(共21张PPT)
Developing ideas—writing
Unit 5 Into the unknown
Learning objective
To know the structure and characteristics of the passage writing about the unexplained
Along a special line of latitude, known as the 30th parallel north, lie numerous sites of ancient civilisations and impressive natural features.
n. 纬度
Read the magazine article and answer the questions.
Pre-writing
Ancient civilisations appeared on the parallel, including Babylon, with its famous tower; Egypt, with its pyramids; China, with its Sanxingdui culture, etc. These civilisations
appeared at a similar time, and all developed advanced bronze-making techniques. Were they part of a single super-civilisation, as some think
青铜制造技术
It’s argued that the 30th parallel north is a line of great natural energy, with frequent earthquakes and volcanic eruptions. This creates amazing natural features, including Mount Qomolangma, the Dead Sea, and rivers, such as the Nile, the Mississippi and the Yangtze. Lacking any concrete evidence, some even claim it was supernatural powers!
具体的证据
Scientists, however, dispute these theories. It’s more likely, they argue, that civilisations arose on the 30th parallel north because the climate there is generally warm and wet. Major tectonic plates meet at this latitude, causing earthquakes, which helped form the Himalayas. The rest, they say, is either coincidence or fantasy.
v. 对……表示质疑
(地球表面的)构造板块
1. Why is the 30th parallel north mysterious
The 30th parallel north is mysterious because it is where numerous sites of ancient civilisations and impressive natural features lie.
2. What are some unusual explanations for it
Some believe that the 30th parallel north is a line of great natural energy, with frequent earthquakes and volcanic eruptions, and others even claim that its amazing natural features were caused by supernatural powers.
3. What are some possible scientific explanations
Possible scientific explanations for the 30th parallel north include the generally warm and wet climate that made it a good place for civilisations to develop, and the fact that it is where major tectonic plates meet.
What does an article about an unexplained phenomenon usually include
an article about an unexplained phenomenon
what the unexplained phenomenon is.
the reasons why it is mysterious.
non-scientific explanations about it.
scientific explanations about it.
Have you heard of the Bermuda Triangle Tell something about it.
While-writing
Plan an article about an unexplained phenomenon. Do further research if necessary.
What is the unexplained phenomenon
Why is it mysterious
What non-scientific explanations are there
How do scientists explain it
What is the unexplained phenomenon
Far below the surface of the North Atlantic Ocean, in a roughly triangular area known as the Bermuda Triangle, lie more than 50 shipwrecks and 20 plane wrecks.
Why is it mysterious
What makes these wrecks so mysterious is that the cause of their fate remains largely unknown – ships were abandoned without apparent reason, distress signals were never sent and aircraft were lost without trace.
What non-scientific explanations are there
Some believe that supernatural forces are responsible, while others put the accidents and disappearances down to coincidence.
How do scientists explain it
Scientific theories, meanwhile, include pilot error when trying to navigate the area, and huge “rogue waves” caused by terrible storms. Although many ships and planes cross the Bermuda Triangle without incident, the stories behind those doomed vessels’ fates continue to capture people’s imaginations.
Now write an article about an unexplained phenomenon.
Please keep in mind the four parts to be included in an article about an unexplained phenomenon.
Do further research if necessary.
Work in pairs. Make improvements to each other’s articles and share them with the class.
Post-writing
Questions Your evaluation Evaluator
Does the article include the key points 4 2 0
Is the article organized properly and smoothly 3 2 1 How is the language 12 8 4 2 How is the handwriting 3 1 -1 Paper design 3 1 -1 TOTAL MARK
Evaluation
The Bermuda Triangle
Far below the surface of the North Atlantic Ocean, in a roughly triangular area known as the Bermuda Triangle, lie more than 50 shipwrecks and 20 plane wrecks. What makes these wrecks so mysterious is that the cause of their fate remains largely unknown – ships were abandoned without apparent reason, distress signals were never sent and aircraft were lost without trace. Some believe that supernatural forces are responsible, while others put the accidents and disappearances down to coincidence. Scientific theories, meanwhile, include pilot error when trying to navigate the area, and huge “rogue waves” caused
adj. 显而易见的
百慕大三角
n. 遇难船只
求救信号
n. 痕迹
adj. 超自然的
n. 巧合
超级巨浪
One possible version
by terrible storms. Although many ships and planes cross the Bermuda Triangle without incident, the stories behind those doomed vessels’ fates continue to capture people’s imaginations.
n. 大船;轮船
adj. 注定要失败的
引起人们的想象
依旧不详
Important expressions and sentences:
1. remain unknown
Some parts of Shakespeare’s life will always remain unknown.
莎士比亚一生中的某些部分永远不会为人所知。
Some details remain unknown.
也有一些细节目前仍不明了。
Language points
把……归因于
2. put … down to …
You may be a skeptic and put it down to life’s inequalities. 你可能是个怀疑论者,并将其归因于生活的种种不平等。
For many, a successful marriage can be put down to attraction, devotion, patience - and true love.
对于很多人来说,成功的婚姻可以归因于吸引力、奉献、耐心以及真爱。
3. Far below the surface of the North Atlantic Ocean, in a roughly triangular area known as the Bermuda Triangle, lie more than 50 shipwrecks and 20 plane wrecks.
本句是一个完全倒装句。 Far below the surface of the North Atlantic Ocean 位于句首,全倒装,more than 50 shipwrecks and 20 plane wrecks 为主语。
Polish your article about an unexplained phenomenon and hand it in.
Homework