01 动作链场景突破法-2025年高考英语读后续写提分技巧与训练（含答案）
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动作链场景突破法
在英语读后续写中，合理构建动作链能使故事更加连贯、生动。本文详细梳理了25种常见情境下的动作链，助力读者掌握动作构造逻辑，提升写作能力。
一、灾难相关动作链
（一）遇到火灾/水灾/雪灾/地震/洪水
察觉异常（如闻到焦味、听到巨响等），迅速确认灾难源头，接着寻找最近的逃生路径，随后迅速逃离现场，最后找到安全位置避险。
示例：她闻到刺鼻焦味，停下手中活计，四处查看发现厨房起火，赶忙抓起手机冲向大门，边跑边拨打119，跑到街道安全处后，才松了一口气。
英文：She smelled a sharp, acrid burning odor and immediately stopped what she was doing. She looked around and discovered that the kitchen was engulfed in flames. She quickly grabbed her phone and rushed towards the door. While dialing 911, she ran out onto the street. After reaching a safe spot, she finally breathed a sigh of relief.
（二）各种灾难救人
听到求救声音后，确定求救者位置，准备救援工具，进入救援现场展开救援，成功救出伤者，并将伤者带到安全区域。
示例：他隐约听到废墟下的呼救声，立刻确定声源，找来铁杆当撬杠，小心翼翼挪开瓦砾，成功救出受困者，随后背起对方迅速撤离到安全地带。
英文：He vaguely heard faint cries for help from beneath the rubble. Immediately located the source. Found a metal rod to use as a lever. Carefully lifted away the debris. Successfully pulled the trapped person out. He carried the person to a safe area.
（三）各种灾难求救
意识到无法独自脱险时，寻找求救工具（电话、信号设备等），发送求救信号（拨打电话、发射信号），等待救援并确认救援抵达。
示例：她被困水中无法游到岸边，拼命寻找漂浮木板，抓住木板后用手机求救，等待时紧紧抓着木板，听到直升机声后心情逐渐平静。
英文：She realized she was trapped in the water and couldn’t swim to shore. She desperately looked for a floating plank. Grabbing the plank, she used her phone to call for help. While waiting for rescue, she held onto the plank tightly. Hearing the sound of a helicopter in the distance, her anxiety started to fade.
（四）各种灾难逃生
察觉到灾难逼近，确定最佳逃生路径，准备逃生用品，按照计划逃生，确保安全后停止行动。
示例：他感到地面剧烈震动，马上确定通往出口的最短路线，拿上背包里的急救包和水，沿着走廊迅速朝出口跑去，到达户外空旷地后，停下检查自己是否受伤。
英文：He felt the ground shake violently. Immediately determined the shortest route to the exit. Grabbed the first-aid kit and water from his backpack. Ran quickly down the hallway towards the exit. After reaching the open outdoor area, he stopped to check if he was injured.
（五）灾难结束之后庆幸
确认灾难结束，检查自身安全，环顾四周确定无危险，感叹生还幸运，并与他人分享劫后余生的感受。
示例：地震停止后，他拍拍身体确认没受伤，环顾四周确认无新危险，长舒一口气感叹自己还活着，随后与周围幸存者紧紧拥抱。
英文：The earthquake finally stopped. He patted his body to make sure he wasn’t injured. Looked around to confirm there was no new danger. He exhaled deeply, saying, “I’m alive!” Then embraced the surrounding survivors tightly.
二、人物相关动作链
（一）发现子女/妻子/丈夫不见
发现家人不在预期位置，寻找可能去向，询问周围的人，联系家人和朋友，报警或求助，持续寻找。
示例：她发现儿子不在卧室，迅速检查整个房子，问邻居无果后，拿起电话急切联系家人和朋友，最终报警求助，整晚都在街上四处寻找。
英文：She noticed her son wasn’t in his bedroom. Quickly checked the entire house. Asked the neighbors, but no one had seen him. She grabbed her phone and urgently called family and friends. Finally reported to the police and asked for help. She spent the whole night searching the streets.
（二）找人一波三折
初步线索失败后，重整计划寻找，新的线索引导行动，途中遇到挫折或意外，最终找到目标。
示例：他先去常去的咖啡馆找她，没找到后重新思考她可能去的地方，想起她提过的公园，在公园找了很久，还与陌生人发生争执，终于在偏僻长椅上发现她静静坐着。
英文：He first went to the usual café to find her, but she wasn’t there. Reconsidered where she might have gone. Suddenly remembered she mentioned a park. Searched the park for a long time, even got into an argument with a stranger. Finally found her sitting quietly on a secluded bench.
（三）朋友/夫妻吵架
意见产生分歧，情绪逐渐升级，进而爆发争吵，言辞激烈，其中一方冷静下来，吵架结束但气氛紧张。
示例：他们讨论晚饭安排时意见分歧，声音逐渐提高且互不相让，最终争吵爆发，她喊道“你从来不考虑我的感受！”，他看着她沉默下来，房间陷入沉默，气氛紧张。
英文：They were discussing dinner plans, and it didn’t take long for their opinions to diverge. Their voices gradually grew louder, neither willing to back down. Finally, the words became sharper, and a full-blown argument erupted. “You never consider my feelings!” she shouted. He looked at her, saying nothing, slowly calming down. The room fell into silence, tension hanging in the air.
（四）内心挣扎
面临选择时内心纠结，不断反复权衡利弊，决定采取行动并付诸实践。
示例：他站在门口握着信，内心充满挣扎，虽不断告诉自己这是正确决定，但又担心后果，反复踱步手心冒汗，最终深吸一口气将信放进信箱，做出决定后肩膀顿感轻松。
英文：He stood at the door, holding the letter, his heart full of conflict. He kept telling himself this was the right decision. But another voice echoed in his mind, reminding him of the potential consequences. He paced back and forth, palms sweating. Finally, he took a deep breath and dropped the letter into the mailbox. The decision was made, and a weight lifted from his shoulders.
（五）筹备惊喜活动
产生惊喜的想法，计划活动细节，准备惊喜材料，实施惊喜，观察对方反应。
示例：他突然想为她筹备惊喜生日派对，列出宾客名单、挑选场地，购买她喜欢的花和蛋糕并装饰场地，她走进房间时灯光亮起，大家高喊“生日快乐！”，看到她的惊讶与感动，他心里满是满足。
英文：He suddenly thought of organizing a surprise birthday party for her. He made a guest list and chose a suitable venue. Bought her favorite flowers and cake, decorated the venue. When she walked into the room, the lights suddenly came on, and everyone shouted “Happy Birthday!” Seeing the surprise and emotion on her face, his heart was filled with satisfaction.
（六）准备礼物
决定送礼物，选择礼物类型，考虑对方喜好，购买或制作礼物，包装礼物，将礼物送出。
示例：他决定送她特别礼物，想到她提过的书，马上去书店挑选精装版，回家用心包装，她打开礼物时露出灿烂笑容。
英文：He decided to prepare a special gift for her. Remembered she had recently mentioned a particular book. Immediately went to the bookstore and picked out a hardcover edition. At home, he carefully wrapped it in beautiful paper. When she opened the gift, a bright smile appeared on her face.
三、场景相关动作链
（一）欣赏景色
抵达观景点，选定最佳观景位置，放松身体，环顾四周欣赏美景，深呼吸感受空气，内心平静下来。
示例：她走到山顶，选视野开阔处坐下，调整姿势让自己舒适，眼睛扫过山谷风景，深吸清新空气，闭上眼睛感受内心宁静。
英文：She reached the mountain top and found a spot with a wide view to sit down. Adjusted her posture to get comfortable. Let her eyes sweep across every inch of the valley. Took a deep breath, feeling the freshness in the air. Closed her eyes, feeling an overwhelming sense of peace.
（二）发现野生动物
发现不寻常动静，定睛观察，确认是野生动物，慢慢靠近，观察动物行为，保持安全距离。
示例：他听到草丛有动静，停下脚步仔细观察，发现是小鹿觅食，放慢脚步小心靠近，观察小鹿动作，同时始终保持安全距离。
英文：He heard rustling in the bushes. Stopped walking and observed closely. Saw it was a deer foraging. Slowed his pace and cautiously approached. Watched its every move, not wanting to startle it. But kept a safe distance at all times.
（三）救动物
发现动物受困，判断解救方法，获取工具或方法，接近动物，实施救援，检查动物状态。
示例：他看到小狗被困泥潭，判断需用绳子拉出，找来结实树枝和绳子，小心接近安抚小狗，将绳子套在小狗身上拉上岸，获救后检查小狗四肢确保没受伤。
英文：He saw a puppy trapped in a muddy bank by the river. Realized he needed a rope to pull it out. Found a sturdy branch and some rope. Carefully approached the puppy, calming it down. Looped the rope around the puppy and slowly pulled it to safety. After rescuing the puppy, he checked its legs to make sure it wasn’t injured.
（四）猎人发现危险的野兽
感受到威胁，确认野兽位置，准备武器，评估逃跑或战斗的可能性，做出决定，行动以确保安全。
示例：他感到背后寒意，慢慢转身发现熊走来，悄悄拉开弓箭紧盯熊，评估地形后决定采取防御姿态，熊靠近时果断射箭，熊受伤逃跑后他松了口气。
英文：He felt a chill down his spine. Slowly turned around to see a bear approaching him. Quietly drew his bow, eyes locked on the bear. Assessed the surrounding terrain and decided to take a defensive stance. As the bear came closer, he swiftly released the arrow. The bear fled after being hit, and he finally breathed a sigh of relief.
（五）受到野兽攻击
意识到被攻击，尝试躲避，找到武器或防御物，反击或逃跑，确保自己安全。
示例：听到低吼，他转头发现狼扑来，迅速躲闪，狼爪擦过肩膀，他抓起树枝挥向狼，狼被击退，他趁机跑开，跑一段距离确认狼没追来才放心。
英文：A low growl sounded in his ear, and he turned sharply to see a wolf lunging at him. He quickly dodged, the wolf’s claws grazing his shoulder. He grabbed a branch from the ground and swung it hard at the wolf. The wolf retreated, and he seized the moment to sprint away. After running a good distance, he looked back to make sure the wolf wasn’t following before he relaxed slightly.
（六）转危为安
发现自己处于危险之中，冷静思考解决办法，实施行动，成功脱险，重新确认安全。
示例：他被困狭窄山路，两侧是悬崖，深吸一口气让自己冷静，发现大石头作支撑点，小心攀爬避免滑倒，到达安全地带后长舒一口气，环顾四周确认无其他危险。
英文：He found himself trapped on a narrow mountain path, with steep cliffs on both sides. Took a deep breath, trying to calm himself down. Spotted a larger rock that could serve as a foothold. Carefully climbed up, making sure not to slip. Finally reached a safe area, he exhaled deeply and looked around to ensure there was no other danger.
（七）意料之外
事情按计划进行，突发意外，做出应急反应，处理意外，结果出乎意料。
示例：他们按计划野餐，一切顺利，突然下雨，慌忙收拾找避雨处，雨越下越大躲进废弃小屋，虽计划被打乱，但在小屋度过难忘时光。
英文：They went on a picnic as planned, everything was going smoothly. Suddenly, the sky darkened, and it started to rain heavily. They quickly packed up and looked for shelter. But the rain kept pouring, so they had to take refuge in an abandoned hut. Although their plans were disrupted, they ended up having an unforgettable time in the hut.
（八）自己一个人在野外探险
准备探险装备，选择探险路线，出发探险，途中遇到困难，解决问题，继续探险。
示例：他整理背包检查地图和指南针，选了通往森林深处的路线，迎着晨光独自出发，途中遇沼泽地受阻，观察地形找到绕路小道，克服障碍后继续前进，充满成就感。
英文：He packed his bag, checking the map and compass. Chose a route leading deep into the forest. Setting out in the morning light, he began his solo adventure. Along the way, he encountered a swampy area that blocked his path. He carefully observed the terrain and found a narrow path around the swamp. After overcoming the obstacle, he continued forward, filled with a sense of accomplishment.
（九）比赛开始（马术、篮球、足球、钢琴、小提琴、演讲等）
做好准备工作，等待比赛开始，比赛开始信号发出后全力投入比赛，适应比赛节奏，调整战术，全力冲刺，直至比赛结束。
示例：他检查马鞍和缰绳确保正常，聚精会神等待裁判哨声，哨响后策马飞奔，感受马蹄震动迅速进入状态，中途发现落后便调整骑马节奏，最后一圈全力冲刺，终点线前超越对手。
英文：He checked the saddle and reins to ensure everything was in place. Focused intensely, waiting for the referee’s whistle. As soon as the whistle blew, he urged his horse into a gallop. Feeling the horse’s hooves pounding the ground, he quickly found his rhythm. Midway, he realized he was falling behind, so he adjusted his riding pace. On the final lap, he gave it his all in a sprint. The finish line was in sight, and he finally overtook his opponent.
（十）比赛结束获奖
比赛结束后等待结果公布，听到自己获奖后表达激动与感激，上台领奖，分享获奖感言。
示例：比赛结束哨声响起，他大口喘气站在赛场边等待结果，听到自己名字时不敢相信，兴奋地与队友击掌庆祝，走上领奖台接过奖杯，眼中闪烁泪光，在观众掌声中分享获奖感言，感谢支持他的人。
英文：The whistle signaling the end of the match blew, and he panted heavily. Stood on the sidelines waiting for the results. When he heard his name, he could hardly believe his ears. He jumped up in excitement, high-fiving his teammates. Stepping onto the podium, he took the trophy with tears in his eyes. Amidst the applause of the audience, he shared his acceptance speech, thanking everyone who supported him.
（十一）反思时的动作行为
沉思过去的经历，分析事件的得失，思考改进的方法，做出新的决定，付诸实践。
示例：他坐在窗前凝视远方，回想最近发生的事，细细分析得失找问题根源，思考改进方法并决定改变策略，最终起身准备重新开始，坚定迈出第一步，朝新方向前进。
英文：He sat by the window, gazing into the distance, reflecting on everything that had happened recently. He carefully analyzed the gains and losses, trying to identify the root cause of the problems. Thought about some ways to improve and decided to change his strategy. Finally, he stood up, ready to start again. He took the first step resolutely, moving toward a new direction.
（十二）野外迷路寻找回家的路
意识到迷路后冷静下来观察环境，查找地图或使用指南针，选择一个方向，途中确认路线，终于找到正确路径，最终回家。
示例：他意识到迷路停下脚步，强迫自己冷静观察地形，拿出地图和指南针确定位置，选择最可能的方向前进，边走边确认路线，看到熟悉地标后松了口气，几小时后安全到家。
英文：He realized he was lost and stopped in his tracks. Forced himself to calm down and carefully observe the surrounding terrain. Pulled out his map and compass, trying to pinpoint his location. Chose the most likely direction to lead him out. As he walked, he kept checking to ensure he was on the right path. Finally, he saw a familiar landmark in the distance and felt a sense of relief. A few hours later, he safely made it back home.
（十三）在屋子里回忆美好的过去
走进房间看到熟悉物品，触发记忆，坐下静静回忆，情感涌上心头，轻轻抚摸那些物品，对过去充满怀念。
示例：他走进曾经的书房，看到书架摆满熟悉书籍，每本书都承载回忆，他拿起一本书翻开扉页，画面浮现，坐在椅子上闭眼回忆，眼中含泪抚摸书页，仿佛回到过去，对那些日子充满怀念。
英文：He walked into his old study, the shelves still lined with those familiar books. Each book carried a beautiful memory. He gently picked up a book and opened the first page, the images of those times flooding his mind. He sat down in the chair, closed his eyes, and let the memories wash over him. Tears welled up in his eyes as he gently touched the pages, as if transported back to that carefree era. He was filled with longing for those days.
（十四）小动物在野外探险发现人类
小动物在野外探险，发现陌生气味或声音，顺着气味/声音小心靠近，看到人类的身影，观察人类的行为，做出是否靠近或逃跑的决定，采取行动。
示例：小兔子在森林探险，闻到陌生味道听到奇怪声音，顺着气味和声音靠近空地，拨开树枝看到人在树下休息，紧张观察人类动作，犹豫后决定退回树丛，在安全距离继续观察。
英文：The little rabbit was exploring the forest, sniffing the various scents in the air. Suddenly, it caught a strange smell and heard some unusual sounds. Following the scent and sound, it cautiously approached a clearing. Pushing aside a few branches, it saw a human sitting under a tree, resting. The rabbit nervously observed the human’s movements, unsure whether to approach. In the end, it decided to retreat back into the bushes, continuing to watch from a safe distance.
四、学习动作链的意义及运用方法
学习动作链旨在理解“动作构造逻辑”，日常练习和考场上，不能直接套用，而要根据具体情境将不同动作链灵活组合、扩写或者改写，让故事内容丰富、逻辑合理。
综合演练
In 1945, a 12-year-old boy saw a beautiful brooch(胸针) in a shop window that set his heart racing. But the price－five dollars－was too high for Reuben Earle. Five dollars would buy almost a week's food for his family.
Reuben couldn't ask his father for the money. Everything his father made through fishing went to his mother, Dora. Slim and beautiful, she was the center of the home, the glue that held it together. The housework was never-ending, and she struggled to support their five children but she was happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared about.
Nevertheless, he opened the shop's weathered (风化的)door and went inside, Standing proud and straight in his flour－sack(面粉袋改做的) shirt and washed－out trousers, he told the shopkeeper what he wanted, adding, "But I don't have the money right now. Can you please hold it for some time
"I'll try," the shopkeeper smiled. "People around here don't usually have that kind of money to spend on things. It should keep for a while."
Reuben respectfully touched his worn cap and walked out.
He would raise the money and not tell anybody, for he thought Mum would get surprised when she saw that brooch. On hearing the sound of hammering from a side street, Reuben suddenly had an idea that he could raise money by selling the used nail bags(装钉子的麻袋). People built their own buildings in Bay Roberts, using nails bought in bags from a local factory. Sometimes the used nail bags were thrown away at the construction site, and Reuben knew he could sell them back to the factory for five cents a piece.
That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty soda tin.
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph l: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan.
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Paragraph 2: Finally, the time came!
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翻译小练习：
鲁本又冷又饿，在街上徘徊，小心翼翼地寻找指甲袋。
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为了省更多的钱，他甚至决定一大早送报纸。
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尽管他感到筋疲力尽，但他仍然坚持这个计划。
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商店橱窗里的胸针提醒他，他所做的是值得的。
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经过长时间的努力，他终于成功了。
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他拿出汽水罐，把硬币倒出来，开始数。
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五美元！他的努力得到了回报！
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鲁本拿着汽水罐，冲到商店去买胸针。
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当他拿到漂亮的胸针时，他冲进前门，把它放在朵拉和阿普斯的手里。
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多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。
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她说不出话来，高兴极了，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
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参考答案：
鲁本又冷又饿，在街上徘徊，小心翼翼地寻找指甲袋。
Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered the streets, searching for the nail bags carefully.
为了省更多的钱，他甚至决定一大早送报纸。
To save more money, he even decided to deliver papers in the early morning.
尽管他感到筋疲力尽，但他仍然坚持这个计划。
Exhausted and tired as he felt, he still stuck to the plan.
商店橱窗里的胸针提醒他，他所做的是值得的。
It was the brooch in the shop window that reminded him that what he did was worthwhile.
经过长时间的努力，他终于成功了。
After a long time of hard work, he made it eventually.
他拿出汽水罐，把硬币倒出来，开始数。
He took out the soda tin, poured the coins out and began to count.
五美元！他的努力得到了回报！
Five dollars! His hard work paid off!
鲁本拿着汽水罐，冲到商店去买胸针。
Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch.
当他拿到漂亮的胸针时，他冲进前门，把它放在朵拉和阿普斯的手里。
The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora&apos’s hand.
多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。
Never had Dora received such a gift.
她说不出话来，高兴极了，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
参考范文：
Paragraph 1: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan. Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered the streets, searching for the nail bags carefully. To save more money, he even decided to deliver papers in the early morning. Exhausted and tired as he felt, he still stuck to the plan. It was the brooch in the shop window that reminded him that what he did was worthwhile. After a long time of hard work, he made it eventually.
Paragraph 2: Finally the time came! He took out the soda tin, poured the coins out and began to count. Five dollars! His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora&apos’s hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
高中英语读后续写素材大全
第一部分.时间描写 (一)
时间描写1
“一······就······”
①连词
*as soon as...,...
*the moment/the minute/the instant...,...
*immediately/directly/instantly...,...
②介词
*on/upon(doing)sth.
on/upon(sb's)arrival(at/in...) 一到达······
on/upon(sb's)return(from...to...)来回一…
on/upon(sb's)departure(from...) 一离开··...
*at the sight of ... 一看到···..·
at the thought/idea of...一想到······
at the mention of ...一提到······
③倒装句型
*No sooner had+ S+ done...than...did...
*Hardly had + S+ done...when ...did...
④非谓语动词
*Doing.......
注1:连词组“－······就······”表将来时从句时态的替代现象
The moment the meeting ends, we will set off for the station.
As soon as she hears from him, she will no longer worry.
Instantly we get there, we will visit him.
注2:倒装句型组“－··就···...”常用来表过去
Hardly had we seen him when we knew he would have a hard time passing the exam.
No sooner had they finished watering the garden than it began to rain.
1. As soon as I knew I was in the team, it was like I was walking on air.
一得知我加入了这个队,我高兴得像飞上了天.
2.The moment she got to know the ropes, there was no stopping her.
一旦她掌握决窍了,就什么也难不住她了.
3. The minute he sees her, he feels like he is in the room with an angel.
每当他看见她时,他感觉就像和天使同处一室.
4. I bolted the door the instant I saw the bat.
我一看到那只蝙蝠就把门闩上了.
5. Immediately I've done it I feel completely disgusted with myself.
我一做完那件事就对自己感到十分厌恶.
6. Directly she had gone, I remembered her name.
她一走,我就想起了她的名字.
7.He made for the door instantly he heard the knock.
他一听到敲门声,就朝门走去.
8.There was a letter waiting for him on his return.
他一回来就有一封信等着他看.
9. Parkes was arrested on her arrival from New York.
帕克斯一从纽约回来就被捕了.
10.On his departure from the galleys, it had been nineteen years since he had shed a tear.
直到出狱的那天,十九年中,他没有流过一滴泪.
11. They exchanged a firm handshake on parting.
他们临别时紧紧地握手.
12.On arriving home in the evening, I saw “Happy Apple” crying, so desperately.
晚上一回到家,我就看见“开心苹果”哭了,哭得好伤心呀.
13.At the sight of her appearance on the stage, the hall rang with thunderous applause.
一看见她出现在舞台上,大厅里就掌声雷动.
14.My eyes popped at the sight of the rich variety of food on show.
我一看到展示的花样繁多的食品,眼睛都瞪圆了.
15.Her eyes brightened at the sight of Edmund.
她一看见埃德蒙,眼睛便亮了起来.
16.I'm hugging myself at the thought of seeing him again so soon.
－想到这么快又能见到他,我喜不自胜.
17.At the mention of her father who had died two months before, she burst into tears.
一提到她两个月前去世的父亲,她就痛哭起来.
18.No sooner had his name been mentioned than they couldn't help laughing.
一提到他的名字,他们就忍不住笑了起来.
19. The play had hardly started when there was a power cut.
Hardly had the play started when there was a power cut.
演出刚一开始就停电了.
20.Entering it, he found nobody in the room.
进入房间,他发现里面没有人.
时间描写2
“·····就在此时·····”
比较:
He was on the point of speaking but then thought better of it.
他刚想开口,但一转念,又不说了.
On being sent to hospital, he was on the point of breathing his last.
他被送到医院的时候已经奄奄一息了.
表“····就在此时··....”
①表“A刚刚发生,就在这时B发生了”
...had (just) done...when...did...
②表“A正在发生,就在这时B发生了”
...was/were doing ...when...did...
...was/were in the middle of doing ...when...did...
③表“A正要发生,就在这时B发生了”
...was/were about to do ...when...did...
...was/were on the point of doing ...when...did...
...was/were on the verge of doing ...when...did...
...was/were close to doing ... when...did...
...was/were near to doing ...when...did...
1.We had just finished our homework when the fire broke out.
我们刚做完作业,就在此时火灾发生了.
2. The villagers were having a meeting when he turned up at the gate.
The villagers were in the middle of(having)a meeting when he turned up at the gate.
村民们正在开会,就在这时他出现在了门口.
3. The students were about to plant trees when it began to rain.
The students were on the point of planting trees when it began to rain.
学生们正准备植树,就在这时下雨了.
4.They were working against time when the bad news arrived.
他们正在争分夺秒地工作,这时坏消息传来了.
5.They were about to head for the hospital when it came as a surprise that he had died.
他们正要去医院,这时传来了他去世的消息,让他们大吃一惊.
6. I had just cleaned the floor and was about to go out when the earthquake broke out.
我刚把地板擦干净,正要出去,这时地震了.
7. The thief was on the point of putting his hand into the lady's handbag when the bus suddenly stopped.
小偷正要把手伸进那位女士的手提袋中,这时公交车突然停了下来.
8. She was on the point of continuing her walk, when she caught a glimpse of a gentleman with-in the sort of grove which edged the park; he was moving that way; and fearful of its being Mr. Darcy, she was directly retreating.
她正要继续走下去,忽然看到花园旁的小林子里有一个男人正朝这儿走来;她怕是达西先生,便立刻往回走.
9.The climber was on the point of death when they found him.
当他们发现那个登山者时他已奄奄一息.
10. He was on the verge of losing his temper with his wife, when she uttered a cry.
他正要对妻子发脾气,忽然妻子哭叫起来.
11.You know, I was on the verge of quitting my job when my boss came in and offered me a raise.
你知道,老板今天给我加薪时我正打算要辞职呢.
12.He was close to giving up his hoop dreams, when former Sonics head coach Bob Weiss called.
当前西雅图超音速主教练鲍勃·维斯给他打电话时,他几乎就要放弃他的篮球梦想了.
13.I was near to tears when she said goodbye.
她道别时,我都快哭了.
14.We were about to cross the road when a car suddenly zipped past.
我们正要过马路时,一辆汽车突然呼地一下驶了过去.
15. They were in the middle of a party when the parents came back suddenly.
父母突然返回时,他们正在开晚会.
时间描写3
“直到······才······”
*...not...until...
*Not until...be/助动词／情态动词＋
*It is not until...that...
1. His ability to write didn't gel again until 1974.
=Not until 1974 did his ability to write gel again.
=It was not until 1974 that his ability to write gelled again.
直到1974年,他的写作才华才又得以发挥.
2.The teacher has not found the hidden papers until recently.
=Not until recently has the teacher found the hidden papers.
=It is not until recently that the teacher has found the hidden papers.
直到最近老师才找到被藏起来的卷子.
3. Their minds were not set at rest until they heard that she was safe and sound.
=Not until they heard that she was safe and sound were their minds set at rest.
=It was not until they heard that she was safe and sound that their minds were set at rest.
直到听到她平安无事的消息,大家心里才一块石头落地.
4. I did not come to myself until one of my classmates patted me on the shoulder.
Not until one of my classmates patted me on the shoulder did I come to myself.
It was not until one of my classmates patted me on the shoulder that I came to myself.
直到我的同学拍了一下我的肩膀,我才回过神来.
5. People say,“ Guilin's scenery is peerless in the world.” I didn't find it really worthy of the reputation until I visited the place.
=People say,“ Guilin's scenery is peerless in the world.”Not until I visited the place did I find it really worthy of the reputation.
=People say,“ Guilin's scenery is peerless in the world. "It was not until I visited the place that I found it really worthy of the reputation.
人们都说“桂林山水甲天下”,到桂林一看,果然名不虚传.
6. You don't find your great talent until you stretch your wings.
=Not until you stretch your wings do you find your great talent.
=It is not until you stretch your wings that you find your great talent.
当你展开了翅膀,你才发现自己巨大的天赋.
7.You will not realize the importance of health until you lose it.
=Not until you lose it will you realize the importance of health.
=It is not until you lose it that you will realize the importance of health.
直到失去健康,你才会意识到它的重要性.
时间描写4
“边······边······当······期间；随着······”(两个动作同时发生)
表“边···边·...”(两个动作同时发生)
*S+V...as+ S+V...(同主语,两个延续性动作)
表“当···...期间”(两个动作同时发生)
*S+V…while doing...“当······期间;边······边····..”(同主语,两个延续性动作或一短一长)
*Doing...,S+V.....“当···...期间”(同主语,两个延续性动作或一短一长)
表“随着·····.”(两个动作同时发生)
*As+S1. +V1...,S2.+V2...(异主语,两个延续性动作)
*With+ n.+ doing...,...
*over timewith time going byas time goes/went by
1. He sang loudly as he walked along.
他边向前走边大声唱着歌.
2.As she listened, she played an imaginary piano on her knees.
她一边听着,一边在膝盖上弹奏想象中的钢琴.
3.He looked behind occasionally as he went forward in the forest.
他在森林里一边向前走,一边偶尔回头看.
4. Start with your toes and as you breathe, imagine them becoming one with the Earth.
从你的脚趾头开始,一边进行呼吸,一边想象一下它们和地球合为一体.
5. “Do what ”He held my key out as he spoke. As I reached for it, he dropped it into my palm.
“做什么？”他一边说着,一边举起我的钥匙.等我伸手拿的时候,他把钥匙放在了我的掌心.
6.1 have got into the habit of listening to music while doing exercises.
我养成了边做作业边听音乐的习惯.
7.Word came yesterday that they were killed while trying to reach the summit.
昨天传来消息说,他们在试图登上峰顶时遇难了.
8. He fell asleep while doing his homework.
Doing his homework, he fell asleep.
他做着做着功课就睡着了.
9. She got married while working as a waitress.
Working as a waitress, she got married.
她在当服务生期间结婚了.
10.Pat killed time by watching TV while waiting for her.
Waiting for he her, Pat killed time by watching TV.
帕特在等她时边看电视边打发时间.
11. While enjoying the great convenience online shopping brings to us, on no account should we ignore the danger of being cheated. Many cheats are also taking advantage of the Internet to accumulate wealth by deceiving.
在享受网上购物为我们带来的极大便利的同时,我们绝不应该忽略被诈骗的危险.很多骗子也在利用因特网诈骗敛财.
12.As time went on/by, she grew more and more beautiful.
=With time going on/by, she grew more and more beautiful.
=Over time she grew more and more beautiful.
随着时间的推移,她变得越来越漂亮了.
13.As time went on, a genuine friendship grew up between them.
=With time going on, a genuine friendship grew up between them.
随着时间的流逝,他们之间产生了真诚的友谊.
14.As the evening progressed and the dinner plates were cleared away, it was time for our blessing bowl “ceremony".
=With the evening progressing and the dinner plates being cleared away, it was time for our blessing bowl “ceremony”.
夜深了,盘子里的晚餐也都吃光了,是时候开始我们的祝福碗“仪式”了.
15.As the days passed, Lesley's frustration mounted and she felt a sense of alarm.
=With the days passing, Lesley's frustration mounted and she felt a sense of alarm.
时间一天天地过去,莱斯利日益沮丧,她有一种恐慌的感觉.
16.As the years slipped by, my daughter passed into the teen-age vale, developing a youthful proficiency on the piano.
=With the years slipping by, my daughter passed into the teen-age vale, developing a youthful proficiency on the piano.
时间一年年地过去,我女儿已是十几岁的少女,成长为一名熟练的青年钢琴手.
17.As time has progressed, so has our understanding of this field.
随着时间的发展,我们对这一领域的理解也在发展.
时间描写5
“在······之后;说完这些话后” (两个动作先后发生)
表“在······之后”(两个动作先后发生)
*After+ S+ V...,.
*After doing/After being done...,...(同主语)
*Having done/Having been done...,...(同主语)
表“说完这些话后”(两个动作紧接着发生)
*with thatwith these wordswith those words
1. After she finished the housework, she went out.
=After finishing the housework, she went out.
=Having finished the housework, she went out.
做完家务后,她出去了.
2. After I was blamed for nothing, I was very angry.
=After being blamed for nothing, I was very angry.
=Having been blamed for nothing, I was very angry.
在我无缘无故受到责备之后,我非常生气.
3. After I had done it carefully, I had a breathing spell.
=After doing it carefully, I had a breathing spell.
=Having done it carefully, I had a breathing spell.
小心翼翼地做完后,我舒了一口气.
4. After I had done my job in establishing the company, I decided that it was time I faded out and left the work to my sons.
=After doing my job in establishing the company, I decided that it was time I faded out and left the work to my sons.
=Having done my job in establishing the company, I decided that it was time I faded out and left the work to my sons.
公司成立之后,我决定淡出并把工作留给儿子们去干.
5. After they discussed the first question, they proceeded to the second.
=After discussing the first question, they proceeded to the second.
=Having discussed the first question, they proceeded to the second.
他们讨论了第一个问题,进而讨论第二个.
6. He muttered a few words of apology and with that he left.
他低声叽咕了几句道歉的话,然后就走了.
7.With that, he disappeared into his inner room.
说完这些话,他就走进里面的房间去了.
8.With these words the nightingale sang the last song, then she flew away into the night.
说完这些话后,夜莺便唱了最后一首歌,然后飞向夜空.
9.With those words the impostor shook them both by the hand, with an air, and left the house.
这个骗子说完了那几句话后,便装出那副傲慢的样子和他们两人一一握手,然后离开了房间.
10. With these words still ringing in his ears, he got back into his old habits.
这些话还在耳边回响,他却已故态复萌了.
时间描写6
“······(多少时间)才／就······”
······(多少时间)才······”
*It was long before...did...(过去)
*It will be long before...do(es)...(将来)
表“······(多少时间)就······”
*It was not long before...did......did...before long.(过去)
*It will not be long before...do(es)......will do...before long.(将来)
1. It was long before he returned home.
很久后他才回家.
2. It will be long before he returns home.
很久后他才会回家.
3. It was three weeks before he returned home.
三周后他才回家.
4.It will be three weeks before he returns home.
三周后他才会回家.
5. It was not long before he returned home.
He returned home before long.
不久他就回家了.
6.It will not be long before he returns home.
He will return home before long.
不久他就会回家.
7. It will not be long before we turn our hope into reality.
过不了多久我们的希望就会变成现实.
8. It was not long before the news was widely circulated.
这个消息不久就哄传开了.
9. It was not long before I realized the enormity of my faux pas.
没过多久,我就意识到自己有多么失态.
10. It was not long before he found favour with his boss.
不久他便得到了老板的垂青.
11.It was not long before his anger melted. Whatever initial worries we had about the plane soon vanished.
不久他的火气就消了.开始时我们对这架飞机的不放心,不久就烟消云散了.
12. He was very excited, and it was long before he calmed down.
他很激动,心情久久不能平静.
时间描写7
“······发生已经(多少时间了)”
*It is/has been十多少时间＋since...did...(“现在”为参照时间)
*It was+多少时间＋since...had done...(“过去”为参照时间)
1.It is decades since the accident happened.
事故发生已有几十年了.
2. It is three years since he died.
=He died three years ago.
=He has been dead for three years.
他去世已经三年了.
3.She said that it was three years since he had died.
=She said that he had died three years before.
=She said that he had been dead for three years.
她说他已经去世三年了.
4. It has been three years since they got married.
=They got married three years ago.
=They have been married for three years.
他们已经结婚三年了.
5.It is ten years since we parted in Yan'an.
延安一别,于今十年.
6.It was years since I'd learned any German, and I really had to start again from scratch.
我好多年没学德语了,真的要重新从头开始了.
7.It was many years since James Bond had accepted a dare.
自詹姆斯,邦德当初接受挑战之后,已经有好多年过去了.
时间描写8
“当······发生时,时间是······”
*It was+什么时间＋when......
*It must have been+什么时间＋When...当某事发生时肯定是什么时间
*It might have been+什么时间+when...当某事发生时可能是什么时间
1. It was around nine o'clock when I drove back home because it was already dark.
我开车回家的时候大约是九点钟,因为天已经黑了.
2. It must have been around nine o'clock when I drove back home because it was already dark.
我开车回家的时候肯定是九点左右,因为天已经黑了.
3. It was almost midnight when the fire broke out in the neighborhood.
当隔壁邻居家大火发生的时候,时间几乎是半夜了.
4.It was October 1,1949 when New China was founded.
1949年10月1日新中国成立.
5.It might have been a cold morning when I was hurrying to school.
那可能是个寒冷的早晨,我匆忙上学.
时间描写9
“正是在······时间······发生了” (强调句)
*It+ be+什么时间(被强调部分)＋that...
1. It was at nine o'clock that I drove back home because it was already dark.
正是在九点钟,我开车回家,因为天已经黑了.
2. It was at midnight that the fire broke out in the neighborhood.
正是在半夜,大火发生了.
3.It was on October 1,1949 that New China was founded.
正是在1949年10月1日,新中国成立.
4. It was on a cold morning that I was hurrying to school.
正是在一个寒冷的早晨,我匆忙上学去.
5.It was last Sunday that we met each other for the first time.
正是上周日,我们第一次见面.
6.It is every day that they help the old grandma with her house work.
每天他们都帮助老奶奶做家务.
时间描写10
“每当….../无论何时......”
*Every time+ S+V...,S+V..
*Each time+ S+V...,S+V..
*Any time+ S+V...,S+V...
*Whenever+ S+V...,S+V
*No matter when+ S+V...,S+V...
1.Every time I catch of myself in the mirror, I feel so disappointed.
每次我警见镜子里的自己就觉得沮丧.
2.Every time it rains, our car acts up.
每当下雨,我们的车就失灵.
3.Every time they went dancing, they ended up in a bad mood.
每次他们去跳舞,都会不欢而散.
4.Each time this was mentioned, he would give a bitter smile and shake his head.
每逢提起这件事,他总是苦笑着摇摇头.
5.This was surely a magic formula for Old Fan as his head ached each time he heard it.
对老范来说,这就是紧箍咒,每当听说起保管头痛.
6.She had a small, mean mouth that curled disapprovingly each time her husband wrote something in his diary.
每次丈夫写日记时,她都会不满地撇撇那张刻薄的小嘴.
7.Any time you told one of them something, they'd swear you'd mixed them up and told the other.
每次你告诉他们俩当中一人某件事情时,他们都会发誓说你把他们弄混了,和你说话的是另外那个.
8. They don't like my moustache and my long hair, so they get at me whenever they can.
他们不喜欢我的小胡子和长发,一有机会便数落我.
9.Whenever we met with difficulties, they came to help us.
每当我们遇到困难时,他们总来帮助我们.
10. Whenever I'm hard up for money, he will empty his purse to help me.
每当我手头拮据的时候,他总是倾囊相助.
11.No matter when my motherland needs me, I will go without hesitation.
无论什么时候,只要祖国需要我,我就会毫不犹豫地出发.
12.No matter when you come, I will extend my deepest welcome to you.
无论你何时来,我都将以最大的热忱欢迎你.
13.No matter when I'm unhappy, it is my friend who cheers me up.
不管什么时候我不高兴,总是我的朋友使我振作起来.
时间描写11
“这／那／它是第······次······;当第·····次......时，······”
表“这／那／它是第······次······”
*This/That/It was the first/second/last time that ...had done/did...
*This/That/It is the first/second/last time that...have done...
*This/That/It will be the first/second/last time that...have done...
1.This is the first time that we have all been together for a long time.
这是我们第一次在一起这么久,
2.This is the first time that I have had a travel alone, so l feel nervous and excited.
这是我第一次独自旅行,我感到既紧张又兴奋.
3.It is the first time that she has experienced disappointment.
这是她第一次感受到失望,
4.Sitting at the dining room table, I slumped in my chair, aware that this was the first time
since I came home from work that I'd been able to just sit down.
在餐厅桌旁,慵懒地坐在椅上,猛然发现这是下班后我第一次能够坐下.
5.I was lucky because that was the second time I had visited Japan that year.
我很幸运,那是我那年第二次访问日本.
6.Her father had been transferred and that was the last time that I saw/had seen her.
她爸爸被调走了,那是我最后一次见到她.
7.The festival will be the first time in 13 years that Dou, Zhang and he have performed together.
这次会演将是窦、张和他13年来的第一次共同表演.
8. The first time I saw you, I discovered that I finally found the other half!
从见你的第一眼起,我就发现我终于找到我的另一半了！
9. The first time she drank alcohol, he fell apart.
当她第一次喝酒时,他崩溃了.
10.She succeeded the second time she took the examination.
她第二次参加考试时考及格了.
11. Mary didn't even thank us for helping her, so the next time she needs help she can whistle for it.
我们帮助了玛丽但她甚至连感谢的话都没说,下次她需要帮助时就休想得到了.
12. The next time we saw her she was still alive and had redoubled her efforts to do better next time.
当我们又一次见到她时,她还活着,正在为下一次做得更好而加倍努力.
13. The last time she saw him, her father cupped his hands and shouted “I'll see you in New York”.
The last time she saw her father was when he cupped his hands and shouted “I'll see you in New York”.
她和父亲永别时,父亲拱着手掌喊道:“我会在纽约见你.”
表“当第······次······时,····..”
*The first/second/last/next time+ S+V...,S+V...
*The first/second/last/next time+ be+ when...
时间描写12
“曾经一度······;有时(可能)会······”
*There was a time/were times when ...
*There used to be a time/times when ...
*There is a time/are times when...
*There will be a time/times when...
*There may be a time/times when...
1.There was a time when Charles was coasting at school and I should have told him to buckle down.
有一段时间查尔斯在学校不太用功,我当时应该让他加把劲的.
2.There was a time when life was very hard for Madame Curie.
曾经有过一个时期,居里夫人的生活非常艰难.
3.There was a time when I wanted to quit.
我曾经一度很想放弃.
4.There were times when I was afraid of you, but my fear made me love you the more.
你也曾使我畏惧,但畏惧之情使我更加爱你.
5.There were times when the challenges of writing such a huge novel almost defeated her.
有些时候,创作如此宏大的一部小说所面临的挑战几乎把她给难倒了.
6.There used to be a time when the luxury stores on the Fifth Avenue of New York City(NYC) were frequented by Chinese consumers.
曾经有一段时间,纽约第五大道的奢侈品店是中国消费者经常光顾的.
7. Grandpa would not always join in children's conversing, but there will always be a time when something would catch his attention.
祖父并不总是加入到这种孩童们的嬉戏之中,只是有时候总有那么点东西能够吸引他的注意.
8. There will be a time when your life is similar to a movie.
有时你生活中的事也像电影中的一样.
9.There may be a time in the future when computers incorporate a certain type of associations as humans do.
也许有一天,计算机将和人类的大脑一样,也会形成一种特定的联系.
10. There are times when subtlety is the more powerful weapon.
有时候细节是更有力的武器.
时间描写13
“在未来的......在随后的......”
*in/for the+时间名词＋to comein/for the+ coming+时间名词
*in/for the+ following+时间名词in/for the+时间名词＋that followed
1. In days to come, I'll just live with the shame and the sense of insignificance.
在未来的日子里,我将需要继续面对这种羞耻和自卑.
2. I sincerely hope in the days to come we can taste the ups and downs of life.
我真诚地希望在未来的日子里,我们能一起品味生活中的酸甜苦辣.
3. We hope it will mark the beginning of our close cooperation in the years to come.
我们希望它成为今后我们多年紧密合作的契机.
4. I believe this spirit will drive us on to be even more successful in the years to come.
我相信这种精神会驱使我们取得更多的成功.
5.Much will still be demanded of us in the weeks and months to come.
在未来的几个星期到几个月里,我们仍有许多事情要做.
6.Things are changing around you, so whatever was true a month ago won't necessarily hold true in the weeks to come.
你周围一切都在变化,一个月前正确的事情接下来几周就不一定对了.
7.The London Eye will last for years to come as a monument to the new millennium.
伦敦眼将一直屹立在泰晤士河畔,它是新千年的标志性建筑.
8.I'll stay at this hotel for days to come.
在之后的几天中,我将住在这家旅馆.
9. He predicted a bitter fight in the following week.
=He predicted a bitter fight in the week that followed.
他预测下周会有一场苦战.
10.For the following three years Germany would have a hard time, but starting in 1948,she would rise again.
在今后三年内,德国的处境很困难,但从1948年开始,德国就会重新抬头.
11.You will be notified of the result by email in the coming day.
You will be notified of the result by email in the day to come.
结果会在翌日以电邮通知.
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动作链场景突破法
在英语读后续写中，合理构建动作链能使故事更加连贯、生动。本文详细梳理了25种常见情境下的动作链，助力读者掌握动作构造逻辑，提升写作能力。
一、灾难相关动作链
（一）遇到火灾/水灾/雪灾/地震/洪水
察觉异常（如闻到焦味、听到巨响等），迅速确认灾难源头，接着寻找最近的逃生路径，随后迅速逃离现场，最后找到安全位置避险。
示例：她闻到刺鼻焦味，停下手中活计，四处查看发现厨房起火，赶忙抓起手机冲向大门，边跑边拨打119，跑到街道安全处后，才松了一口气。
英文：She smelled a sharp, acrid burning odor and immediately stopped what she was doing. She looked around and discovered that the kitchen was engulfed in flames. She quickly grabbed her phone and rushed towards the door. While dialing 911, she ran out onto the street. After reaching a safe spot, she finally breathed a sigh of relief.
（二）各种灾难救人
听到求救声音后，确定求救者位置，准备救援工具，进入救援现场展开救援，成功救出伤者，并将伤者带到安全区域。
示例：他隐约听到废墟下的呼救声，立刻确定声源，找来铁杆当撬杠，小心翼翼挪开瓦砾，成功救出受困者，随后背起对方迅速撤离到安全地带。
英文：He vaguely heard faint cries for help from beneath the rubble. Immediately located the source. Found a metal rod to use as a lever. Carefully lifted away the debris. Successfully pulled the trapped person out. He carried the person to a safe area.
（三）各种灾难求救
意识到无法独自脱险时，寻找求救工具（电话、信号设备等），发送求救信号（拨打电话、发射信号），等待救援并确认救援抵达。
示例：她被困水中无法游到岸边，拼命寻找漂浮木板，抓住木板后用手机求救，等待时紧紧抓着木板，听到直升机声后心情逐渐平静。
英文：She realized she was trapped in the water and couldn’t swim to shore. She desperately looked for a floating plank. Grabbing the plank, she used her phone to call for help. While waiting for rescue, she held onto the plank tightly. Hearing the sound of a helicopter in the distance, her anxiety started to fade.
（四）各种灾难逃生
察觉到灾难逼近，确定最佳逃生路径，准备逃生用品，按照计划逃生，确保安全后停止行动。
示例：他感到地面剧烈震动，马上确定通往出口的最短路线，拿上背包里的急救包和水，沿着走廊迅速朝出口跑去，到达户外空旷地后，停下检查自己是否受伤。
英文：He felt the ground shake violently. Immediately determined the shortest route to the exit. Grabbed the first-aid kit and water from his backpack. Ran quickly down the hallway towards the exit. After reaching the open outdoor area, he stopped to check if he was injured.
（五）灾难结束之后庆幸
确认灾难结束，检查自身安全，环顾四周确定无危险，感叹生还幸运，并与他人分享劫后余生的感受。
示例：地震停止后，他拍拍身体确认没受伤，环顾四周确认无新危险，长舒一口气感叹自己还活着，随后与周围幸存者紧紧拥抱。
英文：The earthquake finally stopped. He patted his body to make sure he wasn’t injured. Looked around to confirm there was no new danger. He exhaled deeply, saying, “I’m alive!” Then embraced the surrounding survivors tightly.
二、人物相关动作链
（一）发现子女/妻子/丈夫不见
发现家人不在预期位置，寻找可能去向，询问周围的人，联系家人和朋友，报警或求助，持续寻找。
示例：她发现儿子不在卧室，迅速检查整个房子，问邻居无果后，拿起电话急切联系家人和朋友，最终报警求助，整晚都在街上四处寻找。
英文：She noticed her son wasn’t in his bedroom. Quickly checked the entire house. Asked the neighbors, but no one had seen him. She grabbed her phone and urgently called family and friends. Finally reported to the police and asked for help. She spent the whole night searching the streets.
（二）找人一波三折
初步线索失败后，重整计划寻找，新的线索引导行动，途中遇到挫折或意外，最终找到目标。
示例：他先去常去的咖啡馆找她，没找到后重新思考她可能去的地方，想起她提过的公园，在公园找了很久，还与陌生人发生争执，终于在偏僻长椅上发现她静静坐着。
英文：He first went to the usual café to find her, but she wasn’t there. Reconsidered where she might have gone. Suddenly remembered she mentioned a park. Searched the park for a long time, even got into an argument with a stranger. Finally found her sitting quietly on a secluded bench.
（三）朋友/夫妻吵架
意见产生分歧，情绪逐渐升级，进而爆发争吵，言辞激烈，其中一方冷静下来，吵架结束但气氛紧张。
示例：他们讨论晚饭安排时意见分歧，声音逐渐提高且互不相让，最终争吵爆发，她喊道“你从来不考虑我的感受！”，他看着她沉默下来，房间陷入沉默，气氛紧张。
英文：They were discussing dinner plans, and it didn’t take long for their opinions to diverge. Their voices gradually grew louder, neither willing to back down. Finally, the words became sharper, and a full-blown argument erupted. “You never consider my feelings!” she shouted. He looked at her, saying nothing, slowly calming down. The room fell into silence, tension hanging in the air.
（四）内心挣扎
面临选择时内心纠结，不断反复权衡利弊，决定采取行动并付诸实践。
示例：他站在门口握着信，内心充满挣扎，虽不断告诉自己这是正确决定，但又担心后果，反复踱步手心冒汗，最终深吸一口气将信放进信箱，做出决定后肩膀顿感轻松。
英文：He stood at the door, holding the letter, his heart full of conflict. He kept telling himself this was the right decision. But another voice echoed in his mind, reminding him of the potential consequences. He paced back and forth, palms sweating. Finally, he took a deep breath and dropped the letter into the mailbox. The decision was made, and a weight lifted from his shoulders.
（五）筹备惊喜活动
产生惊喜的想法，计划活动细节，准备惊喜材料，实施惊喜，观察对方反应。
示例：他突然想为她筹备惊喜生日派对，列出宾客名单、挑选场地，购买她喜欢的花和蛋糕并装饰场地，她走进房间时灯光亮起，大家高喊“生日快乐！”，看到她的惊讶与感动，他心里满是满足。
英文：He suddenly thought of organizing a surprise birthday party for her. He made a guest list and chose a suitable venue. Bought her favorite flowers and cake, decorated the venue. When she walked into the room, the lights suddenly came on, and everyone shouted “Happy Birthday!” Seeing the surprise and emotion on her face, his heart was filled with satisfaction.
（六）准备礼物
决定送礼物，选择礼物类型，考虑对方喜好，购买或制作礼物，包装礼物，将礼物送出。
示例：他决定送她特别礼物，想到她提过的书，马上去书店挑选精装版，回家用心包装，她打开礼物时露出灿烂笑容。
英文：He decided to prepare a special gift for her. Remembered she had recently mentioned a particular book. Immediately went to the bookstore and picked out a hardcover edition. At home, he carefully wrapped it in beautiful paper. When she opened the gift, a bright smile appeared on her face.
三、场景相关动作链
（一）欣赏景色
抵达观景点，选定最佳观景位置，放松身体，环顾四周欣赏美景，深呼吸感受空气，内心平静下来。
示例：她走到山顶，选视野开阔处坐下，调整姿势让自己舒适，眼睛扫过山谷风景，深吸清新空气，闭上眼睛感受内心宁静。
英文：She reached the mountain top and found a spot with a wide view to sit down. Adjusted her posture to get comfortable. Let her eyes sweep across every inch of the valley. Took a deep breath, feeling the freshness in the air. Closed her eyes, feeling an overwhelming sense of peace.
（二）发现野生动物
发现不寻常动静，定睛观察，确认是野生动物，慢慢靠近，观察动物行为，保持安全距离。
示例：他听到草丛有动静，停下脚步仔细观察，发现是小鹿觅食，放慢脚步小心靠近，观察小鹿动作，同时始终保持安全距离。
英文：He heard rustling in the bushes. Stopped walking and observed closely. Saw it was a deer foraging. Slowed his pace and cautiously approached. Watched its every move, not wanting to startle it. But kept a safe distance at all times.
（三）救动物
发现动物受困，判断解救方法，获取工具或方法，接近动物，实施救援，检查动物状态。
示例：他看到小狗被困泥潭，判断需用绳子拉出，找来结实树枝和绳子，小心接近安抚小狗，将绳子套在小狗身上拉上岸，获救后检查小狗四肢确保没受伤。
英文：He saw a puppy trapped in a muddy bank by the river. Realized he needed a rope to pull it out. Found a sturdy branch and some rope. Carefully approached the puppy, calming it down. Looped the rope around the puppy and slowly pulled it to safety. After rescuing the puppy, he checked its legs to make sure it wasn’t injured.
（四）猎人发现危险的野兽
感受到威胁，确认野兽位置，准备武器，评估逃跑或战斗的可能性，做出决定，行动以确保安全。
示例：他感到背后寒意，慢慢转身发现熊走来，悄悄拉开弓箭紧盯熊，评估地形后决定采取防御姿态，熊靠近时果断射箭，熊受伤逃跑后他松了口气。
英文：He felt a chill down his spine. Slowly turned around to see a bear approaching him. Quietly drew his bow, eyes locked on the bear. Assessed the surrounding terrain and decided to take a defensive stance. As the bear came closer, he swiftly released the arrow. The bear fled after being hit, and he finally breathed a sigh of relief.
（五）受到野兽攻击
意识到被攻击，尝试躲避，找到武器或防御物，反击或逃跑，确保自己安全。
示例：听到低吼，他转头发现狼扑来，迅速躲闪，狼爪擦过肩膀，他抓起树枝挥向狼，狼被击退，他趁机跑开，跑一段距离确认狼没追来才放心。
英文：A low growl sounded in his ear, and he turned sharply to see a wolf lunging at him. He quickly dodged, the wolf’s claws grazing his shoulder. He grabbed a branch from the ground and swung it hard at the wolf. The wolf retreated, and he seized the moment to sprint away. After running a good distance, he looked back to make sure the wolf wasn’t following before he relaxed slightly.
（六）转危为安
发现自己处于危险之中，冷静思考解决办法，实施行动，成功脱险，重新确认安全。
示例：他被困狭窄山路，两侧是悬崖，深吸一口气让自己冷静，发现大石头作支撑点，小心攀爬避免滑倒，到达安全地带后长舒一口气，环顾四周确认无其他危险。
英文：He found himself trapped on a narrow mountain path, with steep cliffs on both sides. Took a deep breath, trying to calm himself down. Spotted a larger rock that could serve as a foothold. Carefully climbed up, making sure not to slip. Finally reached a safe area, he exhaled deeply and looked around to ensure there was no other danger.
（七）意料之外
事情按计划进行，突发意外，做出应急反应，处理意外，结果出乎意料。
示例：他们按计划野餐，一切顺利，突然下雨，慌忙收拾找避雨处，雨越下越大躲进废弃小屋，虽计划被打乱，但在小屋度过难忘时光。
英文：They went on a picnic as planned, everything was going smoothly. Suddenly, the sky darkened, and it started to rain heavily. They quickly packed up and looked for shelter. But the rain kept pouring, so they had to take refuge in an abandoned hut. Although their plans were disrupted, they ended up having an unforgettable time in the hut.
（八）自己一个人在野外探险
准备探险装备，选择探险路线，出发探险，途中遇到困难，解决问题，继续探险。
示例：他整理背包检查地图和指南针，选了通往森林深处的路线，迎着晨光独自出发，途中遇沼泽地受阻，观察地形找到绕路小道，克服障碍后继续前进，充满成就感。
英文：He packed his bag, checking the map and compass. Chose a route leading deep into the forest. Setting out in the morning light, he began his solo adventure. Along the way, he encountered a swampy area that blocked his path. He carefully observed the terrain and found a narrow path around the swamp. After overcoming the obstacle, he continued forward, filled with a sense of accomplishment.
（九）比赛开始（马术、篮球、足球、钢琴、小提琴、演讲等）
做好准备工作，等待比赛开始，比赛开始信号发出后全力投入比赛，适应比赛节奏，调整战术，全力冲刺，直至比赛结束。
示例：他检查马鞍和缰绳确保正常，聚精会神等待裁判哨声，哨响后策马飞奔，感受马蹄震动迅速进入状态，中途发现落后便调整骑马节奏，最后一圈全力冲刺，终点线前超越对手。
英文：He checked the saddle and reins to ensure everything was in place. Focused intensely, waiting for the referee’s whistle. As soon as the whistle blew, he urged his horse into a gallop. Feeling the horse’s hooves pounding the ground, he quickly found his rhythm. Midway, he realized he was falling behind, so he adjusted his riding pace. On the final lap, he gave it his all in a sprint. The finish line was in sight, and he finally overtook his opponent.
（十）比赛结束获奖
比赛结束后等待结果公布，听到自己获奖后表达激动与感激，上台领奖，分享获奖感言。
示例：比赛结束哨声响起，他大口喘气站在赛场边等待结果，听到自己名字时不敢相信，兴奋地与队友击掌庆祝，走上领奖台接过奖杯，眼中闪烁泪光，在观众掌声中分享获奖感言，感谢支持他的人。
英文：The whistle signaling the end of the match blew, and he panted heavily. Stood on the sidelines waiting for the results. When he heard his name, he could hardly believe his ears. He jumped up in excitement, high-fiving his teammates. Stepping onto the podium, he took the trophy with tears in his eyes. Amidst the applause of the audience, he shared his acceptance speech, thanking everyone who supported him.
（十一）反思时的动作行为
沉思过去的经历，分析事件的得失，思考改进的方法，做出新的决定，付诸实践。
示例：他坐在窗前凝视远方，回想最近发生的事，细细分析得失找问题根源，思考改进方法并决定改变策略，最终起身准备重新开始，坚定迈出第一步，朝新方向前进。
英文：He sat by the window, gazing into the distance, reflecting on everything that had happened recently. He carefully analyzed the gains and losses, trying to identify the root cause of the problems. Thought about some ways to improve and decided to change his strategy. Finally, he stood up, ready to start again. He took the first step resolutely, moving toward a new direction.
（十二）野外迷路寻找回家的路
意识到迷路后冷静下来观察环境，查找地图或使用指南针，选择一个方向，途中确认路线，终于找到正确路径，最终回家。
示例：他意识到迷路停下脚步，强迫自己冷静观察地形，拿出地图和指南针确定位置，选择最可能的方向前进，边走边确认路线，看到熟悉地标后松了口气，几小时后安全到家。
英文：He realized he was lost and stopped in his tracks. Forced himself to calm down and carefully observe the surrounding terrain. Pulled out his map and compass, trying to pinpoint his location. Chose the most likely direction to lead him out. As he walked, he kept checking to ensure he was on the right path. Finally, he saw a familiar landmark in the distance and felt a sense of relief. A few hours later, he safely made it back home.
（十三）在屋子里回忆美好的过去
走进房间看到熟悉物品，触发记忆，坐下静静回忆，情感涌上心头，轻轻抚摸那些物品，对过去充满怀念。
示例：他走进曾经的书房，看到书架摆满熟悉书籍，每本书都承载回忆，他拿起一本书翻开扉页，画面浮现，坐在椅子上闭眼回忆，眼中含泪抚摸书页，仿佛回到过去，对那些日子充满怀念。
英文：He walked into his old study, the shelves still lined with those familiar books. Each book carried a beautiful memory. He gently picked up a book and opened the first page, the images of those times flooding his mind. He sat down in the chair, closed his eyes, and let the memories wash over him. Tears welled up in his eyes as he gently touched the pages, as if transported back to that carefree era. He was filled with longing for those days.
（十四）小动物在野外探险发现人类
小动物在野外探险，发现陌生气味或声音，顺着气味/声音小心靠近，看到人类的身影，观察人类的行为，做出是否靠近或逃跑的决定，采取行动。
示例：小兔子在森林探险，闻到陌生味道听到奇怪声音，顺着气味和声音靠近空地，拨开树枝看到人在树下休息，紧张观察人类动作，犹豫后决定退回树丛，在安全距离继续观察。
英文：The little rabbit was exploring the forest, sniffing the various scents in the air. Suddenly, it caught a strange smell and heard some unusual sounds. Following the scent and sound, it cautiously approached a clearing. Pushing aside a few branches, it saw a human sitting under a tree, resting. The rabbit nervously observed the human’s movements, unsure whether to approach. In the end, it decided to retreat back into the bushes, continuing to watch from a safe distance.
四、学习动作链的意义及运用方法
学习动作链旨在理解“动作构造逻辑”，日常练习和考场上，不能直接套用，而要根据具体情境将不同动作链灵活组合、扩写或者改写，让故事内容丰富、逻辑合理。
综合演练
In 1945, a 12-year-old boy saw a beautiful brooch(胸针) in a shop window that set his heart racing. But the price－five dollars－was too high for Reuben Earle. Five dollars would buy almost a week's food for his family.
Reuben couldn't ask his father for the money. Everything his father made through fishing went to his mother, Dora. Slim and beautiful, she was the center of the home, the glue that held it together. The housework was never-ending, and she struggled to support their five children but she was happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared about.
Nevertheless, he opened the shop's weathered (风化的)door and went inside, Standing proud and straight in his flour－sack(面粉袋改做的) shirt and washed－out trousers, he told the shopkeeper what he wanted, adding, "But I don't have the money right now. Can you please hold it for some time
"I'll try," the shopkeeper smiled. "People around here don't usually have that kind of money to spend on things. It should keep for a while."
Reuben respectfully touched his worn cap and walked out.
He would raise the money and not tell anybody, for he thought Mum would get surprised when she saw that brooch. On hearing the sound of hammering from a side street, Reuben suddenly had an idea that he could raise money by selling the used nail bags(装钉子的麻袋). People built their own buildings in Bay Roberts, using nails bought in bags from a local factory. Sometimes the used nail bags were thrown away at the construction site, and Reuben knew he could sell them back to the factory for five cents a piece.
That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty soda tin.
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph l: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan.
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Paragraph 2: Finally, the time came!
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翻译小练习：
鲁本又冷又饿，在街上徘徊，小心翼翼地寻找指甲袋。
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为了省更多的钱，他甚至决定一大早送报纸。
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尽管他感到筋疲力尽，但他仍然坚持这个计划。
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商店橱窗里的胸针提醒他，他所做的是值得的。
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经过长时间的努力，他终于成功了。
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他拿出汽水罐，把硬币倒出来，开始数。
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五美元！他的努力得到了回报！
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鲁本拿着汽水罐，冲到商店去买胸针。
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当他拿到漂亮的胸针时，他冲进前门，把它放在朵拉和阿普斯的手里。
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多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。
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她说不出话来，高兴极了，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
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参考答案：
鲁本又冷又饿，在街上徘徊，小心翼翼地寻找指甲袋。
Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered the streets, searching for the nail bags carefully.
为了省更多的钱，他甚至决定一大早送报纸。
To save more money, he even decided to deliver papers in the early morning.
尽管他感到筋疲力尽，但他仍然坚持这个计划。
Exhausted and tired as he felt, he still stuck to the plan.
商店橱窗里的胸针提醒他，他所做的是值得的。
It was the brooch in the shop window that reminded him that what he did was worthwhile.
经过长时间的努力，他终于成功了。
After a long time of hard work, he made it eventually.
他拿出汽水罐，把硬币倒出来，开始数。
He took out the soda tin, poured the coins out and began to count.
五美元！他的努力得到了回报！
Five dollars! His hard work paid off!
鲁本拿着汽水罐，冲到商店去买胸针。
Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch.
当他拿到漂亮的胸针时，他冲进前门，把它放在朵拉和阿普斯的手里。
The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora&apos’s hand.
多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。
Never had Dora received such a gift.
她说不出话来，高兴极了，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
参考范文：
Paragraph 1: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan. Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered the streets, searching for the nail bags carefully. To save more money, he even decided to deliver papers in the early morning. Exhausted and tired as he felt, he still stuck to the plan. It was the brooch in the shop window that reminded him that what he did was worthwhile. After a long time of hard work, he made it eventually.
Paragraph 2: Finally the time came! He took out the soda tin, poured the coins out and began to count. Five dollars! His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora&apos’s hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
高中英语读后续写素材大全
第一部分.时间描写 (一)
时间描写1
“一······就······”
①连词
*as soon as...,...
*the moment/the minute/the instant...,...
*immediately/directly/instantly...,...
②介词
*on/upon(doing)sth.
on/upon(sb's)arrival(at/in...) 一到达······
on/upon(sb's)return(from...to...)来回一…
on/upon(sb's)departure(from...) 一离开··...
*at the sight of ... 一看到···..·
at the thought/idea of...一想到······
at the mention of ...一提到······
③倒装句型
*No sooner had+ S+ done...than...did...
*Hardly had + S+ done...when ...did...
④非谓语动词
*Doing.......
注1:连词组“－······就······”表将来时从句时态的替代现象
The moment the meeting ends, we will set off for the station.
As soon as she hears from him, she will no longer worry.
Instantly we get there, we will visit him.
注2:倒装句型组“－··就···...”常用来表过去
Hardly had we seen him when we knew he would have a hard time passing the exam.
No sooner had they finished watering the garden than it began to rain.
1. As soon as I knew I was in the team, it was like I was walking on air.
一得知我加入了这个队,我高兴得像飞上了天.
2.The moment she got to know the ropes, there was no stopping her.
一旦她掌握决窍了,就什么也难不住她了.
3. The minute he sees her, he feels like he is in the room with an angel.
每当他看见她时,他感觉就像和天使同处一室.
4. I bolted the door the instant I saw the bat.
我一看到那只蝙蝠就把门闩上了.
5. Immediately I've done it I feel completely disgusted with myself.
我一做完那件事就对自己感到十分厌恶.
6. Directly she had gone, I remembered her name.
她一走,我就想起了她的名字.
7.He made for the door instantly he heard the knock.
他一听到敲门声,就朝门走去.
8.There was a letter waiting for him on his return.
他一回来就有一封信等着他看.
9. Parkes was arrested on her arrival from New York.
帕克斯一从纽约回来就被捕了.
10.On his departure from the galleys, it had been nineteen years since he had shed a tear.
直到出狱的那天,十九年中,他没有流过一滴泪.
11. They exchanged a firm handshake on parting.
他们临别时紧紧地握手.
12.On arriving home in the evening, I saw “Happy Apple” crying, so desperately.
晚上一回到家,我就看见“开心苹果”哭了,哭得好伤心呀.
13.At the sight of her appearance on the stage, the hall rang with thunderous applause.
一看见她出现在舞台上,大厅里就掌声雷动.
14.My eyes popped at the sight of the rich variety of food on show.
我一看到展示的花样繁多的食品,眼睛都瞪圆了.
15.Her eyes brightened at the sight of Edmund.
她一看见埃德蒙,眼睛便亮了起来.
16.I'm hugging myself at the thought of seeing him again so soon.
－想到这么快又能见到他,我喜不自胜.
17.At the mention of her father who had died two months before, she burst into tears.
一提到她两个月前去世的父亲,她就痛哭起来.
18.No sooner had his name been mentioned than they couldn't help laughing.
一提到他的名字,他们就忍不住笑了起来.
19. The play had hardly started when there was a power cut.
Hardly had the play started when there was a power cut.
演出刚一开始就停电了.
20.Entering it, he found nobody in the room.
进入房间,他发现里面没有人.
时间描写2
“·····就在此时·····”
比较:
He was on the point of speaking but then thought better of it.
他刚想开口,但一转念,又不说了.
On being sent to hospital, he was on the point of breathing his last.
他被送到医院的时候已经奄奄一息了.
表“····就在此时··....”
①表“A刚刚发生,就在这时B发生了”
...had (just) done...when...did...
②表“A正在发生,就在这时B发生了”
...was/were doing ...when...did...
...was/were in the middle of doing ...when...did...
③表“A正要发生,就在这时B发生了”
...was/were about to do ...when...did...
...was/were on the point of doing ...when...did...
...was/were on the verge of doing ...when...did...
...was/were close to doing ... when...did...
...was/were near to doing ...when...did...
1.We had just finished our homework when the fire broke out.
我们刚做完作业,就在此时火灾发生了.
2. The villagers were having a meeting when he turned up at the gate.
The villagers were in the middle of(having)a meeting when he turned up at the gate.
村民们正在开会,就在这时他出现在了门口.
3. The students were about to plant trees when it began to rain.
The students were on the point of planting trees when it began to rain.
学生们正准备植树,就在这时下雨了.
4.They were working against time when the bad news arrived.
他们正在争分夺秒地工作,这时坏消息传来了.
5.They were about to head for the hospital when it came as a surprise that he had died.
他们正要去医院,这时传来了他去世的消息,让他们大吃一惊.
6. I had just cleaned the floor and was about to go out when the earthquake broke out.
我刚把地板擦干净,正要出去,这时地震了.
7. The thief was on the point of putting his hand into the lady's handbag when the bus suddenly stopped.
小偷正要把手伸进那位女士的手提袋中,这时公交车突然停了下来.
8. She was on the point of continuing her walk, when she caught a glimpse of a gentleman with-in the sort of grove which edged the park; he was moving that way; and fearful of its being Mr. Darcy, she was directly retreating.
她正要继续走下去,忽然看到花园旁的小林子里有一个男人正朝这儿走来;她怕是达西先生,便立刻往回走.
9.The climber was on the point of death when they found him.
当他们发现那个登山者时他已奄奄一息.
10. He was on the verge of losing his temper with his wife, when she uttered a cry.
他正要对妻子发脾气,忽然妻子哭叫起来.
11.You know, I was on the verge of quitting my job when my boss came in and offered me a raise.
你知道,老板今天给我加薪时我正打算要辞职呢.
12.He was close to giving up his hoop dreams, when former Sonics head coach Bob Weiss called.
当前西雅图超音速主教练鲍勃·维斯给他打电话时,他几乎就要放弃他的篮球梦想了.
13.I was near to tears when she said goodbye.
她道别时,我都快哭了.
14.We were about to cross the road when a car suddenly zipped past.
我们正要过马路时,一辆汽车突然呼地一下驶了过去.
15. They were in the middle of a party when the parents came back suddenly.
父母突然返回时,他们正在开晚会.
时间描写3
“直到······才······”
*...not...until...
*Not until...be/助动词／情态动词＋
*It is not until...that...
1. His ability to write didn't gel again until 1974.
=Not until 1974 did his ability to write gel again.
=It was not until 1974 that his ability to write gelled again.
直到1974年,他的写作才华才又得以发挥.
2.The teacher has not found the hidden papers until recently.
=Not until recently has the teacher found the hidden papers.
=It is not until recently that the teacher has found the hidden papers.
直到最近老师才找到被藏起来的卷子.
3. Their minds were not set at rest until they heard that she was safe and sound.
=Not until they heard that she was safe and sound were their minds set at rest.
=It was not until they heard that she was safe and sound that their minds were set at rest.
直到听到她平安无事的消息,大家心里才一块石头落地.
4. I did not come to myself until one of my classmates patted me on the shoulder.
Not until one of my classmates patted me on the shoulder did I come to myself.
It was not until one of my classmates patted me on the shoulder that I came to myself.
直到我的同学拍了一下我的肩膀,我才回过神来.
5. People say,“ Guilin's scenery is peerless in the world.” I didn't find it really worthy of the reputation until I visited the place.
=People say,“ Guilin's scenery is peerless in the world.”Not until I visited the place did I find it really worthy of the reputation.
=People say,“ Guilin's scenery is peerless in the world. "It was not until I visited the place that I found it really worthy of the reputation.
人们都说“桂林山水甲天下”,到桂林一看,果然名不虚传.
6. You don't find your great talent until you stretch your wings.
=Not until you stretch your wings do you find your great talent.
=It is not until you stretch your wings that you find your great talent.
当你展开了翅膀,你才发现自己巨大的天赋.
7.You will not realize the importance of health until you lose it.
=Not until you lose it will you realize the importance of health.
=It is not until you lose it that you will realize the importance of health.
直到失去健康,你才会意识到它的重要性.
时间描写4
“边······边······当······期间；随着······”(两个动作同时发生)
表“边···边·...”(两个动作同时发生)
*S+V...as+ S+V...(同主语,两个延续性动作)
表“当···...期间”(两个动作同时发生)
*S+V…while doing...“当······期间;边······边····..”(同主语,两个延续性动作或一短一长)
*Doing...,S+V.....“当···...期间”(同主语,两个延续性动作或一短一长)
表“随着·····.”(两个动作同时发生)
*As+S1. +V1...,S2.+V2...(异主语,两个延续性动作)
*With+ n.+ doing...,...
*over timewith time going byas time goes/went by
1. He sang loudly as he walked along.
他边向前走边大声唱着歌.
2.As she listened, she played an imaginary piano on her knees.
她一边听着,一边在膝盖上弹奏想象中的钢琴.
3.He looked behind occasionally as he went forward in the forest.
他在森林里一边向前走,一边偶尔回头看.
4. Start with your toes and as you breathe, imagine them becoming one with the Earth.
从你的脚趾头开始,一边进行呼吸,一边想象一下它们和地球合为一体.
5. “Do what ”He held my key out as he spoke. As I reached for it, he dropped it into my palm.
“做什么？”他一边说着,一边举起我的钥匙.等我伸手拿的时候,他把钥匙放在了我的掌心.
6.1 have got into the habit of listening to music while doing exercises.
我养成了边做作业边听音乐的习惯.
7.Word came yesterday that they were killed while trying to reach the summit.
昨天传来消息说,他们在试图登上峰顶时遇难了.
8. He fell asleep while doing his homework.
Doing his homework, he fell asleep.
他做着做着功课就睡着了.
9. She got married while working as a waitress.
Working as a waitress, she got married.
她在当服务生期间结婚了.
10.Pat killed time by watching TV while waiting for her.
Waiting for he her, Pat killed time by watching TV.
帕特在等她时边看电视边打发时间.
11. While enjoying the great convenience online shopping brings to us, on no account should we ignore the danger of being cheated. Many cheats are also taking advantage of the Internet to accumulate wealth by deceiving.
在享受网上购物为我们带来的极大便利的同时,我们绝不应该忽略被诈骗的危险.很多骗子也在利用因特网诈骗敛财.
12.As time went on/by, she grew more and more beautiful.
=With time going on/by, she grew more and more beautiful.
=Over time she grew more and more beautiful.
随着时间的推移,她变得越来越漂亮了.
13.As time went on, a genuine friendship grew up between them.
=With time going on, a genuine friendship grew up between them.
随着时间的流逝,他们之间产生了真诚的友谊.
14.As the evening progressed and the dinner plates were cleared away, it was time for our blessing bowl “ceremony".
=With the evening progressing and the dinner plates being cleared away, it was time for our blessing bowl “ceremony”.
夜深了,盘子里的晚餐也都吃光了,是时候开始我们的祝福碗“仪式”了.
15.As the days passed, Lesley's frustration mounted and she felt a sense of alarm.
=With the days passing, Lesley's frustration mounted and she felt a sense of alarm.
时间一天天地过去,莱斯利日益沮丧,她有一种恐慌的感觉.
16.As the years slipped by, my daughter passed into the teen-age vale, developing a youthful proficiency on the piano.
=With the years slipping by, my daughter passed into the teen-age vale, developing a youthful proficiency on the piano.
时间一年年地过去,我女儿已是十几岁的少女,成长为一名熟练的青年钢琴手.
17.As time has progressed, so has our understanding of this field.
随着时间的发展,我们对这一领域的理解也在发展.
时间描写5
“在······之后;说完这些话后” (两个动作先后发生)
表“在······之后”(两个动作先后发生)
*After+ S+ V...,.
*After doing/After being done...,...(同主语)
*Having done/Having been done...,...(同主语)
表“说完这些话后”(两个动作紧接着发生)
*with thatwith these wordswith those words
1. After she finished the housework, she went out.
=After finishing the housework, she went out.
=Having finished the housework, she went out.
做完家务后,她出去了.
2. After I was blamed for nothing, I was very angry.
=After being blamed for nothing, I was very angry.
=Having been blamed for nothing, I was very angry.
在我无缘无故受到责备之后,我非常生气.
3. After I had done it carefully, I had a breathing spell.
=After doing it carefully, I had a breathing spell.
=Having done it carefully, I had a breathing spell.
小心翼翼地做完后,我舒了一口气.
4. After I had done my job in establishing the company, I decided that it was time I faded out and left the work to my sons.
=After doing my job in establishing the company, I decided that it was time I faded out and left the work to my sons.
=Having done my job in establishing the company, I decided that it was time I faded out and left the work to my sons.
公司成立之后,我决定淡出并把工作留给儿子们去干.
5. After they discussed the first question, they proceeded to the second.
=After discussing the first question, they proceeded to the second.
=Having discussed the first question, they proceeded to the second.
他们讨论了第一个问题,进而讨论第二个.
6. He muttered a few words of apology and with that he left.
他低声叽咕了几句道歉的话,然后就走了.
7.With that, he disappeared into his inner room.
说完这些话,他就走进里面的房间去了.
8.With these words the nightingale sang the last song, then she flew away into the night.
说完这些话后,夜莺便唱了最后一首歌,然后飞向夜空.
9.With those words the impostor shook them both by the hand, with an air, and left the house.
这个骗子说完了那几句话后,便装出那副傲慢的样子和他们两人一一握手,然后离开了房间.
10. With these words still ringing in his ears, he got back into his old habits.
这些话还在耳边回响,他却已故态复萌了.
时间描写6
“······(多少时间)才／就······”
······(多少时间)才······”
*It was long before...did...(过去)
*It will be long before...do(es)...(将来)
表“······(多少时间)就······”
*It was not long before...did......did...before long.(过去)
*It will not be long before...do(es)......will do...before long.(将来)
1. It was long before he returned home.
很久后他才回家.
2. It will be long before he returns home.
很久后他才会回家.
3. It was three weeks before he returned home.
三周后他才回家.
4.It will be three weeks before he returns home.
三周后他才会回家.
5. It was not long before he returned home.
He returned home before long.
不久他就回家了.
6.It will not be long before he returns home.
He will return home before long.
不久他就会回家.
7. It will not be long before we turn our hope into reality.
过不了多久我们的希望就会变成现实.
8. It was not long before the news was widely circulated.
这个消息不久就哄传开了.
9. It was not long before I realized the enormity of my faux pas.
没过多久,我就意识到自己有多么失态.
10. It was not long before he found favour with his boss.
不久他便得到了老板的垂青.
11.It was not long before his anger melted. Whatever initial worries we had about the plane soon vanished.
不久他的火气就消了.开始时我们对这架飞机的不放心,不久就烟消云散了.
12. He was very excited, and it was long before he calmed down.
他很激动,心情久久不能平静.
时间描写7
“······发生已经(多少时间了)”
*It is/has been十多少时间＋since...did...(“现在”为参照时间)
*It was+多少时间＋since...had done...(“过去”为参照时间)
1.It is decades since the accident happened.
事故发生已有几十年了.
2. It is three years since he died.
=He died three years ago.
=He has been dead for three years.
他去世已经三年了.
3.She said that it was three years since he had died.
=She said that he had died three years before.
=She said that he had been dead for three years.
她说他已经去世三年了.
4. It has been three years since they got married.
=They got married three years ago.
=They have been married for three years.
他们已经结婚三年了.
5.It is ten years since we parted in Yan'an.
延安一别,于今十年.
6.It was years since I'd learned any German, and I really had to start again from scratch.
我好多年没学德语了,真的要重新从头开始了.
7.It was many years since James Bond had accepted a dare.
自詹姆斯,邦德当初接受挑战之后,已经有好多年过去了.
时间描写8
“当······发生时,时间是······”
*It was+什么时间＋when......
*It must have been+什么时间＋When...当某事发生时肯定是什么时间
*It might have been+什么时间+when...当某事发生时可能是什么时间
1. It was around nine o'clock when I drove back home because it was already dark.
我开车回家的时候大约是九点钟,因为天已经黑了.
2. It must have been around nine o'clock when I drove back home because it was already dark.
我开车回家的时候肯定是九点左右,因为天已经黑了.
3. It was almost midnight when the fire broke out in the neighborhood.
当隔壁邻居家大火发生的时候,时间几乎是半夜了.
4.It was October 1,1949 when New China was founded.
1949年10月1日新中国成立.
5.It might have been a cold morning when I was hurrying to school.
那可能是个寒冷的早晨,我匆忙上学.
时间描写9
“正是在······时间······发生了” (强调句)
*It+ be+什么时间(被强调部分)＋that...
1. It was at nine o'clock that I drove back home because it was already dark.
正是在九点钟,我开车回家,因为天已经黑了.
2. It was at midnight that the fire broke out in the neighborhood.
正是在半夜,大火发生了.
3.It was on October 1,1949 that New China was founded.
正是在1949年10月1日,新中国成立.
4. It was on a cold morning that I was hurrying to school.
正是在一个寒冷的早晨,我匆忙上学去.
5.It was last Sunday that we met each other for the first time.
正是上周日,我们第一次见面.
6.It is every day that they help the old grandma with her house work.
每天他们都帮助老奶奶做家务.
时间描写10
“每当….../无论何时......”
*Every time+ S+V...,S+V..
*Each time+ S+V...,S+V..
*Any time+ S+V...,S+V...
*Whenever+ S+V...,S+V
*No matter when+ S+V...,S+V...
1.Every time I catch of myself in the mirror, I feel so disappointed.
每次我警见镜子里的自己就觉得沮丧.
2.Every time it rains, our car acts up.
每当下雨,我们的车就失灵.
3.Every time they went dancing, they ended up in a bad mood.
每次他们去跳舞,都会不欢而散.
4.Each time this was mentioned, he would give a bitter smile and shake his head.
每逢提起这件事,他总是苦笑着摇摇头.
5.This was surely a magic formula for Old Fan as his head ached each time he heard it.
对老范来说,这就是紧箍咒,每当听说起保管头痛.
6.She had a small, mean mouth that curled disapprovingly each time her husband wrote something in his diary.
每次丈夫写日记时,她都会不满地撇撇那张刻薄的小嘴.
7.Any time you told one of them something, they'd swear you'd mixed them up and told the other.
每次你告诉他们俩当中一人某件事情时,他们都会发誓说你把他们弄混了,和你说话的是另外那个.
8. They don't like my moustache and my long hair, so they get at me whenever they can.
他们不喜欢我的小胡子和长发,一有机会便数落我.
9.Whenever we met with difficulties, they came to help us.
每当我们遇到困难时,他们总来帮助我们.
10. Whenever I'm hard up for money, he will empty his purse to help me.
每当我手头拮据的时候,他总是倾囊相助.
11.No matter when my motherland needs me, I will go without hesitation.
无论什么时候,只要祖国需要我,我就会毫不犹豫地出发.
12.No matter when you come, I will extend my deepest welcome to you.
无论你何时来,我都将以最大的热忱欢迎你.
13.No matter when I'm unhappy, it is my friend who cheers me up.
不管什么时候我不高兴,总是我的朋友使我振作起来.
时间描写11
“这／那／它是第······次······;当第·····次......时，······”
表“这／那／它是第······次······”
*This/That/It was the first/second/last time that ...had done/did...
*This/That/It is the first/second/last time that...have done...
*This/That/It will be the first/second/last time that...have done...
1.This is the first time that we have all been together for a long time.
这是我们第一次在一起这么久,
2.This is the first time that I have had a travel alone, so l feel nervous and excited.
这是我第一次独自旅行,我感到既紧张又兴奋.
3.It is the first time that she has experienced disappointment.
这是她第一次感受到失望,
4.Sitting at the dining room table, I slumped in my chair, aware that this was the first time
since I came home from work that I'd been able to just sit down.
在餐厅桌旁,慵懒地坐在椅上,猛然发现这是下班后我第一次能够坐下.
5.I was lucky because that was the second time I had visited Japan that year.
我很幸运,那是我那年第二次访问日本.
6.Her father had been transferred and that was the last time that I saw/had seen her.
她爸爸被调走了,那是我最后一次见到她.
7.The festival will be the first time in 13 years that Dou, Zhang and he have performed together.
这次会演将是窦、张和他13年来的第一次共同表演.
8. The first time I saw you, I discovered that I finally found the other half!
从见你的第一眼起,我就发现我终于找到我的另一半了！
9. The first time she drank alcohol, he fell apart.
当她第一次喝酒时,他崩溃了.
10.She succeeded the second time she took the examination.
她第二次参加考试时考及格了.
11. Mary didn't even thank us for helping her, so the next time she needs help she can whistle for it.
我们帮助了玛丽但她甚至连感谢的话都没说,下次她需要帮助时就休想得到了.
12. The next time we saw her she was still alive and had redoubled her efforts to do better next time.
当我们又一次见到她时,她还活着,正在为下一次做得更好而加倍努力.
13. The last time she saw him, her father cupped his hands and shouted “I'll see you in New York”.
The last time she saw her father was when he cupped his hands and shouted “I'll see you in New York”.
她和父亲永别时,父亲拱着手掌喊道:“我会在纽约见你.”
表“当第······次······时,····..”
*The first/second/last/next time+ S+V...,S+V...
*The first/second/last/next time+ be+ when...
时间描写12
“曾经一度······;有时(可能)会······”
*There was a time/were times when ...
*There used to be a time/times when ...
*There is a time/are times when...
*There will be a time/times when...
*There may be a time/times when...
1.There was a time when Charles was coasting at school and I should have told him to buckle down.
有一段时间查尔斯在学校不太用功,我当时应该让他加把劲的.
2.There was a time when life was very hard for Madame Curie.
曾经有过一个时期,居里夫人的生活非常艰难.
3.There was a time when I wanted to quit.
我曾经一度很想放弃.
4.There were times when I was afraid of you, but my fear made me love you the more.
你也曾使我畏惧,但畏惧之情使我更加爱你.
5.There were times when the challenges of writing such a huge novel almost defeated her.
有些时候,创作如此宏大的一部小说所面临的挑战几乎把她给难倒了.
6.There used to be a time when the luxury stores on the Fifth Avenue of New York City(NYC) were frequented by Chinese consumers.
曾经有一段时间,纽约第五大道的奢侈品店是中国消费者经常光顾的.
7. Grandpa would not always join in children's conversing, but there will always be a time when something would catch his attention.
祖父并不总是加入到这种孩童们的嬉戏之中,只是有时候总有那么点东西能够吸引他的注意.
8. There will be a time when your life is similar to a movie.
有时你生活中的事也像电影中的一样.
9.There may be a time in the future when computers incorporate a certain type of associations as humans do.
也许有一天,计算机将和人类的大脑一样,也会形成一种特定的联系.
10. There are times when subtlety is the more powerful weapon.
有时候细节是更有力的武器.
时间描写13
“在未来的......在随后的......”
*in/for the+时间名词＋to comein/for the+ coming+时间名词
*in/for the+ following+时间名词in/for the+时间名词＋that followed
1. In days to come, I'll just live with the shame and the sense of insignificance.
在未来的日子里,我将需要继续面对这种羞耻和自卑.
2. I sincerely hope in the days to come we can taste the ups and downs of life.
我真诚地希望在未来的日子里,我们能一起品味生活中的酸甜苦辣.
3. We hope it will mark the beginning of our close cooperation in the years to come.
我们希望它成为今后我们多年紧密合作的契机.
4. I believe this spirit will drive us on to be even more successful in the years to come.
我相信这种精神会驱使我们取得更多的成功.
5.Much will still be demanded of us in the weeks and months to come.
在未来的几个星期到几个月里,我们仍有许多事情要做.
6.Things are changing around you, so whatever was true a month ago won't necessarily hold true in the weeks to come.
你周围一切都在变化,一个月前正确的事情接下来几周就不一定对了.
7.The London Eye will last for years to come as a monument to the new millennium.
伦敦眼将一直屹立在泰晤士河畔,它是新千年的标志性建筑.
8.I'll stay at this hotel for days to come.
在之后的几天中,我将住在这家旅馆.
9. He predicted a bitter fight in the following week.
=He predicted a bitter fight in the week that followed.
他预测下周会有一场苦战.
10.For the following three years Germany would have a hard time, but starting in 1948,she would rise again.
在今后三年内,德国的处境很困难,但从1948年开始,德国就会重新抬头.
11.You will be notified of the result by email in the coming day.
You will be notified of the result by email in the day to come.
结果会在翌日以电邮通知.
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