专题23 书面表达
【真题呈现】（2024·江苏扬州·中考真题）
端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。为加深中华文化理解，激发爱国主义情怀，某英语报“Culture”专栏正面向中学生举行以“Duanwu Festival—A celebration of patriotism”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示：
(1) What is Duanwu Festival
(importance, date, rice dumplings, dragon boat races)
(2) Why is Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism
(spirit behind the story of Qu Yuan, spirit of dragon boat racing)
(3) As a teenager, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism
(1. …；2. …)
参考词汇：patriotism n.爱国主义； patriotic adj.爱国的； poet n.诗人；
all ethnic groups 全民族； the lunar May fifth 农历五月初五
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
满分优秀范文
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important and traditional festivals in China. It falls on the lunar May fifth. People all across China eat rice dumplings and dragon boat races are held in many places to remember a great ancient patriotic poet Qu Yuan.
Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism. People’s dragon boat racing is closely related to honor Qu Yuan.
As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. First, By working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies, we can make a significant impact on the development of our country. Second, By dedicating ourselves to protect the earth, we also can be a better person and it is good for our country.
【知识点】传统节日
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍端午节；
第二步，介绍屈原故事的精神和赛龙舟的精神；
第三步，说明如何实践爱国。
[亮点词汇]
①is closely related to息息相关
②strive for奋发图强
[高分句型]
①Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism.（定语从句）
②As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland.（宾语从句）
【题型概述】
中考英语书面表达主要考查学生用英语进行书面输出的能力。依据给定的提示，像文字、图表、图画等，在规定字数内写短文，文体多样，涉及生活、校园、社会等话题，综合考察学生的英语运用能力。
【命题解读】
解题能力
01.信息处理：从提示里找出关键信息，合理组织，确定写作要点与顺序，保证内容完整连贯。比如根据活动图画明确活动关键要素来构建文章。
02.思维逻辑：搭建清晰篇章结构，如议论文要有论点、论据和结论；记叙文按事情发展叙述，展现连贯思维。
语言能力
01. 语法准确：正确运用时态、语态、从句等语法规则，避免因语法错误影响表意。
02.词汇丰富恰当：掌握丰富词汇，依语境选准确、多样的词汇，避免重复，使文章生动。
03. 句式多样：灵活运用简单句、复合句和特殊句式，增强文章可读性与表现力。
阅读能力
01.题目理解：读懂题目要求、提示和注意事项，把握写作关键要素，防止理解偏差。
02.范文借鉴：通过阅读范文学习写作技巧，积累表达和模板，并应用到自己写作中。
文化素养
01.文化背景：了解英语国家文化习俗等，避免因文化差异产生不当表达。
02.跨文化交际：写作时考虑读者文化背景，合理表达中国特色内容，促进交流。
【应试技巧】
01. 认真审题：仔细读题目信息，明确主题、体裁、人称、时态和要点，适当拓展细节，不偏离主题和超字数。
02. 列出提纲：依要点列提纲，用关键词、短语或简单句呈现开头、主体和结尾内容，如健康主题的各方面要点罗列。
03. 撰写初稿：按提纲写，用连接词使文章连贯，注意语法、词汇多样和书写规范，不确定处换用熟悉表达。
04. 检查修改：查内容要点、语法、词汇拼写和标点，优化语句，调整段落顺序和补充连接词。
05. 规范书写：在答题纸工整书写，字体、大小、间距合适，避免涂改，保持卷面整洁，给阅卷老师好印象。
【典例01】
你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅读内容为Auggie’s Story（阅读D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。
选择一：以Sometimes people surprise us为题，内容包括：
1．你对这句话的理解；
2．结合实际生活举例说明；
3．你得到的启发。
选择二：以Trouble is a friend为题，内容包括：
1．你对这句话的理解；
2．结合实际生活举例说明；
3．你得到的启发。
注意：
1．词数：100左右；
2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章；
3．照抄阅读语篇不得分；
4．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Title: ____________
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Title: Trouble is a friend
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. And I think trouble is a friend.
The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.
In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar improved greatly.
In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when facing difficulties and to face them bravely.
【知识点】哲理感悟、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：选择一个话题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解；
第二步，结合实际生活举例说明；
第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。
[亮点词汇]
① thanks to多亏
② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③ in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.（表语从句，让步状语从句）
②That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score.（原因状语从句）
【典例02】
传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动，今年的主题是“交朋友，传文化”。假设你是李华，请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日（时间、庆祝方式等）。注意事项：
1. 邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数不少于90个，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称；
4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country
Yours truly
Li Hua
【满分优秀范文】
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. I’m writing to tell you something about the Spring Festival.
Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. Before the spring festival, people usually have a thorough cleaning and put up couplets on their doors. No matter how faraway people are, they’ll try to return to their home. On the New Year’s Eve, people have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the first day of the New Year, people set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. People usually visit their relatives each other. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money.
Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country
Yours truly
Li Hua
【知识点】传统节日
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要介绍一个中国传统节日，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“最喜欢的节日是春节”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、庆祝方式”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①put up couplets贴春联
②set off the fireworks燃放烟花
[高分句型]
①Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. (and连接的并列句)
②I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. (because引导的原因状语从句)
【典例03】
假如你是李平，收到英国笔友 Peter的求助信，请你根据来信，按照要求写一封英文回信。
Dear Li Ping, These days I’m going crazy! My teacher requires me to run for half an hour every morning. But I don’t like sports at all. I think it’s meaningless. What do you think of it Could you share your sports experience and tell me what you have learned from it Please give me some advice as well. Yours, Peter
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
【满分优秀范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter. I understand how you feel. I used to dislike sports too, but now I enjoy running. Running is very good for health. It not only keeps us healthy but also makes us more energetic.
When I started running, I found it difficult at first. But soon I started to feel stronger and happier. Moreover, running every morning helped me focus better during the day.
My advice is to start slowly and set small goals. Then try listening to music or thinking about your favourite things while running, which will make running more enjoyable.
Give yourself a chance to try running, I’m sure you’ll love it.
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】健康与运动、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据Peter的信谈谈自己对跑步的看法、跑步经历并给出建议；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，谈谈自己对运动/跑步的看法；
第二步，介绍自己的跑步经历；
第三步，给出关于跑步的一些建议；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
②not only...but also 不仅……而且……
③think about 思考
[高分句型]
①When I started running, I found it difficult at first.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Then try listening to music or thinking about your favourite things while running, which will make running more enjoyable.（which引导的定语从句）
【典例04】
唯有不断成长，才能遇见更好的自己。你校正在开展主题为“做更好的自己”的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请以“To be a better self”为题写一篇演讲稿，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面谈一谈自己的理解。
To be a better self
懂感恩 敬爱父母；服务社区……
亲自然 保护环境；关爱动物……
爱自己 健康生活；培养兴趣……
注意事项：
1．内容必须包括表格中的要点，并适当发挥1-2点；
2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
To be a better self
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【满分优秀范文】：
To be a better self
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”. Being a better self, I think, means more than being excellent in study but being an all-round person.
In order to become a better version of ourselves, we should first be grateful. We should love our parents. We also use our spare time to serve the community. If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. Second, we should get close to nature. We should protect the environment and care for animals. We also do volunteer work to promote the importance of animals and plants. Finally, we have to love ourselves. We should live a healthy life and develop our hobbies. We should learn ways to relax ourselves and keep a good mood. I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let’s make changes from now on.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】方法/策略、个人信息
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题“做更好的自己”；
第二步，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面具体阐述怎么做。
第三步，总结话语。
[亮点词汇]
①get close to亲近
②keep a good mood保持好心情
[高分句型]
①If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let’s make changes from now on. (宾语从句)
01.
寒假期间，贵州教育发布家庭教育短片“爱，从好好说话、好好吃饭开始。”每个人都渴望拥有一个幸福的家。假如你是李华，请以“How To Make A Happy Family ”为题，根据思维导图及写作要求，写一篇不少于 80 词的短文谈谈构建幸福家庭的小妙招。
写作要求：
1. 谈谈拥有幸福家庭的重要性；
2. 包含思维导图中的全部要点并适当拓展；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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【满分优秀范文】：
How To Make A Happy Family
A happy family is very important for everyone because it brings love and joy. To create a happy family, here are some useful tips.
First, we should have more communication with each other. Sharing our feelings and thoughts can help us understand each other better. Second, family members should share housework together. It not only lightens the workload but also strengthens the bond between them. Third, joining parent-child activities is a good way to spend quality time together and create wonderful memories. Finally, respecting and caring for each other are also important parts of a happy family. A little kindness and understanding can make a big difference.
Let’s work together to build a warm and happy family!
【知识点】家庭生活、意见/建议
【详解】[总体介绍]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出幸福家庭的建议；
第二步，具体阐述构建幸福家庭的建议；
第三步，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also不但……而且……
②care for关心
③make a big difference产生重大影响
[高分句型]
Third, joining parent-child activities is a good way to spend quality time together and create wonderful memories.（动名词作主语）
02.
人工智能AI（Artificial Intelligence) 技术的快速发展给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化，假如你是Li Hua，请你谈谈你对人工智能的看法。
写作要点：
1. 告诉人们不必担忧人工智能的发展；
2. 例举至少2点人工智能的优点；
3. 谈谈你对人工智能的发展期待
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【满分优秀范文】
Hello everyone, My name is Li Hua. I’d like to share my thoughts on the rapid development of Artificial Intelligence, or AI. First of all, I believe we shouldn’t worry too much about its progress. AI is designed to help us, not replace us.
There are many advantages of AI. For instance, it can make our learning more efficient. With AI, we can get personalized learning plans and instant feedback. Another great point is that AI improves our daily lives. It helps in tasks like home automation, making our homes smarter and safer.
As for me, I hope AI can continue to develop in ways that benefit everyone. I dream of a future where AI assists doctors in treating patients more effectively and aids farmers in growing crops sustainably.
In conclusion, AI holds great potential for a brighter future. Let’s embrace it with an open mind!
【知识点】信息技术、社会发展
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，表明人们不必担忧人工智能的发展；
第二步，具体列举至少两点人工智能的优点，并介绍自己对人工智能发展的期待；
第三步，书写结语，总结自己的观点，强调人工智能的积极作用，并表达对未来人工智能发展的期待和信心。
[亮点词汇]
①rapid development快速发展
②personalized个性化的
③instant feedback即时反馈
④home automation家庭自动化
⑤sustainably可持续地
[高分句型]
①AI is designed to help us, not replace us. (被动语态)
②I dream of a future where AI assists doctors in treating patients more effectively and aids farmers in growing crops sustainably. (定语从句)
03.
安全无小事，为了增强青少年的安全意识，你校广播站英文栏目“Fun Learning”将进行每周校园安全提醒。假设你是校广播站的英语播音员，请你根据以下的本周安全提示，以“How to Stay Safe”为题写一篇不少于80词的英语播音稿，提醒同学们注意安全。
写作要求：
1. 短文须包含以上提示的全部内容；
2. 结合图文信息，简述你认为需要重点提醒的内容；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
参考词汇：follow 遵守 high-quality高质量的 drowning 溺水 mask 口罩
How to Stay Safe
Boys and girls,
Good afternoon! Welcome to our Fun Learning. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
How to Stay Safe
Boys and girls,
Good afternoon! Welcome to our Fun Learning. This week’s topic is how to stay safe. Danger is never as far away as we think. How can we stay safe and protect ourselves better Here is some advice.
First of all, follow the traffic rules. Never cross the street when the traffic light is red. If you see any teenagers crossing the street by bike at that time, tell them that it’s not allowed, it is very dangerous. Second, choose high-quality food that is clean and fresh. Pay attention to storage and cooking methods to make sure your diet is healthy and safe. Third, never swim in rivers. A life jacket makes a difference when drowning happens. Last but not least, for your safety, washing hands often helps to prevent most diseases and wear masks if necessary.
Hope the advice above will be helpful for you to stay safe and healthy.
【知识点】自我保护、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己的意图；
第二步，根据题干思维导图中的要点，详细介绍在交通、食物、预防溺水和疾病四方面注意的事项；
第三步，最后书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make sure确保
②first of all首先
③pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①Last but not least, for your safety, washing hands often helps to prevent most diseases and wear masks if necessary. (动名词作主语)
②A life jacket makes a difference when drowning happens. (when引导的时间状语从句)
04.
生活中的每一天都是独一无二的，有的平淡如水，有的却充满了波澜与惊喜。回想一下，在你初中三年的成长过程中，哪一天令你印象深刻、难以忘怀呢？请以“A(An) ________ Day in Middle School”为题，在横线上填入你认为最合适的形容词，展开你的叙述。
要求：
1. 内容须根据思维导图完成，并适当拓展，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于80；
3. 文中不得出现真实的个人及学校信息。
A(An) ________ Day
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【满分优秀范文】
An Unforgettable Day in Middle School
I remember a special day during my junior high school. It was a sunny spring day, with the warmth of the sun shining through the classroom windows. The weather was perfect for an outing, and our class organized a field trip to a nearby park.
On that day, we were all filled with excitement. We walked together, laughing and chatting, enjoying the beauty of nature around us. In the park, we played games, had a picnic, and even had a small talent show where some of my classmates performed.
I met a new friend that day, someone I had never really talked to before. We discovered that we shared a common interest in photography and spent the aftermoon taking pictures of the park and our classmates. It was a wonderful experience that brought us closer together.
Looking back, I realize that it wasn’t just the beautiful weather or the fun activities that made that day so special. It was the sense of community and togetherness that we shared as a class. That day, we were not just classmates but friends, enjoying each other’s company and creating memories that will last a lifetime.
【知识点】情感、叙事忆旧、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全标题；
第二步，指明要讲述的是哪一天，并描述那一天的天气；
第三步，具体讲述那一天发生了什么事情；
第四步，讲述那一天对你的意义，以及你从中学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①be filled with充满
②enjoy the beauty of nature享受自然之美
③share a common interest in在……方面有共同兴趣
④look back回顾
[高分句型]
①I met a new friend that day, someone I had never really talked to before.（定语从句）
②We discovered that we shared a common interest in photography and spent the aftermoon taking pictures of the park and our classmates.（that引导的宾语从句）
05.
学校环境是教育环境之一，良好的校园环境对学生的健康成长有着巨大的影响。根据思维导图的提示并结合自己的生活实际，以“How to make our school a better place ”为题，根据写作要求写一篇不少于80词的短文。
写作要求：
1.短文须包含上图中所有信息，并适当拓展。
2.文章不能出现真实的人名和校名。
How to make our school a better place
As we all know, school is not only a place to study, but also a place to live.
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【满分优秀范文】：
How to make our school a better place
As we all know, school is not only a place to study, but also a place to live. Most of our time is spent in school. So it is important to make our school better. But how to do it Here are some suggestions.
First of all, we should protect the flowers and trees in our school from being damaged. Besides, we should keep our school clean and tidy so that we can focus on our study. What’s more, following the school rules can keep our school in good order. Last but not least, we should get along well with our classmates because good relationships can help us make more friends and reduce the pressure of our study.
All in all, I believe our school will become a better place if we all do things mentioned above. Let’s play an active part in it.
【知识点】方法/策略、环境保护、教育、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章标题以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步，根据要点讲述如何使学校变成更好的地方，注意要有逻辑性；
第三步，表达看法，发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②what’s more还有
③get along well with与……相处友好
[高分句型]
①Most of our time is spent in school.（被动语态）
②we should keep our school clean and tidy so that we can focus on our study.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
③I believe our school will become a better place if we all do things mentioned above.（if引导的条件状语从句）
06.
请根据提示写一篇题为“The Population Problem”的短文。（80词左右）
提示：
1. 人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；
2. 中国是世界上人口最多的国家；
3. 如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题（请举例说明）；
4. 我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。
文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
The Population Problem
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【满分优秀范文】：
The Population Problem
The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with 1.3 billion. It’s about one fifth of the world’s population. A large population causes many difficulties, not only for every family, but also for the whole nation. It has become a serious problem. In many less developed areas, some parents prefer boys to girls. As a result, many girls can’t go to school. I think we should do something to control the population. One answer is known as the one-child policy. It has worked well in controlling China’ s population.
【知识点】国家与民族、世界人口、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山引出话题，人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“中国是世界上人口最多的国家”和“如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题并举例说明”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，写我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。
[亮点词汇]
①one of………之一
②in the world在世界上
③about大约
④not only…but also不仅……而且……
⑤prefer…to…更喜欢……而不是……
⑥As a result结果
⑦is known as被称为
⑧one-child policy一胎政策
[高分句型]
I think we should do something to control the population. (省略了that的宾语从句)
07.
深圳中小学已独立开设劳动教育必修课，假如你是校学生会主席李华，请代表广大学生给校长写一封关于提升劳动教育课程的信件，谈谈你对开设劳动课程的建议和理解。
要点提示：
1. 课程内容建议：
①…… ②…… ③……
2. 开设课程的意义：（至少写3点意义）。
要求：
1. 必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，行文连贯，标点正确，书写规范。
提示词：
开设run；课程course；木工woodworking；屋顶农场rooftop farm；光荣的glorious
Dear headmaster,
I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Dear headmaster,
I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to share some suggestions on running the course.
First, the school can offer paper-cutting and woodworking classes. Second, we can build a rooftop farm on one of the buildings, and teachers can teach us how to plant vegetables and fruits in the farm. Finally, holding some competitions like cooking competition will be a nice choice. We can also invite parents to join in these activities.
Through this course, we students can not only learn some life skills but also take part in social activities. Meanwhile, our school life will become more colourful and meaningful!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】教育、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，表明写信的目的是提供一些开设课程的建议；
第二步，具体介绍课程内容的建议；
第三步，介绍开设课程的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①hold some competitions举办一些比赛
②take part in参加
③invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事
④meanwhile同时
[高分句型]
①Second, we can build a rooftop farm on one of the buildings, and teachers can teach us how to plant vegetables and fruits in the farm. (and连接的并列句)
②Finally, holding some competitions like cooking competition will be a nice choice. (动名词作主语)
08.
现代社会，人们总是感叹时间去哪儿了。中学生总是觉得没有时间做作业，没有时间享受个人爱好，没有时间……，其实时间就在实际生活中，正确利用时间才是关键。请根据图表提示内容，以“My Proper Time”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意：
1. 短文需包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80～100（短文开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
My Proper Time
Where has our time gone How should we spend our time properly ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If so, I’m sure we will live a happier life.
【满分优秀范文】：
My Proper Time
Where has our time gone How should we spend our time properly
As students, it is important for us to study, so we should make a plan for every day. Most of all, we should listen carefully in class. For homework, we need to work out how much time we need, and then finish them one by one. Hobbies are also important in our lives. They can make us feel happy and confident. But we shouldn’t spend too much time on them. We should spend time talking with our friends, staying with the family, and watching TV on weekends.
If so, I’m sure we will live a happier life.
【知识点】计划、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，从学习、爱好与其他方面给出合理利用时间的几点建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make a plan制定计划
②work out计算出
③one by one逐一地
④spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
[高分句型]
For homework, we need to work out how much time we need, and then finish them one by one.(省略that的定语从句)
书面表达01．
在春节热播电影《热辣滚烫》中，贾玲通过坚持不懈的努力，实现了自己的人生价值，过上了“热辣滚烫”的人生。作为九年级的学生，我们正需要不屈不挠的毅力，不断拼搏的勇气。全力坚持做好每一件小事，成就更好的自己。请以“We Only Live Once”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。
要点：
1. 最近或多年来你坚持并全力以赴去做的一件事及理由；
2. 它给你的学习和生活带来了怎样的影响。
Experience Reasons Influence
1. share your own experience (one thing you tried to do ...) ... 1. Why did you do that 2. What effort did you make ... 1. about your study 2. about your life ...
注意：
1. 必须包含所有要点，可适当拓展。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 词数80-100；首句已给，不计入总词数。
We Only Live Once
Dear classmates,
It’s my honor to make a speech here.
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【满分优秀范文】
We Only Live Once
Dear classmates,
It’s my honor to make a speech here. Have you ever tried your best to do one thing Have you ever lived your life to the fullest Today I want to share the thing I keep doing these years with you.
When I was in Grade 7, I couldn’t speak English well because of my poor pronunciation, so I was always laughed at by others. I made up my mind to improve my spoken English no matter how hard it was for me at that time. These years I get up at 5 o’clock every morning so that I can spend at least half an hour practising speaking English. To correct my pronunciation, I also read English aloud after the tape every day. Now my English has greatly improved. This learning experience has made a great difference to my life. I am not as shy as I used to be. Besides, when facing difficulties in study, I will never give up. I’m ready to take on any challenge in the future.
Let us embrace our passions, persevere in the face of difficulties, and strive to become the best versions of ourselves. Thank you!
【知识点】叙事忆旧、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当拓展，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达想要分享自己这些年一直坚持做的事情；
第二步，具体介绍自己坚持并全力以赴的一件事及理由，并表达它给自己的生活带来的影响；
第三步，书写结语，号召大家坚持不懈，努力成为最好的自己。
[亮点词汇]
①laugh at嘲笑
②make up one’s mind to do sth下定决心做某事
③spend time doing sth花时间做某事
④strive to努力
[高分句型]
①Today I want to share the thing I keep doing these years with you. (定语从句)
②When I was in Grade 7, I couldn’t speak English well because of my poor pronunciation, so I was always laughed at by others. (when引导时间状语从句)
③To correct my pronunciation, I also read English aloud after the tape every day. (动词不定式作目的状语)
书面表达02．
为倡导绿色环保新时尚，学校将开展以创建“绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Go green at school”为题，根据以下通知，号召全体同学行动起来，共建美好校园。
NoticeDear students, Our school is not just a place where we come to study. It’s also our second home. A clean and comfortable campus (校园) makes it possible for us to enjoy learning. For this reason, our school will hold an English speech competition named Go green at school. Those who want to take part in it are required to finish the speech within three minutes according to the following information： ◆What problems are there in your school ◆What is a clean and tidy school like ◆What can you do to create a clean learning environment
要求：
1. 表达清楚, 语法正确, 上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括通知中提到的所有要点内容, 并适当发挥；
3. 词数：不少于70词 (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数) ；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Go green at school
Dear students,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school Today it’s my great honor to give a speech about how to build a clean and beautiful campus.
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Thank you for your listening!
【满分优秀范文】
Go green at school
Dear students,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school Today it’s my great honor to give a speech about how to build a clean and beautiful campus.
There are many problems in our school now. Sometimes the faucet is not turned off. Someone did not turn off the lights after leaving the classroom. We still have people who don’t save food. I think a clean and tidy school should be filled with birds chirping and flowers blooming everywhere. Everyone saves energy and cares for the environment. So we all need to take care of the environment.
On one hand, we should save resources. Firstly , we should save paper. We can reuse the textbooks and use both sides of the paper. Secondly, we should save water. We can take short showers and reuse water. Thirdly, we are supposed to save electricity. When we leave from the classroom, we can turn off the light . Also, we needn’t turn on all the lights if enough. On the other hand, we should reduce pollution. We can plant more trees and flowers, choose the public transport and use the cloth bags instead of plastic bags. If we take good care of our earth today, it will be more beautiful tomorrow.
Thank you for your listening!
【知识点】环境保护、文体活动、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生写作时应注意要按演讲稿要求写，不要遗漏表格通知中的校园环保问题，干净整洁的学校应有的样子，以及如何创建一个干净的学习环境等要点，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，应承接短文开头，在第二段具体说明校园现在存在的环保问题，以及干净整洁的学校应有的样子；
第二步，具体阐述如何创建一个干净的学习环境的方法和建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达对听众的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① turn off 关闭
② be filled with （被）充满，装满
③ take care of 照顾，照料
④ On one hand, … On the other hand, … 一方面……，另一方面……
⑤ turn on 打开
[高分句型]
① We still have people who don’t save food. (含有定语从句的复合句）
② When we leave from the classroom, we can turn off the light . (含有时间状语从句的复合句）
③ If we take good care of our earth today, it will be more beautiful tomorrow. (含有条件状语从句的复合句）
书面表达03．
近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。为此，国家印发了《中共中央国务院关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。作为中学生的你对此深表赞同，请结合自身的体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈你的体会，给出至少两条建议。
have labor classes (劳动课) learn living skills
take part in after-class activities plant trees, grow vegetables...
do housework clean up rooms, wash clothes...
your suggestions 1...; 2...; ...
要求：
1. 文中不能出现真实校名和姓名；
2. 80词左右；
3. 适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
注意：短文的开头已为你写出，不计入总词数。
A guideline on hard-working spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get a hard-working spirit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
A guideline on hard-working spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get a hard-working spirit.
As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly. Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some living skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in after-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need to try to do some housework at home, like cleaning up rooms, washing clothes. We can also go to the park to clean up and do volunteer activities to protect the environment.
In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.
【知识点】教育、劳动实践
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何培养劳动精神，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己对最近出台的指导方针的认同；
第二步，从上劳动课、参加课后活动、家务等方面具体介绍如何培养劳动精神；
第三步，书写结语，表达劳动精神教育的必要性。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②do volunteer activities做志愿者活动
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
①we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some living skills at school every week. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up. (and连接的并列句)
书面表达04．
高铁驰骋、航天梦圆、5G领先……在国际舞台上，中国的声音越来越响亮，祖国妈妈的每一次突破都让身为孩子的我们倍感骄傲。Amazing China杂志社正举办以“My Country, My Pride”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示：
1. Describe the development of science and technology in China.
2. Express your feelings.
注意：
1.词数100左右(开头已写好，不计入总词数)；
2.短文中不得泄露个人信息。
My Country, My Pride
I was born in a great country, and it has a beautiful name China.
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【满分优秀范文】：
My Country, My Pride
I was born in a great country, and it has a beautiful name China. It is a country with a long history and rich culture. It has amazing historical sites like the Great Wall, Forbidden City, and Terracotta Warriors. They all show the wisdom and hard work of the Chinese people.
In modern times, the wide application of high-speed rail and new energy cars has made people’s life more convenient. WeChat Pay allows us to shop without carrying cash.
The Chinese people are friendly and diligent, trying to make their country rich and powerful. I love my motherland deeply. And I am proud of its achievements. I will study hard to contribute to its future development.
【知识点】中华文化
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，介绍自己的国家，注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我来自一个伟大的国家，它有一个美丽的名字——中国。”来引出下文对中国的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“中国的历史和文化、中国的科技发展、中国人”三方面入手，重点介绍中国；
第三步，书写结语。表达对祖国的爱，努力学习为祖国做贡献。
[亮点词汇]
①historical sites历史遗迹
②be proud of为……感到自豪
③contribute to为……做贡献
[高分句型]
①The Chinese people are friendly and diligent, trying to make their country rich and powerful. (现在分词作状语)
书面表达05．
假设你是李辉。你校英文报近期正在开展“保护环境，从我做起”的主题活动，号召全体师生从小事做起，践行环保理念。请你根据下面的图示信息，写一份英文倡议书。
注意：
1.短文必须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
3.词数80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My fellow students,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your time!
【满分优秀范文】
My fellow students,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech.
Protecting the environment is crucial for our survival and the well-being of future generations. It helps to maintain the balance of nature and ensures that we have clean air, water, and soil.
There are many ways we can protect the environment. We can start by reducing waste, recycling, and reusing items. Conserving water and energy, planting trees, and using eco-friendly products are also effective methods.
I hope that each of us can take these small steps to make a big difference. Let’s work together to create a greener and healthier world.
Thanks for your time!
【知识点】环境保护、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一和第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先强调了保护环境的重要性；
第二步，接着列举了几种保护环境的方法；
第三步，最后表达了希望大家认真采取这些措施，共同创造绿色未来的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be crucial for对……至关重要
②effective有效的
③make a big difference意义重大
[高分句型]
①There are many ways we can protect the environment.（定语从句）
②I hope that each of us can take these small steps to make a big difference.（宾语从句）
书面表达06．
Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个关于My First Try的帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。
注意:
1. 禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容;
2. 不要出现考生本人信息;
3. 80 词左右。
Teens Around the World
Subject: My First Try
Hey, guys! Everyone has experienced many attempts (尝试) during the growth. What unforgettable experience did you try for the first time What happened at that time What was your feeling or what did you learn from it Looking forward to your replies. Eric, Canada
I will never forget my first time to
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Li Hua,
China
【满分优秀范文】:
I will never forget my first time to be a volunteer.
It was a Sunday afternoon. As a member of Animal Helpers, I volunteered to be responsible for washing, feeding and playing with homeless dogs. At the same time, I took some photos of them and made posters online to call on more people to give a hand.
Through my efforts, over eight dogs were lucky to find their new homes. When I saw them taken good care of and they brought people much fun, I got such a strong feeling of pride.
I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can make a difference.
Li Hua,
China
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要向介绍一次尝试；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍介绍第一次尝试的经历；
第三步，书写结语。讲述尝试后的成长收获。
[亮点词汇]
①be responsible for负责
②at the same time 同时
③call on号召
[高分句型]
①When I saw them taken good care of and they brought people much fun, I got such a strong feeling of pride. (时间状语从句)
②I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can make a difference. (宾语从句)
书面表达07．
爱国是一个永恒的主题，爱国主义是我们民族精神的核心。最近各个学校都积极行动起来，纷纷开展了一系列丰富多彩的爱国主义活动，比如参观爱国主义教育基地和开展红色研学。这些活动能够帮助学生更加直观地感受历史的沉淀和国家的发展，进一步增强他们的爱国情怀。
请你根据以上内容，结合自己的经历，写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。
内容包括：
●your opinion about the phenomenon
●an educational patriotic experience that you had
●something that you have learned
要求:
1. 词数不少于 80词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 参考词汇仅供参考。
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【满分优秀范文】:
When it comes to the patriotic education, I think it is important to take part in educational activities. Because it increases our sense of responsibility.
Talking about the study tour, I can’t help remembering the time when I visited the history museum with my classmates last term. We were led to different halls to learn about the history of the Communist Party of China. Seeing the pictures of different wars, we were deeply moved. At the end of the trip, we took a special photo in memory of this meaningful learning experience.
Through this experience, I have learned the importance of patriotism. I have also had a deeper understanding of our country’s history and culture, and I have been inspired to study harder for the development of our country.
【知识点】教育、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据自己的一次爱国主义教育的经历，谈谈对爱国这个主题的观点，并谈谈从自己的经历中获得哪些收获。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述自己对爱国主义教育的理解；
第二步，描述一次自己的爱国主义教育的经历；
第三步，最后阐述自己的经历中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①sense of responsibility 责任感
②can’t help dong 忍不住做某事
③at the end of 在……的末尾
[高分句型]
①Talking about the study tour, I can’t help remembering the time when I visited the history museum with my classmates last term.（when引导的定语从句）
②We were led to different halls to learn about the history of the Communist Party of China.（不定式作目的状语）
书面表达08．
假如你是李华，你的笔友Mike得知上周三你班围绕“中学生独立性”召开一次班会，他对此很感兴趣。请你给他写一封回信介绍班会内容并说说你是如何培养（自己的）独立性的。写作要点：
1．班会主题：How to become more independent
2．同学存在的问题：
（1）过度依赖父母
（2）遇到问题不会独立思考，总想着马上寻求帮助
3．请和他说一说你是如何培养自己的独立性的。
写作要求
1．不得使用真实的名和学校名。
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3．字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4．至少80词。
Dear Mike,
How are you doing ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分优秀范文】
Dear Mike,
How are you doing You said you were interested in my class meeting held last week. Now let me tell you something about it.
The topic was how to become more independent. There are two main issues among students. One is excessive dependence on their parents, and the other is that they cannot think independently when encountering problems and always want to seek help immediately. As for me, I enjoy independent thinking and I am not easily influenced by others’ opinions. When encountering life difficulties, I always try to find solutions on my own instead of immediately seeking help from others.
I hope it will be helpful to you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】学校人员、青少年问题、文体活动
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍写信的目的；
第二步，具体阐述了这次班会的主题，学生存在的问题及作者是怎么做的；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②as for me对于我来说
③instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①The topic was how to become more independent. (表语从句)
②When encountering life difficulties, I always try to find solutions on my own instead of immediately seeking help from others. (when引导的时间状语从句)
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)专题23 书面表达
【真题呈现】（2024·江苏扬州·中考真题）
端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。为加深中华文化理解，激发爱国主义情怀，某英语报“Culture”专栏正面向中学生举行以“Duanwu Festival—A celebration of patriotism”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示：
(1) What is Duanwu Festival
(importance, date, rice dumplings, dragon boat races)
(2) Why is Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism
(spirit behind the story of Qu Yuan, spirit of dragon boat racing)
(3) As a teenager, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism
(1. …；2. …)
参考词汇：patriotism n.爱国主义； patriotic adj.爱国的； poet n.诗人；
all ethnic groups 全民族； the lunar May fifth 农历五月初五
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
满分优秀范文
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important and traditional festivals in China. It falls on the lunar May fifth. People all across China eat rice dumplings and dragon boat races are held in many places to remember a great ancient patriotic poet Qu Yuan.
Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism. People’s dragon boat racing is closely related to honor Qu Yuan.
As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. First, By working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies, we can make a significant impact on the development of our country. Second, By dedicating ourselves to protect the earth, we also can be a better person and it is good for our country.
【知识点】传统节日
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍端午节；
第二步，介绍屈原故事的精神和赛龙舟的精神；
第三步，说明如何实践爱国。
[亮点词汇]
①is closely related to息息相关
②strive for奋发图强
[高分句型]
①Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism.（定语从句）
②As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland.（宾语从句）
【题型概述】
中考英语书面表达主要考查学生用英语进行书面输出的能力。依据给定的提示，像文字、图表、图画等，在规定字数内写短文，文体多样，涉及生活、校园、社会等话题，综合考察学生的英语运用能力。
【命题解读】
解题能力
01.信息处理：从提示里找出关键信息，合理组织，确定写作要点与顺序，保证内容完整连贯。比如根据活动图画明确活动关键要素来构建文章。
02.思维逻辑：搭建清晰篇章结构，如议论文要有论点、论据和结论；记叙文按事情发展叙述，展现连贯思维。
语言能力
01. 语法准确：正确运用时态、语态、从句等语法规则，避免因语法错误影响表意。
02.词汇丰富恰当：掌握丰富词汇，依语境选准确、多样的词汇，避免重复，使文章生动。
03. 句式多样：灵活运用简单句、复合句和特殊句式，增强文章可读性与表现力。
阅读能力
01.题目理解：读懂题目要求、提示和注意事项，把握写作关键要素，防止理解偏差。
02.范文借鉴：通过阅读范文学习写作技巧，积累表达和模板，并应用到自己写作中。
文化素养
01.文化背景：了解英语国家文化习俗等，避免因文化差异产生不当表达。
02.跨文化交际：写作时考虑读者文化背景，合理表达中国特色内容，促进交流。
【应试技巧】
01. 认真审题：仔细读题目信息，明确主题、体裁、人称、时态和要点，适当拓展细节，不偏离主题和超字数。
02. 列出提纲：依要点列提纲，用关键词、短语或简单句呈现开头、主体和结尾内容，如健康主题的各方面要点罗列。
03. 撰写初稿：按提纲写，用连接词使文章连贯，注意语法、词汇多样和书写规范，不确定处换用熟悉表达。
04. 检查修改：查内容要点、语法、词汇拼写和标点，优化语句，调整段落顺序和补充连接词。
05. 规范书写：在答题纸工整书写，字体、大小、间距合适，避免涂改，保持卷面整洁，给阅卷老师好印象。
【典例01】
你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅读内容为Auggie’s Story（阅读D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。
选择一：以Sometimes people surprise us为题，内容包括：
1．你对这句话的理解；
2．结合实际生活举例说明；
3．你得到的启发。
选择二：以Trouble is a friend为题，内容包括：
1．你对这句话的理解；
2．结合实际生活举例说明；
3．你得到的启发。
注意：
1．词数：100左右；
2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章；
3．照抄阅读语篇不得分；
4．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Title: ____________
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Title: Trouble is a friend
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. And I think trouble is a friend.
The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.
In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar improved greatly.
In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when facing difficulties and to face them bravely.
【知识点】哲理感悟、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：选择一个话题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解；
第二步，结合实际生活举例说明；
第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。
[亮点词汇]
① thanks to多亏
② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③ in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.（表语从句，让步状语从句）
②That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score.（原因状语从句）
【典例02】
传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动，今年的主题是“交朋友，传文化”。假设你是李华，请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日（时间、庆祝方式等）。注意事项：
1. 邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数不少于90个，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称；
4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country
Yours truly
Li Hua
【满分优秀范文】
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. I’m writing to tell you something about the Spring Festival.
Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. Before the spring festival, people usually have a thorough cleaning and put up couplets on their doors. No matter how faraway people are, they’ll try to return to their home. On the New Year’s Eve, people have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the first day of the New Year, people set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. People usually visit their relatives each other. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money.
Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country
Yours truly
Li Hua
【知识点】传统节日
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要介绍一个中国传统节日，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“最喜欢的节日是春节”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、庆祝方式”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①put up couplets贴春联
②set off the fireworks燃放烟花
[高分句型]
①Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. (and连接的并列句)
②I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. (because引导的原因状语从句)
【典例03】
假如你是李平，收到英国笔友 Peter的求助信，请你根据来信，按照要求写一封英文回信。
Dear Li Ping, These days I’m going crazy! My teacher requires me to run for half an hour every morning. But I don’t like sports at all. I think it’s meaningless. What do you think of it Could you share your sports experience and tell me what you have learned from it Please give me some advice as well. Yours, Peter
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
【满分优秀范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter. I understand how you feel. I used to dislike sports too, but now I enjoy running. Running is very good for health. It not only keeps us healthy but also makes us more energetic.
When I started running, I found it difficult at first. But soon I started to feel stronger and happier. Moreover, running every morning helped me focus better during the day.
My advice is to start slowly and set small goals. Then try listening to music or thinking about your favourite things while running, which will make running more enjoyable.
Give yourself a chance to try running, I’m sure you’ll love it.
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】健康与运动、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据Peter的信谈谈自己对跑步的看法、跑步经历并给出建议；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，谈谈自己对运动/跑步的看法；
第二步，介绍自己的跑步经历；
第三步，给出关于跑步的一些建议；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
②not only...but also 不仅……而且……
③think about 思考
[高分句型]
①When I started running, I found it difficult at first.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Then try listening to music or thinking about your favourite things while running, which will make running more enjoyable.（which引导的定语从句）
【典例04】
唯有不断成长，才能遇见更好的自己。你校正在开展主题为“做更好的自己”的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请以“To be a better self”为题写一篇演讲稿，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面谈一谈自己的理解。
To be a better self
懂感恩 敬爱父母；服务社区……
亲自然 保护环境；关爱动物……
爱自己 健康生活；培养兴趣……
注意事项：
1．内容必须包括表格中的要点，并适当发挥1-2点；
2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
To be a better self
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”.
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【满分优秀范文】：
To be a better self
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”. Being a better self, I think, means more than being excellent in study but being an all-round person.
In order to become a better version of ourselves, we should first be grateful. We should love our parents. We also use our spare time to serve the community. If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. Second, we should get close to nature. We should protect the environment and care for animals. We also do volunteer work to promote the importance of animals and plants. Finally, we have to love ourselves. We should live a healthy life and develop our hobbies. We should learn ways to relax ourselves and keep a good mood. I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let’s make changes from now on.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】方法/策略、个人信息
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题“做更好的自己”；
第二步，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面具体阐述怎么做。
第三步，总结话语。
[亮点词汇]
①get close to亲近
②keep a good mood保持好心情
[高分句型]
①If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let’s make changes from now on. (宾语从句)
01.
寒假期间，贵州教育发布家庭教育短片“爱，从好好说话、好好吃饭开始。”每个人都渴望拥有一个幸福的家。假如你是李华，请以“How To Make A Happy Family ”为题，根据思维导图及写作要求，写一篇不少于 80 词的短文谈谈构建幸福家庭的小妙招。
写作要求：
1. 谈谈拥有幸福家庭的重要性；
2. 包含思维导图中的全部要点并适当拓展；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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02.
人工智能AI（Artificial Intelligence) 技术的快速发展给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化，假如你是Li Hua，请你谈谈你对人工智能的看法。
写作要点：
1. 告诉人们不必担忧人工智能的发展；
2. 例举至少2点人工智能的优点；
3. 谈谈你对人工智能的发展期待
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03.
安全无小事，为了增强青少年的安全意识，你校广播站英文栏目“Fun Learning”将进行每周校园安全提醒。假设你是校广播站的英语播音员，请你根据以下的本周安全提示，以“How to Stay Safe”为题写一篇不少于80词的英语播音稿，提醒同学们注意安全。
写作要求：
1. 短文须包含以上提示的全部内容；
2. 结合图文信息，简述你认为需要重点提醒的内容；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
参考词汇：follow 遵守 high-quality高质量的 drowning 溺水 mask 口罩
How to Stay Safe
Boys and girls,
Good afternoon! Welcome to our Fun Learning. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
04.
生活中的每一天都是独一无二的，有的平淡如水，有的却充满了波澜与惊喜。回想一下，在你初中三年的成长过程中，哪一天令你印象深刻、难以忘怀呢？请以“A(An) ________ Day in Middle School”为题，在横线上填入你认为最合适的形容词，展开你的叙述。
要求：
1. 内容须根据思维导图完成，并适当拓展，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于80；
3. 文中不得出现真实的个人及学校信息。
A(An) ________ Day
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05.
学校环境是教育环境之一，良好的校园环境对学生的健康成长有着巨大的影响。根据思维导图的提示并结合自己的生活实际，以“How to make our school a better place ”为题，根据写作要求写一篇不少于80词的短文。
写作要求：
1.短文须包含上图中所有信息，并适当拓展。
2.文章不能出现真实的人名和校名。
How to make our school a better place
As we all know, school is not only a place to study, but also a place to live.
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06.
请根据提示写一篇题为“The Population Problem”的短文。（80词左右）
提示：
1. 人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；
2. 中国是世界上人口最多的国家；
3. 如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题（请举例说明）；
4. 我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。
文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
The Population Problem
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07.
深圳中小学已独立开设劳动教育必修课，假如你是校学生会主席李华，请代表广大学生给校长写一封关于提升劳动教育课程的信件，谈谈你对开设劳动课程的建议和理解。
要点提示：
1. 课程内容建议：
①…… ②…… ③……
2. 开设课程的意义：（至少写3点意义）。
要求：
1. 必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，行文连贯，标点正确，书写规范。
提示词：
开设run；课程course；木工woodworking；屋顶农场rooftop farm；光荣的glorious
Dear headmaster,
I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
08.
现代社会，人们总是感叹时间去哪儿了。中学生总是觉得没有时间做作业，没有时间享受个人爱好，没有时间……，其实时间就在实际生活中，正确利用时间才是关键。请根据图表提示内容，以“My Proper Time”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意：
1. 短文需包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80～100（短文开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
My Proper Time
Where has our time gone How should we spend our time properly ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If so, I’m sure we will live a happier life.
书面表达01．
在春节热播电影《热辣滚烫》中，贾玲通过坚持不懈的努力，实现了自己的人生价值，过上了“热辣滚烫”的人生。作为九年级的学生，我们正需要不屈不挠的毅力，不断拼搏的勇气。全力坚持做好每一件小事，成就更好的自己。请以“We Only Live Once”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。
要点：
1. 最近或多年来你坚持并全力以赴去做的一件事及理由；
2. 它给你的学习和生活带来了怎样的影响。
Experience Reasons Influence
1. share your own experience (one thing you tried to do ...) ... 1. Why did you do that 2. What effort did you make ... 1. about your study 2. about your life ...
注意：
1. 必须包含所有要点，可适当拓展。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 词数80-100；首句已给，不计入总词数。
We Only Live Once
Dear classmates,
It’s my honor to make a speech here.
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书面表达02．
为倡导绿色环保新时尚，学校将开展以创建“绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Go green at school”为题，根据以下通知，号召全体同学行动起来，共建美好校园。
NoticeDear students, Our school is not just a place where we come to study. It’s also our second home. A clean and comfortable campus (校园) makes it possible for us to enjoy learning. For this reason, our school will hold an English speech competition named Go green at school. Those who want to take part in it are required to finish the speech within three minutes according to the following information： ◆What problems are there in your school ◆What is a clean and tidy school like ◆What can you do to create a clean learning environment
要求：
1. 表达清楚, 语法正确, 上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括通知中提到的所有要点内容, 并适当发挥；
3. 词数：不少于70词 (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数) ；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Go green at school
Dear students,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school Today it’s my great honor to give a speech about how to build a clean and beautiful campus.
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Thank you for your listening!
书面表达03．
近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。为此，国家印发了《中共中央国务院关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。作为中学生的你对此深表赞同，请结合自身的体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈你的体会，给出至少两条建议。
have labor classes (劳动课) learn living skills
take part in after-class activities plant trees, grow vegetables...
do housework clean up rooms, wash clothes...
your suggestions 1...; 2...; ...
要求：
1. 文中不能出现真实校名和姓名；
2. 80词左右；
3. 适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
注意：短文的开头已为你写出，不计入总词数。
A guideline on hard-working spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get a hard-working spirit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
书面表达04．
高铁驰骋、航天梦圆、5G领先……在国际舞台上，中国的声音越来越响亮，祖国妈妈的每一次突破都让身为孩子的我们倍感骄傲。Amazing China杂志社正举办以“My Country, My Pride”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示：
1. Describe the development of science and technology in China.
2. Express your feelings.
注意：
1.词数100左右(开头已写好，不计入总词数)；
2.短文中不得泄露个人信息。
My Country, My Pride
I was born in a great country, and it has a beautiful name China.
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书面表达05．
假设你是李辉。你校英文报近期正在开展“保护环境，从我做起”的主题活动，号召全体师生从小事做起，践行环保理念。请你根据下面的图示信息，写一份英文倡议书。
注意：
1.短文必须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
3.词数80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My fellow students,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your time!
书面表达06．
Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个关于My First Try的帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。
注意:
1. 禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容;
2. 不要出现考生本人信息;
3. 80 词左右。
Teens Around the World
Subject: My First Try
Hey, guys! Everyone has experienced many attempts (尝试) during the growth. What unforgettable experience did you try for the first time What happened at that time What was your feeling or what did you learn from it Looking forward to your replies. Eric, Canada
I will never forget my first time to
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Li Hua,
China
书面表达07．
爱国是一个永恒的主题，爱国主义是我们民族精神的核心。最近各个学校都积极行动起来，纷纷开展了一系列丰富多彩的爱国主义活动，比如参观爱国主义教育基地和开展红色研学。这些活动能够帮助学生更加直观地感受历史的沉淀和国家的发展，进一步增强他们的爱国情怀。
请你根据以上内容，结合自己的经历，写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。
内容包括：
●your opinion about the phenomenon
●an educational patriotic experience that you had
●something that you have learned
要求:
1. 词数不少于 80词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 参考词汇仅供参考。
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书面表达08．
假如你是李华，你的笔友Mike得知上周三你班围绕“中学生独立性”召开一次班会，他对此很感兴趣。请你给他写一封回信介绍班会内容并说说你是如何培养（自己的）独立性的。写作要点：
1．班会主题：How to become more independent
2．同学存在的问题：
（1）过度依赖父母
（2）遇到问题不会独立思考，总想着马上寻求帮助
3．请和他说一说你是如何培养自己的独立性的。
写作要求
1．不得使用真实的名和学校名。
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3．字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4．至少80词。
Dear Mike,
How are you doing ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
