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人和动物类故事
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情节构建方法论
救助与回报模式
▌典型情节：施救行为→建立信任→情感升华→命运重逢
例句1: Wrapping the injured owl in his jacket, Ethan gently secured its trembling wings. (伊桑用夹克裹住受伤的猫头鹰，轻轻固定它颤抖的翅膀)
[翻译] 动词链wrapping→securing构成完整救助动作，trembling wings暗示动物脆弱性
例句2: The golden retriever nudged the boy's limp body toward the riverbank with its muzzle. (金毛犬用鼻尖将男孩瘫软的身体推向河岸)
[翻译] 动物救助场景中nudged→pushing构成连续动作链，limp body营造危机感
例句3: Years later, the wolf I'd bandaged emerged from the mist, leading her pack away from our campsite. (数年后，我曾包扎的狼从迷雾中出现，带领狼群远离我们的营地)
[翻译] 时空跨度搭建命运闭环，leading体现动物智慧与报恩
例句4: The fox cub's daily visits evolved from stealing chicken eggs to accepting hand-fed berries. (幼狐从偷鸡蛋到接受亲手喂莓果的每日造访)
[翻译] evolve from...to...展示关系递进，stealing→accepting形成行为对比
共生日常描写
▌情感构建：细节积累→信任考验→情感认同→生命共情
例句1: Each dawn, the wounded sparrow would tap its beak against my windowpane, a feathery metronome. (每个黎明，受伤的麻雀都会用喙轻叩窗玻璃，像羽毛节拍器)
[翻译] 比喻手法将日常行为诗意化，tap...metronome形成听觉意象
例句2: The stray cat's matted fur gradually regained luster under Grandma's meticulous combing. (流浪猫打结的毛发在奶奶精心梳理下重焕光泽)
[翻译] matted→regained构成视觉转变链，meticulous combing暗示持久关怀
例句3: Our golden retriever would "accidentally" knock over the cookie jar whenever Mom baked oatmeal cookies. (每当妈妈烤燕麦饼干，金毛总会"意外"撞翻饼干罐)
[翻译] 拟人化双引号制造幽默感，展示宠物性格特征
例句4: The hedgehog family's autumn nest-building ritual became our favorite backyard theater. (刺猬家族的筑巢仪式成为我们最爱的后院剧场)
[翻译] ritual→theater比喻赋予动物行为仪式感，our体现情感共鸣
主题深化技巧
1． 生命对话描写
▌互动范式：语言障碍→行为沟通→情感互通→生命平等
例句1: When the injured dolphin pressed its forehead against mine, saltwater mingled with my tears. (受伤海豚将额头抵住我的时，海水与泪水交融)
[翻译] forehead against mine建立跨物种亲密接触，mingled象征情感融合
例句2: The old shepherd's whistle echoed through the valley, answered by a chorus of bleating lambs. (老牧羊人的口哨回荡山谷，应和着此起彼伏的羔羊叫声)
[翻译] echoed→answered构成声音对话，chorus拟人化动物回应
例句3: My fingers traced the raised scars on the horse's flank—silent testaments to its survival story. (指尖抚过马匹侧腹的凸起伤疤，这些无声的生存见证)
[翻译] 触觉描写连接生命记忆，silent testaments深化主题
例句4: In the tiger's amber eyes, I saw not ferocity but the same parental anxiety mirroring my own. (在老虎琥珀色眼眸中，我看到的不是凶猛，而是与自己相同的父母焦虑)
[翻译] 眼神描写突破物种隔阂，mirroring实现情感映照
情感升华策略
1． 永恒承诺表达
▌情感锚点：物质记忆→精神传承→生命延续→永恒羁绊
例句1: The dog's weathered collar now hangs on my study wall, its jingling tags still composing phantom melodies. (狗狗磨损的项圈挂在书房，叮当铭牌仍奏响幻影旋律)
[翻译] 物品寄托思念，phantom melodies引发通感记忆
例句2: Every spring, butterflies emerge from the chrysalises we nurtured, carrying our shared summer into the sky. (每年春天，我们培育的蝶蛹破茧，携着共度的夏日飞向天空)
[翻译] 生命循环意象，carrying...into实现情感转化
例句3: My daughter now feeds the same oak tree squirrels I befriended two decades ago. (女儿如今喂养着二十年前我结识的橡树松鼠)
[翻译] 时间维度拓展情感，same强调生命传承
例句4: The wolf's howl at dawn wasn't a wilderness cry, but a familiar lullaby from my childhood. (黎明的狼嚎不再是荒野之音，而是儿时熟悉的摇篮曲)
[翻译] 听觉记忆转化，not...but...重构认知
创新视角示范
创新维度：时空错位→物种置换→情感反转→认知颠覆
例句1: From my perch in the maple tree, I watched the human child clumsily rebuild my toppled nest. (栖身枫树，我望着人类孩子笨拙地重建我倾覆的鸟巢)
[翻译] 动物视角叙述，perch建立观察角度，clumsily制造反差萌
例句2: The fire hydrant's red paint was fading, just like the old man's memories of our morning walks. (消防栓的红漆在褪色，如同老人对我们晨间散步的记忆)
[翻译] 物品见证岁月，like连接物质与精神消逝
例句3: My paw prints in the wet concrete outlived the construction crew's angry shouts. (水泥地上的爪印比工人们的怒骂更持久)
[翻译] 动物视角下的时间感知，outlived形成幽默对比
例句4: The vet's trembling hands betrayed her professional calm when treating the abused pitbull. (兽医颤抖的双手泄露了她的专业镇定，当治疗受虐比特犬时)
[翻译] 细节描写人性，betrayed制造情感张力
高考真题演练
2024年1月九省联考（聪明的海豚）
Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya.
The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear（水下呼吸器）and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn't surprised when she surfaced empty-handed.
During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam to the back part of the tank where the filter （过滤） box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank following Maya's path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb（梳子） in her mouth waiting for her treat.
“Maya! Where did you get that ” demanded Katherine, taking the comb and throwing her a fish. “I know where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery, resting place. “What's all this ” Katherine asked, obviously confused.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1：“This is Maya's secret,” Hilda said with a big smile.
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Paragraph2：Now Katherine realized what had been going on.
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参考范文1
“This is Maya's secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. In her hand, she displayed the items she had retrieved behind the filter box. “Maya has been trading these for treats during training. She's not just retrieving them; she's been cleverly exchanging them with you for rewards.” Hilda's voice was warm with admiration as she showed Katherine the little treasures Maya had hidden away. It was a clever game of give-and-take that Maya had mastered, turning her training sessions into a personal treasure hunt.
Now Katherine realized what had been going on. She looked at Maya, then at Hilda, and her stern expression softened into a smile. “I owe you an apology, Hilda. You've shown great initiative and care,” she said, her tone filled with newfound respect. Together, they watched Maya perform her tricks, understanding now that the dolphin's behavior was not a training issue but a sign of her intelligence and curiosity. The day ended not with blame, but with laughter and a sense of teamwork, as they all enjoyed Maya's clever antics.
参考范文2
“This is Maya's secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. She then gestured for Katherine to follow her to the back of the tank. Together, they peered behind the filter box, where Hilda carefully reached in. Her hand emerged holding a small, glittering object. It was a charm bracelet, shimmering with tiny beads. “Maya has been hiding things like this here,” Hilda explained, her voice filled with wonder. Katherine's eyes followed every movement, her initial disbelief slowly turning into fascination as she realized the depth of Maya's playful antics.
Now Katherine realized what had been going on. A look of understanding crossed her face as she watched Maya swim gracefully around the tank. “I misunderstood the situation,” Katherine admitted, turning to Hilda with an apologetic smile. “You've done a great job uncovering Maya's little hobby.” The atmosphere lightened, and the bond between trainer, volunteer, and dolphin grew stronger. As they watched Maya playfully interact with her hidden treasures, a sense of unity and joy filled the air, replacing any earlier tension.
2023年2月四省联考（收养小松鼠）
My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover their world.
While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.
We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait – and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother – we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.
Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order.
More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean (断奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own.
Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds.
To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would chatter (吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn’t long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild.
His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels.
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Paragraph 2：One night, Squirt didn't come back to our house and it rained hard.
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【范文1】
One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. They immediately became excited and chattered with each other. We were concerned that he might not be able to adapt to the wild, but he seems to be doing fine. He began to learn how to forage, carefully observing the behavior of gray squirrels, learning how they build nests in tree branches and how to forage for food. He also learned how to place food on branches so they were easier to grab. We were amazed by Squet's performance, he seemed to be very used to life in the wild.
One night, Squirt didn't come back to our house and it rained hard. We were worried he might not survive in the wild, but he came back the next morning with a big smile on his face and he found a safe place sleep, now ready to live alone. We couldn't be more relieved when we saw him back because we knew he'd be able to find a safe place to sleep in the field and he's made a lot of progress and we're so proud of him. We know he will be able to take care of himself and live a happy life in the wild.
【范文2】
One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. Squirt was delighted, intending to get involved. But on second thoughts, he stopped and looked back at us. Kaytlin gave him a thumbs up, " Come on and join them!" Encouraged by Kaytlin, Squirt jumped onto the tree and followed the squirrels timidly. A baby squirrel of the family noticed Squirt. It seems that the baby squirrel liked Squirt and they looked at each other curiously. Shortly after, the squirrels were aware of what happened. They jumped into another tree and we took Squirt home.
One night, Squirt didn't come back to our home and it rained hard. " What the devil happened " Then we looked for Squirt everywhere. The rain streamed down and we were seized by nameless panic. Suddenly there came an exciting cry, " Mum, Here he is!" We raced towards a big tree. There was a hole beneath a big branch, at the entrance of which Squirt was standing and chattered at us. Then more heads of squirrels came in sight! The smiles on the girls' face shone like diamonds. "Squirt has returned home safely. Let 's go home, too!" Kaytlin said emotionally.
2023年1月浙江卷（蜂鸟报恩）
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.
Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
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I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
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【范文】
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it ,my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，我又去了农场。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所想到的。
②由第二段首句内容“我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知，第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想。
2.续写线索：想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现——作者的感想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①思绪回到……：thoughts drift back to/thoughts return to
②匆匆回到：rush back to/hurry back to
③盯着：eyes locked on/eyes staring at
情绪类
①宽慰：feel a surge of relief/feel relieved
②感激：grateful/thankful
【点睛】[高分句型1]
As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. (由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. (由that引导的主语从句)
模拟演练
01
阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was dangerous, back-breaking work that paid very little.
In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadn’t quit and been replaced with new faces. Those of us who stayed did so only because there was no other work to find to support our families.
One day the electric fans weren’t working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice called out: “Hey! There’s a deer in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in between the huge piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily looking for a way out.
Now most people where I live hunt deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surprise then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other routes, we were able to guide her crazy search back to the open bay doors.
We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It seemed as if this one single act of kindness had energized us again and reminded us of what life was all about.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I went out of the house and looked into the woods again.
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When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily.
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【答案】Para 1:
I went out of the house and looked into the woods again. The little deer was like a child playing happily, skipping and skipping to the depths of the woods. Perhaps there were his parents and brothers and sisters, waiting for him anxiously. I was lost in my mind: wish all the life can live happily.
Para 2:
When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily. I knew that they were also happy and proud of the behavior just now. When they saw me walk in, they all suggested to me, “How about doing some volunteer work for the forest wildlife on this day of the month ” I immediately replied, “I agree!” Yeah! Enriching every day with good deeds and life will be more beautiful and harmonious. Every act of kindness we do is a step toward happiness and every act of kindness we do helps us become the person we are meant to be.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一家木材厂辛苦工作，这天来了一只迷路的小鹿，所有人都停下手中的工作去找她，而她则疯狂地四处寻找出路。最后大家很快就一起努力解救这只小鹿，小鹿回到了树林，作者发现每个人的脸上都洋溢着快乐的微笑，最后有人提议每个月的这一天为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我走出屋子，再次向树林里望去。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到小鹿在森林里玩耍时的感受和想法。
②由第二段首句内容“当我回到屋里时，工人们正在愉快地说笑。”可知，第二段可描写这一事件后工人提议为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作，作者也感悟到用善行充实每一天，生活才会更加美好和谐。
2．续写线索：作者向树林里望去——发现小鹿快乐玩耍——作者陷入沉思——作者回到屋子——工人提议做志愿者工作——作者感悟
3．词汇激活
行为类
跳跃：skip/jump
返回：return/go back
回答：reply/respond
情绪类
焦急地：anxiously/worriedly
快乐的：happy/glad
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The little deer was like a child playing happily, skipping and skipping to the depths of the woods. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I knew that they were also happy and proud of the behavior just now. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
02
“Sun, sun, sun, here it comes…”
Danny sang while his fingers pressed and pulled skillfully at the guitar strings, delivering a slow and peaceful tune. A circle of audience had formed, nodding and moving slowly to the song.
Lying at the feet of the street performer was his most adoring fan: One-Eyed, a white stray (流浪) dog with pieces of brown. Danny felt the name was suitable considering its physical disability. Usually, One-Eyed would bark loudly as Danny performed. Much to his annoyance, people often mistook the pair as owner and pet. At this time, Danny would reply, “My dog No!”, eyes rolling at the idea. How he wished the dog would leave him alone instead!
On a snowy night, while Danny was performing, a bird flew downward, landing into the midst of the crowd. It cooed happily as if to harmonize with Danny. Unfortunately, that did not sit well with One-Eyed, which immediately bounced at it and the bird flew away desperately.
The unexpected chaos upturned Danny's hat, which could have been filled with notes and coins from his appreciative audience, leaving it ignored on the ground. "Argh! The hateful dog!” Danny broke down, thinking to himself, “Either the dog goes or I go!”
On the next night, Danny tried to find a new place and chanced upon the park. For a while his earnings were good unsurprisingly as there was a steady flow of visitors. However, that didn't last long. One-Eyed came along and appointed itself as Danny's guardian. "Argh! Here comes the hateful dog again!" That night, Danny hadn't made enough money he should have, all thanks to the troublesome dog.
Danny was almost mad with One-Eyed. “What should I do Call an animal shelter ” Torn by this problem, he walked aimlessly by the lake of the park. With all his mind focused on how to get rid of the dog, Danny didn't watch his steps. Suddenly, he slipped and fell into the lake accidentally. Struggling in the icy water, he cried for help desperately, almost choking to death. Sensing the approach of death, Danny got into overwhelming panic.
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2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then, a familiar barking was heard in the distance.
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“My hero! Thank you for saving me,” Danny said gratefully with watery eyes.
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【答案】
Just then, a familiar barking was heard in the distance. In a split second, a splash of brown, out of breath, quickly jumped into the lake. It was One-Eyed! It barked, swimming toward Danny with all its might. On spotting One-Eyed, Danny seemed to see a ray of hope, attempting to move towards it instantly. Instinctively, Danny grabbed the tail of One-Eyed. Ultimately, they managed to climb ashore, exhausted. Gazing at One-Eyed in disbelief, Danny patted it tenderly in return. One-Eyed was no longer troublesome; instead, it became a “hero” in his heart.
“My hero! Thank you for saving me," Danny said gratefully with watery eyes. “You're my brave guardian angel!” Since that night, “One-Eyed” was nonexistent while “Hero”, as the dog was re-named, became a part of Danny's performance. So attached were they to each other that they became genuine partners. Danny would include his pet as he engaged the audience. Hero also had its own place to lie on-the feet of Danny. While Danny played guitar, Hero would bark happily to harmonize with his owner. What a perfect match!
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一只叫“独眼”的流浪狗一直跟着街头表演者Danny，其他人以为他们是主人和宠物的关系，而Danny为此感到很苦恼，不想“独眼”跟着他，Danny一心想着如何摆脱这只狗，却没有注意他的脚步，他掉进了湖里，极度恐慌。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“就在这时，远处传来熟悉的狗叫声。”可知，第一段可描写“独眼”如何救Danny。
②由第二段首句内容““我的英雄！谢谢你救了我，”丹尼含泪感激地说。”可知，第二段可描写Danny被“独眼”救起后他们之间关系的改变。
2．续写线索：跳进水里——Danny被救起——狗改名——成为伙伴
3．词汇激活
行为类
①跳进：jump into/dive into
②爬上岸：climb ashore/climb up the bank
③改名：re-name/rechristen
情绪类
①筋疲力尽的：exhausted/dog-tired
②高兴地：happily/delightedly
【点睛】
[高分句型1]So attached were they to each other that they became genuine partners.(so位于句首引起的部分倒装句)
[高分句型2]While Danny played guitar, Hero would bark happily to harmonize with his owner.(由while引导的时间状语从句)
03
It was one of the hottest days of the dry season. We had not seen rain in almost a month. The crops were dying. Cows had stopped giving milk. The streams were long gone back into the earth. If we didn’t see any rain soon we would lose everything. It was on that day that I learned the true lesson of sharing and witnessed the only miracle I have seen in my life.
I was in the kitchen making lunch for my husband and his brothers when I saw my six-year old son, Billy, walking toward the woods. I could only see his back. He wasn’t walking in his usual way. He was obviously walking with a great effort, trying to be as still as possible. Minutes after he disappeared into the woods, he came running out again, toward the house. I went back to making sandwiches, thinking that whatever he had been doing was completed. Moments later, however, he was once again walking in that unusual way toward the woods. This activity went on for over an hour: walking cautiously to the woods, then running back to the house. Finally, my curiosity got the best of me. I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.
He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked; being very careful not to spill the water he carried. I followed him secretly as he went into the woods. Branches and thorns(刺) slapped his little face but he did not try to avoid them. He might have a much greater purpose, I thought. As I leaned in to spy on him, I saw the most amazing sight. Several large deer appeared threatening in front of him. But Billy walked right up to them, at the sight of which I almost screamed for him to get away. A huge buck(雄鹿) was dangerously close. But the buck didn’t threaten him nor even move as Billy knelt down. And then I saw a baby deer lying on the ground, obviously suffering from thirst and heat, lift its head with great effort to lap (舔)up the water cupped in my beautiful boy’s hands.
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When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house.
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Instead of scolding him like his father, I decided to help him.
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【答案】 When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house. I followed him back to a tap in our yard. He knelt there motionlessly, letting the drip slowly fill up his small “cup”. Just at that moment, his father returned. Thinking Billy was playing with water, he shouted, “Never waste water! If we ran out of the limited water, we would lose everything, even our lives.” Before Billy could make any explanation, he walked into the house angrily, leaving Billy weeping there.
Instead of scolding him like his father, I decided to help him. I went up and held him in my arms. Wiping off his tears, I promised to help him save the baby deer. I found him a small pot to carry water. Holding the pot firmly, Billy walked toward the woods again. As I watched him disappearing into the woods, tears welled up in my eyes. Then came the miracle. Suddenly I felt a drop and then more drops dripping onto my face. I looked up in astonishment. Oh, it was rain! It was as if God was truly moved by Billy’s sincere sharing and came to save us finally.
【解析】
文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了在一个干旱的季节，作者6岁的儿子用双手捧水，多次往森林里去，作者感到好奇，悄悄跟过去一看，眼前的情景让她为之感动。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当水没了，比利跳起来跑回房子。”可知，第一段可描写父亲回来时以为Billy在玩水责备他，把他弄哭了。
②由第二段首句内容“我决定不像他父亲那样责骂他，而是帮助他。”可知，第二段可描写作者安慰儿子并答应帮他一起救小鹿，最后终于下雨了。
2．续写线索：儿子让水灌满“小杯子”——父亲生气斥责——Billy哭泣——作者擦去儿子眼泪——答应帮忙救小鹿——看到下雨，感到惊讶——觉得上帝被感动了
3．词汇激活：
行为类
装满：fill up/be filled with
大喊大叫：shout/yell
帮助：help/assist
情绪类
生气地：angrily/furiously
惊讶地：in astonishment/amazingly
感动的：moved/touched
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Before Billy could make any explanation, he walked into the house angrily, leaving Billy weeping there.（before引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]
Wiping off his tears, I promised to help him save the baby deer.（wiping off为现在分词短语作状语）
04
Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog. He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’s arm. “Let’s go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.” Steve pulled Brady’s leash（皮带） and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke，and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river…
Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.
Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didn’t come back.
They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up aslope（斜坡）. He couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way. They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.
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“Where’ve you been ” Steve cried.
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Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
“Where’ve you been ” Steve cried. Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope they’d just climbed. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy’s jeans and pulled harder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this Brady pulled again, urgently. “OK, big guy,” Steve decided.
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Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direction. How long they’d walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady’s leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool, running water. “Brady, you did it!”
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Brady是一只最近退休的搜救犬，这天它主人的侄子Steve 带着Brady和他的朋友Zach去远足过夜。结果闪电把树林点着了，森林起了大火，最后多亏了Brady的帮助，他们才找到了河流并且获救。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘你哪儿去了？’Steve哭喊道。”可知，第一段可描写Brady找到Steve他们后的行为，Brady开始示意Steve和自己走。
②由第二段首句内容“Brady领着他们下了坡，进入树林。”可知，第二段可描写Brady带领Steve他们找到了河流并且得救的经过。
2．续写线索：
Brady回来——Brady拉扯男孩的牛仔裤——男孩跟着Brady走——找到河流——跳进河里得救
3．词汇激活
行为类
明白：get it/understand
想起：remember/ recall
抓住：hold onto/ grabbed/ grasp
情绪类
美妙：wonderful /amazing
急切：urgently / eagerly
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy’s jeans and pulled harder. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
05
In 2000, when I was around seven years old, all my family were coming back from a T-ball game, which was our usual weekend adventure, but unlike every other weekend, a surprise was waiting for us in our driveway — two adult geese and a small goose. Obviously startled by our return, the adults flew away in panic, with their baby, too young to fly, left in place, tiny and delicate.
Hours passed one after another, and night eventually fell. However, with it also came a deep chill and a fear of watchful animals. It was apparent that the gosling needed protection, warmth, and food to make it to the morning, so we had to help it, and we brought him onto our back yard.
We all pretty much slept with one eye open till morning came. And then another morning. And still another. Each morning, we would try to drive the goose away to his parents, who kept coming back to our yard. He wouldn’t go to them, though, and neither would they come close enough to claim him. We kept this up for five days, but no luck. Realizing the young goose had clearly decided we were his family by then, we had to give him a name, calling the little guy Peeper, because he would often follow us around the yard making a peeping (唧唧叫) noise, nonstop. Besides, we decided that Peeper was a boy. I don’t know why; it just felt right.
A year passed and we settled into a routine. Peeper slept on our back yard each night and, in typical goose fashion, used it as a public toilet. My dad would spray off all the goose droppings daily. Part of this ceremony included Dad throwing Peeper up into the air so he could flap its wings and flew around the house, and then came back again once the porch was clean.
Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months.
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Before we knew it, the little thing had grown into a big bird with two powerful wings.
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It came as a total surprise to me when, in 2019, an adult goose made his way back to my family home.
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【答案】参考答案
Before we knew it, the little thing had grown into a big bird with two powerful wings. One day, when Dad threw Peeper into the air, he just flew away and didn’t come back. With night falling, all of us became increasingly worried. We looked for him, called his name, and even peeped like him, anxiously expecting his return. But the special buddy never appeared again. Suddenly losing the special companion, everyone was very, very sad. It took a long time before we accepted the fact that he was missing. Meanwhile, we could only pray he found his parents and went off on his natural way. Twenty years passed, and Peeper became a fond memory for my family.
It came as a total surprise to me when, in 2019, an adult goose made his way back to my family home. He did all of the same things Peeper used to do in Peeper’s old ways, and much to my surprise, he even responded to the name Peeper. It became clear to me that my old best friend had returned, 20 years later. This experience has been as meaningful to me as anything in my life. Looking beyond our reach high in the sky, birds have feelings like human beings, so do many other living things. We human beings should learn to get along well with them. We need each other’s care and protection.
【解析】
本文以动物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家在结束周末活动回家途中，看到了两只成年大雁和一只小雁，成年雁由于受到惊吓飞走了，留下不能飞的小雁。作者一家把小雁带回了家，小雁就在作者家生活了下来。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在我们意识到之前，这个小东西已经长成了一只拥有一双有力翅膀的大鸟。”可知，第一段可描写小雁飞走了，以及它飞走后作者全家的反应和感受。
②由第二段首句内容“2019年，一只成年大雁回到了我的家，这让我非常惊讶。”可知，第二段可描写那只雁飞回来后所做的事情和作者的感受。
2．续写线索：飞走——不再出现——回来——感想
3．词汇激活
行为类
①飞走：fly away/fly off
②回来：come back/return/go back
③和睦相处：get along well with/live in harmony with
情绪类
①担心：worried/anxious
②惊讶：surprise/astonishment
【点睛】
[高分句型1]It took a long time before we accepted the fact that he was missing. (由连接词that引导的同位语从句)
[高分句型2]It became clear to me that my old best friend had returned, 20 years later. (由连接词that引导的主语从句)
06
A Midnight Rescue
It was not uncommon to carry out tasks at night as rescuers. Harry and David were informed of their task when it was nearly midnight. It was urgent so there was no time to hesitate. They headed into the forest.
The forest was black and silent. A little way into it they reached a fork in the earth path. Harry and David took the left path. They walked in silence, their eyes on the ground, watching out for the traps like big pits（坑）set by the illegal hunters. Every now and then a ray of moonlight through the branches above lit a spot of scarlet（猩红的）blood on the fallen leaves.
David saw that Harry looked very worried, asking, "Could Unicorn be hurt that badly " Harry answered, "If we can't find it as soon as possible, it doesn't stand much chance to survive." Of course, Unicorn was not the animal in fairy tales but the nickname of a 3-year-old elephant, the last wild elephant in this forest. The nickname was given by the biodiversity rescuers who were protecting every member in this forest. They knew Unicorn was obedient and not afraid of human beings and that sometimes put it in danger. "Without it, the forest was not complete. Those illegal hunters should be thrown into prison." Harry thought, carrying his first aid kit（急救箱）on his back and walking forward with his flashlight.
It seemed that thick fog would come at any time, which would increase the danger. Harry hurried into the heart of the forest with David. They walked for nearly half an hour, deeper and deeper. There were blood splashes（血迹）on the roots of a tree, as though the poor creature had been struggling around in pain close by. "We must hurry up", said Harry.
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However, it was really not easy for them to find it.
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Without delay, Harry knelt down to do first aid on its wound with David holding the flashlight.
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【答案】
However, it was really not easy for them to find it. That’s because thick fog came, covering almost everything. They had to bend down to search for clues like blood splashes or footprints, which made them walk more slowly, ears sharper than usual. Suddenly, painful roars came to the rescuers and in front of them lay the young elephant. “Look! Unicorn!” Harry rushed forward, crying excitedly. It looked exhausted because a wound on its left front leg was bleeding badly.
Without delay, Harry knelt down to do first aid on its wound with David holding the flashlight. Fortunately, everything needed was available in the first aid kit. Calmly and skillfully, Harry conducted an operation on Unicorn immediately, and it seemed more obedient than before. Therefore, it didn’t take much time for Harry to stop the bleeding as an experienced rescuer. And after a while, Unicorn was able to stand up and walked away. It was rescued! Waving goodbye to it, Harry and David felt relieved. At this moment, the whole forest woke up, the moonlight fading while winds singing welcome to the dawn.
【解析】
本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了两个生物多样性救援人员哈利和大卫在半夜接到任务前去搜寻并营救森林里唯一的一头野生象的故事。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然而，对他们来找到它真的并不容易”可知，第一段可描写搜寻大象的困难和看到大象受伤时的难过。
②由第二段首句内容“哈利毫不迟疑地跪下来对它的伤口进行急救，大卫拿着手电筒。”可知，第二段可描写对受伤的大象进行治疗和大象感谢人类。
2．续写线索：起雾——艰难寻找——受伤——痛苦——急救——感谢
3．词汇激活
行为类
①.覆盖：cover/blanket/envelope
②.线索：clue/sign/hint
③.冲：rush/dash
情绪类
①.哭：cry/weep
②.宽慰的：relieved/comforted
【点睛】
【高分句型1】They had to bend down to search for clues like blood splashes or footprints, which made them walk more slowly, ears sharper than usual.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】At this moment, the whole forest woke up, the moonlight fading while winds singing welcome to the dawn.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Have you noticed how some lucky people just aren’t the worrying type Take my friend Olline, for example. Living on the same block, we’ve known each other since we were babies, and I’ve seen him act worried maybe five times total. I, on the other hand, am pretty much the exact opposite.
I could find something to worry about every day.
At my karate(空手道) school, there’s a group of kids that gives karate lessons to younger kids, and I recently tried out to be one of the teachers.
Surprisingly, I wasn’t that nervous for the tryouts(选拔). But when I didn’t get the call saying if I was in or out, I started feeling more and more nervous. Before long, my nervousness turned into worrying, and when it came to thinking about anything else or getting anything done, I was useless! So after lunch yesterday, when my little brother Tex asked me to play basketball with him, I could only say, “I can’t. I’m busy!” “Busy with what ” my little sister, Indi, asked. “Busy waiting for the phone to ring!” I grumbled.
“You’re reminding me of that old saying,” said our mom. “A watched pot never boils!” “The more you focus on the thing you’re waiting for, the longer it seems to take,” she explained when seeing my brother’s puzzling eyes.
Just then, the phone rang, and I raced to grab it. “Hello ” “Hey,” said Ollie. “Oh, it’s just you,”
I said. “Wow, you sure know how to make a friend feel special!” said Ollie. “I’m sorry. It’s just that I’ve been waiting for a call telling me if I made it into this karate group, and it’s stressing me out.” “I get it,” said Ollie. “I remember being so stressed waiting to find out if I’d made it onto the select soccer team last year. The best cure was distracting(使分心) myself.”
I was surprised. “It thought you never worried.” “I’m pretty sure that’s part of being human,” said Ollie. “And I’m also pretty sure I have just the thing to distract you. Want me to bring it over ” he asked.
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“Hmm,” I said suspiciously. “What exactly is this thing ”
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By the end of the day, we were all worn out and Daisy the dog even fell sound asleep, when suddenly my mom called from the kitchen, “Zona! Telephone.”
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【答案】
“Hmm,” I said suspiciously. “What exactly is this thing ”
“Trust me. You’ll love her!” In just a minute Ollie came over with the cutest puppy imaginable!“Her name is Daisy,” he said. “We’re taking care of her while her owners are out of town.” Of course, Tex and Indi jumped up and down as soon as they saw Daisy, and the four of us spent all afternoon trying to teach her to catch a ball, play chase and sit for doggy treats.
By the end of the day, we were all worn out and Daisy the dog even fell sound asleep, when suddenly my mom called from the kitchen, “Zona! Telephone.”
“Hello ” I said excitedly. But that was the end of the excitement. It turned out there was only one opening in the group, and I didn’t get it. “Hey, it’s not so bad,” Ollie said, handing me the sleepy little puppy. “You can try out again next year, right ” I shrugged. “I guess.” Then the sleeping Daisy opened her eyes, picked up her head, and gave me the biggest, wettest lick on my face, and I couldn’t stop laughing.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者申请了他学校空手道老师的职位，但是作者在等待申请结果时，很焦虑，无心干其他的事。这时，作者一直认为不怎么焦虑的朋友Ollie给作者打来电话，他说自己去年等待足球队挑选结果时也很焦虑，他告诉作者这是人之常情，且告诉作者，做其他的事使自己分心是治愈焦虑紧张的好办法。于是他带来了一条名叫Daisy的狗。作者和朋友Ollie一起照顾狗，他们在一起玩得很开心。快晚上的时候，空手道学校打来电话，告诉作者他没有被选中当老师，朋友Ollie安慰了作者，作者于是释怀了。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘嗯’我怀疑地说，‘到底是什么东西？’”可知，第一段可描写Ollie带来了一件使作者开心的东西。
②由第二段首句内容“那天快结束的时候，我们都累坏了，小狗Daisy甚至睡得很熟，突然我妈妈从厨房里喊道，‘Zona!电话响了。’”可知，第二段可描写作者接到了空手道打来的电话，告诉作者录取结果。
第二步：续写线索：
朋友Ollie带来一只狗——作者和Ollie一起照顾狗，玩得很开心——作者接到空手道学校电话——作者没有被录取——朋友安慰作者——作者释怀了
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
①信任某人：trust sb./believe in sb.
②照顾：take care of/look after
③递给某人某物：hand sb. sth./pass sth. to sb.
【情绪类】
①兴奋地：excitedly/with excitement
【点睛】
[高分句型1]We’re taking care of her while her owners are out of town.（运用了while引导的状语从句）
[高分句型2] Ollie said, handing me the sleepy little puppy.（运用了非谓语动词作状语）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：
1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2． 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3． 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4． 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
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【答案】
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give the help. With nothing in the hand, they didn't dare to fight against the wolf. However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. Then came the deadlock.
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac's friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.
【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写，要求续写两段内容（Paul和 Becky勇救Mac，试图赶走狼，但没有成功）以及（越来越多的人加入到救援之中，最后成功地赶跑了狼）。
第一步：段落续写：
根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇读后续写：本文主要讲述了Mac在骑自行车前往阿拉斯加的途中，被一只狼追赶的故事，第一段要求续写车上下来两个人帮助Mac，但他们势单力薄，并没能赶走狼，双方陷入僵局；第二段要求续写越来越多的人加入到救援之中，众人合力将狼赶走。时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。同时要兼顾字数的要求，不要过多，关键词列出5个以上，需要均匀分布在两段中。考生要注意几个关键信息和情节变化并结合给出的内容提示进行合理构思。
第二步：续写线索：
根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； immediately（立即），dangerous（危险的），howl （嚎叫），threat（威胁），join（加入）， bravely（勇敢地）及deadlock（僵局）等。
第三步：整体布局：
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有fight against（对抗），run away（跑掉），get out of (从……中出来)，be ready to do（准备好做某事），dare to do（敢做某事）以及approach to（靠近），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf.”，倒装句“Then came the deadlock.”，非谓语动词“At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
“Misssy,” I cried to my wife. “Did you put his banana skin on my desk ” “No, honey, Meghan probably did.” As I’d feared, she had missed the real purpose of my question, which was to make it clear to her that she hadn’t done her job of defending my desk against the invader-our naughty girl. I abandoned the conversation.
I sat at my desk and stared at the screen. I waited patiently for ideas to come to me as I tried to think up exam questions for a test I would give my English students. My wife was off to a party somewhere, but I was not alone. Meghan, our 22-month-old angel, kept me company. Yet her plans seemed to go against mine.
She followed a daily routine that was both time-consuming and challenging. It included certain basic tasks: watching the fish, sweeping the floor in her room, climbing up and down on her bed.
At first I was able to concentrate on designing my test paper. But I was soon sidetracked. I had not counted on the arrival of the “bib-bibs”---“bib-bibs” were birds. “Bib-bibs!” Meghan screamed excitedly, her eyes alive with expectation. She insisted that I came with her to the window.
“In a minute. Just let me finish this question.” I said. She pulled me by the hand (two fingers, actually) toward the window. I saw myself as a fool, being led to watch the “bib-bids”. They chattered and leaped back and forth on the lawn just outside our apartment window. Meghan was absorbed, but as I watched them, I still thought about my work. With her attention off me, I left the window and went back to my desk.
Five minutes later, she returned. She reached up to my keyboard and pressed a bunch of keys, adding a long line of scrabbled letters to my question. I struggled to bring my annoyance under control. “No, thank you, Meghan. Daddy’s seen your work. I will do it myself.” She backed off.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右
2．请按照如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand.
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I finally decided to take Meghan to the park.
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【答案】
A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand. I got it-she wanted me to take her out to the park. I pretended I hadn’t paid attention. She stepped forward, staring at me with her innocent eyes. “Leave me alone for a while, Meghan,” I said without looking at her. After a few seconds, out of the corner of my eye, I saw tears trickling down her cheek. I felt so terrible that I regretted what I had said. I had to correct my mistake.
I finally decided to take Meghan to the park. I turned to her and said, “Sorry, let’s go to see more ‘bib-bibs’!” She was so excited that she smiled through tears. I held her hand as we walked outside. Wandering through the park, Meghan was like a free bird enjoying herself in the wide blue sky. Seeing her smiley face, I felt much happier than doing my work. I could catch up on it in the evening. Work can always wait, but love cannot.(152 words)
Possible version2
A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand. I knew she would distract me from work as much as possible until she had my full attention. I stood my ground, pretending that I hadn’t noticed her. Minutes later, I heard Meghan’s footsteps as she marched down the hall. Then came a sudden loud from the front door. Scared and worried, I dashed to my daughter’s rescue. In her haste to reach the door knob, she had accidentally knocked over the shoe rack. Shame washed over me as I realized what an irresponsible dad I was being.
I finally decided to take Meghan to the park. As I helped her put on her socks and shoes, I kept repenting for my earlier actions. Always busy with my teaching plans, I rarely spent enough quality time with my angel. Even when I got this precious chance, I did everything to get rid of her. On our way, I held on to her little hand, and she beamed a smile that was brighter than the sun. I smiled back at her, and vowed to myself that I would watch over my angel for the rest of my life.(179words)
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在工作中的作者一直被自己22月大的孩子Meghan拉着去看小鸟，从而无法认真工作的故事。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，她站在我面前，手里拿着鞋子和袜子。”可知，第一段可描写Meghan想要去公园，但作者拒绝了。
②由第二段首句内容“我最后决定带梅根去公园。”可知，第二段可描写作者最终带上Meghan一起去公园玩耍以及对爱的感悟。
第二步：续写线索：
Meghan要去公园——假装看不到——后悔——去公园——漫步——感悟
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
① 玩的开心：enjoy oneself/ have a good time
② 流泪：burst into tears/burst out crying /tears running down one's face
③ 漫步：stroll/ramble/wander
【情绪类】
① 后悔：regret/remorse/repent
② 激动：be excited/be moved to tears
【点睛】
[高分句型1].I felt so terrible that I regretted what I had said.句中，so…that…引导结果状语从句，其意为“如此……以至于……”，表达高级。
[高分句型2].I held her hand as we walked outside. 句中，as引导伴随状语从句，语法表达较高级。
[高分句型3].Wandering through the park, Meghan was like a free bird enjoying herself in the wide blue sky.句中，现在分词短语作伴随状语从句，表述高级。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Every year, Tia Vargas and her dad go hiking: this summer’s trip was up Table Rock in the Grand Tetons in early July. Vargas was just below the 11, 000-foot peak with her dad waiting about a mile down the trail (路线) when she ran into a family of hikers who had found an injured English springer spaniel (斯宾格猎犬).
They couldn’t find the limping (跛的) pup’s owner and, because the family were hiking with kids, Vargas figured it would be easier for her to carry the pup to safety.
“I had to crawl under him to get him up on my shoulders,” Vargas, a single mother of three from Idaho Falls, Idaho, tells MNN. “I felt the difficulty of it right away. I never felt 55 pounds like that before.” Vargas soon ran into her dad, Ted Kasper, who snapped some photos when he saw his daughter coming down the trail with a dog on her shoulders. “Dad laughed and said. ‘Isn’t this hike hard enough You have to carry a dog too ’” Vargas recalls. “My dad makes me laugh. He is such a great man.”
That sense of humor helped Vargas get through the hard journey of carrying the heavy dog down the steep trail, she says. The trip was hard and nearly unbearable at times. “Every time I put him down to rest, it was difficult. And every time I got down on my knees to put my head under his belly and try to use neck and body strength to lift him it was painful and difficult. I thought we would see people on the trail on the way down to help. But that wasn’t the case.” she says.
Paragraph 1:
The group of three got lost once because of the fallen trees that made the trail disappear.
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Finally hiking six miles and reaching the bottom of the trail, Vargas found a very small note that said, “Lost dog named Boomer, call this number.”
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【答案】
The group of there got lost once because of the fallen trees that made the trail disappear. What was worse, it started to drizzle. However, they couldn’t wait for the rain to stop because it was getting dark and the dog was whining and obviously in pain, so they inched their way down the slippery slope while looking for the trail. Fortunately, it wasn’t long before they got back on track and the sky cleared up. “Thank God. It didn’t rain cats and dogs, but a dog,” Kasper said jokingly. “At one point, the thought of giving up crossed my mind. My legs hurt and were shaking but my dad’s jokes and the dog’s watery eyes gave me strength,” Vargas recalls.
Finally hiking six miles and reaching the bottom of the trail, Vargas found a very small note that said, “Lost dog named Boomer, call this number.” On their way to the vet, she called the owners, who thought for sure Boomer was dead. They had gone hiking together the day before and Boomer had fallen off a cliff. The family rushed down to look for him until dark but in vain. When they found out that Boomer was still alive, they were so blissful that they drove to the vet without delay. To their relief, Boomer only had a dislocated joint and was in a cast. The owners also told Vargas that they were moving to another city because of work and couldn’t take Boomer with them. With a brilliant smile on her face, Vargas stroked Boomer’s head and asked if it would like to go home with her. Boomer licked her hand gently, wagging its tail. This downhill battle turned out to be a blessing in disguise.
【导语】本文以一只受伤的斯宾格猎犬为线索，讲述了Vargas在与父亲远足的途中发现了一只受伤的斯宾格猎犬，Vargas决定扛着狗远足。路途中经历迷路，小雨和疲惫，但Vargas最终战胜了这些困难，在小径尽头发现狗主人的联系方式，联系狗主人，并最终收养Boomer。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“这三个人迷路了一次，因为倒下的树木使小径消失了。”可知，第一段可描写远足路上遇到的困难，及Vargas如何战胜困难。
②由第二段首句内容“最后徒步六英里，到达小径的尽头，Vargas发现了一张非常小的纸条，上面写着：“迷路的狗名叫Boomer，请打这个号码。”可知，第二段可描写Vargas带狗去看兽医并联系狗的主人，最终收养Boomer。
第二步：续写线索：
迷路——躲雨——想放弃——继续赶路——发现便条——联系狗的主人——收养Boomer
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
①寻找：look for/search for/ 让教学更有效 高效备考 | 英语学科
人和动物类故事
写作导图
情节构建方法论
救助与回报模式
▌典型情节：施救行为→建立信任→情感升华→命运重逢
例句1: Wrapping the injured owl in his jacket, Ethan gently secured its trembling wings. (伊桑用夹克裹住受伤的猫头鹰，轻轻固定它颤抖的翅膀)
[翻译] 动词链wrapping→securing构成完整救助动作，trembling wings暗示动物脆弱性
例句2: The golden retriever nudged the boy's limp body toward the riverbank with its muzzle. (金毛犬用鼻尖将男孩瘫软的身体推向河岸)
[翻译] 动物救助场景中nudged→pushing构成连续动作链，limp body营造危机感
例句3: Years later, the wolf I'd bandaged emerged from the mist, leading her pack away from our campsite. (数年后，我曾包扎的狼从迷雾中出现，带领狼群远离我们的营地)
[翻译] 时空跨度搭建命运闭环，leading体现动物智慧与报恩
例句4: The fox cub's daily visits evolved from stealing chicken eggs to accepting hand-fed berries. (幼狐从偷鸡蛋到接受亲手喂莓果的每日造访)
[翻译] evolve from...to...展示关系递进，stealing→accepting形成行为对比
共生日常描写
▌情感构建：细节积累→信任考验→情感认同→生命共情
例句1: Each dawn, the wounded sparrow would tap its beak against my windowpane, a feathery metronome. (每个黎明，受伤的麻雀都会用喙轻叩窗玻璃，像羽毛节拍器)
[翻译] 比喻手法将日常行为诗意化，tap...metronome形成听觉意象
例句2: The stray cat's matted fur gradually regained luster under Grandma's meticulous combing. (流浪猫打结的毛发在奶奶精心梳理下重焕光泽)
[翻译] matted→regained构成视觉转变链，meticulous combing暗示持久关怀
例句3: Our golden retriever would "accidentally" knock over the cookie jar whenever Mom baked oatmeal cookies. (每当妈妈烤燕麦饼干，金毛总会"意外"撞翻饼干罐)
[翻译] 拟人化双引号制造幽默感，展示宠物性格特征
例句4: The hedgehog family's autumn nest-building ritual became our favorite backyard theater. (刺猬家族的筑巢仪式成为我们最爱的后院剧场)
[翻译] ritual→theater比喻赋予动物行为仪式感，our体现情感共鸣
主题深化技巧
1． 生命对话描写
▌互动范式：语言障碍→行为沟通→情感互通→生命平等
例句1: When the injured dolphin pressed its forehead against mine, saltwater mingled with my tears. (受伤海豚将额头抵住我的时，海水与泪水交融)
[翻译] forehead against mine建立跨物种亲密接触，mingled象征情感融合
例句2: The old shepherd's whistle echoed through the valley, answered by a chorus of bleating lambs. (老牧羊人的口哨回荡山谷，应和着此起彼伏的羔羊叫声)
[翻译] echoed→answered构成声音对话，chorus拟人化动物回应
例句3: My fingers traced the raised scars on the horse's flank—silent testaments to its survival story. (指尖抚过马匹侧腹的凸起伤疤，这些无声的生存见证)
[翻译] 触觉描写连接生命记忆，silent testaments深化主题
例句4: In the tiger's amber eyes, I saw not ferocity but the same parental anxiety mirroring my own. (在老虎琥珀色眼眸中，我看到的不是凶猛，而是与自己相同的父母焦虑)
[翻译] 眼神描写突破物种隔阂，mirroring实现情感映照
情感升华策略
1． 永恒承诺表达
▌情感锚点：物质记忆→精神传承→生命延续→永恒羁绊
例句1: The dog's weathered collar now hangs on my study wall, its jingling tags still composing phantom melodies. (狗狗磨损的项圈挂在书房，叮当铭牌仍奏响幻影旋律)
[翻译] 物品寄托思念，phantom melodies引发通感记忆
例句2: Every spring, butterflies emerge from the chrysalises we nurtured, carrying our shared summer into the sky. (每年春天，我们培育的蝶蛹破茧，携着共度的夏日飞向天空)
[翻译] 生命循环意象，carrying...into实现情感转化
例句3: My daughter now feeds the same oak tree squirrels I befriended two decades ago. (女儿如今喂养着二十年前我结识的橡树松鼠)
[翻译] 时间维度拓展情感，same强调生命传承
例句4: The wolf's howl at dawn wasn't a wilderness cry, but a familiar lullaby from my childhood. (黎明的狼嚎不再是荒野之音，而是儿时熟悉的摇篮曲)
[翻译] 听觉记忆转化，not...but...重构认知
创新视角示范
创新维度：时空错位→物种置换→情感反转→认知颠覆
例句1: From my perch in the maple tree, I watched the human child clumsily rebuild my toppled nest. (栖身枫树，我望着人类孩子笨拙地重建我倾覆的鸟巢)
[翻译] 动物视角叙述，perch建立观察角度，clumsily制造反差萌
例句2: The fire hydrant's red paint was fading, just like the old man's memories of our morning walks. (消防栓的红漆在褪色，如同老人对我们晨间散步的记忆)
[翻译] 物品见证岁月，like连接物质与精神消逝
例句3: My paw prints in the wet concrete outlived the construction crew's angry shouts. (水泥地上的爪印比工人们的怒骂更持久)
[翻译] 动物视角下的时间感知，outlived形成幽默对比
例句4: The vet's trembling hands betrayed her professional calm when treating the abused pitbull. (兽医颤抖的双手泄露了她的专业镇定，当治疗受虐比特犬时)
[翻译] 细节描写人性，betrayed制造情感张力
高考真题演练
2024年1月九省联考（聪明的海豚）
Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya.
The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear（水下呼吸器）and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn't surprised when she surfaced empty-handed.
During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam to the back part of the tank where the filter （过滤） box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank following Maya's path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb（梳子） in her mouth waiting for her treat.
“Maya! Where did you get that ” demanded Katherine, taking the comb and throwing her a fish. “I know where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery, resting place. “What's all this ” Katherine asked, obviously confused.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1：“This is Maya's secret,” Hilda said with a big smile.
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Paragraph2：Now Katherine realized what had been going on.
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2023年2月四省联考（收养小松鼠）
My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover their world.
While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.
We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait – and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother – we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.
Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order.
More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean (断奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own.
Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds.
To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would chatter (吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn’t long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild.
His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.
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Paragraph 1：One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels.
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Paragraph 2：One night, Squirt didn't come back to our house and it rained hard.
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2023年1月浙江卷（蜂鸟报恩）
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.
Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”
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A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
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I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
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A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it ,my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away.
模拟演练
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阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was dangerous, back-breaking work that paid very little.
In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadn’t quit and been replaced with new faces. Those of us who stayed did so only because there was no other work to find to support our families.
One day the electric fans weren’t working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice called out: “Hey! There’s a deer in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in between the huge piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily looking for a way out.
Now most people where I live hunt deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surprise then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other routes, we were able to guide her crazy search back to the open bay doors.
We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It seemed as if this one single act of kindness had energized us again and reminded us of what life was all about.
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2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I went out of the house and looked into the woods again.
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When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily.
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“Sun, sun, sun, here it comes…”
Danny sang while his fingers pressed and pulled skillfully at the guitar strings, delivering a slow and peaceful tune. A circle of audience had formed, nodding and moving slowly to the song.
Lying at the feet of the street performer was his most adoring fan: One-Eyed, a white stray (流浪) dog with pieces of brown. Danny felt the name was suitable considering its physical disability. Usually, One-Eyed would bark loudly as Danny performed. Much to his annoyance, people often mistook the pair as owner and pet. At this time, Danny would reply, “My dog No!”, eyes rolling at the idea. How he wished the dog would leave him alone instead!
On a snowy night, while Danny was performing, a bird flew downward, landing into the midst of the crowd. It cooed happily as if to harmonize with Danny. Unfortunately, that did not sit well with One-Eyed, which immediately bounced at it and the bird flew away desperately.
The unexpected chaos upturned Danny's hat, which could have been filled with notes and coins from his appreciative audience, leaving it ignored on the ground. "Argh! The hateful dog!” Danny broke down, thinking to himself, “Either the dog goes or I go!”
On the next night, Danny tried to find a new place and chanced upon the park. For a while his earnings were good unsurprisingly as there was a steady flow of visitors. However, that didn't last long. One-Eyed came along and appointed itself as Danny's guardian. "Argh! Here comes the hateful dog again!" That night, Danny hadn't made enough money he should have, all thanks to the troublesome dog.
Danny was almost mad with One-Eyed. “What should I do Call an animal shelter ” Torn by this problem, he walked aimlessly by the lake of the park. With all his mind focused on how to get rid of the dog, Danny didn't watch his steps. Suddenly, he slipped and fell into the lake accidentally. Struggling in the icy water, he cried for help desperately, almost choking to death. Sensing the approach of death, Danny got into overwhelming panic.
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2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then, a familiar barking was heard in the distance.
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“My hero! Thank you for saving me,” Danny said gratefully with watery eyes.
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It was one of the hottest days of the dry season. We had not seen rain in almost a month. The crops were dying. Cows had stopped giving milk. The streams were long gone back into the earth. If we didn’t see any rain soon we would lose everything. It was on that day that I learned the true lesson of sharing and witnessed the only miracle I have seen in my life.
I was in the kitchen making lunch for my husband and his brothers when I saw my six-year old son, Billy, walking toward the woods. I could only see his back. He wasn’t walking in his usual way. He was obviously walking with a great effort, trying to be as still as possible. Minutes after he disappeared into the woods, he came running out again, toward the house. I went back to making sandwiches, thinking that whatever he had been doing was completed. Moments later, however, he was once again walking in that unusual way toward the woods. This activity went on for over an hour: walking cautiously to the woods, then running back to the house. Finally, my curiosity got the best of me. I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.
He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked; being very careful not to spill the water he carried. I followed him secretly as he went into the woods. Branches and thorns(刺) slapped his little face but he did not try to avoid them. He might have a much greater purpose, I thought. As I leaned in to spy on him, I saw the most amazing sight. Several large deer appeared threatening in front of him. But Billy walked right up to them, at the sight of which I almost screamed for him to get away. A huge buck(雄鹿) was dangerously close. But the buck didn’t threaten him nor even move as Billy knelt down. And then I saw a baby deer lying on the ground, obviously suffering from thirst and heat, lift its head with great effort to lap (舔)up the water cupped in my beautiful boy’s hands.
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2．请按如下格式在相应的位置作答。
When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house.
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Instead of scolding him like his father, I decided to help him.
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Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog. He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’s arm. “Let’s go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.” Steve pulled Brady’s leash（皮带） and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke，and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river…
Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.
Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didn’t come back.
They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up aslope（斜坡）. He couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way. They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.
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“Where’ve you been ” Steve cried.
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Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.
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In 2000, when I was around seven years old, all my family were coming back from a T-ball game, which was our usual weekend adventure, but unlike every other weekend, a surprise was waiting for us in our driveway — two adult geese and a small goose. Obviously startled by our return, the adults flew away in panic, with their baby, too young to fly, left in place, tiny and delicate.
Hours passed one after another, and night eventually fell. However, with it also came a deep chill and a fear of watchful animals. It was apparent that the gosling needed protection, warmth, and food to make it to the morning, so we had to help it, and we brought him onto our back yard.
We all pretty much slept with one eye open till morning came. And then another morning. And still another. Each morning, we would try to drive the goose away to his parents, who kept coming back to our yard. He wouldn’t go to them, though, and neither would they come close enough to claim him. We kept this up for five days, but no luck. Realizing the young goose had clearly decided we were his family by then, we had to give him a name, calling the little guy Peeper, because he would often follow us around the yard making a peeping (唧唧叫) noise, nonstop. Besides, we decided that Peeper was a boy. I don’t know why; it just felt right.
A year passed and we settled into a routine. Peeper slept on our back yard each night and, in typical goose fashion, used it as a public toilet. My dad would spray off all the goose droppings daily. Part of this ceremony included Dad throwing Peeper up into the air so he could flap its wings and flew around the house, and then came back again once the porch was clean.
Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months.
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2． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
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Before we knew it, the little thing had grown into a big bird with two powerful wings.
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It came as a total surprise to me when, in 2019, an adult goose made his way back to my family home.
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A Midnight Rescue
It was not uncommon to carry out tasks at night as rescuers. Harry and David were informed of their task when it was nearly midnight. It was urgent so there was no time to hesitate. They headed into the forest.
The forest was black and silent. A little way into it they reached a fork in the earth path. Harry and David took the left path. They walked in silence, their eyes on the ground, watching out for the traps like big pits（坑）set by the illegal hunters. Every now and then a ray of moonlight through the branches above lit a spot of scarlet（猩红的）blood on the fallen leaves.
David saw that Harry looked very worried, asking, "Could Unicorn be hurt that badly " Harry answered, "If we can't find it as soon as possible, it doesn't stand much chance to survive." Of course, Unicorn was not the animal in fairy tales but the nickname of a 3-year-old elephant, the last wild elephant in this forest. The nickname was given by the biodiversity rescuers who were protecting every member in this forest. They knew Unicorn was obedient and not afraid of human beings and that sometimes put it in danger. "Without it, the forest was not complete. Those illegal hunters should be thrown into prison." Harry thought, carrying his first aid kit（急救箱）on his back and walking forward with his flashlight.
It seemed that thick fog would come at any time, which would increase the danger. Harry hurried into the heart of the forest with David. They walked for nearly half an hour, deeper and deeper. There were blood splashes（血迹）on the roots of a tree, as though the poor creature had been struggling around in pain close by. "We must hurry up", said Harry.
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2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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However, it was really not easy for them to find it.
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Without delay, Harry knelt down to do first aid on its wound with David holding the flashlight.
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Have you noticed how some lucky people just aren’t the worrying type Take my friend Olline, for example. Living on the same block, we’ve known each other since we were babies, and I’ve seen him act worried maybe five times total. I, on the other hand, am pretty much the exact opposite.
I could find something to worry about every day.
At my karate(空手道) school, there’s a group of kids that gives karate lessons to younger kids, and I recently tried out to be one of the teachers.
Surprisingly, I wasn’t that nervous for the tryouts(选拔). But when I didn’t get the call saying if I was in or out, I started feeling more and more nervous. Before long, my nervousness turned into worrying, and when it came to thinking about anything else or getting anything done, I was useless! So after lunch yesterday, when my little brother Tex asked me to play basketball with him, I could only say, “I can’t. I’m busy!” “Busy with what ” my little sister, Indi, asked. “Busy waiting for the phone to ring!” I grumbled.
“You’re reminding me of that old saying,” said our mom. “A watched pot never boils!” “The more you focus on the thing you’re waiting for, the longer it seems to take,” she explained when seeing my brother’s puzzling eyes.
Just then, the phone rang, and I raced to grab it. “Hello ” “Hey,” said Ollie. “Oh, it’s just you,”
I said. “Wow, you sure know how to make a friend feel special!” said Ollie. “I’m sorry. It’s just that I’ve been waiting for a call telling me if I made it into this karate group, and it’s stressing me out.” “I get it,” said Ollie. “I remember being so stressed waiting to find out if I’d made it onto the select soccer team last year. The best cure was distracting(使分心) myself.”
I was surprised. “It thought you never worried.” “I’m pretty sure that’s part of being human,” said Ollie. “And I’m also pretty sure I have just the thing to distract you. Want me to bring it over ” he asked.
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2． 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Hmm,” I said suspiciously. “What exactly is this thing ”
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By the end of the day, we were all worn out and Daisy the dog even fell sound asleep, when suddenly my mom called from the kitchen, “Zona! Telephone.”
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
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1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2． 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3． 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4． 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
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读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
“Misssy,” I cried to my wife. “Did you put his banana skin on my desk ” “No, honey, Meghan probably did.” As I’d feared, she had missed the real purpose of my question, which was to make it clear to her that she hadn’t done her job of defending my desk against the invader-our naughty girl. I abandoned the conversation.
I sat at my desk and stared at the screen. I waited patiently for ideas to come to me as I tried to think up exam questions for a test I would give my English students. My wife was off to a party somewhere, but I was not alone. Meghan, our 22-month-old angel, kept me company. Yet her plans seemed to go against mine.
She followed a daily routine that was both time-consuming and challenging. It included certain basic tasks: watching the fish, sweeping the floor in her room, climbing up and down on her bed.
At first I was able to concentrate on designing my test paper. But I was soon sidetracked. I had not counted on the arrival of the “bib-bibs”---“bib-bibs” were birds. “Bib-bibs!” Meghan screamed excitedly, her eyes alive with expectation. She insisted that I came with her to the window.
“In a minute. Just let me finish this question.” I said. She pulled me by the hand (two fingers, actually) toward the window. I saw myself as a fool, being led to watch the “bib-bids”. They chattered and leaped back and forth on the lawn just outside our apartment window. Meghan was absorbed, but as I watched them, I still thought about my work. With her attention off me, I left the window and went back to my desk.
Five minutes later, she returned. She reached up to my keyboard and pressed a bunch of keys, adding a long line of scrabbled letters to my question. I struggled to bring my annoyance under control. “No, thank you, Meghan. Daddy’s seen your work. I will do it myself.” She backed off.
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A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand.
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I finally decided to take Meghan to the park.
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Every year, Tia Vargas and her dad go hiking: this summer’s trip was up Table Rock in the Grand Tetons in early July. Vargas was just below the 11, 000-foot peak with her dad waiting about a mile down the trail (路线) when she ran into a family of hikers who had found an injured English springer spaniel (斯宾格猎犬).
They couldn’t find the limping (跛的) pup’s owner and, because the family were hiking with kids, Vargas figured it would be easier for her to carry the pup to safety.
“I had to crawl under him to get him up on my shoulders,” Vargas, a single mother of three from Idaho Falls, Idaho, tells MNN. “I felt the difficulty of it right away. I never felt 55 pounds like that before.” Vargas soon ran into her dad, Ted Kasper, who snapped some photos when he saw his daughter coming down the trail with a dog on her shoulders. “Dad laughed and said. ‘Isn’t this hike hard enough You have to carry a dog too ’” Vargas recalls. “My dad makes me laugh. He is such a great man.”
That sense of humor helped Vargas get through the hard journey of carrying the heavy dog down the steep trail, she says. The trip was hard and nearly unbearable at times. “Every time I put him down to rest, it was difficult. And every time I got down on my knees to put my head under his belly and try to use neck and body strength to lift him it was painful and difficult. I thought we would see people on the trail on the way down to help. But that wasn’t the case.” she says.
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The group of three got lost once because of the fallen trees that made the trail disappear.
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Finally hiking six miles and reaching the bottom of the trail, Vargas found a very small note that said, “Lost dog named Boomer, call this number.”
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Michael sat on the wooden bench outside the house holding a four leaf clover. Michael had believed that four leaf clovers brought good luck, but he started doubting that kind of power.
Michael was eleven. It had been two months since his mum and dad died in an accident. A widow by the name of Jill adopted him. Michael had a dislike for Jill. Her voice was loud. She also made him do her chores. Michael felt not as much as a son to her. He dreamed a lot. He spoke little. He cried secretly. He had even been working on a plan for two weeks to flee the house.
That was, until he heard Jill parking her Honda into the garage.
Michael stuffed the four leaf clover in his left pocket. Before he realised it, Jill was standing in front of him, with a small beagle in her hand. She put the beagle down. It ran to Michael and sat on his Nike tennis shoes. Michael knelt down to pet it. After a while, he looked up，“Is the dog for me？”
Jill laughed，“Of course! You are the slowest little boy ever! I've got you a little puppy to make you work faster.”
Michael couldn't see how a beagle would help with his chores, but he thought it would be nice to have a friend. “Give him a name,” Jill said.
Michael thought for a moment. He saw a big, black spot on his back. That's it! Spot！“I'll name him Spot！” Michael announced.
“Spot, Spot, stupid name but it'll do. Now, you'd better clean the bathroom and finish your homework before dinner's ready.”
“Yes, ma'am.”
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Michael ran to the bathroom, with Spot by his side.
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Two weeks passed, and everyone could see something changed in Michael.
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One day when I was 12, my mother gave me an order: I was to walk to the public library, and borrow at least one book for the summer. This was one more way for her to solve my strange problem—inability (没能力)to read.
In the library, I found my way into the “Children’s Room”. I pulled a few books off the shelf and sat down on the floor. The cover of a book caught my eye. It presented a picture of dog. I had recently had a dog, the first and only animal companion I ever had as a child. He was the one I could share secrets with, but later he was given away to someone who had space and money to care for him. I never forgot my dog.
On the book’s cover, there was a dog which looked the same as mine. I figured the picture of the dog on the cover. My eyes ran across the little, Amos, the Dog with a Plan. Without opening the book, I borrowed it from the library for the summer.
Under the shade of a bush, I started to read about Amos. I read very, very slowly with difficulty and got the main ides of the story about a dog who, like mine, had been separated from his family and who finally found his way back home. At the end of the story, my mind continued the final scene of reunion. When I finished my reading, a stream of tears ran down my cheeks. It was until then that I realized I had begun to overcome my inability to read. Thus, this was the very first book for me which I had read through and deeply immersed myself in the real scene.
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My mother’s call brought me back to the real world and I suddenly realized something.
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Last year, my mother was so proud that her son was awarded a PhD in literature.
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阅读下而材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Biggest Dog on the Mountain
We liked hiking together. Today, we were looking for a trail over Wallace Mountain.
”It’s been over an hour,” said Jessc, my nineteen-year-old son. “Do you think the trail still exists ” We had explored several paths but with no luck. We pushed through weeds mid-calf high for us, but neck-high for our rusty-brown dog, Shadow. Once in a while, we would call Shadow back when she was attracted by the pleasant smell of flowers. No longer slim and bouncing with energy, Shadow was the size of a large house cat, and always content to curl up on the couch beside one of us.
Suddenly, we heard what sounded like many dogs barking in the distance, an unusual sound in the wilderness around us. Curious, we climbed the ridge (山脉), only to find what seemed like a dog factory. Small dogs, big dogs, brown dogs, and dogs I can’t even describe poured out. The hounds (猎狗) hit the ground, sniffing the air and turning to face us. Before long, they went down from their side of the mountain. Jesse shot an alarmed glance at me before turning to call in a firm voice, “Shadow, come here, stay.”
I patted my pockets, feeling for the pepper spray (防狼喷雾), so small it would never work against so many animals. I turned, surveying the nearby brush for a potential weapon. With the help of adrenaline (肾上腺素), I broke off two thick branches from a tree and rushed to Jesse’s side, “Here you are!” “OK,” he said, “Dad, they are coming to us.” My-mouth went dry. I glanced over at Jesse, his lips pinched (夹紧) tight.
The pack emerged from the valley, marching straight toward us. The dogs in the lead were now close enough for us to see that most of them were three times larger than Shadow. With deep growls (怒吼声)，they ran straight for us. Jesse swallowed hard and looked at me.
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Shadow’s back fur rose.
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Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled.
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My husband, Donald, took our daughter Sarah out for some ice cream the night before driving her to college. As they were walking back to the car, they saw a young man sitting on the ground and giving his puppy a cone.
“A cute dog,” Donald said as they walked by. “A free dog,” the young man replied. Donald asked him what he meant by that and the man explained. He was moving away from Vermont and did not think the travel would be good for the dog. He had raised her from a small puppy. The man said she was a 6-month-old cross between the Doberman and the Labrador named Rhubarb. Donald took his phone number. The rest, as they say, is history.
Rhubarb was a sweet dog and very friendly and loved everyone. Whenever someone came to the house, she was always happy. She also got along with Willie, an older Samoyed we had. Willie was not well and died about a year later, but, fortunately, Rhubarb’s company helped him keep going for longer than that if he had been alone. But the interesting thing about Rhubarb was that she never barked. She would sometimes get excited when she saw a chipmunk (花栗鼠) and make a little crying sound.
One hot night when she was about 4 years old, we went to bed with the windows open and the doors unlocked. At about 3 a.m., I woke up to the sound of Rhubarb barking. I woke Donald and we got out of bed.
Rhubarb was coming toward us. We turned on the lights and noticed the door to the kitchen was open. Then we saw the door leading into the house from the garage was also open. We quickly locked all the doors, and we did not get any sleep that night. It was deep into the night, so we didn’t call the police.
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The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor.
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My purse was right next to the door.
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It seemed like it had only been a few years ago that Indigo had first rushed through our door. Her underbelly showed the signs of the litter she’d recently delivered. She had a nose for trouble. On one occasion, I had come home to find that she’d eaten a five-pound bag of flour. She was covered in white powder, and flour paw prints were everywhere, including, incredibly, on the countertops(台板). I asked the dog what the hell had happened, and Indigo just looked at me with a glance that said, I cannot imagine what you are referring to.
Time raced by. Our children grew up and went off to university. The mirror, which had reflected a young mum when Indigo first arrived, now showed a woman in late middle age. I had surgery for cataracts(白内障). I began to lose my hearing. We all turned grey: me, my spouse(配偶), the dog.
In August 2017, I took Indigo for one last walk. She was slow and unsteady on her paws. She looked up at me sadly. You did say you’d take care of me when the time came, she said. You promised, Jenny. She died that month, a tennis ball by her side. I’d owned a succession of dogs since 1964, each one of them a witness to a particular stage of my life. But with the loss of Indigo, all that was over. The days of my dogs, I now understood, were done at last.
But one morning, as I was passing the Bed ’n’ Biscuit in my car, somehow I pulled over. I could at least lay eyes upon one cute dog, a tiny sweet thing. What harm could it do She had a soft face.
Not long after, I got a call from the Bed ’n’ Biscuit, our dog daycare(日托所). One of their customers was leaving, and her dog which was the one I saw that morning, Chloe, needed a home. Given our recent loss, they asked, might our family be interested in adopting her
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I told them that we were sorry but we wouldn’t be adopting any more dogs.
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When Chloe entered our house, she was cautious, uncertain.
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It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was dangerous, back-breaking work that paid very little.
In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadn’t quit and been replaced with new faces. Those of us who stayed did so only because there was no other work to find to support our families.
One day the electric fans weren’t working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice called out: “Hey! There’s a deer in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in between the huge piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily looking for a way out.
Now most people where I live hunt deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surprise then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other routes, we were able to guide her crazy search back to the open bay doors.
We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It seemed as if this one single act of kindness had energized us again and reminded us of what life was all about.
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I went out of the house and looked into the woods again.
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When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily.
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