(共33张PPT)
Unit 8
Green Living
Writing Workshop
To read and understand a survey report.
To identify the main idea of each paragraph and label it correctly.
To use expressions relating to quantity.
To write a survey report.
Learning objectives
Nowadays, the environment is getting worse and worse.
Today, we got a task which asks you to write a survey report on environmental protection for the residents in our city.
But, do you know how to write a survey report
Lead-in
Pair work
You are going to write a survey report on
environmental protection for the residents in
your city or town
What should be included in
a survey report
A clear purpose
Proper quantity expressions
Proper graphs
A good conclusion
A logical organization
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Pre-writing
Read the survey report.
What questions are asked
What are the findings
Pre-writing
Questions :
Findings:
Pre-writing
Read for writing
According to the above information, what is survey report
Read for writing
Survey report :In the survey report, it will show different people’s opinions on the interviewed questions.
Read for writing
In the survey report, what aspects should be included
topic
opinions
question
suggestions
Focus on structure and language
Label each paragraph of the report with the following headings.
a
d
c
b
Focus on structure and language
Negative findings and positive findings are the main parts of the survey. They show examples, figures, percentage.
The introduction includes purpose, when, where, who, how many and etc.
The conclusion contains summary, suggestions.
Underline the quantity expressions in the survey report. Use the sentence builder to help you.
Focus on structure and language
Underline the quantity expressions in the survey report. Use the sentence builder to help you.
Focus on structure and language
Write an outline for your report based on the data below. You can also do a survey online and write a report based on the data you got.
While writing
While-listening
Attention!
While-writing
You have 15 minutes to write the survey report.
While-writing
Polish your survey report on shared bikes.
Post-reading
你是李华,上周你参加了学校以“你看到饭菜倒掉的感觉如何?”为题举办的调查活动,有200位学生参加了此次调查,请根据所提供的调查数据写一篇调查报告向校英文报投稿。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Last week, a survey involving 200 students was carried out in our school on “How do you feel when seeing food being thrown away ” The results are as follows.
The survey shows that 11% of the students don’t pay any attention to food waste. About the same percentage of students feel it’s none of their business when they see someone throwing the food away. 79% of the surveyed students consider it a pity to waste any food.
In my opinion, we students should be more careful when choosing what to eat and how much we can eat. Only in this way can we reduce food waste.
常 用 句 式
1.Last week a survey was carried out by...
上周……进行了一项调查。
2.According to a survey...
根据一项调查……
3.I’ve made a survey and find that...
我做了一项调查,发现……
6.As far as I know,...
在我看来,……
7.To sum up,...
总之,……
8.This indicates that...
这表明……
一、审题定调
调查报告是针对生活中的某一现象、事情或问题进行调查研究,然后把调查结果真实地表述出来的书面报告,是常见的应用文。描述报告结果和数据时,常用一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主。
Summary
二、谋篇布局
调查报告通常包括调查主题、调查信息以及调查结果。根据提示结合图表,把调查的相关信息和结果清楚、条理地表述。
正文可分为三部分:
第一部分:说明调查主题及目的。
第二部分:介绍具体的调查信息(如内容、范围、对象、人数及方式)。
第三部分:描述调查结果。
三、组织语言
1. …to find out people’s attitudes to protecting the environment and what actions they had taken.
attitude n. 态度;看法
have a … attitude to/towards sb./sth. 对某人/某物持……的态度
attitude to doing sth. 对做某事的态度
attitude of mind 态度,看法
Learning points
2. …and more than two thirds had tried to cut back on the use of disposable packaging.
cut back on: to reduce sth 削减;缩减
【拓展】cut短语
【语境应用】完成句子。
1) He tried to ___________ on smoking but failed.
他试图少抽烟,但没成功。
2) The gas ______________. As a result, we had to eat out.
煤气供应被切断了,因此我们不得不出去吃。
3) It is impolite for children to _________ when their seniors are talking.
孩子们在他们的长辈谈话时插嘴是不礼貌的。
4) If we don't sell more we'll have to ___________ production.
如果我们不卖更多,我们将不得不减少产量。
had been cut off
cut in
cut back on
cut down
3. Also, the majority of residents had cycled or walked.
majority n. 大多数
major adj. 重大的,严重的;大的,重要的,主要的
minor adj. 小的,不很重要的; 不很严重的
minority n. 少数
【语境应用】完成句子。
1) _____________________ find it quite hard to live on the money they get.
大多数学生都觉得很难靠他们得到的钱生活。
2) Smoking is ________________ causes of cancer.
吸烟是引发癌症的主要原因之一。
3) Only _________________ support these new laws.
只有少数人支持这些新法令。
The majority of students
one of the major
a minority of people
4. More than half of those who took part in the survey had done four of the five activities in the past month.(Page 40)
超过半数的参与调查的人在过去的一个月里参加了五项活动中的四项。
★take part in 参加
These children are encouraged to take an active part in more activities.
这些孩子被鼓励积极参加更多的活动。
【合作探究】
阅读下列句子,写出句中的黑体词组和含义
①As a matter of fact, he didn’t take notice of the difference.
词组 _________________ 含义 _______________
②I hear that the man will take the place of Mr Green.
词组 __________________ 含义 _______________
take notice of
注意到
take the place of
代替
③When will you take measures to deal with the problem
词组 _________________ 含义 _________________
④When at college, I didn’t take politics seriously, so I spent little time on it.
词组______________ 含义 __________________
⑤That night the police took the thieves by surprise.
词组 __________________ 含义 ________________
说一说·勤归纳
take part in 参加 take notice of 注意到
take the place of 代替 take measures 采取措施
take...seriously 认真对待……,重视……
take...by surprise 出其不意地抓获;使……惊讶
take measures
采取措施
take...seriously
认真对待……,重视……
take...by surprise
出其不意地抓获
【即学即用】
单句语法填空
①Her parents don’t permit her to take part those activities.
②When I was walking in the park,I took notice that stranger.
in
of
翻译句子
③计算机不会在教室里代替老师的。
④听到这个消息,他立即采取了措施。
⑤他的粗心确实让她大吃一惊。
Computers won’t take the place of teachers in the classroom.
Hearing the news,he took measures at once.
His carelessness really took her by surprise.
5. Just over half (51%) tried to save energy by reducing the use of air conditioning or turning off lights.(Page 40)
只有刚刚超过一半的人(51%)努力通过减少空调的使用或者关灯来节约能源。
★turn off 关闭
Do remember to turn off the lights when you leave the house.
离开房子时一定记得关灯。
【即学即用】
单句语法填空
①Mary turned the light when she left her room.
②She was turned by the company,so she was sad.
翻译句子
③请把收音机调大声点好吗
④结果这个女孩是我姐姐的一个朋友。
off
down
Could you please turn up the radio
It turned out that the girl was my sister’s friend.
Recite the key expressions and sentences.
Complete and rewrite your writing.
Homework