2025中考英语书面表达之材料作文专项复习讲义（含答案解析）

2025中考英语书面表达之材料作文专项复习讲义
写作思路
题型 考查频次 命题预测
书面表达之材料作文 10年10考 材料作文，顾名思义，需要首先对材料进行理解与提炼，对其主题、细节等有一定程度的把握，在此基础上，方能写好文章。同时，在写作中切忌抄袭原材料，在引用时需有相应变化。-般而言，其写作顺序是:引用材料提出观点或想法一论述总结。
思维导图
方法探究
探究一 解题步骤
考生在考场上，可以按照以下几个步骤来完成书面表达题。
第一步：认真审题，明确要求。
审题是写好书面表达题的关键。通读试题所给的每一个字，观察所给的每一幅图画，从而明确该文的题目要求，判断作文的类型、特点，了解作文的重要内容，力求写作切中题意
1．确定主题。通过仔细观察、认真分析，确定文章的主题，然后再围绕主题进行写作，以满足中考“切中题意”的要求。
2．确定格式。文体不同，格式也不一样。书信有书信的格式，便条有便条的格式。同样都是通知，口头通知与书面通知格式也不相同。因此，应根据不同的文体来确定写作时所采用的相应格式。
3．确定人称。因搞错人称而失分，实在令人可惜。所以，在动笔之前应先确定是使用第一、二人称还是第三人称。
4．确定时态。
第二步：依据要点，草拟提纲。
根据内容提示，在草纸上列出各要点所用的单词、短语以及句式等。注意这是组织语言、形成短文的基础步骤。
这一步骤的要求是：根据内容提示简单地列出提纲，将所需的语言材料准备好。可以只列出主要的词、词组、短语及句型；暂不考虑动词的时态、语态、第三人称单数等词形变化。
第三步：扩展成句，连句成篇。
将上述所列出的单词、短语等扩展成句。注意时态、语态的正确运用，并适当使用一些连接词将所列的语句连成完整的语篇。全文应结构紧凑，前后连贯。
第四步：仔细检查，认真修改。
检查修改是书面表达解题过程中必不可少的一个重要环节。检查修改的原则是大处着眼，小处着手。具体应从词法、句法、语篇三个方面入手仔细检查并认真修改。
从词法角度。主要检查词汇的运用是否妥当；拼写是否有误；名词、代词的数和格是否正确；词性是否混淆；词与词之间是否“搭配不当”；用词是否重复等。
2．从句法角度。主要检查句子结构是否完整；动词时态、语态是否正确；主谓是否一致等。3．从语篇角度。主要检查文体格式是否正确；字数是否符合要求；要点是否齐全；语句是否
简洁；上下文是否连贯、符合逻辑等。
第五步：认真书写，讲究规范。
中考书面表达对答卷的书写问题有明确具体的要求。因此，在考试中同学们应注意书写的美观性，千万不能因为书写问题影响自己的得分。另外，整洁干净的卷面，规范、美观的字体会给阅卷者好的印象，可以得到“印象分”
探究二 题型策略
一、写人叙事类
（一）命题特点
1. 常采用给材料的形式, 让学生描述或记叙某个人物或事件;
2. 要求学生能够简短地发表自己的看法, 或给予正确的评价;
3. 一般有很大的自由度, 学生可以充分发挥自己的想象, 畅谈自己的看法。
（二）写作要求
1. 主体要明确, 结构要完整, 句型要简练;
2. 切勿漏掉六个要素, 即五个“W” (who, when, where, what, why)和一个“H” (how);
3. 时态、人称要分清; 事件、线索要连贯; 内容、思想要感人。
▲句式举例
He is tall/short. . . and has long/short/black/brown. . . hair.
他很高/矮……并且留着长长的/短的/黑色的/棕色的头发。
She is interested in. . . 她对……感兴趣。
He’s so kind that we all like him. 他那么友好, 以至于我们都喜欢他。
He used to be/have. . . 他过去常常是(有)……
We’re proud of him/her. 我们以他(她)为骄傲。
He’s ready to help others. 他乐于助人。
I’ve learnt a lot from her/him. 我已经从她/他那儿学到了很多。
二、方法建议类
（一）命题特点
1. 一般给出问题和材料, 要求学生写出解决方法或解决建议;
2. 话题侧重行为、学习、环保、安全及健康等方面;
3. 一般要求以书信、邮件形式写作, 学生可根据提示增加一些细节, 适当发挥。
（二）写作要求
1. 主体要明确, 结构要完整, 句型要简练;
2. 如果以书信、邮件形式呈现, 必须符合书信、邮件的基本格式;
3. 时态、人称要分清; 方法、建议要实用; 观念、态度要真诚。
▲句式举例
I’d like to share my ideas with you. 我想与你分享我的想法。
Here are some of my suggestions. 这是我的一些建议。
The best way to. . . is by. . . ……最好的方法是通过……
To keep healthy/safe, we should. . . 为了保持健康/安全, 我们应当……
It’s one’s duty to. . . Let’s start from today. ……是某人的责任。让我们从今天开始吧。
Everyone should play a part in doing sth. 人人都应当参与……
I hope my advice/suggestions is/are helpful to you. 我希望我的建议对你有帮助。
三、计划梦想类
（一）命题特点
1. 一般给出提示, 让学生写出自己的计划或梦想;
2. 要求学生描述将来某一阶段或某一活动的计划; 谈论自己的梦想, 给出坚持该梦想的理由以及实现该梦想将要做出的努力;
3. 学生可以充分发挥自己的想象, 适当发挥, 增加文章内容。
（二）写作要求
1. 仔细研读提示及要求, 切勿漏掉要点;
2. 适当增加要点; 注意使用高级词汇及句子;
3. 注意人称及时态、语态的正确把握。
▲句式举例
I want to be. . . when I grow up. 当我长大后, 我想当一名……
She plans to travel around the world. 她计划周游世界。
The summer holiday is coming to an end and the new term is coming. 暑假即将结束, 新的学期即将到来。
I’d like to have a good rest and relax myself. 我想好好休息, 放松一下自己。
He wants to read more books to improve himself. 他想多读书来提升自己。
I hope my dream can come true one day. 我希望我的梦想有一天会实现。
I think you’ll achieve your dream. 我认为你会实现你的梦想。
四、说明介绍类
（一）命题特点
1. 常采用提示或图表的形式, 让学生介绍某种活动、某种动物或名胜等;
2. 要求学生能够将活动、任务、地点等进行清楚而准确地描述;
3. 主要考查任务说明文、事物说明文和方式方法说明文等。
（二）写作要求
1. 主体要明确, 结构要完整, 句型要简练;
2. 合理运用说明方法: 分析、分类、因果、举例、比较等;
3. 时态、语态要分清; 段落、内容要层次; 单词、标点要正确。
▲句式举例
He/She/It looks like. . . 他/她/它看起来像……
It’s 300 meters long/wide/high. 它有300米长/宽/高。
It’s made of wood. 它是由木材制成的。
With the rapidly growing popularity of. . . 随着……的快速普及……
A recent survey suggests that. . . 最近的一项调查显示……
China is a great country with a long history. 中国是一个拥有悠久历史的伟大国家。
典型练习
1．（2024·江西南昌·二模）本卷阅读理解部分文章C讲述了现今学校为提升学生午休质量而做出的努力和改变。良好的睡眠对学生的健康和学习都有积极的影响。假如你是张华，最近校英语社正在就“The Importance of Enough Sleep”举行征文活动。请根据表格内容写一篇短文投稿，先谈谈睡眠的重要性，介绍一下你每天的睡眠时间和不能获得充足睡眠的原因，最后就如何改善学生的睡眠提出合理的建议。
写作要点 参考句型
1.Why is it important to have enough sleep It’s important for us to… I often… I plan to…
2.Do you have enough sleep If not, why
3.What can you do to improve your sleep
要求：
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80-120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
The Importance of Enough Sleep
Sleep is very important for our health and learning. When we sleep well,
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I believe by making small changes, we can improve the quality of our sleep and feel better.
2．（2024·辽宁抚顺·一模）每个人都是在不断地进步中成长的，相信你也一样。经历了近三年的初中生活，你在哪方面进步了？如何进步的？你的进步感言是什么？请以“My Progress in Middle School”为题，写一写。
要求：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等；
2. 词数80~100。
My Progress in Middle School
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3．（2024·江苏南京·二模）某英文报 Kids Voice 栏目正在征稿，请你根据要求用英语写一篇文章投稿， 谈谈你的想法。
Some teenagers have difficulty in finding a true friend. They make friends by following suit (随大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they’re not willing to. Share your ideas about the topic. 1. What do you think about following suit to make friends 2. How can teenagers make true friends Support your ideas with your experience as an example.
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数 80左右。
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4．（2024·山东东营·三模）你在求学的过程中肯定遇到过很多好老师，你最喜欢哪位呢？请你以The Teacher I Like Best为题，用英语写一篇短文，参加美国杂志Weekly Reader的征文活动。
内容可涉及：他（她）是谁、教什么学科：你喜欢他（她）的原因。可以适当发挥。
要求：1．80-100词；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名及校名，老师姓名统一使用Mr./ Mrs./ Miss XX，例如：Mr. Ma。
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5．（2024·湖北襄阳·二模）当下，全国各地文旅系统都在“发大招”吸引游客，抖音国际版（TikTok）发起了“Tour China in ________”为主题的英文宣传视频征集活动，向世界展示中国。请根据以下征集要求，结合你拍摄的本地风土人情视频，用英文写一篇短文（解说词）。
Notice Hi, friends ! This is Tour China at TikTok! Tourists from around the world get excited to crowd into safe, cultural, friendly China. How are you going to attract them to your place You can tell them about the interesting places, colourful culture, delicious food, or anything special in your hometown. Share with us at TourChina@! TikTok International
要求：
1. 请用你要介绍的地点，将文章标题补充完整；
2. 你的英文解说词里至少包含征集通知中提到的两项（黑体部分）；
3. 词数 80 词左右，文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。
Tour China in ____________
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6．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·二模）“You Ask, We Answer”是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发布了一个关于作业的帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。
You Ask, We Answer
This term we don’t have much homework. But I find that I still spend too much time on it and I stay up almost every day. It makes me really tired. Do you spend a lot of time on your homework Does anyone have some good ways to help me Looking forward to your replies. Miyoko, Japan
要点：
1.回复Miyoko提出的问题；
2.给她一些高效完成作业的建议；
3.告诉她良好睡眠的重要性。
注意：
1.要点齐全，适当拓展；
2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
4.100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hi, Miyoko. I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset about your homework.
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7．（2024·江苏盐城·三模）在生活的长河中，每个人都是一名独特的航行者，追寻着属于自己的梦想和荣光。在这段旅程中，我们经历了无数的挑战和困难，也收获了无数的欢笑和泪水。其中，总会有一件事情，让我们深感骄傲与自豪。校报英语编辑部正开展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题的征文活动。请你结合提示中的问题写一篇短文投稿。
注意事项: （1）词数100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that
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8．（2024·浙江宁波·三模）作为中学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。
校英语报邀你写一篇短文，给考试焦虑的同学们提一些建议。请你结合自己的学习经历阐述你的观点，结合以下要点，以”How to Deal with the Exam Stress”为题写一篇短文。
Reasons Be afraid to fail the exam
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Advice Prepare hard
Sleep well before the exam
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注意：
(1)短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3)词数：80—100。
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9．（2024·黑龙江绥化·二模）良好的习惯成就美好的未来。作为青少年，如何培养良好的习惯呢？请根据以下内容提示以“How to Develop Good Habits”为题写一篇英语短文。
内容提示：(1)上课认真听讲，做笔记；
(2)每天按时完成作业；
(3)闲暇时多读课外书籍；
(4)每周锻炼3至4次；
(5)多吃蔬菜、水果，少吃不健康食品；
(6)补充一至两点良好的习惯，并谈谈它们对身心健康的影响。
要求：(1)根据表格内容，适当发挥；
(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
(3)文章中不得出现任何真实信息；(姓名、校名和地名等)
(4)词数不得少于80词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
How to Develop Good Habits
It’s very important for us to have good habits.
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10．（2024·福建福州·三模）为了促进学生全面发展，你校开展了以“帮助他人，共创美好生活”为主题的活动。 假定你是李华，请你根据以下提示，以“Sell Old Things and Show Love”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向你校的英语广播站介绍此次活动。词数80左右。
the school held this activity the environment and offer help to those in need. . .
What students did gave away things. . .
How you felt difficult, meaningful. . .
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Sell Old Things and Show Love
Last week, a volunteer activity with the theme of selling old things and showing love was held in our school to improve students all-round development.
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参考答案
1．（2024·江西南昌·二模）本卷阅读理解部分文章C讲述了现今学校为提升学生午休质量而做出的努力和改变。良好的睡眠对学生的健康和学习都有积极的影响。假如你是张华，最近校英语社正在就“The Importance of Enough Sleep”举行征文活动。请根据表格内容写一篇短文投稿，先谈谈睡眠的重要性，介绍一下你每天的睡眠时间和不能获得充足睡眠的原因，最后就如何改善学生的睡眠提出合理的建议。
写作要点 参考句型
1.Why is it important to have enough sleep It’s important for us to… I often… I plan to…
2.Do you have enough sleep If not, why
3.What can you do to improve your sleep
要求：
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80-120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
The Importance of Enough Sleep
Sleep is very important for our health and learning. When we sleep well,
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I believe by making small changes, we can improve the quality of our sleep and feel better.
【答案】例文1：
The Importance of Enough Sleep
Sleep is very important for our health and learning. When we sleep well, our bodies and minds feel good. We have more energy and can study better during the day. However, if we don’t get enough sleep, it can affect us in many ways.
Personally, I try to get around 8 hours of sleep every night, but sometimes it’s hard. Sometimes I stay up late watching TV or using my phone. Other times, I feel stressed or worried and it’s hard to relax and fall asleep.
To improve my sleep, first I plan to turn off all screens at least an hour before bedtime. This helps my brain to relax and get ready for sleep. I also try to create a calm and comfortable sleep environment in my bedroom.
I believe by making small changes, we can improve the quality of our sleep and feel better.
例文2：
The Importance of Enough Sleep
Sleep is very important for our health and learning. When we sleep well, we will feel energetic and fresh. However, if we don’t get enough sleep, it can affect our health and mind.
Take me as an example, I feel tired and lack of sleep every day. Because homework always takes up too much of my time. Besides, I also spend sometime on my phone at night to have fun.
In order to get enough sleep, I think it is important to plan our time carefully. Since homework is necessary for our study, we need to find ways to finish it efficiently. Second, we need to control the time of using mobile phones and try to keep a balance between study and rest.
I believe by making small changes, we can improve the quality of our sleep and feel better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的如谈谈睡眠的重要性以及介绍自己的睡眠时间及如何改善睡眠的建议等相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，说明睡眠的重要性；
第二步，介绍自己的睡眠时间及不能获得充足睡眠的原因；
第三步，就如何改善学生的睡眠提出合理的建议；
第四步，书写结语，表达“希望通过小改变提高睡眠质量”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关闭
②at least至少
③take sb. as an example以某人为例
④lack of缺少
⑤take up占用
[高分句型]
However, if we don’t get enough sleep, it can affect us in many ways.(if引导条件状语从句)
2．（2024·辽宁抚顺·一模）每个人都是在不断地进步中成长的，相信你也一样。经历了近三年的初中生活，你在哪方面进步了？如何进步的？你的进步感言是什么？请以“My Progress in Middle School”为题，写一写。
要求：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等；
2. 词数80~100。
My Progress in Middle School
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【答案】例文
My Progress in Middle School My three years in middle school have been a journey of growth and improvement. I used to be so shy that I was afraid of speaking in public. Last year, my teacher asked me to sing a song at the school art festival. I was afraid and didn’t want to have a try. But my teacher encouraged me and helped me practice the song again and again. At last, the moment came. Keeping my teacher’s words “Believe in yourself! Everything will go well.” in mind, I went to the stage confidently.
From then on, I have changed a lot and taken an active part in school activities. Just as the saying goes, believing in yourself is the first step on the road to success.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、介绍自己在哪方面取得进步以及如何进步的；
第三步、介绍自己进步感言是什么。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②be afraid of害怕
③have a try试一试
④take an active part in积极参与
[高分句型]
①I used to be so shy that I was afraid of speaking in public. (so…that引导结果状语从句)
3．（2024·江苏南京·二模）某英文报 Kids Voice 栏目正在征稿，请你根据要求用英语写一篇文章投稿， 谈谈你的想法。
Some teenagers have difficulty in finding a true friend. They make friends by following suit (随大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they’re not willing to. Share your ideas about the topic. 1. What do you think about following suit to make friends 2. How can teenagers make true friends Support your ideas with your experience as an example.
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数 80左右。
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【答案】例文
It isn’t wise to follow suit to make friends. Firstly, following suit is against being yourself, which will make you unhappy. Even worse, you might forget who you really are while doing so. Secondly, you may do something terrible to others when following suit, like hurting others’ feelings.
As for how to make true friends, I think being honest and polite is the best policy. Besides, be glad to offer your time and help when others are in need. When my classmate Jack failed his math test, I helped him review the lessons every day. Now, we are best friends. Last but not least, you should develop some hobbies which will help you find friends with similar interests.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总起引出话题；
第二步，讲述模仿他人交友是并不明智的；
第三步，讲述如何交到真正的好朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①Even worse更糟糕的是
②be glad to do sth.很高兴做某事
③help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
④Last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①Firstly, following suit is against being yourself, which will make you unhappy. （which引导非限定性定语从句）
②When my classmate Jack failed his math test, I helped him review the lessons every day. （when引导时间状语从句）
4．（2024·山东东营·三模）你在求学的过程中肯定遇到过很多好老师，你最喜欢哪位呢？请你以The Teacher I Like Best为题，用英语写一篇短文，参加美国杂志Weekly Reader的征文活动。
内容可涉及：他（她）是谁、教什么学科：你喜欢他（她）的原因。可以适当发挥。
要求：1．80-100词；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名及校名，老师姓名统一使用Mr./ Mrs./ Miss XX，例如：Mr. Ma。
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【答案】例文
The Teacher I Like Best
Of all my teachers, I love Mrs. Li best. She taught us English in junior middle school.
She had many ways of making her classes interesting and exciting. She always taught us something new in easy ways. She helped us use English by doing interesting activities, such as, making surveys, playing games, etc. Mrs. Li was a strict but kind teacher. She often asked us to be on time for class and do homework by ourselves. When we had trouble, she often helped us out.
Thanks to Mrs. Li, I started to love English. I love Mrs. Li and her class.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的老师是谁；
第二步，介绍喜欢她的原因；
第三步，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①in easy ways用简单的方法
②such as例如
③be on time按时
④thanks to多亏
[高分句型]
①When we had trouble, she often helped us out.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．（2024·湖北襄阳·二模）当下，全国各地文旅系统都在“发大招”吸引游客，抖音国际版（TikTok）发起了“Tour China in ________”为主题的英文宣传视频征集活动，向世界展示中国。请根据以下征集要求，结合你拍摄的本地风土人情视频，用英文写一篇短文（解说词）。
Notice Hi, friends ! This is Tour China at TikTok! Tourists from around the world get excited to crowd into safe, cultural, friendly China. How are you going to attract them to your place You can tell them about the interesting places, colourful culture, delicious food, or anything special in your hometown. Share with us at TourChina@! TikTok International
要求：
1. 请用你要介绍的地点，将文章标题补充完整；
2. 你的英文解说词里至少包含征集通知中提到的两项（黑体部分）；
3. 词数 80 词左右，文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。
Tour China in ____________
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【答案】例文：
Tour China in Xiangyang
Hello friends, welcome to Xiangyang!
Xiangyang is a beautiful city in China. It has a long history and rich culture. There are many famous attractions in Xiangyang, such as the ancient city wall, Longzhong Scenic Area, and Tangcheng Film and Television City. Xiangyang is also known for its delicious food, such as beef noodles and sesame seed cakes. People in Xiangyang are very friendly and hospitable.
If you have the chance to visit Xiangyang, I’m sure you will definitely have a great time!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据要求补充完整题目，然后介绍这座城市的风土人情等，注意要包含通知里提到的要点，保证条例清晰，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补充完整题目，表示欢迎；
第二步，从历史、景点、美食等方面介绍襄阳；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②be known for因……而出名
③have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
If you have the chance to visit Xiangyang, I’m sure you will definitely have a great time!（条件状语从句；宾语从句）
6．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·二模）“You Ask, We Answer”是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发布了一个关于作业的帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。
You Ask, We Answer
This term we don’t have much homework. But I find that I still spend too much time on it and I stay up almost every day. It makes me really tired. Do you spend a lot of time on your homework Does anyone have some good ways to help me Looking forward to your replies. Miyoko, Japan
要点：
1.回复Miyoko提出的问题；
2.给她一些高效完成作业的建议；
3.告诉她良好睡眠的重要性。
注意：
1.要点齐全，适当拓展；
2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
4.100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hi, Miyoko. I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset about your homework.
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【答案】例文
Hi, Miyoko. I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset about your homework. I used to have the same problem as you. But now I often finish my homework in an hour. Here’s some advice for you.
First, listen carefully in class. The homework usually practices what you have learned in class. If you can’t understand what your teachers say in class, you will find it hard to finish your homework. Second, you need to manage your time wisely. For example, you can start your homework early. Third, try to find some good learning methods, like breaking tasks down into smaller parts.
Remember, good sleep is helpful to your health and it can make you full of energy and study well the next day. So, better not stay up too late.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Wish you a successful term!
Li Hua, China
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给原帖和要求完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，回复Miyoko提出的问题；
第二步，给她一些高效完成作业的建议，告诉她良好睡眠的重要性；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used to曾经
②practice练习
③wisely明智地
④break…down将……分成若干部分
⑤stay up熬夜
[高分句型]
If you can’t understand what your teachers say in class, you will find it hard to finish your homework.(if引导条件状语从句；what引导宾语从句)
7．（2024·江苏盐城·三模）在生活的长河中，每个人都是一名独特的航行者，追寻着属于自己的梦想和荣光。在这段旅程中，我们经历了无数的挑战和困难，也收获了无数的欢笑和泪水。其中，总会有一件事情，让我们深感骄傲与自豪。校报英语编辑部正开展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题的征文活动。请你结合提示中的问题写一篇短文投稿。
注意事项: （1）词数100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that
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【答案】例文
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that I visited some old people to make them happy.
It was on a fine autumn afternoon when I was still a teenager. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently under a tall tree in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely. I went to have a chat with her. After our short conversation, I got to know that all the old women’s sons and daughters were far away from her, making their lives in big cities and she felt lonely. I felt sympathetic for her, and I realized that there were actually many old people like her in the village. So a good idea occurred to me suddenly.
I gathered my friends, and organized them to visit these old people one by one. We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy. One of them was so moved that tears fell down. Caring for those around us and passing our happiness to others are what we have learnt that day. I made it, and I feel really proud of myself that I gave comfort to those who needed most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己引以为傲的事情；
第二步，介绍事情发生的时间以及自己做了什么；
第三步，介绍自己以此为傲的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①notice注意
②get to know了解
③sympathetic同情的
④occur to被想起
⑤feel proud of感到自豪
[高分句型]
One of them was so moved that tears fell down.(so…that引导结果状语从句)
8．（2024·浙江宁波·三模）作为中学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。
校英语报邀你写一篇短文，给考试焦虑的同学们提一些建议。请你结合自己的学习经历阐述你的观点，结合以下要点，以”How to Deal with the Exam Stress”为题写一篇短文。
Reasons Be afraid to fail the exam
*
Advice Prepare hard
Sleep well before the exam
*
注意：
(1)短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3)词数：80—100。
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【答案】例文
How to Deal with the Exam Stress
As we all know, students are in the face of many exams every school day. Naturally, because of being afraid to fail the exam and let our parents and teachers down, we may have the exam stress. Too much stress will make us feel tired.
Here I want to share some advice with you on how to use proper ways to deal with the stress. To begin with, preparing hard for the tests is a good choice for us, which can build our confidence and release our body. Besides, we are supposed to sleep well before the exam so that we can have enough time to relax. Last but not least, we are able to do something enjoyable like listening to the music or walking in the park.
To sum up, we’d better plan and prepare everything well to deal with stress. Only in this way, we can make a progress in grades and be mentally healthy at the same time!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，即结合自己的学习经历阐述如何处理考试焦虑，给同学们提一些建议，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，学生学习压力大，考试焦虑现象较严重；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，作者结合自己的学习经历阐述考试焦虑的观点，以及处理焦虑的一些建议；
第三步，书写结语。最好做好计划和准备，以应对压力。只有这样，才能在成绩上取得进步，同时也能保持心理健康。
[亮点词汇]
①to begin with 首先
②last but not least 最后但同样重要的一点
③sum up 总之
[高分句型]
Besides, we are supposed to sleep well before the exam so that we can have enough time to relax.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
9．（2024·黑龙江绥化·二模）良好的习惯成就美好的未来。作为青少年，如何培养良好的习惯呢？请根据以下内容提示以“How to Develop Good Habits”为题写一篇英语短文。
内容提示：(1)上课认真听讲，做笔记；
(2)每天按时完成作业；
(3)闲暇时多读课外书籍；
(4)每周锻炼3至4次；
(5)多吃蔬菜、水果，少吃不健康食品；
(6)补充一至两点良好的习惯，并谈谈它们对身心健康的影响。
要求：(1)根据表格内容，适当发挥；
(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
(3)文章中不得出现任何真实信息；(姓名、校名和地名等)
(4)词数不得少于80词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
How to Develop Good Habits
It’s very important for us to have good habits.
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【答案】例文：
How to Develop Good Habits
It’s very important for us to have good habits.
As teenagers, what should we do In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes when necessary. It is a good habit to finish schoolwork on time every day. In our spare time, we had better read some books to get more knowledge.
Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less unhealthy food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise three or four times a week.
What’s more, we should go to bed early to get enough sleep. We had better not stay up too late. We should always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing. It’s healthy for our mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：文章包括所有要点，并进行适当补充，注意行文连贯，无语法错误。
[写作步骤]
①在学习方面养成好习惯，认真听讲、按时完成作业等；
②保持健康方面的好习惯，健康饮食、多锻炼；
③生活方面的好习惯，早睡早起、勤洗手等。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion 在我看来
②on time 准时
③had better 最好
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes when necessary. （省略主谓的状语从句）
②It’s necessary for us to take exercise three or four times a week.（it作形式宾语）
10．（2024·福建福州·三模）为了促进学生全面发展，你校开展了以“帮助他人，共创美好生活”为主题的活动。 假定你是李华，请你根据以下提示，以“Sell Old Things and Show Love”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向你校的英语广播站介绍此次活动。词数80左右。
the school held this activity the environment and offer help to those in need. . .
What students did gave away things. . .
How you felt difficult, meaningful. . .
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Sell Old Things and Show Love
Last week, a volunteer activity with the theme of selling old things and showing love was held in our school to improve students all-round development.
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【答案】例文
Sell Old Things and Show Love Last week, a volunteer activity with the theme of selling old things and showing love was held in our school to improve students all-round development. The purpose of this activity is to improve environment and offer help to those in need. Students prepared many things which were made by hand in their spare time, such as kites, model planes and soon. Many students and teachers came to take part in it. Everyone chose their favorite items and paid for them at a much lower price. We sent the money to the community to help children who couldn’t attend school and the seniors who needed better care.
Though it was difficult, I felt very happy. Because it is meaningful to help others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动的背景和目的；
第二步，介绍活动的流程；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①purpose目的
②prepare准备
③take part in参加
④pay for支付
⑤attend school上学
[高分句型]
Students prepared many things which were made by hand in their spare time, such as kites, model planes and soon.(which引导定语从句)