Unit 6 Pets 单元话题书面表达（含答案+解析） -2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（沪教牛津版）

2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（沪教牛津版）
Unit 6 Pets 单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1． 近年，城市的流浪狗越来越多。政府设置了流浪狗收容所，但是还是不能解决根本问题。现在请你以一名中学生的身份，写一份倡议书，倡导人们不要遗弃宠物狗，或者倡导人们收容流浪狗作为宠物饲养。倡议书的要点包括：
要点：
1. 狗会忠诚于主人，给我们带来乐趣；
2. 通过饲养狗可以培养人的责任感；
3. 狗是人类的朋友，应该和人类和谐相处；
4. 我们应该爱护狗，不应该遗弃它们。
提示词：被遗弃的abandoned陪伴accompany和谐harmony
要求：
1. 70个词左右；
2. 必须包括以上全部要点，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
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2．班里最近开展"最佳宠物"的话题讨论，你认为养兔子最好。请根据提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文来阐述你的观点。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：1）兔子很可爱，抱在怀里很舒服。
2）兔子很爱干净，个性温和，不会吠叫和伤人。
3）兔子很聪明，会用肢体语言表达喜怒哀乐等情感。
4）兔子体型小，不占空间，基本需求花费也不高。
Rabbits make the best pets
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3．狗是人类的朋友，很多人喜欢养宠物狗，因此了解狗的语言十分必要。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，阐述狗的肢体语言所表达的信息。要求80词左右，可适当发挥。
内容提示：⑴如果你想养宠物狗，了解它的肢体语言非常重要；
⑵狗会通过左右摇摆尾巴来表达自己的高兴；
⑶如果狗很有信心，它会直视物体，抬起尾巴，你很难看到它眼睛的白色部分；
⑷如果狗感到害怕，它会压低头部，尾巴下垂，并看着它害怕的物体，有时它也会通过叫声表达自己的恐惧。
Dogs are our friends.
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4．你喜欢宠物吗 你养过宠物吗 请根据你的亲身经历以"My pet …"为题写一篇词数为80左右的英语短文，内容包括：
1）得到宠物的时间；
2）对宠物外表的描述；
3）照顾宠物的两三件事；
4）饲养宠物的感受。
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5．假如你是APO (The Animal Protection Organization)的成员。请根据下面的内容提示写一份英语海报，告诉人们如何善待宠物。词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【内容提示】
⑴按时给宠物喂食、洗澡；
⑵如果宠物生病，要带它们看医生；
⑶多花时间和宠物进行一些有意义的活动；
⑷你的其他建议和想法。
APO—Treat the nets well
Pets can make our lives interesting.
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6．假设你邻居Mrs White的宠物狗Bobby的叫声影响了你的正常休息。请你根据下面的内容提示，用6个以上完整的英语句子礼貌地跟Mrs White反映这个问题。
【内容提示】
⒈这只小狗很可爱；
⒉但晚上11点后的吠叫声影响了你的休息；
⒊希望她能照顾好小狗，让小狗保持安静。
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7．Sandy很喜欢小狗，她很希望自己能养一只小狗，可是她的妈妈不同意。请你根据下面的内容提示帮Sandy写一封信给她妈妈，说服她同意。词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【内容提示】
⑴小狗很可爱，能给人带来乐趣。
⑵小狗很忠诚，能帮主人看门和拿东西。
⑶小狗容易明白人的命令，能养成较好的生活习惯。
⑷……
Dear mum,
I am writing to ask your permission to keep a pet dog.
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Yours lovely,
Sandy
8．写作
狗是人类的朋友，很多人喜欢养宠物狗，因此了解狗的语言十分必要。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，阐述狗的肢体语言所表达的信息。要求80词左右，可适当发挥。
内容提示：
①如果你想养宠物狗，了解它的肢体语言非常重要；
②狗会通过左右摇摆尾巴来表达自己的高兴；
③如果狗很有信心，它会直视物体，抬起尾巴，你很难看到它眼睛的白色部分；
④如果狗感到害怕，它会压低头部，尾巴下垂，并看着它害怕的物体，有时它也会通过叫声表达自己的恐惧。
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答案解析部分
1．Recently, there are more and more abandoned dogs. Dogs are our good friends. They are faithful to people. They accompany people and bring them a lot of love and happiness. In addition, people can become responsible by taking care of dogs. They should live in harmony with people and we must love them. If we decide to keep a dog as a pet, it's necessary for us to take good care of them and never get rid of them, for we are friends forever.
这篇作文要求根据所给的要点提示，以一名中学生的身份，写一份倡议书，倡导人们不要遗弃宠物狗，或者倡导人们收容流浪狗作为宠物饲养。时态用一般现在时，人称用第三人称和第一人称。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
考查应用文写作。短文条理清晰，内容连贯。能把所给内容很好地融入到文章当中。高分亮点：短语：be faithful to，take （good）care of，get rid of等。句型：If we decide to keep a dog as a pet, it's necessary for us to take good care of them and never get rid of them, for we are friends forever.（条件状语从句，原因状语从句）。
2．Rabbits make the best pets
In my opinion, rabbits make the best pets.
Firstly, rabbits are lovely. It's pleasant to hold them in our arms. Secondly, rabbits are clean. They are also very gentle. Some pets like dogs may bark loudly or hurt people. But rabbits won't. They are quiet. Thirdly, rabbits are clever. They can show their feelings by using their body language. Finally, rabbits are little and they won't take up much space. They are not expensive to keep, either.
For these reasons, I believe that rabbits make the best pets.
这篇作文要求根据所给的提纲，就班里开展"最佳宠物"的话题讨论，你认为养兔子最好，写一篇短文来阐述自己的观点。 人称以第三人称为主，时态用一般现在时。根据提示，分别从兔子的外貌、性格、体型等方面写出养兔子的好处。提纲已给出需要写的内容，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。注意紧扣文章主题，要点齐全，可适当发挥。语言要连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
考查提纲作文。短文以总分总三段来写：开门见山写出自己心中的最佳宠物；第二段分别说明养兔子的好处；最后总结从养兔子中所学到的东西。内容完整，条例清晰，表述准确，语言的表述符合英语的表达习惯。firstly，secondly，thirdly和finally等副词的使用增强逻辑关系，使行文更加连贯流畅。 高分亮点：短语：hold in one's arms，take up等；句型：Finally, rabbits are little and they won't take up much space.（并列句）； I believe that rabbits make the best pets. （宾语从句）。
3．Dogs are our friends.
It's important to
understand what dogs are saying with their bodies if we want to keep a pet dog.
A dog may move its tail from side to side to express happiness. If a pet dog is
confident, it will look at something directly, and its tail is up and it is
difficult to see the white part of its eyes. If a dog is scared, its head will
be lower and its tail is down. It may look at the thing that is scaring it.
Sometimes, a dog may also bark to express its fear.
本题要求根据提示写一篇短文，阐述狗的肢体语言所表达的信息 。提示主要包括了解狗的肢体语言的重要性和狗的肢体语言的意义首先阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。再根据要点，写出关键词，短语和句子。最后组词成句，连句成篇。本文主要时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称。
考查材料作文写作。本文详细全面的包括了提示中反馈的信息。首先强调了了解狗的肢体语言的重要性，其次介绍了狗的一些肢体语言的具体意义，内容层层递进，结构完整。其中使用的一些短语和句型为文章增色不少。例如keep a pet，from side to side，look at，a part of等。其中 It's important to understand what dogs are saying with their bodies if we want to keep a pet dog. 运用it is+形容词+for sb. to do sth.，表明了了解狗的肢体语言的重要性。学习中要注意总结一些写作可用的好词好句，写作时应用上使文章内容更丰富更有条理性。
4．My pet dog
I have a pet dog. My
uncle sent it to me two years ago. At that time it was a baby dog, but now it
has grown up. It is black with two big ears and a short brown tail. It weighs
three and a half kilograms. Every day I feed it with dog food. After supper I
usually walk it around the park near my home. To keep it clean, I wash it every
day. It brings me much joy and I have learned how to care for others from
keeping it.
这是一篇提纲作文，题目中已经给出了很多信息和要点。在写作时，要注意审题，不要遗漏要点。从题目可知，这篇文章是介绍自己的宠物，所以要用第一、三人称写，可以用一般现在时。在组织语言的时候，要注意表达的准确性。句子要完整，表达要清晰，句子之间要流畅。
本文紧扣材料，要点完整，表达清晰流畅。文中用到了很多短语，如：sent it to me；feed it with；walk around，care for等等。此外，还用了一些经典语句，比如, It is black with two big ears and a short brown tail. It brings me much joy and I have learned how to care for others from keeping it.等。另外时态运用非常准确，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，没有任何语法错误。
5．One possible version:
APO—Treat the pets well
Pets can make our life interesting. We should take good care of them.
First, we need to feed them and clean them on time to help them keep healthy.
Second, if they get sick, we must take them to the doctors, or they may die of illnesses.
Third, pets have feelings. We should spend more time with them on some meaningful activities, such as doing sports, listening to music, playing games and so on.
In addition, if we take our pets out for walks, we should keep them from being hurt by other animals or cars on the road. If we care for the pets well, they will be very faithful to us.
这是一篇提纲类海报的应用文。写作时要注意要点齐全，不能遗漏。同时可适当补充你自己的其他建议和想法：按照按时给宠物喂食、洗澡；宠物生病时要及时就医；花时间带宠物做运动。主要以第一人称和一般现在时。同时应适当使用过渡词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。
文章中使用了非常好的固定短语和固定搭配短语或含有条件状语从句的复合句（主将从现）句子会给文章增色take good care of...照顾；die of illnesses. 死于疾病； spend time on sth.花费时间做某事；keep...from 让......远离。和If we care for the pets well, they will be very faithful to us. 同时还运用了first，second、third和in addition使上下文衔接的更好，层次分明。
6．One possible version:
Hello, Mrs White. I want to talk to you about your dog Bobby. I think he is a cute dog. I love playing with him. But I find that he is a little naughty, because he still barks loudly after 11 o'clock in the evening. This keeps me from having a good rest. So can you care for him and make him stay quiet at night
Thank you so much!
这是一篇提纲作文，题目中已经给出了基本的信息和要点。写此类作文，应该通读提纲，把握要点，确定正确的时态。另外，在写作时要表达清楚，信息完整，语言通顺，语意连贯。充分利用好提示语言，使作文结构完整。
这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。固定句型结构与短语的运用为文章增色。比如：want to do sth；play with sb；keep sb from doing sth；I think he is a cute dog. I find that he is a little naughty,
7．One possible version:
Dear mum,
I am writing to ask your permission to keep a pet dog.
In my opinion, keeping a dog as a pet is a good idea. Firstly, the dog is very cute and it can bring us fun. When you get home from tiring work, it can dance happily around you. Secondly, the dog is very faithful. It can help its owner watch the door add carry things. What's more, the dog is very clever. It can understand the owner's order easily and form good life habits. Finally, it can help us stay healthy. When we take it for a walk, we do exercise too.
So mum, I hope to keep a dog. Shall we
Yours lovely,
Sandy
这是一篇给材料作文，主要介绍养宠物狗的优点或好处。题目中已经给出了很多信息和要点。在写作时，要注意审题，不要遗漏要点。用一般现在时。在组织语言的时候，要注意表达的准确性。句子要完整，表达要清晰，句子之间要流畅。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。副词firstly；secondly；finally及短语 In my opinion；what's more；stay healthy的使用，恰切地表达了养宠物狗的好处；文中还使用了keep a dog as a pet；hope to do sth 等，这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
8． Dogs are our friends. It's important to understand what dogs are saying with their bodies if we want to keep a pet dog. A dog may move its tail from side to side to express happiness. If a pet dog is confident, it will look at something directly, and its tail is up and it is difficult to see the white part of its eyes. If a dog is scared, its head will be lower and its tail is down. It may look at the thing that is scaring it. Sometimes, a dog may also bark to express its fear.
这是一篇提纲作文，根据所给的四点提示，并适当发挥，完成写作任务。第一点提示的关键句型是 It's important to understand……，即 It's +形容词+动词不定式结构。第二点提示中用动词不定式作目的状语，第三和第四点提示中都用到了If 引导的条件状语从句，在时态上注意“主将从现”。能用好这些固定句式，就可以为文章增添不少亮色。