2025年中考复习专项训练06—书面表达 课件（25张PPT）

(共25张PPT)
中考题型专项复习
06 书面表达
命题分析
1. 能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材。
2.能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师的指导下进行修改。
3.能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。
4.能简单描述人物或事件。
5.能根据图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。
新课程标准写作要求
命题分析
第五档：（很好）（20分）完全完成规定任务，要点全面，或发挥新意有亮点，语言准确，行文连贯，表达清楚。
第四档：（好）（17～19分）完成规定任务，涵盖基本要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档：（一般）（14～16分） 基本完成任务，语言基本地道，结构基本清晰，语意基本连贯。
第二档：（较差）（10～13分）基本达到写作目的，文字与主题相关，语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。
第一档：（差）（1～9分） 未能完成规定任务，只能写出一些有关的单词，语言错误很多，未能清楚传达信息。
评分标准（满分20分）
写作技巧
写作步骤
Step6.: 分好段落,规范抄写。
写作六步走：
审列连润查抄
Step1.：审题。审文本格式，人称，时态和要点。
Step2.：根据要点列出短语。
Step3.：连词成句。(注意人称和时态)
Step4.: 润色好句。(适当加上连词或调整句式。)
Step5.：检查语法，单词拼写，标点符号，数好字数。
Step1：审---审题
审文本类型，人称，时态和要点。
例：上个月你们学校举办了读书月(School Reading Month)，组织了一系列活动。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍你校的活动以及你的收获和感受。(100-120词)
1.学校举行图书展，向同学们介绍优秀文学作品(literary works)；
2.班级设立图书角，同学们可以自由交换书籍；
3.每天下午读书20分钟；
4.人人做读书分享， 给他人推荐一本好书。
文本类型：
记叙文
人称：
第一人称
时态：
一般过去时
要点：
时间 、地点、事件，提示的四项内容，收获，感受
写作技巧
记叙文写作
叙事类模板：
开头：引入事件背景、时间和地点。
中间：描述事件的发生、发展和高潮。
结尾：总结事件并表达感受或启示。
写作技巧
写人类模板：
开头：人物概况（姓名，出生时间、地点、职业等）。
中间：教育经历、兴趣爱好、人物事迹……内容视题目而定。
结尾：人物评价（总结段）。
说明文写作
说明文模板：
开头：引入主题并给出定义或背景信息。
中间：解释主题的不同方面或步骤。
结尾：总结要点或给出结论。
写作技巧
议论文写作
议论文模板：
开头：提出论点并给出背景信息。
中间：提供支持论点的论据，并反驳可能的反对观点。
结尾：总结论点并强调其重要性。
写作技巧
应用文写作
书信模板：
开头：称呼收信人并表达写信目的。
中间：详细说明写信的具体内容或请求。
结尾：表达感谢或期待回复，并给出祝福语。
写作技巧
应用文写作
通知模板：
开头：明确指出通知的目的和内容。
中间：提供详细信息，如时间、地点、参与方式等。
结尾：强调通知的重要性，并鼓励读者参与。
写作技巧
应用文写作
日记模板：
开头：写出日期、星期和天气情况。
中间：详细描述当天发生的事件、活动或感受。
结尾：表达对当天事件的看法或感受，或者记录未来的计划。
写作技巧
以记叙文为例
例：上个月你们学校举办了读书月(School Reading Month)，组织了一系列活动。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍你校的活动以及你的收获和感受。
1.学校举行图书展，向同学们介绍优秀文学作品(literary works)；
2.班级设立图书角，同学们可以自由交换书籍；
3.每天下午读书20分钟；
4.人人做读书分享， 给他人推荐一本好书。
开头：引入事件背景、时间和地点。
中间：描述事件的发生、发展和高潮。
结尾：总结事件并表达感受或启示。
上个月你们学校举办了读书月，组织了一系列活动。
要求中提示的四条，可以适当补充。
收获与感受
(100-120词)
写作技巧
Step2：列---列出短语和句式
Para.1.上个月你们学校举办了读书月(School Reading Month)，组织了一系列活动。
Para.2.学校举行图书展，向同学们介绍优秀文学作品；
班级设立图书角，同学们可以自由交换书籍；
每天下午读书20分钟；
人人做读书分享， 给他人推荐一本好书。
last month
hold the School Reading Month
have a lot of activies
hold a book show
introduce excellent literary works to the students.
set up a Book Corner
change books freely
every afternoon
read for 20 minutes
share books with each other
recommend a good book to others
写作技巧
Para3.收获和感受。
同学们从这次读书月中收获都很多。
我们对自然、历史、科学等不同文化领域有了更多的了解。
同学们养成了良好的读书习惯。
希望我们学校还会组织这样的活动。
Step2：列---列出短语和句式
get a lot in the Reading Month
learn a lot about nature、history、science and different cultural fields
develop a good habbit of reading
organize such activities
写作技巧
Step3：连---连词成句，连句成文。
Last month，our school hold the School Reading Month. We have a lot of activies.
We hold a book show and introduce excellent literary works to the students. We set up a Book Corner. We change books freely.Every afternoon, every student read for 20 minutes.The students share books with each other. They recommend a good book to others.
We get a lot of knowledge in the Reading Month. We learn a lot about nature、history、science and different cultural fields . We develop a good habbit of reading. We hope our school will organize more such activities.
加上合适的主语和连词，使句子完整。
写作技巧
Step4：润---润色好句。
适当加上连词，修饰词或调整句式。
Last month，our school hold the School Reading Month. We have a lot of interesting activies.
During the Reading Month, we hold a book show and introduce excellent literary works to the students. We set up a Book Corner and we can change books freely. Every afternoon, every student read for 20 minutes.The students not only share books with each other but also recommend a good book to others.
We get a lot of knowledge in the Reading Month. We learn a lot about nature、history、science and many other different cultural fields . Most importantly, we develop a good habbit of reading. I think it is meaningful to have a Reading Month, so I hope our school will organize more such activities.
要以写正确/通顺的简单句为最基本要求， 切勿一味地追求高水平，反而弄巧成拙！！！
写作技巧
使用恰当的连词。
时间顺序 first, second, then, finally/at last, soon, suddenly
空间顺序 here, there, next to, in front of, at the back of
对称顺序 on one hand, on the other hand
转折顺序 but, however, though
因果顺序 because, as, thanks to, as a result (of) , so
条件 if, unless
递进顺序 what’s more, besides, most importantly
插入语 I think, I’m afraid, you know, as we all know
写作技巧
Step4：润---润色好句。
Step5：查---检查
Last month，our school held the School Reading Month. We had a lot of interesting activies.
During the Reading Month, we held a book show and introduced excellent literary works to the students. We set up a Book Corner and we could change books freely. Every afternoon, every student read for 20 minutes. The students not only shared books with each other but also recommended a good book to others.
We got a lot of knowledge in the Reading Month. We learnt a lot about nature、history、science and many other different cultural fields . Most importantly, we developed a good habbit of reading. I think it is meaningful to have a Reading Month, so I hope our school will organize more such activities.
检查语法(重点人称、时态)，拼写，标点，字数。
120个单词
写作技巧
Step6：抄---抄写
Last month，our school held the School Reading Month. We had a lot of interesting activies.
During the Reading Month, we held a book show and introduced excellent literary works to the students. We set up a Book Corner and we could change books freely. Every afternoon, every student read for 20 minutes. The students not only shared books with each other but also recommended a good book to others.
We got a lot of knowledge in the Reading Month. We learnt a lot about nature、history、science and many other different cultural fields . Most importantly, we developed a good habbit of reading. I think it is meaningful to have a Reading Month, so I hope our school will organize more such activities. .
分好段落,规范抄写,不要涂改。
卷面整洁可能加分,卷面潦草一定要扣分!!!
写作技巧
书面表达易错点
文本格式（段落）；
遗漏要点；
句子结构；
谓语时态和语态；
名词单复数；
拼写；
标点符号；
大小写方面。
写作技巧
题目要求、内容要点；
句子准确、通顺；
层次结构清晰；
拼写、语法等错误；
卷面整洁度。
写作技巧
影响作文分数的因素
试题演练
假如你是李华，你们学校就“感恩父母，从我做起”这一话题展开讨论。请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈为什么要感恩父母，你和父母之间发生的最难忘的事以及你的感受。
I think it's important for us to thank our parents. Since I was born, my parents have given me all their love and care, but never expect anything in return. They have brought me up and taken good care of me carefully and patiently.
Last year, I was chosen to take part in a speech competition. I felt very nervous. My parents tried hard to help me prepare for it. They encouraged me to be confident and told me not to care much about the result. They said the process of learning was more meaningful.
With their help, I did very well that time. I felt happy and proud. I'd like to say “Thanks a lot! You're great! I will love you forever！” to mum and dad.
议论文
论点及原因
论据---具体事例论证论点
总结扣题
试题演练
假如你是郭佳，你的美国笔友Linda给你写了一封信，说她想给自己的汉语老师送一份礼物来表达自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中国的送礼习俗，所以请你给她一些建议。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一封回信给她。
Dear Linda,
I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country.
Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea. Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly, don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Guo Jia
应用文---书信
答疑时间
Practice makes perfect!
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