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高三英语作文升级秘籍
英 语 组
2025年4月
1.提升学生的书面表达能力
2.熟练掌握词汇升级的技巧
3.学生能够简练、合理地表达要点
教学目标
备考指津
2022-2025应用文写作考情统计
年份 卷别 话题 命题形式
2025 八省联考卷 向 Beth 提供乒乓球学习的建议 建议信
2024 新高考I&II卷 分享公园美术课的感想 告知信
全国甲卷 看图作文中国交通运输业的发展 发言稿
浙江卷月 校英文报Sports and Health栏目投稿 短文投稿
2023 新高考I&II卷 给外教写邮件,告诉学生随机分组练口语的建议 建议信
全国甲卷 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动 短文投稿
全国乙卷 用英语描述学习新技能的经历及中获得的体验和感受 短文投稿
浙江卷1月 校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动的报道 活动报道
2022 新高考I&II卷 校广播站负责人给外教写邮件邀请做访谈 邀请信
全国甲卷 世界海洋日举办英语征文比赛 短文投稿
全国乙卷 英语学习方式的调查 短文投稿
浙江卷6月卷 校图书馆开设小组学习室邀请外国留学生一同体验 邀请信
浙江1月卷 给爱尔兰朋友写邮件回忆活动经历并分享个人收获 告知信
1.“首先”的不同说法
(1)as a starting point:“首先”,强调作为起始点。
(2)first and foremost:“首先”,突出重要性和首要性。
(3)first things first:“当务之急”,强调优先处理的事情。
(4)to begin/start with:“首先”,常用于文章或论述的开头。
To begin/start with, good timing is very important.首先,好时机非常重要。
2.换掉second,让表述更高级
1、in the next place 其次(然后)
In the next place,the text analyzes four principles one by one.其次,对四项原则逐一进行分析。
2、In addition/On top of that另外,此外
In addition,daily travel allowance is USD 50 each.
另外,每人每天的生活津贴为50美元。
3、Moreover/besides/furthermore而且,更进一步
Furthermore, the hot weather had soured the soup.
而且,炎热的天气已经让汤发酸了。
3.besides太普通,这些更出彩
apart from this:除了这个,可单独用或接内容。Apart from this, there are other issues to consider.(除了这个,还有其他问题要考虑。)
over and above:此外,强调额外补充。
Over and above the cost, we need to consider the time.(除了成本,我们还得考虑时间。)
aside from:除……之外,用法灵活。
Aside from being fun, the activity is also educational.(这个活动除了有趣,还具有教育意义 。)
4.finally太常见,这些更出彩
1. To conclude /In conclusion 最后;总而言之
In conclusion,To conclude I wish you all good health and a long life.最后,我祝愿大家健康长寿。
2. In the last place 最后In the course of time最后;In the last place, we need to consider the cost of the project.最后,我们需要考虑项目的成本。
3. Last but not least最后但同样重要的是
Last but not least, we need to help people link freely.
最后我们让每个人可以白由连结
(1)To put it in a nutshell / n t el /:“概括地说”,形象地表达出总结要点的意思。
To put it in a nutshell, we're bankrupt.简单地说,我们破产了。
(2)To wrap it up:“总结一下” ,日常和写作都很适用。
(3)On the whole:“归根结底”,从整体上进行总结归纳。
On the whole, I'm in favour of the idea.大体说来,我赞成这个想法。
5.“总之”别再用In a word
(1)be supposed to:表示“应该做”,比“can”语气更委婉,强调责任或义务。(2)be capable of doing:“能够胜任” ,突出具备做某事的能力和素质。
He is capable of writing good compositions(3)be proficient in:侧重于“擅长做”,表明在某方面有较高的熟练程度。(4)be well - equipped to:同样表示“擅长做”,强调具备充分的条件和能力去完成。
6“能”的多样表达
(1)From my point of view:“在我看来”,较为正式,常用于书面表达。
From my point of view this book is worth reading carefully.
(2)As far as I am concerned:这个短语强调个人观点,“就我而言,在我看来” 。
(3)From my perspective:“依我所见”,视角独特,让观点表达更鲜明。
7.替换“I think”的高级短语
(1)I am convinced that:“我坚信”,语气强烈,
I am convinced that she is innocent.我坚信她是清白无辜的。
(2)There is no doubt in my mind that...(我毫不怀疑...)
There is no doubt in my mind that cultural heritage preservation should be prioritized in urban planning.
毫无疑问,在我看来,文化遗产保护应该在城市规划中优先考虑。
8“我相信”不只有I believe
9.“经常”别只会用often
(1)I am accustomed to:“我习惯”,表示长期形成的习惯。
I am accustomed to traveling alone.
(2)It is habitual/routine for me to :“我习惯”,突出习惯性和日常性。
It is habitual/routine for me to drink a glass of water in the early morning every day
(3)I regularly find oneself:“我经常”,较为灵活的表达,强调经常性的行为 。
10.“许多”不用many
(1)an abundance of:“大量的”,常用于修饰可数或不可数名词。
He has an abundance of time to himself.
(2)a plethora/ pleθ r / of:“大量的”,有时带有过多的含义。
(3)a great deal of:“大量的”,修饰不可数名词。
(4)numerous/countless/plenty of:“大量的”,可修饰可数名词复数。
11.“努力”别再用work hard
(1)Leave no stone unturned:“不遗余力”,形象地表达出想尽一切办法。
I'll leave no stone unturned until it turns up.我会想尽办法把它翻出来。
(2)Strive to the fullest:“全力以赴”,强调竭尽全力去做。
(3)Push oneself to the limit:“使出浑身解数”,突出挑战极限。
(4)do one's utmost:“尽……所能”,表达尽力而为的决心。
12.替换“because”的原因表达
(1)On account of:“因为”,较为正式,后接名词或名词短语。
(2)On the ground that:“因为”,常引导原因状语从句。
I didn't hear what she said on the ground that I was late因为我迟到了,我没听见她说什么。
(3)Due/owing to:“因为”,表示原因,后接名词或动名词。
(4)In virtue of:“因为”,强调凭借某种优势或原因。
13.“想要”不止want
(1)Be yearn/long for:“渴望”,表达内心强烈的渴望。
I am yearn/long for being admitted to university
(2)Be keen/bent on:“打算”,表明有强烈的意愿和决心。
(3)Be eager to:“渴望”,强调急切的心情。
(4)Be in the mood to do:“想要做”,更侧重当下的心情和意愿。
( 5 ) have a extreme desire to do 极度渴望
14替换“interested”的表达
(1)go down well with:“受……欢迎”,从受欢迎的角度体现出兴趣。
It seemed to go down well with consumers.
这条推文在消费者中间似乎引起了不错的反响。
(2)be enthusiastic/passionate about:“对……充满热情”,情感更强烈。
I am passionate/enthusiastic about doing this
(3)be keen on:“热衷于”,表明对某事有浓厚兴趣。
(4)be taken with:“对……感兴趣”,强调被吸引而产生兴趣。
15“重要”的高级说法
(1)of the essence:“至关重要”,突出事物的核心重要性。
(2)an indispensable / nd spens b( )l /part of:“必不可少的”,强调不可或缺性。
(3)be worthy of note:“值得关注”,从侧面反映重要性。
(4)be of vital significance:“至关重要”,常用于正式场合。
crucial/vital/essential至关重要的;fundamental根本的;primary 首要的;significant有重大意义的
16“喜欢”别只用like
(1)be really passionate about:“对……有热情”,突出热情程度。
(2)have a penchant/ p n n / for:“特别喜欢……”,带有偏好的意味。
(3)be enamored/ n m d / with:“沉迷上……”,程度较深,表达深深的喜爱。
(4)take great pleasure in:“享受”,强调从中获得快乐。
treasure珍视appreciate赏识
17.“开心”的多样表达
(1)as happy as a pig in mud:“开心”,形象生动的表达。I was as happy as a pig in the mud to win this award
(2)delighted and overjoyed:“非常开心”,用两个形容词强调开心程度。
(3)beaming with happiness:“眉开眼笑”,通过表情体现开心。
(4)as happy as a clam at high tide:“开心”,趣味十足的表达。
glad, pleased, delighted, cheerful, blissful/ bl sf( )l /极乐的, overjoyed,ecstatic,/ k st t k /狂喜的,出神的 lighthearted, enjoyable,pleasant
18.替换“in order to”的短语
(1)for the sake of:“旨在……”,强调目的和意图。
(2)with the intention of:“目的是为了……”,明确表达目的。
(3)in an effort to:“为了……”,突出努力的方向。
(4)in an attempt to:“目的是……”,表示尝试去达成某个目的。
19.告别influence,用这些更惊艳
exert considerable influence on:“exert”有“施加”之意,这个表达强调对事物产生强大的影响。
The social media exerts considerable influence on our daily routines.
have some positive bearing on:着重突出积极影响,“bearing”表示关联。Regular exercise has some positive bearing on our mental well - being.wield enormous influence over:
“wield”是“行使”,强调对特定对象有超强掌控力般的影响。比如领导对团队决策,
have an impact on:较为常用,简洁表述对……有影响。
The new policy will have an impact on small businesses.
20.换掉famous,让表述更高级
be prominent in:在某个领域崭露头角,十分突出。 She is prominent in the academic circle.(她在学术界很突出。)
be renowned for:因某方面优秀特质声名远扬。
This city is renowned for its hospitality.be distinguished for:凭借卓越之处被人熟知。
The university is distinguished for its research achievements.
be remarkable for:因独特之处备受瞩目。
The region is remarkable for its diverse culture.
21.别再用In fact,试试这些
In actual circumstances:强调实际情况,In actual circumstances, we need to adjust our plan.
as a matter of fact:日常和写作都常用,表真实情况。I thought he was rich.As a matter of fact, he has financial difficulties.
In point of fact:正式场合常用,强调事实要点。In point of fact, his proposal is not practical.
to tell the truth:口语化,坦诚表达真实想法。To tell the truth, I don't like this movie.(说实话,我不喜欢这部电影。)
22.know太普通,这些表达更亮眼
It's an established fact that:表示大家都认定的事实。It's an established fact that the earth is round.
It goes without saying that:不言而喻的事情。
It goes without saying that health is important.
There is no doubt that:强调确定性。
It's a universally held belief that:广泛持有的观点。It's a universally held belief that kindness is a virtue.
23.but太单调,这些转折词来救场
On the contrary:直接表明与前文相反观点。He is not shy.On the contrary, he is very outgoing.(他不害羞。相反,他很外向。)
despite the fact that:引导让步状语从句,尽管存在某种情况。Despite the fact that it rained, we still had a great time.
by contrast:对比突出差异。Some people like coffee, by contrast, others like tea.
24.try太简单,这些表达更有力
get down to doing:开始认真着手做某事。
Let's get down to solving this problem.(让我们开始认真解决这个问题。)
endeavor to do:努力去达成目标,很正式。We should endeavor to protect the environment.(我们应该努力保护环境。)
make up one's mind to do:做出决定,侧重决定过程。I've made up my mind to study abroad.
25.depend太常见,用这些替换
be banking on:寄希望于,很形象。
We are banking on your support.我们指望你的支持。
build upon on...:在……基础上发展。We should build upon our past experience.
be contingent upon:取决于,强调条件性。
Our success is contingent upon everyone's efforts.(我们的成功取决于每个人的努力。)
be reliant on:依赖于,突出依靠性。Many people are reliant on smartphones.(很多人依赖智能手机。)
26.must太生硬,这些表达更自然
have got to:口语化,强调不得不。I have got to finish my homework tonight.(我今晚得完成作业。)
be required to:因规定或要求必须做。All students are required to attend the meeting.(所有学生都必须参加会议。)
be obliged to:因道德、责任等有义务做。We are obliged to help the elderly.(我们有义务帮助老人。)
be indispensable for:对……必不可少,突出重要性。Water is indispensable for life.(水对生命必不可少。)