2025中考英语书面表达之感谢信专项复习练习题(含答案解析)

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2025中考英语书面表达之感谢信专项复习练习题
基础练习
(2024·吉林长春·二模)
假如你是李华,毕业临近,请为你的英语老师Ms. Wang写一个简短的感谢信(thank-you note)。
要点如下:
1. 感谢她妙趣横生的英语课堂;
2. 感谢她在你学习遇到困难时给予的帮助;
3. 表达对老师的美好祝愿。
要求:字迹工整,语法正确,要点齐全。40词左右,可适当发挥。
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(2024·吉林长春·二模)
假如你是李华,初中即将毕业,请根据下面要点,给你的初中英语老师 Mr. Li用英文写一封不少于40词的感谢信。
要点:
1.感谢他在英语方面给予你的帮助;
2. 你过去英语学习有困难,每次取得不好成绩时会感到忐忑不安;
3. 李老师经常给你建议并帮助你,在他的帮助下,你取得了巨大的进步;
4. 祝他生活愉快。
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3.(2023·辽宁丹东·一模)
假如你叫李华,是一名交换生。为期一年的法国交换生活即将结束,回国前,你的法国同学为你举办了盛大的欢送派对。请写封感谢信,感谢精彩的派对以及在法国期间同学们的帮助,你期待着再次去法国,同时表达你对同学们的祝福。
要求:字迹工整,表达清晰有条理。词数 30 左右。
Dear classmates,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
4.(2023·吉林长春·一模)
假如你是刘薇,在美国学习期间,你的寄宿家庭布朗夫妇对你帮助很大。下周一,你就要回国了。请给布朗夫妇写一封感谢信,表达你对他们的感激之情。
内容:
1.感到宾至如归;
2.英语进步很大;
3.邀请布朗夫妇来长春共度春节。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;语言简洁;不少于40词。
Dear Mr and Mrs Brown, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Liu Wei
(2022·辽宁辽阳·一模)
假如你是李明,中学生活即将结束,请你给你最喜欢的一位老师Mr. Wang写几句话,向他表达你的感激之情和美好祝愿。
Dear Mr. Wang,
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Li Ming
6.(2024·吉林长春·二模)
假如你是李华,初中即将毕业,请根据下面要点,给你的初中英语老师 Mr.Li用英文写一封不少于40词的感谢信。开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
要点:1.感谢他在英语方面给予你的帮助;
2.你过去英语学习有困难;每次取得不好成绩时会感觉忐忑不安。
3.李老师经常给你建议并帮助你;在他的帮助之下,你取得了巨大进步。
4.祝他生活愉快。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体。
Dear Mr. Li,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7.假如你是李华,初中三年你与同学们在一起学习,参加各种活动,互相帮助,彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。你们即将毕业,校园网英语论坛开辟了“Thank-you letter”专题,请你给你的同学李明写一封不少于40词的感谢信。
要点:
1.李明性格:友爱善良; 乐于助人
2.感谢原因:李明经常在功课上帮助你; 让你变得开朗
3.诚挚祝福:对李明表达感谢和祝福
要求:要点齐全; 语言通顺; 简洁得体。
Dear Li Ming,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(2023·安徽阜阳·一模)
假如你是Jim。前段时间你的朋友李华一直在帮助你学习中文歌和了解中华文化。现在你已经回国,请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括:
1. 表达感激之情;
2. 回忆各种收获;
3. 发出邀请。
注意:
1. 必须包含所有要点,词数80-100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校的名称。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you doing these days
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Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Jim
提升练习
1.(2024·甘肃天水·三模)
在初中即将毕业之际,假如你是李明,请你给曾经对你有很大帮助的叶老师写一份感谢信。
文章包含以下内容:
1. 3年前,你来到新的班级,没有朋友,感到孤独。
2. 叶老师鼓励你多交朋友,告诉你学好英语。
3. 现在你的变化。(性格变得外向,积极参加各种活动,学习成绩提高)
4. 对叶老师表示感谢并祝福老师身体健康。
注意:(1)词数100—120,开头、结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
(2)短文必须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺。文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Mr. Ye,
How time flies! I’ll graduate from the junior school soon.
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Yours,
Li Ming
2.(2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·二模)
假如你是陈华,快要毕业了,你的美国网友Mike想要了解你的初中生活以及对高中生活的规划,请你根据以下信息给Mike写一封回信。
写作要点:
1.感谢Mike对自己的关心。
2.对于初中生活的回顾。
﹙1﹚初中生活多彩难忘。
﹙2﹚老师和同学给予了很多帮助,
3. 你对于未来高中生活有什么打算。
写作要点:
1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯
3.字迹工整,语言精炼,表达准确,条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going
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Best wishes
Yours
Chen Hua
(2024·山东枣庄·三模)
父母是我们的第一任老师。他们不但给了我们生命,还给了我们所需要的一切,包括衣食住行和教育等。作为青少年,你一定有很多话要对父母说,请你根据下面提示给父母写一封信。
1.感谢父母无私的爱;2.感谢父母的辛勤劳动;3.感谢父母对你的教育。
注意:1.短文须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。
3.词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mom and Dad,
I want to take a moment to express my love and gratitude to both of you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
(2024·山东枣庄·三模)
世界上最亲的人是父母,他们给予我们生命,含辛茹苦地抚养我们长大。请根据下列提示给父母写一封80 — 100词的书信,表达自己的感激之情。文中不得出现真实姓名等信息。
提示:父母尽力给我们提供好的生活和教育;希望父母保持健康;自己会主动帮助做家务,等等。
词汇:provide 提供 offer to do 主动做……
Dear parents,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Your (son/daughter)
(2024·四川广元·二模)
假定你是李华,David是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣,来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下:
◇感谢他的关注。
◇简要介绍相关情况。
◇谈谈你的感想。
注意:
(1)词数100个左右,信的格式已为你写好。
(2)可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(3)参考词汇:环保购物袋environment-friendly shopping bag; 关注concern.
Dear David,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·二模)
假如你是李平,毕业在即,你的英国笔友Alex想了解你的初中生活以及对未来高中生活的规划。请你根据以下信息,给Alex写一封回信。
写作要点:
1. 感谢Alex对自己的关心。
2. 对初中生活的回顾
(1)初中生活是多彩难忘的
(2)老师和同学们给予了很多帮助
3. 你对于未来的高中生活有什么打算。
Dear Alex,
How is everything going
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ping
(2023·湖北武汉·模拟预测)
假如你是李平,三年的初中生活就要结束了。老师们都很好,你最想感谢Mr. Jin。他在学习上、生活上甚至在你犯错误的时候给予你帮助,请你根据以下内容提示写信给他用英语写封信,表达自己的感激和依依惜别之情。
内容提示:
Why do you write this letter
What did Mr. Jin do to help you
How do you feel about your mistake
Something more about your experience.

注意:字数60-80字;内容要连贯得体,不要逐条翻译;表达流畅、书写整洁,信的首尾已给出,不计入总字数;文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
Dear Mr. Jin,
I will graduate soon. Looking back at the past three years, I have a lot to say.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
8.(2023·福建厦门·二模)
感恩是中华民族的传统美德,懂得感恩是生命中的大智慧。初中阶段,一定有人帮助你、陪伴你、感动你。值此毕业之际,以信传情。
请你根据要点提示,给你最想感谢的人写一封信,心怀感恩。
内容要点:
1. 表达对他/她的感谢;
2. 回顾过去暖心的经历;
3. 传达对他/她的美好祝愿。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.(2023·吉林长春·二模)
假如你是学校初三年级的学生会主席(President of the student union),现在请你代表全校师生,为每天辛勤打扫卫生的环卫工人写一封感谢信。
要点包括:
①感谢您每日辛勤劳动;
②为了保护生态环境,我们坚持不乱扔垃圾,为呵护环境尽一份力;
③如果您工作累了可以随时来到我们学校休息,我们为您提供热水和食物。
要求:
以上要点全部包括,可以适当补充,语言清晰流畅,书写工整,不少于40词。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.(2022·陕西西安·二模)
三年的初中生活即将结束,我们的点滴成长和进步都离不开周围人对我们的帮助与支持。假如你是李华,请给你最想感谢的人写一封信。
要点:
1. Who do you want to thank
2. How did he/she help you
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear ________,
How time flies! I’m going to graduate from junior high school. I want to say thanks to you.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
(2022·江苏连云港·模拟预测)
2022年连云港的春天因为疫情而变得与众不同,在大家的共同努力下,我们终于“守得云开见月明”。现连云港文明办正开展以“The person I Want to Thank in the Special Period”为主题的英文感谢信征集活动,假如你是Millie,请用英文写一封感谢信,表达你对帮助过自己的杨医生的感谢。内容包括:
(1)性格品质:和蔼,乐于助人,不害怕额外工作;
(2)感谢原因:提醒我按时吃药;当我难过使我振作;给我保持健康的建议;
另写出令自己印象最深的一件事……
(3) 你的评价:他是一位充满爱心的医生,另请自由发挥一两点……
注意:
(1) 词数90左右,结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 内容应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使短文完整、连贯。
Dear Mr Yang,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Millie
12.(2022·湖北黄冈·一模)
假设你是李华, 某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的要点提升用英文写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文, 用于投稿。
要点提示:
你的感谢 父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你(举一事例)
父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你(举一事例)
你的决心 努力学习
你的祝愿 祝愿父母健康快乐
词汇提示:raise(养育), look after, trust, care about
写作要求:
1. 短文的内容应包含所提示的要点, 语言要流畅, 可围绕提示要点适当增加情节, 以使短文的意思连贯;
2. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名;
3. 短文的词数在90词左右。(开始和结束语已经给出)
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks again for everything you have done for me.
Love,
Li Hua
13.(2022·山东·一模)
假设你是李华,你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习方面给了你很多帮助,在初中即将毕业时,请你给Sam写一封感谢信,内容要点如下:
1.你在学习英语时曾经遇到困难;
2.Sam对你的帮助及建议;
(1)多听多读;
(2)多看英语电影、多唱英语歌;
(3)把错误写在笔记本里,并且改正它们;
(4) ……(请补充一个以上的建议)
3.你的收获。
注意:1. 不要出现考生本人信息;
2.80 词左右
Dear Sam, How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua
真题练习
(2021·湖北黄石·中考真题)
As an old saying goes, “A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.” 假如你叫李华,在你的初中学习生涯中,一定有许多朋友给了你不少帮助。在毕业之际,请给你的好友李雷写一封感谢信。
要点:
1. 感谢他(她)对你的帮助。
2. 他(她)是如何帮助你的。
要求:
1. 请结合具体事例,适当发挥;语言通顺,意思连贯。
2. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息。
3. 80词左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Li Lei,
How time flies! We are going to graduate from junior high school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
2.(2020·甘肃兰州·中考真题)
假如你是李明,你的英国朋友Peter得知你即将初中毕业,来信询问你的一些情况,请你给他写一封回信,要点包括:
1.感谢关心;
2.收获与感受;
3.期待共同努力,实现梦想。
要求:
1.80词左右;
2.条理清晰,行文连贯,书写规范,内容上可适当增加细节;
3.信中不得出现具体的校名、人名等信息;
4.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
提示词语:used to; make progress;develop-habit;grow up;make effort;be proud of
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to receive your letter.
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Yours,
Li Ming
3.(2017·辽宁营口·中考真题)
按要求完成大作文,80词左右。
假如你叫王东,初中生活即将结束,请你给你的老师Miss Li 写一封信,表达对她的感激之情。内容要点如下:
参考词汇:unselfish (无私的);senior high school (高中)
Dear Miss Li,
How time flies! Thank you for all the things you have done for me in the last three years._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Dong
4.(2017·湖北黄石·中考真题)
假如你是李华,初中生活即将结束,在步入高中学校学习之际,你思绪万千。请你根据下面表格的提示,写一封信表达你对父母的由衷感激及今后打算如何回报父母。
提示:
父母为我 生活的照顾 饮食起居
精神的支持 交友、学习、压力
我为父母 感恩、陪伴、理解父母
注意:1.内容必须包含表格中所提供的所有信息,可适当发挥。
2.词数:80-100词。(开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数)
3 文中不能出现学生真实姓名和所在学生的名称。
Dear Mom/Dad
My Junior School life is coming to an end. Now, I’d like to show my thanks to you for you for your devotion to me these years.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours love,
Li Hua
答案解析
基础练习
(2024·吉林长春·二模)
假如你是李华,毕业临近,请为你的英语老师Ms. Wang写一个简短的感谢信(thank-you note)。
要点如下:
1. 感谢她妙趣横生的英语课堂;
2. 感谢她在你学习遇到困难时给予的帮助;
3. 表达对老师的美好祝愿。
要求:字迹工整,语法正确,要点齐全。40词左右,可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文
Dear Ms. Wang,
I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for what you have done for me. Thank you for the lively and interesting classes, which made me crazy about English. I also want to thank you for your help when I had trouble in study.
At last, wish you have a sweet life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据提示要点进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当增添细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍写信的目的;
第二步,从课堂及学习上的帮助两方面来感谢老师;
第三步,表达对老师的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①crazy about对……着迷
②lively and interesting生动有趣的
③at last最后
[高分句型]
①Thank you for the lively and interesting classes, which made me crazy about English. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②I also want to thank you for your help when I had trouble in study. (when引导时间状语从句)
(2024·吉林长春·二模)
假如你是李华,初中即将毕业,请根据下面要点,给你的初中英语老师 Mr. Li用英文写一封不少于40词的感谢信。
要点:
1.感谢他在英语方面给予你的帮助;
2. 你过去英语学习有困难,每次取得不好成绩时会感到忐忑不安;
3. 李老师经常给你建议并帮助你,在他的帮助下,你取得了巨大的进步;
4. 祝他生活愉快。
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【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Li,
I really appreciate your help with my English. I used to have trouble learning English and I would get butterflies in my stomach whenever I got bad grades. You often gave me advice and helped me. With your help, I have made great progress.
Finally, I wish you a happy life and good health.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封感谢信;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:根据提示内容对老师表达感谢,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍写作目的,表达对老师的感谢;
第二步,介绍老师对自己的帮助;
第三步,再次祝福老师。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth过去常常做某事
②have trouble doing sth做某事有困难
③make progress取得进步
[高分句型]
I used to have trouble learning English and I would get butterflies in my stomach whenever I got bad grades.(and并列句)
3.(2023·辽宁丹东·一模)
假如你叫李华,是一名交换生。为期一年的法国交换生活即将结束,回国前,你的法国同学为你举办了盛大的欢送派对。请写封感谢信,感谢精彩的派对以及在法国期间同学们的帮助,你期待着再次去法国,同时表达你对同学们的祝福。
要求:字迹工整,表达清晰有条理。词数 30 左右。
Dear classmates,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
Thank you for having a farewell party for me. I am so appreciative. We had a great time at the party. I also thank you for helping me during my stay in France. I am so lucky to meet these friends. I will miss you and am looking forward to coming to France soon. I wish you all the best.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达自己的感谢;
第二步,表达自己会怀念这些朋友,以及对同学们的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①thank you for doing sth因为做某事感谢
②have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
I am so lucky to meet these friends.(动词不定式作原因状语)
4.(2023·吉林长春·一模)
假如你是刘薇,在美国学习期间,你的寄宿家庭布朗夫妇对你帮助很大。下周一,你就要回国了。请给布朗夫妇写一封感谢信,表达你对他们的感激之情。
内容:
1.感到宾至如归;
2.英语进步很大;
3.邀请布朗夫妇来长春共度春节。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;语言简洁;不少于40词。
Dear Mr and Mrs Brown, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Liu Wei
【答案】例文:
Dear Mr and Mrs Brown,
I will return to China next Monday. I’m writing to show my thanks to you. You are so kind to me and make me feel at home. With your help, my English has improved a lot. Would you like to come to Changchun to spend the Spring Festival with my family I’m looking forward to your coming.
Best wishes.
Liu Wei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为感谢信;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“内容”中的关键信息,写感谢信表达对布朗夫妇的感激之情并邀请他们来长春共度春节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写信的目的是表示感谢;
第二步,介绍布朗夫妇对自己的帮助;
第三步,邀请布朗夫妇来长春与自己家人共度春节。
[亮点词汇]
①return to 返回
②be kind to sb. 对某人友善
③make sb. feel at home 使某人感到宾至如归
④look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事
[高分句型]
Would you like to come to Changchun to spend the Spring Festival with my family (表示邀请的常见句型)
(2022·辽宁辽阳·一模)
假如你是李明,中学生活即将结束,请你给你最喜欢的一位老师Mr. Wang写几句话,向他表达你的感激之情和美好祝愿。
Dear Mr. Wang,
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Li Ming
【答案】例文:
Dear Mr Wang,
Thank you so much for helping me during the three years. You have helped me a lot with my study. You always encourage me to work hard. You are so kind and friendly to us. I hope you are in good health and happy all the time.
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于书信写作,题目已经提供好书信格式,要求写一封信给你的老师,信中要表达你对他的感激之情和未来美好的祝愿。
2.写作指导:首先要向老师表达感激之情,注意对过去事情的描述用过去时态或现在完成时等,对老师的形容,用第二人称,最后可以表达美好祝愿。
6.(2024·吉林长春·二模)
假如你是李华,初中即将毕业,请根据下面要点,给你的初中英语老师 Mr.Li用英文写一封不少于40词的感谢信。开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
要点:1.感谢他在英语方面给予你的帮助;
2.你过去英语学习有困难;每次取得不好成绩时会感觉忐忑不安。
3.李老师经常给你建议并帮助你;在他的帮助之下,你取得了巨大进步。
4.祝他生活愉快。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体。
Dear Mr. Li,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Mr. Li,
I am writing to thank you for helping me with my English. I used to have trouble learning English. I often felt upset every time I got bad grades. You gave me some advice and helped me a lot. Thanks to your help, I made great progress. Wish you a happy life!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封感谢信;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:根据提示内容对老师表达感谢,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍写作目的,表达对老师的感谢;
第二步,介绍老师对自己的帮助;
第三步,再次表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②have trouble doing sth.做某事有困难
③thanks to幸亏
④make progress取得进步
[高分句型]
①I often felt upset every time I got bad grades. (every time引导的时间状语从句)
②Wish you a happy life! (感叹句)
7.假如你是李华,初中三年你与同学们在一起学习,参加各种活动,互相帮助,彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。你们即将毕业,校园网英语论坛开辟了“Thank-you letter”专题,请你给你的同学李明写一封不少于40词的感谢信。
要点:
1.李明性格:友爱善良; 乐于助人
2.感谢原因:李明经常在功课上帮助你; 让你变得开朗
3.诚挚祝福:对李明表达感谢和祝福
要求:要点齐全; 语言通顺; 简洁得体。
Dear Li Ming,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Li Ming,
The high school entrance examination is coming, and our 3-year junior school life is going to be over. I would like to thank you.
You’ve been very kind and helpful since we knew each other. I’ll never forget all the help you’ve given me. Last term, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home. When I was worrying about my lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help, I didn’t fall behind others. You also encourage me to be confident. Since then, we’ve been very close friends. Thank you again. Even though we may go to different schools, I will always stay in touch with you.
I wish you success in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“祝福”一项,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,开门见山提出在毕业之际想和对方说声谢谢;
第二步,具体阐述为什么感谢;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①worry about 担心
②help sb. with sth. 在……帮助某人
③stay in touch with 保持联系
[高分句型]
①You’ve been very kind and helpful since we knew each other. (since引导的时间状语从句)
②When I was worrying about my lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject.(when引导的时间状语从句)
③Even though we may go to different schools, I will always stay in touch with you.(even though引导的让步状语从句)
(2023·安徽阜阳·一模)
假如你是Jim。前段时间你的朋友李华一直在帮助你学习中文歌和了解中华文化。现在你已经回国,请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括:
1. 表达感激之情;
2. 回忆各种收获;
3. 发出邀请。
注意:
1. 必须包含所有要点,词数80-100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校的名称。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you doing these days
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Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Jim
【答案】例文:
Dear Li Hua,
How are you doing these days
I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.
Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in China and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your country and culture. What’s more, I learned some Chinese songs with your help.
I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. I will show you around my country.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Jim
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点中的关键信息,写感谢信感谢李华的帮助并邀请他到自己的国家。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明写信的目的是表示感谢;
第二步,回忆自己的收获;
第三步,邀请对方到自己的国家。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest 名胜古迹
②thanks to 多亏了
[高分句型]
①I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.(“介词+which”引导定语从句)
②I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness.(if引导的条件状语从句)
提升练习
1.(2024·甘肃天水·三模)
在初中即将毕业之际,假如你是李明,请你给曾经对你有很大帮助的叶老师写一份感谢信。
文章包含以下内容:
1. 3年前,你来到新的班级,没有朋友,感到孤独。
2. 叶老师鼓励你多交朋友,告诉你学好英语。
3. 现在你的变化。(性格变得外向,积极参加各种活动,学习成绩提高)
4. 对叶老师表示感谢并祝福老师身体健康。
注意:(1)词数100—120,开头、结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
(2)短文必须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺。文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Mr. Ye,
How time flies! I’ll graduate from the junior school soon.
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Ye,
How time flies! I’ll graduate from the junior high school soon. Now, I’m writing to show my thanks for your great help!
Three years ago, I was new in the class. I had no friends here and felt lonely. You encouraged me to make more friends. And you also told me to study English hard. With your help, I have changed a lot. Now, I am outgoing. I would like to take an active part in all kinds of activities. I also improve my grades a lot.
I’m so thankful to you for your kind help and I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future. I wish you happy and healthy.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:提示内容已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的。对老师的帮助表达感谢;
第二步,介绍自己三年前的状态、老师的帮助、以及现在的状态;
第三步,对叶老师表示感谢并祝福老师身体健康。
[亮点词汇]
① encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
② take an active part in 积极参与
[高分句型]
I’m so thankful to you for your kind help and I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.(and连接并列句)
2.(2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·二模)
假如你是陈华,快要毕业了,你的美国网友Mike想要了解你的初中生活以及对高中生活的规划,请你根据以下信息给Mike写一封回信。
写作要点:
1.感谢Mike对自己的关心。
2.对于初中生活的回顾。
﹙1﹚初中生活多彩难忘。
﹙2﹚老师和同学给予了很多帮助,
3. 你对于未来高中生活有什么打算。
写作要点:
1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯
3.字迹工整,语言精炼,表达准确,条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going
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Best wishes
Yours
Chen Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
How is everything going Thanks for your concern. Let me share something about my middle school life and plan of my coming high school life with you.
It has been three years since I came to the beautiful school. I will never forget my colorful school life. My school is very beautiful. I have different kinds of activities every term. My teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. I have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years. I am thankful to my teachers and classmates. They have helped me a lot in the past three years.
In the future, I will study harder. And I want to make more friends in the high school. Besides, I will do exercise at least three times a week to stay healthy.
How is your school life I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Chen Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时、一般将来时和现在完成时;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,感谢Mike的关心;
第二步,具体描写自己的初中生活,并说明自己对于未来高中生活的打算;
第三步,询问Mike的学校生活如何并表示期待收到他的回信。
[亮点词汇]
①make great progress取得巨大的进步
②different kinds of不同种类的
③stay healthy保持健康
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
It has been three years since I came to the beautiful school.(时间状语从句)
(2024·山东枣庄·三模)
父母是我们的第一任老师。他们不但给了我们生命,还给了我们所需要的一切,包括衣食住行和教育等。作为青少年,你一定有很多话要对父母说,请你根据下面提示给父母写一封信。
1.感谢父母无私的爱;2.感谢父母的辛勤劳动;3.感谢父母对你的教育。
注意:1.短文须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。
3.词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mom and Dad,
I want to take a moment to express my love and gratitude to both of you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Mom and Dad,
I want to take a moment to express my love and gratitude to both of you.
Your love is like a warm blanket on a cold night, always making me feel safe and loved. You’ve always been there for me, through good times and bad.
I’m so grateful for everything you’ve done for me. You’ve worked hard to give me a good life, and I know I wouldn’t be where I am today without you.
I’m especially thankful for the education you’ve given me. It’s opened up so many doors for me, and I’m excited to see what the future holds.
You’ve taught me so much about life, and I’m so lucky to have you as my parents. I love you both more than words can say.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,感谢父母无私的爱并进一步阐述;
第二步,感谢父母的辛勤劳动并进一步阐述;
第三步,感谢父母对你的教育并进一步阐述;
第四步,总结全文,再次表达对父母的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①through度过
②grateful感激的
③especially特别地
[高分句型]
①You’ve worked hard to give me a good life, and I know I wouldn’t be where I am today without you. (动词不定式表目的;并列句;宾语从句)
②I’m especially thankful for the education you’ve given me. (定语从句)
(2024·山东枣庄·三模)
世界上最亲的人是父母,他们给予我们生命,含辛茹苦地抚养我们长大。请根据下列提示给父母写一封80 — 100词的书信,表达自己的感激之情。文中不得出现真实姓名等信息。
提示:父母尽力给我们提供好的生活和教育;希望父母保持健康;自己会主动帮助做家务,等等。
词汇:provide 提供 offer to do 主动做……
Dear parents,
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Your (son/daughter)
【答案】One possible version:
Dear parents,
You love me more than anybody else in the world. As your child, I feel very happy and proud. You have tried to provide good life and education for me. You are very tired and have too much pressure. To keep healthy, you’d better do more exercise. You shouldn’t stay up so that you can get enough sleep. You should also eat healthy food.
I will offer to help out around the house. First, I’ll help do more housework. Second, I’ll respect you and get on well with you. Third, I will study hard and try not to make you worry about me.
I love you, my dear parents!
Your son
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中主要帮助父母做家务,注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,表明父母很爱我们,我们应该关心父母;
第二步,具体介绍如何关心父母以及我们能为父母做的事情;
第三步,书写结语,表达我们爱我们的父母。
[亮点词汇]
①too much太多
②keep healthy保持健康
③get on well with sb.与某人友好相处
④worry about担心
[高分句型]
①You shouldn’t stay up so that you can get enough sleep. (so that引导状语从句)
②Learning to care for our parents is what we should do.(动名词短语作主语;what引导表语从句)
(2024·四川广元·二模)
假定你是李华,David是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣,来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下:
◇感谢他的关注。
◇简要介绍相关情况。
◇谈谈你的感想。
注意:
(1)词数100个左右,信的格式已为你写好。
(2)可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(3)参考词汇:环保购物袋environment-friendly shopping bag; 关注concern.
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
I’m glad that you’ve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. Thank you for your concern.
As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us to use reusable environment-friendly shopping bags, which are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.
I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags, one of the many steps we are taking to make our country an even cleaner place, can greatly improve our environment.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主;
③提示:根据提示要点进行写作,注意写作逻辑合理,行文连贯,适当使用相关的过渡词和过渡句。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对笔友关注环保购物袋这事表达感谢;
第二步,对鼓励使用环保购物袋的原因以及使用情况进行介绍;
第三步,表达自己对这一措施的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①too much太多
②be made of由……制成
③a variety of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us to use reusable environment-friendly shopping bags, which are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. (as引导原因状语从句,which引导非限制性定语从句,that引导定语从句)
②I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags, one of the many steps we are taking to make our country an even cleaner place, can greatly improve our environment. (that引导宾语从句,省略关系代词that的定语从句)
(2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·二模)
假如你是李平,毕业在即,你的英国笔友Alex想了解你的初中生活以及对未来高中生活的规划。请你根据以下信息,给Alex写一封回信。
写作要点:
1. 感谢Alex对自己的关心。
2. 对初中生活的回顾
(1)初中生活是多彩难忘的
(2)老师和同学们给予了很多帮助
3. 你对于未来的高中生活有什么打算。
Dear Alex,
How is everything going
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Alex,
How is everything going Thanks for your concern. Let me share something about my middle school life and plan of my coming high school life with you.
It has been three years since I came to the beautiful school. I will never forget my colorful school life. My school is very beautiful. I have different kinds of activities every term. My teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. I have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years. I am thankful to my teachers and classmates. They have helped me a lot in the past three years.
In the future, I will study harder. And I want to make more friends in high school. Besides, I will do exercise at least three times a week to stay healthy.
How is your school life I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时、一般将来时和现在完成时;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,感谢Alex的关心;
第二步,具体描写你的初中生活并说明你对于未来高中生活的打算;
第三步,询问Alex的学校生活如何并表示期待收到他的回信。
[亮点词汇]
①make great progress取得巨大的进步
②thankful感谢的
③at least至少
④stay healthy保持健康
⑤look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It has been three years since I came to the beautiful school.(时间状语从句)
(2023·湖北武汉·模拟预测)
假如你是李平,三年的初中生活就要结束了。老师们都很好,你最想感谢Mr. Jin。他在学习上、生活上甚至在你犯错误的时候给予你帮助,请你根据以下内容提示写信给他用英语写封信,表达自己的感激和依依惜别之情。
内容提示:
Why do you write this letter
What did Mr. Jin do to help you
How do you feel about your mistake
Something more about your experience.

注意:字数60-80字;内容要连贯得体,不要逐条翻译;表达流畅、书写整洁,信的首尾已给出,不计入总字数;文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
Dear Mr. Jin,
I will graduate soon. Looking back at the past three years, I have a lot to say.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Jin,
I will graduate soon. Looking back at the past three years, I have much to say to you. You helped me with my lessons when I didn’t do well in my study. You asked me to wear more clothes to keep warm. You have given me so much help and encouragement. But I have done many things that made you angry. Last term, when we had classes online, I spent too much time playing computer games. I got bad grades without doubt. You tried your best to help me and formed my study habits.
You always told me I could do better. I’ve changed a lot. I think I should say sorry and thanks to you. Best wishes to you and your family.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”,“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中我(李平)最想感谢Mr. Jin在学习上、生活上甚至在我犯错误的时候给予我帮助的介绍。表达自己的感激和依依惜别之情。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍三年的初中生活就要结束了,为感激老师而写这封信;
第二步,介绍在学习上、生活上甚至在自己犯错误的时候老师给予自己的帮助;
第三步,表达自己因做错事抱歉的感受以及感激和依依惜别之情。
[亮点词汇]
① do well in擅长,在……干得好
② keep warm保温
③ had classes online在线上课
④ without doubt毫无疑问
[高分句型]
① But I have done many things that made you angry.(定语从句)
② Last term, when we had classes online, I spent too much time playing computer games.(when引导时间状语从句)
③ I think I should say sorry and thanks to you.(宾语从句)
8.(2023·福建厦门·二模)
感恩是中华民族的传统美德,懂得感恩是生命中的大智慧。初中阶段,一定有人帮助你、陪伴你、感动你。值此毕业之际,以信传情。
请你根据要点提示,给你最想感谢的人写一封信,心怀感恩。
内容要点:
1. 表达对他/她的感谢;
2. 回顾过去暖心的经历;
3. 传达对他/她的美好祝愿。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Ms. Lee,
I want to say “thank you” to you. In my junior high school life, you helps me a lot.
You take good care of me and often help me with my English. When I am in trouble, you always encourage me to face my difficulties and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. Thanks to you, I have made great progress in English and am becoming more and more interested in it.
I’m very thankful for all that you have done for me. I hope that you are healthy and happy every day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明要感谢谁,表达感谢;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍过去经历;
第三步,书写结语。表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①take good care of好好照顾
②encourage鼓励
③upset烦恼的
④made great progress取得极大的进步
[高分句型]
①When I am in trouble, you always encourage me to face my difficulties and give me good advice.(when引导时间状语从句)
②I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. (that引导宾语从句)
9.(2023·吉林长春·二模)
假如你是学校初三年级的学生会主席(President of the student union),现在请你代表全校师生,为每天辛勤打扫卫生的环卫工人写一封感谢信。
要点包括:
①感谢您每日辛勤劳动;
②为了保护生态环境,我们坚持不乱扔垃圾,为呵护环境尽一份力;
③如果您工作累了可以随时来到我们学校休息,我们为您提供热水和食物。
要求:
以上要点全部包括,可以适当补充,语言清晰流畅,书写工整,不少于40词。
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【答案】例文:
Dear the loveliest people,
I am the President of the student union in the third grade of our school. I am writing this letter on behalf of all the teachers and students in the school to thank you for your hard cleaning every day.
First of all, all of us thank you for your hard work every day. In addition, in order to protect the ecological environment, we insist on not littering and do our part to protect the environment. Last but not least, if you are tired from work, you can come to our school to have a rest at any time. We will provide you with hot water and food.
In a word, you are the loveliest people in the world. Because of you, our world is so beautiful.
President of the student union
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封感谢信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的是为了感谢环卫工人的辛勤劳动;
第二步,具体从“感谢环卫工人辛勤劳动、我们应该如何做以及我们对环卫工人提供的帮助”几方面来表达感谢;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②have a rest休息
③because of因为
[高分句型]
①In addition, in order to protect the ecological environment, we insist on not littering and do our part to protect the environment.(目的状语从句)
②Last but not least, if you are tired from work, you can come to our school to have a rest at any time. (条件状语从句)
10.(2022·陕西西安·二模)
三年的初中生活即将结束,我们的点滴成长和进步都离不开周围人对我们的帮助与支持。假如你是李华,请给你最想感谢的人写一封信。
要点:
1. Who do you want to thank
2. How did he/she help you
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear ________,
How time flies! I’m going to graduate from junior high school. I want to say thanks to you.
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