2025届高考英语二轮复习应用文写作专题1第2讲写作技法指导课件（共19张）

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专题一　应用文写作
第2讲　写作技法指导
一、学会运用高级词汇
评分标准第五档中提到，“词汇方面虽有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”。高级词汇就像一颗颗耀眼的明珠，为作文增添光彩，从而使考生稳拿高分。
1．标新立异，晚词优先
老师偏爱学得比较晚的单词，新学的单词，可以体现学生具备“学以致用”的意识。如果某个单词既可以用初中的词汇来表达，又可以用高中的词汇来表达，那么要尽量选择用高中的，如：
①adj.美丽的
索然无味低分词：beautiful
吸人眼球高分词：appealing有吸引力的；attractive 吸引人的；charming迷人的；fascinating 迷人的
②adj.困难的
索然无味低分词：difficult
吸人眼球高分词：challenging 有挑战性的
③adj.重要的
索然无味低分词：important
吸人眼球高分词：vital 至关重要的；essential 必不可少的；significant 有重要意义的
2．短语/词块优先
在阅卷老师看来，活用短语能够体现一个考生的语言运用能力。因此，我们可以将某些常见单词转化为短语/词块，如：
①v.参加
索然无味低分词：join
吸人眼球高分词：take part in；participate in
②v.使用
索然无味低分词：use
吸人眼球高分词：make good use of
③v.拜访
索然无味低分词：visit
吸人眼球高分词：pay a visit to
二、学会运用高级句式
高考时，一篇写作中的句子如果都采用简单句，肯定不能得高分，精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。因此应多使用一些高级句式和复合句，让句子“高人一筹”，亮点纷呈，彰显考生的写作能力。
1．精彩的复合句
(1)增加亮点的定语从句
For example, there are huge amounts of reference books.I am often confused to choose from them.
→For example, there are huge amounts of reference books from which I am often confused to choose.
(2)吸引眼球的状语从句
①Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture(原因状语从句), I think Beijing Language and Culture University is an ideal place for you.
②If you're interested in the Chinese folk art(条件状语从句)，please e-mail me.
(3)提升档次的名词性从句
①It is worth mentioning that our volleyball team won the championship twice in the national middle school volleyball match.(主语从句)
②I hope these suggestions would be helpful to you.(宾语从句)
③That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice.(表语从句)
2．亮眼的倒装句
So diligent are you that I'm more than delighted to teach you.
3．新颖的强调句和省略句
(1)It is the spirit that the story conveys that really matters.
(2)As scheduled，an art exhibition will be held next Sunday in the local museum.
4．传神的被动结构
Your timely help will be very much appreciated by me.
5．言简意赅的非谓语动词结构
To get admitted，I have made good preparations，trying to know as much as I could about my city.
6．委婉的虚拟语气
Without your kindness and generosity，I would not have enjoyed myself so much when visiting England.
三、自然的顺承衔接
连接(过渡)性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。过渡词语就像纽带一样把文章紧密地连接起来，更像润滑剂，使文章衔接流畅。
1．表示起始关系的过渡性词语
above all, first of all, to begin with, according to, as you know/as is known, as is shown..., when it comes to等。
(1)First of all, I think it important to make more friends abroad.
(2)As is shown in the picture, a tree is knocked down by the strong wind, while the grass stays as it is.
2．表示时间顺序的过渡性词语
first(ly), second(ly), third(ly), then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, afterwards, since then, meanwhile等。
(1)Secondly, we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions.
(2)Meanwhile, we all enjoyed the beauty of nature.
(3)I had a bad cold last week.First, I had a running nose, but I did not take it seriously.Then I began to cough.
(4)After that, I had a fever and felt weak.Finally, I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days.
3．表示并列关系的过渡性词语
and, or, also, as well as, neither...nor..., not only...but also..., either...or..., not...but...等。
(1)Work hard, and you will be admitted to a key university.
(2)Swimming not only benefits our health, but also helps us have a strong will.
4．表示转折/对比关系的过渡性词语
but, yet, however, while, otherwise, on the contrary等。
(1)However, not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser.
(2)On the contrary, smart phones not only take up our valuable time, but also do great harm to our health.
5．表示因果关系的过渡性词语
because, as, since, for, thanks to, due to, as a result of, so, therefore, as a result/consequence等。
(1)Thanks to the doctor's timely treatment, he was saved.
(2)Therefore, I suggest we should be given more time for sports and sleep.
6．表示条件关系的过渡性词语
if, unless, in case (of), as/so long as, on condition that等。
(1)I would be very grateful if you can meet him at the airport.
(2)As long as you don't lose heart, you're sure to succeed.
7．表示递进关系的过渡性词语
besides, in addition, what's more, furthermore, moreover, what's worse, still less(更不用说), to make matters worse, worse still, on (the) one hand..., on the other hand..., for one thing...for another(thing)．..等。
(1)In addition, we shouldn't neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.
(2)On the other hand, online shopping also has many disadvantages.
8．表示列举事实的过渡性词语
such as, for example/instance, take...for example, that is to say, as follows, in other words等。
(1)Take Beijing for example, it is one of the oldest cities in the world.
(2)That is to say, if you want to succeed, you have to believe in yourself.
9．表示观点的过渡性词语
in my opinion, in my view, in my point of view, as far as I am concerned, as for me, personally (speaking), I think...等。
In my opinion, people shall not smoke in public places.
10．表示总结的过渡性词语
in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general, generally speaking等。
(1)In a word, success is important, and so is failure, because it's the mother of success.
(2)All in all, travelling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.