2025中考英语书面表达之建议信专项复习练习题（含答案解析）

2025中考英语书面表达之建议信专项复习练习题
基础练习
（2024·河南信阳·三模）
近年来，随着科技的发展，电子产品越来越多，学生的汉字书写能力大大降低。假如你是校书法协会的会长，请根据以下要点及要求，用英文写一封倡议书，号召同学们重视书写。
要点：
1.减少对电子产品的依赖，多动手记笔记；
2.养成练书法和写信的习惯。
要求：
1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：calligraphy n.书法
Dear fellow students,
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Calligraphy Association
（2024·安徽淮北·二模）
假设你是李华，学校希望每位即将毕业的学生给学弟学妹们留下一些建议。请你根据下图中的信息用英语给学弟学妹们写一封信。
1.信件内容须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear younger schoolmates,
How is it going It’s time for me to leave school. Here is my advice for you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
（2024·广东深圳·三模）
深圳中小学已独立开设劳动教育必修课，假如你是校学生会主席李华，请代表广大学生给校长写一封关于提升劳动教育课程的信件，谈谈你对开设劳动课程的建议和理解。
要点提示：
1. 课程内容建议：
①…… ②…… ③……
2. 开设课程的意义：（至少写3点意义）。
要求：
1. 必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，行文连贯，标点正确，书写规范。
提示词：
开设run；课程course；木工woodworking；屋顶农场rooftop farm；光荣的glorious
Dear headmaster,
I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to
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（2024·湖南长沙·二模）
现今，越来越多的国家开设“中文”课程，你的英国笔友Mike的学校也即将开设“中文”选修课，他对此很感兴趣，但也有些畏难，因此来信向你询问学习中文的建议。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示给他写封回信鼓励他，并向他介绍学习中文的好方法。
要求：
1. 回信必须包含图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右（开头和结尾都已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Mike,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
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I wish you success in learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2024·湖北宜昌·三模）
校园霸凌时有发生，Jimmy 在学校也曾被霸凌过。请你认真读他的信并给他回复
Dear Li Hua , How is it going I was stopped to ask for some money by some bad students on my way home last Wednesday. They are much taller and stronger than me. I was too afraid to refuse. Besides, they warned me not to tell what happened to my teachers or parents. Have you ever experienced such a thing How did you deal with it What should I do if I am bullied again Can you give me some advice Look forward to your reply. Jimmy
要求：1：短文必须包括所给所有要点，可适当发挥。
2：文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名。
3：词数80左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jimmy,
It’s not easy being our easy to deal with such a thing.
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提升练习
（2024·湖北十堰·二模）
2024年中考即将来临，面对这一人生重大的转折点，每位同学都在为了实现自己的梦想而奋力拼搏。很多同学在积极进取的道路上会遇到一些困惑。请认真阅读王芳给Robert Hunt写的一封信后，以Robert Hunt的身份用英语给王芳写封回信，帮助她解惑。
Dear Mr. Hunt, My problem is that I am worried about arguments between my parents. My father always complains about my study, shouting at my mother without any reason. I often feel stressed out and I stay up late until 1 o’clock. And also I can’t focus on what the teacher said in class. I always feel nervous. What should I do Wang Fang
要求：
（1）回信要合情合理，能跟来信者产生共鸣，起到帮助作用；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Fang,
I have heard from you. It’s not easy being your age.
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Robert Hunt
（2024·海南海口·二模）
假定你是李华。你校英语俱乐部准备创办一份中学生英文电子杂志 English Weekly，现面向全校师生就栏目 (column) 设置征询建议。请你从下面备选的三个栏目主题中选取两个，或选其一加一个个人喜欢的主题，给杂志编辑 Mr. Smith 写封信进行推荐。信件内容包括：
1. 表达你对创办杂志的看法；
2. 建议两个栏目并说明理由。
注意：
1. 内容需涵盖要点提示，可做适当发挥；
2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯，条理清晰，书写规范，不得出现真实个人信息；
3. 100 词左右 (文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am so excited to learn that our school is going to start an E-magazine English Weekly.
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Li Hua
（2024·湖南长沙·三模）
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信，告诉你他最近经常学习到很晚，睡眠不好，成绩也没提高，学习压力较大。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封信，帮助他解决问题。
要求：
1. 请结合生活实际，自行补充第三点建议；
2. 要涵盖表格中的要点，可适当增加细节；
3. 字数80词左右 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
4. 文中不能出现本人真实姓名和班级。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have much stress these days.
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Yours,
Li Hua
（2024·宁夏银川·二模）
假设你是某英语报社的编辑Rina，收到Li Wei同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei回信。
要求：
1.须包括所有要点提示并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2.词数：80词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：laugh at; care about; high-fat food (高脂肪食物); the more; the healthier.
Dear Li Wei,
I’ve received your letter and I can understand you.
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Yours,
Rina
（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）
假如你是九年级学生希望，近日收到备考英国中考的笔友Peter的来信，他想了解你班近期班会情况。请根据以下信息给Peter回信，并针对有效复习向Peter提出建议，同时预祝他取得佳绩。
写作要点：
1．班会课主题：我的进步
2．介绍你和几名同学中考复习过程中取得的进步：
（1）王丞：物理
（2）李安：语文
（3）你：英语
3．针对中考如何有效复习对Peter提出建议。
提示词：*review (v.)复习 *efficiently (adv.)有效地 *GCSE英国中考
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Xi Wang
（2024·河南信阳·二模）
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Penny在信中讲述了她最近的烦恼。请根据信件内容，用英语写一封回信，给她提些建议。
Dear Li Hua, My parents agreed to take me to the music festival last Sunday. Unluckily, they were busy with work and failed to keep their promise. I am so sad but my parents don’t seem to care. What should I do Can you help me Yours, Penny
要求：1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Penny,
I am sorry to hear that you feel sad recently.
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Yours,
Li Hua
（2024·浙江绍兴·二模）
你校英语俱乐部将举行“劳动教育”主题活动，现向全校学生征求活动建议。假如你是李华，请根据下图内容用英语给负责人写一封书信，谈谈自己的劳动经历并提供建议。
注意：
1. 短文必须包括上图所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 补充内容至少各一条；
3. 词数：80—100；
4. 文章的开头仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
Labor is a very important part of our life. Here is my experience and some advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．（22-23九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末）
假设你是李华，是沭阳某中学九年级的学生。你们班正在选举新的班长，你想推荐方玲。请根据以下所给要点，给班主任兼英语老师孙老师写一封推荐信。
推荐理由
喜欢阅读 书籍帮助她了解许多中国文化，为她开启一个新世界。
吃苦耐劳 从不介意花很多时间组织各项班级活动，将中国文化介绍给外国友人。
能歌善舞 有音乐天赋，歌声优美，能边演奏边创作音乐，擅长跳舞。
擅长绘画 善于用颜色调节情绪，由于不懈的努力，曾在绘画竞赛中获奖。
乐于助人 当过志愿者，曾帮慈善机构募集资金；（另举一例…）。
1. 包含所有给出的提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 省略号部分需作适当发挥；
3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Sun,
I’m writing to recommend Fang Ling as our new monitor. She has many strong qualities for this position. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So I think Fang Ling is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
真题练习
（2024·青海西宁·中考真题）
假如你是Dr. Know，请根据表格中的要点，给她写一封80词左右的英文回信，帮她解决困扰。可适当发挥，首句已给出，不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
建议 原因
帮助他人 使人快乐受到欢迎
结交朋友 互诉烦恼变得开朗
参与活动 展示自我自信满满
…… ……
Dear Jenny,
I’m very sorry to hear your problems. Here are my suggestions for you.
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Dr. Know
（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·中考真题）
假如你是第一中学的学生李平，你认识的英国外教Mr.Green的儿子David打算到你的学校进行为期三年的初中学习。请你给David写一封信，告诉他如何使他的初中生活过得有意义。
写作要点：
1.对他说你相信他会喜欢你的学校。
2.向他介绍你的学校：
（1）学生友好；
（2）老师优秀；
（3）有多种课外活动。
3.告诉他如何使他的初中生活过得有意义 (make one’s junior high school life meaningful)。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear David,
I’m glad that you’ re coming to study in my school for 3 years.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
（2024·内蒙古呼和浩特·中考真题）
假设你是李华，暑假即将到来，你校将举办一次“英国行”研学活动 (study trip)。你想竞聘学员队长，现请你给此次研学组织者Mr Smith用英语写一封信。
内容包括：
1. 你的优势（两条）；
2. 提出你对此次研学活动内容的建议，包括：
（1）寄宿在当地家庭；
（2）游览当地风景名胜；
（3）……
要求：
1. 要点齐全，结构清晰，语言流畅，书写规范，可适当增加细节；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数80—100左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a member of this study trip, writing to apply to be the team leader.
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I’m looking forward to your reply and hope we’ll have a wonderful trip there.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2023·江西·中考真题）
通过阅读理解A篇我们感受到户外活动的有趣。本月底你校将举办一次户外活动，为了更好地开展这次活动，校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华，请根据表格内容写一篇短文（先介绍你喜欢的户外活动，再说明理由，最后就活动安排提出合理的建议），向社团投稿。
写作要点 参考句型
1. What outdoor activity do you like We’d better… Maybe we can… It’ll be better if… …
2. Why do you like it
3. How do you arrange (安排) it (when, where, what to do… )
备注：如果出现地名，请以East________代替，例如：East Mountain…要求：
1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80-120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month.
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Hope my suggestions help.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
第48讲 书面表达之建议信（练习）
（模拟精练+真题演练）
参考答案
基础练习
（2024·河南信阳·三模）
近年来，随着科技的发展，电子产品越来越多，学生的汉字书写能力大大降低。假如你是校书法协会的会长，请根据以下要点及要求，用英文写一封倡议书，号召同学们重视书写。
要点：
1.减少对电子产品的依赖，多动手记笔记；
2.养成练书法和写信的习惯。
要求：
1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：calligraphy n.书法
Dear fellow students,
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Calligraphy Association
【答案】例文
Dear fellow students,
With the development of science and technology, more and more students prefer to use electronic products for taking notes and sending messages instead of writing on the paper. Thus, our handwriting is not as good as it was in the past. Facing the problem, we should do as follows.
First, we should use electronic products less often when learning. If so, we can have more opportunities to improve our handwriting. Besides, we must form the habit of practicing calligraphy every day. What’s more, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand instead of sending e-mails.
Beautiful and neat handwriting is of great benefit to us students. So let’s take action right now! I’m sure our efforts will pay off!
Calligraphy Association
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封倡议书；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给要点及要求完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，陈述学生的汉字书写能力大大降低的现状；
第二步，根据所给要点，陈述自己的倡议；
第三步，书写结语，鼓励大家行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to更喜欢
②instead of而不是
③opportunity机会
④form the habit of…养成……的习惯
⑤take action采取行动
⑥pay off取得成功
[高分句型]
I’m sure our efforts will pay off!(省略that的宾语从句)
（2024·安徽淮北·二模）
假设你是李华，学校希望每位即将毕业的学生给学弟学妹们留下一些建议。请你根据下图中的信息用英语给学弟学妹们写一封信。
1.信件内容须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear younger schoolmates,
How is it going It’s time for me to leave school. Here is my advice for you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear younger schoolmates,
How is it going It’s time for me to leave school. Here is my advice for you.
First, as students, it’s important for you to study hard at school. You must listen to the teacher carefully in class and do your homework carefully after school. Second, it’s also important to keep healthy. To keep healthy, you can exercise often and eat regularly. Third, you must follow rules both in and out of school. For example, following the rules at school can make you behave well. Following the traffic rules can make you safe. Last, you can develop a hobby. It can make your life interesting and full.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“给学弟学妹们的建议”来引出下文中对具体建议的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“努力学习、保持健康和遵守规则”三方面入手，给出具体的建议；
③第三步，书写结语。希望学弟学妹们的生活能有趣充实。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy 保持健康
②both...and 两者都
[高分句型]
①First, as students, it’s important for you to study hard at school.（it作形式主语）
（2024·广东深圳·三模）
深圳中小学已独立开设劳动教育必修课，假如你是校学生会主席李华，请代表广大学生给校长写一封关于提升劳动教育课程的信件，谈谈你对开设劳动课程的建议和理解。
要点提示：
1. 课程内容建议：
①…… ②…… ③……
2. 开设课程的意义：（至少写3点意义）。
要求：
1. 必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，行文连贯，标点正确，书写规范。
提示词：
开设run；课程course；木工woodworking；屋顶农场rooftop farm；光荣的glorious
Dear headmaster,
I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to
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【答案】例文
Dear headmaster,
I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to share some suggestions on running the course.
First, the school can offer paper-cutting and woodworking classes. Second, we can build a rooftop farm on one of the buildings, and teachers can teach us how to plant vegetables and fruits in the farm. Finally, holding some competitions like cooking competition will be a nice choice. We can also invite parents to join in these activities.
Through this course, we students can not only learn some life skills but also take part in social activities. Meanwhile, our school life will become more colourful and meaningful!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，表明写信的目的是提供一些开设课程的建议；
第二步，具体介绍课程内容的建议；
第三步，介绍开设课程的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①hold some competitions举办一些比赛
②take part in参加
③invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事
④meanwhile同时
[高分句型]
①Second, we can build a rooftop farm on one of the buildings, and teachers can teach us how to plant vegetables and fruits in the farm. (and连接的并列句)
②Finally, holding some competitions like cooking competition will be a nice choice. (动名词作主语)
（2024·湖南长沙·二模）
现今，越来越多的国家开设“中文”课程，你的英国笔友Mike的学校也即将开设“中文”选修课，他对此很感兴趣，但也有些畏难，因此来信向你询问学习中文的建议。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示给他写封回信鼓励他，并向他介绍学习中文的好方法。
要求：
1. 回信必须包含图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右（开头和结尾都已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Mike,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
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I wish you success in learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. Chinese is spoken widely in the world. It’s useful and important for your future. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.
In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new.
I wish you success in learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，提出观点并说明原因；
第二步，给出学习汉语的建议；
第三步，书写结语，希望对方取得成功。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不仅……而且……
②what’s more而且
③be supposed to应该
[高分句型]
①Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course.(省略that的宾语从句)
②Learning is a lifelong journey.(动名词作主语)
（2024·湖北宜昌·三模）
校园霸凌时有发生，Jimmy 在学校也曾被霸凌过。请你认真读他的信并给他回复
Dear Li Hua , How is it going I was stopped to ask for some money by some bad students on my way home last Wednesday. They are much taller and stronger than me. I was too afraid to refuse. Besides, they warned me not to tell what happened to my teachers or parents. Have you ever experienced such a thing How did you deal with it What should I do if I am bullied again Can you give me some advice Look forward to your reply. Jimmy
要求：1：短文必须包括所给所有要点，可适当发挥。
2：文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名。
3：词数80左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jimmy,
It’s not easy being our easy to deal with such a thing.
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【答案】例文
Dear Jimmy,
It’s not easy to deal with such a thing. I’m sorry to hear about what happened to you. I have experienced something similar before. Here is my advice:
First, always stay calm and try to remember their faces or any details about them. Second, avoid going home alone. You walk with friends or take different routes. Third, it’s very important to tell your parents or teachers about this. They can help you find ways to protect yourself. Lastly, if it happens again, don’t give them money. Instead, shout for help or run to a safe place.
Stay strong, Jimmy. You are not alone in this.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据Jimmy的信件，提炼出写作要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对Jimmy的遭遇表示同情，并表示自己有类似的经历；
第二步，就如何应对校园霸凌给出自己的建议；
第三步，鼓励Jimmy并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②stay calm保持冷静
③avoid doing sth.避免做某事
[高分句型]
Lastly, if it happens again, don’t give them money. (if引导的条件状语从句)
提升练习
（2024·湖北十堰·二模）
2024年中考即将来临，面对这一人生重大的转折点，每位同学都在为了实现自己的梦想而奋力拼搏。很多同学在积极进取的道路上会遇到一些困惑。请认真阅读王芳给Robert Hunt写的一封信后，以Robert Hunt的身份用英语给王芳写封回信，帮助她解惑。
Dear Mr. Hunt, My problem is that I am worried about arguments between my parents. My father always complains about my study, shouting at my mother without any reason. I often feel stressed out and I stay up late until 1 o’clock. And also I can’t focus on what the teacher said in class. I always feel nervous. What should I do Wang Fang
要求：
（1）回信要合情合理，能跟来信者产生共鸣，起到帮助作用；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Fang,
I have heard from you. It’s not easy being your age.
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Robert Hunt
【答案】例文
Dear Wang Fang,
I have heard from you. It’s not easy being your age. I understand how you feel about your parents’ arguments and the stress it brings. Here are some suggestions that might help you.
First, try to talk to your parents about how their arguments affect you. They might not realize the impact it has on you. Second, find a quiet place to study where you can focus better. It could be a library or a friend’s house. Finally, make sure to get enough sleep. Going to bed earlier can help you feel more rested and focused in class. Remember, it’s important to take care of yourself.
I hope these suggestions help you.
Robert Hunt
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要是安慰王芳，并给出一些缓解压力和改善学习状态的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接信件的开头，引出写作意图；
第二步，详细给出一些缓解压力和改善学习状态的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①complain about 抱怨
②focus 专注
[高分句型]
I understand how you feel about your parents’ arguments and the stress it brings. (how引导的宾语从句)
They might not realize the impact it has on you. (省略that的宾语从句)
Going to bed earlier can help you feel more rested and focused in class. (动名词短语作主语)
（2024·海南海口·二模）
假定你是李华。你校英语俱乐部准备创办一份中学生英文电子杂志 English Weekly，现面向全校师生就栏目 (column) 设置征询建议。请你从下面备选的三个栏目主题中选取两个，或选其一加一个个人喜欢的主题，给杂志编辑 Mr. Smith 写封信进行推荐。信件内容包括：
1. 表达你对创办杂志的看法；
2. 建议两个栏目并说明理由。
注意：
1. 内容需涵盖要点提示，可做适当发挥；
2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯，条理清晰，书写规范，不得出现真实个人信息；
3. 100 词左右 (文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am so excited to learn that our school is going to start an E-magazine English Weekly.
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Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am so excited to learn that our school is going to start an E-magazine English Weekly. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
I would like to recommend two columns which are really my cup of tea. “Culture in the world” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “Language learning” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve. Well, I think the magazine is to help us learn English and broaden our horizon.
I really can’t wait to read the magazine.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达你对创办杂志的看法；
第二步，建议两个栏目并说明理由；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①agree with同意
②each other彼此
③can’t wait to do sth.情不自禁做某事
[高分句型]
① I would like to recommend two columns which are really my cup of tea. (which引导的定语从句)
②Well, I think the magazine is to help us learn English and broaden our horizon. (宾语从句)
（2024·湖南长沙·三模）
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信，告诉你他最近经常学习到很晚，睡眠不好，成绩也没提高，学习压力较大。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封信，帮助他解决问题。
要求：
1. 请结合生活实际，自行补充第三点建议；
2. 要涵盖表格中的要点，可适当增加细节；
3. 字数80词左右 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
4. 文中不能出现本人真实姓名和班级。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have much stress these days.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have much stress these days. It is normal to have a lot of pressure for teenagers. I would like to share some ways to lower stress with you.
First of all, you had better make a good study plan. A good plan can make you study efficiently. Besides, you should get enough sleep so that you have much enenrgy to learn knowledge in class. Remember that you shouldn’t play games or your phone before bedtime. Last but not least, do some exercise to relax yourself every day.
Hopefully, my suggestions are of great help to you. Please let me know if you have any problems.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对别人的问题表达同情，并引出主题；
第二步，从要点提示的三个方面具体介绍自己给出的建议；
第三步，总结全文，希望自己的建议有用。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb do sth让某人做某事
②be of great help to sb对某人非常有用
[高分句型]
①Besides, you should get enough sleep so that you have much enenrgy to learn knowledge in class. （目的状语从句）
②Remember that you shouldn’t play games or your phone before bedtime.（宾语从句）
（2024·宁夏银川·二模）
假设你是某英语报社的编辑Rina，收到Li Wei同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei回信。
要求：
1.须包括所有要点提示并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2.词数：80词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：laugh at; care about; high-fat food (高脂肪食物); the more; the healthier.
Dear Li Wei,
I’ve received your letter and I can understand you.
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Yours,
Rina
【答案】例文：
Dear Li Wei,
I’ve received your letter and I can understand you. You must feel bad when being laughed at use of your over-weight. Here is my advice for you.
Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble. Secondly, try to eat healthily. Keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight. Thirdly, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. You’d better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier you’ll be.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Rina
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明写作意图。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“变得自信”、“健康饮食”以及“适当运动”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①laugh at嘲笑
②over-weight过度肥胖
③need to do sth.需要做某事
④care about关心
⑤help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
⑥try to do sth.尝试做某事
⑦advise sb. to do sth.建议某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. (there be句型)
②The most important thing is to be confident, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble. (as引导的原因状语从句)
③Keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. (祈使句)
④I hope my advice will be helpful to you. (省略that的宾语从句)
（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）
假如你是九年级学生希望，近日收到备考英国中考的笔友Peter的来信，他想了解你班近期班会情况。请根据以下信息给Peter回信，并针对有效复习向Peter提出建议，同时预祝他取得佳绩。
写作要点：
1．班会课主题：我的进步
2．介绍你和几名同学中考复习过程中取得的进步：
（1）王丞：物理
（2）李安：语文
（3）你：英语
3．针对中考如何有效复习对Peter提出建议。
提示词：*review (v.)复习 *efficiently (adv.)有效地 *GCSE英国中考
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Xi Wang
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
How is everything going I am very happy to introduce the recent class meeting to you.The theme of the class meeting is “my progress”.
Wang Cheng has made great progress in physics and he thinks it is important to do more exercises and summarize. What is more, he often reviews what he has learned in time after class. Li An has made great progress in Chinese too. She says that if you want to get better in Chinese, reading will be necessary. I listen to English songs and read English magazines to learn Engliah well.
You should make study plans and make good use of your time. Never put off till tomorrow what should be done today. Last but not least, try to think for yourself when you face a problem. If it can’t be solved by yourself, you should ask your teachers or parents for help.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Xi Wang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：提示信息已给出，不要遗漏要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍班会的主题；
第二步，介绍几名同学所取得的进步；
第三步，给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①put off推迟
②last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①If it can’t be solved by yourself, you should ask your teachers or parents for help.（if引导条件状语从句）
②What is more, you should review what you have learned in time after class.（what引导宾语从句）
（2024·河南信阳·二模）
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Penny在信中讲述了她最近的烦恼。请根据信件内容，用英语写一封回信，给她提些建议。
Dear Li Hua, My parents agreed to take me to the music festival last Sunday. Unluckily, they were busy with work and failed to keep their promise. I am so sad but my parents don’t seem to care. What should I do Can you help me Yours, Penny
要求：1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Penny,
I am sorry to hear that you feel sad recently.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Penny,
I am sorry to hear that you feel sad recently. It was a pity that you couldn’t enjoy the music festival because your parents were too busy. Here are my suggestions.
To begin with, try to understand your parents. Instead of not caring about the promise, they’re just busy earning money to support the family. What’s more, you’d better talk to your parents and share your feelings with them. Maybe you can come up with a plan to make up for the pity, such as eating out, watching a movie or going on a trip during the holiday. Most importantly, you have to keep in mind that your parents will always love you.
Hope my advice will help you out and make you feel better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据信中的内容给他一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，给出自己的建议；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①to begin with首先
②be busy doing sth.忙于做某事
③make up for弥补
④keep in mind记住
[高分句型]
Most importantly, you have to keep in mind that your parents will always love you. (that引导的宾语从句)
（2024·浙江绍兴·二模）
你校英语俱乐部将举行“劳动教育”主题活动，现向全校学生征求活动建议。假如你是李华，请根据下图内容用英语给负责人写一封书信，谈谈自己的劳动经历并提供建议。
注意：
1. 短文必须包括上图所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 补充内容至少各一条；
3. 词数：80—100；
4. 文章的开头仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
Labor is a very important part of our life. Here is my experience and some advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear sir,
Labor is a very important part of our life. Here is my experience and some advice.
I usually help with housework, such as doing the dishes, cleaning my bedroom, sweeping the floor and so on. Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. Also, sharing housework can help our parents free from heavy chores after work. And then they can relax themselves.
For the coming Labor Education Theme Activity, I have some suggestions. I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. We can encourage students to clean up and decorate our school as well. Students will learn about the importance of hard work and the value of labor.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括思维导图中的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开篇点题，介绍劳动很重要性，并引入自己的经验和建议；
第二步，介绍自己所做的家务劳动及收获；
第三步，对主题活动提出建议并总结。
［亮点词汇］
① clean up 打扫干净
② form good habits 养成好习惯
［高分句型］
① Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. (动名词作主语，not only … but also…连接并列成分)
② I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. (宾语从句)
8．（22-23九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末）
假设你是李华，是沭阳某中学九年级的学生。你们班正在选举新的班长，你想推荐方玲。请根据以下所给要点，给班主任兼英语老师孙老师写一封推荐信。
推荐理由
喜欢阅读 书籍帮助她了解许多中国文化，为她开启一个新世界。
吃苦耐劳 从不介意花很多时间组织各项班级活动，将中国文化介绍给外国友人。
能歌善舞 有音乐天赋，歌声优美，能边演奏边创作音乐，擅长跳舞。
擅长绘画 善于用颜色调节情绪，由于不懈的努力，曾在绘画竞赛中获奖。
乐于助人 当过志愿者，曾帮慈善机构募集资金；（另举一例…）。
1. 包含所有给出的提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 省略号部分需作适当发挥；
3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Sun,
I’m writing to recommend Fang Ling as our new monitor. She has many strong qualities for this position. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So I think Fang Ling is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Sun,
I’m writing to recommend Fang Ling as our new monitor. She has many strong qualities for this position.
She loves reading. She thinks books help her learn more about Chinese culture. They also open up a whole new world for her. She is hard-working. She never minds spending much time on different activities for our class and often introduces Chinese culture to foreign friends.
She has a gift for music. Also, she has a good voice. She can make music while playing. Dancing is also her talent.
She is good at painting. She knows how to use colors to change moods. She made every effort to keep on trying and won the Best Art Award.
She is also helpful. She often works as volunteers. Once she collected money for charity. At weekends, she often goes to the elderly house to visit the old people.
So I think Fang Ling is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为推荐信；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达自己的写信目的——推荐方玲作为新班长；
第二步，具体介绍推荐她当班长的原因，例如她喜欢阅读、她吃苦耐劳、能够善歌善舞、擅长绘画、乐于助人，并且列举一些例子来证明她的这些品质；
第三步，书写结束语，表达自己认为方玲是适合班长的人选，期待老师能选她当班长。
[亮点词汇]
① hard-working 勤奋的
② mind doing sth. 介意做某事
③ introduce sth. to sb. 给某人介绍……
④ have a gift for 对……有天赋
⑤ be good at 擅长
⑥ make every effort to do sth. 努力做某事
⑦ agree with sb. 同意某人的观点
[高分句型]
① She knows how to use colors to change moods. （特殊疑问词+动词不定式）
② So I think Fang Ling is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me. （省略that的宾语从句）
真题练习
（2024·青海西宁·中考真题）
假如你是Dr. Know，请根据表格中的要点，给她写一封80词左右的英文回信，帮她解决困扰。可适当发挥，首句已给出，不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
建议 原因
帮助他人 使人快乐受到欢迎
结交朋友 互诉烦恼变得开朗
参与活动 展示自我自信满满
…… ……
Dear Jenny,
I’m very sorry to hear your problems. Here are my suggestions for you.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dr. Know
【答案】A possible version:
Dear Jenny,
I’m very sorry to hear your problems. Here are my suggestions for you.
To begin with, you need to help others because helping others is helping yourself. You can get much joy and will be popular. Secondly, you’d better try your best to make friends and learn to share. It can double your happiness and half your problems. The most important thing is to be a good listener. Then you will not feel lonely and become outgoing. Thirdly, join some clubs actively. If you show yourself bravely in the clubs, it can deal with your shyness. You can have more chances to practise speaking in public and believe yourself more. Last but not least, try new things and share them with friends. They are thirsty for new things.
In a word, you don’t have to care too much about what others think of you, just improve yourself. I believe you can do it well. Hope what I said can help you be better soon.
Dr. Know
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据表格中的要点提示完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，引出下文；
第二步，从“帮助他人、结交朋友、参与活动”等方面给出建议；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①to begin with首先
②try one’s best to尽力去做某事
③make friends交朋友
④care too much about过于在意
⑤think of考虑到
[高分句型]
①To begin with, you need to help others because helping others is helping yourself.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②If you show yourself bravely in the clubs, it can deal with your shyness.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·中考真题）
假如你是第一中学的学生李平，你认识的英国外教Mr.Green的儿子David打算到你的学校进行为期三年的初中学习。请你给David写一封信，告诉他如何使他的初中生活过得有意义。
写作要点：
1.对他说你相信他会喜欢你的学校。
2.向他介绍你的学校：
（1）学生友好；
（2）老师优秀；
（3）有多种课外活动。
3.告诉他如何使他的初中生活过得有意义 (make one’s junior high school life meaningful)。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear David,
I’m glad that you’ re coming to study in my school for 3 years.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear David,
I’m glad that you’re coming to study in my school for 3 years. Our school is a wonderful place, and I believe you will like it very much. The students here are very friendly and always ready to help each other. Our teachers are excellent and dedicated to providing us with the best education. There are also various kinds of extracurricular activities you can join, such as sports, music, and art clubs.
To make your junior high school life meaningful, I suggest you actively participate in these activities and try to make new friends. Don’t be afraid to seek help from teachers and classmates if you face any difficulties. Also, managing your time well and setting specific goals for yourself can greatly help you. Remember to balance your studies with relaxation and hobbies. I believe you will have a fulfilling and enjoyable time here.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示欢迎并告诉他相信他会喜欢这个学校；
第二步，介绍学校的一些情况；
第三步，给出如何让初中生活过得有意义的建议；
第四步，书写结语，预祝他在新的学校生活愉快。
[亮点词汇]
①provide sb. with sth.给某人提供某物
②actively participate积极参与
③make new friends结交新朋友
④seek help from sb.寻求某人的帮助
⑤balance A with B 平衡A与B
[高分句型]
①To make your junior high school life meaningful, I suggest you actively participate in these activities and try to make new friends.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I believe you will have a fulfilling and enjoyable time here.（宾语从句）
（2024·内蒙古呼和浩特·中考真题）
假设你是李华，暑假即将到来，你校将举办一次“英国行”研学活动 (study trip)。你想竞聘学员队长，现请你给此次研学组织者Mr Smith用英语写一封信。
内容包括：
1. 你的优势（两条）；
2. 提出你对此次研学活动内容的建议，包括：
（1）寄宿在当地家庭；
（2）游览当地风景名胜；
（3）……
要求：
1. 要点齐全，结构清晰，语言流畅，书写规范，可适当增加细节；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数80—100左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a member of this study trip, writing to apply to be the team leader.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply and hope we’ll have a wonderful trip there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a member of this study trip, writing to apply to be the team leader.
I am the monitor of my class. So I have some experience of organizing activities. And I’m really good at communication. So I think I’m suitable for the team leader.
In order to make the trip meaningful, I have some suggestions. First, to experience life in the UK, our members can stay with an English family and take part in their daily life. Besides, it’s a good idea to visit the places of interest, such as Big Ben and London Eye. It can help us know more about the culture. Finally, they are certain to like visiting Cambridge University which is many students’ dream school.
I’m looking forward to your reply and hope we’ll have a wonderful trip there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容竞聘学员队长，介绍自己的优势，并提出你对此次研学活动内容的建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的优势；
第二步，提出你对此次研学活动内容的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②be suitable for适合
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①In order to make the trip meaningful, I have some suggestions. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②Finally, they are certain to like visiting Cambridge University which is many students’ dream school. (which引导的定语从句)
（2023·江西·中考真题）
通过阅读理解A篇我们感受到户外活动的有趣。本月底你校将举办一次户外活动，为了更好地开展这次活动，校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华，请根据表格内容写一篇短文（先介绍你喜欢的户外活动，再说明理由，最后就活动安排提出合理的建议），向社团投稿。
写作要点 参考句型
1. What outdoor activity do you like We’d better… Maybe we can… It’ll be better if… …
2. Why do you like it
3. How do you arrange (安排) it (when, where, what to do… )
备注：如果出现地名，请以East________代替，例如：East Mountain…要求：
1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80-120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope my suggestions help.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案】例文1：
Dear sir,
I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month. I like climbing mountains with my classmates. We can enjoy the beauty of nature. We can also make friends and help each other on the way.
To make the activity more interesting, I hope to go to East Mountain on June 25th. Since it’s a little far, we’d better meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and go there by bus. We can collect some history stories about the famous mountain so that we can share them together. It’ll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch there. In the afternoon, we can pick up the rubbish to protect the environment. Then we can go home at 4:30 p.m. We’re sure to have great fun.
Hope my suggestions help.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
例文2：
Dear sir,
I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month. I like travelling to the countryside with my classmates. I can not only enjoy fresh air but also take exercise. It’s a good experience to learn about nature.
To make the trip more interesting, I’d like to share my suggestions. Firstly, I hope to go to East Farm on June 25th because it’s not far. Secondly, we’d better do some farm work. We can talk with the farmers so that we can know about different plants. After that, for lunch, maybe we can cook and eat the vegetables which grow there. Finally, it’ll be better if we can make friends with the children in the countryside in the afternoon. I’m sure we will have a nice time.
Hope my suggestions help.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你喜欢的户外活动。
第二步，说明理由。
第三步，就活动安排提出合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①the beauty of nature自然之美
②hope to do希望做某事
③pick up拾起，捡起
[高分句型]
①Since it’s a little far, we’d better meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and go there by bus. (原因状语从句)
②It’ll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch there. (if引导条件状语从句)