09 脱险型故事-2025年新高考英语读后续写主题分类突破（原卷版+解析版）

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脱险型故事
写作导图
一、环境描写（制造紧张感）
自然危险
The storm outside was roaring like an angry monster, making the cabin windows shake.
（暴风雨像发怒的怪兽在屋外咆哮，震得木窗咯咯作响）
解析：用"roaring"替代复杂动词，比喻句帮助理解场景氛围
Lightning suddenly lit up the dark sky, showing our broken boat in the sea.
（闪电突然照亮夜空，映出海上破损的小船）
解析：简化视觉描写，"broken boat"直接传达危险信息
The waves were beating our raft like giant hands, trying to flip us over.
（海浪像巨人的手掌拍打救生筏，想把我们掀翻）
解析：使用"beat"和"flip"等基础动词，比喻贴近生活经验
Dirty water rose quickly to my chest, making it hard to breathe.
（污水快速涨到胸口，呼吸变得困难）
解析：简化身体感受描写，用基础形容词"dirty"构建场景
生物威胁
A shark's fin appeared above the water, moving closer to our raft.
（鲨鱼鳍浮出水面，朝着救生筏逼近）
解析：用"appeared"替代复杂动词，聚焦关键视觉元素
The jellyfish's long arms looked like poisonous ropes in the moonlight.
（水母的长触手在月光下像有毒的绳子）
解析：用"ropes"比喻触手，避免专业术语
The crocodile's yellow eyes stared at us from the muddy river.
（鳄鱼黄眼睛从泥泞河水中盯着我们）
解析：颜色描写增加画面感，基础动词"stare"易理解
Strange glowing things surrounded the plane wreck, making everything look scary.
（发光的怪东西围着飞机残骸，让一切显得可怕）
解析：用"glowing things"替代专业生物名词，保持神秘感
二、心理描写（情绪变化）
陷入绝望
My frozen fingers could barely hold the rock, and I felt tears mixing with rain on my face.
（冻僵的手指几乎抓不住岩石，泪水混着雨水流下）
解析：具体身体反应+自然现象，易产生共鸣
The avalanche's noise was so loud that I couldn't hear my own shouting.
（雪崩声大得盖过我的呼喊）
解析：用对比手法表现无助感，动词"shout"简单明确
Salt water burned my eyes, and I started coughing badly.
（盐水刺痛眼睛，我开始剧烈咳嗽）
解析：基础生理反应描写，动词"burn"直接传达感受
The quicksand was pulling me down like invisible hands.
（流沙像无形的手把我往下拉）
解析：基础比喻句，避免复杂形容词
希望出现
A flashing red light in the distance made my heart jump.
（远方闪烁的红灯让我的心猛地一跳）
解析：用"jump"形容心跳，动作描写替代抽象情感
The helicopter sound grew louder, bringing new strength to my tired arms.
（直升机声越来越响，给酸软的手臂注入新力量）
解析：连接听觉与身体反应，动词"grow"表现变化过程
My hand touched something hard - it was a rusty hook stuck in the ice!
（手碰到硬物——是卡在冰里的生锈铁钩！）
解析：破折号制造发现惊喜，日常物品增加真实感
Someone was shouting! The voice cut through the storm like a knife.
（有人在喊叫！声音像刀子划破暴风雨）
解析：基础比喻句，用"cut"强化希望来临的力度
三、脱险行动（过程描写）
智慧应对
Using a broken plank as a paddle, we tried to steer toward the light.
（用破木板当桨，我们试图划向亮光）
解析：具体动作描写，用"steer"替代复杂动词
I shot the last flare into the sky, praying someone would see it.
（射出最后信号弹，祈祷有人能看见）
解析：基础求生动作+心理活动组合
We tied empty bottles to the raft to make it float better.
（把空瓶子绑在救生筏上增加浮力）
解析：日常物品的创造性使用，动词"tie"简单明确
Following the radio's static noise, we found the rescue team.
（顺着收音机杂音，我们找到了救援队）
解析：用"static noise"替代专业术语，保持科技元素
四、主题升华（成长感悟）
The rescue worker's warm hands taught me the meaning of hope.
（救援人员温暖的手教会我希望的意义）
解析：具体细节承载抽象概念，动词"taught"点明成长
As the helicopter lifted us up, I understood how precious life is.
（直升机升起时，我懂得了生命的珍贵）
解析：用"precious"替代复杂形容词，直接传达感悟
The survivors' smiles in the hospital made me believe in miracles.
（医院里幸存者的笑容让我相信奇迹）
解析：具体场景+抽象信念，用"believe"连接
Now when I see storm warnings, I always prepare carefully - that experience changed me forever.
（如今看到暴雨预警总会认真准备——那次经历永远改变了我）
解析：破折号连接行动与感悟，用"changed"总结成长
背精彩句子，让表达出彩
1．Tom was shocked to find that the water kept rising．He was trapped in his house and his heart suddenly jumped into his throat.汤姆震惊地发现水一直上涨。他被困在他的房子里，他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。
2．Frozen with fear，he stood rooted to the spot，various terrible thoughts flooding in.吓得僵住了，他站在那里一动不动，各种可怕的想法向他涌来。
3．Luckily，some rescue workers came to his aid，bringing him the last glimmer of hope.A sense of calmness immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in his mind.幸运的是，一些救援人员来帮助他了，给他带来了最后一线希望。镇静立即替代了心里不断增加的恐惧和不安。
4．Having suffered so much，Tom couldn’t contain his emotions and tears of gratitude trickled down his cheeks，like a broken line of beads.遭受了这么多，汤姆再也不能抑制自己的情绪，感激的泪水像断了线的珠子一样滚下他的脸颊。
5．With desperate tears, she suddenly spotted a boat with a figure walking on it． She waved and cried for help with all her strength. 在绝望的泪水中，她突然看到一条船，上面有一个人在走动。她挥挥手，用尽全身力气喊救命。
6．She was soon picked up and taken towards where her father and sister were． Fortunately, they didn't drown but her father seemed to be giving out, with one hand holding tight to the boat, the other holding Cierrah.
她很快被人抱起，带他们到她父亲和姐姐所在的地方。幸运的是，他们没有被淹死，但她的父亲似乎快不行了，一只手紧紧地抓着船，另一只抓着Cierrah。
7．Later, when asked what gave her the strength and perseverance to continue both in the cold water and in great fear. Kiana thought it had to do with family. “I just wanted to save my family, and I didn't want anything bad to happen to them. So I couldn't spare a second to worry or fear.” She said.
后来，当被问及是什么给了她在冰冷的水中和极度的恐惧中继续下去的力量和毅力时，Kiana认为这和家庭有关。 “我只是想救我的家人，我不希望他们发生任何不好的事情。所以我没有时间去担心或害怕。”她说。
8．The man heard Sydney's cry and rushed over. Sydney briefed him on the situation, and the man did not hesitate to help the woman.
那个人听到Sydney的叫声就冲了过来。Sydney向他简要介绍了情况，男子毫不犹豫地帮助了女子。
9．Happily, it worked this time． As a result, the woman threw up the food stuck in her throat and began gasping for air, and she was saved.
幸运的是，这一次成功了。 因此，那位女士把卡在喉咙里的食物吐了出来，开始大口喘气，她得救了。
10.Nervous and anxious, Norwood struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to Simmons.
尽管紧张和焦虑，Norwood努力让自己镇静下来，并对Simmons进行了急救。
11.Seeing Simmons wake up from passing out, Norwood breathed a sigh of relief.
看到Simmons从昏倒中醒来，Norwood松了一口气。
12.We have learnt from the incident that life is valuable and the skill of saving is more valuable.
我们从这个事件中学到：生命非常有价值，拯救生命的技能更有价值。
13.The big wind roared through our ears, and we were pushed away from the shore farther and farther.
大风呼啸着穿过我们的耳朵，我们被推得离海岸越来越远。
14.After what seemed a century, I felt very exhausted while swimming hard to keep myself afloat.
似乎过了一个世纪之后，我感到筋疲力尽，同时，我努力游着以使自己浮在水面上。
15.Hearing the screams, Henry ran to the riverside, threw off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation.
听到尖叫声，亨利跑到河边，扔掉衣服，毫不犹豫地跳进了水里。
高考真题演练
2020年7月浙江卷
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
注意：
1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2． 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4． 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1:
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ___________________
Para 2:
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. _____________________________
模拟演练
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One of my most memorable trips took place during the summer vacation about three years ago, when my sister, my aunt and I took a trip to Spain because we were moving. On the day of the trip, I lay in bed thinking about my friends whom I was going to leave behind and thoughts were flooding in.
When we arrived at the hire station, we seemed to have some problems with our luggage because it was too much for a taxi, so we had to book a van (厢式送货车) to take our luggage to the airport. We waited for a long period to find a perfect van that would fit our luggage.
Before leaving, I felt very bad because I was going to a different country and was going to miss all my friends and family. I was not comfortable and cried.
The journey was almost perfect at the beginning, but soon it began to rain. Because of the rain, the drivers could not see far away, which caused a huge traffic jam. I was sitting by the window with a can of Coke that I had bought in the store earlier. My aunt and sister fell asleep, and during this time. I felt bored and thought about other things that bothered me. My eyes turned to the mountain in front of us.
A bus suddenly appeared in the picture. It was very close to us. Cars sped past us without any speed limit. Beside me was a very deep lake: I wondered to myself what if something or someone fell inside it. Suddenly, a bus in front of our van stopped, and because it was raining heavily and the van was going fast, no one could see what was going to happen. Then, bang, we bumped into each other. Our van overturned, but luckily, it didn’t fall into the lake. People came to help us get out of the van because we were blocked and the driver was half-dead.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
We struggled to get out of the van and everything we had was gone.
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I was losing a lot of blood and then the emergency aid came.
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2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler booked off a week from his job as a maintenance manager for the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend two days on his own, finding a route he would eventually use to climb Mount Doggie Dowler.
His wife Jenifer didn't like the sound of her husband's latest plan. She was used to Dowler going on adventures by himself, but this time he'd boat to an unknown bay, bike an unpopulated road , hike through grizzly bear country, and camp overnights alone. There was too much room for disaster.
The night before his journey Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of his bag with a handheld GPS, hiking poles, his homemade sausage, and a few other essentials. Instead of his usual Swiss Army knife, he took a three-inch stainless steel pocket knife given to him by his dad.
The weather that Sunday, July 28 was nice. Colin pulled his car into the Campbell River port and quickly launched and set off in his motorboat with a mountain bike on board. About eight o'clock in the morning, he arrived at Ramsay Arm, and found a spot to tie the boat near a logging (伐木)camp where he chatted with some logging workers.
One of the workers , Vito, gave him a ride in his truck until the forest got too thick. Colin took off his bike and backpack from the truck and started his hiking and route searching. In order not to lose the way back, he marked his trail with blue ribbons (布条).
As he made his seven-kilometer marker, he came around a bend and suddenly put on the brakes—a dirty grizzly bear stood right in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. Colin calculated his chances of turning around for a quick escape, but the bear could easily catch up and stop him before he picked up speed.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way.
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After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself.
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On my seventh birthday, I got a gift from my father, which was a book titled Guide to Reptiles and Amphibians. It was my favorite. I kept it under my pillow and read every page over and over every night enjoying the pictures of colorful animals. Some of the sakes were the most beautiful creatures I had ever seen.
Little did I know that my book would end up saving a life.
Years ago, my family moved into a new house near the woods. My father built a sandbox in our yard. The cat sometimes used the sandbox for a litter box, so my father had to put a plastic cover over it .When I wanted to build sand castles, I had to pull the cover off.
One day before dinner, I ran to the sandbox to build 8 miniature city. I pulled off the plastic cover, and there in the sandbox was a snake. It was lying very sill, all coiled up, and it was beautiful. The snake had rings of color around it. I had seen a picture just like it in my guidebook, and I remembered that it was one of the prettiest snakes in it. It said in the book that the poisonous coral snake looked very much like the harmless king snake, the only difference was in the order of the colors. 1 ran inside to get the guidebook.
“Mom! Mom! There’s a snake in the sandbox!” I yelled. “I have to find out what kind it is!”
Mom came running. “Don’t touch it, Chris! It might be poisonous!”
Dad was at work, so my mother went to get our neighbor, Mr. Cook.
“Mr. Cook!” my mother yelled across the fence, “We have a snake in the sandbox, and it might be poisonous!”
Mr. Cook was retired and lived with his wife in the house on the other side of our back fence. He came running toward the gale with a shovel and tried to kill the snake.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Wait!” I shouted, waving the guidebook in my hand.
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“So what to do now ” Mr. Cook put down the shovel.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There was a huge pond just a few kilometers from where we stayed. Since moving into our new home in the countryside, my brother, Jim and I used to often sneak out to the pond where we would meet another friend. Mom had warned us not to get close to the pond, especially after a friend informed her that an alligator(鳄鱼) had been spotted there. We ignored her advice though.
On this particular afternoon, the three of us had fun in the pond. As evening approached, we finished swimming. Jim and Syed were unwillingly making their way towards the place where they had left their clothes. I stayed back and was bathing in the water when I suddenly became aware of ripples(涟漪) forming on the surface of the water. I raised my head and looked at the ripples. My eyes caught a motion in the water. A log, I thought. Then I saw it—its scary nose and its two mean eyes. “Jim…” I cried. Then I screamed with all my might.
Jim turned his head in my direction and immediately recognized the danger. “Get out of the water, Jeff. Hurry! It’s just behind you.”
I waded(瞠水) clumsily(笨拙地) in the water. With great effort, I reached the edge of the pond. I looked over my shoulder. Moving quickly towards me was a huge alligator. I froze. Then suddenly I felt a great pain in my leg. Meanwhile, Jim and Syed screamed and started throwing stones at the alligator and managed to distract it. The alligator went for them now. As it opened its jaws, I could see its sharp teeth. I tried to move but a pain shot through me. I was in a pool of blood. Jim and Syed were scared.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was about to give up struggling when I thought of the two hunters who passed by just a moment ago.
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When I woke up, I found myself in a totally unfamiliar environment, a hospital.
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5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A holiday in Penang is an annual affair for my family. My parents grew up in Penang and are very fond of Penang food. In December every year, we would drive up to the island to spend three days visiting their favorite food haunts (常去的地方).
This year, we started our journey up north on a Friday morning. It took us six hours to reach our destination. We always stayed at one of the hotels in Batu Ferringhi. The beach was just a short walk from the hotel entrance and our rooms had a lovely view of the sea. We spent our first evening playing on the beach. After dinner, we returned to our rooms to play games. My parents had a rule for our holidays which was that we were to spend time doing things together. There was to be no TV and no Internet.
The next morning, we went to Bukit Bendera and then spent the rest of the afternoon in town visiting our favorite hawker stalls (小贩摊位). As we were having tea at a coffee shop, we overheard people talking about an earthquake near Sumatera, an island in Indonesia. We headed back to the hotel and then went to the beach. We took a walk along the beach, picking up seashells along the way. Looking up, I saw the sun shining brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree trembling in the distance as it reflected the sun’s rays. It never occurred to us that something awful would take place. Suddenly, I noticed a strange thing. The sea seemed to be leaving from the shore. I called my father to look at the curious occurrence. My father took one look and went pale. We saw a grey line in the distance moving towards the shore. It seemed to grow taller by the second.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.
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We waited a long time before going downstairs.
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6.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a fine summer morning, perfect to be outdoors. Two sisters had been out mushroom picking, and were on their way home with heavy baskets full of mushrooms. They sang songs on the way, and played with each other.
Soon they reached a point where they had to cross a railway track. They did not think twice about crossing it since there was no train coming, and they could not hear any whistle. They slowly climbed the steep railway embankment, taking care not to drop the baskets. They were very near the track and the little sister Mary was about to cross it first when a train whistled in the distance.
Hearing the train coming, Rose the elder sister quickly ran down. She thought that the young one was following her. But as she turned back, she was shocked to see her little sister still up there crossing the track. “Come back here! Run back fast!” she shouted.
Mary seemed not to hear the whistle nor her sister’s cry as she was concentrating on stepping over the track with her little feet, and holding on to the basket. Then she tripped and fell on the track, scattering her mushrooms around.
The engine driver panicked on seeing a girl between the tracks who was on her hands and knees and he blew the horn with all his strength. Poor Mary, who was frightened by the coming danger, froze and didn’t know what to do. When Rose saw the scene, she screamed at the top of her voice for Mary’s attention. Mary noticed that her sister was not around and cried for help.
With the train drawing near, the engine driver grew extremely anxious. As hard as he could, he kept blowing the whistle and started reducing speed. Yet it was not possible for him to stop the heavy train within such a short distance.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Rose wouldn’t watch the tragedy happen before her eyes.
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The train rolled over and finally stopped.
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7.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was last February. Noel, a 28-year-old marketing manager was heading from Iceland’s Keflavik International Airport to the capital city Reykjavik with the modern traveler’s two essentials: a dream and a GPSunit. What could go wrong
The dream had been with him since April 14, 2010 when he watched TV news report of the volcano eruption in Iceland. Dark-haired, with a youthful face and thick eyebrows, he had never travelled beyond the United States and his native Mexico. “I want to see this through my own eyes,” he thought as he watched the news on his couch.
Four months later, on a cold winter morning, he was driving from Keflavik Airport in a rented car towards a hotel in Reykjavik, excited that his one-week journey was beginning. As the pink sun rose over the ocean and shone light on the snow-covered lava rocks along the shore, he dutifully followed the commands of the GPS that came with the car, a calm female voice directing him to an address—a left here, a right there.
But after stopping on a deserted road, he got a feeling that the voice might be steering (引导) him wrong. He had been driving for nearly an hour, yet the GPS put his arrival time at around eight hours later. He entered his destination again and got the same result. Though he sensed that something was off, he made a choice to trust the machine.
The farther he drove, the fewer cars he saw. The roads became icier. He was sleepy, cold and hungry. He hadn’t set up his phone for international use, so that was no help. Another three hours passed. As his tires skidded (打滑) along a narrow mountain road that skirted a steep cliff.he knew that the device had failed him.
He was lost. He didn’t know where else to go. There was no one else on the road, and there was nothing else to do but follow the line on the screen to its mysterious end.
Paragraph 1
The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town.
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Paragraph 2:
Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him.
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8.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was finally going to see Giant Rock with my brothers and Dad. I’d been snowshoeing before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow alongside wild-animal tracks. After putting on our snowshoes, we studied the map. Dad said, “We start here on the red trail, and then we turn left onto the purple one. That’s where Giant Rock is. Remember to stick together, guys!”
The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall. It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers. Half way up the hill, we turned onto the winding purple trail. We settled into a rhythm, with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back, crunch-crunching through the snow. The late afternoon sun felt warm, although it was already sinking lower. I saw lots of animal tracks-mostly deer, squirrel, and rabbit prints, which I recognized from my field guide.
An hour later, we topped the hill and saw the massive rock sitting alone in the forest. “It is really huge, as big as a house!” my brother Josh said, gazing up. Breathlessly standing in the rock’s giant shadow, I noticed the sun had dipped even lower.
“Let’s head back,” Dad said.
I was a little behind the group when I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn’t recognize. They were hard to see among the snowshoe prints, so I followed them off the trail for a closer look. There were no claw marks, which meant they didn’t belong to a dog or a fox. Instead, they looked like tiny handprints and footprints. “Must be a raccoon (浣熊),” I thought, matching them to prints in my guide.
I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten. I was totally alone. “Hey!” I shouted. “Where is everyone ” nothing. Just the sound of my own breathing. “They couldn’t have gone far. I’ll catch up to them if I hurry,” I thought, stepping back onto the trail. The light had grown darker by the second. Without flashlight and phone, I began running.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
I came to where I could turn right or go straight.
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“Stop and think,” I told myself, picturing the map again.
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9.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day, my brother and I were coming back from the islands where we often risked going and got more fish than others. All at once, the sky was covered with dark clouds and in less than a minute we were in a terrible storm. A huge wave covered our boat and we nearly fell into the sea. My brother put his mouth close to my ear and cried out “Moskoe-strom!” The moment I heard the word I became very frightened. I knew what he meant by that one word well enough.
With the wind and waves, we were going in the direction of the whirlpool (漩涡). We were hopeless. Nothing could save us. I felt sick, as if I was falling from a mountain top in a dream. We went round and round, nearer and nearer to the horrible edge of the whirlpool. It may appear strange, but at that moment, when we were on the edge of the whirlpool, I felt calmer than when we were moving towards it. I began to think how amazing a thing it was to die in such a way, and how wonderful it was to see the power of nature. Suddenly, we went over the edge. I thought my life was over. But moment after moment passed, and I was still safe.
The boat was on the inside of the huge whirlpool and we were going round in circles at great speed. I saw clearly that there were other objects in the whirlpool—trees and barrels (水桶). After a while, I became curious about the whirlpool itself. I then made three important observations. The first, the larger the bodies were, the more rapidly they fell; the second, between two objects of equal extent, round objects fell down less rapidly; and the third, between two objects of the same size, objects shaped like a tube fell down more slowly. So I tied myself to a barrel to help me float. I tried to make my brother understand, but he was too frightened and stayed in the boat. Without waiting, I jumped into the sea to try and escape.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Some time after I left the boat, I saw my brother struggling in the sea.
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Paragraph 2:
Soon after that, the whirlpool became less wild and then the sky was clear.
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10.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was an unusually hot day. Exhausted after football practice, I headed for the bus stop to wait for Bus 112 which would take me home. I was beginning to drift off to sleep when I saw the bus arriving. The sun was in my eyes and that was probably the reason why I got onto Bus 113
I was glad to get a seat. Within minutes, I was sting against the window, fast asleep. When I opened my eyes, it was dark outside. I was the only passenger left on the bus. I could not recognize the part of town we were passing through. I pressed the bell and the bus stopped. I planned to hop across the road and catch a bus going the opposite direction. However, I found myself on a quiet street with a row of shops that were all closed. I kicked myself for not asking the driver for directions.
As I was wondering what to do, a motorcycle came down the road. The rider looked at me as he passed and then stopped a short distance away. I went to him and asked him how to get back to the City Square. He smiled and nodded. He patted the back seat and said that he would send me home. Without a second thought, I climbed up behind the rider. He turned the motorcycle around and headed in the direction I wanted. We travelled for about 15 minutes and the surroundings still looked unfamiliar to me. The rider made a few turns and I knew I was hopelessly lost. I asked him where we were going, He did not answer but increased his speed. Alarm bells started to ring in my head.
I tapped the man, shoulder and told him to stop. He leaned forward and went at high speed now. Then he slowed down to turn into a dark and narrow road that led into an oil palm plantation. I had had enough.
注意:
1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下超式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I jumped off the vehicle and fell onto the ground.
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I got off the taxi and rushed into my house.
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12.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It’s a beautiful sunny day. The Bonds boarded their boat for a carefree day trip to Dove Island for some fishing as a family custom. Thomas Bond, a 30-year-old construction worker, loved the sport, especially catching bass (鲈鱼) and had impressed on his oldest daughter, Lizzy, a love of the outdoors, teaching her how to bait (下诱饵) a hook and cast a line and brave the waves.
The family spent the day fishing in the vast ocean, and then left the island in the early evening. Upon setting off from the shore, they found thick fog rolling in. Lizzy fell into a light sleep beside her five-year-old sister, Molly, at a table on the boat’s lower deck (甲板). Their father’s sharp orders woke her up: “Get out of the boat. The boat’s sinking!” Lizzy pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. Both girls wore life jackets. The adults did not. The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Bond, who was expecting a baby at that time. Within seconds, the boat was damaged and was left just the tip of its bow in the air.
Looking into the faces of her father, mother, and sister, Lizzy wasn’t frightened. After some time, her father told them he would swim for help. “I’ll be back,” he said before disappearing into the darkness.
“Dad is like the superhero to me. I believe he will get help to rescue us,” Lizzy said to herself. After some time, her mother became quiet and stopped swimming. Lizzy wrapped a rope around her mother’s chest and tied her to the boat so she wouldn’t float away. Then her sister fell quiet too and she stayed beside her.
To keep herself awake, Lizzy daydreamed about what they would do after they were rescued. They would stay in a hotel, order room service, and lie comfortably under the blankets in bed, cozy and warm.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance.
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On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them.
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脱险型故事
写作导图
一、环境描写（制造紧张感）
自然危险
The storm outside was roaring like an angry monster, making the cabin windows shake.
（暴风雨像发怒的怪兽在屋外咆哮，震得木窗咯咯作响）
解析：用"roaring"替代复杂动词，比喻句帮助理解场景氛围
Lightning suddenly lit up the dark sky, showing our broken boat in the sea.
（闪电突然照亮夜空，映出海上破损的小船）
解析：简化视觉描写，"broken boat"直接传达危险信息
The waves were beating our raft like giant hands, trying to flip us over.
（海浪像巨人的手掌拍打救生筏，想把我们掀翻）
解析：使用"beat"和"flip"等基础动词，比喻贴近生活经验
Dirty water rose quickly to my chest, making it hard to breathe.
（污水快速涨到胸口，呼吸变得困难）
解析：简化身体感受描写，用基础形容词"dirty"构建场景
生物威胁
A shark's fin appeared above the water, moving closer to our raft.
（鲨鱼鳍浮出水面，朝着救生筏逼近）
解析：用"appeared"替代复杂动词，聚焦关键视觉元素
The jellyfish's long arms looked like poisonous ropes in the moonlight.
（水母的长触手在月光下像有毒的绳子）
解析：用"ropes"比喻触手，避免专业术语
The crocodile's yellow eyes stared at us from the muddy river.
（鳄鱼黄眼睛从泥泞河水中盯着我们）
解析：颜色描写增加画面感，基础动词"stare"易理解
Strange glowing things surrounded the plane wreck, making everything look scary.
（发光的怪东西围着飞机残骸，让一切显得可怕）
解析：用"glowing things"替代专业生物名词，保持神秘感
二、心理描写（情绪变化）
陷入绝望
My frozen fingers could barely hold the rock, and I felt tears mixing with rain on my face.
（冻僵的手指几乎抓不住岩石，泪水混着雨水流下）
解析：具体身体反应+自然现象，易产生共鸣
The avalanche's noise was so loud that I couldn't hear my own shouting.
（雪崩声大得盖过我的呼喊）
解析：用对比手法表现无助感，动词"shout"简单明确
Salt water burned my eyes, and I started coughing badly.
（盐水刺痛眼睛，我开始剧烈咳嗽）
解析：基础生理反应描写，动词"burn"直接传达感受
The quicksand was pulling me down like invisible hands.
（流沙像无形的手把我往下拉）
解析：基础比喻句，避免复杂形容词
希望出现
A flashing red light in the distance made my heart jump.
（远方闪烁的红灯让我的心猛地一跳）
解析：用"jump"形容心跳，动作描写替代抽象情感
The helicopter sound grew louder, bringing new strength to my tired arms.
（直升机声越来越响，给酸软的手臂注入新力量）
解析：连接听觉与身体反应，动词"grow"表现变化过程
My hand touched something hard - it was a rusty hook stuck in the ice!
（手碰到硬物——是卡在冰里的生锈铁钩！）
解析：破折号制造发现惊喜，日常物品增加真实感
Someone was shouting! The voice cut through the storm like a knife.
（有人在喊叫！声音像刀子划破暴风雨）
解析：基础比喻句，用"cut"强化希望来临的力度
三、脱险行动（过程描写）
智慧应对
Using a broken plank as a paddle, we tried to steer toward the light.
（用破木板当桨，我们试图划向亮光）
解析：具体动作描写，用"steer"替代复杂动词
I shot the last flare into the sky, praying someone would see it.
（射出最后信号弹，祈祷有人能看见）
解析：基础求生动作+心理活动组合
We tied empty bottles to the raft to make it float better.
（把空瓶子绑在救生筏上增加浮力）
解析：日常物品的创造性使用，动词"tie"简单明确
Following the radio's static noise, we found the rescue team.
（顺着收音机杂音，我们找到了救援队）
解析：用"static noise"替代专业术语，保持科技元素
四、主题升华（成长感悟）
The rescue worker's warm hands taught me the meaning of hope.
（救援人员温暖的手教会我希望的意义）
解析：具体细节承载抽象概念，动词"taught"点明成长
As the helicopter lifted us up, I understood how precious life is.
（直升机升起时，我懂得了生命的珍贵）
解析：用"precious"替代复杂形容词，直接传达感悟
The survivors' smiles in the hospital made me believe in miracles.
（医院里幸存者的笑容让我相信奇迹）
解析：具体场景+抽象信念，用"believe"连接
Now when I see storm warnings, I always prepare carefully - that experience changed me forever.
（如今看到暴雨预警总会认真准备——那次经历永远改变了我）
解析：破折号连接行动与感悟，用"changed"总结成长
背精彩句子，让表达出彩
1．Tom was shocked to find that the water kept rising．He was trapped in his house and his heart suddenly jumped into his throat.汤姆震惊地发现水一直上涨。他被困在他的房子里，他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。
2．Frozen with fear，he stood rooted to the spot，various terrible thoughts flooding in.吓得僵住了，他站在那里一动不动，各种可怕的想法向他涌来。
3．Luckily，some rescue workers came to his aid，bringing him the last glimmer of hope.A sense of calmness immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in his mind.幸运的是，一些救援人员来帮助他了，给他带来了最后一线希望。镇静立即替代了心里不断增加的恐惧和不安。
4．Having suffered so much，Tom couldn’t contain his emotions and tears of gratitude trickled down his cheeks，like a broken line of beads.遭受了这么多，汤姆再也不能抑制自己的情绪，感激的泪水像断了线的珠子一样滚下他的脸颊。
5．With desperate tears, she suddenly spotted a boat with a figure walking on it． She waved and cried for help with all her strength. 在绝望的泪水中，她突然看到一条船，上面有一个人在走动。她挥挥手，用尽全身力气喊救命。
6．She was soon picked up and taken towards where her father and sister were． Fortunately, they didn't drown but her father seemed to be giving out, with one hand holding tight to the boat, the other holding Cierrah.
她很快被人抱起，带他们到她父亲和姐姐所在的地方。幸运的是，他们没有被淹死，但她的父亲似乎快不行了，一只手紧紧地抓着船，另一只抓着Cierrah。
7．Later, when asked what gave her the strength and perseverance to continue both in the cold water and in great fear. Kiana thought it had to do with family. “I just wanted to save my family, and I didn't want anything bad to happen to them. So I couldn't spare a second to worry or fear.” She said.
后来，当被问及是什么给了她在冰冷的水中和极度的恐惧中继续下去的力量和毅力时，Kiana认为这和家庭有关。 “我只是想救我的家人，我不希望他们发生任何不好的事情。所以我没有时间去担心或害怕。”她说。
8．The man heard Sydney's cry and rushed over. Sydney briefed him on the situation, and the man did not hesitate to help the woman.
那个人听到Sydney的叫声就冲了过来。Sydney向他简要介绍了情况，男子毫不犹豫地帮助了女子。
9．Happily, it worked this time． As a result, the woman threw up the food stuck in her throat and began gasping for air, and she was saved.
幸运的是，这一次成功了。 因此，那位女士把卡在喉咙里的食物吐了出来，开始大口喘气，她得救了。
10.Nervous and anxious, Norwood struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to Simmons.
尽管紧张和焦虑，Norwood努力让自己镇静下来，并对Simmons进行了急救。
11.Seeing Simmons wake up from passing out, Norwood breathed a sigh of relief.
看到Simmons从昏倒中醒来，Norwood松了一口气。
12.We have learnt from the incident that life is valuable and the skill of saving is more valuable.
我们从这个事件中学到：生命非常有价值，拯救生命的技能更有价值。
13.The big wind roared through our ears, and we were pushed away from the shore farther and farther.
大风呼啸着穿过我们的耳朵，我们被推得离海岸越来越远。
14.After what seemed a century, I felt very exhausted while swimming hard to keep myself afloat.
似乎过了一个世纪之后，我感到筋疲力尽，同时，我努力游着以使自己浮在水面上。
15.Hearing the screams, Henry ran to the riverside, threw off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation.
听到尖叫声，亨利跑到河边，扔掉衣服，毫不犹豫地跳进了水里。
高考真题演练
2020年7月浙江卷
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
注意：
1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2． 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4． 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1:
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ___________________
Para 2:
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. _____________________________
One possible version:
Para 1:
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.
Para 2:
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear!
模拟演练
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One of my most memorable trips took place during the summer vacation about three years ago, when my sister, my aunt and I took a trip to Spain because we were moving. On the day of the trip, I lay in bed thinking about my friends whom I was going to leave behind and thoughts were flooding in.
When we arrived at the hire station, we seemed to have some problems with our luggage because it was too much for a taxi, so we had to book a van (厢式送货车) to take our luggage to the airport. We waited for a long period to find a perfect van that would fit our luggage.
Before leaving, I felt very bad because I was going to a different country and was going to miss all my friends and family. I was not comfortable and cried.
The journey was almost perfect at the beginning, but soon it began to rain. Because of the rain, the drivers could not see far away, which caused a huge traffic jam. I was sitting by the window with a can of Coke that I had bought in the store earlier. My aunt and sister fell asleep, and during this time. I felt bored and thought about other things that bothered me. My eyes turned to the mountain in front of us.
A bus suddenly appeared in the picture. It was very close to us. Cars sped past us without any speed limit. Beside me was a very deep lake: I wondered to myself what if something or someone fell inside it. Suddenly, a bus in front of our van stopped, and because it was raining heavily and the van was going fast, no one could see what was going to happen. Then, bang, we bumped into each other. Our van overturned, but luckily, it didn’t fall into the lake. People came to help us get out of the van because we were blocked and the driver was half-dead.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
We struggled to get out of the van and everything we had was gone.
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I was losing a lot of blood and then the emergency aid came.
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【参考范文】
We struggled to get out of the van and everything we had was gone. Everything was very strange. I had never had that kind of experience before. It was like watching a horror movie. Some people who were also in the accident started crying, looking for their children, tears beginning to increase. My leg was badly injured. My aunt was calling to seek some help, and my sister was full of injury. It almost seemed that the tragedy was never going to end.
I was losing a lot of blood and then the emergency aid came. They took us to hospital where we were treated. We had to pay for some fees, but we had no money. The doctors and nurses who were present learned of our condition and paid for us. Although we had experienced a bad accident, we were all lucky to have received help from those warm-hearted people. After that we went on with our journey and reached our destination successfully at last.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索开展故事，作者讲述了三年前去西班牙度暑假时，在去飞机场的路上，遭遇车祸的故事。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们挣扎着从厢式送货车里爬出来，发现我们的一切东西都不见了。”可知，第一段可描写作者目睹遭遇车祸后的惨状。
②由第二段首句内容“我正在流血，救护车来了。”可知，第二段可描写医生和护士抢救我们的经过。
2．续写线索：爬出运货车——目睹惨状——绝望——救护车到达——医院救助——医护人员筹钱——感动
3．词汇激活
行为类
①寻找：look for/search for
②结束：go to end/come to a stop
③照顾：treat/take care of
情绪类
①哭泣：start crying/burst out crying
②糟糕的：bad/terrible
【典型句式】
[句式1]. Some people who were also in the accident started crying, looking for their children, tears beginning to increase.(运用了who引导的定语从句以及现在分词作状语和独立主格结构)
[句式2]. They took us to hospital where we were treated. (运用了where引导的定语从句)
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler booked off a week from his job as a maintenance manager for the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend two days on his own, finding a route he would eventually use to climb Mount Doggie Dowler.
His wife Jenifer didn't like the sound of her husband's latest plan. She was used to Dowler going on adventures by himself, but this time he'd boat to an unknown bay, bike an unpopulated road , hike through grizzly bear country, and camp overnights alone. There was too much room for disaster.
The night before his journey Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of his bag with a handheld GPS, hiking poles, his homemade sausage, and a few other essentials. Instead of his usual Swiss Army knife, he took a three-inch stainless steel pocket knife given to him by his dad.
The weather that Sunday, July 28 was nice. Colin pulled his car into the Campbell River port and quickly launched and set off in his motorboat with a mountain bike on board. About eight o'clock in the morning, he arrived at Ramsay Arm, and found a spot to tie the boat near a logging (伐木)camp where he chatted with some logging workers.
One of the workers , Vito, gave him a ride in his truck until the forest got too thick. Colin took off his bike and backpack from the truck and started his hiking and route searching. In order not to lose the way back, he marked his trail with blue ribbons (布条).
As he made his seven-kilometer marker, he came around a bend and suddenly put on the brakes—a dirty grizzly bear stood right in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. Colin calculated his chances of turning around for a quick escape, but the bear could easily catch up and stop him before he picked up speed.
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The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way.
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After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself.
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【参考范文】
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The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way. Meanwhile, Colin threw the sausages in his backpack towards the bear, hoping the flavor would attract it. Unfortunately, the bear rushed to him. Colin was pushed to the ground and bit in the left leg. “Ah!” he screamed with the unbearable pain. Blood flowing out, Colin suddenly remembered the knife in his pocket. He stabbed the bear’s neck as fast and strong as possible. The bear roared with pain and ran away. Losing much blood, Colin lost his consciousness afterwards.
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After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself. He found himself surrounded by the logging workers in the camp. He was being cared for by a doctor. It was Vito who saved Colin. When he drove back, he spotted the bleeding bear and sensed that something terrible must have happened. With the blue ribbons leading his way, he finally found Colin. “You are so lucky, Colin.Without being noticed, you could have been killed for loss of blood. God help those who help themselves.” said the doctor.
【写作指导】本文以冒险旅行为线索展开，讲述了Colin Dowler为庆祝生日计划骑自行车穿过无人行走的道路上，然后徒步穿越灰熊的领地，最后可以攀登Doggie Dowler山，结果在灰熊领地，路遇灰熊，与灰熊搏斗，受伤，最终被人发现并获救的故事。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那只熊突然站了起来，以一种威胁的姿态。”可知，第一段可描写Colin和灰熊搏斗，结果负伤。
②由第二段首句内容“似乎过了好几个小时，科林才清醒过来。”可知，第二段可描写Colin苏醒后被照顾的获救过程。
2．续写线索：搏斗——不幸负伤——幸运——获救
3．词汇激活
行为类
①搏斗：struggle with the bear/fight the bear/ be pushed to the ground
②.负伤：be injured /be hurt/be bit
③.获救：be saved/be cared for/ be rescued
情绪类
①.不幸：unfortunately /unluckily
②.幸运：so lucky /good fortune
【典型句式】
[句式1]. Blood flowing out, Colin suddenly remembered the knife in his pocket.(独立主格结构作状语)
[句式2]. Losing much blood, Colin lost his consciousness afterwards.(现在分词作状语)
[句式3]. It was Vito who saved Colin.(强调句运用)
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On my seventh birthday, I got a gift from my father, which was a book titled Guide to Reptiles and Amphibians. It was my favorite. I kept it under my pillow and read every page over and over every night enjoying the pictures of colorful animals. Some of the sakes were the most beautiful creatures I had ever seen.
Little did I know that my book would end up saving a life.
Years ago, my family moved into a new house near the woods. My father built a sandbox in our yard. The cat sometimes used the sandbox for a litter box, so my father had to put a plastic cover over it .When I wanted to build sand castles, I had to pull the cover off.
One day before dinner, I ran to the sandbox to build 8 miniature city. I pulled off the plastic cover, and there in the sandbox was a snake. It was lying very sill, all coiled up, and it was beautiful. The snake had rings of color around it. I had seen a picture just like it in my guidebook, and I remembered that it was one of the prettiest snakes in it. It said in the book that the poisonous coral snake looked very much like the harmless king snake, the only difference was in the order of the colors. 1 ran inside to get the guidebook.
“Mom! Mom! There’s a snake in the sandbox!” I yelled. “I have to find out what kind it is!”
Mom came running. “Don’t touch it, Chris! It might be poisonous!”
Dad was at work, so my mother went to get our neighbor, Mr. Cook.
“Mr. Cook!” my mother yelled across the fence, “We have a snake in the sandbox, and it might be poisonous!”
Mr. Cook was retired and lived with his wife in the house on the other side of our back fence. He came running toward the gale with a shovel and tried to kill the snake.
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“Wait!” I shouted, waving the guidebook in my hand.
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“So what to do now ” Mr. Cook put down the shovel.
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【参考范文】
Para. 1:
“Wait!” I shouted, waving the guidebook in my hand. “Let me have a check!” I yelled at the top of my throat, and then observed the snake carefully. I really want to keep the little snake alive because I love the little, lovely creature. So cautious I was that I couldn't think anything else, the only sound rang our in my mind was that. “Save it!” I could even felt my heart pounding ever wildly in my chest because I was pretty nervous. Ultimately, I made a judgement “It’s not a poisonous but a harmless snake,” I said with extremely excitement.
Para. 2:
“So what to do now ” Mr. Cook put down the shovel. Without any doubt that we should let it out, but where It suddenly dawned on me that king snake prefer warm dry places, which was why the snake in my sand box. “Maybe we can put it in the weeds there always under the sunshine” “Hmm. ok. We’ll do it.” Mr. Cook replied after thinking a while. Finally, Mr. Cook and I brought the harmless snake to the woods and made it back to nature. Fully satisfaction I had, this experience not only gives a chance to see the snake but also let me know the importance of the harmony between people and nature.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一条蛇爬到了作者的沙箱里，作者告诉了妈妈，妈妈去找来了邻居库克先生，他拿着铲子跑来，试图杀死那条蛇。幸亏作者最后认出了这条蛇没有毒，于是他们把蛇放生了。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘等等！’我大喊着，手里挥舞着旅行指南。”可知，第一段可描写作者辨认出蛇无毒的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“‘那现在该怎么办呢？’库克先生放下铲子。”可知，第二段可描写作者和库克先生把蛇放生的经过。
2．续写线索：检查蛇——证实无毒——把蛇带到树林——放生
3．词汇激活
行为类
检查：have a check / examine
叫喊：yell/scream
跳动：pound/beat
情绪类
可爱：lovely /cute
满足：satisfaction /content
【典型句式】
[句式1] I really want to keep the little snake alive because I love the little, lovely creature. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
[句式2] It suddenly dawned on me that king snake prefer warm dry places, which was why the snake in my sand box. (运用了why引导的表语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There was a huge pond just a few kilometers from where we stayed. Since moving into our new home in the countryside, my brother, Jim and I used to often sneak out to the pond where we would meet another friend. Mom had warned us not to get close to the pond, especially after a friend informed her that an alligator(鳄鱼) had been spotted there. We ignored her advice though.
On this particular afternoon, the three of us had fun in the pond. As evening approached, we finished swimming. Jim and Syed were unwillingly making their way towards the place where they had left their clothes. I stayed back and was bathing in the water when I suddenly became aware of ripples(涟漪) forming on the surface of the water. I raised my head and looked at the ripples. My eyes caught a motion in the water. A log, I thought. Then I saw it—its scary nose and its two mean eyes. “Jim…” I cried. Then I screamed with all my might.
Jim turned his head in my direction and immediately recognized the danger. “Get out of the water, Jeff. Hurry! It’s just behind you.”
I waded(瞠水) clumsily(笨拙地) in the water. With great effort, I reached the edge of the pond. I looked over my shoulder. Moving quickly towards me was a huge alligator. I froze. Then suddenly I felt a great pain in my leg. Meanwhile, Jim and Syed screamed and started throwing stones at the alligator and managed to distract it. The alligator went for them now. As it opened its jaws, I could see its sharp teeth. I tried to move but a pain shot through me. I was in a pool of blood. Jim and Syed were scared.
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I was about to give up struggling when I thought of the two hunters who passed by just a moment ago.
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When I woke up, I found myself in a totally unfamiliar environment, a hospital.
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【参考范文】
I was about to give up struggling when I thought of the two hunters who passed by just a moment ago. I shouted to Jim and Syed, “Run to the hunters quickly. They can help me.” Waking from the dream, Jim rushed away like an arrow. Syed continued to throw stones at the alligator and I continued to fight against it. Luckily, in a few minutes, Jim and the two hunters arrived. One of the hunter fired a shot in the air. It had the desired effect. The alligator wound its way away in the water. Then, I passed out.
When I woke up, I found myself in a totally unfamiliar environment, a hospital. Mom stood over me. Seeing her, tears flooded down. Later I learned from my mother that I was rushed to the hospital by the kind hunters. My eyes began to water again. I made an apology to Mom. She ran her fingers on my face and wiped my tears. Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was to have escaped from the jaws of the alligator. It was a narrow escape.
【写作指导】本文以地点和人物为线索展开，讲述了作者忽视妈妈的警告，和朋友一起在危险的池塘里游泳，结果被鳄鱼咬伤，然后被送往医院救治的故事。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我正要放弃挣扎，这时我想起了刚才经过的两个猎人。”可知，第一段可描写作者寻求猎人的帮助，并成功获救。
②由第二段首句内容“当我醒来，我发现自己在一个完全陌生的环境，医院。”可知，第二段可描写作者后悔没有听从妈妈的警告，并表示对妈妈的歉意和对猎人的感谢。
2．续写线索：快跑——到达——幸运——晕倒——道歉——感谢
3．词汇激活
行为类
①.快跑：run quickly/rush
②.到达：get/arrive
情绪类
①.幸运：luckily/ fortunately
②.道歉(后悔的)：make an apology/say sorry to/be regretful
【典型句式】
[句式1]. Later I learned from my mother that I was rushed to the hospital by the kind hunters. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[句式2]. Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was to have escaped from the jaws of the alligator. (运用了how引导宾语从句)
5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A holiday in Penang is an annual affair for my family. My parents grew up in Penang and are very fond of Penang food. In December every year, we would drive up to the island to spend three days visiting their favorite food haunts (常去的地方).
This year, we started our journey up north on a Friday morning. It took us six hours to reach our destination. We always stayed at one of the hotels in Batu Ferringhi. The beach was just a short walk from the hotel entrance and our rooms had a lovely view of the sea. We spent our first evening playing on the beach. After dinner, we returned to our rooms to play games. My parents had a rule for our holidays which was that we were to spend time doing things together. There was to be no TV and no Internet.
The next morning, we went to Bukit Bendera and then spent the rest of the afternoon in town visiting our favorite hawker stalls (小贩摊位). As we were having tea at a coffee shop, we overheard people talking about an earthquake near Sumatera, an island in Indonesia. We headed back to the hotel and then went to the beach. We took a walk along the beach, picking up seashells along the way. Looking up, I saw the sun shining brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree trembling in the distance as it reflected the sun’s rays. It never occurred to us that something awful would take place. Suddenly, I noticed a strange thing. The sea seemed to be leaving from the shore. I called my father to look at the curious occurrence. My father took one look and went pale. We saw a grey line in the distance moving towards the shore. It seemed to grow taller by the second.
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My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.
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We waited a long time before going downstairs.
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My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel. He grabbed my hand and pulled me with him. As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us. Quickly, my father pushed us towards the stairs. Fear gripped us and we reached the first floor when we heard the roar of rushing water and glass breaking. My father yelled at us to keep climbing. We stopped on the fourth floor and looked down at the water below us. It had stopped rising. After some minutes, it began to drop.
We waited a long time before going downstairs. Hardly had the rushing water dropped when we saw the unrecognizable hotel gate. There was dirt and broken furniture everywhere. Some people who were caught in the water were either unconscious or burst into tears with pain. What we saw weakened our heart and we decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to Penang was deeply impressed in my mind.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述了作者一家喜欢去海滩度假，一次在海边散步时，作者发现了大海的异常，海啸发生了。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我父亲大声叫我们跑回旅馆”可知，第一段可描写父亲看到风雨欲袭的场面后，想方设法带领全家人脱险。
②由第二段首句内容“我们等了很长时间才下楼”可知，第二段可描写海水退去后旅馆一片狼藉的景象和我们从中的感悟。
2．续写线索：在父亲带领下逃生——海啸退却——旅馆一片狼藉——灾后感悟
3．词汇激活
行为类
①对……大喊：shout at/yell at
②抓住：grab/seize/hold
③下降：drop/fall
情绪类
①害怕，恐惧：fear/ fright
②令人激动的：thrilling/exciting
【典型句式】
[句式1] As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us.(运用了as引导时间状语从句)
[句式2] Some people who were caught in the water were either unconscious or burst into tears with pain. (运用了who引导限制性定语从句)
[句式3] What we saw weakened our heart and we decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. (运用了what引导主语从句)
6.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a fine summer morning, perfect to be outdoors. Two sisters had been out mushroom picking, and were on their way home with heavy baskets full of mushrooms. They sang songs on the way, and played with each other.
Soon they reached a point where they had to cross a railway track. They did not think twice about crossing it since there was no train coming, and they could not hear any whistle. They slowly climbed the steep railway embankment, taking care not to drop the baskets. They were very near the track and the little sister Mary was about to cross it first when a train whistled in the distance.
Hearing the train coming, Rose the elder sister quickly ran down. She thought that the young one was following her. But as she turned back, she was shocked to see her little sister still up there crossing the track. “Come back here! Run back fast!” she shouted.
Mary seemed not to hear the whistle nor her sister’s cry as she was concentrating on stepping over the track with her little feet, and holding on to the basket. Then she tripped and fell on the track, scattering her mushrooms around.
The engine driver panicked on seeing a girl between the tracks who was on her hands and knees and he blew the horn with all his strength. Poor Mary, who was frightened by the coming danger, froze and didn’t know what to do. When Rose saw the scene, she screamed at the top of her voice for Mary’s attention. Mary noticed that her sister was not around and cried for help.
With the train drawing near, the engine driver grew extremely anxious. As hard as he could, he kept blowing the whistle and started reducing speed. Yet it was not possible for him to stop the heavy train within such a short distance.
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Rose wouldn’t watch the tragedy happen before her eyes.
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The train rolled over and finally stopped.
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【答案】Para 1:
Rose wouldn’t watch the tragedy happen before her eyes. She rushed up the embankment staircase, repeating at the top of her voice “Stay off the tracks!” Mary, at the sight of Rose’s coming to her rescue, burst into tears of joy. Though reducing speed as hard as it could, the train was still approaching fast. Seeing there was little time to drag her sister out of danger, Rose jumped over without a second thought and covered Mary’s body under hers.
Para 2:
The train rolled over and finally stopped. Frightened and worried, the engine driver quickened his pace to see what happened to the little girl. To his great relief, the sisters lied between the rails safe and sound. What a narrow escape! He helped them sit up and comforted them. The two sisters hugged and kissed each other, tears of joy flowing down their cheeks. Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. They then collected all the remaining mushrooms and, hand in hand more tightly than before, walked back home.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了两姐妹出去采蘑菇，带着沉重的蘑菇篮子回家，在穿过铁轨的时候小妹妹Mary在铁轨上摔倒了，姐姐Rose在危急时刻冲过去护住妹妹，最后火车停了下来，两人死里逃生。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Rose不愿看到悲剧发生在她眼前。”可知，第一段可描写Rose是如何帮助妹妹的。
②由第二段首句内容“火车翻倒了，终于停了下来。”可知，第二段可描写火车停下，两姐妹获救。
2．续写线索：Rose冲上铁轨——Rose护住妹妹——火车停下——获救
3．词汇激活
行为类
①靠近：approach/get close
②捡起：collect/pick up
③回家：walk back home/get back home
情绪类
①快乐：joy/happiness
②害怕：frightened/scared
【点睛】
[高分句型1] She rushed up the embankment staircase, repeating at the top of her voice “Stay off the tracks!”(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. (运用了全部倒装)
7.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was last February. Noel, a 28-year-old marketing manager was heading from Iceland’s Keflavik International Airport to the capital city Reykjavik with the modern traveler’s two essentials: a dream and a GPSunit. What could go wrong
The dream had been with him since April 14, 2010 when he watched TV news report of the volcano eruption in Iceland. Dark-haired, with a youthful face and thick eyebrows, he had never travelled beyond the United States and his native Mexico. “I want to see this through my own eyes,” he thought as he watched the news on his couch.
Four months later, on a cold winter morning, he was driving from Keflavik Airport in a rented car towards a hotel in Reykjavik, excited that his one-week journey was beginning. As the pink sun rose over the ocean and shone light on the snow-covered lava rocks along the shore, he dutifully followed the commands of the GPS that came with the car, a calm female voice directing him to an address—a left here, a right there.
But after stopping on a deserted road, he got a feeling that the voice might be steering (引导) him wrong. He had been driving for nearly an hour, yet the GPS put his arrival time at around eight hours later. He entered his destination again and got the same result. Though he sensed that something was off, he made a choice to trust the machine.
The farther he drove, the fewer cars he saw. The roads became icier. He was sleepy, cold and hungry. He hadn’t set up his phone for international use, so that was no help. Another three hours passed. As his tires skidded (打滑) along a narrow mountain road that skirted a steep cliff.he knew that the device had failed him.
He was lost. He didn’t know where else to go. There was no one else on the road, and there was nothing else to do but follow the line on the screen to its mysterious end.
Paragraph 1
The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town.
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Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town. Noel parked his car and headed towards the door. An old blue-eyed woman answered after the second ring. She smiled as he stammered about his hotel and handed her his reservation. “No. this isn’t the hotel you have booked. Your hotel is 380 kilometres south.” She told him in accented English with a laugh. Noel quickly figured out what happened the address was wrong with an extra “r” in it.
Paragraph 2:
Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him. She provided Noel a free meal and a bed so that he could get a good night’s sleep. The next day, Noel decided to drive to Reykjavik. In light of his previous experience, the woman gave him a map with the main roads and landmarks carefully marked on it in case the device went wrong again. With the help of the woman’s directions, Noel finally reached his destination. “Without her help, I wouldn’t have made it.” He was so thankful to the woman, who was just a total stranger to him.
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写。故事以人物为线索展开，讲述了28岁的Noel从冰岛凯夫拉维克国际机场前往首都雷克雅未克，但不知怎么回事导航系统把他带到了一个偏远的地方。他迷路了，但又只能跟着导航继续前进。
【详解】
1．段落续写
①根据第一段首句“导航的尽头是一个小镇上的一座蓝色的小房子”可知，下文可描写Noel到达房子后发生的事情，并且知道了自己为什么会来到这么远的地方。
②根据第二段首句“那个女人知道发生了什么事后，主动提出帮助他”可知，下文可描写女士是如何帮助Noel的。
2．续写线索
来到小房子——发现女士——知道为什么——女士提供帮助——安全到达目的地——感激
3．词类激活
行为类
①回答：answer/reply/respond
②递：hand/deliver
③弄清楚，明白：figure out/understand
④决定做某事：decide to do/be determined to do/make up one’s mind to do
情绪类
①感激的：grateful/thankful
【点睛】
[高分句型1]She smiled as he stammered about his hotel and handed her his reservation. （运用了as引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] Noel quickly figured out what happened: the address was wrong with an extra “r” in it.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型3]He was so thankful to the woman, who was just a total stranger to him.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
8.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was finally going to see Giant Rock with my brothers and Dad. I’d been snowshoeing before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow alongside wild-animal tracks. After putting on our snowshoes, we studied the map. Dad said, “We start here on the red trail, and then we turn left onto the purple one. That’s where Giant Rock is. Remember to stick together, guys!”
The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall. It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers. Half way up the hill, we turned onto the winding purple trail. We settled into a rhythm, with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back, crunch-crunching through the snow. The late afternoon sun felt warm, although it was already sinking lower. I saw lots of animal tracks-mostly deer, squirrel, and rabbit prints, which I recognized from my field guide.
An hour later, we topped the hill and saw the massive rock sitting alone in the forest. “It is really huge, as big as a house!” my brother Josh said, gazing up. Breathlessly standing in the rock’s giant shadow, I noticed the sun had dipped even lower.
“Let’s head back,” Dad said.
I was a little behind the group when I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn’t recognize. They were hard to see among the snowshoe prints, so I followed them off the trail for a closer look. There were no claw marks, which meant they didn’t belong to a dog or a fox. Instead, they looked like tiny handprints and footprints. “Must be a raccoon (浣熊),” I thought, matching them to prints in my guide.
I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten. I was totally alone. “Hey!” I shouted. “Where is everyone ” nothing. Just the sound of my own breathing. “They couldn’t have gone far. I’ll catch up to them if I hurry,” I thought, stepping back onto the trail. The light had grown darker by the second. Without flashlight and phone, I began running.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
I came to where I could turn right or go straight.
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“Stop and think,” I told myself, picturing the map again.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
I came to where I could turn right or go straight. The path to the front looked familiar. But when I walked on, some scenes told me I was going the wrong way. So I reversed direction. My mind started to race. Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. And I couldn’t just follow my own footsteps because there were so many tracks from other hikers. What if I couldn’t find my way back I started tearing through the woods in a panic.
Paragraph 2:
“Stop and think,” I told myself, picturing the map again. To get to Giant Rock we had turned left onto the purple trail. To get back, I needed to do the opposite and turn right onto the red one. I struggled forward in the faint light. Then I noticed the stone wall. This had to be right. I went downhill in giant steps, and then I saw my family! I shouted as I ran toward them. “Honey Are you OK ” Dad’s voice was urgent. It seemed I had been lost for ages, and all I wanted now was a bear hug from Dad.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者与兄弟和爸爸去看巨人岩，天色逐渐晚了，作者跟着一组不认识的动物脚印和亲人走散了，十分慌张。幸好最后和父亲团聚了。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我来到了可以右转或直走的地方。”可知，第一段可描写作者走散后的心理活动以及反应。
②由第二段首句内容“‘停下来想一想，’我对自己说，一边又想象着地图。”可知，第二段可描写作者如何和家人团聚的。
2．续写线索：继续前行——改变方向——慌张——想象地图——看到家人
3．词汇激活
行为类
①继续前进：walk on/move on
②辨别：tell/distinguish
③大叫：shout/yell
情绪类
①慌乱地：in a panic/flurriedly
②焦急的：urgent/anxious
【点睛】
[高分句型1] But when I walked on, some scenes told me I was going the wrong way. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
9.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day, my brother and I were coming back from the islands where we often risked going and got more fish than others. All at once, the sky was covered with dark clouds and in less than a minute we were in a terrible storm. A huge wave covered our boat and we nearly fell into the sea. My brother put his mouth close to my ear and cried out “Moskoe-strom!” The moment I heard the word I became very frightened. I knew what he meant by that one word well enough.
With the wind and waves, we were going in the direction of the whirlpool (漩涡). We were hopeless. Nothing could save us. I felt sick, as if I was falling from a mountain top in a dream. We went round and round, nearer and nearer to the horrible edge of the whirlpool. It may appear strange, but at that moment, when we were on the edge of the whirlpool, I felt calmer than when we were moving towards it. I began to think how amazing a thing it was to die in such a way, and how wonderful it was to see the power of nature. Suddenly, we went over the edge. I thought my life was over. But moment after moment passed, and I was still safe.
The boat was on the inside of the huge whirlpool and we were going round in circles at great speed. I saw clearly that there were other objects in the whirlpool—trees and barrels (水桶). After a while, I became curious about the whirlpool itself. I then made three important observations. The first, the larger the bodies were, the more rapidly they fell; the second, between two objects of equal extent, round objects fell down less rapidly; and the third, between two objects of the same size, objects shaped like a tube fell down more slowly. So I tied myself to a barrel to help me float. I tried to make my brother understand, but he was too frightened and stayed in the boat. Without waiting, I jumped into the sea to try and escape.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Some time after I left the boat, I saw my brother struggling in the sea.
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Paragraph 2:
Soon after that, the whirlpool became less wild and then the sky was clear.
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【答案】 Some time after I left the boat, I saw my brother struggling in the sea. I tried my best to approach to him but I failed again and again. I waved and called him to tie himself to another barrel to help him float. I struggled to run away from the whirlpool and prayed the storm could stop as soon as possible.
Soon after that, the whirlpool became less wild and then the sky was clear. The wind became calmer, and the moon was shining. I was still tied to the barrel and the waves soon carried me to an area where the other fishermen were. Fortunately, a boat picked me up when I was tired out. The fishermen were very old friends, but they were unable to recognize me at first because I was in a so difficult position. To my great excitement, minutes later, another boat arrived with my brother in it. How lucky we were!
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和弟弟从我们经常冒险去的岛屿回来，遇到了可怕的暴风雨，离漩涡越来越近了，作者清楚地看到漩涡里还有别的东西，作者做了三个重要的观察。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我下船后不久，看见弟弟在海里挣扎。”可知，第一段可描写作者试图救弟弟。
②由第二段首句内容“不久之后，漩涡变得不那么猛烈了，天空也变得晴朗了。”可知，第二段可描写作者和弟弟都获救。
2．续写线索：想办法救弟弟——风停——得救
3．词汇激活
行为类
①尽力做：try one's best to do/struggle to do
②救起：pick up/pluck
③到达：arrive/reach
情绪类
①非常疲倦：be tired out/be exhausted
②兴奋：excitement/thrill
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I was still tied to the barrel and the waves soon carried me to an area where the other fishermen were.(由关系副词where引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]Fortunately, a boat picked me up when I was tired out.(由when引导的时间状语从句)
10.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was an unusually hot day. Exhausted after football practice, I headed for the bus stop to wait for Bus 112 which would take me home. I was beginning to drift off to sleep when I saw the bus arriving. The sun was in my eyes and that was probably the reason why I got onto Bus 113
I was glad to get a seat. Within minutes, I was sting against the window, fast asleep. When I opened my eyes, it was dark outside. I was the only passenger left on the bus. I could not recognize the part of town we were passing through. I pressed the bell and the bus stopped. I planned to hop across the road and catch a bus going the opposite direction. However, I found myself on a quiet street with a row of shops that were all closed. I kicked myself for not asking the driver for directions.
As I was wondering what to do, a motorcycle came down the road. The rider looked at me as he passed and then stopped a short distance away. I went to him and asked him how to get back to the City Square. He smiled and nodded. He patted the back seat and said that he would send me home. Without a second thought, I climbed up behind the rider. He turned the motorcycle around and headed in the direction I wanted. We travelled for about 15 minutes and the surroundings still looked unfamiliar to me. The rider made a few turns and I knew I was hopelessly lost. I asked him where we were going, He did not answer but increased his speed. Alarm bells started to ring in my head.
I tapped the man, shoulder and told him to stop. He leaned forward and went at high speed now. Then he slowed down to turn into a dark and narrow road that led into an oil palm plantation. I had had enough.
注意:
1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下超式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I jumped off the vehicle and fell onto the ground.
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I got off the taxi and rushed into my house.
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【答案】I jumped of vehicle and fell onto the ground. The man turned around and rode towards me. I swung my schoolbag at him and he lost his balance and fell off his motorcycle. Without looking back, I just ran and ran. When I dared to stop, I found that I was on a main road. Cars were passing by, I was relieved to see a taxi and waved desperately, praying that it would stop. It did. I got in and gave the driver my house address, shaking uncontrollably.
I got off the taxi and rushed into my house. I threw myself into my mum's arms and broke into tears. When my family learned what had happened, they were horrified. My parents told me that I should have just looked for a public phone and called home when I was lost. I knew I had been foolish to believe a stranger. It was a frightening experience which I hoped would never happen to me again. It's better to be safe than sorry.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了足球训练结束后，我筋疲力尽，我走向公共汽车站，错上了反方向的车。下车后，外面一片漆黑，正当我不知所措时，一辆摩托车从路上开了过来，骑手主动要求搭载我。一路上，他走的路很陌生，我要求他停下来，他却全速前进。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我从车上跳下来，摔在了地上”可知，第一段可描写我是如何跳下摩托车，逃离这个陌生人的。
②由第二段首句内容“我下了出租车，冲进屋去”可知，第二段可描写我把这件事情告诉父母，父母告诉我今后遇到类似的事情，该怎么办。
2．续写线索：筋疲力尽——上错车——搭载摩托车——遇险——逃跑——诉说——感悟
3．词汇激活
行为类
转身：turn around /turn back
冲进：rush into /dash into
情绪类
绝望地：desperately / hopelessly
大哭：break into tears / burst out crying
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When I dared to stop, I found that I was on a main road. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] It was a frightening experience which I hoped would never happen to me again. (运用了which引导定语从句)
12.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It’s a beautiful sunny day. The Bonds boarded their boat for a carefree day trip to Dove Island for some fishing as a family custom. Thomas Bond, a 30-year-old construction worker, loved the sport, especially catching bass (鲈鱼) and had impressed on his oldest daughter, Lizzy, a love of the outdoors, teaching her how to bait (下诱饵) a hook and cast a line and brave the waves.
The family spent the day fishing in the vast ocean, and then left the island in the early evening. Upon setting off from the shore, they found thick fog rolling in. Lizzy fell into a light sleep beside her five-year-old sister, Molly, at a table on the boat’s lower deck (甲板). Their father’s sharp orders woke her up: “Get out of the boat. The boat’s sinking!” Lizzy pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. Both girls wore life jackets. The adults did not. The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Bond, who was expecting a baby at that time. Within seconds, the boat was damaged and was left just the tip of its bow in the air.
Looking into the faces of her father, mother, and sister, Lizzy wasn’t frightened. After some time, her father told them he would swim for help. “I’ll be back,” he said before disappearing into the darkness.
“Dad is like the superhero to me. I believe he will get help to rescue us,” Lizzy said to herself. After some time, her mother became quiet and stopped swimming. Lizzy wrapped a rope around her mother’s chest and tied her to the boat so she wouldn’t float away. Then her sister fell quiet too and she stayed beside her.
To keep herself awake, Lizzy daydreamed about what they would do after they were rescued. They would stay in a hotel, order room service, and lie comfortably under the blankets in bed, cozy and warm.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance.
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On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them.
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【答案】 After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance. “It’s dad.” Lizzy called out and began to shake her sleepy mother and sister. Mother opened her eyes and squeezed out a faint smile and fell asleep again. Through the thick fog, a white small boat sliding close. Lizzy cried out, “Dad, here”, with tears rolling down her face. Finally, Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved. She knew they were rescued.
On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them. With the help of the nurses, they all got in. Wrapped in a warm blanket, Lizzy sit beside her family, looking at her mom on the bed. Suddenly, Lizzy turned to her father and said, “I knew you would be back, Dad.” “I knew you would keep mother and sister safe”, her father hugged her. Tears rolled down their faces.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Lizzy和妹妹跟随爸爸妈妈出海钓鱼，遭遇沉船落水，爸爸留下Lizzy照顾妈妈和妹妹，自己游去寻求救援，妈妈的妹妹体力不支快失去意识，只有Lizzy坚持着保护着她们，等待爸爸归来。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几个小时后，利奇听到远处有人叫她的名字。”可知，第一段可描写爸爸归来，三人获救。
②由第二段首句内容“在海岸上，一辆救护车正等着他们”可知，第二段可描写获救后利齐与爸爸的对话。
2．续写线索：爸爸归来——三人获救——得到救助——父女对话
3．词汇激活
行为类
①大喊：cry out/yell/scream
②营救：rescue/save
③在……的帮助下：with the help of/with the aid of
情绪类
①疲倦的：exhausted/tired
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Finally, Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved.(运用了where引导定语从句和形容词作状语)
[高分句型2] She knew they were rescued.(运用了省略连词的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] Wrapped in a warm blanket, Lizzy sit beside her family, looking at her mom on the bed.(运用了过去分词和现在分词作状语)
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