a strong understanding of ice and snow sports. I’ve learned the rules of events like figure skating and skiing through online courses and competitions. Secondly, my communication skills are excellent. As a member of the school English club, I often interact with foreign teachers and students, which helps me explain information clearly to international visitors.
To ensure high-quality service, I will study the details of each event thoroughly and practice bilingual explanations. I’ll also stay patient and friendly to answer any questions.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：根据要点提示进行写作，可适当加入细节，注意行文连贯，重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己激动的心情；
第二步，介绍自己的优势；
第三步，介绍将如何做好志愿工作；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be eager to渴望
②interact with与……交流/互动
③apply for申请
[高分句型]
①I’m thrilled to apply for this role because I deeply admire winter sports and wish to contribute to their promotion. (because引导原因状语从句)
②As a member of the school English club, I often interact with foreign teachers and students, which helps me explain information clearly to international visitors. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
15．例文
Ways to Keep Healthy
Health is very important in our lives. Without it, everything else becomes meaningless. There are many ways to keep healthy.
First, we should get enough sleep. A good rest helps our body recover and stay energetic. Second, eating healthy food is important. We should eat more vegetables, fruits, and less junk food. Third, doing exercise regularly can make us stronger and improve our mood.
Besides these, we should also keep a happy mind and stay away from bad habits like smoking. Only in this way can we live a healthy and happy life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明健康的重要性，引出下文关于保持健康的方法；
第二步，列举具体的保持健康的方法；
第三步，总结全文，强调通过这些方式可以过上健康快乐的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①meaningless无意义的
②energetic精力充沛的
③regularly有规律地
④stay away from远离
[高分句型]
Only in this way can we live a healthy and happy life. (运用部分倒装结构)
16．例文
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. We should do sports every day. We shouldn’t refuse to exercise. Running for an hour every day is good for health. We should keep a balanced diet, and eat more fruit and vegetables. We shouldn’t have junk food, because it’s bad for our health. We’d better not stay up too late. Getting enough sleep is helpful. We shouldn’t play computer games a lot. It is bad for our eyes. Sitting for a long time is also bad for our health. The neck and the back may hurt. We should always be happy. We can keep happy by listening to music or talking to our friends.
All in all, if we follow these ways, each of us will have a healthy body.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“如何保持健康”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“应该做的事情、不应该做的事情”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②stay up熬夜
③junk food垃圾食品
[高分句型]
①We shouldn’t have junk food, because it’s bad for our health.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②All in all, if we follow these ways, each of us will have a healthy body.（if引导的条件状语从句）
17．例文
How to Be a Better Self
Where there is a country, there is a home. As a student, I think what I can do for my country is to make myself a better man.
First of all, I will try my best to study well and I want to go to college. As the saying goes, “Knowledge is power.” I think this will help me get a dream job in the future. In my free time, I will give up a few hours each week to help others, such as volunteering at nursing homes and visiting children in hospitals. I believe these experiences can help to develop my inner beauty. Last but not least, I will exercise three times a week to stay healthy.
We teenagers are the future of our country. So let’s take action to improve ourselves and face the future with confidence!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点和开头部分已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题——让自己成为更好的人；
第二步，从多个方面详细阐述如何成为更好的自己；
第三步，呼吁大家采取行动让自己变得更好。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best尽力
②give up放弃
③last but not least最后但同样重要的
④take action to do sth采取行动做某事
[高分句型]
① First of all, I will try my best to study well and I want to go to college. (并列句)
② I believe these experiences can help to develop my inner beauty. (省略that的宾语从句)
18．范文：
Let’s support charity
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about supporting charity here.
Many people in the world are still poor. Some even can’t go to hospital because they don’t have enough money. Some children can’t afford to go to school. They need our help.
As students, we can do a lot to support charity. We can help charities raise money. Many hands make light work. We can also donate some books and clothes to them. It’s meaningful for us to give out leaflets in public. In this way, we can help more people to take action. It’s the best way to share our love with the unlucky ones.
I hope everyone can do something to support charity.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，点明主题；
第二步，具体阐述支持慈善的原因、方法及自己的感受；
第三步，书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
①raise money筹款
②give out分发
③share…with…与……分享……
[高分句型]
Some even can’t go to hospital because they don’t have enough money. (because引导的原因状语从句)
19．例文：
How to Prevent the Virus
I am sorry to hear that many people have the virus these days. What should we do to prevent it Here are some useful tips.
Firstly, we should wash our hands often with soap and water, especially after going outside or before eating. This can kill germs on our hands. Secondly, wearing masks in crowded places like buses or shopping malls is necessary. It helps stop the virus from spreading through the air.
Besides, doing sports is important. For example, running, jumping rope, or playing basketball can make our bodies stronger and improve our immunity. Also, eating healthy food like vegetables and fruits, drinking enough water, and avoiding junk food are good ways to stay healthy.
Lastly, if we feel sick, we should stay at home and rest. Let’s follow these steps to protect ourselves and others!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主，用于描述日常习惯和客观事实；
③提示：写作要点已明确列出 (洗手、戴口罩、运动、健康饮食等)，需适当扩展细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引入话题，表达关切并引出预防措施 (已给出开头)；
第二步：分点列举具体预防方法，结合细节说明原因或方式；
第三步：总结建议，呼吁行动。
[亮点词汇]
①kill germs 杀菌
②stop...from... 阻止……
③improve immunity 增强免疫力
④avoid junk food 避免垃圾食品
⑤stay healthy 保持健康
[高分句型]
①Wearing masks in crowded places like buses or shopping malls is necessary. (动名词作主语)
②If we feel sick, we should stay at home and rest. (if引导条件句)
20．例文
Things I can do to make my school greener and more beautiful
We should protect the environment because the earth is our home and it is our duty to protect it. As for the students, everyone must do something to protect the school environment.
First of all, when I don’t need the light, I will turn it off immediately. What’s more, I will use cloth shopping bags instead of plastic bags to go shopping. Finally, I will use both sides of the paper as much as possible.
In a word, I will try my best to protect the school environment. I believe that everyone can help make the earth a better place to live.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示和话题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全标题；
第二步，介绍你如何让学校环境更环保更美丽；
第三步，最后表达总结。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②what’s more而且
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
①We should protect the environment because the earth is our home and it is our duty to protect it.（原因状语从句）
②First of all, when I don’t need the light, I will turn it off immediately.（时间状语从句）
③I believe that everyone can help make the earth a better place to live.（宾语从句）
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习专项鲁教版（五四学制）
（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．Jack 是你的好朋友，在某些方面你们有相似之处，在另一方面，你们也有很多不同之处。
写作要求：
1.根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍你和你的朋友。
2.要求适当分段：语句通顺，逻辑连贯：可适当发挥。
3.字数： 90词左右 （开头已给， 不计入总词数）。
相同点 不同点
外貌和性格 外向而友好 Jack 比你高比你瘦
饮食和习惯 每个月吃1-2次垃圾食品 Jack 早睡早起；你常常熬夜，难得运动。
兴趣和爱好 喜欢相互帮助和一起阅读最喜欢 Blue Moon电影院及一条喜欢去的理由（使用比较或最高级）。 Jack 最喜欢动作电影，因为…… 你最喜欢……（电视节目类型），因为……
Jack is my best friend, now I’d like to introduce my best friend and me.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．你校新来的外教Tony想通过问卷了解学生的生活习惯。问卷中有关于你喜欢的食品、你的睡眠状况、空余时间的安排、个人清洁和运动等方面的问题。请你根据以下问卷问题用英文向 Tony作详细介绍。
Something about your lifestyle.
What do you think of your lifestyle
How should you improve your lifestyle
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数90词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’d like to introduce my lifestyle to you.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好，兴趣爱好对学生的成长至关重要。请阅读下面表格，并根据表格里内容提示，用英语写一篇是有关Tom的信息和爱好的短文。
年龄：13 学校：第九中学
爱好：收藏篮球，目前为止，已经收藏了5个篮球…… 理由：…… 梦想：成为一名体育明星
要求：1．词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2．合理增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Hello, everyone! I’d like to introduce my friend Tom for you.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假如你是Jim，你在海报上看到学生中心在招募志愿者的消息。每逢周末，你也想去帮助有需要的人，因为这既能锻炼自己，又能回报社会。请写一封信，申请一份你喜欢的志愿者工作。
内容包括：
1.你想去什么地方做志愿，志愿工作的内容是什么？
2.你的情况（年龄，兴趣爱好，性格等）以及你能胜任这份工作的原因（两点及以上）。
3.表达想要成为志愿者的愿景。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，80词左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear sir or madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Jim
5．作为新时代的中学生，我们要懂礼仪、有公德、有爱心，有理想。你的同班同学李明就是这样的一个人，请你根据以下信息写一篇100字左右的短文介绍李明，并号召全校学生向他学习。
懂礼仪 遇见同学老师问好，认为含食说话是粗鲁的。
有公德 总是排队等候，不插队；公共场所从不大声喧哗乱丢垃圾；如挡路，说抱歉；在公交车上主动给有需要的人让座。
有爱心 常参加慈善活动，是援助之手俱乐部成员；上学期组织了慈善演出为贫困孩子筹集资金；
有理想 梦想成为一名医生，理由：……（至少两条）
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．Tom上周做了一次演讲。在演讲中他感到紧张，不知道说什么。他给校杂志社的编辑写信求助如何做演讲。假如你是那位编辑，请给Tom写一封80词左右的回信。要求语法正确，句意通顺，逻辑关系合理，书写工整。
Dear Tom,
How are you going
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Editor
7．“绿城”南宁是广西的首府，近年来越来越多的外国学生到南宁旅游，因此南宁旅游局将选拔中学生旅游形象大使。假如你是李丽，想参加竞选，请根据以下表格内容，给该项目的负责人Mr. Wang写一封英文自荐信。
你的外貌 高个子，……
你的性格 友好的，……
你擅长的方面 说英语，讲故事，……
你可以做的事情 介绍当地文化，帮助外国人，……
写作要求：
1、内容必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2、意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3、文中不得透露个人信息；
4、词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：旅游形象大使tourism ambassabo，合适的suitable，介绍introduce，文化culture
Dear Mr. Wang,
Thanks for taking time to read my letter. My name is Li Li.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Li
8．过去这一段时间同学们都有了很大的变化和收获。Jack是你班上的一名同学，这学期他也变化了很多，学习进步很大，请根据下面表格提供的信息用英语写篇短文，向同学介绍Jack的变化以及他对未来的打算。
过去 现在
学习 大部分业余时间花在……；讨厌看书，认为…… 认真学习；热爱读书，因为……；每天花……读书；最喜欢看……，觉得……
环保 浪费水电，…… (自拟一至两点) 意识到环保的重要性
娱乐 喜欢下象棋，…… 热爱旅游，参观风景名胜；图书馆借书，和朋友们讨论读什么
爱心 不知道如何关心他人 ……
要求：
1. 100词左右，短文的开头已写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：浪费waste；电electricity
During the past few months, many classmates have changed a lot.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．One’s destination(目的地) is never a place, but a new way of seeing things. ——Henry Miller.
请以“Enjoy travel, enjoy life”为题写篇短文，分享你的某次旅行经历及对旅行的看法。
内容要点：
1.旅行地的介绍：你游玩了哪些景点、有没有印象最深的活劫、品尝了当地的什么美食……
2.对这次经历的感悟，如旅行的注意事项或意义等；
3.下一站计划去哪里 为什么
注意：
1.词数90左右，已经给出的部分不计入总词数；
2.短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实人名。
Enjoy Travel, Enjoy Life
Last summer, I went to
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．学校今年将开展暑期志愿者活动。假如你是Simon，你想和同学John利用暑假在儿童福利院做一些志愿者工作。请根据以下表格信息，以“Volunteering”为题，写一篇英语作文，谈谈你们的爱好、梦想，以及你们将要做的志愿者工作。
要点：
Names Simon John
students from No. 2 Middle School
Free time this summer holiday
Place a children’s home
Activities 1. 读故事； 2. 打扫卫生； 3. 一起唱歌、跳舞、做游戏； 4. ……
Feelings …
要求：
1. 词数80词以上；
2. 字迹工整，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．假如你是初二的学生李华，你酷爱足球，打算长大后成为专业的（professional）足球运动员。但你的父母认为花大量时间在足球上，就考不上好高中。请你给父母写一封信，和他们沟通，表达你对他们的理解，同时提出你的想法和解决办法。
要求：
1. 短文需包含所给提示，可适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文章中不得出现真实人名、校名。
Dear Mom and Dad,
I’d like to tell you how I feel these days.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Ho
12．过去的2023年是不平凡的一年，每个人都得到过社会的帮助，我们应该懂得感恩与回报。学校计划组织一次“走进社区，做一天志愿者(going into community and being a volunteer for one day)”活动。请根据以下所给信息，以“One-day Voluntary Work”为题写一篇短文向同学们介绍这一活动。
要点如下：
活动时间、地点：光明社区，下周日上午8:30在学校门口集合，乘公交车去光明社区(Guangming Community)
活动内容：
1. 分发口罩，捐赠物资(如生活必需品)
2. 给老人们表演节目，带来欢乐；教小孩做剪纸，了解中国文化
3. …… (自行补充一点)
4. 活动很有教育意义，呼吁同学积极参加。
注意事项：
1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章须包含所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥；行文连贯，条理清晰。
参考词汇： masks口罩； daily necessities生活必需品
One-day Voluntary Work
As middle it school students, we should be thankful to people who have helped us.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．假设你是李老师，你的学生Jammy通过班级选拔赛下周将代表学校参加南山区第十一届英语演讲比赛，主题是“I’m a spokesperson of Chinese Culture”。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一封邮件，告诉他演讲时应该注意的事项。
要点：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 注意： ①保持微笑；②与听众眼神交流，但避免一直盯着他人；③……；
3. 给与鼓励并表达期待。
Dear Jammy,
I know you will take part in an English speech contest next week.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Ms Lee
14．假如你是中学生李华，学校正在招募中学生亚冬会（Asian Winter Games）宣传（promote v.、promotion n.）志愿者，负责向中外游客解读2025年哈尔滨亚冬会比赛项目和比赛规则。你想申请成为一名志愿者，请给学校写一封申请信，并谈一谈你将如何做好志愿工作。
写作要点：
1、激动的心情
2、你的优势：
（1）了解冰雪运动
（2）良好的沟通能力
3、谈一谈你将如何做好志愿工作。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。
2.适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear sir/madam,
I hope this letter finds you well
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
15．一百、一千、一万……即使有再多的零，没有了一，一切都归零。在我们的生活中，如果没有了健康，财富、地位等一切也都失去了意义。请以“Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，参照下图的信息，用英语写一篇80词左右的文章。
注意：1. 书写清晰、字迹工整、行文流畅，语句通顺。
2. 包含所给内容，并适当拓展补充。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16．健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以“How to Keep Healthy ”为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。
要求：
1.文章必须包含以下表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥；
2.不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息；
3.词数80左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
should（√） shouldn’t（×）
do sports every day keep a balanced diet eat fruit and vegetables have enough sleep keep happy … refuse to exercise have junk food stay up too late play computer games a lot sit for a long time …
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, if we follow these ways, each of us will have a healthy body.
17．随着我国各方面高质量发展，我们愈发觉得未来可期，无论是国家还是个人，只有自己足够强大，才能不被外界所牵制。请以“How to Be a Better Self”为题写一篇短文，谈谈作为中学生，我们要怎样做才能让自己变得优秀与自信。
提示：努力学习；助人为乐；强身健体；……
要求：
1. 短文必须包括上述所有提示要点，并适当拓展；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 字迹工整、规范。
How to Be a Better Self
Where there is a country, there is a home. As a student, I think what I can do for my country is to make myself a better man.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18．扶危助贫一直是中华民族的传统美德，支持慈善是每个人都应该做的。下周学校英语俱乐部将举办题为“Let’s support charity ”的演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。
要点提示：1. Why should we support charities
2. How can we support charity
3. How do we feel
具体要求：（1）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
（2）词数：90词左右；（文章开头已给出，不计入总数。）
（3）内容须涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Let’s support charity
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about supporting charity here.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
19．假设你是李华，最近呼吸道传染病流行，请你根据提示，以“How to prevent the virus”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈我们怎样预防呼吸道传染病毒。
提示：
1. wash our hands often;
2. wear masks (口罩)
3. do some sports, such as...;
4. eat healthy food and drink more water;
……
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写公正；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、学校和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于80词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。
How to prevent the virus
I am sorry to hear that many people have the virus these days. What should we do to prevent it
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
20．今年4月22号是世界地球日，珍爱地球、人与自然和谐相处是今年的主题。节约资源，保护环境是每个公民义不容辞的责任，作为中学生的我们应从学校、家庭入手，从我做起，从小事做起，让家和学校更环保，更美丽。
Write at least 60 words on the topic “Things I can do to make my ________ greener and more beautiful”
（请以“我可以做些什么让我的________更环保更美丽”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。）Use the following points as a reference.（以下问题仅供参考）
1．What resources can you save
2．What can you do to protect the environment
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
参考答案及试题解析
1． 例文
Jack is my best friend, now I’d like to introduce my best friend and me.
We have several similarities. Both of us are outgoing and friendly, so we can easily make friends. In terms of diet, we eat junk food only once or twice a month as we know it’s unhealthy. Also, we love reading together and helping each other. Blue Moon is our favorite cinema because it has the biggest screens, providing an amazing visual experience.
However, we are different in many ways. Jack is taller and thinner than me. He has a healthy lifestyle, going to bed early and getting up early. Conversely, I often stay up late and rarely exercise. When it comes to hobbies, Jack loves action movies best for the exciting fight scenes. I, on the other hand, like talk shows most since they offer me lots of new ideas and make me think.
In conclusion, though we have differences, our friendship remains strong.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：属于人物对比介绍类文章，旨在通过描述自己与朋友 Jack 的异同，展现两人的特点及友谊。
②时态：以一般现在时为主，用于陈述当前两人稳定的外貌、性格、习惯、兴趣爱好等方面的情况。
③提示：给定了明确的相同点和不同点的要点，涵盖外貌性格、饮食和习惯、兴趣爱好等方面。写作时需严格按照要点，适当分段展开，做到语句通顺、逻辑连贯，并可合理发挥，使内容更丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一，开头引入，直接点明写作目的是介绍自己和朋友 Jack，简洁明了，引出下文。
第二部，分别阐述相同点和不同点，包括外貌、性格、饮食习惯、兴趣爱好，给人最直观的形象。
第三部，总结全文，强调尽管两人存在差异，但友谊依然坚固，升华文章主题，使结构完整。
[亮点词汇]
①in terms of就……而言，在……方面
②conversely相反地
③on the other hand另一方面
[高分句型]
①Blue Moon is our favorite cinema because it has the biggest screens, providing an amazing visual experience.（原因状语从句）
②He has a healthy lifestyle, going to bed early and getting up early.（现在分词短语作伴随状语）
③I, on the other hand, like talk shows most since they offer me lots of new ideas and make me think.（since引导原因状语从句）
2．例文
Dear Tony,
I’d like to introduce my lifestyle to you. First, I eat lots of vegetables and fruit, but sometimes enjoy fast food. I sleep 8 hours every night though I occasionally stay up late. I exercise three times a week by running or playing basketball. Besides, I always brush my teeth twice a day and take showers regularly. In my free time, I read books or listen to music. I think my lifestyle is healthy overall, but needs improvement. I should eat less junk food and go to bed earlier. Also, I plan to exercise more often.
If possible, I want to try new sports like swimming next term. Let’s discuss healthy recipes sometime!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍自己喜欢的食品，睡眠状况、空余时间的安排、个人清洁和运动等方面；
第三步，分享自己的计划并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of很多
②stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
I think my lifestyle is healthy overall, but needs improvement.（宾语从句）
3．例文
Hello, everyone! I’d like to introduce my friend Tom for you.
He is 13 years old and studies at No. 9 Middle School. Three years ago, he was very weak because of his illness, and he often got sleepy. Two years ago, he decided to join the basketball team. Now he is one of its best players. He also loves collecting basketballs and already has five. Basketball brings him hope and fun. And now he is very strong. In the future, he wants to become a sports star and share his love of basketball with others.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍Tom的信息，包括年龄及学校；
第二步、根据提示，介绍Tom的经历；
第三步、介绍Tom的爱好及原因、未来梦想等信息。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②get sleepy犯困
③decide to do sth.决定做某事
[高分句型]
①Three years ago, he was very weak because of his illness, and he often got sleepy.(并列句)
4．例文
Dear sir or madam,
Thanks for spending time reading my letter. I read the poster of our students’ center and now I’m writing this letter to tell you that I’d like to be a volunteer to teach English in the local after-school program.
I am a 14-year-old middle school student. I am going to be a teacher when I grow up. I think it’s a good chance for me to help the children and I can do what I love to do at the same time. First, English is my favorite subject and I can do well in teaching children. Second, I am outgoing and friendly. So I know how to get along well with kids. Moreover, I will come up with some interesting ways to help students to study easily and better.
I know it’s not easy to be a volunteer, but I’m ready to try my best to be a good volunteer.
Yours sincerely,
Jim
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中的“提示信息”，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己想去什么地方做志愿，以及志愿工作的内容；
第二步：讲述你的个人情况以及你能胜任这份工作的原因；
第三步：表达想要成为志愿者的愿景。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up长大
②at the same time同时
③be ready to do乐意做
[高分句型]
①I am going to be a teacher when I grow up.（时间状语从句）
②I think it’s a good chance for me to help the children and I can do what I love to do at the same time（宾语从句）
5．例文
Li Ming is a model student who sets an excellent example for all of us. Polite and well-mannered, he greets teachers and classmates warmly every day and never speaks with his mouth full, showing his respect for others.
What makes him remarkable is his strong sense of social responsibility. He always queues properly in public places and never cuts in line. He keeps his voice down in shared spaces and never litters. On buses, he is always ready to offer his seat to those in need.
Li Ming also has a heart full of compassion. As an active member of the Helping Hand Club, he regularly participates in charity work. Last semester, he successfully organized a charity performance that raised funds for children in poor areas.
His dream is to become a doctor, not only to help the sick but also to make society healthier. With his good manners, civic awareness, kindness and clear goals, Li Ming truly deserves our admiration.
Let’s all learn from Li Ming and strive to be better individuals!
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要运用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。文章开头直接指出李明是模范学生，引出下文对他优秀品质的详细介绍。
第二步，具体阐述。分别从礼貌、社会责任感、同情心三个维度，详细描述李明的行为表现和具体事例。
第三步，书写结语。总结李明的优点，强调他的梦想，突出其值得钦佩之处，最后呼吁大家向李明学习。
［亮点词汇］
①model student 模范学生
②set an example 树立榜样
③polite 有礼貌的
④well - mannered 举止得体的
⑤greet 打招呼
⑥warmly 热情地
⑦speak with one’s mouth full 嘴里塞满东西说话
⑧respect 尊重
⑨remarkable 卓越的；非凡的
⑩sense of social responsibility 社会责任感
queue 排队
properly 适当地
public place 公共场所
cut in line 插队
shared space 公共空间
litter 乱扔垃圾
in need 需要帮助的
compassion 同情心
［高分句型］
①Li Ming is a model student who sets an excellent example for all of us.（who引导的定语从句）
②What makes him remarkable is his strong sense of social responsibility.（主语从句）
6．例文
Dear Tom,
How are you going I’ve received your letter. In the letter you talked about your last speech. You felt nervous and embarrassed. You didn’t know what to say. Do you know how to make a successful speech Here is some advice.
Firstly, you can introduce yourself and tell them what your subject is. In order to break the ice, you can tell a small joke to make your talk humorous. Secondly, during your speech, you should try to avoid making mistakes. Mistakes can make people feel uncomfortable. Thirdly, you must be full of self-confidence. You must smile. Smile can make people feel relaxed.
I think you will make a perfect speech next time.
Yours,
Editor
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：针对所给的一些提示内容给Tom一些做演讲的建议，围绕主题，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明对方的问题以及引出建议；
第二步，具体给出对方建议；
第三步，最后作小结。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②avoid doing sth避免做某事
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①Firstly, you can introduce yourself and tell them what your subject is.（what引导宾语从句）
②I think you will make a perfect speech next time.（省略that的宾语从句）
7．例文
Dear Mr. Wang,
Thanks for taking time to read my letter. My name is Li Li. I am a tall girl with bright eyes and a warm smile. Being friendly and patient, I always enjoy communicating with people from different cultures.
I’m good at speaking English and telling interesting stories about Nanning’s history. As a tourism ambassador, I can introduce local culture by guiding foreigners to famous landmarks like Qingxiu Mountain. I’m also ready to help them solve problems during their trips, such as translating signs or recommending authentic local food.
I believe I’m suitable for this role because I truly love our “Green City”. Thank you for considering my application.
Yours,
Li Li
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍个人信息，包括外貌，性格以及擅长的事情等信息；
第三步，表达希望得到这个机会，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②such as例如
[高分句型]
①I’m good at speaking English and telling interesting stories about Nanning’s history.（动名词作宾语）
②I believe I’m suitable for this role because I truly love our “Green City”. （宾语从句，原因状语从句）
8．例文：
During the past few months, many classmates have changed a lot.
Jack is my classmate. He used to hate reading books and spend a lot of time playing computer games. But now he studies hard. He also likes reading books, because he gets a lot of knowledge from books. He likes reading books about animals best, because he thinks animals are so cute. He used to waste water and electricity. For example, he never turned off the light when he left the room. But now he realizes the importance of protecting the environment. He used to like playing chess, but now he likes travelling and visiting some places of interest. He often borrows books from the library and discusses with his friends what to read. He didn’t know how to care for others. But now he often cares and helps others.
In the future, he decides to do some volunteer work. He wants to help those in need.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从学习，环保，娱乐，爱心等方面介绍Jack的变化；
第二步，介绍他未来的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②used to do sth.过去常常做某事
③spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
④turn off关闭
[高分句型]
①He also likes reading books, because he gets a lot of knowledge from books.（because引导原因状语从句）
9．例文
Enjoy Travel, Enjoy Life
Last year, I went to Qingdao with my family. We went there to see the sunrise in the early morning. The sky was colorful and the sea was shining brightly. When we walked on the beach, we felt the soft wind. We had seafood which was delicious. All of us had a wonderful time.
As we all know, the outside world is wonderful. If possible, I want to visit Hong Kong. I want to see the Ocean Park there. I’m eager to know how the dolphins perform. Also, I’d like to visit the Hong Kong Disneyland. I want to see Snow White.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍游玩景点、印象深刻的活动和美食；
第二步，表达自己的旅行感受；
第三步，介绍接下来的游玩计划。
[亮点词汇]
①be eager to do 渴望做某事
②would like to do 想要做某事
[高分句型]
①When we walked on the beach, we felt the soft wind. (when引导时间状语从句)
②If possible, I want to visit Hong Kong. (if引导条件状语从句)
10．例文：
Volunteering
I’m Simon, my classmate John and I are students from No. 2 Middle School, where we have always been encouraged to participate in various social activities. This summer holiday, we plan to do some volunteering work in a children’s home.
I love reading, and my dream is to be a writer. So I’ll read interesting stories to the children there who are thirsty for knowledge and new experiences. John is good at singing and dancing. He wants to be an artist in the future. He will teach the children to sing and dance. Also, we’ll play games with them to bring more fun. Besides, we’ll help clean the rooms to make the children’s home a more comfortable place. I believe we’ll have a great time.
Volunteering not only allows us to do something we love but also gives us a chance to bring joy to those lovely children. It will surely be a meaningful experience.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己和同学John的身份，引出暑期去儿童福利院做志愿工作的计划；
第二步，分别阐述自己和John的爱好及梦想，以及对应在福利院要做的事；
第三步，最后表达对志愿活动的期待，强调志愿活动既能做喜欢的事，又能给孩子带来快乐，是有意义的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①be thirsty for渴望……
②be good at擅长……
③have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①So I’ll read interesting stories to the children there who are thirsty for knowledge and new experiences. (who引导的定语从句)
②I believe we’ll have a great time. (省略that的宾语从句)
11．例文
Dear Mom and Dad.
I’d like to tell you how I feel these days. I love football very much and dream to be a professional football player. But you think if I spend much time on football, I will not go to a good high school. So you stop me playing it in my free time. I understand that you care about my studies, and I want to promise you that I can balance both. Here are my ideas:
First, I will manage my time by making a timetable to make sure I have enough time for both studies and football. Second, I promise to study harder in my subjects and ask teachers for help when needed. Third, I’m sure that my homework will be finished on time.
Thank you for your understanding and support. This is very important to me. I promise I won’t let you down.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据提示的要点完成写作，可适当发挥，注意上下文连贯，语句通顺，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的爱好和理想，并表达自己对父母做法的理解，引出下文自己的解决方法；
第二步，列出具体的解决办法；
第三步，书写结语，做出保证。
[亮点词汇]
①dream to be梦想成为
②in my free time在我的空闲时间
③make sure确保
④ask sb for help向某人求助
⑤let sb down让某人失望
[高分句型]
①But you think if I spend much time on football, I will not go to a good high school. （if引导的条件状语从句）
②I understand that you care about my studies, and I want to promise you that I can balance both.（宾语从句）
12．例文
One-day Voluntary Work
As middle school students, we should be thankful to people who have helped us. Our school plans to organize an activity called “going into the community and being a volunteer for one day”. This activity will be held in Guangming Community. We are going to meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m. next Sunday morning. And then, we will go there by bus.
Firstly, we will arrange some students to hand out masks and donate daily necessities to the people in need. Secondly, we will visit the old in the community. We will sing and dance for them to make them happy. What’s more, we will teach children to make paper cuts and learn about Chinese culture.
It’s necessary for us to take an active part in such volunteer activities. It will make our life more meaningful.
I hope we will learn to give our love to everyone and society through this activity.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般将来时和一般现在时；
③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示，并在适当的地方补充和发挥，需要使用正确的词汇和句型，注意行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍学校组织的活动，引出对时间地点的介绍；
第二步，按照要点内容，介绍具体的活动内容，注意时态应用一般将来时，同时要注意补充活动安排；
第三步，说明活动的意义以及总结全文，希望能够为社会奉献更多爱。
[亮点词汇]
①hand out分发
②what’s more而且
③take an active part in积极参与
[高分句型]
①This activity will be held in Guangming Community. （一般将来时的被动语态）
②It’s necessary for us to take an active part in such volunteer activities.（it作形式主语）
13．
Dear Jammy,
I know you will take part in an English speech contest next week. And I am writing this letter to give you some advice on how to make a wonderful speech.
First, please keep smiling. I think it can show your confidence and make a good impression on the listeners. Besides, when you’re speaking, remember to make eye contact with your listeners. It’s the key to a successful speech. However, don’t stare at others because it’s impolite. What’s more, it’s necessary to use some gestures. It will help you express yourself better on stage. Last but not least, don’t forget to say thank you to your listeners at the end of the speech.
I am sure you can do a good job in the contest. I am looking forward to your success.
Yours,
Ms. Lee
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生需按要求写作写，涵盖写信目的、演讲注意事项、鼓励与期待等要点，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头表明写信目的，即给学生参加英语演讲比赛提建议；
第二步，分别阐述演讲时的注意事项，如保持微笑、眼神交流、使用手势、结尾致谢等；
第三步，书写结语，给予鼓励并表达对学生在比赛中取得成功的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加
② give sb. some advice on 就……给某人一些建议
③ keep smiling 保持微笑
④ make eye contact with 与……眼神交流
⑤ last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
① I think it can show your confidence and make a good impression on the listeners. (含有宾语从句的复合句)
② When you’re speaking, remember to make eye contact with your listeners. (含有时间状语从句的复合句)
③ I am sure you can do a good job in the contest. (含有宾语从句的复合句)
14．例文
Dear sir/madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m Li Hua, a student who is eager to become a volunteer for the 2025 Asian Winter Games. I’m thrilled to apply for this role because I deeply admire winter sports and wish to contribute to their promotion.
Firstly, I have a strong understanding of ice and snow sports. I’ve learned the rules of events like figure skating and skiing through online courses and competitions. Secondly, my communication skills are excellent. As a member of the school English club, I often interact with foreign teachers and students, which helps me explain information clearly to international visitors.
To ensure high-quality service, I will study the details of each event thoroughly and practice bilingual explanations. I’ll also stay patient and friendly to answer any questions.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：根据要点提示进行写作，可适当加入细节，注意行文连贯，重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己激动的心情；
第二步，介绍自己的优势；
第三步，介绍将如何做好志愿工作；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be eager to渴望
②interact with与……交流/互动
③apply for申请
[高分句型]
①I’m thrilled to apply for this role because I deeply admire winter sports and wish to contribute to their promotion. (because引导原因状语从句)
②As a member of the school English club, I often interact with foreign teachers and students, which helps me explain information clearly to international visitors. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
15．例文
Ways to Keep Healthy
Health is very important in our lives. Without it, everything else becomes meaningless. There are many ways to keep healthy.
First, we should get enough sleep. A good rest helps our body recover and stay energetic. Second, eating healthy food is important. We should eat more vegetables, fruits, and less junk food. Third, doing exercise regularly can make us stronger and improve our mood.
Besides these, we should also keep a happy mind and stay away from bad habits like smoking. Only in this way can we live a healthy and happy life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明健康的重要性，引出下文关于保持健康的方法；
第二步，列举具体的保持健康的方法；
第三步，总结全文，强调通过这些方式可以过上健康快乐的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①meaningless无意义的
②energetic精力充沛的
③regularly有规律地
④stay away from远离
[高分句型]
Only in this way can we live a healthy and happy life. (运用部分倒装结构)
16．例文
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. We should do sports every day. We shouldn’t refuse to exercise. Running for an hour every day is good for health. We should keep a balanced diet, and eat more fruit and vegetables. We shouldn’t have junk food, because it’s bad for our health. We’d better not stay up too late. Getting enough sleep is helpful. We shouldn’t play computer games a lot. It is bad for our eyes. Sitting for a long time is also bad for our health. The neck and the back may hurt. We should always be happy. We can keep happy by listening to music or talking to our friends.
All in all, if we follow these ways, each of us will have a healthy body.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“如何保持健康”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“应该做的事情、不应该做的事情”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②stay up熬夜
③junk food垃圾食品
[高分句型]
①We shouldn’t have junk food, because it’s bad for our health.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②All in all, if we follow these ways, each of us will have a healthy body.（if引导的条件状语从句）
17．例文
How to Be a Better Self
Where there is a country, there is a home. As a student, I think what I can do for my country is to make myself a better man.
First of all, I will try my best to study well and I want to go to college. As the saying goes, “Knowledge is power.” I think this will help me get a dream job in the future. In my free time, I will give up a few hours each week to help others, such as volunteering at nursing homes and visiting children in hospitals. I believe these experiences can help to develop my inner beauty. Last but not least, I will exercise three times a week to stay healthy.
We teenagers are the future of our country. So let’s take action to improve ourselves and face the future with confidence!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点和开头部分已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题——让自己成为更好的人；
第二步，从多个方面详细阐述如何成为更好的自己；
第三步，呼吁大家采取行动让自己变得更好。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best尽力
②give up放弃
③last but not least最后但同样重要的
④take action to do sth采取行动做某事
[高分句型]
① First of all, I will try my best to study well and I want to go to college. (并列句)
② I believe these experiences can help to develop my inner beauty. (省略that的宾语从句)
18．范文：
Let’s support charity
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about supporting charity here.
Many people in the world are still poor. Some even can’t go to hospital because they don’t have enough money. Some children can’t afford to go to school. They need our help.
As students, we can do a lot to support charity. We can help charities raise money. Many hands make light work. We can also donate some books and clothes to them. It’s meaningful for us to give out leaflets in public. In this way, we can help more people to take action. It’s the best way to share our love with the unlucky ones.
I hope everyone can do something to support charity.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，点明主题；
第二步，具体阐述支持慈善的原因、方法及自己的感受；
第三步，书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
①raise money筹款
②give out分发
③share…with…与……分享……
[高分句型]
Some even can’t go to hospital because they don’t have enough money. (because引导的原因状语从句)
19．例文：
How to Prevent the Virus
I am sorry to hear that many people have the virus these days. What should we do to prevent it Here are some useful tips.
Firstly, we should wash our hands often with soap and water, especially after going outside or before eating. This can kill germs on our hands. Secondly, wearing masks in crowded places like buses or shopping malls is necessary. It helps stop the virus from spreading through the air.
Besides, doing sports is important. For example, running, jumping rope, or playing basketball can make our bodies stronger and improve our immunity. Also, eating healthy food like vegetables and fruits, drinking enough water, and avoiding junk food are good ways to stay healthy.
Lastly, if we feel sick, we should stay at home and rest. Let’s follow these steps to protect ourselves and others!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主，用于描述日常习惯和客观事实；
③提示：写作要点已明确列出 (洗手、戴口罩、运动、健康饮食等)，需适当扩展细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引入话题，表达关切并引出预防措施 (已给出开头)；
第二步：分点列举具体预防方法，结合细节说明原因或方式；
第三步：总结建议，呼吁行动。
[亮点词汇]
①kill germs 杀菌
②stop...from... 阻止……
③improve immunity 增强免疫力
④avoid junk food 避免垃圾食品
⑤stay healthy 保持健康
[高分句型]
①Wearing masks in crowded places like buses or shopping malls is necessary. (动名词作主语)
②If we feel sick, we should stay at home and rest. (if引导条件句)
20．例文
Things I can do to make my school greener and more beautiful
We should protect the environment because the earth is our home and it is our duty to protect it. As for the students, everyone must do something to protect the school environment.
First of all, when I don’t need the light, I will turn it off immediately. What’s more, I will use cloth shopping bags instead of plastic bags to go shopping. Finally, I will use both sides of the paper as much as possible.
In a word, I will try my best to protect the school environment. I believe that everyone can help make the earth a better place to live.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示和话题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全标题；
第二步，介绍你如何让学校环境更环保更美丽；
第三步，最后表达总结。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②what’s more而且
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
①We should protect the environment because the earth is our home and it is our duty to protect it.（原因状语从句）
②First of all, when I don’t need the light, I will turn it off immediately.（时间状语从句）
③I believe that everyone can help make the earth a better place to live.（宾语从句）
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
同课章节目录