(共20张PPT)
(外研版高中英语2019)必修一
developing ideas -writing
Family matters
Unit3
Developing ideas
—writing
Writing about a family memory
learning objectives
After the class, I will be able to
1 know the basic structure and style of writing a family memory by reading the text.
2 create my own family memory by using some useful expressions learned in this class or before.
3 improve writing by sharing the composition with others and assessing according to the checklist.
4 develop a positive attitude to family matters and cherish the family by reflecting on my own behaviour.
Remind me of traveling with my family
Remind me of watching the Olympic games with my family.
Remind me of my son putting
candies in my bag
in case I may get hungry after class
Activate your memory
A family with an old person has a living treasure of gold.
God could not be everywhere, so he created mothers.
A family needs to work as a team, supporting each other's individual aims and aspirations.
I think togetherness is a very important ingredient to family life.
You don’t choose your family. They are God’s gift to you.
6. Family is anyone who loves you unconditionally(无条件的).
Which family quote do you relate to most and why
Activity 1 share and explain
Attention please, I have an announcement to make.
The international Day of Families is held on 15 May every year. It aims to deepen people's understanding of issues that are related to families.
This year the theme is “Cherish Our Family”. To celebrate this day, our school will hold an English essay competition entitled “An Unforgettable Family Memory".Everyone is welcome to participate. The winning entries will be published in our school’s newspaper.
Activity 2 setting the task before learning
1 What is the genre of the text
A argumentation B exposition C narrative
2 What will be the style of the text
A formal B informal
3 What is the tense of the text
Activity 3 predict the textual style
Past tense
1.What brought back the author’s lovely memory
1.What brought back the author’s lovely memory
an old photo in a notebook
Activity 4 read for the main idea and structure
Papa 1 : introduce the ___________for the writing
reason
1.What brought back the author’s lovely memory
2. What happened in the author’s memory
The author wanted to___________________
But______________because___________
To his surprise_________________________.
3. Why is it a lovely memory
surprise his mother with an scrambled eggs at his mother’s birthday ten years ago .
they ended up burnt
he had never cooked
anything before
his mother tasted them and said they weren’t bad
Because it shows the love between the author and his mother.
Love is a magical ingredient.
Activity 4 read for the main idea and structure
climax
Basic elements of a narrative
A Family Memory
Who
When
Where
What
Why
How
I, my mother
ten years ago
in the kitchen
I made scrambled eggs for my mother on her birthday.
It shows the love between the author and his mother.
How did it happen
How did the author feel
Climax (high point )
The last para shows the _________________ of the
memory.
Influence/significance
Summary
reason
the family memory
influence
surprise sb. with sth.
scrambled eggs
tiptoe to sp.
end up + adj./doing
I had never cooked anything before.
I was about to ... when ...
to my surprise
Love is indeed a magical ingredient.
Family is not an important thing. It's everything.
Family is the compass that guides us.
Family is where life begins and love never ends.
Which words or expressions do you find useful for your writing
More sayings about family :
Activity 4 read for language
Vivid verb.
Metephor(比喻)
Think of a special family memory of your own and complete the table.
Activity 5 draft and create
Structure (complete )
Tense
Person pronoun
Language expressive
Handwriting (elegant )
self –assessment student’s assessment Teacher’s assessment
Activity 6 share and assess
Sharing my family memory
Life is full of imperfect things and imperfect people,
Just accept family members’ difference,
cherish the family.
1. continue to complete and polish your journal.
2.share your journal with your family and bring back more family memories together.
Assignment
thank you !
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