《中考英语习作专题复习-环境保护》教学课件+内嵌视频-2025学年春季学期中考英语二轮复习

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（人教新目标）九年级下学期英语写作专题复习
Reading for writing Save the Earth
中考话题复习之环境保护
Save the Earth
Reading for Writing
中考话题复习之环境保护
Teaching Aims:
1. To help arouse students’ awareness of polishingtheir compositions.
2. To help students master the common techniques for writing
介绍书面表达六步法(Introduction)
1.仔细审题,确立主题,明确要求.
2.围绕主题,提炼要点,编拟提纲.
3.分析要点及提纲,提炼关键单词和短语
4.恰当使用句型,连词成句
5.恰当使用连接词,组句成篇
6.规范誊写
英语写作关键：
A.学会使用较高级词汇。
B.学会使用较丰富的句式。
C．学会使用恰当的连接词。
2．呈现学生作文中出现的典型句子。要求学生用高级词汇、高级句型进行改写，加以完善
Textbook linking
environmental
protection
1
2
3
structure
main ideas
Reading
Writing
话题复习
advanced
sentences
Part 2 Reading
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
Para.4
C.Childhood experience.
D.Environment 50
years later.
B.Ways to protect the
environment.
A.Calling on everyone
to take action.
I always think of my childhood experience in an African village. I would visit a stream next to our home to get water for my mother. I would drink water straight from the stream. I would play with the fallen flowers in the stream. And I would try to touch the fish. I saw lots of small fish swimming through the clean water. This is the world I received from my parents.
Today, over 50 years later, the stream has dried up. Women walk long distances for water, which is not always clean, and children don’t even know what they have lost. It was not until now that I realized the importance of protecting the environment.
It’s time to take action to protect the environment! First,We should save water and make the best use of it. At the same time, trees should be planted as many as possible. What’s more, we can always go green by carrying our cloth bags while shopping and taking public transportation or shared bikes while moving around.
If everyone gets involved, we will be able to save our earth and give back to our children a world of beauty and wonder.
Task1:Read for main ideas
What’s the structure of the passage
I always think of my childhood experience in an African village. I would visit a stream next to our home to get water for my mother. I would drink water straight from the stream. I would play with the fallen flowers in the stream. And I would try to touch the fish.But every time I put my little fingers under them, they would go away. Later, I saw thousands of young fish swimming through the clear water . This is the world I received from my parents.
Today, over 50 years later, the stream has dried up. Women walk long distances for water, which is not always clean, and children don’t even know what they have lost. It was not until now that I realized the importance of protecting the environment.
It’s time to take action to protect the environment! First,We should save water and make the best use of it. At the same time, trees should be planted as many as possible. What’s more, we can always go green by carrying our cloth bags while shopping and taking public transportation or shared bikes while moving around.
If everyone gets involved, we will be able to save our earth and give back to our children a world of beauty and wonder.
A
B
D
P4
P1
P2
P3
P4
P1
P2
P3
P4
P1
P2
P3
P4
P1
P2
P3
C
Task 2:Read for the structure
Ruth
I always think of my childhood experience
in an African village.
In the past
I always think of my childhood experience in an African village. I would visit a stream next to our home to get water for my mother. I would drink water straight from the stream. I would play with the fallen flowers in the stream. And I would try to touch the fish.But every time I put my little fingers under them, they would go away. Later, I saw thousands of young fish swimming through water . This is the world I received from my parents.
visit a stream
next to our home
drink water straight
play with fallen flowers
touch the fish
Task2:1.Read paragragh 1 and complete the sentences
I would try to touch the fish.
catch
I always think of my childhood experience in an African village. I would visit a stream next to our home to get water . I would drink water straight from the stream. I would play with the fallen flowers in the stream. And I would try to touch the fish but they would go away. Later, I saw young fish swimming.But every time I put my little fingers under them, go through water . This is the world I received from my parents.
pick
What is the writer’s feeling for her hometown
I always think of my childhood experience in an African village. I would visit a stream next to our home to get water for my mother. I would drink water straight from the stream. I would play with the fallen flowers in the stream. And I would try to touch the fish.But every time I put my little fingers under them, they would go away. Later, I saw young fish swimming throughwater . This is the world I received from my parents.
now
Today, over 50 years later, the stream has dried up. Women
walk long distances for water, which is not always clean, and children don’t even know what they have lost. It was not until now that I realized the importance of protecting the environment.
The stream_________
Women____________
Water _____________
Children___________
Task2:2.Read paragraph 2 and fill in the blanks
in the past
now
visit a stream
next to our home
drink water straight
play with fallen flowers
touch the fish
has dried up
walk long distances
is not always clean
don’t even know what they have lost
Read for structure
environmental problems
Task2:3.Read paragraph 3 and answer
It’s time to take action to protect the environment! First,We should save water and make the best use of it. At the same time, trees should be planted as many as possible. What’s more, we can always go green by carrying our cloth bags while shopping and taking public transportation or shared bikes while moving around.
Three
first second besides also last but not least...
How many ways can we find How do you know
ways
Read for structure
environmentalproblems
Task2:4.Read paragraph 4 and answer
What’s the writer’s wish
If everyone gets involved, we will be able to save our earth and give back to our children a world of beauty and wonder.
I always think of my childhood experience in an African village. I would visit a stream next to our home to get water for my mother. I would drink water straight from the stream. I would play with the fallen flowers in the stream. And I would try to touch the fish.But every time I put my little fingers under them, they would go away. Later, I saw thousands of young fish swimming through the clear water . This is the world I received from my parents.
Responsibility责任感
Our current actions
will shape the future
of our descendants.
我们现在的行为
就是子孙后代的未来。
ways
appeal
Read for structure
environmental
problems
/ pi l/呼吁
Task 3:1.Read for advanced sentences高级句子
I always think of my childhood experience in an African village. I would visit a stream next to our home to get water for my mother. I would drink water straight from the stream. I would play with the fallen flowers in the stream. And I would try to touth the fish. I saw lots of small fish swimming through the clean water. This is the world I received from my parents.
Today, over 50 years later, the stream has dried up. Women walk long distances for water, which is not always clean, and children don’t even know what they have lost.
It was not until now that I realized the importance of protecting the environment.
It’s time to take action to protect the environment! First,We should save water and make the best use of it. At the same time, trees should be planted as many as possible. What’s more, we can always go green by carrying our cloth bags while shopping and taking public transportation or shared bikes while moving around.
If everyone gets involved, we will be able to save our earth and give back to our children a world of beauty and wonder.
a lot of rubbish on the beach .
仿
Task 3:2. Imitate the sentences
some people have a picnic at the foot
of the mountain.
too many cars in the street.
I would visit a stream next to our home to get water for my mother.
I would drink water straight from the stream.
I would play with the fallen flowers in the stream.
I would try to touch the fish.
on the beach
at the foot of
I see
I see
I see
in the street
直到现在我才意识到保护环境的重要性。
直到现在我才意识到把我们的城市变成一个更好家园的重要性。
中
英
仿
It’s not until now that I realize the importance of protecting the environment.
It’s not until now that I realize the importance of making our city a better home.
Task 3:2. Imitate the sentences
中
英
我们通常可以通过离开房间时关灯来节约能源（save energy)
仿
我们可以通过购物时自己携带购物袋来实现环保。
We can always go green by carrying our cloth bags while shopping.
We can always save energy by turning off lights while leaving room.
Task 3:2. Imitate the sentences
writing
structure
language
ways
appeal
1.advanced sentences
2.linking words
environmental
probems
Summary：
How can we write a wonderful composition
Discuss:
1.What problems can you see in our city
2. How can we make our city a better home
亲爱的同学们:
我们生活的这座城市，正散发着独特的魅力。为了让这份美丽永恒延续，让我们的家园在发展中更具活力与韵味，假如你是班长李华，请你向同学们发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，为了让我们的城市更美好尽一份力。
倡议书内容包括:
1)日常生活中见到的人为的破坏环境，浪费能源的现象。
2）至少写四条关于保护环境，促进家乡可持续发展的措施和方法。
3）呼吁责任感。
注意:
1.词数 80-100，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
说明
现在
一
环境保护
Part 3 Writing
Dear classmates,
I’m writing this letter to call your attention to make our city a better home.
li Hua
Sharing
Share your group’s works .
Checklist Does the writing include all the key points
Does the writing have beautiful words and advanced sentences
Does the writing have proper linking words
Is the handwriting beautiful？
Writing
Dear classmates,
I’m writing this letter to call your attention to make our city a better home.
The environmental problems are getting more and more serious nowadays.I sometimes see a lot of rubbish on the beach where I play with my friend .I see some people have a picnic at the foot of the mountains.I often see too many cars in the street which makes the air unfresh.I hear someone speak loudly in public places.I see someone forget to turn off the lights while leaving home..It is not until now that I realize the importance of making our city a better home.
It’s time to take action.First, we should throw rubbish into the bins. Besides, we should protect the natural environment. What’s more, it’s important for us to keep quiet in public places. Last but not least, we can save energy by turning off lights while leaving home.
If everyone plays a part ,our city will become better and better.
Li Hua
purpose
environmental
problems
ways
appeal(呼吁)
Chairman Xi said:“We should care for the ocean as we care for our lives, leaving behind a stretch of blue sea and a clear sky for future generations.Protect the environment as you protect your eyes.”
习主席说“要像对待生命一样关爱海洋，为子孙后代留下一片碧海蓝天。像保护眼晴一样保护生态环境。”
提高书面表达建议：(Suggestions)
1．准确记忆单词
2．掌握足够的语言知识点，如构词法，语法知识等
3．经常进行写作练习
4．适当背诵作文参考答案
5．大量阅读
关联词（the linking words）
1.表示并列: and, as well as, both...and, what’s more，not only...but also
2.表示选择: or, either...or
3.表示转折: : but, however, although\though, after all, anyway
4.表示因果: because, so, since, for, as a result
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not...but, while, on the one hand...on the other hand
7.表示解释: for example, such as, to tell the truth
8.表示顺序first(ly), first (of all), second(ly), next, finally, in the end
:9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact
10.表示结论 all in all, in a word, generally speaking, in short
Steps of writing a good article
1 Read the instructions carefully and decide the style.(明审题)
2 Follow typical patterns and list the key points .(列提纲)
3 Put them into sentences.(选句型)
4 Develop the sentences into a passage.（妙连句）
5 Check the work.（细复查）
Homework
Polish your writing.
2.April 22nd is World Earth Day,
What can we do for the earth Please write down.
What can we do for the earth
Thank you!