Unit 5 Save the endangered animals 单元话题书面表达（含答案解析） -2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（沪教牛津版）

2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（沪教牛津版）
Unit 5 Save the endangered animals 单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1． 你了解野生动物吗？请以Why should we protect wildlife animals？为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明为什么要保护野生动物。
词数：80 左右。
提示：1）为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中；
2）为什么保护野生动物很重要；
3）我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物。
Why should we protect wildlife animals
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2．为了配合"保护野生动物，维护生态平衡"宣传活动的开展，你校拟于下周举行以"Let's protect wild animals!"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下面的思维导图和要求写一篇英语演讲稿，说明保护野生动物的原因，并列举两点保护野生动物的办法。
要求：1）短文应包括图表中的全部信息，可适当发挥，要求条理清楚，行文连贯;
2）短文中不得出现与你自己相关的真实信息;
3）词数不少于80（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Let's protect wild animals!
Why are some wild animals in danger
1）Lose their homes;
2）Be killed for money.
Why is it important to protect wild animals
1）We can't live without them;
2）They can keep the balance (平衡) of nature.
What can we do to protect wild animals
1） …
2）…
Hello, everyone!
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Thanks for listening!
3．随着环境污染和森林的减少，老虎的数量越来越少。现在，它们已经是濒临灭绝的动物。请根据以下提示，以“Save the Tigers”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容提示：⑴老虎全身布满了黄色和黑色的条纹；
⑵它们有长长的尾巴，并且它们很强壮；
⑶它们住在茂密的丛林中，多以吃其他动物为生；
⑷近年来，许多森林被砍伐，老虎的生存环境受到了影响，数量越来越少；
⑸我们应该竭尽全力保护老虎。
相关词汇：条纹streak
Save the Tigers
Tigers have yellow and black streaks all over their bodies. …____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假如你是Kate，猫是你特别喜爱的一种动物，请你用学过的知识写一篇80词左右的短文，内容要点如下：
1）Appearance: beautiful/grey fur/black ears/a black nose/…
2）Behaviour: follow…… in and out/sleep a lot...
3）Food: fish…
4）One thing about the cat ...
My Favourite Animal—Cat
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5．请根据下列信息，用不少于6个英语句子想你同学介绍WWF（世界自然基金会）
全称：World Wide Fund For Nature
标志：熊猫
成员：接近500万
目的：保护环境、保护动物
你对WWF的评价……
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6．请根据下面表格的内容提示，用英语写一篇关于华南虎的短文，并号召大家保护华南虎。词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
现状 濒临灭绝
原因 ⑴人们砍伐森林，华南虎失去家园； ⑵有些人为了虎皮而猎杀华南虎。
建议 ⑴为华南虎建立自然保护区 (nature reserve)； ⑵禁止猎杀华南虎和购买华南虎皮； ⑶请补充至少一条建议。
Let's protect South China tigers
South China tigers used to be seen everywhere in the forests of China. But now……
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7．世界自然基金会公布的一份报告说, 如果全球气温再升高2℃, 企鹅的主要栖息地面积将减少一半甚至三分之二。假设你是李明, 看了以上报道, 请你给校报英文版编辑写一封信, 谈谈如何保护动物。(不少于80同, 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数)
Dear Editor,
A recent report says that the global warming will lead the penguins to lose half or two thirds of their home. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案解析部分
1．Why should we protect wildlife animals
As we all know, many wildlife animals are in great danger! This is because people have cut down lots of forests, and animals lose their homes. Also, people kill animals for food and their fur. People destroy the environment where animals live.
So it's important to protect wildlife animals. Protecting animals is protecting ourselves. Without wild animals, the environment will also become bad for people to live in.
How can we protect wild animals We should make laws to stop killing them. And we should plant more trees instead of cutting them down. We should also stop pollution. If so, we can live with animals happily.
这是一篇命题作文，要求以Why should we protect wildlife animals？为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明为什么要保护野生动物。写作内容包括动物濒危的原因，保护动物的重要性以及保护动物的措施。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对动物濒危的原因，保护动物的重要性以及保护动物的措施三个方面进行了逐一论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的It is+形容词+（for sb.）+to do sth.句式和if引导的条件状语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的be in great danger处于极大的危险之中，kill for为了……杀害，be bad for对……有害处等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
2．Hello, everyone! Wild animals are part of the nature. If their numbers drop, the world's ecosystem will be in danger. Unluckily, many wild animals are killed for money and many have lost their homes. Some species are dying out. They're important to us. We can't live without them. And they can keep the balance of nature. In order to protect wild animals, we can do something together. First, laws must be passed to give illegal hunters proper punishment. Second, we must set up natural reserves to provide wild animals with nice habitats. Thanks for listening!
这是一篇命题作文，要求以" Let's protect wild animals! "为题写一篇英语短文。写作中要包含所给的三个方面的内容，动物濒危的原因，保护动物的重要性以及应该采取的措施。根据所给内容提示可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称复数和第一人称复数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。这篇短文主要介绍野生动物处于危险之中的原因、保护野生动物的原因以及如何保护野生动物。写作时，时态要用一般现在时。
这篇文章内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，如in danger；be killed for money；be important to us；keep the balance of nature；give illegal hunters proper punishment；set up；provide sb. with sth.，高分句型(一) Unluckily, many wild animals are killed for money and many have lost their homes. 高分句型(二) In order to protect wild animals, we can do something together. 注意段落层次，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好一般现在时，以及一些衔接词,如unluckily；And；first; second；等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
3．Save the Tigers
Tigers have yellow and black streaks all over their bodies. Their tails are long and they are strong.
Tigers mainly eat meat. They live in the thick forests and most of them hunt other animals for food.
During the past years,many forests have been cut down so that the living conditions of the tigers are
becoming worse and worse. There are fewer and fewer tigers left in the world now, and they are endangered. We must take action to protect tigers and their living environment. Every little thing we do can help a lot.
本题要求 以“Save the Tigers”为题 ，写一篇保护老虎的短文。内容主要包括老虎的外貌、近年来的生存现状和呼吁。首先阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。再根据要点，写出关键词，短语和句子。最后组词成句，连句成篇。本文主要时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称。
考查命题作文和材料作文写作。本文详细全面的包括了材料中的信息。首先介绍了老虎的外貌，其次表明了老虎的生存现状，最后提出了自己的呼吁，内容层层递进，结构完整。其中使用的一些短语和句型为文 There are fewer and fewer tigers left in the world now, and they are endangered. doing chores can help students learn to look after themselves．运用there be句型，介绍了老虎的生存现状。学习中要注意总结一些写作可用的好词好句，写作时应用上使文章内容更丰富更有条理性。
4．My Favourite Animal—Cat
Hello, I am Kate. I like cats very much. I have a cat in my house. It is very beautiful. It has a round head with grey fur. It has two black ears, a black nose and a small mouth.
When I am at home, it always follows me in and out. It sleeps a lot and likes to eat fish, so it is very fat. One day, I noticed that I hadn't seen my cat for a few days. Later, it went back with three little cats. Oh, how lovely they were！ My cat gave the food to the little cats and protected them. I was happy to see so many cats. Now, there are four cats in my house.
This is my cat. Do you like it
这是一篇材料作文，注意时态是一般过去时和一般现在时，首先介绍猫的外貌；然后介绍猫的行为及饮食；最后介绍关于猫的一件事情。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：have/has+身体部位；at home；in and out；like to do sth.；give...to...等。宾语从句、感叹句和there be的运用为文章增色不少，如：I noticed that I hadn't seen my cat for a few days.；how lovely they were！；Now, there are four cats in my house.等。连词when，so，and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
5．One possible version:
WWF is short for World Wide Fund for Nature. The organization was set up in 1961. It uses a panda as its logo. The number of its members is close to five million. Its aim is to protect the environment as well as the animals around the world. In my opinion, WWF can help make the world a better place for humans and animals to live in. We should try our best to support its projects.
这是一篇介绍世界自然基金会的文章。文章要根据题目给出的五点进行介绍。在介绍时，语句要正确，语言要通顺，要有条理性，层次要清楚。不要出现语法和拼写错误。
这篇文章作者按一定的顺序介绍了世界自然基金会。文章完整地介绍了世界自然基金会和它的作用。文章使用了被动句和动词不定式做主语，it作为形式主语的句式结构。例如 The organization was set up in 1961. 和 Its aim is to protect the environment as well as the animals around the world. 文章还使用了固定短语set up;the number of; as well as; in one's opinion; try one's best do sth等固定短语。
6．One possible version:
Let's protect South China tigers
South China tigers used to be seen everywhere in the forests of China. But now they are endangered. There are two reasons for this. First, people have cut down forests, so South China tigers lose their homes. Second, some people kill them for their fur. This makes them nearly die out.
In my opinion, it is important for us to protect South China tigers. First, we should build more nature reserves for them. In addition, we must stop people from killing them and buying their fur. What's more, we ought to pass a law so that South China tigers can get enough protection.
In a word, we must try our best to protect South China tigers. No buying, no killing.
这是一篇介绍华南虎的文章。在写作时文章要按照题目要求，文章要包含材料中所有的信息。文章在书写时要按照一定的顺序书写。文章的时态用一般现在时，文章要有条理性，文章的语言要顺畅，语句要通顺。
文章中作者按照一定的顺序介绍了华南虎的生存和面临的危机。人们对保护华南虎所给的建议。文章使用了固定短语和句式结构。例如used to do sth.; cut downl lose one's home; die out; in one's opinion;in addition; stop sb. from doing sth. What's more; ought to; in a word; 文章还使用了固定句式 it is+形容词 +for sb. to do sth. 和 No buying, no killing. 等固定句式。文章语言流利，读起来很容易。
7．Dear Editor,
A recent report says that the global warming will lead the penguins to lose half or two thirds of their home. This is terrible. Animals are our good friends. Protecting animals is just protecting ourselves, so we must take action now.
However, how can we protect animals Here are my opinions. First, we should introduce some rules so that everybody knows what we should do. Second, more Zoos should be built to give animals better home. Third, we should try to make the number of wild animals increase quickly. I think the living conditions of all animals will improve if we really take measures to protect them.
Yours
Li Ming
开篇给出了企鹅的处境，接下来可以写对这一现象的感想，呼吁大家保护动物。随后引出如何保护动物的问题，具体做法有：一，介绍规则以便大家知道怎么做。二，多建动物园，给动物家园。三，促进野生动物繁殖。最后总结采取了这些措施后动物们会怎么样。在写具体做法时，可用first，second，third等词连接，注意句与句之间的逻辑性与连贯性。
类似于保护环境的写作，具体措施是作文的主体部分，另外书信的格式也要注意。