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写作导图
一、观察顺序法
通过时间/空间顺序组织描写，增强画面逻辑性
The sun slowly peeked over the mountain ridge, painting the valley with golden strokes.
（太阳缓缓从山脊探出，用金色笔触为山谷上色）
解析：使用"peeked over"拟人动词，通过时间顺序展现日出过程
We followed the winding path upwards, passing wildflowers at ankle level, then chest-high shrubs, until finally reaching ancient pines towering above.
（我们沿蜿蜒小径上行，先见脚踝高的野花，再经齐胸灌木，最终抵达高耸的古松）
解析：空间顺序"ankle-chest-towering"形成垂直视觉层次
Morning fog lingered in the hollows, but by midday, every dewdrop on spiderwebs sparkled under direct sunlight.
（晨雾萦绕山谷，正午时分蛛网露珠在直射阳光下闪烁）
解析：时间词"morning-midday"构成自然过渡
From the cable car window, the cityscape shrank to miniature: matchbox cars crawled on ribbon roads, skyscrapers stood like colored pencils in a cup.
（缆车窗外，城市缩成微景：火柴盒汽车在缎带路上爬行，摩天楼如彩铅插笔筒）
解析：空间视角由近及远，比喻生动
二、感官描写法
调动五感让场景立体可感
The sea breeze carried saltiness that clung to our lips, while seagulls' cries mingled with waves' rhythmic applause.
（海风裹挟咸味粘住双唇，海鸥啼叫与浪涛节拍相和）
解析：味觉"盐味"+听觉"叫声/掌声"营造海滨氛围
Crunching through autumn leaves, we caught whiffs of woodsmoke from distant cottages, their chimneys sketching thin lines against lavender sky.
（踩着沙沙秋叶前行，远处木屋炊烟飘来柴火香，烟囱在淡紫天空勾画细线）
解析：听觉"crunching"+嗅觉"woodsmoke"激活多重感官
My fingers traced the temple's weathered stones, their cool roughness whispering stories of eight centuries.
（手指抚过寺庙风化石材，凉意粗糙感低语八百年沧桑）
解析：触觉描写赋予历史厚重感
The night market assaulted our senses: sizzling satay smoke stung eyes, chili aroma tickled nostrils, vendors' chants competed with pop music blaring from shops.
（夜市冲击感官：沙爹油烟刺痛眼睛，辣椒香挠痒鼻腔，摊贩叫卖与店铺流行乐争鸣）
解析：视觉/嗅觉/听觉交织呈现市井活力
三、情感融入法
通过环境描写反映人物心境
Each step on the cobblestone alley echoed my hesitation, shadows lengthening like doubts as sunset bled across medieval walls.
（卵石巷脚步声回应犹豫，夕阳染红古墙时阴影如疑虑蔓延）
解析：环境描写"阴影/夕阳"映射心理活动
Laughter bubbled from the plaza fountain, its merry splash a stark contrast to the heavy suitcase dragging at my arm.
（广场喷泉迸发欢快水声，与我臂上沉重行李箱形成鲜明对比）
解析：用欢快环境反衬疲惫心境
The abandoned lighthouse stood sentinel on the cliff, its cracked lens staring vacantly seaward, mirroring my sense of directionless.
（废弃灯塔如哨兵矗立悬崖，裂痕镜头茫然望海，映照我的迷失）
解析：拟物手法实现情景交融
Cherry petals snowed around us, their fleeting beauty tightening my throat - tomorrow we would part at this very station.
（樱瓣如雪飘落，转瞬即逝的美景扼住咽喉——明日我们将在同个车站分别）
解析：自然现象触发情感共鸣
四、语言提升技巧
运用修辞增强文字表现力
Twilight draped the savanna in indigo velvet, acacia trees silhouetted like nature's calligraphy.
（暮色为草原披上靛蓝天鹅绒，金合欢树影宛如自然书法）
解析：比喻"velvet/calligraphy"提升画面美感
The glacier groaned and cracked, ancient ice cubes clinking in nature's cocktail shaker.
（冰川呻吟开裂，古老冰块在自然调酒器中叮当作响）
解析：拟声词+新奇比喻创造听觉意象
Dawn tiptoed across rice terraces, gilding each watery step with liquid gold.
（黎明蹑足走过梯田，为每层水阶镀上流动金箔）
解析：拟人+"liquid gold"创新表达
Our campfire danced with orange tongues, swallowing twilight stars whole while birthing constellations in rising sparks.
（篝火舞动橘色火舌，吞噬暮星却在飞溅火星中孕育新星座）
解析：矛盾修辞法制造诗意张力
背精彩句子，让表达出彩
1．After hours of hiking, we finally reached the summit of the mountain and were rewarded with a breathtaking view.
经过几个小时的徒步旅行，我们终于到达了山顶，并欣赏到了壮丽的景色。
2．My brother and I harvested a meaningful exploration and it was really a brand new weekend.
我和哥哥收获了一次有意义的探索，这真是一个全新的周末。
3．Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life.
我们的迷路给我的冒险假期增添了一份特别的滋味，我将终生难忘。
4．Very tired as they were, they had to strengthen up to spend a night there.
虽然他们很累，但他们不得不鼓起勇气在那里过夜。
5．The first thing he did was to shelter from the freezing wind and snow.
他做的第一件事就是躲避寒风和雪。
6．She tried to make her way quietly through the underbrush, but she was nearly scared to death when she saw a large snake coil up before her.她试图悄悄地穿过灌木丛，但当她看到一条大蛇盘绕在她面前时，她几乎吓死了。
7．The only thing we could do was just sitting in the cold air and wondering how to get out of the forest.
我们唯一能做的就是坐在寒冷的空气中，想着如何走出森林。
8．Whether it's a weekend getaway or a month-long adventure, there's nothing like the excitement of planning a trip.
无论是周末度假还是为期一个月的冒险，没有什么比计划旅行更令人兴奋的了。
9．Despite feeling weak, Nicholas was generally in a good condition, and he was really happy as he was carried back to the ski resort to reunite with his family.
尽管感觉很虚弱，但尼古拉斯总的来说状态很好，当他被抬回滑雪场与家人团聚时，他真的很开心。
10.Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us．What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any difficult situation as long as we stay calm.
最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。 多么难忘的经历啊！ 事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。
11.Traveling to new destinations is an adventure that always fills me with excitement.前往新的目的地是一次冒险，总是让我兴奋不已。
12.Whether it's hiking through the mountains or surfing on the beach, every adventure brings its own unique challenges and rewards.
无论是在山上徒步旅行还是在海滩上冲浪，每一次冒险都会带来自己独特的挑战和回报。
13.Near the top, thick snow blanketed the path．Excitedly, the kids raced across the hard surface. 在山顶附近，厚厚的积雪覆盖了这条小路。孩子们兴奋地在坚硬的表面上奔跑。
14.When the sun disappeared behind heavy gray clouds, they suddenly felt lost, cold and hungry.
当太阳消失在厚重的灰色云层后面时，他们突然感到迷茫、寒冷和饥饿。
15.Exhausted and bloodied，he emerged from the forest and bumped into a family of hikers，who called 911.他筋疲力尽，浑身是血，从森林里出来，撞见一群徒步旅行者，他们拨打了911。
高考真题演练
2017年11月浙江卷（和妈妈去旅行）
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother — loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids ” “What ! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections. If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
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Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.
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【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者11岁的一次家庭旅行让作者了解了自己的母亲。在路上作者和弟弟一直担心遇到危险，而妈妈却坚持要在外面搭帐篷睡觉，最后他们搭好了帐篷，在外面度过了美好的一个假期。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天，我们想起了我们带来的新帐篷。”可知，第一段可描写他们回去取帐篷的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“我们开车经过了几个州，沿途看到了许多美丽的景色。”可知，第二段可描写他们在户外搭帐篷做饭的事情。
2．续写线索：想起带来的新帐篷——妈妈坚持回去取帐篷——看见美丽的风景——搭帐篷准备饭菜——作者感悟
3．词汇激活
行为类
建议：recommend/suggest
回去：go back/return
发现：find/discover
情绪类
准备好的：ready /prepared
令人愉快的：pleasant /pleasing
【点睛】
[高分句型1] But then we were half an hour away from the hotel, where the tent was left behind. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded, it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again. (运用了虚拟语气)
参考范文1
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Thinking of this tent, Mom suggested that we go camping in the next village in excitement, with her eyes glittering. Considering her enthusiasm, we all agreed. When the door of our car opened, Mom stormed out instantly and urged us to put up the tent. David and I were asked to pick up some branches to build a fire. And when we came back, Dad and Mom had already lain down the grass comfortably in front of the tent, talking merrily with a local boy at our age, who kept glancing at this tent curiously. Soon we learnt that the boy in rags even didn’t have a home to live in. Of course, Mom “forgot” to take this tent with us again.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. And we also had a nice time living with my grandparents during that trip. But what impressed me most was that tent, which was forgotten deliberately by Mom. Though she did love going camping, she presented that poor boy with this tent out of sympathy. It was Mom that made my childhood colorful. And it was also she that showed me the true meaning of giving.
参考范2
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. But then we were half an hour away from the hotel, where the tent was left behind. Dad recommended buying a new one, while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it, saying “Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly, so it’s unwise to give up the tent.” Finally, we got back the tent and hit the road again. If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded, it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. One day, towards evening, we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain. David and I helped Dad put up the tent, and Mom was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains, the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting around the camp fire, we talked and laughed. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom’s face.
参考范文3
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. To our delight, Mom gave up the idea of camping in some stranger’s backyard. Instead, we found a wonderful camping site in the wild. It was a clearing in the woods by a small lake, where Dad could catch some fish for dinner. We had no trouble setting up our tent, but we were disappointed to find that Mom forgot to pack up pillows. Needless to say, we all woke up with a sore neck the next morning.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. It was a fantastic trip. We crossed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high mountains, and overlooked deep valleys. During the trip, Mom’s being absent-minded not only got us into much trouble, but also gave us many funny moments. But luckily, she was not so forgetful as to leave me and David behind in the gas station bathrooms. We all arrived at grandparents’ home safe and sound.
模拟演练
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kathy’s family vacation to the beach was usually the highlight of her summer. This year, however, her parents announced a new rule: no phones for the entire week.
“But my friends will be expecting updates about the trip,” Kathy complained. Kathy’s mom gave her a serious look. Unwillingly, Kathy handed her phone over and her mom locked it away.
The drive to the beach house took most of the day. As they turned off the highway onto countryback roads, the clouds darkened. Rain started to pour. “Even more beautiful in the rain,” her mother said. “What do you think, Kathy ” Kathy glared at her mom. “Beautiful,” she muttered.
That night after dinner, Kathy wandered into the kitchen, where her father was washing dishes. She gave her father a loving look and said in her sweetest voice, “Couldn’t I have my phone back, just for one second Just so I can tell everyone what an amazing time I’m having ”
“Can’t,” he said. “It’s not here. Remember ” Kathy was very annoyed. Having nothing better to do, she examined the dusty bookcase in the living room. The books looked as dull as the weather. On the top shelf, however, she spotted a puzzle. She took it, emptied the pieces on the table, and began to sort them.
After what seemed like a few minutes, she looked up. It was past ten o’clock. She had been working for almost two hours! She yawned. The puzzle was less than half done, but she was exhausted. So, she went to bed.
注意：
1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach.
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Paragraph 2:
Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn’t thought of her cellphone for hours.
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【参考范文】
After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach. Under no circumstances had Kathy expected the scenery to be so spectacular! With the sea wind blowing against her face, Kathy totally lost herself in the stunning views. After half an hour’s leisure walk along the beach, Kathy returned to the house. “How do I spend the rest of the day ” Kathy murmured to herself. Suddenly, the unfinished puzzle caught her attention. She felt a little excited and buried herself in it once again. Every time the shapes met, Kathy was overwhelmed with happiness. Soon, all that were left were a few gaps. She quickly put the remaining pieces into place. The puzzle was completed!
Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn’t thought of her cellphone for hours. Trying to preserve the image in her mind, she quietly started taking it apart rather than taking pictures to update about the trip.That, she thought, was just for me. Without the distractions from her cellphone, she found herself engaged in story sharing session with mom and daddy willingly. They spent a high-quality family time together. On arriving home, mom gave her cellphone back. This time, however, she had no intention to share but to keep all the great memories in her mind.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述Kathy一家去旅行，妈妈要求旅行中不用手机，开始Kathy十分不习惯但又不得不遵守规则。Kathy完成了拼图，并且欣赏到了平时看不到的美景，还尽情享受了和父母在一起的时间和温暖。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Kathy快速吃完早饭后就跑去海边。”可知，第一段可描写Kathy在海边看到了美景，然后，回家完成昨晚没有完成的拼图。
②由第二段首句内容“欣赏着自己完成的拼图，她意识到自己已经好几个小时没有想起手机这回事了。”可知，第二段可描写没有手机的打扰，一家人在这里度过的温馨生活，是在平时感受不到的，回到家后妈妈把手机还给Kathy后，她似乎已经不需要了。
2．续写线索：
去海边欣赏到美景——回家完成拼图——在脑海保存拼图——和父母度过高质量的假期——渐渐地已经不需要手机
3．词汇激活
行为类
①回家：returned to the house/go back to the house
②吸引注意力：catch her attention /draw her attention
③保存：preserve/keep
情绪类
①激动的：excited/thrilled
②十分高兴：be overwhelmed with happiness/be bathed in happiness
【典型句式】
[句型1]. With the sea wind blowing against her face, Kathy totally lost herself in the stunning views. (运用了with的复合结构)
[句型2]. Every time the shapes met, Kathy was overwhelmed with happiness. (由every time引导的时间状语从句)
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Winter break was approaching, and all Scott wanted to do was go snowboarding. Unfortunately, Scott's parents had different plans. They had booked a weeklong tropical cruise (热带船游). Scott hated warm weather and asked if he could just stay at his best friend's house so he could snowboard every day at the local mountain. His parents didn't want to hear anything of it. He kept debating them about the topic, but they would not change their minds. Family time was important to them, and it was tradition that they spend winter break together.
The week of the cruise arrived, and Scott continued to mumble (咕哝) his complaints as he and his family left their house to head south. Scott's dad told him that he would only make the vacation worse for himself if he didn't change his attitude and open his mind to a new experience. Scott still couldn't stop thinking about all of the snow he was leaving behind.
When they arrived at the port to board the ship, Scott had a hard time admitting that he was actually impressed with the size of the ship. He had seen the brochures but seeing the ship in person was a whole different animal. Then he remembered that the brochure said something about a surfing pool. Maybe surfing would be somewhat like snowboarding. After all, it involved riding a board.
Scott climbed aboard the ship with his parents, and then they walked around to check everything out. He couldn't believe how fancy the accommodations were. The dining room looked like a royal hall; the game room had all of his favorite games; the ship's deck (甲板) had several different swimming pools for different purposes. Then Scott saw the surfing pool. It was incredible. It wasn't a big pool, but it had big waves, and the young man who was demonstrating how to ride the waves made it look like a ton of fun.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右;
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Scott asked his parents if he could try surfing.
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Gradually, Scott began to love the cruise.
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【参考范文】
Scott asked his parents if he could try surfing. They said, "Of course. And much to Scott's surprise, they wanted to try surfing too. When Scott and his parents had their swim suits on, Scott's dad went first and only lasted about five seconds before he wiped out.Then it was his mom's turn.She actually made it longer than his dad did. When it was Scott's turn, he was excited but a little bit nervous. He hopped on the board and took a stance similar to his snowboarding stance. Then the waves started. It felt similar to snowboarding but different at the same time. On his first ride, Scott rode for almost 30 seconds before wiping out.He was crazy about it though.
Gradually, Scott began to love the cruise. He got to know the people who often surfed there quite well. By the time the weeklong cruise was over, Scott had new friends he planned to keep in touch. Scott is the brave and lucky one since only eight percent of the experiencer or so really fell in love with it among a lot of the passengers who tried surfing the first day of the cruise. With a new hobby, and great memories, he apologized to his parents for earliest moaning and groaning and told them it was his best vacation ever.
【写作指导】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者斯科特和父母像往常一样在寒假出去度假。但他想要滑雪，但父母却订了为期一周的热带船游。斯科特无奈妥协，但最终在体验的过程中爱上了这项新运动并结交了很多新朋友，度过了最开心的假期。
1．段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“斯科特问他的父母他是否可以尝试冲浪。”可知，第一段描述了斯科特和父母一起尝试冲浪的体验过程。
②由第二段首句内容“渐渐地，斯科特开始喜欢上了这次航行”可知，第二段可描写作者改变了自己的态度，从冲浪中获得了快乐且有了很多收获。
2．续写线索：
询问是否可以尝试——穿上装备做好准备——父母和斯科特的第一次体验——逐渐体验到快乐——慢慢爱上运动，并收获颇多——跟父母道歉并承认是最开心的一次旅行
3．词汇激活(一个词汇要写出相近的表达)
行为类
①尝试做某事：try doing sth/make attempts to do sth/attempt to do sth
②保持联系：keep in touch/stay in touch/keep contact
③被淘汰：wipe out /be knocked out
情绪类
①令某人吃惊：to one's surprise/surprise sb/to one's astonishment
②紧张：nervous/tense/strained
【典型句式】
[句型1] When Scott and his parents had their swim suits on, Scott's dad went first and only lasted about five seconds before he wiped out.(由连接词when和before引导的时间状语从句)
[句型2] With a new hobby, and great memories, he apologized to his parents for earliest moaning and groaning and told them it was his best vacation ever.(运用with复合结构表伴随)
3．阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was August. We were on vacation, just my six-year-old son Kevin and I, for my husband was always busy. Having driven from our home in the city to a remote and peaceful place, we wouldn’t see friends or family—it would be a nice, safe, socially distanced week away. We had hiked about half mile to an attractive spot called Diana’s Baths, which afforded visitors an expanse of transparent water. The water flows and then falls off a series of big flat stones, making itself a small waterfall, about 7 inches high.
Several couples and their kids in swimsuits were playing to their heart’s content in the water. We joined them. I watched as some younger parents nervously drove their babies away from the stones edges. Fast-moving water made standing there quite dangerous, for I saw a certain kid with curly hair missed a step and almost fell down. The air was full of shouts and laughter. I felt so lucky that I didn’t always need to fix my eyes on my son. Kevin could navigate his physical space with more confidence and care. But I was still terrified when I saw Kevin jump between the slippery rocks.
But with the passing of time, I soon relaxed, and we were both having fun, my kid splashing and kicking in the cool water, laughing heartily as I put my head under the cold running water.
Then seconds later, every fear I’d ever had rose to the surface. I lifted my head, turned and saw Kevin sitting between two stones, with the rushing water flowing around him. I could see he was shaking sometimes because of the water rapids. I yelled at him to get out. He yelled back something that I couldn’t hear.
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Suddenly he disappeared in front of my eyes.
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When Kevin returned to normal. I learned the woman was a nurse.
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Suddenly he disappeared in front of my eyes. Jumping to my feet, I let out screams, “Somebody help my son!” Hardly had I yelled when a woman rushed to the stones’ edge and jumped down. Following her with unsteady steps, I went down too, seeing her scooping up my son. His eyes remained closed. Having laid my son on his back, she checked his pulse and began to perform first aid. Suddenly, I saw my son opened his eyes. Indescribable delight filled my heart.
When Kevin returned to normal, I learned the woman was a nurse. “Your son just suffered a minor back injury. Don’t worry,” she comforted me. “It was you that saved my son,” I said, tears flooding down my cheeks. She held my hands, a big smile shining from her face, and said that anyone would have done the same. We had a very pleasant chat, and I knew her name was Lisa. Her random kindness indeed made a big difference and I would follow her example.
【写作指导】本文以度假为线索展开。作者带着只有六岁的儿子凯文去度假。从城里的家开车到一个遥远而平静的地方，我们看不到朋友或家人——这将是一个美好的、安全的、社交距离较远的一周。作者讲述了度假所发生的事情。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然，他消失在我的眼前。”可知，第一段可描写作者在戴安娜浴场发现儿子消失时，接下来向人们求助，营救儿子。
②由第二段首句内容“当凯文恢复正常。我知道那女人是个护士。”可知，第二段可描写儿子的受伤情况，接下来作者和这位护士的谈话。
2．续写线索：在戴安娜浴场玩耍——儿子消失——害怕——求助——得救——谈话
3．词汇激活(一个词汇要写出相近的表达)
行为类
安慰，使舒适：comfort /relieve
叫喊：yell /shout
实施，执行：perform /carry out
情绪类
高兴的：pleasant /pleasing/delighted
难以置信的：indescribable /unbelievable
【典型句式】
[句型1] Following her with unsteady steps, I went down too, seeing her scooping up my son. (句中现在分词作方式状语和伴随状语)
[句型2] It was you that saved my son.(句中使用强调句型)
[句型3] She held my hands, a big smile shining from her face, and said that anyone would have done the same.(句中使用并列谓语和宾语从句)
4．阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Adventures Through the Gorge
We put the raft in the calm,cold water.I looked down.The water was like a mirror.It was a foggy morning,so I could barely make out what was down the river.When we took our places in the raft,I was in the back with my dad right across from me.Our tour guide was telling us the basics of rafting,and it seemed she was patronizing us!I was terrified.Since I was in the back,I was sure I would be the one to fall out.But I have always been an optimist,so I thought it would turn out okay.
Then I looked up and saw a big,gray cloud.I looked down at the river,and it started to get louder and closer to us;soon raindrops pelted us.Once we moved out of the rain,the clouds faded away,and the sun was shining down on us for the rest of the day.As I looked around,I saw the monstrous,green trees standing over me.It was beautiful.
As we moved farther down the river,I heard the water flowing gracefully.When we moved deeper into the gorge,it got louder and louder.This was our first rapids.It seemed that we were approaching the rapids slowly,but we were at the top of the rapids in the blink of an eye.It felt like time frozen.I was so excited and nervous;I thought I was going to die.It was a bumpy ride down.Getting splashed with water,we raced up and down the rocks.There was not a patch of dry skin on us by the time we hit the bottom.
After we got through the rapids,I was so excited!Going down made me feel I could do anything.Our tour guide told us we were going to approach Category V rapids.It was more intense than the Category I rapids,and I got a little more nervous.It took us a little while to get to the rapids because we had to go down a long river.We were allowed to jump o the raft and swim down the river until we had to get back in.
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About three minutes later,the Category V was coming.
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After racing down all of the rapids,I was no longer scared.
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About three minutes later,the Category V was coming.The raft raced down the rapids.Water was splashing on the rocks,letting out louder noise.Screaming all the way down,I saw white water all over.I was so nervous because there were five big solitary rocks sticking out.If a little careless,we might hit one and get turned upside down.In the blink of an eye,we turned around the last huge rock,entering a small calm ride.When we settled at the bottom,I wanted to go back up and do it all again.
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After racing down all of the rapids,I was no longer scared.“What did you think about that Category V rapids ” my dad asked.“I was super nervous at first.But when we hit the bottom,I wanted to do it once more.” “Would you say you become more confident of yourself ” he continued.“Yes,I would say I become much more confident of myself.” I smiled.We walked towards our campsite.
【写作指导】本文以事件发展为线索展开。讲述了作者与爸爸游览三峡险境，一开始跟着导游坐木筏前进，慢慢地接近一级级的急流，直到五级，作者与爸爸对三峡的险峻感到非常震撼，这次体验让作者变得更加勇敢，自信，并且还想再次体验。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段内容“大约三分钟后，第五类急流要来了。”可知第一段续写的内应该是在到达第五类急流之后发生的事情。
②由第二段内容“在冲下所有的急流后，我不在害怕了。”可知第二段续写应该描述冲下急流后发生了什么，以及作者和爸爸对本次体验的感想。
2．续写线索：接近五级急流——在五级急流的体验和感受——冲过急流之后——体验的感悟，变得更加勇敢和自信。
3．词汇激活
行为类
①移位：turn around/rolling over/up and down
②考虑：think about/ consider/feel like
③接触：get to/touch/hit
情绪类
①信心：become confident about/ brave/courageous
②恐惧：frightened/fear/horror
【典型句式】
[句型1]. I was so nervous because there were five big solitary rocks sticking out. (由because引导原因状语从句。)
[句型2]. But when we hit the bottom, I wanted to do it once more. (由when引导时间状语从句。)
5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
This past summer, I joined my sister's family for their annual Adirondack vacation in a rented cottage on a lake, the same place my family has stayed since I was a little kid. There are plenty of activities to keep everyone busy: swimming, fishing and sand castle building on the beach.
By the third day, I had noticed that my ten-year-old niece, Jannie, had spent most of her time watching cable TV and browsing through the gift shops in town. Not exactly the wilderness experience I remembered from my youth. So, at dinner, I told Jannie we should hike to the top of the mountain across the lake the following morning, which was called Rocky Point because the peak is bare and rock-covered.
"Well." replied Jannie, "Tomorrow there are some shows on the Disney Channel, so I'm going to be pretty busy."
"When your mother and I used to come here when we were your age, we were too busy swimming and hiking up mountains."
"Sounds more like punishment than a vacation." She shrugged her shoulders. "Besides, I don't think I can walk that far."
When I said it only took a half-hour of steady walking to get to the top. She grumbled, "Fine, I'll go." I knew she was agreeing just to shut me up, but I would take anything I could get.
The next morning was a perfect day for a hike, with sunshine and clear skies. I got up early and took some sandwiches and water bottles, which I tucked into my backpack along with the bug spray and the camera.
Jannie came shuffling downstairs, sighed dramatically, rolled her eyes and announced in a very unenthusiastic, robot-like voice. "I'm ready to go hiking, Uncle David." Anyway, we climbed into my car and drove to the trailhead about ten minutes away. As we stood at the edge of the parking lot and looked down the shaded trail that led into the woods. "I am still not sure this is a good idea, but if you and Mom could do it, I can too, I guess."
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For the moment she was determined to start our journey.
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A while later we did it to the top.
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For the moment she was determined to start our journey. About 200 yards into the forest, the trail began to climb a steep slope. I pointed out some rarely-seen trees and flowering plants, which I explained were endangered species. She didn’t share my enthusiasm. She was thirsty, tired, sweaty and bored. I handed her the water bottle as she sat on a fallen log and took a break. “You know, I think we’re almost to the top,” I told her. “You already said that three times, and we’re not there yet.” she replied. She grumbled another complain as we continued on. She might not have been happy, but at least I was proud that she had the determination not to quit before we reached the top.
A while later we did make it to the top. Jannie looked up, noticing we were no longer under the trees. When she stopped, looked around and saw where we were, her jaw dropped, her eyes opened wide and she shouted: “Oh, I don’t believe it. We’re on top of the world. It’s awesome!” A refreshing breeze brushed the mountaintop, not a cloud was in the sky and miles and miles of trees and lakes spread out below us. We sat on a large rock and took it in the view, while eating our sandwiches and pointing out islands and roads and, of course, the cottage where we were staying. It had taken us almost an hour to make the climb, but it was worth it.
【写作指导】【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，故事讲述了作者鼓励带动10岁的甥女一起爬山，开始的时候外甥女有些不情愿，但当到达山顶时，一览众山小，有了成功的喜悦。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她一时决定开始我们的旅行。”可知，第一段可描写甥女叫苦叫累的抱怨和作者的鼓励和帮助。
②由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿，我们爬到了山顶。”可知，第二段可描写作者和甥女到达山顶后，一览众山小，成功的喜悦。
2．续写线索：带动爬山——抱怨——鼓舞——观景——惊喜
3．词汇激活
行为类
①带动爬山：climb a steep slope / climb a hill / go up the mountain
②.观景：look around / look at the vie/ view the scenery
情绪类
①. 抱怨：complain / grumble
②. 鼓舞：enthusiasm /inspiring /encouraging
③. 喜悦：happy/joyful/ surprised /awesome
【典型句式】
[句型1]. I pointed out some rarely-seen trees and flowering plants, which I explained were endangered species. (由which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[句型2]. We sat on a large rock and took it in the view, while eating our sandwiches and pointing out islands and roads and, of course, the cottage where we were staying.(while引导的时间状语从句的省略以及where引导的限制性定语从句)
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旅游见闻类故事
写作导图
一、观察顺序法
通过时间/空间顺序组织描写，增强画面逻辑性
The sun slowly peeked over the mountain ridge, painting the valley with golden strokes.
（太阳缓缓从山脊探出，用金色笔触为山谷上色）
解析：使用"peeked over"拟人动词，通过时间顺序展现日出过程
We followed the winding path upwards, passing wildflowers at ankle level, then chest-high shrubs, until finally reaching ancient pines towering above.
（我们沿蜿蜒小径上行，先见脚踝高的野花，再经齐胸灌木，最终抵达高耸的古松）
解析：空间顺序"ankle-chest-towering"形成垂直视觉层次
Morning fog lingered in the hollows, but by midday, every dewdrop on spiderwebs sparkled under direct sunlight.
（晨雾萦绕山谷，正午时分蛛网露珠在直射阳光下闪烁）
解析：时间词"morning-midday"构成自然过渡
From the cable car window, the cityscape shrank to miniature: matchbox cars crawled on ribbon roads, skyscrapers stood like colored pencils in a cup.
（缆车窗外，城市缩成微景：火柴盒汽车在缎带路上爬行，摩天楼如彩铅插笔筒）
解析：空间视角由近及远，比喻生动
二、感官描写法
调动五感让场景立体可感
The sea breeze carried saltiness that clung to our lips, while seagulls' cries mingled with waves' rhythmic applause.
（海风裹挟咸味粘住双唇，海鸥啼叫与浪涛节拍相和）
解析：味觉"盐味"+听觉"叫声/掌声"营造海滨氛围
Crunching through autumn leaves, we caught whiffs of woodsmoke from distant cottages, their chimneys sketching thin lines against lavender sky.
（踩着沙沙秋叶前行，远处木屋炊烟飘来柴火香，烟囱在淡紫天空勾画细线）
解析：听觉"crunching"+嗅觉"woodsmoke"激活多重感官
My fingers traced the temple's weathered stones, their cool roughness whispering stories of eight centuries.
（手指抚过寺庙风化石材，凉意粗糙感低语八百年沧桑）
解析：触觉描写赋予历史厚重感
The night market assaulted our senses: sizzling satay smoke stung eyes, chili aroma tickled nostrils, vendors' chants competed with pop music blaring from shops.
（夜市冲击感官：沙爹油烟刺痛眼睛，辣椒香挠痒鼻腔，摊贩叫卖与店铺流行乐争鸣）
解析：视觉/嗅觉/听觉交织呈现市井活力
三、情感融入法
通过环境描写反映人物心境
Each step on the cobblestone alley echoed my hesitation, shadows lengthening like doubts as sunset bled across medieval walls.
（卵石巷脚步声回应犹豫，夕阳染红古墙时阴影如疑虑蔓延）
解析：环境描写"阴影/夕阳"映射心理活动
Laughter bubbled from the plaza fountain, its merry splash a stark contrast to the heavy suitcase dragging at my arm.
（广场喷泉迸发欢快水声，与我臂上沉重行李箱形成鲜明对比）
解析：用欢快环境反衬疲惫心境
The abandoned lighthouse stood sentinel on the cliff, its cracked lens staring vacantly seaward, mirroring my sense of directionless.
（废弃灯塔如哨兵矗立悬崖，裂痕镜头茫然望海，映照我的迷失）
解析：拟物手法实现情景交融
Cherry petals snowed around us, their fleeting beauty tightening my throat - tomorrow we would part at this very station.
（樱瓣如雪飘落，转瞬即逝的美景扼住咽喉——明日我们将在同个车站分别）
解析：自然现象触发情感共鸣
四、语言提升技巧
运用修辞增强文字表现力
Twilight draped the savanna in indigo velvet, acacia trees silhouetted like nature's calligraphy.
（暮色为草原披上靛蓝天鹅绒，金合欢树影宛如自然书法）
解析：比喻"velvet/calligraphy"提升画面美感
The glacier groaned and cracked, ancient ice cubes clinking in nature's cocktail shaker.
（冰川呻吟开裂，古老冰块在自然调酒器中叮当作响）
解析：拟声词+新奇比喻创造听觉意象
Dawn tiptoed across rice terraces, gilding each watery step with liquid gold.
（黎明蹑足走过梯田，为每层水阶镀上流动金箔）
解析：拟人+"liquid gold"创新表达
Our campfire danced with orange tongues, swallowing twilight stars whole while birthing constellations in rising sparks.
（篝火舞动橘色火舌，吞噬暮星却在飞溅火星中孕育新星座）
解析：矛盾修辞法制造诗意张力
背精彩句子，让表达出彩
1．After hours of hiking, we finally reached the summit of the mountain and were rewarded with a breathtaking view.
经过几个小时的徒步旅行，我们终于到达了山顶，并欣赏到了壮丽的景色。
2．My brother and I harvested a meaningful exploration and it was really a brand new weekend.
我和哥哥收获了一次有意义的探索，这真是一个全新的周末。
3．Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life.
我们的迷路给我的冒险假期增添了一份特别的滋味，我将终生难忘。
4．Very tired as they were, they had to strengthen up to spend a night there.
虽然他们很累，但他们不得不鼓起勇气在那里过夜。
5．The first thing he did was to shelter from the freezing wind and snow.
他做的第一件事就是躲避寒风和雪。
6．She tried to make her way quietly through the underbrush, but she was nearly scared to death when she saw a large snake coil up before her.她试图悄悄地穿过灌木丛，但当她看到一条大蛇盘绕在她面前时，她几乎吓死了。
7．The only thing we could do was just sitting in the cold air and wondering how to get out of the forest.
我们唯一能做的就是坐在寒冷的空气中，想着如何走出森林。
8．Whether it's a weekend getaway or a month-long adventure, there's nothing like the excitement of planning a trip.
无论是周末度假还是为期一个月的冒险，没有什么比计划旅行更令人兴奋的了。
9．Despite feeling weak, Nicholas was generally in a good condition, and he was really happy as he was carried back to the ski resort to reunite with his family.
尽管感觉很虚弱，但尼古拉斯总的来说状态很好，当他被抬回滑雪场与家人团聚时，他真的很开心。
10.Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us．What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any difficult situation as long as we stay calm.
最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。 多么难忘的经历啊！ 事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。
11.Traveling to new destinations is an adventure that always fills me with excitement.前往新的目的地是一次冒险，总是让我兴奋不已。
12.Whether it's hiking through the mountains or surfing on the beach, every adventure brings its own unique challenges and rewards.
无论是在山上徒步旅行还是在海滩上冲浪，每一次冒险都会带来自己独特的挑战和回报。
13.Near the top, thick snow blanketed the path．Excitedly, the kids raced across the hard surface. 在山顶附近，厚厚的积雪覆盖了这条小路。孩子们兴奋地在坚硬的表面上奔跑。
14.When the sun disappeared behind heavy gray clouds, they suddenly felt lost, cold and hungry.当太阳消失在厚重的灰色云层后面时，他们突然感到迷茫、寒冷和饥饿。
15.Exhausted and bloodied，he emerged from the forest and bumped into a family of hikers，who called 911.他筋疲力尽，浑身是血，从森林里出来，撞见一群徒步旅行者，他们拨打了911。
高考真题演练
2017年11月浙江卷（和妈妈去旅行）
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother — loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids ” “What ! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections. If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
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1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
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Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.
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模拟演练
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kathy’s family vacation to the beach was usually the highlight of her summer. This year, however, her parents announced a new rule: no phones for the entire week.
“But my friends will be expecting updates about the trip,” Kathy complained. Kathy’s mom gave her a serious look. Unwillingly, Kathy handed her phone over and her mom locked it away.
The drive to the beach house took most of the day. As they turned off the highway onto countryback roads, the clouds darkened. Rain started to pour. “Even more beautiful in the rain,” her mother said. “What do you think, Kathy ” Kathy glared at her mom. “Beautiful,” she muttered.
That night after dinner, Kathy wandered into the kitchen, where her father was washing dishes. She gave her father a loving look and said in her sweetest voice, “Couldn’t I have my phone back, just for one second Just so I can tell everyone what an amazing time I’m having ”
“Can’t,” he said. “It’s not here. Remember ” Kathy was very annoyed. Having nothing better to do, she examined the dusty bookcase in the living room. The books looked as dull as the weather. On the top shelf, however, she spotted a puzzle. She took it, emptied the pieces on the table, and began to sort them.
After what seemed like a few minutes, she looked up. It was past ten o’clock. She had been working for almost two hours! She yawned. The puzzle was less than half done, but she was exhausted. So, she went to bed.
注意：
1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach.
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Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn’t thought of her cellphone for hours.
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2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Winter break was approaching, and all Scott wanted to do was go snowboarding. Unfortunately, Scott's parents had different plans. They had booked a weeklong tropical cruise (热带船游). Scott hated warm weather and asked if he could just stay at his best friend's house so he could snowboard every day at the local mountain. His parents didn't want to hear anything of it. He kept debating them about the topic, but they would not change their minds. Family time was important to them, and it was tradition that they spend winter break together.
The week of the cruise arrived, and Scott continued to mumble (咕哝) his complaints as he and his family left their house to head south. Scott's dad told him that he would only make the vacation worse for himself if he didn't change his attitude and open his mind to a new experience. Scott still couldn't stop thinking about all of the snow he was leaving behind.
When they arrived at the port to board the ship, Scott had a hard time admitting that he was actually impressed with the size of the ship. He had seen the brochures but seeing the ship in person was a whole different animal. Then he remembered that the brochure said something about a surfing pool. Maybe surfing would be somewhat like snowboarding. After all, it involved riding a board.
Scott climbed aboard the ship with his parents, and then they walked around to check everything out. He couldn't believe how fancy the accommodations were. The dining room looked like a royal hall; the game room had all of his favorite games; the ship's deck (甲板) had several different swimming pools for different purposes. Then Scott saw the surfing pool. It was incredible. It wasn't a big pool, but it had big waves, and the young man who was demonstrating how to ride the waves made it look like a ton of fun.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右;
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Scott asked his parents if he could try surfing.
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Gradually, Scott began to love the cruise.
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3．阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was August. We were on vacation, just my six-year-old son Kevin and I, for my husband was always busy. Having driven from our home in the city to a remote and peaceful place, we wouldn’t see friends or family—it would be a nice, safe, socially distanced week away. We had hiked about half mile to an attractive spot called Diana’s Baths, which afforded visitors an expanse of transparent water. The water flows and then falls off a series of big flat stones, making itself a small waterfall, about 7 inches high.
Several couples and their kids in swimsuits were playing to their heart’s content in the water. We joined them. I watched as some younger parents nervously drove their babies away from the stones edges. Fast-moving water made standing there quite dangerous, for I saw a certain kid with curly hair missed a step and almost fell down. The air was full of shouts and laughter. I felt so lucky that I didn’t always need to fix my eyes on my son. Kevin could navigate his physical space with more confidence and care. But I was still terrified when I saw Kevin jump between the slippery rocks.
But with the passing of time, I soon relaxed, and we were both having fun, my kid splashing and kicking in the cool water, laughing heartily as I put my head under the cold running water.
Then seconds later, every fear I’d ever had rose to the surface. I lifted my head, turned and saw Kevin sitting between two stones, with the rushing water flowing around him. I could see he was shaking sometimes because of the water rapids. I yelled at him to get out. He yelled back something that I couldn’t hear.
注意:
1． 续写词数应为150左右;
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly he disappeared in front of my eyes.
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When Kevin returned to normal. I learned the woman was a nurse.
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4．阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Adventures Through the Gorge
We put the raft in the calm,cold water.I looked down.The water was like a mirror.It was a foggy morning,so I could barely make out what was down the river.When we took our places in the raft,I was in the back with my dad right across from me.Our tour guide was telling us the basics of rafting,and it seemed she was patronizing us!I was terrified.Since I was in the back,I was sure I would be the one to fall out.But I have always been an optimist,so I thought it would turn out okay.
Then I looked up and saw a big,gray cloud.I looked down at the river,and it started to get louder and closer to us;soon raindrops pelted us.Once we moved out of the rain,the clouds faded away,and the sun was shining down on us for the rest of the day.As I looked around,I saw the monstrous,green trees standing over me.It was beautiful.
As we moved farther down the river,I heard the water flowing gracefully.When we moved deeper into the gorge,it got louder and louder.This was our first rapids.It seemed that we were approaching the rapids slowly,but we were at the top of the rapids in the blink of an eye.It felt like time frozen.I was so excited and nervous;I thought I was going to die.It was a bumpy ride down.Getting splashed with water,we raced up and down the rocks.There was not a patch of dry skin on us by the time we hit the bottom.
After we got through the rapids,I was so excited!Going down made me feel I could do anything.Our tour guide told us we were going to approach Category V rapids.It was more intense than the Category I rapids,and I got a little more nervous.It took us a little while to get to the rapids because we had to go down a long river.We were allowed to jump o the raft and swim down the river until we had to get back in.
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About three minutes later,the Category V was coming.
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After racing down all of the rapids,I was no longer scared.
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5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
This past summer, I joined my sister's family for their annual Adirondack vacation in a rented cottage on a lake, the same place my family has stayed since I was a little kid. There are plenty of activities to keep everyone busy: swimming, fishing and sand castle building on the beach.
By the third day, I had noticed that my ten-year-old niece, Jannie, had spent most of her time watching cable TV and browsing through the gift shops in town. Not exactly the wilderness experience I remembered from my youth. So, at dinner, I told Jannie we should hike to the top of the mountain across the lake the following morning, which was called Rocky Point because the peak is bare and rock-covered.
"Well." replied Jannie, "Tomorrow there are some shows on the Disney Channel, so I'm going to be pretty busy."
"When your mother and I used to come here when we were your age, we were too busy swimming and hiking up mountains."
"Sounds more like punishment than a vacation." She shrugged her shoulders. "Besides, I don't think I can walk that far."
When I said it only took a half-hour of steady walking to get to the top. She grumbled, "Fine, I'll go." I knew she was agreeing just to shut me up, but I would take anything I could get.
The next morning was a perfect day for a hike, with sunshine and clear skies. I got up early and took some sandwiches and water bottles, which I tucked into my backpack along with the bug spray and the camera.
Jannie came shuffling downstairs, sighed dramatically, rolled her eyes and announced in a very unenthusiastic, robot-like voice. "I'm ready to go hiking, Uncle David." Anyway, we climbed into my car and drove to the trailhead about ten minutes away. As we stood at the edge of the parking lot and looked down the shaded trail that led into the woods. "I am still not sure this is a good idea, but if you and Mom could do it, I can too, I guess."
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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For the moment she was determined to start our journey.
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A while later we did it to the top.
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