(共46张PPT)
Unit 1 Developing ideas
Writing an application letter
写一篇申请信
写作课件
To read the model essay of the advertisement application letter, understand its writing content, format and expression, and master its writing method and format initially.
Try to write an application letter using the stylistic features and writing methods you learned, and show your results.
By reading and analyzing the text characteristics and structure of a sample essay, learn to summarize the characteristics of application letter writing.
Learning objectives
Writing an application letter
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Read the job advertisement and the application letter. Match the headings to the sections and find out how qualified the applicant is for the job.
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Read the job advertisement and the application letter. Match the headings to the sections and find out how qualified the applicant is for the job.
Dear Ms Smith,
I wish to apply for the position of a local tour guide as advertised in the Daily News on 30 June.
I'm very familiar with almost every inch of my home city, and have a passion for history. This role would enable me to help bring our history to life for visitors and promote local culture. As 1 plan to work in the tourism industry after graduation, I would welcome the opportunity to gain experience in this field.
As stated in my attached CV, I can speak both English and French fluently. English is my native language, and I'm majoring in French at university. I also attended an exchange programme in Paris last year,which further improved my French language skills.
Although I'm not a professional tour guide, l organised and conducted a tour of my city for exchange students from Paris. This included trips to a local leather workshop and a flour mill, for which my city is well known. I also put together a directory of useful information for them. I received excellent feedback for my work.
I would be delighted to have the opportunity to discuss my application further with you. I'm contactable via email at this address or by phone on 6747-9818. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Josie Davis
亲爱的史密斯女士:
6月30日《每日新闻》刊登招聘当地导游一职,本人欲应征。
我对家乡的每一寸土地都非常熟悉,对历史有着浓厚的兴趣。这个角色将使我能够帮助把我们的历史带给游客,并促进文化。由于我计划毕业后在旅游行业工作,我希望有机会获得这方面的经验。
如我所附简历所述,我能说流利的英语和法语。英语是我的母语,我在大学主修法语。去年我还参加了巴黎的交流项目,这进一步提高了我的法语水平。
虽然我不是专业的导游,但我为来自巴黎的交换生组织并带领了一次城市之旅。其中包括参观当地的皮革作坊和面粉厂,我所在的城市是众所周知的。我还为他们整理了一个有用信息的目录。我的工作得到了很好的反馈。
我很高兴有机会与您进一步讨论我的申请。我的电子邮件地址是这个,电话号码是6747-9818。感谢您的时间和考虑。
你的真诚,
乔西·戴维斯
1. What job does it advertise for
2. What relevant qualifications does it require
Check your answers!
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Read the job advertisement and the application letter. Match the headings to the sections and find out how qualified the applicant is for the job.
Read the application letter and match the headings to the sections to learn how to write an application letter.
a Stating relevant past experience
b Ending by restating interest, as well as contact information
c Stating qualifications required
d Formal signing off
e Formal greeting
f Stating personal interest and career choice
g Stating purpose of the letter, including position applied for and how applicant came to know about it
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g
f
c
a
b
d
Check your answers!
Formal greeting
Body
Formal signing off
Writing tips
Dear...,
personal interest & career choice
qualifications required
relevant past experience
Yours sincerely,
...
Structure of an application letter:
Beginning
Ending
writing purpose (position applied for, how you came to know about it)
restate interest & contact information
How to write an application letter
Application letter
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Can you write your application letters in complete correct form If not, follow this guidance to improve your writing!
Application letter
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According to the writing purpose, we can classify letters into different types.
To extend gratitude
To apologize to sb.
To invite sb.
To introduce sth.
To make a complaint
To give suggestions
To apply for a position
To inform sb of sth.
To ask for help from sb.
To ask for information
感谢信
道歉信
邀请信
介绍信
投诉信
建议信
申请信
告知信
求助信
询问信
Types of letters
Application letter
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours, Li Hua
申请信
Model presentation
Application letter
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Yours, Li Hua
自我介绍+说明招聘信息+提出申请
自身优势+应聘目的
请求给予机会
Text structure
Application letter
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Structural induction
Application letter
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开头模板总结:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.
…
自我介绍
说明招聘信息
提出申请
I’m_______(姓名), a/an_________________(同位语)
I’m delighted to learn that _______ are wanted…
Now I’m writing to apply for the position.
Opening sentences
句首
Application letter
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…The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
评析:1. 陈述了三点申请原因,结构清晰,层次分明;
2. 使用了非谓语动词作状语,动名词做主语,非限制性定语从句,
表语从句等高级表达;
3. 使用了brilliant,undoubtedly等亮点词汇
Text sentence pattern
句中
Application letter
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All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Text sentence pattern
句尾
Application letter
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假定你是来自北京的学生李华。2022北京冬奥组委会正在招募志愿者,其职责为接待各国运动员及宣传中国文化,组委会要求志愿者能够熟练运用英语,请你用英文写一封申请信。
内容包括:1. 申请原因。 2. 你的优势。 3. 相关经历。
注意:词数100左右。
Writing practice
Application letter
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定题 谋篇 体裁 第一段
人称 第二段
时态 第三段
申请信
第一人称,第二人称
一般现在时,一般将来时
提出申请
1.申请原因
2.自身优势
3.相关经历
结束套语
Decide the topic and plan the essay
Application letter
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第一段
自我介绍,说明招聘信息,提出申请
所需词汇
words we need
来自北京;北京冬奥会;志愿者;申请;职位
Beijing Winter Olympic Games;
from Beijing;
volunteer;
apply for;
position
假定你是来自北京的李华。2022北京冬奥组委会正在招募志愿者,其职责为接待各国运动员及宣传中国文化,组委会要求志愿者能够熟练运用英语,请你用英文写一封申请信。
内容包括:1. 申请原因。 2. 你的优势。 3. 相关经历。
注意:词数100左右。
Wording and phrasing
Application letter
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Words needed for paragraph 1:
1. from Beijing;
2.Beijing Winter Olympic
Games;
3.volunteer;
4.apply for;
5. position
Dear Sir/Madam,
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…
I’m Li Hua, a student from Beijing. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for Beijing Winter Olympic Games. I’m writing to apply for this position.
I’m_______(姓名), a/an_________________(同位语). I’m delighted to learn that _______ are wanted… Now I’m writing to apply for the position.
Writing 1
Application letter
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1. 申请原因 2. 申请优势 3.相关经历
Beijinger;
privilege;
duty;
promote Chinese culture
…
have a good command of English;
be confident;
give guidance and help;
have knowledge of winter sports
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be involved in several exchange programs
…
Text sentence pattern
Application letter
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要点1:申请原因
作为一名北京人,我认为为我们的外国客人提供最好的志愿服务,并与此同时推广我们的中国文化是我的光荣也是我的责任。
As __ ___________, I think _____ ______ my _____________ and _______ to offer the _______ __________ _________ and meanwhile ________ _________ ___________ _________.
a Beijinger
promote
privilege duty
best voluntary service
it is
our Chinese culture
Sentence translation
Application letter
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要点2:申请优势
我认为我能胜任这份工作。
我英语很好而且我也有自信能够按要求给与运动员们指导与帮助。
I think ________ _____________ ______ the job.
I _______ _____ __________ _________ ____ English and I’m confident in __________ _________ _____________ and help ______ ____________.
have a good command of
I’m qualified for
giving players guidance
as required
Sentence translation
Application letter
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要点2:申请优势
我对冬季运动有着广泛的了解,这将对与运动员沟通方面有所帮助。
I _______ _____ __________ _________ ____ winter sports, which will prove helpful in _______________ _____ ________.
have an extensive knowledge of
communicating with others
Sentence translation
Application letter
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要点3:相关经历
我曾经参与过几次国际交流项目而且我喜欢向外国人传播我们的文化。
I have _____ __________ ______ several __________ ___________ __________, and enjoyed _________ __________ _______ to foreigners.
been involved in
international exchange
program
spreading our culture
Sentence translation
Application letter
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Dear Sir/Madam,
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I’m Li Hua, a student from Beijing. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for Beijing Winter Olympic Games. I’m writing to apply for this position.
As a Beijinger, I think it is a privilege and duty for me to offer the best voluntary service to our foreign guests and meanwhile promote Chinese culture. I believe I’m qualified for the job. I have a good command of English and I’m confident in giving players guidance and help as required. I have an extensive knowledge of winter sports, which will prove helpful in communicating with players. I have been involved in several international exchange programs, and enjoyed spreading our culture to foreigners.
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2
3
To begin with
What’s more
In addition
Writing 2
Application letter
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Dear Sir/Madam,
As a Beijinger, I think it is a privilege and duty for me to offer the best voluntary service to our foreign guests and meanwhile promote Chinese culture. I believe I’m qualified for the job. I have a good command of English and I’m confident in giving players guidance and help as required. I have an extensive knowledge of winter sports, which will prove helpful in communicating with players. I have been involved in several international exchange programs, and enjoyed spreading our culture to foreigners.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
I’m Li Hua, a student from Beijing. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for Beijing Winter Olympic Games. I’m writing to apply for this position.
All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Writing 3
Application letter
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Beijing. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for Beijing Winter Olympic Games. I’m writing to apply for this position.
As a Beijinger, I think it is a privilege and duty for me to offer the best voluntary service to our foreign guests and meanwhile promote Chinese culture.
I believe I’m qualified for the job. To begin with, I have a good command of English and I’m confident in giving players guidance and help as required. What’s more, I have an extensive knowledge of winter sports, which will prove helpful in communicating with players. In addition, I have been involved in several international exchange programs, and enjoyed spreading our culture to foreigners.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Integrated writing
1) What job are you applying for Where did you find the job vacancy
2) What previous experience makes you suitable for the job
3) What relevant qualifications and language skills do you have
Read the job advertisement and plan for your application letter by answering the questions.
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Now write the application letter.
Dear Sir or Madam,
①I am writing to apply for the position of the office assistant advertised on the Internet. The following are my advantages.
②I once worked in the local newspaper as an assistant so I have the previous experience. ③Not only do I have an interest in online technology, but also I have got well-prepared for a variety of tasks, including document filing, photocopying and arranging refreshments. ④Because I have a good command of English, which makes it easy for me to communicate with others.
⑤I am confident that I am the best fit for the position. ⑥I would really appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I am looking forward to receiving your reply as early as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
这6点求职要点要记牢!
Sample writing 1
Dear Ms Lee,
I wish to apply for the position of office assistant as advertised in China News Report on 11 July.
I’m skilled in the use of computers, and I have a great interest in online technology. I believe my skills would enable me to contribute to the smooth operation of your office. As I plan to work in an administrative post after graduation, I would welcome the opportunity to gain experience in this field.
As stated in my attached CV, I am well prepared for a variety of tasks, including document filing, photocopying and arranging refreshments. English is my native language, and I’m majoring in French at university.
Although I have not held the position of office assistant before, I did work in a major department store for a few weeks, five days per week on morning shift, and I was regarded as a valuable addition to the sales team. I am capable of learning quickly, and willing to start with the basics wherever it is necessary.
Should you consider me a suitable candidate to interview, I’m contactable at your convenience at samhanson @ or by phone on 8969-7616. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
San Hanson
Sample writing 2
Work in pairs. Make improvements to each other’s application letters, paying particular attention to the structure and language.
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Presenting ideas
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Look at the pictures and answer the questions.
1 What kind of life does each picture show
2 What do you consider to be a successful life Give your reasons.
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Look at the pictures and answer the questions.
1 What kind of life does each picture show
The first picture shows a professional life with people in a
business meeting.
The second picture depicts a family life at the beach with children
and adults.
The third picture illustrates an adventurous life with a person
exploring nature.
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Look at the pictures and answer the questions.
2 What do you consider to be a successful life Give your reasons.
A successful life is one filled with happiness,good health,and meaningful relationships.It's about achieving personal goals and making a positive impact on others.Success is personal and varies
for everyone.
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Work in groups. Talk about what success means to you and give plete the table.
Meaning of success
Examples
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Work in groups. Talk about what success means to you and give plete the table.
Meaning of success Examples
Personal Achievement Winning a competition or achieving a personal goal.
Career Advancement Getting a promotion or reaching a higher position in one's job.
Financial Stability Earning a high salary or having a stable income.
Health and Well-being Maintaining a healthy lifestyle and good physical and mental health.
Relationships Building strong bonds with family and friends and maintaining close connections.
Personal Growth Overcoming challenges, learning new skills, and continuously developing oneself.
Social Impact Making a positive difference in the community or helping others.
Happiness and Fulfillment Feeling content, satisfied, and happy with life and one's achievements.
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Discuss your understanding of success in more detail and make notes.
What does a successful future mean to you
Why do you think that way
What goals do you think you need to achieve to be successful
What would you do if you didn’t achieve these goals
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Prepare a speech about your understanding of success. Consider the following:
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Give your speech to the class.
1 the structure of your speech
2 useful words, expressions and structures
3 helpful public speaking skills
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Give your speech to the class.
Good afternoon, everyone!
Today, I'd like to share my thoughts on success.
To me, success means achieving my goals and living a fulfilling life. It's not just about wealth or fame, but finding happiness and satisfaction in what I do. I believe success starts with setting clear goals. I strive to be the best in my field, learning new skills and helping others along the way.
If I face failure, I won't give up. Instead, I'll learn from my mistakes and keep trying. Success is also about making a difference in the world. It's not just about me; it's about contributing something meaningful.
In conclusion, success is a journey, not just a destination. I'll continue to work hard and pursue my dreams. Thank you for listening!
Sample
Write a reflection after completing this unit. Consider the following:
1 What is your understanding of choices, decisions, future plans and
future development
2 What text types have you learnt about What are their features
3 What words, expressions and structures have you learnt
4 What improvement have you made in understanding different cultures
5 What improvement have you made in using learning strategies and
exploring effective ways of learning
6 What improvement have you made in analysing and solving problems
2018·浙江高考
假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘。
内容包括:
1.口语能力;
2.相关经验;
3.应聘目的。
Assignment
Dear Catherine,
Learning that part-time waiters are needed for your coffee bar, I am writing to apply for the position. I'm a student of 16, studying at a senior high school.
I believe I am pretty qualified for the job. First of all, I once worked as a waiter for months in a fast-food restaurant in my spare time. In addition, I'm outgoing, friendly as well as helpful, which I think will help me a lot in dealing with different customers. What's more, I can play the piano and it can surely create a warmer and friendlier atmosphere.
I’d appreciate it if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
范 文
假定你是李华。得知2024年第33届巴黎夏季奥运会正在招募志愿者,你很感兴趣,想申请。请根据以下要点,给国际奥委会主席巴赫(Bach)写一封英文申请信,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.说明个人优势;
3.希望申请成功。
注意:
1.词数80左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:2024年第33届巴黎夏季奥运会:The 33rd Paris Olympic Games in 2024
Dear Mr. Bach,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student. _________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Homework