专题一 第3讲 第4节
模拟练 提考能
A
(2024·浙江省绍兴市高三二模)
假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，本学期你校将为外籍学生开设一系列以中国传统文化为主题的研讨活动(workshop)，请你写一则通知，内容包括：
1．介绍活动；
2．阐明理由；
3．邀请参加。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
Notice
The Students' Union
【范文】
Notice
To help international students adapt to the life here, our school is organizing a series of workshops on Chinese traditional culture.
As scheduled, the workshops are to take place every Thursday this semester, from 6 p．m.to 8 p．m.During this period, you will be exposed to a selection of Chinese traditional cultures in daily life, gaining a better insight into Four Treasures of Study, Four Great Inventions, ancient music and lion dance, all these profound Chinese cultures.A certain amount of time will be set aside in each workshop for interaction, in which session a teacher will be available to clarify your doubts or offer some suggestions if necessary.
The workshops are supposed to expand your perspective of Chinese culture and meanwhile, make your campus life here easier and more fruitful.We sincerely hope to see you there!
The Students' Union
B
(2024·河北省沧州市高三一模)
假定你是李华， 英语课上老师要求同学们分组讨论体育锻炼对高中生的重要性。请你写一篇英文发言稿，代表你所在的小组发言。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello, everyone,
【范文】
Hello, everyone，
All of us know that sports play a very important part in our daily life.By taking exercise, we can be much healthier and it helps us keep in good condition as well.Playing sports increases the flow of oxygen and blood to our brain.Therefore, doing exercise can make us more energetic and efficient in our study.As people often say, any exercise is better than none.
There are a wide range of sports we can choose from, such as walking, jogging, playing badminton and swimming.I have been running for about 30 minutes every day.At first, l felt very tired after running and even had difficulty breathing.After a lot of practice, I felt relaxed and energetic.So now I keep running every day and I can do much better than before.
Let's take exercise together!
C
(2024·江西省萍乡市高三二模)
你校最近开展了一次消防演练活动，请你为校英文报写一份主题为“Focus on Fire Safety, Cherish Life”的新闻报道，内容包括：
1．活动目的；
2．活动过程和感受。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．参考词汇：灭火器 fire extinguishers, 消防栓 fire hydrants
【范文】
In order to enhance the fire safety awareness and emergency response capabilities of the students, a fire drill themed “Focus on Fire Safety, Cherish Life” was successfully conducted in our school.
Initially, professional firefighters were invited to deliver on-site explanations and demonstrated the correct usage of fire extinguishers and fire hydrants.Then, during the drill, the moment the alarm sounded, all students covering their mouths and noses with wet towels bent down low, and promptly evacuated to a safe area in an orderly manner according to the predetermined escape route.
Through this fire drill, not only did we acquire essential fire prevention knowledge and skills but our fire safety awareness was further strengthened.
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专题一 应用文写作
第3讲 体裁分类探究
第4节 通知、演讲稿、活动报道、个人观点类
●辨明题类
一、通知
通知(notice)是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等时使用的一种应用文体，通常分为口头通知和书面通知两种。
具体写作结构为：
靓点句式
1．Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention, please？I have an announcement to make.
女士们、先生们，请大家注意一下，我要宣布一件事。
2．Attention, please.I have something important to tell you.
请注意。我有重要的事情要告诉你们。
3．We regret to inform you that we have to put off the sports meeting scheduled for this Friday for foreign students.
我们很遗憾地通知你，我们不得不推迟原定于本周五举行的外国学生运动会。
4．Please attend it on time and don't be late.
请按时参加，不要迟到。
5．Everyone is welcome to take part in it.
欢迎所有人参加。
二、演讲稿
演讲稿是演讲者在一定的场合，面对特定的对象，为了达到某种目的而采取的表达自己观点的文字，是高考中较为常见的应用文。
具体写作结构为：
靓点句式
1．I am honored to have a chance to speak to you today.
今天我很荣幸有机会给大家做演讲。
2．It's my honor to stand here and say something about how to study English well.
我很荣幸能站在这里谈谈如何学好英语。
3．It is a pity that many people don't realise the importance of environmental protection.
遗憾的是，很多人没有意识到环境保护的重要性。
4．As is known to us all, failure is the mother of success, but few people can really understand what the saying means.
众所周知，失败是成功之母，但是很少有人能真正理解这句格言的真谛。
5．That's all I want to say about this point.
关于这一点，我就讲这些。
三、活动报道
活动报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，首先要交代事件或活动的时间、地点、目的以及参与者，然后叙述活动的过程，最后对活动进行评价。活动报道的应用较为广泛，实用性强。写作过程中要确保事件的真实性，语言要准确、简练。写作结构如下：
靓点句式
1．To relieve students' pressure from heavy study and inspire them to take more outdoor exercise, our school organized a hiking activity on May Day.
为了减轻学生繁重的学习压力，鼓励他们多做户外运动，我们学校在五一组织了一次徒步旅行活动。
2．To encourage students to take an interest in space exploration, this year's theme of our annual school Science Festival is “Space”．
为了鼓励学生对太空探索的兴趣，我们一年一度的学校科学节的主题是“太空”。
3．On Monday afternoon, we attended a lecture about whether life can exist on other planets.
星期一下午，我们参加了一个关于其他星球上是否存在生命的讲座。
4．The activity attracted much interest from students and everyone is looking forward to next year's Science Festival.
这个活动吸引了很多学生的兴趣，每个人都期待着明年的科学节。
5．It was through this activity that we fully realized that the awareness of respecting the old should be raised.
正是通过这次活动，我们充分认识到应该提高尊老意识。
四、个人观点类
表达观点类文章属于议论文范畴，就某一话题或热点问题阐述自己的观点和看法。在写作过程中，可以先明确自己的观点，态度鲜明，不能模棱两可。围绕论点多角度论证，论据要确切、充分，最后进行总结，重申自己的观点和立场。
靓点句式
1．Not surprisingly, most high school students seldom do housework for lack of time.
不足为奇的是，因为时间不够，大多数高中生很少做家务。
2．However, personally, doing the chores is absolutely a necessity.
然而，就我个人而言，做家务是绝对必要的。
3．Not only can it relieve our parents' tiredness after work and strengthen the mutual ties, but also it contributes to cultivating the awareness of labor.
它不仅能减轻父母下班后的疲倦，而且能加强相互之间的关系，也有助于培养劳动意识。
4．For example, I like cleaning my house best, which can help release my study pressure and most importantly save my parents' trouble of sweeping the floor.
例如，我最喜欢打扫我的房子，这可以帮我缓解学习压力，最重要的是免去了我父母扫地的麻烦。
5．In a word, it is worthwhile for high school students to do the chores.
总之，高中生做家务是值得的。
●技法点拨 真题体验
(2023·浙江1月卷)
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1．活动的过程；
2．收获与感想。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
【解题示范】 第一步 读懂题干，明确要求
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。
第二步 搭建框架，填充要点
1．可分三段来写：
第一段：提出上周末校学生会组织的活动以表明主题
第二段：描述活动的过程
第三段：说明自己的收获与感想
2．注意事项：
①写作类型：新闻报道类，内容要新鲜、真实，事实准确，要迅速及时，有时效性。简明扼要、篇幅短小，且有认识意义、启迪和指导意义。
②人称：以第一人称为主
③时态：以一般过去时为主
第三步 优化语言，检查格式
1．直奔主题：新闻报道的首段通常要有报道的地点或时间，第一句话常常是文章的导语，通过这句话读者能够了解文章的大致内容和主题。
2．要点明确：要报道什么内容应该让读者一目了然。将五个“W”(when, where, who, what, why)交代清楚，写作时可根据写作意图有所侧重。
3．内容新颖：新闻报道有较强的时效性，要贴近时代，能反映社会、科学、政治、经济、文化、生活等方面的最新动态。文章中不可避免地要用到大量反映当代社会变化的新词汇和表达方式，对这类词汇和表达方式平时要注意多积累。
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲，初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇与句式，写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。
【优秀作文赏析】
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students' Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants.Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
文章内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较高级词汇，如participate in，incredible，gain a greater appreciation for，maintain等以及高级句式，如运用非谓语动词：Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students' Union.以及定语从句：The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.等，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
