外研版九年级下册Module 4 Unit 2 we must keep the camp clean Writing课件(共11张PPT)

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Module 4 Unit 2
We must keep the camp clean.
Writing
Revision
What should (must) you do if there are bears nearby when you go camping
1) You must hang the food high in a tree.
2) … must / should pick up the rubbish.
3) … must / should keep the camp clean.
4) … can’t leave anything which bears might think is food.
5) … should make a lot of noise.
6) … mustn’t move or make a sound.
7) ... mustn’t run because no one can run faster in the forest than a bear.
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能查阅资料，介绍一处自然景区。
能正确运用情态动词写一篇去自然景区游玩的注意事项。
目标: 能正确运用情态动词写一篇去自然景区游玩的注意事项
Step 1 Think of an area of countryside nearby. Answer the questions and make notes. You can use reference books or the Internet to help you.
Where is it
Why do people go there
Are there any dangers from animals
How can we protect ourselves
What should we do to look after the place
Step 2 Write sentences with the notes you have made in Step 1.
Say where it is.
Lushan National Park is in Jiangxi Province.
Say why people go there.
People go there to see the mountains and streams.
Say if there are any dangers from animals.
The fish and birds there are not dangerous, but there are some snakes.
Say how we can protect ourselves.
We mustn’t walk in the grass.
Say what we should do to look after the place.
We should allow only 1,000 people to visit it each day.
Step 3 Write a passage called Look after the countryside and yourself. Use the sentences you have written in Step 2 to help you.
Group discussion: How to write this article
Step Idea Expression
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介绍旅游景点
提出有关自身安全方面的旅游建议
提出有关保护景点的旅游建议
…is in… Province. Every year, many tourists come to visit it. People visit it to see the mountains, the waterfalls…
wear proper clothes, take some snacks, be careful of snakes, mustn’t walk into the grass
To look after… we should…
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Requirements:
★ 草稿
★ 自检错误
★ 文字推敲、润饰
★ 初步定稿
Now write about your passage.
Writing
注意正确使用can, must, have to, should, mustn't, shouldn't 等情态动词来提出建议！
Task 1: Checking in pairs 同桌交流习作，通过辨认并
改正彼此内容中句子结构、语法以及用词等的错误。
Task 2: Class correction 听班级反馈。选出一篇学生
习作，通过投影进行讨论并集体修改，让1-2位同学
提出修改意见。
Checking
Sample
Lushan National Park is in Jiangxi Province. It is more than 100 kilometres from Nanchang, the capital city of Jiangxi Province.
People go to Lushan National Park to see the tall mountains, lakes and beautiful streams. As it is a national park, much of the area is forest, so there are many animals.
The fish and birds there are not dangerous, but there are some snakes. You must follow some rules if you do not want to get into trouble with snakes. You mustn’t walk in the grass. Keep to the paths instead. That way, you are less likely to meet a snake. You should make a lot of noise while you are walking, so that any snakes are warned you are coming and have time to escape. Follow the rules and stay safe.
There is another danger in Lushan National Park — people! People are a danger to park because visitors to national parks can sometimes be very careless. To protect the park, we should place a limit on the number of visitors to the park. We should allow only 1,000 people to visit it each day. This would help reduce damage done by large numbers of tourists.
Show time
Pick out one or two good compositions for class display.