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Unit 7 What’s the highest mountain in the world
人教新目标版 八年级下
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1.学习和巩固词汇短语句型:wale; oil; protection; huge; water pollution; be protected等；
2.获取鲸鱼的基本知识及其生存现状；就如何保护鲸鱼书写一篇说明文;能根据提示书写濒危动物的文章。
3.通过对濒危动物现状的了解,进一步増强保护动物,保护自然环境的意识。
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They are huge .
They live in the sea.
They can sing songs.
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They can jump high out of water.
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Some of them are very clever and also very friendly.
whale
adj. 巨大的；极多的
Guess an animal
Warming-up
鲸的体型是世界上存在的动物中最大的，它是终生生活在水中的哺乳动物，对水的依赖程度很大。鲸形状像鱼，鼻孔在头的上部，用肺呼吸。它体长可达三十米，是现在世界上最大的动物。鲸为适应水中生活，减少阻力，它们的后肢消失，前肢变成划水的浆板。身体成为流线型，酷似鱼。因而它们的潜水能力很强，小型齿鲸可潜至100-300米的水深处，停留4-5分钟，长须鲸可在水下300-500米处待上1小时，最大的齿鲸——抹香鲸能潜至千米以下，并在水中持续2小时之久。
虎鲸
座头鲸
habitat
It lives
_______________.
Something about whales
appearance
It’s_________.
huge
in the sea
food
It eats___________
______________.
small fish
and other sea life
ability
It can_______________
____________________.
jump out of the
water and sing songs
Brainstorm
Why are they in danger
Humans catch whales for meat, fat and oil.
n. 油；食用油；石油
Why are they in danger
People use them to make things like candles and soap.
Water pollution becomes more and more serious.
How can we save them
The government should make more laws and rules on whale protection.
It’s a good idea to learn more about whales.
We must stop putting rubbish into seas.
We could make posters to let more people know about the whales’ situation.
n. 保护；保卫
Humans catch whales for meat, Live in the sea
fat and oil Some kinds have teeth
Eat small fish and other sea life Learn more about whales
Jump high out of the water Stop putting rubbish into the sea
Rules on whale protection Sing songs
Huge Whale parts sold to make things
Water pollution like candles and soap
Read the following words and phrases about whales. Put them in the correct place in the chart.
3a
n. 油；食用油；石油
n. 保护；保卫
adj. 巨大的；极多的
What do they look like (appearance)
Where do they live (home)
What do they eat (food)
What can they do (abilities)
Why do some of them have to be protected (reasons)
How can we protect them (ways)
1. Humans catch whales for
meat,fat and oil
2. Eat small fish and other sea life
3. Jump high out of the water
4. Rules on whale protection
5. Huge
6. Water pollution
7. Live in the sea
8. Some kinds have teeth
9. Learn more about whales
10. Stop putting rubbish into the sea
11. Sing songs
12. Whale parts sold to make
things likes candles and soap
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3,11
1,6,12
4,9,10
It’s time to save whales!
Whales are … They live in … They eat … They can … One interesting fact is … Another interesting fact is … Some kinds of whales are in danger because …
We should protect whales from …
I think people should / shouldn’t …
Write a paragraph about whales and why they need to be protected. Use the information in 3a. Then make a poster.
3b
审题
体裁
人称
时态
说明文
第一人称
一般现在时
第三人称
facts
reasons
ways
Whales are… They live in… They eat… They can…
One interesting fact is… Another interesting fact is…
However,Some kinds of whales are in danger, because …
We should protect whales from …
I think we should / shouldn’t …
Whales are huge animals.
Some of them have teeth.
They live in the sea.
They eat small fish and other sea life.
They can jump high out of the water.
They can sing songs.
Facts
Facts
Whales are huge animals _______some of them have teeth.
They live in the sea_______eat small fish and other sea life.
_____________________ that they can jump high out of the water. _________________________that they can sing songs.
Polish
Whales are… They live in… They eat… They can…One interesting fact is… Another interesting fact is…
word bank
and
and
One interesting fact is
Another interesting fact is
Humans catch whales for meat, fat and oil;
Water pollution becomes more and more serious .
People sell whale parts to make things like candles and soap.
Reasons
___________________________________,_______humans catch whales for meat, fat and oil.________,water pollution becomes more and more serious.____________,people sell whale parts to make things like candles and soap.
Reasons
Polish
However, some kinds of whales are in danger ,because…
word bank
However, some kinds of whales are in danger
because
Besides
What’s worse
Ways
The government should make rules on whale protection.
It’s important for us to learn more about whales.
We must stop putting rubbish into the sea.
表建议句型多样化
Polish
We should protect whales from …
I think we should / shouldn’t …
word bank
_________________________________.___________,the government should make rules on whale protection.________,
It’s important for us to learn more about whales._____________,
we must stop putting rubbish into the sea.
.
We should protect whales from now on
Second
Last but not least
Ways
First of all
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3
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How to polish the article
linking words
good sentence
patterns
good structure
paragraph cohesion（衔接）
Whales are huge animals and some of them have teeth. They live in the sea and eat small fish and other sea life.One interesting fact is that they can jump high out of the water. Another interesting fact is that they can sing songs.
However, Some kinds of whales are in danger ,because humans catch whales for meat, fat and oil.Besides,water pollution becomes more and more serious.What’s worse,people sell whale parts to make things like candles and soap.
We should protect whales from now on. First of all,the government should make rules on whale protection.Second,It’s important for us to learn more about whales.Last but not least,we must stop putting rubbish into the sea.
Do you think the ending is powerful
Add a slogan（口号）
Let's do it now !
As students, we should start
from ourselves.
Don't wait. Join us now !
Save animals! Save Ourselves !
Let’s take action right now!
话题分析
学会写保护动物及大自然的文章。可以利用本单元学到的知识来介绍一种或几种珍稀野生动物的现状，并谈谈如何保护他们。
写作时注意正确使用比较级和最高级。
熊猫是我国的国宝，长相憨厚可爱，深受全世界人民喜爱。但其数量却很少，请你谈谈我们应该如何保护熊猫，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文。
要求：参考所学句型，可适当发挥；语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
【It’s time to write】
Pandas are known as the
national treasure of China.
They live in the forest. They eat bamboo. They can swim and climb trees. They are very cute. In fact, many people around the world love these black and white animals. Pandas have become so popular that they are now a symbol of China.
An example:
However, they are still endangered. Many years ago, there were a lot more bamboo
forests and pandas in China, but then humans started to cut down these forests. As the forests get smaller and other human activities cause more problems, pandas cannot find enough to eat and they are having fewer babies.
How to protect pandas
To protect pandas, I think we should have more education programs to teach children about pandas. We’d better tell more people about the importance of saving pandas.
How to protect pandas
And the Chinese government is trying hard to help save the pandas. Scientists are doing research to better understand the habits of pandas. We all hope that in the future there will be a lot more pandas.
项目 标准 自我 评价 同伴 评价 教师
评价
结构（3分） 段落合理（2分）
衔接自然 ( 1分)
内容（8分） 要 点 齐全 简单介绍（2分）
处境现状（3分） 保护方式 ( 3分)
语言（3分） 词汇丰富 (1 分)
句法正确，语言优美 ( 2分)
卷面（1分） 书写工整（ 1分）
注意使用修改字符： 优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；去掉：／
Peer-editing
1 Complete the chart.
Self Check
Adjectives Comparatives Superlatives
high
dangerous
long
popular
higher
highest
more dangerous
most dangerous
longer
longest
more popular
most popular
2 Match verbs and objects. Then add one more object to each list.
Verbs Objects
1. reach a. my life, my money, ...
2. achieve b. the top of a mountain, the library, ...
3. risk c. my dream, success, …
the school
my goal
my health
3 Circle the correct word and/or fill in the blank with
the correct from of the word in brackets for each sentence.
1. An elephant weighs ( few / many ) times more
than a dog.
many times 很多倍
2. An adult panda can eat ( much / a little ) more
than a cat.
much more 多得多
3. Canada is a (little / lot) less __________ (crowded) than China.
crowded
a little less 少一点 a lot less 少很多
4. A tiger is ( much / a little ) _________ (strong) than a man.
stronger
书面表达
10月4日是世界动物日，你校组织以“I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以李明的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己，内容如下：
品质 善良，善待动物
爱好 ……（至少两点）
事迹 为Save China’s Tigers筹款……（至少一点）
感悟 动物是人类的朋友；保护动物就是保护我们自己
打算 ……（至少两点）
Homework
要求：1. 词数100左右；
2. 所写短文必须包括表格中的内容，自由发挥的内容必须
围绕主题。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
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