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温暖亲情类故事
写作导图
一、冲突构建：情感的张力之源
（通过情感矛盾展现亲情的珍贵性）
1． 矛盾激化
【生气冲突】
例句：My mother glanced at me. Something she never did before I had a stepfamily. "You could have picked it up," she said. "That would have been the kind thing to do."
（母亲瞥了我一眼——这在重组家庭之前她从未有过的动作。"你本可以捡起来的，"她说，"这才是有教养的做法。"）
解析：虚拟语气（could have/would have）强化事后的懊悔感，暗示未完成的期待。肢体动作描写（glanced）替代直接心理描写，更显克制张力。
【后悔心理】
例句：I realized how poorly I tied the string on my skirt which was over leggings. I should have asked mom for help.
（当我意识到自己把罩裙带子系得一团糟时，真该让妈妈帮忙的。）
技巧：细节描写（skirt over leggings）具象化场景，should have done结构强化追悔莫及的心理。
二 情感发酵（2种进阶写法）
【复合修辞】
例句：Thinking about what I had done to him, regret and guilt overwhelmed me like endless tides.
（每当想起对他的所作所为，悔恨如无尽潮水将我淹没。）
亮点：比喻（tides）+ 夸张（endless）构建情感强度，现在分词前置营造沉浸感。
【动作暗示】
例句：Watching Shirley's smile fading away, Peter frowned.
（看着雪莉的笑容渐渐消失，彼得皱起眉头。）
解析：非谓语结构（watching）建立画面同步性，表情变化（smile→frown）暗示情感转折。
三、冲突化解：情感的治愈路径
（通过具体行动展现亲情的力量）
1． 和解三部曲
【真诚道歉】
例句："I’m so sorry," he said, gently petting Jackson’s head.
（"真的很抱歉，"他轻抚杰克逊的头说道。）
技法：伴随动作（petting）软化语言冲击，副词（gently）传达温柔态度。
【暖心原谅】
例句：His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips, gave a soft kiss on his forehead and walked out of the study.
（母亲将手指轻按他嘴唇示意安静，在额头印下轻吻，悄然离开了书房。）
解析：动作链描写（putting→gave→walked）构建电影镜头感，无声举动胜于言语。
2． 情感升华
【意象隐喻】
例句：Cheerful singing floating in the room, the two sisters immersed themselves in the beauty of the music.
（欢快的歌声在房间飘荡，两姐妹沉醉于音乐之美。）
亮点：独立主格（singing floating）营造环境氛围，抽象概念（beauty）具象化亲情体验。
【顿悟时刻】
例句：It was Henry's kindness that made me feel the warmth from our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.
（正是亨利的善良让我感受到家的温暖，我将用心珍藏这份情谊。）
技巧：强调句型（It was...that）突出情感核心，动词选择（treasure）体现珍视程度。
四、主题升华：情感的永恒价值
（通过象征手法深化亲情意义）
1． 象征物运用【延续性意象】
例句：From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest.
（自那以后，每当想要说谎时，三颗巧克力就会在心中敲响警钟，提醒他保持诚实。）
解析：具象物品（chocolates）承载抽象品质（honesty），建立持续性的道德隐喻。
2． 成长性表达【心理蜕变】
例句：I nodded firmly, knowing a flower of kindness and friendship began to blossom in both of our hearts.
（我坚定点头，深知善意与友谊之花已在彼此心间绽放。）
技法：植物意象（flower）隐喻情感成长，进行时态（began to）暗示持续发展。
背精彩句子，让表达出彩
1．Cheerful singing floating in the room, the two sisters were absorbed in the beauty of the music.
欢快的歌声飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在美妙的音乐中。
2．A surge of happiness and warmth running through her, Mom kissed the two sisters gently.
一股幸福与温暖流遍她的全身，妈妈温柔地亲了亲两姐妹。
3．Every morning, my mother wakes up early to prepare breakfast for the family, filling the house with the aroma of freshly cooked food.
每天早上，我的母亲早早地起床为全家准备早餐，让整个房子充满着新鲜烹制食物的香气。
4．Whenever I'm feeling stressed or overwhelmed, my parents are always there to offer a listening ear and a shoulder to cry on.
每当我感到压力或不知所措时，我的父母总是在那里倾听我的心声并给我依靠的肩膀。
5．“I want to give you a surprise！” he pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes shining.
“我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。
6．Every time I faced challenges, a thought of giving up flashed in my mind, but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going.
每次面对挑战，我都想放弃，但是家人的支持给了我继续前进的力量。
7．On rainy days, my family likes to stay indoors and watch movies, snuggled up under blankets and enjoying each other's company.
在下雨的日子里，我的家人喜欢待在室内看电影，蜷缩在毯子下享受彼此的陪伴。
8．My parents always make sure to attend my school events and cheer me on, showing their unwavering support and love.
我的父母总是确保出席我的学校活动，并为我呐喊加油，展现他们不动摇的支持和爱。
9．My parents often surprise us with small gifts or treats, showing their appreciation and love for us.
我的父母经常给我们惊喜，送上小礼物或小零食，表达他们对我们的欣赏和爱。
10.he trembling mother's voice was full of unselfish love as she gave her last instruction.
母亲发出最后的叮嘱时，颤巍巍的声音里充满了无私的爱。
11.Seeing his families sitting together and staying together harmoniously, Cater felt a sense of happiness.
看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，Cater感觉到一种幸福感。
12.My parents often take us on nature walks, pointing out different plants and animals and teaching us about the environment.
我的父母经常带我们去散步，指出不同的植物和动物，并教育我们环保知识。
13.My parents always make sure to prioritize family time over work or other obligations, showing us the value of spending time together.
我的父母总是把家庭时间放在工作或其他义务之前，向我们展示共度时光的价值。
14.The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warmed us.
透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光和我们家人之间的爱，温暖了我们。
15.Dad fixed his eyes on the paper, a pleasant smile lifting the corner of his mouth.
爸爸眼睛盯着那张纸，嘴角上扬，露出愉快的微笑。
高考真题演练
2021年6月新高考卷（母亲节的惊喜）
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
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Paragraph 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
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【范文1】
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. “Don’t panic!” he handed each one a wet towel, helping them clean the mess quickly. After that, Jeff stammered out their plan, his face flushing. However, Father laughed, “Sounds great! I can teach you to cook.” At this, Jenna and Jef almost jumped to their feet, joy in eyes. Under his careful guidance, it didn’t take long before the French toast and chicken porridge were ready. Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Meeting their smiling eyes, Mother felt confused until they presented the breakfast and said “Happy Mother’s Day”. Mother gave them a tight hug, “Unbelievable! You can cook! It’s the biggest surprise I have received.” Her face lit up with happiness. “They have known how to take care of others.” Father said in response to her excitement, winking at Jenna and Jef. They couldn’t help giggling. It was a secret only shared between them.
【范文2】
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their disappointed faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some porridge. Then he went back to bed quietly. The twins prepared the breakfast tray and added a card they had made.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They hugged her and shouted, “Happy Mother’s Day, dear Mummy!” Mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast. She shook Father who was pretending to sleep. He faked astonishment when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father’s eye and they smiled at each other secretly.
2017年11月浙江卷（和妈妈去旅行）
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother — loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids ” “What ! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections. If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
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Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.
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【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者11岁的一次家庭旅行让作者了解了自己的母亲。在路上作者和弟弟一直担心遇到危险，而妈妈却坚持要在外面搭帐篷睡觉，最后他们搭好了帐篷，在外面度过了美好的一个假期。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天，我们想起了我们带来的新帐篷。”可知，第一段可描写他们回去取帐篷的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“我们开车经过了几个州，沿途看到了许多美丽的景色。”可知，第二段可描写他们在户外搭帐篷做饭的事情。
2．续写线索：想起带来的新帐篷——妈妈坚持回去取帐篷——看见美丽的风景——搭帐篷准备饭菜——作者感悟
3．词汇激活
行为类
建议：recommend/suggest
回去：go back/return
发现：find/discover
情绪类
准备好的：ready /prepared
令人愉快的：pleasant /pleasing
【点睛】
[高分句型1] But then we were half an hour away from the hotel, where the tent was left behind. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded, it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again. (运用了虚拟语气)
参考范文1
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Thinking of this tent, Mom suggested that we go camping in the next village in excitement, with her eyes glittering. Considering her enthusiasm, we all agreed. When the door of our car opened, Mom stormed out instantly and urged us to put up the tent. David and I were asked to pick up some branches to build a fire. And when we came back, Dad and Mom had already lain down the grass comfortably in front of the tent, talking merrily with a local boy at our age, who kept glancing at this tent curiously. Soon we learnt that the boy in rags even didn’t have a home to live in. Of course, Mom “forgot” to take this tent with us again.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. And we also had a nice time living with my grandparents during that trip. But what impressed me most was that tent, which was forgotten deliberately by Mom. Though she did love going camping, she presented that poor boy with this tent out of sympathy. It was Mom that made my childhood colorful. And it was also she that showed me the true meaning of giving.
参考范2
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. But then we were half an hour away from the hotel, where the tent was left behind. Dad recommended buying a new one, while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it, saying “Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly, so it’s unwise to give up the tent.” Finally, we got back the tent and hit the road again. If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded, it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. One day, towards evening, we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain. David and I helped Dad put up the tent, and Mom was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains, the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting around the camp fire, we talked and laughed. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom’s face.
参考范文3
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. To our delight, Mom gave up the idea of camping in some stranger’s backyard. Instead, we found a wonderful camping site in the wild. It was a clearing in the woods by a small lake, where Dad could catch some fish for dinner. We had no trouble setting up our tent, but we were disappointed to find that Mom forgot to pack up pillows. Needless to say, we all woke up with a sore neck the next morning.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. It was a fantastic trip. We crossed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high mountains, and overlooked deep valleys. During the trip, Mom’s being absent-minded not only got us into much trouble, but also gave us many funny moments. But luckily, she was not so forgetful as to leave me and David behind in the gas station bathrooms. We all arrived at grandparents’ home safe and sound.
模拟演练
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段话，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As a young boy, I sometimes traveled the country roads with my dad. He was a rural mail carrier and on Saturdays he would ask me to go with him. Driving through the countryside was always an adventure: There were animals to see, people to visit, and chocolate cookies if you knew where to stop, and Dad did.
In the spring, Dad delivered boxes full of baby chickens, and when I was a boy it was such fun to stick your fingers through one of the holes of the boxes and let the baby birds peck (啄) on your fingers.
On Dad’s final day of work, it took him well into the evening to complete his rounds because at least one member from each fatuity was waiting at their mailbox to appreciate him for his friendship and his years of service. “Two hundred and nineteen mailboxes on my route,” he used to say, and a story at every one. One lady had no mailbox, so Dad took the mail in to her every day because she was nearly blind. He once lectured me that to bring everyone plain pleasure is his greatest pleasure, which has clung to me so far.
Mailboxes were sometimes used for things other than mail. On cold days Dad might find one of his customers waiting for him with a cup of hot chocolate. A young girl wrote letters but had no stamps, so she left a few buttons on the envelope in the mailbox; Dad paid for the stamps.
With a heavy heart, I traveled back to my hometown on the sad occasion of Dad’s death, and the mailboxes along the way reminded me of some of his stories. I thought I knew them all, but that wasn’t the case.
As I drove home, I noticed two lamp poles, one on each side of the street. When my dad was around, those poles supported wooden boxes about four feet off the ground. One box was painted green, and the other was red, and each had a long narrow hole at the top with white lettering: Santa Claus, NORTH POLE. For years children had dropped letters to Santa through those holes. I was among the kids whose letters were always answered in time.
I made a turn at the corner and drove past the post office and across the railroad tracks to our house. Mom and I were sitting at the kitchen table when I heard footsteps. There, at the door, stood Frank Townsend, Dad’s postmaster and great friend for many years. Threads of silver ran through his beard and the hair. Obviously, time and sorrow for the past days ploughed deep wrinkles on his brow. Sitting down at the table, he began to tell old stories.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150词左右；
2． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
At one point Frank looked at me with tears in his eyes as if recalling something.
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Paragraph 2:
Thinking of my father’s philosophy of pleasure, I resolved to be this year’s Santa Claus.
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【参考范文】
At one point Frank looked at me with tears in his eyes as if recalling something. Hardly had the words telling my father was genuinely the Santa Claus escaped from his trembling lips when my emphasizing look changed into an astonished one. Recalling every letter answered in time, I was choked with gratitude, my eyes moistened with tears. Flakes were still whirling while a sparkle of light zigzagged across the sky, casting warmth onto my heart. Frank’s stories went on and notably conveyed in his tone was pursuit for the gone era. “Your father always considered others’ pleasure as his own,” Frank’s remark occurred to me like a clap of thunder, planting a seed of dedication rooted in my heart.
Thinking of my father’s philosophy of pleasure, I resolved to be this year’s Santa Claus. Enduring the needle-like wind howling ruthlessly, I made my way to the lamp poles, carefully fumbling for the old letters. Mature as the previous kids were now, I still put pen to paper to respond the innocence with the signature of Santa Claus. When I brought every letter to every original address, the owners’ eyebrows lifted high but then soothed as I explained to them. Spotting the pleased looks on their faces, I felt a surge of warmth circulating through my body. After waving them farewell, I slackened my steps in the snow and wandered around the familiar road, lost in thought of the past golden days that would never fade away.
【写作指导】这是一篇夹叙夹议文。文章主要讲述了邮递员父亲的简单、丰富而又充实、有趣的邮递员生活，父亲是一个乡村邮递员，多年来他都无私地为219个信箱服务，一直到他退休，但让作者没料到的是，父亲还在每年圣诞节的时候扮演着圣诞老人的角色，默默地回复着孩子们写给圣诞老人的信，这种做法感人至深。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“弗兰克含着泪水看着我，好像在回忆什么。”可知，第一段可描写弗兰克回忆关于父亲的感人内容。
②由第二段首句内容“想到父亲的快乐哲学，我决心成为今年的圣诞老人。”可知，第二段可描写作者沿着父亲的足迹给业主送信的场景和感悟。
2．续写线索：回忆故事——充满感激——产生共鸣——快乐哲学——圣诞回信——内心感受
3．词汇激活
行为类
①逃脱：escape from/get away from
②转变成：change into/transfer into
③前往某处：make one’s way to/turn towards
情绪类
①含泪：with tears in one’s eyes/be full of tears/be filled with tears
②决心做：resolve to do /be determined to do
【典型句式】
【句式1】Mature as the previous kids were now, I still put pen to paper to respond the innocence with the signature of Santa Claus.(As引起的部分倒装句式)
【句式2】After waving them farewell, I slackened my steps in the snow and wandered around the familiar road, lost in thought of the past golden days that would never fade away.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
School was over, the day was fading and it started to rain. I stood at the school gate, with a loaded backpack on my shoulders. It was Friday again—a weekend of joy with unlimited sleeping hours and dinner courses specially made to my taste. I waved goodbye to my friends as they jumped into their fathers’ warm and comfortable cars. Curiously, this gave rise to a disturbing feeling in me. It was not exactly what they called jealousy (嫉妒), but something like depression. I knew all I could expect was an old bike Mom would ride along on, with the badly-oiled chain creaking against the wheel to announce her arrival.
Every Friday when Mom came to pick me up, it was a moment full of great expectation and great unease. I always felt my face burning as we rode our way in and out of the cars and saw my friends’ faces sticking out of the car windows. It was like stepping into a ballroom with beautifully dressed ladies and finding yourself in a smelly T-shirt.
To tell you the truth, Mom is quite a headache occasionally. She looks like a homely middle-aged housewife. She knits (编织) most of my sweaters, chiefly in old styles. Whenever caught by some curious classmates asking what brand my sweaters are, I’d force a smile and reply in a half-joking manner: homemade. She simply doesn’t seem to understand what’s in fashion; Chanel or Gucci means nothing to her.
I couldn’t remember when I started to find her such an embarrassment. As a little boy, I relied on her so much. She had been working at home, cooking in the kitchen, knitting by the lamp, or riding across town to buy me a book I badly needed. It had always been fun riding with her. I had enjoyed watching our shadows growing longer and shorter in an alternate fashion by the light of the streetlamps along the road. Just now there seemed to be something standing between us, something that made her so strange to me and me to her.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Today Mom showed up in a raincoat.
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Mom tried to cover me with the raincoat again as a storm set in.
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Today Mom showed up in a raincoat. Once she saw me, Mom called my name excitedly. Almost everybody present looked in her direction. I swallowed hard and fixed my stare on the middle of the road, sweat forming in tiny droplets on my forehead. When she tried to cover me with the back of her raincoat, I simply threw it aside. In silence, I shot her a blaming glance and threw my backpack heavily into the front basket of the bike. Without a single word, I jumped onto the backseat.
Mom tried to cover me with the raincoat again as a storm set in. Reluctantly, I pulled it over. With the wind roaring angrily and the raincoat dancing, it felt warm and secure inside. Mom bent forward and pedaled with all her strength, her waist twitching with tension. I started to feel guilty of my coldness, tears welling up in my eyes. Quietly, I slipped my hands around Mom’s waist and gently pressed my face against her back. In the crying wind and pouring rain, I found myself hugging my mother, tighter than ever.
【写作指导】本文讲述了一个关于母爱的故事。作者的家庭并不富裕，周五放学时，其他学生的家长开着汽车来接他们，而作者的妈妈却骑着一辆破旧的自行车来接他，这让作者感觉很沮丧。妈妈的穿着也很朴素，不懂时尚，这也让作者感觉很难堪。事实上，作者小时候很依赖妈妈，也很喜欢妈妈骑自行车载自己，不知道从什么时候开始，作者和妈妈之间的关系变得陌生了。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“今天妈妈穿着雨衣出现了。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到妈妈后尴尬的表现。
②由第二段首句内容“暴风雨来袭时，妈妈又试图用雨衣给我盖上。”可知，第二段可描写我被妈妈的行动所感动，深刻地体会到了母爱。
2．续写线索：妈妈叫我——我感到尴尬——妈妈给我盖雨衣——我不愿意接受——暴风雨来袭——妈妈再次给我盖雨衣——我感受到母爱的温暖
3．词汇激活
行为类
①.看见：see/catch sight of
②.开始做某事：start to do sth./begin to do sth.
③.拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
①.激动地，兴奋地：excitedly/with excitement
②.不情愿地：reluctantly/unwillingly
【典型句式】
[句式1]. Once she saw me, Mom called my name excitedly.(由Once引导的时间状语从句)
[句式2]. I couldn’t remember when I started to find her such an embarrassment.(由when引导的宾语从句)
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Todd was lying on the family room floor doing math homework, when he heard his mother, back from her shift at the Crafts Cottage. She was later than usual, so she must have stopped on the way home to get groceries after her work. Todd hoped so. Groceries were one of life’s good things. It was getting late, and Todd felt a bit hungry. As a matter of fact, he could hear his stomach growling. He only had some cereal for breakfast this morning. If only he could have a bite at his favorite food—the apple pie made by his mother! But it had been a while since she made desserts for them, for she had been much occupied recently.
His mother came into the family room and clicked off the TV. Todd looked at Amy, who was so lost in her book that she didn’t seem to notice their mother’s presence in the room. But their father, dozing (打瞌睡) on the couch with the remote in his hand, came awake with a guilty startle (惊吓).
“David, Todd, Amy.” Quiet voices could sound so much more threatening than shouting ones. “I need you to come into the kitchen. Now!”
Amy put her book down then, and the three of them dragged their feet into the kitchen. If they had tails, they would have been tucked (藏住) between their legs.
“Look at this place.” Todd’s mother said.
It was bad: newspapers in an untidy heap on the table, dirty dishes everywhere, an empty milk carton standing on the counter next to spilled cereal left over from breakfast, and two bags of groceries his mom had just carried in from the car.
“I want this cleaned up. I want these groceries put away. I want a decent meal represented on the table in sixty minutes. Call me when it’s ready. I’m going to be upstairs soaking in a hot tub.” Then she was gone.
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Todd, Amy and their father quickly got down to work.
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After their discussion, they were ready to make dinner.
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【参考范文】
Todd, Amy and their father quickly got down to work. He started loading dirty dishes into the dishwasher, as Amy and their father took the groceries out of the paper bags and put them on the shelves and in the fridge. “How does the food pyramid work ” their father broke the silence to ask. “You are supposed to eat a lot of grains and cereals.” Todd explained, who had studied the food pyramid at school last year. Todd drew a triangle shape on a piece of paper, divided the pyramid into four equal sections and labelled each one. They talked and decided that grains, vegetables, dairy products and protein were what they need.
After their discussion, they were ready to make dinner. They chose to make curried chicken breasts with rice. Amy reminded them of vegetables, and their father suggested putting some broccoli on the side. For dairy products, they got some yogurt from the fridge. It turned out that it took plenty of time to choose the recipe, locate the ingredients, and chop the vegetables before you even started to cook. Still, in less than an hour, it was done. When their mother came to the kitchen, she stared in apparent disbelief. “You even fixed broccoli,” she whispered. The family had dinner together and everyone believed it was the best meal they had ever had!
【写作指导】本文讲述了主人公托德的妈妈最近工作很忙碌，但仍要买菜、做饭和照顾家人。一天，妈妈很晚才下班回家，回到家中，看到儿子托德在做数学作业，女儿艾米在看书，丈夫大卫正躺在沙发上打瞌睡，托德的妈妈决定是时候让家人帮助她一起做家务了。她把家人叫到厨房，看着乱糟糟的厨房，嘱咐家人整理好并做好晚饭，她打算去泡个热水澡缓解疲劳。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“托德、艾米和他们的父亲很快开始工作。”可知，第一段可描写三个人整理厨房的过程和对晚餐的规划。
②由第二段首句内容“经过讨论，他们准备做晚饭。”可知，第二段可描写三个人做晚饭的过程和妈妈看到晚饭后的反应。
2．续写线索：整理厨房——规划晚饭——三人的讨论——开始做饭——晚饭完成——一家人的感受
3．词汇激活
行为类
①.开始做某事：start doing sth./begin doing sth.
②.打破沉默：break the silence/break the ice
③.应该做某事：be supposed to do sth./be expected to do sth.
情绪类
①.难以置信地：in disbelief/unbelievably
②.明显的：apparent/obvious
【典型句式】
[句式1]. When their mother came to the kitchen, she stared in apparent disbelief.(由when引导的时间状语从句)
[句式2]. The family had dinner together and everyone believed it was the best meal they had ever had!(由that引导的宾语从句作believed的宾语，省略了that；由that引导的限制性定语从句，修饰先行词meal，省略了that)
4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Larry had butterflies in his stomach. Today was the day for him to meet his girlfriend Kate’s parents. He was planning to leave them a good impression, so he was in his finest suit. On the way, he secretly recited a few jokes he picked up online the previous night. His weird behavior caught Kate’s attention.
“What are you doing, honey ” she asked. Blushing, Larry told her what he was doing. She, on the other hand, actually found his eagerness to please her family quite cute. “Well, let’s hear your jokes.” she said teasingly.
They were so immersed in their chatter and laughter that before they knew it, they had arrived at the house of Kate’s parents, who gave them a warm welcome. As an orphan, that night, Larry felt the love and warmth he had always longed for since childhood.
The next day, they drove downtown to pick their engagement ring. Everything was working out just perfectly. However, on their way home, a truck driven by a drunk driver smashed into their car, sending it flying off the roadside down a steep hill before it got stuck between several trees.
Larry struggled out of his seat to save the then unconscious Kate. As he made every effort to wake her up, the car began to slip down again. With only seconds to act, he hastily removed her seat belt and pushed her out of the car before it fell downhill again with him trapped inside.
A rescue team finally arrived and drove them to a nearby hospital. Under the doctors’ treatment, Kate woke up the next day. She was only slightly injured, but Larry remained unconscious due to severe damage done to his brain caused by the heavy impact.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右了；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1: The doctors were afraid Larry might never wake up again.
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Para 2: Larry told Kate to leave him and find someone else.
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【参考范文】The doctors were afraid Larry might never wake up again. The doctors told Kate the truth about Larry’s illness and told her to prepare for the worst. She was driving with Larry’s illness notice, tears in the corner of her eyes, and she thought of everything she had with Larry. Only yesterday, they had met with her parents, and Kate came back to the hospital room and saw Larry’s eyes seem to have opened, and he raised his hand slightly to signal Kate to come closer.
Larry told Kate to leave him and find someone else. When Kate saw Larry lying on his deathbed, she made some kind of decision. She squeezed his hand and told him“I would never leave you.” Larry’s eyes were filled with joy and a touch of worry. We never know which comes first, tomorrow or accident, but Kate firmly chooses Larry. She doesn’t care about accidents or tomorrow and she only wants to believe in love. The most precious thing in the world is this kind of feeling. I hope you can be as determined as Kate to choose your own life.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Larry在见女友凯特父母的那天受到了他们的热烈欢迎，感受到了他从小就渴望的爱和温暖，第二天，他们开车到市区去取订婚戒指，却被一辆卡车撞了，他奋力地将凯特推出车外，使凯特免受重伤，他自己却因为大脑受到重创而昏迷。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“医生把拉里生病的真相告诉了凯特，并让她做最坏的打算。”可知，第一段可描写凯特听见医生说的话后的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“当凯特看到拉里躺在弥留之际的床上时，她做出了某种决定。”可知，第二段可描写凯特的决定和拉里的反应。
2．续写线索：凯特回忆和拉里的一切——拉里示意凯特走近——告诉拉里自己的决定——拉里的反应——感悟
3．词汇激活
行为类
①想起：think of/recall
②告知：tell sb. sth./inform sb. of sth.
③充满：be filled with/be full of
情绪类
①高兴：joy/delight
②担心：worry/concern
【典型句式】
[句式1] She was driving with Larry’s illness notice, tears in the corner of her eyes, and she thought of everything she had with Larry. (由that引导的定语从句，省略了that)
[句式2] I hope you can be as determined as Kate to choose your own life. (由that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)
5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
At nine years old, I went through more than the usual amount of change for a girl of my age. In the past few months, my stable and predictable life had been turned upside down when my parents lost their jobs because of the economic crisis. This set into motion a series of events, including my parents losing our beautiful Victorian home and forcing our family into a fifteen - foot pull trailer we’d previously only used for weekend camping trips.
Life in the trailer was tough. We were incredibly crowded. When Mom, Dad, my brother and I all sat on the sofa at the end of the trailer, the entire front end began to tip in our direction, forcing one of us to jump up and rush to the front. Worse still, our food was not enough.
One day, my mother sat at the small table and casually wrote a wishing list on a paper towel — all about food, while keeping an eye on the last of our food, fried chicken, on the stovetop. “We need to pray,” she said aloud. “We don’t have enough food to last the week.” Then we joined hands and asked God to offer us some food.
Then Mom left the wishing list on the table, got up and started putting the chicken on a plate for dinner. I opened the tiny door and let the smell of dinner follow me as I wandered outside to find my dad. He was working on our broken-down truck. As Dad leaned over the engine, I noticed a disheveled man walking up to our trailer.
“Can I help you, sir ” my dad asked in his friendly way.
“I’m hoping you can,” he said, “I’m hungry and was wondering if you had any food to spare.”
I looked up at Dad, knowing we didn’t have much.
“Sure!” Dad said without hesitation. He brushed off his hands and went inside, quickly returning with a fresh piece of fried chicken wrapped in a paper towel. The man’s face lit up.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The man took the wrapped food and paused for a while.
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Actually, our family didn’t expect the man would return, so we got across the parking lot for a walk after dinner.
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【参考范文】
The man took the wrapped food and paused for a while. Then he ate up the home - cooked food, and I happily listened to a friendly conversation between the two men. The stranger mentioned that he had some canned food that he couldn’t use because he didn’t have a can opener. Dad offered him our can opener, but the man refused, saying he’d bring the cans later. Dad said that wasn’t necessary, but the man insisted.
Actually, our family didn’t expect the man would return, so we got across the parking lot for a walk after dinner. When we returned to the trailer, we were surprised to see three brown paper bags near the door, “Well, that man said he was going to leave us some canned food...” Dad whispered, Mom and Dad brought in the bags and began to unpack them on the table. Mom’s eyes got filled with tears when she spoke of her wishing list. “This is unbelievable!” Mom said in a surprised voice. Most of the items I listed are on our table! Milk, eggs, noodles, bread...” The list went on. It was enough to get us through another week.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者九岁时，父母因为经济危机失去了工作，一家人只能住在拖车里。某天母亲写下了一张关于食物的愿望清单，结果被一个来作者家要食物的男人看到了，男人吃完了作者家的饭菜，最后拿来了清单上的食物。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“男人拿着包好的食物，停了一会儿。”可知，第一段可描写陌生人来作者家吃饭的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“事实上，我们家人没想到那个人会回来，所以晚饭后我们穿过停车场去散步。”可知，第二段可描写男人为作者家买来了清单上的食物，作者一家非常感动。
2．续写线索：男人吃光食物——坚持拿罐头过来——发现纸袋——清点食物——实现食物清单
3．词汇激活
行为类
①提供：offer/provide
②拒绝：refuse/turn down
情绪类
①高兴地：happily /gladly
②惊讶的：surprised /astonished
【典型句式】
[句式1] The stranger mentioned that he had some canned food that he couldn’t use because he didn’t have a can opener. (运用了that引导宾语从句和because引导原因状语从句)
[句式2] When we returned to the trailer, we were surprised to see three brown paper bags near the door, “Well, that man said he was going to leave us some canned food...”(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
6.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It’s hard to talk to dads sometimes. The roles we often expect our fathers to play—protector, provider—can make them seem impenetrable(不可理解的). That’s how it was with my dad. He came to Canada at the age of ten and settled in an immigrant community. He was never much of a talker. He rarely drank, so we didn’t get to see him loosen up after a few beers. He didn’t tell stories about himself at the dinner table or when we went for walks in the park. He was a private person and seemed to want to stay that way.
Bringing up the many questions I had about life before I was born-his early hopes and dreams, loves and heartbreaks—let alone sharing my own feelings, felt like too much for us to handle. I didn’t want to threaten the integrity(完整)of his hard shell. I had gotten used to it, and it made me feel secure.
But when my relationship and career took a hit a year ago at the same time, things had to change. I was facing serious questions about my own nature, and I wanted to know that he had faced them, too. I needed to know how he had found his way, because I felt like I had lost mine.
In a severe moment of desperation, it occurred to me that sending an email might be the key. An email can be crafted(精心制作)slowly and carefully. I could speak at a comfortable distance and give him room to adjust. He’d be up in his office—a comfortable place filled with bookshelves, dusty CD-ROMs and piles of old newspapers. I’d be at my desk in an apartment 20 minutes away.
So I wrote to him. I told him about my regrets and fears, and I asked him to answer, if he felt like it, and to share something about himself, something that would give me much-needed perspective on my life, especially on relationship and career.
Para 1: Two weeks later, his response showed up in my email box.
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Para 2: I closed the email and started to cry.
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【答案】Para 1: Two weeks later, his response showed up in my email box. It was a scanned three-page document. Apparently, my dad had carefully considered my message, reached back into his memory and crafted a response. In the letter, he shared his history of love, longing, self-doubt, fears and struggles in life. He also offered me some practical suggestions on how to handle my relationship and career. While reading, I got the sense that it must have been really tough for my dad to settle down in a new country at an early age. I was also impressed by the great perseverance he showed in the face of difficulty.
Para 2: I closed the email and started to cry. I cried because I wished I had opened up earlier but was grateful it wasn’t too late. I cried because in the midst of my own struggles, his letter instantly put me at ease. And I cried because in the end, it was so simple: I just had to hit “Send”. We’ve since had many exchanges. My problems haven’t been magically solved, but getting to know my dad better–and learning to love him more–has made the tough stuff more manageable and life sweeter. It’s hard to talk to dads sometimes, but I’m glad that I found a way to talk to mine.
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的父亲是一个少言少语的人，作者习惯这样的父亲，也觉得这样很安全。但当作者的婚姻和职业受到打击时，他/她感到迷失了自我，想到父亲也可能曾经面临这样的问题，于是决定通过写邮件向他求助。
【详解】
1．段落续写
①根据第一段首句内容“两周后，他的回信出现在我的邮箱里”可知，下文可描写父亲在信里真诚地分享了自己的经历，以及作者的感受。
②根据第二段首句内容“我关了邮件开始哭起来”可知，下文可描写作者哭的原因，以及庆幸找到了和父亲进行交流的方式。
2．续写线索：受到回信——父亲分享自己的经历——对父亲有了更多了解——哭起来——为什么哭——庆幸能和父亲交流
3．词类激活
行为类
①思考：consider/think
②提供：offer/supply/give/provide
③解决：solve/settle
情绪类
①艰难的：hard/tough/difficult
②感激的：grateful/thankful
③高兴的：glad/delighted/pleased
【点睛】
[高分句型1]While reading, I got the sense that it must have been really tough for my dad to settle down in a new country at an early age. （运用了状语从句的省略）
[高分句型2]I cried because I wished I had opened up earlier but was grateful it wasn’t too late. （运用了because引导的原因状语从句，和虚拟语气）
7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Has Priya not come home as yet ” Surya asked. He had just returned from work. He was a cashier in the State Bank of Hyderabad, while his wife, Sharada a lab assistant in Reddy College for Women. Their daughter, Priya, was a Class X student in Saint Anne's School around six kilometers away. There was a direct bus from Priya's school.
“She should have been here by 4.30. It is 5:30 now and she still has not come,"Sharada replied.＂Yesterday too she was late. In fact, since the last few weeks she has been coming home late."
“Did you ask her ”
“Yes, I did, last week.”
“What did she say ”
“She numbed something about spending time with her best friend, then she kept quiet. You know she is not very forthcoming.One day she would be become an engineer or doctor."Priya was to appear for the Class X examination in April the next year. This was the month of July and her studies had started in real earnest. Morning six to eight she went for Maths and Physics tuition, and in the evening seven to eight for Chemistry.
The next day, Surya happened to discus Priya's strange behaviour with his colleague, Durga, who too had a teenaged daughter.
“Surya, you should not take it so lightly. I have an idea. My brother, Ajay, works in a Detective Agency. I will tell him. I am sure he will agree to follow her. Since Priya does not know him, she will not get suspicious.”
Surya kept silent for a while, finally agreed.
On Wednesday, Surya got a call in the office.
“Hello! Surya This is Ajay ”
“Yes, Ajay. Any news ”
“Plenty. Can you come to Arts College at 4.30 in the evening ”
“Why ”
“I will explain when we meet.”
Sharp at 4.30, Surya parked his scooter in front of the Arts College Building. Ajay was waiting for him. “Come with me, “he said. They went behind the building and took a path which led to a small Hanuman Temple. Surya had been there with Priya a couple of times and they both quite liked the serenity of the place.When they reached the place, Ajay asked him to quietly look from behind a boulder.
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2．请按如下格式作答。
As Surya looked, he was surprised
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“I left my paintings in the temple. I want to become a painter.” Priya answered on the sofa.
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【答案】As Surya looked, he was surprised. He saw Priya sitting in the small courtyard in front of the temple. There was a canvas in front of her and she was busy painting. A few paint bottles, brushes and drawing sheets were lying around. Beside her were several canvases, Surya was struck by the beauty, the raw energy, of his daughter’s art. Then he left, determined not to disturb her. But why did she spend so much time painting at the approach of the Class X examination Surya kept wondering until Priya came home that evening. “Why are you late again Spending time painting Where are your paintings ” he asked directly.
“I left my paintings in the temple. I want to become a painter. Priya answered on the sofa. “I do not mind struggling, even starving to realize my dream. Is it really that wrong to chase one's dream ” Struck by the child's determination, Surya was lost in thought. They always wanted their daughter to study Physics, Chemistry, Maths, Biology,and become an engineer or a doctor.They believed painting couldn't guarantee her bread and butter but engineering or medicine could. Maybe it was time to change.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Surya发现女儿Priya一直回家很晚，为了弄清楚女儿的这些奇怪行为，他的同事建议让自己的兄弟Ajay帮助他弄清楚，最后Ajay带着Surya来到了一所寺庙，发现女儿在画画。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当Surya看着，他感到很惊讶。”可知，第一段可描写Surya发现女儿在画画，画的很好，Surya没有打扰她，等到女儿回家，直接询问女儿的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“‘我把我的画留在了寺庙里。我想成为一名画家。’Priya坐在沙发上回答道。”可知，第二段可描写Priya告诉Surya渴望实现自己成为画家的梦想，Surya陷入深思，他们总是想要让女儿学习物理，化学，数学等，想要让她成为医生或者工程师，现在Surya有了改变。
2．续写线索：看到女儿画画——父亲被吸引——询问——女儿决心实现梦想——父亲反思——做出改变
3．词汇激活
行为类
①.忙于做某事：be busy doing sth./be occupied in doing sth.
②.被……吸引：be struck by/be attracted by
③.下定决心做某事：determined to do sth./make up one’s mind to do sth.
情绪类
好奇：wonder/ be curious/be full of curiosity
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Surya kept wondering until Priya came home that evening.（运用了until引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]. They believed painting couldn't guarantee her bread and butter but engineering or medicine could.（运用了省略连接词的宾语从句）
8．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming. Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents’ eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, shouting excitedly “Grandpa, we are back!”
Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn’t stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly (倔强地), “I can!” Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs...How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn't get up. This made them worried. “We’d think out a way to cheer him up.” Jack said. “Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird.” Berlin suggested. “But he hates birds being caged!” Jack shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Jack’s mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!”
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Berlin thought it was a good idea.
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Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.
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【答案】Berlin thought it was a good idea. When the two brothers reached an agreement, they quickly ran back to their grandfather’s house, got the tools they needed to make the cane, and ran back to the woods. Jack said, “What kind of tree should we pick for the walking stick ” Berlin thought for a moment and said, “I think we should choose a straight tree, so no knots will scratch grandpa’s hands.” Jack nodded his head in agreement. They found a straight tree and set to work. They cut the tree down, and with a knife they took the bark off. It was a wonderful tree, which was smooth and was just of the right size. They thought grandpa would love it.
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. When grandpa took the cane, his hands shook with joy, thinking, “This is made by my grandsons themselves. How precious it is!” Jack said, “Grandpa, we hope this cane will help you stand up and come with us to explore the woods.” Grandpa smiled and decided to give it a try so as not to make his grandchildren disappointed. He held the cane in his right hand and the arm of his chair in his left hand. He stood up with strength on his legs. Everyone was surprised and excited to see grandpa stand up. At that moment, Jack noticed a tear coming from the corner of his grandfather’s eye.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了暑假即将来临，杰克和他的弟弟柏林去看望祖父母，他们却发现爷爷站不起来了，兄弟俩走进了森林，杰克突然想到了一个好主意，就是给爷爷做一根手杖。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“柏林认为这是个好主意。”可知，第一段可描写兄弟俩怎么做手杖。
②由第二段首句内容“杰克和伯林把手杖递给爷爷。”可知，第二段可描写爷爷拿到手杖后的反应。
2．续写线索：拿工具——做手杖——爷爷尝试站起来——众人反应
3．词汇激活
行为类
①拿：get/fetch
②砍下：cut down/chop down
③站起来：stand up/rise to one’s feet
情绪类
①高兴：joy/delight
②兴奋的：excited/thrilled
【点睛】
[高分句型1]When the two brothers reached an agreement, they quickly ran back to their grandfather’s house, got the tools they needed to make the cane, and ran back to the woods.(由when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]It was a wonderful tree, which was smooth and was just of the right size.(由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
9．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Two months to save my girl’s life
As my feet pounded the pavement, sweat dripped down my forehead and back. “Just a little bit further,” I told myself, determined to push forward. Though I’d never been much of a runner, I had a crucial motivation to save my little girl, Bridie. Born in January 2017, she had beautiful big blue eyes. But shortly after her arrival, doctors pointed out that her head was measuring quite large. Within days, she was diagnosed with sagittal craniosynostosis. Doctors explained that she’d need surgery. They also noticed that her limbs and fingers were measuring quite short, so Bridie went through genetic testing to find out why. When the results came back, my wife and I met with the specialist. “Bridie has Mainzer-Saldino syndrome,” he said. He also revealed the rare condition would cause reinal (视网膜的) degeneration, meaning she could go blind and develop kidney (肾) disease.
So, when Bridie fell ill in 2019 with common flu, it caused a loss to her little body. Sadly, the medications she needed to help her recover weakened her kidneys even further. By December that year, her specialist revealed they were only functioning at 30 percent. “If it gets any worse, she will need to start dialysis (透析),” he admitted, adding that a transplant might be required sooner than we first thought.
It broke my heart, and I knew I had to step up to help save my girl. So I volunteered to give her one of my kidneys right away. After undergoing multiple tests, I was declared a match. But there were still several barriers I had to overcome before I had the all-clear to donate.
“You’ll have to lose 15 kilos before we consider you fit to transplant,” the specialist told me in June. He gave me two months to get into shape. At 96.5 kilos, I wasn’t overweight, but I needed to lower my BMI to be fit for the surgery.
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2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was determined to do whatever it took to save my little girl.
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In November, the big day finally arrived.
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【答案】 I was determined to do whatever it took to save my little girl. I cut back on beer and pub meals, such as fried chicken and chips, and stuck to eating healthier options, such as lean meat and vegetables instead. I also invested in a new pair of joggers and went running every day. Incredibly, by August, I had managed to lose weight and was given the all-clear to go ahead.
In November, the big day finally arrived. Wheeled into operating theatre around 8 am, my nerves were very tense. When I came to several hours later, my wife was there by my side, smiling. Thankfully, Bridie’s surgery was also believed to be a success. After two days, I was finally well enough to visit my precious daughter. I felt so good to see a smile on her face. Our brave girl had more energy with each day that passed. Seeing the smile on our beautiful Bridie’s face makes it all worthwhile.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的女儿患有肾病，需要移植手术，作者自愿马上给她一个肾，但是必须在两个月之内减掉15公斤。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我下定决心要不惜一切代价救我的小女儿。”可知，第一段可描写作者如何努力减肥。
②由第二段首句内容“11月，这个大日子终于到来了。”可知，第二段可描写做手术及手术的效果。
2．续写线索：健康饮食——跑步——做手术——手术成功
3．词汇激活
行为类
①减少：cut back on/cut down on
②跑步：go running/go jogging
③进手术室：wheel into operating theatre/enter the operating room
④看望：visit/pay a visit to
情绪类
①难以置信地：incredibly/unbelievably
②感激地：thankfully/gratefully
【点睛】
[高分句型1]When I came to several hours later, my wife was there by my side, smiling. (由when引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]Our brave girl had more energy with each day that passed. (由关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句)
10．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was six o’clock when Breanna heard her mother’s phone receive a text message as it’s at on the kitchen bench. “Mum, I bet it’s Dad!” Breanna said and jumped up from the sofa, books spilling out in front of her. She had been deciding which story her dad would read in one of his funny voices for the night. Breanna’s mum rubbed her temples (太阳穴) and sighed softly. “Honey, would you mind seeing if that’s Daddy I’ve got a bad headache but I want to start cooking a lovely meal for us to enjoy tonight.”
“Sure, mum,” Breanna skipped into the kitchen to check the phone. Her dad had been away for two whole nights working on a malfunction (故障) at his company’s warehouse that was at risk of theft. Breanna felt sure he’d been able to act like a superhero and save the day — but did it have to take so long She picked up the phone and read the message, “Just leaving now — can’t wait to see you both.” Breanna confirmed excitedly, “It’s from Daddy! He’s on his way home!”
Her mother managed a weak smile as her daughter clapped her hands with joy. It had been four months since she’d lost her job and with only one income to support the family. Her husband had taken on as many shifts and extra duties as he could to make ends meet. Times were tough and he was working long hours, but it made the time Breanna spent with her daddy even more special. “Oh, that’s wonderful news. Now let’s see what I can find to eat,” her mother rose painfully from the sofa and added.
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1． 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Great! Mum’s got a bad headache but I’m going to help her cook dinner. See you soon!” Breanna sent her dad a quick reply.
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Another message from her father drew Breanna’s attention.
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【答案】
“Great! Mum’s got a bad headache but I’m going to help her cook dinner. See you soon!” Breanna send her dad a quick reply. As Breanna opened the door of the refrigerator, she heard her mother sigh again. The shelves of the refrigerator had been almost empty for too long. Her mother said, “Oh, I think maybe we/ 让教学更有效 高效备考 | 英语学科
温暖亲情类故事
写作导图
一、冲突构建：情感的张力之源
（通过情感矛盾展现亲情的珍贵性）
1． 矛盾激化
【生气冲突】
例句：My mother glanced at me. Something she never did before I had a stepfamily. "You could have picked it up," she said. "That would have been the kind thing to do."
（母亲瞥了我一眼——这在重组家庭之前她从未有过的动作。"你本可以捡起来的，"她说，"这才是有教养的做法。"）
解析：虚拟语气（could have/would have）强化事后的懊悔感，暗示未完成的期待。肢体动作描写（glanced）替代直接心理描写，更显克制张力。
【后悔心理】
例句：I realized how poorly I tied the string on my skirt which was over leggings. I should have asked mom for help.
（当我意识到自己把罩裙带子系得一团糟时，真该让妈妈帮忙的。）
技巧：细节描写（skirt over leggings）具象化场景，should have done结构强化追悔莫及的心理。
二 情感发酵（2种进阶写法）
【复合修辞】
例句：Thinking about what I had done to him, regret and guilt overwhelmed me like endless tides.
（每当想起对他的所作所为，悔恨如无尽潮水将我淹没。）
亮点：比喻（tides）+ 夸张（endless）构建情感强度，现在分词前置营造沉浸感。
【动作暗示】
例句：Watching Shirley's smile fading away, Peter frowned.
（看着雪莉的笑容渐渐消失，彼得皱起眉头。）
解析：非谓语结构（watching）建立画面同步性，表情变化（smile→frown）暗示情感转折。
三、冲突化解：情感的治愈路径
（通过具体行动展现亲情的力量）
1． 和解三部曲
【真诚道歉】
例句："I’m so sorry," he said, gently petting Jackson’s head.
（"真的很抱歉，"他轻抚杰克逊的头说道。）
技法：伴随动作（petting）软化语言冲击，副词（gently）传达温柔态度。
【暖心原谅】
例句：His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips, gave a soft kiss on his forehead and walked out of the study.
（母亲将手指轻按他嘴唇示意安静，在额头印下轻吻，悄然离开了书房。）
解析：动作链描写（putting→gave→walked）构建电影镜头感，无声举动胜于言语。
2． 情感升华
【意象隐喻】
例句：Cheerful singing floating in the room, the two sisters immersed themselves in the beauty of the music.
（欢快的歌声在房间飘荡，两姐妹沉醉于音乐之美。）
亮点：独立主格（singing floating）营造环境氛围，抽象概念（beauty）具象化亲情体验。
【顿悟时刻】
例句：It was Henry's kindness that made me feel the warmth from our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.
（正是亨利的善良让我感受到家的温暖，我将用心珍藏这份情谊。）
技巧：强调句型（It was...that）突出情感核心，动词选择（treasure）体现珍视程度。
四、主题升华：情感的永恒价值
（通过象征手法深化亲情意义）
1． 象征物运用【延续性意象】
例句：From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest.
（自那以后，每当想要说谎时，三颗巧克力就会在心中敲响警钟，提醒他保持诚实。）
解析：具象物品（chocolates）承载抽象品质（honesty），建立持续性的道德隐喻。
2． 成长性表达【心理蜕变】
例句：I nodded firmly, knowing a flower of kindness and friendship began to blossom in both of our hearts.
（我坚定点头，深知善意与友谊之花已在彼此心间绽放。）
技法：植物意象（flower）隐喻情感成长，进行时态（began to）暗示持续发展。
背精彩句子，让表达出彩
1．Cheerful singing floating in the room, the two sisters were absorbed in the beauty of the music.
欢快的歌声飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在美妙的音乐中。
2．A surge of happiness and warmth running through her, Mom kissed the two sisters gently.
一股幸福与温暖流遍她的全身，妈妈温柔地亲了亲两姐妹。
3．Every morning, my mother wakes up early to prepare breakfast for the family, filling the house with the aroma of freshly cooked food.
每天早上，我的母亲早早地起床为全家准备早餐，让整个房子充满着新鲜烹制食物的香气。
4．Whenever I'm feeling stressed or overwhelmed, my parents are always there to offer a listening ear and a shoulder to cry on.
每当我感到压力或不知所措时，我的父母总是在那里倾听我的心声并给我依靠的肩膀。
5．“I want to give you a surprise！” he pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes shining.
“我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。
6．Every time I faced challenges, a thought of giving up flashed in my mind, but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going.
每次面对挑战，我都想放弃，但是家人的支持给了我继续前进的力量。
7．On rainy days, my family likes to stay indoors and watch movies, snuggled up under blankets and enjoying each other's company.
在下雨的日子里，我的家人喜欢待在室内看电影，蜷缩在毯子下享受彼此的陪伴。
8．My parents always make sure to attend my school events and cheer me on, showing their unwavering support and love.
我的父母总是确保出席我的学校活动，并为我呐喊加油，展现他们不动摇的支持和爱。
9．My parents often surprise us with small gifts or treats, showing their appreciation and love for us.
我的父母经常给我们惊喜，送上小礼物或小零食，表达他们对我们的欣赏和爱。
10.he trembling mother's voice was full of unselfish love as she gave her last instruction.
母亲发出最后的叮嘱时，颤巍巍的声音里充满了无私的爱。
11.Seeing his families sitting together and staying together harmoniously, Cater felt a sense of happiness.
看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，Cater感觉到一种幸福感。
12.My parents often take us on nature walks, pointing out different plants and animals and teaching us about the environment.
我的父母经常带我们去散步，指出不同的植物和动物，并教育我们环保知识。
13.My parents always make sure to prioritize family time over work or other obligations, showing us the value of spending time together.
我的父母总是把家庭时间放在工作或其他义务之前，向我们展示共度时光的价值。
14.The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warmed us.
透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光和我们家人之间的爱，温暖了我们。
15.Dad fixed his eyes on the paper, a pleasant smile lifting the corner of his mouth.
爸爸眼睛盯着那张纸，嘴角上扬，露出愉快的微笑。
高考真题演练
2021年6月新高考卷（母亲节的惊喜）
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
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Paragraph 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
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2017年11月浙江卷（和妈妈去旅行）
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother — loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids ” “What ! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections. If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
模拟演练
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段话，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As a young boy, I sometimes traveled the country roads with my dad. He was a rural mail carrier and on Saturdays he would ask me to go with him. Driving through the countryside was always an adventure: There were animals to see, people to visit, and chocolate cookies if you knew where to stop, and Dad did.
In the spring, Dad delivered boxes full of baby chickens, and when I was a boy it was such fun to stick your fingers through one of the holes of the boxes and let the baby birds peck (啄) on your fingers.
On Dad’s final day of work, it took him well into the evening to complete his rounds because at least one member from each fatuity was waiting at their mailbox to appreciate him for his friendship and his years of service. “Two hundred and nineteen mailboxes on my route,” he used to say, and a story at every one. One lady had no mailbox, so Dad took the mail in to her every day because she was nearly blind. He once lectured me that to bring everyone plain pleasure is his greatest pleasure, which has clung to me so far.
Mailboxes were sometimes used for things other than mail. On cold days Dad might find one of his customers waiting for him with a cup of hot chocolate. A young girl wrote letters but had no stamps, so she left a few buttons on the envelope in the mailbox; Dad paid for the stamps.
With a heavy heart, I traveled back to my hometown on the sad occasion of Dad’s death, and the mailboxes along the way reminded me of some of his stories. I thought I knew them all, but that wasn’t the case.
As I drove home, I noticed two lamp poles, one on each side of the street. When my dad was around, those poles supported wooden boxes about four feet off the ground. One box was painted green, and the other was red, and each had a long narrow hole at the top with white lettering: Santa Claus, NORTH POLE. For years children had dropped letters to Santa through those holes. I was among the kids whose letters were always answered in time.
I made a turn at the corner and drove past the post office and across the railroad tracks to our house. Mom and I were sitting at the kitchen table when I heard footsteps. There, at the door, stood Frank Townsend, Dad’s postmaster and great friend for many years. Threads of silver ran through his beard and the hair. Obviously, time and sorrow for the past days ploughed deep wrinkles on his brow. Sitting down at the table, he began to tell old stories.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150词左右；
2． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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At one point Frank looked at me with tears in his eyes as if recalling something.
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Thinking of my father’s philosophy of pleasure, I resolved to be this year’s Santa Claus.
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2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
School was over, the day was fading and it started to rain. I stood at the school gate, with a loaded backpack on my shoulders. It was Friday again—a weekend of joy with unlimited sleeping hours and dinner courses specially made to my taste. I waved goodbye to my friends as they jumped into their fathers’ warm and comfortable cars. Curiously, this gave rise to a disturbing feeling in me. It was not exactly what they called jealousy (嫉妒), but something like depression. I knew all I could expect was an old bike Mom would ride along on, with the badly-oiled chain creaking against the wheel to announce her arrival.
Every Friday when Mom came to pick me up, it was a moment full of great expectation and great unease. I always felt my face burning as we rode our way in and out of the cars and saw my friends’ faces sticking out of the car windows. It was like stepping into a ballroom with beautifully dressed ladies and finding yourself in a smelly T-shirt.
To tell you the truth, Mom is quite a headache occasionally. She looks like a homely middle-aged housewife. She knits (编织) most of my sweaters, chiefly in old styles. Whenever caught by some curious classmates asking what brand my sweaters are, I’d force a smile and reply in a half-joking manner: homemade. She simply doesn’t seem to understand what’s in fashion; Chanel or Gucci means nothing to her.
I couldn’t remember when I started to find her such an embarrassment. As a little boy, I relied on her so much. She had been working at home, cooking in the kitchen, knitting by the lamp, or riding across town to buy me a book I badly needed. It had always been fun riding with her. I had enjoyed watching our shadows growing longer and shorter in an alternate fashion by the light of the streetlamps along the road. Just now there seemed to be something standing between us, something that made her so strange to me and me to her.
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Today Mom showed up in a raincoat.
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Mom tried to cover me with the raincoat again as a storm set in.
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Todd was lying on the family room floor doing math homework, when he heard his mother, back from her shift at the Crafts Cottage. She was later than usual, so she must have stopped on the way home to get groceries after her work. Todd hoped so. Groceries were one of life’s good things. It was getting late, and Todd felt a bit hungry. As a matter of fact, he could hear his stomach growling. He only had some cereal for breakfast this morning. If only he could have a bite at his favorite food—the apple pie made by his mother! But it had been a while since she made desserts for them, for she had been much occupied recently.
His mother came into the family room and clicked off the TV. Todd looked at Amy, who was so lost in her book that she didn’t seem to notice their mother’s presence in the room. But their father, dozing (打瞌睡) on the couch with the remote in his hand, came awake with a guilty startle (惊吓).
“David, Todd, Amy.” Quiet voices could sound so much more threatening than shouting ones. “I need you to come into the kitchen. Now!”
Amy put her book down then, and the three of them dragged their feet into the kitchen. If they had tails, they would have been tucked (藏住) between their legs.
“Look at this place.” Todd’s mother said.
It was bad: newspapers in an untidy heap on the table, dirty dishes everywhere, an empty milk carton standing on the counter next to spilled cereal left over from breakfast, and two bags of groceries his mom had just carried in from the car.
“I want this cleaned up. I want these groceries put away. I want a decent meal represented on the table in sixty minutes. Call me when it’s ready. I’m going to be upstairs soaking in a hot tub.” Then she was gone.
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Todd, Amy and their father quickly got down to work.
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After their discussion, they were ready to make dinner.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Larry had butterflies in his stomach. Today was the day for him to meet his girlfriend Kate’s parents. He was planning to leave them a good impression, so he was in his finest suit. On the way, he secretly recited a few jokes he picked up online the previous night. His weird behavior caught Kate’s attention.
“What are you doing, honey ” she asked. Blushing, Larry told her what he was doing. She, on the other hand, actually found his eagerness to please her family quite cute. “Well, let’s hear your jokes.” she said teasingly.
They were so immersed in their chatter and laughter that before they knew it, they had arrived at the house of Kate’s parents, who gave them a warm welcome. As an orphan, that night, Larry felt the love and warmth he had always longed for since childhood.
The next day, they drove downtown to pick their engagement ring. Everything was working out just perfectly. However, on their way home, a truck driven by a drunk driver smashed into their car, sending it flying off the roadside down a steep hill before it got stuck between several trees.
Larry struggled out of his seat to save the then unconscious Kate. As he made every effort to wake her up, the car began to slip down again. With only seconds to act, he hastily removed her seat belt and pushed her out of the car before it fell downhill again with him trapped inside.
A rescue team finally arrived and drove them to a nearby hospital. Under the doctors’ treatment, Kate woke up the next day. She was only slightly injured, but Larry remained unconscious due to severe damage done to his brain caused by the heavy impact.
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Para 1: The doctors were afraid Larry might never wake up again.
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Para 2: Larry told Kate to leave him and find someone else.
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5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
At nine years old, I went through more than the usual amount of change for a girl of my age. In the past few months, my stable and predictable life had been turned upside down when my parents lost their jobs because of the economic crisis. This set into motion a series of events, including my parents losing our beautiful Victorian home and forcing our family into a fifteen - foot pull trailer we’d previously only used for weekend camping trips.
Life in the trailer was tough. We were incredibly crowded. When Mom, Dad, my brother and I all sat on the sofa at the end of the trailer, the entire front end began to tip in our direction, forcing one of us to jump up and rush to the front. Worse still, our food was not enough.
One day, my mother sat at the small table and casually wrote a wishing list on a paper towel — all about food, while keeping an eye on the last of our food, fried chicken, on the stovetop. “We need to pray,” she said aloud. “We don’t have enough food to last the week.” Then we joined hands and asked God to offer us some food.
Then Mom left the wishing list on the table, got up and started putting the chicken on a plate for dinner. I opened the tiny door and let the smell of dinner follow me as I wandered outside to find my dad. He was working on our broken-down truck. As Dad leaned over the engine, I noticed a disheveled man walking up to our trailer.
“Can I help you, sir ” my dad asked in his friendly way.
“I’m hoping you can,” he said, “I’m hungry and was wondering if you had any food to spare.”
I looked up at Dad, knowing we didn’t have much.
“Sure!” Dad said without hesitation. He brushed off his hands and went inside, quickly returning with a fresh piece of fried chicken wrapped in a paper towel. The man’s face lit up.
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The man took the wrapped food and paused for a while.
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Actually, our family didn’t expect the man would return, so we got across the parking lot for a walk after dinner.
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6.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It’s hard to talk to dads sometimes. The roles we often expect our fathers to play—protector, provider—can make them seem impenetrable(不可理解的). That’s how it was with my dad. He came to Canada at the age of ten and settled in an immigrant community. He was never much of a talker. He rarely drank, so we didn’t get to see him loosen up after a few beers. He didn’t tell stories about himself at the dinner table or when we went for walks in the park. He was a private person and seemed to want to stay that way.
Bringing up the many questions I had about life before I was born-his early hopes and dreams, loves and heartbreaks—let alone sharing my own feelings, felt like too much for us to handle. I didn’t want to threaten the integrity(完整)of his hard shell. I had gotten used to it, and it made me feel secure.
But when my relationship and career took a hit a year ago at the same time, things had to change. I was facing serious questions about my own nature, and I wanted to know that he had faced them, too. I needed to know how he had found his way, because I felt like I had lost mine.
In a severe moment of desperation, it occurred to me that sending an email might be the key. An email can be crafted(精心制作)slowly and carefully. I could speak at a comfortable distance and give him room to adjust. He’d be up in his office—a comfortable place filled with bookshelves, dusty CD-ROMs and piles of old newspapers. I’d be at my desk in an apartment 20 minutes away.
So I wrote to him. I told him about my regrets and fears, and I asked him to answer, if he felt like it, and to share something about himself, something that would give me much-needed perspective on my life, especially on relationship and career.
Para 1: Two weeks later, his response showed up in my email box.
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Para 2: I closed the email and started to cry.
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“Has Priya not come home as yet ” Surya asked. He had just returned from work. He was a cashier in the State Bank of Hyderabad, while his wife, Sharada a lab assistant in Reddy College for Women. Their daughter, Priya, was a Class X student in Saint Anne's School around six kilometers away. There was a direct bus from Priya's school.
“She should have been here by 4.30. It is 5:30 now and she still has not come,"Sharada replied.＂Yesterday too she was late. In fact, since the last few weeks she has been coming home late."
“Did you ask her ”
“Yes, I did, last week.”
“What did she say ”
“She numbed something about spending time with her best friend, then she kept quiet. You know she is not very forthcoming.One day she would be become an engineer or doctor."Priya was to appear for the Class X examination in April the next year. This was the month of July and her studies had started in real earnest. Morning six to eight she went for Maths and Physics tuition, and in the evening seven to eight for Chemistry.
The next day, Surya happened to discus Priya's strange behaviour with his colleague, Durga, who too had a teenaged daughter.
“Surya, you should not take it so lightly. I have an idea. My brother, Ajay, works in a Detective Agency. I will tell him. I am sure he will agree to follow her. Since Priya does not know him, she will not get suspicious.”
Surya kept silent for a while, finally agreed.
On Wednesday, Surya got a call in the office.
“Hello! Surya This is Ajay ”
“Yes, Ajay. Any news ”
“Plenty. Can you come to Arts College at 4.30 in the evening ”
“Why ”
“I will explain when we meet.”
Sharp at 4.30, Surya parked his scooter in front of the Arts College Building. Ajay was waiting for him. “Come with me, “he said. They went behind the building and took a path which led to a small Hanuman Temple. Surya had been there with Priya a couple of times and they both quite liked the serenity of the place.When they reached the place, Ajay asked him to quietly look from behind a boulder.
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As Surya looked, he was surprised
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“I left my paintings in the temple. I want to become a painter.” Priya answered on the sofa.
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8．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming. Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents’ eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, shouting excitedly “Grandpa, we are back!”
Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn’t stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly (倔强地), “I can!” Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs...How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn't get up. This made them worried. “We’d think out a way to cheer him up.” Jack said. “Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird.” Berlin suggested. “But he hates birds being caged!” Jack shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Jack’s mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!”
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Berlin thought it was a good idea.
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Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.
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9．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Two months to save my girl’s life
As my feet pounded the pavement, sweat dripped down my forehead and back. “Just a little bit further,” I told myself, determined to push forward. Though I’d never been much of a runner, I had a crucial motivation to save my little girl, Bridie. Born in January 2017, she had beautiful big blue eyes. But shortly after her arrival, doctors pointed out that her head was measuring quite large. Within days, she was diagnosed with sagittal craniosynostosis. Doctors explained that she’d need surgery. They also noticed that her limbs and fingers were measuring quite short, so Bridie went through genetic testing to find out why. When the results came back, my wife and I met with the specialist. “Bridie has Mainzer-Saldino syndrome,” he said. He also revealed the rare condition would cause reinal (视网膜的) degeneration, meaning she could go blind and develop kidney (肾) disease.
So, when Bridie fell ill in 2019 with common flu, it caused a loss to her little body. Sadly, the medications she needed to help her recover weakened her kidneys even further. By December that year, her specialist revealed they were only functioning at 30 percent. “If it gets any worse, she will need to start dialysis (透析),” he admitted, adding that a transplant might be required sooner than we first thought.
It broke my heart, and I knew I had to step up to help save my girl. So I volunteered to give her one of my kidneys right away. After undergoing multiple tests, I was declared a match. But there were still several barriers I had to overcome before I had the all-clear to donate.
“You’ll have to lose 15 kilos before we consider you fit to transplant,” the specialist told me in June. He gave me two months to get into shape. At 96.5 kilos, I wasn’t overweight, but I needed to lower my BMI to be fit for the surgery.
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I was determined to do whatever it took to save my little girl.
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In November, the big day finally arrived.
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10．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was six o’clock when Breanna heard her mother’s phone receive a text message as it’s at on the kitchen bench. “Mum, I bet it’s Dad!” Breanna said and jumped up from the sofa, books spilling out in front of her. She had been deciding which story her dad would read in one of his funny voices for the night. Breanna’s mum rubbed her temples (太阳穴) and sighed softly. “Honey, would you mind seeing if that’s Daddy I’ve got a bad headache but I want to start cooking a lovely meal for us to enjoy tonight.”
“Sure, mum,” Breanna skipped into the kitchen to check the phone. Her dad had been away for two whole nights working on a malfunction (故障) at his company’s warehouse that was at risk of theft. Breanna felt sure he’d been able to act like a superhero and save the day — but did it have to take so long She picked up the phone and read the message, “Just leaving now — can’t wait to see you both.” Breanna confirmed excitedly, “It’s from Daddy! He’s on his way home!”
Her mother managed a weak smile as her daughter clapped her hands with joy. It had been four months since she’d lost her job and with only one income to support the family. Her husband had taken on as many shifts and extra duties as he could to make ends meet. Times were tough and he was working long hours, but it made the time Breanna spent with her daddy even more special. “Oh, that’s wonderful news. Now let’s see what I can find to eat,” her mother rose painfully from the sofa and added.
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“Great! Mum’s got a bad headache but I’m going to help her cook dinner. See you soon!” Breanna sent her dad a quick reply.
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Another message from her father drew Breanna’s attention.
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