Unit 7 Art Writing workshop 课件（共21张）2024-2025学年高一英语北师版（2019）必修第三册

(共21张PPT)
Unit 7
Art
Writing Workshop
1.To learn the structure and some polite language of a formal email by reading an email.
2.To write a formal email to ask for more information.
Learning objectives
Do you know what a formal and informal email is What are the basic differences between them
Formal:
Written to a professor, colleague, boss, etc.
Must always be professional
Accurate grammar, punctuation, and spelling necessary
Informal:
Written to friends and family
Accuracy and grammar (spelling and punctuation) are not important
You can make up your own rules
Lead-in
1. 寻求帮助
2. 向某人提供一些详细的信息
3.对...不确定
4.关于...进行咨询
5.值得特别关注
6. 为...向某人收取费用
7. 申请参加
8. 可接受
ask for help / seek help
provide sb with some detailed information
be uncertain about
enquire/inquire about
deserve special attention
charge sb for...
apply to be part of
be acceptable
Pre-reading
Have you ever written a formal email (in any language)
If so, share your experience, and tell us in what situation you need to write a formal email.
Consider letters of invitation, inquiry and application you have written before.
1. Read the email on page 19. Answer the questions.
1. Why does Liu Ze write this email
Liu Ze writes this email to ask for information about entering a film in the festival.
2. How does Liu Ze address the receiver of the email
Liu Ze addresses the receiver of the email as Dear Sir / Madam.
While-reading
3. What information does Liu Ze want to know
Liu Ze wants to know:
About the films for the festival
If they accept sport documentaries
More information about how to apply for this festival
If groups and individuals can enter
If they can enter their film to another film festival at the same time
What the prizes are
If there are prizes for different age groups and for different types of films
4. Is the style of the email formal or informal Can you
find some examples
The style is formal.
Reasons could include:
Vocabulary used
Address of the receiver
Full name in sign off
2. Read the email again. Identify its structure and useful plete the table.
The structure Useful language
Para. 1 Stating the purpose of your writing and introducing yourself I am writing to ask for information about...
I am...
Para. 2
Para. 3
Querying the films for the festival
I would like to ask... Do you...
Could you tell me... I wonder if...
Can we... Are there...
Salutation
I appreciate your help...
Read for writing
Write down the purpose of your email and two questions you would like to ask. Use the Sentence Builder to help you.
example: I am writing to ask for information about our school music competition.
Look at the advertisement on a school website. Choose one activity that you’d like to know about and write an email to ask for more information. Decide whether it is going to be formal of informal.
While-writing
While-writing
写一封询问信息的电子邮件
本单元的写作任务是写一封询问信息的正式电子邮件,属于应用文。电子邮件包括信头、正文、结束语和签名。写作时应注意以下几点:
1.写清楚收信人的地址;
2.清楚地说明写这封邮件的原因;
3.使用正式的语言礼貌地提出要求;
4.清楚地问一些必要的问题;
5.表示谢意。
1. 出彩亮点首段句
① I'm wondering if/whether you can/could offer some specific information related to your advertisement.
②I'm writing to enquire about the details of your six-week English
course.
③I'm writing to consult you about some information on this topic.
增 分 美 句
2. 吸引眼球中段句
① First, when will the course start and how man class hours are there per week
②As for the money you charge,I'm wondering if i covers the entrance fees for visiting the place listed.
③I'd be grateful if you could let me know if there are any special requirements for the course in advance.
3. 画龙点睛末段句
①I'm looking forward to hearing from you as soon a possible.
②I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me at you earliest convenience.
③I would appreciate it if you could give me more detailed information about your schedule.
1.I am very eager to receive information about...
非常渴望能收到关于……的信息。
2. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information concerning...我写信想看看你能否给我提供关于……的信息。
3.Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects 您能否寄给我一些有关上述方面的小册子
4. Would you be kind enough to provide me with some information about...
你能给我提供一些关于……的信息吗
5. Your prompt and favorable attention would be highly appreciated.
如蒙及时关照,将不胜感激。
6.Your kind help would be greatly appreciated. I am looking forward to a reply at your earliest convenience.
非常感谢您的帮助。我期待着您尽早的答复。
美 句 模 板
Writing
【全国卷1]
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括:
1.到达时间;
2.合适的礼物;
3.餐桌礼仪。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
高考链接
思路点拨:
1.审体裁:告知信
2.审内容:
(1)写作背景+写信目的;
(2)告知内容:到达时间+合适的礼物+餐桌礼仪;
(3)结束语:希望能帮助到好友。
3.审人称和时态:第一人称，一般现在时。
参考范文:
Dear Terry,
How are you doing Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.
To begin with, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. In addition, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please don't hesitate to contact me. May you have a wonderful day with your friends.
Yours,
Li Hua
Recite the key expressions and sentences.
Complete and rewrite your writing.
Homework