13 七大故事类型解密-2025年高考英语读后续写提分技巧与训练（含答案）

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读后续写
七大情节模型
探索未知、成长蜕变、情感纠葛、道德抉择、逆境反击、追寻梦想、自我救赎，这些情节模型如同人生的缩影，深刻揭示了人性的复杂与多样。每个故事都是一面镜子，映照出我们内心深处的渴望与挣扎，引领我们在跌宕起伏的情节中，找到共鸣与启迪。
在读后续写的艺术中，巧妙运用这些情节模型，能够让故事更加引人入胜，触动人心。
一、读后续写的关键技巧
（一）深入剖析材料
在续写之前，要对给定材料进行全面分析。首先梳理人物关系，明确角色之间的关联；接着找准情节发展的开端与高潮，把握故事的基本走向。最重要的是抓住矛盾点，不同的矛盾会引导情节朝不同方向发展，这是续写的核心线索。
（二）巧妙规划写作顺序
写作顺序对续写至关重要。先确定结局，为故事发展定好方向。再看第二段首句，它决定了第一段的内容。如果第二段首句是关于解决问题后的情节，那第一段就着重写问题解决的过程；要是提到到达终点后的情景，第一段便主要描述比赛等过程。最后依据第一段首句来展开，若首句是“某人说”，就续写说话内容；若是“某人做”，则续写其行为。
（三）常用的情节设计公式
“困难升级与克服困难式”是续写情节设计的常用公式。先是障碍出现，让矛盾升级，在解决问题过程中设置阻碍；接着是试图解决障碍，可能得到他人或动物的帮助，或者凭借自身智慧，又或是运气使然；成功克服障碍后，进行感谢与感悟，升华主题。
二、读后续写七大情节模型
（一）各种危险类
这类矛盾主要源于动物或环境带来的危险，占比23%。情节通常从危险刻画开始，展现主人公的无助，接着出现反转，找到解决方案，最终解决问题。主题常围绕亲情、友情、爱情和互助之情展开。例如，夫妻野营时妻子走失，天色渐暗且无食物，续写部分可设计妻子摔伤、环境恶劣、饥饿难耐，昏睡过去后醒来，沿着河流找路，最后看到丈夫身影。
（二）过程艰难类
为达成目标的过程中存在各种障碍，像帮助他人、筹钱、找人找物等过程都可能遇到困难，占比38%。情节从过程描述入手，设置小障碍，解决后实现目标。比如小孩子参加马术比赛，马又矮又丑还内八字遭嘲笑，续写部分可以是孩子鼓起勇气，经历激烈比赛，最终赢得掌声；还有父子多年未见，儿子找父亲时发现父亲不在，通过网络求助，在网友帮助下最终团聚。
（三）各种误会类
误会发生在陌生人、朋友、爱人、亲人之间，占比11%。解决方式有解释误会或一方不计前嫌。情节走向一是解释误会，然后过渡醒悟、语言道歉、行为弥补；二是一方遇到困难无助时，另一方伸出援手，引发悔悟。例如，主人公嘲笑朋友送的礼物，朋友愤怒跑出去，主人公追出去解释，最终误会解除；朋友嘲笑主人公胆小，后来朋友掉河里，主人公将其救起，两人重归于好。
（四）情绪低落类
因亲情、友情、爱情不如意而情绪低落，占比8%。解决方案通常是得到陌生人、朋友、爱人或家人的理解与帮助。情节从心情低落开始，通过细节展现糟糕心情，然后反转，获得帮助解决问题。比如主人公常年出差，孩子对其陌生，圣诞节送礼物孩子以为是圣诞老人送的，续写部分可以是主人公心情低落，妻子安慰，带他去圣诞树旁，孩子写纸条表明知道礼物是父亲送的。
（五）野外困难类
在野外遇到设备损坏、身体不适、迷路等问题，占比8%。一般需要他人帮助来解决。情节是遇到陌生人，描述其形象，通过交谈请求帮助，对方提供帮助解决问题，主题升华到陌生人的善良、热情。例如两人野外车陷坑且下大雨，遇到一个小伙子，小伙子健壮且会英语，在其帮助下车的问题得以解决。
（六）自我矛盾与反思类
对教育方式、人生观、自我行为等进行反思，占比3%。解决方法是受到他人启示或自我反思。情节走向一是情绪低落时看到他人遇到类似事情想开了；二是全程自我反思。比如主人公呵斥伸手接糖果的小孙子后，反思自己行为，鼓励孙子向 前台道谢。
（七）自我抉择类
在理性与感性、欲望与情感之间进行抉择，占比5%。通过自我挣扎做出正确选择。情节着重内心挣扎的心理刻画，最后理性战胜感性或情感战胜欲望，做出正确选择，往往还能有意想不到的收获。例如小女孩在喜欢的项链和父亲之间挣扎，最后把项链给了父亲，父亲回赠一串真珍珠项链。
三、特殊情况应对策略
要是遇到不在上述分类范围内的文章，首先抓住文章主要矛盾；续写首段开篇让矛盾升级，中间解决矛盾；续写第二段实现大团圆结局，并呼应材料开篇的问题。
掌握了这些读后续写的方法和情节模型，这个暑假就赶紧练起来吧！相信同学们的写作水平会有质的飞跃，在考试中取得优异成绩！
模拟演练
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之成为一篇完整的短文。
On a Friday evening in December, two weeks before Christmas, I lost my job. I hadn’t seen it coming. I was excited for the weekend, when my daughter, Kristil, then 12, and I planned to get our Christmas tree. Then I listened to my voicemail: “We’ re sorry but your work assignment has ended as of today. ” My heart sank. I wasn’t just a single parent; I was the only parent. My paycheck was survival. The next day as we searched for our tree, I struggled to be cheerful as I eyed each price tag. “Is everything OK ” Kristil asked. “You seem worried.” “I got some bad news yesterday. I lost my job”, I told her. “Oh no,” Kristil said. “Well, I have $50 from Grandma, and I can give you.” Absolutely not,” I told her. Monday morning, I dropped Kristil at school and set off on my moneymaking pursuits. I sold a precious cup at an antique store, washed dishes in a restaurant and ended the day $120 richer. Over the next week, I furiously applied for jobs as my bank account became smaller. I felt as if the world was closing in on me. On a weekend afternoon, I dropped Kristil in a wealthy gated community for a birthday party. I watched as she went in, surrounded by all the nice things we couldn’t afford. I drove home defeated. Back at home, I glanced out the window. It had been snowing on and of all morning. I noticed a thin woman with short white hair struggling to open her car door against the wind. As she got out, I realized it was my old professor, Sister Esther Heffernan whom I hadn’t seen since we’d met for lunch three months ago. It soon dragged me to the cherished days when I first met Sister Esther 10 years ago as her student at Edgewood College in Madison, Wisconsin. Sister Esther was understanding, loving and patient. Even after I graduated, Sister Esther kept in touch. I had grown to love her like family.
注意：
1．续写词数应为 150 词左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I rushed to the front of my building.
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As she left, I opened the Christmas card and an envelope fell.
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I rushed to the front of my building. “What are you doing out in this weather ” I asked as we hugged. “I tried to call but couldn't get through, so I thought I would come by,” Sister Esther said. “I have a couple of gifts for you and Kristil.” I made her a cup of tea, and we talked. As she got up to leave, she handed me a Christmas card. “This is for you,” she said as she kissed me on the cheek. I walked her to her car and waved as she pulled away.
As she left, I opened the Christmas card and an envelope fell. As I opened it, I saw there was money inside. I gasped in shock. Hundred-dollar bills poured onto the table. Tears of gratitude puddled in my eyes as I counted the money. Sister Esther had given me $1,000. I silently thanked Sister Esther in my heart. It has been 13 years since that Christmas, but I have never forgotten what Sister Esther did for us.
【导语】本文以故事发展线索展开，讲述了作者——一名单身妈妈，打算买圣诞树过节时得到了自己失业的消息，作者只能假装平静，女儿看出了作者脸上写满的担忧，想把奶奶给她的50美元给作者。即使作者把珍贵的杯子卖掉了，还去洗盘子赚钱，仍然买不起女儿去参加富裕的生日派对上出售的昂贵物品。生活越来越拮据，在一个下雪的冬日早晨，作者望着窗外，意外看到了十年前的大学老师Esther。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我冲到我的大楼前面。”可知，第一段描述我出去迎接老师进屋，并和她寒暄，然后送老师离开。
②由第二弹首句内容“她走的时候，我打开圣诞卡，一个信封掉了下来。”可知，Esther老师走的时候给我留下了一个信封，里面是帮助我度过困难时期的钱。
2．续写线索：
出门迎接Esther老师——请老师进屋——寒暄——老师离开前留下贺卡和信封——打开信封发现钱——心怀感激。
3．词汇激活：
行为类：
①顺便到访come by/stop by/drop by
②离开leave/set off
情绪类：
①感激：gratitude/aprreciation
②震惊的：stunned/shocked
【点睛】[高分句型1] “This is for you,” she said as she kissed me on the cheek.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句和“动词+sb.+介词+the+身体部位”的固定结构）
[高分句型2]It has been 13 years since that Christmas, but I have never forgotten what Sister Esther did for us.（运用了“It has been+时间段+since”固定句型，but后的分句中运用了what引导的宾语从句）
模拟演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Chintu and Banti were two good friends in India. Banti was a very honest boy, but Chintu was not. Once they decided to enjoy their summer holidays together. They went out to a hill station for a week. Both enjoyed their stay at the hill station. After seven days, they planned to return. As soon as they reached the station, they found a bag lying at the station platform .
Chintu noticed it first and picked it up. He opened it and saw a lot of cash and jewelry in it. Chintu tried to hide it in his suitcase. But Banti suggested, “Chintu, we are honest people. We should not keep it with us. Somebody must have lost it and we should ask the people at the station. If someone is able to tell what is inside it, we shall hand over the bag to him or her. Listen to my advice, or you will pay for your foolishness in the end.”
“No, no, you are a fool. Everybody will come to say this is his own bag. I have found it, so this is mine,” Chintu said.
Banti said, “What are you saying Even if you do not want to give it to the real owner, we should divide it into two parts. Both of us have found it, and we have shared every moment, every food, and every joy here together. Therefore, we should divide the cash and jewelry also into two parts.”
“I don’t agree with you. I saw it first, so it is mine.” Saying so, Chintu put the bag into his suitcase. Meanwhile the train was pulling into the station. Chintu and Banti boarded the train. As soon as they took their seats, they began talking with each other. When the night fell, they began feeling sleepy.
After some time the train stopped at a station. Suddenly they saw a few policemen entering their compartment ( 隔间). Chintu was frightened to see them, and he tried to put his suitcase behind his back. Chintu spoke to Banti in a very low voice, quite nervous, “We are in great trouble. The police have come. They will arrest (逮捕) us and send us to prison. You know, we have not stolen the bag.”
注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右。
2．按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Banti said in a low voice, too. “Why do you say’us’ instead of ‘me’
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The policemen saw Chintu’s anxious look obviously.
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Banti said in a low voice, too. “Why do you say’us’ instead of ‘me’ I have nothing to do with the bag. You hid the bag. You did not listen to me to find the owner and hand over the bag to him. Far from handing it over to the real owner, you even refused to share it with me. Now when you feel that you are going to get into trouble, you want to share the unpleasantness with me. See how smart you are!” Chintu just wanted to say something when he found the policemen stood beside them.
The policemen saw Chintu’s nervous look obviously. They thought he must have done something bad. So they searched him and his suitcase very carefully and finally found the bag. This was just the bag they had been searching for hours. They arrested him and sent him to prison immediately. At that very moment Chintu felt quite sorry for what he had done. He should have listened to his friend’s advice and should not have kept the bag, but it was too late. He finally paid for his foolishness.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了钦图和班蒂是印度的两个好朋友。班蒂是一个非常诚实的孩子，但钦图不是。有一次他们决定一起享受暑假。他们到一个山上的车站去住了一个星期。两人在山上车站过得都很愉快。七天后，他们计划返回。他们一到车站，就发现站台上有一个袋子。结果两人因为如何处置这个袋子发生了分歧。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“班蒂也低声说。‘你为什么说‘我们’而不是‘我’？’”可知，第一段可描写班蒂是如何拒绝钦图的提议的。
②由第二段首句内容“警察明显看到了钦图紧张的表情。”可知，第二段可描写钦图被警察发现并最终被捕的经过。
2．续写线索：班蒂拒绝——班蒂说明原因——警察发现异常——钦图被捕——钦图后悔
3．词汇激活
行为类
递交：hand over/turn in
认为：think/believe
发现：find/discover
情绪类
不愉快：unpleasantness / displeasure
聪明：smart /clever
【点睛】[高分句型1] Far from handing it over to the real owner, you even refused to share it with me. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Now when you feel that you are going to get into trouble, you want to share the unpleasantness with me. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
模拟演练
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last Saturday, David was taking a walk in the park near his home when he noticed a woman with a boy of about eight years old. When David passed them, he heard the woman yell. “How stupid you are! You’re good at nothing.” David stopped and looked at the little boy. The boy said nothing. He just stood there, looking upset.
David was reminded of his English teacher Mrs Brown in middle school. After he entered a middle school, David lacked self-confidence because he was often made fun of by others. He was often told that he was good at nothing, which David behaved. But one day it all changed.
One day, in an English writing class, Mrs Brown asked them to read a novel. They were asked to write a new chapter of the novel after they finished reading it. A few days later, David handed in his story. He didn’t give it much thought. But the next day, to his surprise, the comment “well done” from Mrs Brown came into view the moment he turned to the page where the story was written. When David read that, he almost burst into tears. He never expected to be praised one day. He suddenly gained some self-confidence.
That day after he returned home, he wrote a short story and gave it to Mrs Brown the next morning. And again he was praised. David became very interested in writing. He often wrote short stories and asked Mrs Brown to read them and correct them for him. Mrs Brown always corrected the mistakes he had made and gave him good advice to improve writing skills. One year later, David joined the school newspaper and became an editor of it. He was no longer that boy who lacked self-confidence. He gained his confidence, and was hopeful about his future.
He succeeded in entering a college and kept writing. Several years after graduating from college, he had his first book published. With some more books coming out, he became famous as a writer in his country. And he owed his success to Mrs Brown’s encouragement. Without her encouragement, his life might be very different now.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
Inspired by his own life story, David decided to do something for that boy.
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The mother was ashamed when she heard that.
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Inspired by his own life story, David decided to do something for that boy. He went to the woman who immediately recognized him, because she had read his books and seen his pictures. The woman greeted David warmly. David started to chat with her. He told her about the encouragement he once got from Mrs Brown. In the end, he said, “I couldn’t have become a writer if I had believed I was good at nothing.” Then he looked at the woman seriously.
The mother was ashamed when she heard that. She realized that she shouldn’t have called her son stupid, which would make him lose confidence. So she said, “Thank you for your advice. I’ll never say such things to him again. Instead, I’ll find out what he’s good at and encourage him.” The woman then left with the boy. Looking at the back of the boy, David felt happy, hoping his action could make some difference to the boy.
【导语】本文讲述了主人公大卫偶遇一个女人在训斥一名八岁左右的男孩，说男孩什么都不擅长，这让大卫回想起了自己的经历。他在中学时缺乏自信，经常被别人取笑，人们说他什么都不擅长，但他的英语老师布朗夫人却表扬他的文章写得好，这给了他自信。他对写作很感兴趣，凭借自己的努力，他加入了校报，成为校报的编辑，进入大学后，他继续写作，并成为了一名成功的作家，他的亲身经历让他决定帮助这个男孩。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“受到自己生活故事的启发，大卫决定为那个男孩做点什么。”可知，第一段可描写大卫是如何帮助那个男孩的。
②由第二段首句内容“母亲听到后感到羞愧。”可知，第二段可描写听了大卫的话后，母亲的感悟。
2．续写线索：与女人打招呼——告诉女人自己的经历——女人的感受——女人态度的转变——大卫的感受
3．词汇激活
行为类
①.开始做某事：start to do sth./begin to do sth.
②.相信：believe/trust
③.为……而感谢：thank you for…/thanks for…
情绪类
①.热情地：warmly/passionately
②.高兴的：happy/pleased
【点睛】[高分句型1]. She realized that she shouldn’t have called her son stupid, which would make him lose confidence. （由that引导的宾语从句作realized的宾语和由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]. Instead, I’ll find out what he’s good at and encourage him.（由what引导的宾语从句作find out的宾语）
模拟演练
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sista raced ahead,the sea breeze streaming against her face. Rafi finally caught up and thenthey rested in the shade.
I’m hungry. I know where there’s a great apple tree.” Sista said, “It belongs to an oldlady called Susan who lives in the little house by the hill. I heard she’s stubborn,but that sometimes she gives fruit in return for an errand(跑腿).”
“Let’s go,” Rafi said. They crossed a stream by hopping from rock to rock. Finally,upon ahilltop,they saw a splendid apple tree with bright red fruits.
A small farmhouse stood at the bottom of the hill. Rafi’s heart pounded as Sista knocked onthe door. An elderly woman answered.
“Yes ” the lady asked, staring at the girls.
“We heard ...“ said Sista, her voice shaky, “that we could run an errand for you in exchangefor apples.”
Susan raised one eyebrow. “Ah, yes. ” She clicked her tongue. “Nothing is free, eh ”
She led the girls into the kitchen. When passing the living room, Sista found that the wallwas decorated with colourful crayon drawings, which seem to be children’s. She wondered whodrew these since Susan was alone,with no grandchildren,even no families or relatives. The ladygrabbed two baskets, one large and one small, and pushed them into the girls hands. “Go fill these with e right back.”
The girls raced up the hill to the tree, climbed the branches, and picked the ripest apples.After filling the baskets, they returned to the house.
Susan filled a bag with rice and dried beans, and then she handed it to Sista.“Take this bagand the large basket of apples to the Gomez family. Do you know them ”
The girls nodded. Sista had heard that Mr. Gomez has been sick in bed for a long time andMrs.Gomez has to raise three little kids.
“Good.And ask them for the payment," Susan added with a tight smile.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The girls hit the road.
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When Susan opened the envelope, the girls saw the payment!
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The girls hit the road. All the way, they wrestled with the bag and the large basket of apples. “What a heavy basket!” , they complained. Finally, they arrived at the Gomez home, sweating like a pig. Mrs. Gomez answered the door. The girls held up the food and said, “This is from Susan.” Mrs. Gomez replied, “Thank you.” Rafi looked down. “She said to ask you for the payment, too.” Mrs. Gomez handed Sista a large sealed envelope stuffed very full. Back at the farmhouse, the girls immediately handed Susan the envelope.
When Susan opened the envelope, the girls saw the payment. “Beautiful!” She began pinning the payment-crayon drawings to the wall. Rafi and Sista broke out in smiles, now knowing that what Susan had done was actually not a deal but a favor for the family. After Susan finished, she joined the girls again. “Andhere’s your payment,” she said, handing the small basket of apples to the girls. As they walked home, Rafi and Sista enjoyed their treat. The juice was as sweet and warm as the feeling they had inside.
【导语】本文是以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了 Sista和Rafi去一个叫Susan的老太太家，想要用差事来换取苹果，后来Susan老太太就让两个小女孩去苹果树摘了两袋苹果，并让她们把苹果和一袋大米和豆子送去戈麦斯家里去，而后故事由此展开。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“女孩们上路了。”可知，第一段可描写Sista和Rafi是如何带着两袋苹果和一袋大米和豆子去往戈麦斯家，并按照Susan的要求获取报酬的。
②由第二段首句内容“当苏珊打开信封时，女孩们看到了报酬。”可知，第二段可就信封的内容实际上就是那一幅幅孩子们的画来展开，Sista和Rafi最后也得到了她们想要的苹果。
2．续写线索：女孩们扛着两袋苹果和一袋大米豆子前往戈麦斯家——戈麦斯夫人表示谢意并给出信封作为报酬——苏珊打开信封——将蜡笔画钉在墙上——苏珊给Sista和Rafi一袋苹果作为报酬——回家的路上内心觉得甜美温暖。
3．词汇激活
行为类
①.举起：hold up / lift up/ raise up
②.到达：arrive/ reach/ get to
③.递给：hand / pass/ deliver
情绪类
①.突然露出笑容：break out in smiles/ burst out laughing/ burst into laughters
②.甜蜜的：sweet/ honey/treacly
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Rafi and Sista broke out in smiles, now knowing that what Susan had done was actually not a deal but a favor for the family.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和what引导的主语从句）
[高分句型2]. As they walked home, Rafi and Sista enjoyed their treat.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句）
模拟演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Tom and his friend were walking to work. They were talking about the big football match.
“Are you going to see the match ” Tom’s friend asked him.
“No, I must go to work.” Tom said. Tom worked in the office of Mr. Bates. When Tom got to the office a letter was waiting for him. He opened it. “Dear Tom,” the letter began. “I’m writing to thank you for all your help, sending a ticket for the big match. I cannot go to the match because I am ill. I shall see it on TV. You can go to the match with my ticket.”
Tom looked at the ticket. He could not believe that he had it. A ticket for the big match!
He looked at the ticket again. “I must go to the match,” he thought. “I must. But how can I go How can I get out of the office I can’t tell Mr. Bates that I’m ill. He will know what I’m doing. He’ll know I’m trying to get out of the office and go to the big match.”
Tom thought and thought. He could not do any work. Then, at twelve o’clock, he knew what to do. He stood up and walked to a telephone at the end of the street. He spoke to his sister. Jean. “Jean, this is Tom,” he said. “I want you to make a telephone call to my office. Ask to speak to Mr. Bates. Tell him you are speaking from a doctor’s office. Tell him that my mother is ill.” He put down the telephone and went back to the office.
At one o’clock, Mr. Bates came up to him. “I have had bad news for you, Tom.” he said. “Your mother is ill. The doctor telephoned. You must go to her.” “Thank you,” Tom said. “I’ll go now. I’ll come back as soon as I can.” He left the office quickly for the football ground. The big match did not start until three but the ground was nearly full. But Tom’s ticket was a good one. He could stand near the front. The football match was very good. Many people saw the match on TV. People at home could see everything in the football ground.
(1)所续短文词数应为150词左右;
(2)续写部分分为两段，每段开头已为你写好;
Paragraph 1:
The next morning, when Tom walked into the office, Mr. Bates came up to him.
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Turning around, Tom saw a new television on the wall.
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The next morning, when Tom walked into the office, Mr. Bates came up to him. Confident that no one knew his little trick, Tom greeted Mr. Bates as usual. “How is your mother ” Mr. Bates asked. There was something awful in his voice, but Tom try to keep calm. “Oh, she is a little better. Thank you.” Tom said, trying to hide his anxiety. “Go home.” Mr. Bates said, “Don’t come to this office again. Hearing the words, Tom was confused, unable to figure out why. Without saying anything, Mr. Bates pointed to the wall behind him.
Turning around, Tom saw a new television on the wall. “You had a very good ticket, didn’t you You were right in front of all the people, weren’t you ” asked Mr. Bates, coldly. His words sent a chill down Tom’s spine. It suddenly dawned on him that Mr. Bates had brought this television in yesterday afternoon so that everyone could see the big match in the office. Thanks to the very good ticket, everyone could see him on TV. Feeling regretful and ashamed, Tom finally understood the old saying: Honesty is always the best policy.
【导语】本文以对话形式，讲述了汤姆和他的朋友正步行去上班，他们在谈论重大的足球比赛，朋友给了他门票。于是汤姆想要通过妹妹撒谎来请假去看比赛，结果谎言最终被识破。
【详解】1.根据第一段首句内容“第二天早上，当汤姆走进办公室时，贝茨先生走到他跟前。”可知，第一段可描写汤姆确信没有人知道他的小把戏，就像往常一样向贝茨先生致意。
根据第二段首句内容“汤姆转过身来，在墙上看到了台新电视机。”可知，第二段可描写汤姆看到电视剧后的反应，以及贝茨先生拆穿他谎言的经过。
2．续写线索：汤姆确信没有人知道他的小把戏——汤姆试图掩饰他的焦虑——汤姆看到电视剧后的反应，以及贝茨先生拆穿他谎言的经过
3．词汇激活：
行为类：
①问候：greeted/welcome
②保持镇静：keep calm/calm down
③理解：understand/ comprehend
情绪类：
①迷惑：confused/puzzled/bewildered
②悔恨与羞愧：regretful and ashamed/remorse and shame
【点睛】[高分句型1]
It suddenly dawned on him that Mr. Bates had brought this television in yesterday afternoon so that everyone could see the big match in the office.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
[高分句型2]
Feeling regretful and ashamed, Tom finally understood the old saying: Honesty is always the best policy.(feeling是动词-ing形式作状语)
高中英语读后续写素材大全
第六部分.语言描写（一）
语言描写1
提示语形式
1.提示语在前:提示者＋提示动词,“大写··....”
Ausable explained,“ It's not my balcony. It belongs to the next apartment.”
艾奥斯解释说:“这不是我的阳台,它属于下一个公寓.”
2.提示语在中:“·....,”小写提示者(pron.)+提示动词,／．“小写／大写···...”
“......,”小写提示动词＋提示者(n.),/.“小写／大写·...·”
“Yes," he added,“ and I would miss my dumplings and fatty pork.”
“是的,”他补充说,“我会想念我的饺子和肥肉.”
“You were just looking,” contended Samantha.“I was the one doing all the work.”
“你只是在看,”萨曼莎争辩道,“我是唯一一个做所有工作的人.”
3.提示语在后:“·····,”小写提示者(pron.)+提示动词．
“······,”小写提示动词＋提示者(n.).
“Oh, well, better luck next time,” she sighed.
“哦,好吧,下次祝你好运.”她叹息道.
“Well, I do have to rest a lot,” admitted Yong Hui.
“嗯,我真的需要休息一下.”雍慧承认.
语言描写2
提示动词(say)
始终
开始说 begin
接着说 continue
插嘴道 interrupt
重复道 repeat
重复道／附和道 echo
补充说 add
最后说 end/finish/conclude
高低
叫嚷道 shout
叫喊道 yell
大声呼叫 cry
大声叫道 burst out/wail
吼叫道 roar
尖叫道 scream/shrill
惊叫道 exclaim
怒喝道 thunder/storm
愤怒地喊道 rage
勃然大怒／大发雷霆 explode
高兴地喊道 trill
得意忘形地叫道 crow
果断地说 declare
断言道 assert
轻声说 whisper/breathe
喃喃细语道 murmur
哼声道 snort
咕哝着说／嘀咕道／嘟哝道 grunt/mutter/mumble
支吾道 equivocate
生气地低声说 hiss
低沉而有力地说 boom
呻吟道 moan/groan
拖着长腔说道 drawl
犹豫不决地说 hesitate
结结巴巴地说 stutter/stammer
气喘吁吁说道 gasp
哑着嗓子说道 croak
声音越来越轻最后听不到了 trail off
哭笑
微笑着说 smile
满面笑容地说 beam
哈哈大笑道 laugh
取笑道 tease(sb.)
嘲笑道／不屑地说 sneer
傻笑道 giggle
开玩笑道 joke
窃笑着说 snigger
抽噎着说 sob
哽咽着说 choke out
哭着说道 weep
呜咽着说 whimper
哭叫道 cry
哭嚷道 whine
嚎哭道 bawl
思考
想道 think
自付 wonder
推断道 reason/conclude
大胆猜测道 hazard
回忆道 recall/recollect
思索着 reflect/ponder
若有所思地自言自语道 muse
问答
问道 ask
询问道 question/enquire
小声问道 whisper
喘着气问道 gasp
叮问道 persist
查问道 demand
厉声质问道 bark
回答道 answer/reply/respond
答应道／许诺道 promise
保证道／安慰道 assure
告诉
告诉 tell/inform
透露说 confide
提醒道 remind
警告道 warn/caution(sb.)
解释道 explain
汇报说 report back
逐一讲述道 recite
叙述道 recount
宣布道／郑重其事地说 announce/pronounce
承认说 admit
坦白道 confess
上面写着 read
写道 write
要求
提议道／自告奋勇道 offer
主动说道 volunteer
央求道 beg
恳求道 plead
哀求道 implore
要求道 ask/request
敦促道 urge
命令道 order/command
祈祷道 pray
鼓励对方继续说下去 prompt
坚持道 insist
嘱咐说 advise
吩咐道 instruct
强调说 stress/emphasize
哄骗道 cajole
评论
争辩道 protest
指出道 point out
谈论道 remark
议论道 comment
夸口道 boast
夸张地称赞道 gush
赞同道 agree
皱眉头说 frown
撅着嘴说 pout
反对道 object
反驳道 counter/contradict
纠正道 correct
安慰道 console
叹息道 sigh
抱怨道／不以为然道 complain/sniff
嘟哝道／发牢骚道 grumble
责备道 chide
训斥道 scold
怒斥道 spit
不耐烦地说／怒气冲冲地说 snap
气急败坏／急促语无伦次地说 sputter
say+ adv.
刻薄地说;酸溜溜地说 say tartly
挖苦道 say wryly/sarcastically
斩钉截铁地说 say firmly
say+ prep.+ n.
苦笑着解嘲道 say with a wry smile
勉强笑着说 say with a forced smile
撅着嘴说 say with a pout
轻声说道 say in a low voice
1. Unable to restrain the impulse to dig into this delicate and touching woman, he asked/questioned/enquired with great caution,“ How were you plucked from Nazi Germany then ” afraid of dredging up the sad facts of her past.
“你当时是怎么安然逃离纳粹德国的？”忍不住想要深入了解这个楚楚可怜的女人,他小心翼翼地询问道,生怕勾起她的伤心往事.
2. Stealing a glance at the back door and sure that the teacher wasn't there, he summoned up his courage, whispering to her,“ How about hanging out after school ”
他偷瞄了一眼后门,确定老师不在,于是鼓起勇气小声问她:“放学后,出去逛逛怎么样？”
3.From the thick bushes came a faint sound. Holding his breath to listen clearly, he gasped,“ What's that noise ”
一个微弱的声音从茂密的灌木丛中传来.他屏吸问道:“什么声音？”
4.He lurched to his feet, gripped the other man's collar and demanded angrily/barked,“ Who the hell are you ”“I'm nobody, just Peter," he answered/replied, a wicked grin on his face.
他猛的一下站起来,抓住另一个男人的衣领,厉声问道:“你到底是谁？”“我谁也不是,就是彼得.”他回答道,一脸坏笑.
5.“I thought that it would be pleasant to spend some time with you, ”I responded. “Just the two of us. ”
“我以为和您共度一段时光是件美好的事,”我这样回答,“就我们俩.”
6.“Is it Tom you're going with "she hazarded.
“你是要和汤姆一起去么？”她大胆猜测道.
7. “It's me. I broke the window,” he admitted/confessed, with his head lowered and tears brimming with his eyes ;he knew full well he'd be in a good beat.
“是我.是我打破了窗户.”他低着头承认,泪水夺眶而出;他心里清楚接下来会是一顿好打.
8.“Sign it! This contract is sure to bring us considerable profits," he cajoled.
“签了吧！这个合同一定会给我们带来巨额收益的.”他哄骗道.
9.“The Golden Week coming soon, book a ticket in advance,” advised/instructed Mom.
“黄金周要来了,记得提前订好票.”妈妈嘱咐着.
10. “There is," Johnson stressed,“ no real alternative.”
约翰逊强调道:“我们别无选择.”
11.“This must be definitely our top priority, ”he emphasized.
“这必须是我们的当务之急.”他强调说.
12. “OK. Let's follow your plan,” he finally agreed.
“好吧.就按你的计划进行.”他终于同意.
13.“It's a really good idea,” echoed all the people present.
“这真是个好主意.”在场的人纷纷附和.
14.Consumed by immense grief, Viv repeated mournfully,“ He's gone.”She still couldn't believe that her beloved husband had left her forever.
被巨大的悲痛所吞噬,微微伤心地重复着一句话:“他不在了.”她仍旧无法相信自己深爱的丈夫永远离开了她.
15. “No, mom. It's Friday. I don't have to do homework,” he violently protested with a pou .
“不,妈妈.今天是星期五.我不需要做作业的.”他噘着嘴,强烈抗议.
16.“I don't think it a good idea to set off now in such awful weather, ”he objected, for fear of being trapped by the howling wind and the raging blizzard outside.
“天气这么差,我觉得现在出发不是个好主意.”他反对道,担心会被外面的狂风暴雪所困.
17.“Yes,mom,”he walked away silently with his head lowered. He still dared not contradict/counter his mother.
“是的,妈妈.”他耷拉着脑袋,默默走开了.他还是不敢反驳他的母亲.
18. “Now, you are man and wife,” announced/pronounced the priest, all the guests present sincerely congratulating the new couple with a thunder of applause.
“现在你们正式结为夫妻.”牧师宣布道,所有在场来宾报以热烈的掌声,衷心祝福这对新人.
19.“Don't worry. I'll take care of it,” Tom declared/volunteered, a determined look on his face.
“别担心.我来处理.”汤姆果断地说／自告奋勇地说,神情坚定.
20.“He is to blame, not me!” asserted/insisted the sobbing boy.
“是他的错,不是我！”男孩啜泣着坚持说.
21.“Should I insist on this plan What if I am wrong she hesitated, wondering what to do next.
“我应该坚持这个计划吗？万一错了呢？”她犹豫着,盘算着下一步该怎么做.
22.He pinched the fish to his nose,“ Yuk! It's so smell,” he frowned, throwing it aside.
他捏着鱼,凑近鼻边,“啐！忒臭了.”他蹙眉说道,把鱼扔到一边.
23.“I guess you guys don't mind if I smoke " he drawled lazily as he was lighting a cigarette.
“我想你们不介意我抽烟吧？”他一边点着烟,一边拖着长腔懒洋洋地说.
24.“And he's an odd guy," another boy added in no time.
“他还是个怪人呢.”另一个男孩儿立刻补充道.
25.“Thank you for your invitation. I'd absolutely love to come ”she beamed.
“谢谢您的邀请.我非常乐意参加.”她满脸笑容地说.
18726.“Perfect!"smiled the teacher, who seemed to be very satisfied with his answer and signaled him to sit down.
“太棒了！”老师微笑着说,似乎对他的答案相当满意,接着示意他坐下.
27.“Look at what you're wearing. You're insane!” she laughed.
“看看你穿了什么呀.疯了吧你！”她大笑着说.
28.“Look! Baldy is coming! Let's run!" the boys teased and scattered.
“看！秃顶来啦！我们快跑呀！”一群男孩儿一边取笑着说,一边四散开来.
29.“You A writer " she sneered.
“你？作家？”她不屑地说.
30.Amused by his ridiculous disguise, she giggled like a little girl,“ That's really funny.”
她被他荒唐的乔装逗乐,咯咯笑地像个小姑娘:“太滑稽了.”
31.“So,did you agree or not ” he persisted.
“那么你同意了没有？”他叮问道.
32.“I cooked it myself, so be careful,” he joked.
“我亲自煮的,所以要小心咯.”他开着玩笑.
33. “Her dress is outdated,” the girls sniggered in a huddle.
“她的裙子也太过时了吧.”女孩儿们凑在一起窃笑.
34.“I run faster than any man in this country," boasted the princess.
“我比这个国家里任何一个男人都跑得快.”公主夸口道.
35.“You look so beautiful in this piece of gown ,the color suits you well, Your Majesty,” gushed the ministers, pretending that the naked emperor was wearing the most beautiful clothes.
“您穿这身礼服太美了,这颜色太适合您了,陛下.”大臣们纷纷吹捧,假装这位一丝不挂的皇帝正穿着最美的衣服.
36.“Once upon a time ...”he began his story ...then he paused, looking around at the eager faces proudly, and continued,“ there lived a king who had a beautiful daughter ...”
“很久很久以前····..”他开始了他的故事··.··然后,他停了下来,骄傲地扫视了一圈急切的脸庞,然后继续说道:“住着一个国王,国王有一个美丽的女儿····”
37.“Please,don't leave me alone," he begged.
“求你了,别丢下我一个人.”他乞求道.
38.“Let's leave the issue to next time," the chairman concluded/ended/finished the meeting in
haste and left with the secretary hurriedly.
“让我们把这一议题留到下次吧.”主席草草结束了会议,与秘书匆匆离开.
39."Never mind, you've done your best. I'm so proud of you,” Mom consoled me, gently patting me on the shoulder.
“没关系,你已经做到最好了.我太为你骄傲了.”妈妈安慰着我,轻轻地拍着我的肩膀.
40.“He'll come back safe and sound," Susan assured herself.
“他一定会平安回来的.”苏珊安慰着自己.
41."We are well-armed, and we'll protect you at any cost. You're perfectly safe,” he assured me.
“我们武器精良,会不惜一切保护你们的.你们绝对安全.”他安慰着我们.
42.“It's Yates, not Wates," she corrected him.
“那是耶茨不是韦茨.”她纠正他道.
43.“The situation would be getting out of control,” he concluded,“ It's time to take urgent action.”
“情况会逐渐失控的,”他推断道,“是时候采取紧急行动了.”
44.“Look at what your waiter's done to me! I can't believe he should be so silly to spill the whole bowl of soup on my new coat! It's spoiled!” the customer complained to the manager hysterically.
“看看你的侍应对我做了什么！我简直无法相信他竟然这么蠢,把整碗汤洒在我的新外套上！全毁了！”顾客歇斯底里地向经理投诉道.
45.“The room is so damp and dusty-I can't stand staying here even for a second,” she grumbled, pouting her lips.
“这房间又潮又脏－－我一秒钟都待不下去.”她嘟着嘴,发着牢骚.
46.“What's the big deal It's not the end of the world," she sniffed.
“有什么大不了的.又不是世界末日.”她不以为然地说.
47. The old man held the small dog figurine in the trembling hands,“ Thank you," he choked. Never before had he received such warm kindness.
老人用颤抖的双手捧着这只小狗雕像,“谢谢你.”他哽咽道.他从未感受过如此温暖的善意.
48.“I-I-I don't know,” he stuttered/stammered ,his voice trembling with fear.
“我·····我······我不知道.”他结结巴巴地说,声音因为害怕而发抖.
49.“Don't just stand there like a e and help!” she snapped and ordered, shooting an impatient glance at him.
“不要像个傻子那样站着.过来帮忙呀！”她怒气冲冲地命令道,不耐烦地瞪了他一眼.
50.“Dangerous! Stop the train! The bridge ahead is broken!” she gasped.
“危险！停下火车！前面的桥塌了！”她气喘吁吁地说.
51. Stunned, I sputtered,“ What on earth are you up to ”
我惊呆了,气急败坏地说:“你到底有什么目的？”
52.“Isn't that a bit selfish ” he chided.
“那难道不自私么？”他指责道.
53.“You are late again!” scolded the teacher.
“你又迟到了！”老师训斥道.
54.“You liar!” she spat and stormed off.
“你这个骗子！”她怒斥道,然后气冲冲地跑开了.
55.“Not his best performance," she commented to the woman seated next to her.
“这不是他的最佳表现.”她对坐在她旁边的女士评论道.
56.“It's much colder than yesterday," he remarked casually.
“今儿比昨天冷多了.”他漫不经心地说.
57.“But how can we open the door It's locked," the sister pointed out the challenge.
“但是我们要怎样开门呢？门锁上了.”姐姐指出了问题之所在.
58.“Get out of my sigh,” he boomed, glaring at me.
“别让我再见到你！”他怒视着我,低沉而有力地说.
59.“God,please end all my sufferings," she prayed devoutly.
“主啊,请结束我的苦难吧.”她虔诚祷告道.
60.“I'll work hard, and never let you down," he promised to/assured his mother.
“我一定会努力学习,绝不让您失望.”他向他母亲保证道.
18961. “Look at the mess you've made-I'm tired of patching you up!” he finally exploded.
“看看你干的好事－我受够了替你收拾烂摊子！”他终于大发雷霆.
62. “The road ahead lie unpredictable risks, so be careful,” reminded the sage.
“前路危险不可预知,务必小心.”智者提醒道.
63.“Swimming alone is dangerous,” the teacher warned/cautioned us.
“独自游泳是很危险的.”老师警告我们.
64. “What should I do now ”I wondered, totally at a loss.
“我现在该怎么做呢？”我暗暗自忖道,陷入了迷茫.
65.“There must have been something wrong ...”she thought/reflected, racking her brains to figure out the problem.
“一定有什么地方错了··...·”她思索着,绞尽脑汁想要弄清楚问题之所在.
66. I found myself constantly pondering the question,“ How could anyone do these things ”
我不停地思考着一个问题:“怎么会有人做这些事情呢？”
67.“At that time ,my husband would give me a rose every day though money was always tight for us...＂looking towards the distance, the old lady began to recall/recollect her sweet memories.
“那个时候,尽管我们经济拮据,但我的丈夫每天都会送我一枝玫瑰···...”老妪看向远方,回忆起她甜蜜的过往.
68.“My wallet was with me when I boarded, so I must have left it on the train,” she reasoned.
“上火车时,我的钱包还在,所以我一定是把它落在火车上了.”她推断道.
69.Realizing the car was sinking, the man cried/screamed at the top of his lungs, “Help!”
意识到车子正往下沉,男人尖声呼救道:“救命！”
70.“It hurts. Go away, stupid,” he shouted out in pain.
“疼死了.走开,蠢货.”他疼得大叫.
71.Seeing him walking away farther, they yelled(out)after him,“ You are coming back, aren't you ”
看着他越走越远,他们喊道:“你会回来的,是吧？”
72. “He's a bully! ”the little boy burst out.
“他是个恶霸！”小男孩儿大声喊道.
73. “She's pregnant,” Jack blurted it out before I could stop him.
“她怀孕了.”我还没来得及阻止他,杰克便脱口而出.
74. “May your soul rest in peace ,my best friend!” he wailed in mourning.
“愿你安息,我的挚友！”他恸哭道.
75.“You'll pay the price for insulting me,” he roared.
“我要你为侮辱我付出代价.”他怒吼道.
76.“Let go of the girl,” he thundered/stormed, springing to his feet and charging at the two gangsters.
“放开那个女孩儿.”他怒喝一声,一跃而起,扑向那两个歹人.
77.“That's unfair!” she raged.
“这不公平！”她怒不可遏.
78. “Be quiet!" my father hissed at us impatiently.
“安静点！”父亲不耐烦地低声呵斥我们.
79. Wild with joy, she trilled,“ How wonderful!”
她欣喜若狂,兴奋地喊道:“多棒啊！”
80.“I might never see you again," she moaned/groaned.
“我可能再也见不到你了.”她呻吟着说.
81.At the sight of the snake winding round a branch over her head, she was scared to death and shrilled,“ Snake! Take it away!”
看到一条蛇盘踞在她头顶的树杈上,她吓得要死并尖叫道:“蛇！快把它弄走！”
82. "I can't believe my eyes!" she exclaimed at the beautiful view before her.
看到眼前的美景,她惊呼道:“我简直不敢相信我的眼睛！”
83. “OK, fine. Let's wait, "she sighed, making a compromise.
“好吧.我们等吧.”她叹息道,做出了让步.
84.“I'm not sure I've ever driven a better lap," crowed a delighted Irvine.
“我想这也许是我开得最棒的一圈.”欧文高兴地欢呼道.
85. "The present situation is actually more optimistic than expected," he stated.
他说道:“事实上,现状比我们预料的更乐观.”
86.“It's hardly what I call elegant," she sniffed, rolling her eyes upwards.
“要我说,这很难称得上优雅.”她翻了个白眼,轻蔑地说.
87. “Sorry, I didn't mean to do that," the little boy broke down ,sobbing into his hands.
“对不起,我不是有意那样做的.”小男孩儿崩溃了,双手掩面抽噎着说道.
88.“It's the most precious gift I've ever received, ”the lonely soul couldn't help weeping tears of affection.
“这是我收到过的最珍贵的礼物.”这个寂寞的灵魂不禁流下了感动的泪水.
89. “Let me go,” she whimpered. “You're hurting me.”
“放我走吧,”她呜咽着说,“你弄疼我了.”
90. “Let's go, Jane. The flames are reaching up. Mrs. Makcik must have left,” cried frightened Tom, his hands holding Jane's tightly.
汤姆害怕地紧握着简的手,哭求道:“走吧,简.火烧上来了.马克西克太太肯定离开了.”
91.“But...you promised to invite my classmates over,” whined the boy.
“可是······你答应过请我同学过来的.”男孩儿哭嚷道.
92. “Buy me that dinosaur,” a little boy rolled on the floor, bawling.
“给我买那只恐龙.”一个小男孩儿在地上打着滚,嚎哭道.
93.“Reports,"he snorted. “Anyone can write reports.”
“报告,”他哼了一声,“谁都会写.”
94.“And then what happened " he prompted.
“后来怎样了？”他鼓励对方继续说下去.
95.“Come on, Grace," he was urging her,” don't wait, hurry up.”
“快点儿,格蕾丝,”他催促着,“别等了,快点儿.”
96”I was held up by the heavy traffic ,so I was late," he explained cautiously.
“路上堵车,所以我来晚了.”他小心翼翼地解释道.
97.“I am innocent," insisted the suspect.
“我是无辜的.”嫌疑犯坚称道.
98.Before he could finish his story, she interrupted him rudely,“ That's enough.”
他还没来得及讲完他的故事,她就粗鲁地打断了他:“够了.”
99.“It's not what you promised me earlier," Jane protested.
“这不是你先前承诺我的.”简争辩道.
100,“Your daughter is running a high fever," the doctor informed/told the anxious parents.
“你们的女儿正发着高烧.”医生告知焦急的父母.
－191101.“The commuter was affected by a virus,” the repairman reported back after a thorough check.
经过一番彻查,维修人员汇报道:“电脑是感染了病毒.”
102. “Pick up two dozen eggs, a bag of flour, some butter ...on your way back home. I'm gonna make some cookies..."Mom recited a list of what she needed.
“你回来的时候,顺道买上两打鸡蛋,一袋面粉,一些黄油···我打算做些小饼干··..·”妈妈逐一说着她需要的物品清单.
103.“It was a narrow escape ...I was pedaling along the highway when suddenly a wolf appeared from nowhere and began to chase after me ...”he recounted to his family how he survived the terrible experience.
“真实死里逃生啊··.··.我正在高速公路上骑行,突然一头狼不知打哪儿冒出来,开始追我···...”他向家人描述着自己是怎么在这可怕的经历中活下来的.
104. “I think I am falling in love with him,” she confided her deepest secret to her mother.
“我想我是爱上他了.”她向母亲吐露出自己最深的秘密.
105.“Home,home!”the delirious Tom murmured in his dream, his temperature getting higher.
汤姆烧得越发厉害了,神志不清地在梦中呢喃着:“家,回家！”
106.“Rubbish,”I grunted.
“垃圾.”我咕哝着说.
107.“God knows what's happening in that madman's mind,” she muttered, reluctant to take up the task as he instructed.
“天知道那个疯子想些什么.”她嘀咕着,不情愿地接受了他指示的任务.
108.“But he had no reason. He of all men ...”Kate's voice trailed off.
“但是他没有任何理由.在所有人当中·..···”凯特的声音越来越轻.
109.“Today of all days,” she mumbled.
她低声咕哝了一句:“为什么偏偏是今天.”
110.“I'm over here,” she breafhed
“我在这儿呢.”她轻声说.
111. When asked what had happened, he equivocated,“ I...I wasn't on the spot then ...”
当被问到发生了什么时,他含糊其辞:“我····我当时不在场···...”
112.“Let me see,” he offered to help with my problem.
“让我看看.”他主动提议帮我解决问题.
113. “I'll go and bring you some fruits,” she volunteered.
“我去吧,再给你带些水果.”她主动说道.
114.“The accident must be thoroughly investigated," ordered/commanded the mayor.
“事故必须要彻查.”市长下令道.
115.“Every student should obey the school rules," requested the teacher.
“每个学生都应遵守校规.”老师要求道.
116.“Please forgive me," he was kneeling on the floor, pleading/imploring/begging for mercy.
“请原谅我.”他跪在地上,乞求宽恕.
117. The sign on the bus read “Private: Not In Service”.
巴士的标牌上写着“私家车:不对外出租”.
118.“There are other patients on the ward, Lovell,” the staff nurse reminded her tartly.
“洛弗尔,病房里还有别的病人呢.”护士毫不客气地提醒她说.
119.When asked if he would be visiting his family, Becker said wryly,“ I hope I don't have time.”
当被问到他是否会去拜访家人时,贝克尔挖苦地说:“我希望我没有时间.”
120.“A good night's sleep is what you want. Go and sit back, I can manage it," he said firmly, pushing her towards bed.
“你现在需要的是好好睡一觉.你不要管了,我能处理好的.”他－－边坚定地说着,一边把她往床边推.
121.“I was really keen to play a good guy,” he said, with a wry smile.
“我真的想演个好人.”他苦笑着解嘲道.
122. “It's nothing,” she hid her concern with a forced smile.
“没什么.”她强颜欢笑,隐藏了担忧.
123.“Do you all hate me for it ” asked Tess bitterly, in a low voice.
“你们都会为此恨我么？”泰丝苦涩地轻声问道.
124.Legolas shook his head in denial. “This is not my body.”
莱格拉斯摇着头否认道:“这不是我的身体.”
125.“Of all my books,” wrote Dickens,“ I like this best.”
狄更斯写道:“在我所有的书中,我最喜欢这本.”
126.“You're no fun," she pouted.
她撅着嘴说:“你一点都不风趣.”
127.“Of course there's something wrong!”Jim exploded.
“当然是出了毛病！”杰姆大发雷霆道.
128.“As a whole,” she muses,“ the 'organized church' turns me off.”
她沉思道:“总的来说,我不喜欢“制度森严的教会＇.”
129. “Damn,” I murmured to myself, closing my eyes and leaning against the door. I shouldn't have kissed Alex. The last thing in the world I wanted was to lead him on, because the more time that passed, the more I knew my feelings for Alex would never be more than friendly. I knew it almost for a fact.
“该死.”我闭上眼睛,靠在门上,自言自语道.我不该吻亚历克斯.我最不想做的事就是让他误会,因为时间越久,我对亚历克斯的感觉就越清楚,永远不会超越友好.我知道这几乎是事实.
130. But the doctor's soft words dropped like bombs. “I don't think she is going to make it, ”he said,“ There is only a 10 percent chance she will pull through the night, and even then, if by some chance she does make it, her future could be a very cruel one”“ No! No!” was all Diana could say. She and David, with their 5-year-old son Dustin, had long dreamed of the day they would have a daughter to become a family of four. Now, within a matter of hours, that dream was slipping away. But Diana insisted,“ I don't care what the doctor says! One day she will be coming home with us!”
但医生温柔的话语像炸弹一样落下.“我不认为她会成功,”他说,“她熬过此夜的可能性只有10%.即使那样,如果她有机会成功,她的未来也可能是非常残酷的.”“不！不！”戴安娜只能说.她和戴维,还有他们5岁的儿子达斯廷,一直梦想着有一个女儿,能成为一个四口之家.现在,在几个小时之内,那个梦想就悄悄地溜走了.但戴娜坚持说:“我不管医生怎么说！总有一天她会和我们一起回家的！”
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虚拟语气
“要不是...,本...”(感激、责怪、后悔)
*without...
*but for...
*If it were not for ...Were it not for...(现在)
*If it had not been for ...Had it not been for ...(过去)
*If...did...would/should/might/could do...(现在)
*If...had done...would/should/might/could have done...(过去)
*...otherwise...would/should/might/could have done...(过去)
*...would/should/might/could have done...but...(过去)
1.If it weren't for your help, I would still be homeless.(现在或将来)
若非你的帮助,我仍会无家可归.
1032. If it were not for your quick play, our team would not win.(现在或将来)
若没有你敏捷的技巧,我们球队是不会赢的.
3.You wouldn't have seen her if it hadn't been for him.(过去)
如果不是因为他,你就不会见到她了.
4. If it hadn't been for the doctor's care,1 wouldn't have recovered so soon.(过去)
=Had it not been for the doctor's care, I wouldn't have recovered so soon.
要不是医生的照顾,我不会痊愈得这么快.
5. Had it not been for my carelessness, all this would not have happened.(过去)
要不是我当时粗心大意,所有这一切都不会发生.
6.But for his pension, he would starve.(现在或将来)
要不是他有养老金,他就会挨饿了.
7. But for the storm, I would have been home before eight.(过去)
要不是因为这场风暴,我早在8点钟以前就回到家里了.
8.Without your help, I would have failed.(过去)
要不是有你的帮助,我就会失败了.
9. If I hadn't gone over all my notes, I couldn't have done so well in the exam.(过去)
=I went over all my notes. Otherwise, I couldn't have done so well in the exam.
要不是复习了所有笔记,我考试就不会考得这么好.
10.If he had made every effort, he would have made greater progress in English.(过去)
=He would have made greater progress in English, but he didn't make every effort.
要不是他没尽最大努力,他的英语进步会更大.
11. If you had come earlier, you might have met him.(过去)
如果你早点来,你本可能见到他.
表“但愿·..·;要是······就好了”(渴望、愿望、后悔、遗憾等)
*I wish that...would/could do...(将来)
If only...would/could do ...
I would rather ...did...
*I wish that...did...(现在)
If only...did...
I would rather ...did...
*I wish that ...had done...(过去)
If only...had done...
I would rather ...had done...
1.If only it would clear up soon!(将来)
但愿天气赶快放晴.
2.If only I were a little bird!(现在)
要是我是只小鸟多好啊！
3.If only I had followed your advice.(过去)
要是我接受你的建议就好了.
4.I wish I could be the person to accompany you to the end of life.(现在)
我期望成为那个陪伴你直到生命终点的人.
5.I wish I would be admitted to Beijing University.(将来)
=If only I would be admitted to Beijing University.
=I would rather I were admitted to Beijing University.
我能被北京大学录取就好了.
6.I wish I were the perfect daughter.(现在)
=If only I were the perfect daughter.
=I would rather I were the perfect daughter.
我要是一个完美的女儿就好了.
7. I wish that I had been reminded of the danger yesterday.(过去)
=I would rather I had been reminded of the danger yesterday.
=If only I had been reminded of the danger yesterday.
要是昨天有人提醒我有危险就好了.
表“竟然····.·”(惊讶、后悔、难过、惋惜、不可思议)
*It is wonderful/strange/surprising/amazing/a pity/a shame that...should do/should have done...
*Sb. be surprised/amazed that.., should do/should have done ...
1. I am surprised that you should have acted so indiscreetly.
你竟然表现得如此轻率,我感到惊讶.
2. It is amazing that she should have said nothing about the murder.
令人惊奇的是,她竟然对这桩凶杀案不置一词.
3.It is wonderful that you should have achieved so much these years.
你在这几年竟然取得这么多成绩,太了不起了.
4. It is surprising that you should be so foolish.
你竟然这么愚蠢,太令人意外了.
5.It is a pity that such an ability as him should be employed about such trifling matters.
真可惜,像他这样有才能的人竟然被用来干这类琐事.
6.It is a shame you should stay here to be bullied in that way.
你不应该再住在这儿,让人那么欺侮.
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感叹语气
*What+ n. +(it is)to do.../that...!
*How+ adj.+(it is)to do.../that...!
1.What tasty smell the cake gave off!
蛋糕释放出多么诱人的香味！
2,What a good time we had on the beach yesterday!
我们昨天在海边玩得多么开心啊！
3.How scary these tigers are!
这些老虎多么令人恐惧啊！
4.How well you sing but how badly he dances!
你唱得多好,而他舞跳得多么差！
5.What a long way it is from school to his home!
How far it is from school to his home!
他家离学校多么远啊！
6.How beautiful our school looks in spring!
我们学校在春天看起来多么漂亮啊！
7. What an unforgettable experience! I'll write it down while it is still fresh in my memory.
多么令人难忘的经历啊！我要趁记忆犹新时写下来.
8. What an exciting experience it is to jump out of an airplane at 10,000 feet!
从万米高空的飞机里跳下来是多么令人激动的经历啊！
9.How wonderful it is (for us) to cruise by sea under the bright sunshine!
在明媚的阳光下巡游海上是多么惬意的一件事情！
10. How wonderful it is that nobody need wait a single moment before starting to improve the world.
多好啊,不用等待就可以马上去改善这个世界了.
11. What a great pity it is that I can't go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
周五不能和你一起去书店多么可惜啊！
12. How sorry I feel to tell you that I can't go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
告诉你周五不能和你一起去书店我感觉多么遗憾啊！
13.What a wonderful, limitless world it was down there! And what a tiny spot I was in this enormous world!
下面这个世界是多么精彩无限啊！在这个巨大的(海底)世界里我是多么渺小啊！
14. How wonderful it is to have a friend like you!
有你这样的朋友是多么了不起啊！
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强调语气
*表语／状语＋as+S+V...,...
*It is+被强调部分＋that……
*Only+状语＋助动词／情态动词／be+S+V.
*Not until...+助动词／情态动词／be+S+V..
*The+比较级＋S+V...,the＋比较级＋S+V...
* “What+v. +sb. most/a lot/a bit...is...”表“(最／有点)令某人·.·的(事)是·.·...”
impresses/strikes/moves
charms/attracts/fascinates
pleases/delights/amuses/interests
excites/satisfies/comforts/relieves sth.
What troubles/worries/depresses/annoys sb.(most/a lot/a bit)is to do sth.
disturbs/bothers/frightens/scares that...
bores/disappoints/tires/upsets
puzzles/confuses/embarrasses
surprises/amazes/astonishes/shocks
1. Again as we fail, we never lose heart.(决心)
尽管再三失败,我们绝不气馁.
2. Exhausted as we were, we held on to our belief in success.(信心)
当时我们尽管已经极度疲乏,但依然对成功充满信心.
3. It was to my great surprise that he succeeded in the competition.(意外)
他比赛成功了,真令我意外.
4. People say,“ Guilin's scenery is peerless in the world. ”It was not until I visited the place that I found it really worthy of the reputation.(怀疑)
人们都说“桂林山水甲天下”,到桂林一看,果然名不虚传.
5.It was not until 1974 that his ability to write gelled again.(可惜)
直到1974年,他的写作才华才再次得以发挥.
6.Only with his help could we have made progress in English.(感激)
只有在他的帮助下,我们才能在英语方面取得进步.
7.Only when he is seriously ill does he ever stay in bed.(赞扬)
只有当他病得很重时他才会躺在床上.
8. Only then did he realize how stupid he had been.(后悔).
只有那时他才意识到他先前是多么愚蠢.
9.Only on special occasions would they take it out and let us hold it in our hands.(珍惜)
只有在特殊情况下,他们才会把它拿出来,让我们把它放在我们的手里.
10.Not until they heard that she was safe and sound were their minds set at rest.(担心)
听到她平安无事的消息,大家心里才一块石头落地.
11.Not until her dream came true did we believe in her.(怀疑)
直到她的梦想实现,我们才相信她的能力.
12.The more you love someone, the more you end up getting hurt.(伤心)
爱之越深,最终受伤越深.
13.The bigger the challenge is, the more motivated he becomes.(决心)
挑战越大,他就越有动力.
14. The closer we got to success, the more excited we felt.(兴奋)
我们越接近成功,就越兴奋.
15.The more times we fail, the less confident we become.(气馁)
我们失败的次数越多,就越不自信.
16.The farther we left home, the more unsettled we felt.(不安)
离家越远,我们就越觉得不安.
17.What impressed us most was the new look the town took on.
留给我印象最深刻的是该城镇崭新的面貌.
18. What surprises him a lot is that she stays young after ten years of hard work.
让我们很吃惊的是历经十年艰苦劳作她年轻依旧.
19.What interests the boy most is to play computer games.
最令男孩感兴趣的是玩电脑游戏.
20. What satisfies me a bit is that he holds that he, as a student, must put his heart into his studies.
令我有点满意的是,他认为作为一名学生他必须专心学习.
语言描写6
反意语气(否定式一般疑问句)
*一般疑问句否定结构;表示说话者惊异的情绪、责难的口吻或赞叹,也可表示说话人的某种建议、邀请、请求或看法等.
1.Don't these people realize that they are wasting your time
这些人难道不知道他们在浪费你的时间吗？
2. Won't new technology bring about changes in our daily life
难道新技术不会改变我们的日常生活吗？
3,Can't you work it out
难道你算不出来吗？
4.Didn't you see him yesterday
－难道昨天你没看见他吗？
5. Aren't you going to your sister's
－你不打算到你姐姐家去么？
6,"Isn't that a bit selfish " he chided.
“那不是有点自私吗？”他斥责.
7. Won't new technology bring about changes in our daily life
新技术不会改变我们的日常生活吗？
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