2025年四川人教版中考英语主题写作教学课件-03. Topic 3-假期活动

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高频话题写作
话题篇 主题一 人与自我
Topic 3　假期活动
2025四川英语
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写作三阶攻关
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写作迁移练
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话题词句积累
命题角度探索
1. 近5年四川真题：
①向快毕业的Mike回信介绍假期活动计划与安排(2020绵阳)；
②邀请同学去人民公园大扫除并介绍志愿服务的活动计划与安排(2022绵阳)；
2. 近3年全国真题：
个人参加志愿服务的经历及感受(2024天津，2024包头)。
话题词句积累
词汇积累
介绍假期的活动计划与安排 indoor activities室内活动
take up/develop a hobby培养一个爱好　draw pictures画画
visit museums参观博物馆
listen to the radio听广播/收音机
watch TV shows/talk shows观看电视节目/脱口秀
go to the movies/cinema去看电影 online learning网上学习
go to the library去图书馆
介绍假期的活动计划与安排 outdoor activities室外活动
eat out出去吃饭
go shopping at a store去商店购物
go camping去露营
put up the tent搭帐篷
go fishing去钓鱼
climb the mountain(s)爬山
go to the beach/park/forest去沙滩/公园/森林
介绍志愿服务的活动计划与安排 活动内容
community service社区服务　　　　　
clean up the city park打扫城市公园
hold a charity bazaar举办慈善义卖
campus cleaning activity校园清洁活动
set up an after school study program/food bank/reading program/clean up day设立一个课后学习项目/食物银行/阅读项目/清洁日
介绍志愿服务的活动计划与安排 活动意义
enrich our life丰富我们的生活
spread love and kindness传播爱和善意
improve our social ability提高我们的社交能力
make a difference to our society对我们的社会产生影响
develop a good society and community 建设一个良好的社会和社区
improve students’ ability to get along with others提高学生与他人相处的能力
help me understand the meaning of volunteering帮助我理解志愿服务的意义
个人参加志愿服务的经历及感受 经历
be a guide at a museum在博物馆当导游　　　
chat with these old people和这些老人聊天
tell stories to these children为这些孩子讲故事
pick up plastic bags and other waste 捡塑料袋和其他垃圾
give away books to children in need把书送给有需要的孩子
give out reusable water bottles and bags分发可重复使用的水瓶和袋子
put up posters about protecting the environment张贴关于保护环境的海报
个人参加志愿服务的经历及感受 感受
be filled with joy充满喜悦　　　
have a sense of achievement有成就感
get a strong feeling of pride有一种强烈的自豪感
deepen the understanding of volunteering 加深对志愿活动的理解
have a positive impact on someone’s life给某人的生活带来积极的影响
佳句记背
开头句：
1. I’m going to have a birthday party this Sunday and I want to invite you to join us.
2. My parents and I are going to a nearby village this weekend. Would you like to go with us
3. Knowing that you are a big fan of outdoor exercise, I’m writing to invite you to join the Sunshine Run held by our club.
中间句：
角度
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介绍假期的活动计划与安排
1. I plan to learn about some traditional Chinese culture in my spare time, such as paper cutting and Peking Opera.
2. I’m so glad to hear that there will be a training activity about time management in our community this summer holiday.
3. If you’re making efforts not to be bored in your life, we’ll offer you expert advice on how to have more fun.
4. One of the main advantages of traveling with friends is being able to support each other through the process.
角度
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介绍志愿服务的活动计划与安排
1. The volunteer club I joined plans to visit the local nursing home.
2. We can make plans to visit sick children in the hospital or raise money for homeless people.
3. After we were taught the basic steps of planting trees, Mr. Brown gave each of us tools and we got started right away.
4. For the book donation activity, every volunteer is required to categorize(分类)the books they have collected.
角度
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个人参加志愿服务的经历及感受
1. As long as we choose to do some good things, the world will become a better place.
2. Volunteering is like a bridge which connects us with society. More importantly, it shows our love for the world.
3. Volunteering at local Children’s Home not only taught me the importance of patience but also helped me develop strong teamwork skills.
4. The most valuable lesson I have learned from volunteering is that even a small action may make a big difference.
结尾句：
1. I will be glad if you can come. Look forward to your earliest reply.
2. I would feel greatly honored if you could share the unforgettable moment with us. Look forward to your presence.
3. We are anxiously looking forward to your participation in the activity.
俗语谚语
1. There is kindness to be found everywhere.人间处处有温情。
2. Helping others is the foundation of happiness.助人为快乐之本。
3. Make a gift of rose, hand stay lingering fragrance.赠人玫瑰，手留余香。
4. Receiving drips of water when in need, and I shall return the kindness with a spring.滴水之恩，当涌泉相报。
5. No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted.无论多么小的善行都不会白费。
写作三阶攻关
——参加志愿服务的经历
一阶 审好题 定方向
①定主题：______________________
②定人称： ______________________
③定时态：______________________
______________________
______________________
______________________
身边的好人好事
第三人称
介绍过去的事件时，时态为一般过去时；介绍你的感受时，时态为一般现在时
(2024天津改编)假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你的同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。
④定要点：______________________
______________________
⑤定立意：______________________
______________________
______________________
王红帮助盲人过马路的事迹；你的感受；
旨在引导学生积极参与志愿服务，帮助他人的同时自己也得到快乐
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得在文中出现真实校名。
4. 参考词汇：wander徘徊
Dear Peter，
It has been two weeks since you wrote to me. I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong.
Last Thursday，_________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
二阶 列框架 拓思维
Learn from
Wang Hong
开篇：提出
故事，引出下文
正文：介绍故事
背景及过程
结尾：
表达感受
开篇：提出故事，引出下文
句型：
①It has been two weeks since you wrote to me.
②I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong.
正文:介绍故事背景及过程
素材：
Helped Other people
on her way home; cross the street; need help; offer to help; as far as; bring us happiness
Went to an Old People’s Home
as soon as; clean the windows; sit together; chat with; study Lei Feng’s spirit
Went to Our Community
clear up; talk with; listen to; pick up; play games; develop the sense of social responsibility.
正文:介绍故事背景及过程
句型：
①On her way home, Wang Hong noticed...
②She offered to help...
③We think highly of what she did...
句型：
①In the end, I hope...
②As far as I am concerned...
结尾：
表达感受
三阶 成篇章 赏美文
普通范文 高分范文
Dear Peter， It has been two weeks since you wrote to me. I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong. Last Thursday，on her way home, Wang Hong noticed an old blind man wandering near the street corner. Dear Peter，
It has been two weeks since you wrote to me. I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong.
Last Thursday，on her way home，Wang Hong was crossing the street when she noticed an old blind man who was wandering near the street corner.
普通范文 高分范文
She walked to the man quickly and asked if he needed help. When she helped the man cross the street, the cars waited for them patiently. After they got to the other side, the man thanked her, and they said goodbye to each other. Without thinking twice, Wang Hong walked to the man quickly. She asked if he needed help, and then she offered to help him cross the street. As they made their way, the cars stopped and waited for them patiently. Later, they reached the other side of the street safely. The old man thanked her and they said goodbye to each other.
普通范文 高分范文
Students in my class are really proud of Wang Hong for her kind action. In my opinion, helping others is really good. It can help other people in need and make us happy. What do you think of the story I’m waiting for your reply！ Yours， Li Hua Students in my class think highly of what she did.
As far as I am concerned, helping others is excellent, and it brings us much happiness.
What do you think of the story I’m waiting for your reply！
Yours，
Li Hua
普通范文 高分范文
高阶范文赏析 亮点表达：文中使用crossing the street, offered to help, waited for等动词短语详细描述了王红帮助盲人的过程，并使用了As引导的状语从句说明时间，使用了who引导的定语从句详细介绍了人物动作，为文章后续作铺垫，使文章精彩纷呈。 衔接词：As far as I am concerned等衔接词的使用增强了文章的连贯性，丰富了文章的表述。 写作迁移练
——“青年志愿者日”活动安排
①定主题： ______________________________
②定人称： ______________________________
③定时态： ______________________________
④定要点： _____________________________
______________________________
⑤定立意： ______________________________
___________________________
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邀请外国朋友参加志愿活动
第一人称
一般将来时
活动时间和地点；活动内容；邀请朋友
引导人们意识到志愿活动的意义和重要性，鼓励大家积极参与志愿活动
一阶 审好题 定方向
假如你是李华，你校将于本周六进行“Youth Volunteer Day”主题活动，活动内容主要包括前往阳光敬老院探望老人以及在城市公园捡垃圾。你的英国朋友Jack对此很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件邀请他一起来参加。
内容包括：1. 活动时间和地点；
2. 活动内容；
3. 邀请对方参加。
注意：1. 词数100左右，信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得在文中出现真实校名。
二阶 列框架 拓思维
开头：How is everything going I am writing to invite you to...
中间：We’ll go to...; There we’ll...；And then we will...； It will be a...day; In my opinion...
结尾：I know you’re ...; It will be a pity if you miss...; I sincerely hope that you can...; Look forward to your reply.
三阶 成篇章　修美文
Dear Jack，
How is everything going I am writing to invite you to join in the volunteer activities of our school.___________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【普通范文】
Dear Jack，
How is everything going I am writing to invite you to join in the volunteer activities of our school.
We will go to Sunshine Old People’s Home first this Saturday morning. There we’ll clean rooms and perform for the old. And then we’ll go to City Park to pick up litter in the afternoon.
It will be a busy but meaningful day. In my opinion, helping others can not only make us happy but also influence the society.
I know you are very kind, and you also want to help others in your free time. You cannot miss this chance. I sincerely hope that you can join us for the volunteer day and help those people like me. Look forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【高分范文】
Dear Jack，
How is everything going I am writing to invite you to join in the volunteer activities of our school.
We will go to Sunshine Old People’s Home first this Saturday morning. There we’ll clean rooms and prepare some performances for the old. And then we’ll clean up City Park and spend the whole afternoon picking up and sorting the litter.
It will be a busy but meaningful day. In my opinion, helping others can not only make ourselves happy but also make a difference to the society.
I know you are very kind, and you are always ready to help others. It will be a pity if you miss the activity. I sincerely hope that you can spare some time to come and join us for the volunteer day. Look forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua