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家庭生活类故事
写作导图
一、人物外貌描写技巧
简明特征捕捉
Her mother's hands, rough from years of kneading dough, gently brushed flour from the countertop.
（母亲长年揉面的双手粗糙却温柔，轻轻拂去台面上的面粉。）
解析：用"rough"和"gentle"形成触觉对比，展现劳动女性特质。
Grandpa's faded plaid shirt hung loosely on his thin frame as he watered the tomatoes.
（爷爷褪色的格子衬衫松垮地挂在瘦削的身躯上，他正给番茄浇水。）
解析："faded"暗示节俭品质，"loosely"突出体型变化，建立视觉形象。
The toddler's chubby cheeks flushed pink like ripe peaches in the afternoon sun.
（幼儿圆润的脸颊在午后阳光下泛着桃子般的粉红。）
解析：比喻手法使婴儿形象生动可感，营造温馨氛围。
Dad's reading glasses perched precariously on his nose as he studied the instruction manual.
（父亲的阅读眼镜危险地架在鼻梁上，他正研究说明书。）
解析："perched precariously"幽默展现中年父亲形象，增加生活真实感。
二、家庭互动动作描写
日常细节刻画
Mom absentmindedly tucked a stray hair behind her ear while stirring the soup.
（母亲搅动汤羹时，心不在焉地将一缕散发别到耳后。）
解析："absentmindedly"自然流露母性特质，场景真实可信。
The siblings' feet tangled under the coffee table as they reached for the last cookie.
（兄妹俩抢夺最后一块饼干时，脚踝在茶几下方纠缠。）
解析：肢体接触细节生动展现孩童互动，充满生活气息。
Grandma's knitting needles clicked rhythmically like a heartbeat in the cozy living room.
（祖母的织针在温馨客厅里有节奏地咔嗒作响，宛如心跳。）
解析：比喻赋予日常声响情感温度，营造安宁氛围。
Dad's calloused thumb gently smoothed the crumpled math test on the kitchen table.
（父亲粗糙的拇指轻轻抚平餐桌上皱褶的数学试卷。）
解析：触觉细节（calloused）与动作（smoothed）形成情感张力。
三、家庭情感表达方式
非言语情感传递
The steaming mug of cocoa left by Mom's bedside spoke louder than any apology.
（床头冒着热气的可可，比任何道歉都更掷地有声。）
解析：借物抒情手法，巧妙展现含蓄的亲子关系。
Dad's newspaper rustled extra loudly whenever my report card was discussed.
（每当讨论成绩单时，父亲的报纸总会沙沙作响格外大声。）
解析：环境音效暗示心理活动，避免直白表述。
Little fingers timidly poking through the crack of Dad's home office door.
（怯生生的小手指从父亲书房门缝里探进来。）
解析：局部肢体描写传递孩童心理，画面感强烈。
The worn recipe card, splattered with oil stains, became our family's silent heirloom.
（那张油渍斑驳的旧食谱卡，成了家族无声的传家宝。）
解析：日常物品承载情感记忆，深化主题内涵。
四、家庭对话写作要点
自然生活化表达
"Your socks are inside out... again." Mom sighed, her voice muffled by the laundry pile.
（"袜子又穿反了..."母亲的声音淹没在洗衣堆后叹息道。）
解析：日常琐事+环境音效，构建真实生活场景。
"The car won't start," Dad announced, scratching his stubble. "Guess we're building a fort instead."
（"车发动不了，"父亲挠着胡茬宣布，"看来要搭堡垒了。"）
解析：突发状况与即兴应对，展现父亲幽默与应变力。
"Five more minutes!" came the chorus from under three separate blankets on movie night.
（电影之夜，三个毯子下异口同声传来："再看五分钟！"）
解析：集体回应+空间分布描写，强化家庭群像感。
"Your grandma used to say..." Mom began, her voice softening as she measured the flour.
（"你奶奶常说..."母亲量面粉时声音变得轻柔。）
解析：代际传承与动作同步，自然引出回忆片段。
高考真题演练
2021年6月新高考卷（母亲节的惊喜）
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
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Paragraph 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
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模拟演练
1．阅读下面文章，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整短文。
Since I was young, I always enjoyed cooking. Every night I would sit in the kitchen and watch my mother make dinner. I had a toy set of pots and pans, and would copy her actions at the table—pretending to pour in ingredients and mix them excitedly just as she did. On Sundays, my grandmother would make us a huge family dinner. A dish cooked from a charred chicken with flavored sauce enjoyed great popularity with us. Watching her in the kitchen was like watching an artist at work. She never needed a cookbook, never had to follow a recipe. Everything was second nature. I couldn't wait to learn to cook myself.
So it was no surprise when as an adult I decided to be a chef. I had worked in a number of kitchens over the years, but when I got the chance to be the head chef at a new restaurant, I could not have been more excited.
On the first night the restaurant opened, I proudly put my apron on and prepared for success. Soon, orders came in, and the kitchen was at full staff running in every direction. There were many waiters coming in and out, and cooks walking between stations. It was very exciting, but a bit stressful. There was so much to do and a lot of pressure to do it perfectly. It seemed like the crowd was not slowing down.
I was hurrying to gather ingredients from the shelves and fill the orders when there was a scream from the other side of the kitchen. Looking over, I saw one of the other cooks holding her hand in pain. She had burned her fingers on a pan. I ran over to help, and as we placed her hand under cold water, a puff of smoke started to rise out of the oven.
“Oh, no!” I screamed. I reached the oven just in time to open the door and see the charred remains of a roast. Placing my hand on my head, I thought the night couldn't get much worse. One of the waiters came into the kitchen, looking very worried. Wiping the sweat off his forehead, he said anxiously, “The guests are asking for the roast.”
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150词左右；
2． 请按如下格式作答。
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I stared at the charred roast, anxious to find a solution.
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Just then, one of the guests asked to speak to the chef.
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2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The easy way out isn't always easiest. I learned that lesson when I decided to treat my father to a special meal. I glanced through the cookbook and chose a menu which included homemade bread. Knowing the bread would take time, I started on it as soon as he left for work.
As I was not experienced in cooking, I thought if a dozen was good, two dozen would be better, so I doubled everything. As Dad loved oranges, I also opened a can of orange and poured it all into the bowl. Soon there was sticky dough (面团) covered with ugly yellowish marks. Realizing I had been defeated, I put the dough in the rubbish bin outside so I wouldn't have to face him laughing at my work.
I went on preparing the rest of the meal, and, when Dad got home, we sat down to Cornish chicken with rice. He tried to enjoy the meal but seemed disturbed. Twice he got up and went outside, saying he thought he heard a noise. The third time he left, I went to the windows to see what he was doing.
Looking out, I saw Dad standing about three feet from the rubbish bin, holding the lid up with a stick and looking into the container. When I came out of the house, he dropped the stick and explained that there was something alive in the rubbish bin. Picking up the stick again, he held the lid up enough for me to see. I felt cold. But I stepped closer and looked harder.
Without doubt it was my work. The hot sun had caused the dough to double in size and the. fermenting yeast (酵母) made the surface shake and sigh as though it were breathing. I had to admit what the "living thing" was and why it was there. I don't know who was more embarrassed by the whole thing, Dad or me.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My dad tapped me gently on the shoulder, and we went inside.
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At a party three months later, everyone wanted to try my bread.
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was young, the kitchen had an invisible“stop" sign put there by my mom. “No, you cannot enter here!” she always said to me. Well, I really don’t blame her as it is no place for kids.
I was just left outside in admiration, looking at what wonders the kitchen held. A few years passed by and I became very interested in food, both eating and preparing it. However, the kitchen was still out of bounds so I couldn’t experiment with cooking. But they couldn’t stop me forever now, could they
It was early morning. Mom had gone for grocery shopping and no one else was at home. Time to strike! I walked through the dining room and there was the kitchen in front of me!
I stepped inside and took in the sight in front of me—cabinets (储藏柜 ) lining a wall, the oven (炉子) occupying the central place of another wall, the dishes sparkling like diamonds. I had seen it from outside but this time it was up close. As I hadn’t had breakfast, I decided to begin my first experience as a cook by making an omelette (煎蛋) . Sure I had seen Mom do it, so how could it be hard
I searched the cabinets and finally found some eggs and onions. I knew the basics, so I began the work. I washed an onion first and then chopped it. Then came the egg. It took me two or three attempts to crack one open and into the bowl. I put the onion and some salt in the bowl too and mixed them. After that, I lighted the stove and put the frying pan on it and poured some oil in it... and poured some on the floor too, accidentally, of course! Till the pouring of the mixture into the pan, everything was going perfect—then I wondered what was used for turning the egg upside down in the pan.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Soon, I was running all over the kitchen, searching for the cooking spoon.
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While I was busy taking the burnt egg out in a plate, someone came up behind me.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My wife, Megan, and I went out to dinner with an old friend who we had not seen for a while. There had been some talk of COVID-19 on the news, but it was early in the outbreak and people were still going about their daily routines. Even though everyone in group felt perfectly, we took precautions (预防): we washed our hands with soap and used hand sanitizer (洗手液), did not share food, and had no significantly close contact.
A few days later, our friend called and told us that she had tested positive for the coronavirus. She had felt some mild symptoms for a day or so after that dinner and was able to be tested because she is a doctor. On the following day, I started to feel a little tired and my head was a bit cloudy. I decided to stay in the master bedroom away from the rest of my family. The next morning, I woke up with a 39-degree fever. That was when we realized that I might have caught the virus from our friend.
At once, Megan called our state’s coronavirus hotline, who then called in our primary care doctor and the head of our local hospital system’s coronavirus team. We explained that we had been in contact with someone who had been tested positive, and I was having symptoms. They quickly approved me to receive a test at an urgent care center located 5 kilometer’s drive from my house. The result made my heart sink-I was also tested positive, and the local hospital didn’t have the facilities for my disease. As a mild case, I was recommended to stay home and quarantine (隔离) myself.
Following the doctor’s advice, Megan and I quarantined ourselves and our kids. With my symptoms developing, I started isolation in the bedroom, and the only interaction I had with Megan was when she brought in food. She slept on a small couch in our home office away from the kids’ rooms. She also minimized her contact with our kids in case she was carrying the virus.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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We decided to call everyone we had contacted over the course of the past week.
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Though worried about the seriousness of the virus, I knew I had to be brave
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5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a misty morning in July, Clay and Acaimie arrived at the base of Mount Liamuiga, ready for their first honeymoon climb. They had married just five days earlier back home in Indiana, the United States.
They had their apparent differences. Acaimie had always been the worrier. Clay, on the other hand, was an optimist—always certain that things would turn out just fine. So it was Clay who wanted to take a day of their honeymoon and climb Mount Liamuiga, which is also a dead volcano—a popular destination for vacationers looking for adventure.
The couple, dressed in white T-shirts and sneakers, arrived for their journey in a rental car expecting to explore. When arriving, they found an empty dirt parking lot with just a small sign marking the beginning of the track. They made their way up anyway.
It took them nearly three hours to reach the peak, but the view made it all worthwhile. Though worn-out, they couldn't have been happier as they took a few selfies(自拍)with their cellphones, and walked around the edge of the volcano.
That's when Clay saw it: a small track, half-hidden beneath plant life, that led into the volcano's crater(火山口). A series of holes had been drilled into the rocks, with ropes that led down. For Clay, the sight was incredibly inviting. It felt like a secret entrance to a mysterious paradise(天堂，乐园). Acaimie was less enthusiastic. The track was steep, and she was afraid of heights, but she bravely followed Clay's lead. After just a few minutes of going downwards, though, she'd had enough. She told her husband she'd wait on the rocks just off the track while he went exploring. “Just be quick,” she said as she watched him set off on the rough path, zigzagging(曲折前进)while grasping the rope.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；
A few minutes later, she heard a noise of something rolling downhill and a cry for help from deep within the crater.
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There was nobody when they reached the top, but fortunately she found a signal on her cellphone.
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6.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Where’s the rest of my paper ” thundered an angry Papa Bear, storming into the living room. It didn’t take him long to find Brother Bear and the sports section.
“I just borrowed it.“ said Brother. Papa snatched it up and plumped down in his easy chair. Brother wandered into the kitchen looking for sympathy from Mama Bear. “Gee,” he said, “what’s eating him ” “Your father looks forward to his evening paper,” Mama said, “and he has a perfect right to be annoyed when half of it is missing — and furthermore, thank you not to refer to your father as him!”
She stomped out of the kitchen.
“Why not He’s a him, isn’t he Gosh,” said Brother, “what’s eating her ”
What was “eating” Mama was Sister Bear. Sister had been on the phone with Lizy Bruin for almost an hour.
“But Mama!” she protested when she was told to say good-bye.
“Don’t But Mama’ me!“ said Mama Bear. “This is not your private phone. You’ve had all day to talk to Lizy at school, and you’ll have all day to talk to her tomorrow. So hang up that phone now!”
Sister did as she was told.
“Phew!” breathed Brother as he fell into the seat beside Cousin Fred on the school bus.
“Tough morning ” asked Fred.
“You better believe it!” said Sister, taking the seat Lizzy had saved for her.
The four compared notes on the way to school. The children agreed that while there was no doubt that their parents loved them, they were a little difficult to get along with sometimes. They nagged (唠叨); they said no a lot; and they never wanted kids to have any fun.
“Hey,” said Brother as they got off the bus, “what are we going to do for the Parents Night Talent Show ” “Don’t know,” said Lizzy. “Let’s think about it”
When the four searched their brains, Brother snapped his fingers and said, “I’ve got it! Remember what we were talking about just now ” “Sure,” said Fred. “We were saying how grownups can be a big pain.”
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“Well,” said Brother, “let’s put on a play about that, and call it...”
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Despite the difficulties in the preparation, especially costumes, their big day came finally.
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7.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
LESSONS LEARNED OUTSIDE THE CLASSROOM
Mr. Gray was my history teacher in tenth grade. I couldn’t tell what kind of history he taught for two reasons: one, I never liked history, and two, my body was in class, but my mind wasn’t. Mr. Gray wasn’t the teacher who offered retakes (补考) on tests; he did so much more for me than that. He offered me a pair of ears and a shoulder to cry on.
Before Mr. Gray came along, one major event was taking place in my life. My mom told me she wanted to divorce my dad. Why then I didn’t understand. I barricaded (筑起壁垒) myself in my basement bedroom, listening to angry music and sleeping. I fell into a depression and my grades were falling. Then there was Mr. Gray.
I sat against a brick wall outside the library, knees pulled into my chest, head down, surrounded by my noisy friends that I was slowly distancing myself from, when I heard his voice: “Ever feel like you’re a fire hydrant (消防栓) and every dog in the neighborhood is stopping by to visit you ” I picked my head up and then I saw Mr. Gray.
I had heard him use this line in the classroom a few times before, when it looked like a kid was having a bad day. It usually aroused a laugh and ended there. This time was different though — he was waiting for an answer. Next thing I knew I was following him into the library.
We sat amongst the shelves of the mostly empty library for the rest of lunchtime. I don’t remember much about that first conversation other than the unconditional promise he made me of lending a pair of ears and a shoulder to cry on. What made him such a special teacher was that he saw that I was struggling and reached out to me outside of the classroom.
注意：
1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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However, that didn’t change our classroom relationship.
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Many lunchtime library conversations followed throughout the school year.
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8.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lucy was the only child in her family. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she gave a sigh and had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles ”
“Oh, yes, but I don’t have money on me,” she replied.
“That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man. “Come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, the smell so attractive. As she was eating, Lucy cried silently.
“What is it ” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing. Actually, I was just touched by your kindness!” said Lucy as she wiped her tears.” Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you Have you expressed your gratitude to her ”
Lucy sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered her mother’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why didn’t I think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful. Why haven’t I thanked my mum for what she has done for me ”
On the way home, Lucy made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
注意:
1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2． 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
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Approaching the doorway,
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A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.
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9.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was an early winter morning. Joan was sleeping soundly when the phone rang in the living room. She rolled over and glanced at the clock on the wall—it was already nine o’clock.Every weekend morning, her mother had to work part-time in the cafe. Although Joan was still sleepy, she knew she had to get up. After all, she didn’t expect her brother Mike, who was sleeping like a log, to hear the phone. She quietly went over to the living room. When she picked up the receiver, on the other end came the warmhearted greetings,“Good morning, my Dear!”Recognizing the voice from her father, Joan was immediately surrounded by a sense of joy and the sleepiness swept away.
Joan’s father was a seaman, who rarely came back. Working on the sea was really hard.Born in a not-rich family, Joan and Mike felt the stress of life but they were happy to enjoy the family atmosphere. At school, they were straight-A students throughout the academic career and actively involved in school activities. They became the pride of the school and the envy of the students.
“Good morning, Dad, what’s up ”Joan said in an easy tone.“I have been very nice recently, my baby. Today is your mother’s birthday, and I have ordered her a cake online and it should come to the house in one and half an hour. Do remember to take the cake.”
Hearing her father’s words, Joan felt a little ashamed. How she could forget Mum’s birthday!She took a glance at the dirty clothes piled on the sofa and the oily floor that hadn’t been mopped(拖地) for a few days—There was two hours before her mother came back. She calculated they had enough time to prepare a surprise for Mum.
Thinking of this, she felt full of excitement.“Well, Dad, now I’m going to wake Mike up.We will give Mum a surprise !”
Joan hung up the phone with Dad, and hurriedly went to Mike’s room to share him her Big Cleaning plan. After listening to Joan, Mike readily accepted her idea.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Big Cleaning plan began.
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With the cake placed on the table, Mum came in.
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10.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I live in a small but lovely neighborhood. Our house is neither large nor luxurious, but it has a fairly big garden. My father loves his garden. He planted some seeds in it and took good care of the plants, watering them, applying fertilizer, weeding and getting rid of bugs. He was never tired of doing all that stuff. But at that time, I didn’t understand why working in the dirt excited him so much.
Unfortunately, in the summer vacation before senior high school, my father was seriously injured in an accident. He had to stay in bed for a while. My mother had several business trips, so she couldn’t take care of the garden. I didn’t want my father to worry. I said that I would take care of his garden until he recovered. I assumed that the little plants would continue to grow as long as they had water, and luckily it rained fairly often, so I didn’t think much about the garden.
One Saturday morning, my father said to me, “Christine, the vegetables should be about ready to be picked. Let’s have a salad today!” I went out to the garden and was upset to see that many of the lettuce (生菜) leaves and carrots had been half eaten by bugs. There were hundreds of bugs all over them!
I panicked for a moment but then I quietly went to the nearest supermarket to buy some vegetables. When I was making the salad, my mother came home and saw the bag from the supermarket in the kitchen. I was embarrassed and admitted, “Dad would like a salad, but the garden is a disaster. I don’t want to disappoint him, so I went to the store and bought some vegetables.” My mother smiled, saying, “Honey, you know what is the right thing to do.”
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My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to him.
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Feeling guilty, I decided to do the right thing.
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11.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Late one evening, my constant yawns(呵欠)convinced me to retire for the night. I put on a comfortable cotton gown, turned the lights low, and crawled into bed between the cool but comfortable sheets. To ensure a good night’s rest, I called out towards the kitchen to my smart speaker, “Alexa, play sounds to sleep by.” As I gathered my cozy sheet up under my chin, I felt at peace with my cat Bella snuggled up(依偎)to me.
During the night, a heavy object landed on my stomach, causing me to scream and sit up, only to discover that it was Bella. She had a habit of waking me up to get her a snack, but the hands on the clock said 3:00 am, and I was annoyed that she had interrupted a happy dream. I fell back against the pillow and promised I’d feed her in the morning. That wasn’t acceptable to her, so she continued to walk on top of me while pressing her paws into my body.
Because that proved to be unsuccessful, she jumped over to the bedside table and deliberately used her paw to knock things on the floor, one at a time, to keep me from going back to sleep. Her efforts paid off as I looked over in the dark room and knew the smug(沾沾自喜的)look on her face conveyed a serious demand. “Get up, human. I’m ready for my nightly treat.”
Knowing she would keep disturbing me until she got her snack, I took a few minutes to focus my eyes and heard what sounded like running water or someone pressure-washing a wall. I couldn’t imagine our apartment staff doing maintenance in the middle of the night, so I assumed I had turned off the water tap. I would regret the large water bill it would bring about, so I unwillingly got up and went into the kitchen. I found nothing out of the ordinary so I continued to search with Bella following me. I checked the bathroom, where I found no running water.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Since the sound was still evident, I realized the seriousness of the situation.
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I didn’t see water on the wall, so I thought it wasn’t an emergency.
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12.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Jordi! Wake up!” Dad’s voice calls from the hallway, and I sit up quickly. Today is the day! The day that I will finally be a casteller —a castle builder.
My city is hosting today’s competition. Never before have I been part of the tower. It is so high. And it sometimes falls. I was hesitant to be up there. Today, for the first time in a competition, I will help build the tower !
In town, I see that the center of the square is already packed with people. While I wait for our turn to compete, my friend Tomeu comes to stand with me.“What if I’m not ready for this, Tomeu ” I ask. Tomeu’s dark eyes sparkle as he smiles at me. “We are never ready, Jordi. None of us who compete knows for sure how it will go.” He gestures toward the tower going up in front of us. “Just like these people,you must have faith in the others. You must trust those below who lift you up, and you must trust yourself.” Tomeu pats me on the shoulder. “Have focus. Have faith.”
I nod to show that I understand. I will do my best to follow his suggestions. Soon,too soon,it is our turn.
Dad and several strongest men make the base for our tower. Four smaller men create a strong second level. Our tower is growing taller and taller. I watch as Mom climbs nimbly(敏捷地)up. She and my aunt form the fifth level.
“Then suddenly it is my turn. Tomeu and I will make up the sixth level. Each of the castellers wears a waist belt, and I grip the belts with my bare toes as I climb up. I pass the first two levels without difficulty,but as I go higher,the tower feels less steady. By the time I reach the fifth level,nerves make my hands sweat and my knees tremble,for I am very high off the ground.
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2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I place my foot into Mom’s waist belt and try to stand, but it slips off.
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Tomeu and I grasp each other’s arms, and our tower is complete.
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13.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
This past summer, my family went on our annual vacation in a cottage on a lake. There were various activities to keep everyone busy: swimming, fishing and building sand castle on the beach. In the evenings, we gathered on the beach, having great fun.
However, by the third day of our vacation, I noticed my sister, Jane, spent most of her time watching videos and looking through online shops indoors. She was so addicted to her cell phone! Over dinner, I told Jane we would hike to the top of the mountain across the lake the following morning. I stared at her, “Put your phone away and enjoy the scenery. It's really amazing. ”
“Well,” Jane shrugged (耸) her shoulders and answered unwillingly, “there are some bargains tomorrow in several online shops, so I'll not be available.”
“Come out to enjoy the fresh air and many views. Hiking is fun!”
“Sounds more like punishment than a vacation,” she didn't look up from her soup and mumbled (嘟囔), “I cannot walk that far. ”
When I said it only took half an hour of steady walking to climb to the top, she nodded, “OK, I'll go.”
The next morning was perfect for a hike, with sunny clear skies and gentle winds. I got up early and packed some sandwiches and bottles of water into my backpack along with the camera. Jane came slowly downstairs, and announced in a very unenthusiastic voice, “I'm ready to go, Jim.”
Anyway, we stepped out of our cottage and quite a different view unfolded before our eyes. Against the blue skies, a rough path wound to the top of the mountain across the lake with wild flowers and grass on both sides. The sunlight brightened on the glassy surface of the lake. We began from the path. “I'm still wondering if this is a good idea, but if you could do it, I could also do.” She complained, frowning.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She followed me, her mind wandering.
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Reaching the top, Jane widened her eyes, shouting, “How awesome!”
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14.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
As mountains go,1,642-foot Squaw Peak isn’t particularly grand. But its inviting views of western Massachusetts have tricked hikers into becoming self-satisfied with its steep,slippery cliffs(悬崖) , resulting in countless injuries and even deaths.
Henry Grant, a week shy of starting his freshman year at Ithaca College, respected Squaw Peak’s record.Therefore, he stayed a good ten feet from the edge while waiting for his mother to catch up to him one day. He watched 15 or so other hikers enjoy the vista; one hiker, around 60 and dressed in pink, was peeking over the lip of the cliff with her husband.
When Grant’s mother rejoined him, the two turned to continue on their way. Suddenly,he heard a heavy dull sound, he told the Cornell Daily Sun. Then he heard something chilling: “Paula! Paula!” a man yelled wildly. Grant wheeled around. The woman in pink was no-where to be seen. She'd fallen off the side of the mountain.
Several hikers immediately started looking for her, but their view was blocked by trees.Grant told his mother,“I hate to say this, but they’re probably going to find a body.”
Uncertain they could help, Grant and his mother headed down the trail. But when he saw hikers still searching, he decided to lend a hand. “My young dumb brain was like, ‘I can do it,’” he says.After assuring his mother that he would be safe, he made a long and difficult journey alone, hoping he wasn’t too late.
After 15 minutes of scrambling over the large rock, pushing past prickly(多刺的)brush,and slipping down patches of loose dirt, Grant spotted a figure about 25 feet above him. She was dressed in pink and crumpled in a kneeling position on a small rocky.
The woman had fallen about 75 feet.
Unexpectedly,she was alive.
“Paula!” Grant shouted.“Paula.Is that you ”
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1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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The woman barely responded.
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About 45 minutes later, first responders arrived on the top.
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15.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was turning ten in the summer of 1959. On a warm evening while at the dinner table, my mother announced we were taking a trip to Niagara Falls when summer vacation started so that we could celebrate my birthday there.
It all sounded incredibly good until Mom said we would be driving to Canada. As usual, my father would do all the driving while my mother managed the directions.
I looked over at my sister,Marlene,who was three years younger than me and rolled my eyes. She giggled and did the same. It wasn’t that I didn’t like car rides - but my Dad usually took a wrong turn along the way and Mom would complain. “You were supposed to turn right according to the map like I told you, but you made a left.” My Dad would get annoyed and growl. My mother would end the conversation with “I can’t believe we’re arguing over this.” Later, they’d apologize and make up until the next wrong turn.
Driving in the car also meant I’d share the back seat with my sister, which was not part of what I considered a pleasant journey.
“Hey, can we take a plane there instead ” I asked between mouthfuls of hamburger and Frenchfries. Sometimes, when Dad had a day off from work, we would drive out to Idlewild Airport to watch the planes take off and land. I always hoped one day Pd get to sit in my own seat on one of those planes. It would be cool to get high up and then stick my head out a window. Windows on planes do open, don’t they
“Sorry honey, maybe next time,” my mother replied as she and my father exchanged glances. I turned to my sister, hoping she’d say she wanted to get on a plane, but she stuck her tongue out at me and giggled.
Didn’t they get it I was in desperate need of a plane ride, and I needed something cool to talk about with my friends when we got home. “Sitting in the back seat of the car sucks,” I blurted out.
“Jay!” My mother shouted. “Watch your mouth!”
“Ok, sorry, but I really wanted to go by plane.”
“This conversation’s over.” My father growled. “If you’re finished eating, go to your room.”
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2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We left two days later on Saturday morning in our car.
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l was told to wait until we checked in our bags at the airport.
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家庭生活类故事
写作导图
一、人物外貌描写技巧
简明特征捕捉
Her mother's hands, rough from years of kneading dough, gently brushed flour from the countertop.
（母亲长年揉面的双手粗糙却温柔，轻轻拂去台面上的面粉。）
解析：用"rough"和"gentle"形成触觉对比，展现劳动女性特质。
Grandpa's faded plaid shirt hung loosely on his thin frame as he watered the tomatoes.
（爷爷褪色的格子衬衫松垮地挂在瘦削的身躯上，他正给番茄浇水。）
解析："faded"暗示节俭品质，"loosely"突出体型变化，建立视觉形象。
The toddler's chubby cheeks flushed pink like ripe peaches in the afternoon sun.
（幼儿圆润的脸颊在午后阳光下泛着桃子般的粉红。）
解析：比喻手法使婴儿形象生动可感，营造温馨氛围。
Dad's reading glasses perched precariously on his nose as he studied the instruction manual.
（父亲的阅读眼镜危险地架在鼻梁上，他正研究说明书。）
解析："perched precariously"幽默展现中年父亲形象，增加生活真实感。
二、家庭互动动作描写
日常细节刻画
Mom absentmindedly tucked a stray hair behind her ear while stirring the soup.
（母亲搅动汤羹时，心不在焉地将一缕散发别到耳后。）
解析："absentmindedly"自然流露母性特质，场景真实可信。
The siblings' feet tangled under the coffee table as they reached for the last cookie.
（兄妹俩抢夺最后一块饼干时，脚踝在茶几下方纠缠。）
解析：肢体接触细节生动展现孩童互动，充满生活气息。
Grandma's knitting needles clicked rhythmically like a heartbeat in the cozy living room.
（祖母的织针在温馨客厅里有节奏地咔嗒作响，宛如心跳。）
解析：比喻赋予日常声响情感温度，营造安宁氛围。
Dad's calloused thumb gently smoothed the crumpled math test on the kitchen table.
（父亲粗糙的拇指轻轻抚平餐桌上皱褶的数学试卷。）
解析：触觉细节（calloused）与动作（smoothed）形成情感张力。
三、家庭情感表达方式
非言语情感传递
The steaming mug of cocoa left by Mom's bedside spoke louder than any apology.
（床头冒着热气的可可，比任何道歉都更掷地有声。）
解析：借物抒情手法，巧妙展现含蓄的亲子关系。
Dad's newspaper rustled extra loudly whenever my report card was discussed.
（每当讨论成绩单时，父亲的报纸总会沙沙作响格外大声。）
解析：环境音效暗示心理活动，避免直白表述。
Little fingers timidly poking through the crack of Dad's home office door.
（怯生生的小手指从父亲书房门缝里探进来。）
解析：局部肢体描写传递孩童心理，画面感强烈。
The worn recipe card, splattered with oil stains, became our family's silent heirloom.
（那张油渍斑驳的旧食谱卡，成了家族无声的传家宝。）
解析：日常物品承载情感记忆，深化主题内涵。
四、家庭对话写作要点
自然生活化表达
"Your socks are inside out... again." Mom sighed, her voice muffled by the laundry pile.
（"袜子又穿反了..."母亲的声音淹没在洗衣堆后叹息道。）
解析：日常琐事+环境音效，构建真实生活场景。
"The car won't start," Dad announced, scratching his stubble. "Guess we're building a fort instead."
（"车发动不了，"父亲挠着胡茬宣布，"看来要搭堡垒了。"）
解析：突发状况与即兴应对，展现父亲幽默与应变力。
"Five more minutes!" came the chorus from under three separate blankets on movie night.
（电影之夜，三个毯子下异口同声传来："再看五分钟！"）
解析：集体回应+空间分布描写，强化家庭群像感。
"Your grandma used to say..." Mom began, her voice softening as she measured the flour.
（"你奶奶常说..."母亲量面粉时声音变得轻柔。）
解析：代际传承与动作同步，自然引出回忆片段。
高考真题演练
2021年6月新高考卷（母亲节的惊喜）
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
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1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
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Paragraph 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
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【范文1】
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. “Don’t panic!” he handed each one a wet towel, helping them clean the mess quickly. After that, Jeff stammered out their plan, his face flushing. However, Father laughed, “Sounds great! I can teach you to cook.” At this, Jenna and Jef almost jumped to their feet, joy in eyes. Under his careful guidance, it didn’t take long before the French toast and chicken porridge were ready. Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Meeting their smiling eyes, Mother felt confused until they presented the breakfast and said “Happy Mother’s Day”. Mother gave them a tight hug, “Unbelievable! You can cook! It’s the biggest surprise I have received.” Her face lit up with happiness. “They have known how to take care of others.” Father said in response to her excitement, winking at Jenna and Jef. They couldn’t help giggling. It was a secret only shared between them.
【范文2】
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their disappointed faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some porridge. Then he went back to bed quietly. The twins prepared the breakfast tray and added a card they had made.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They hugged her and shouted, “Happy Mother’s Day, dear Mummy!” Mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast. She shook Father who was pretending to sleep. He faked astonishment when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father’s eye and they smiled at each other secretly.
模拟演练
1．阅读下面文章，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整短文。
Since I was young, I always enjoyed cooking. Every night I would sit in the kitchen and watch my mother make dinner. I had a toy set of pots and pans, and would copy her actions at the table—pretending to pour in ingredients and mix them excitedly just as she did. On Sundays, my grandmother would make us a huge family dinner. A dish cooked from a charred chicken with flavored sauce enjoyed great popularity with us. Watching her in the kitchen was like watching an artist at work. She never needed a cookbook, never had to follow a recipe. Everything was second nature. I couldn't wait to learn to cook myself.
So it was no surprise when as an adult I decided to be a chef. I had worked in a number of kitchens over the years, but when I got the chance to be the head chef at a new restaurant, I could not have been more excited.
On the first night the restaurant opened, I proudly put my apron on and prepared for success. Soon, orders came in, and the kitchen was at full staff running in every direction. There were many waiters coming in and out, and cooks walking between stations. It was very exciting, but a bit stressful. There was so much to do and a lot of pressure to do it perfectly. It seemed like the crowd was not slowing down.
I was hurrying to gather ingredients from the shelves and fill the orders when there was a scream from the other side of the kitchen. Looking over, I saw one of the other cooks holding her hand in pain. She had burned her fingers on a pan. I ran over to help, and as we placed her hand under cold water, a puff of smoke started to rise out of the oven.
“Oh, no!” I screamed. I reached the oven just in time to open the door and see the charred remains of a roast. Placing my hand on my head, I thought the night couldn't get much worse. One of the waiters came into the kitchen, looking very worried. Wiping the sweat off his forehead, he said anxiously, “The guests are asking for the roast.”
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150词左右；
2． 请按如下格式作答。
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I stared at the charred roast, anxious to find a solution.
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Just then, one of the guests asked to speak to the chef.
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【参考范文】
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I stared at the charred roast, anxious to find a solution. Suddenly, its smell dragged me back to a family dinner, when my grandmother cooked a delicious dish from a charred chicken. Letting out an excited scream, I cooked like an artist just the way she did. I mixed vinegar with sugar to make a kind of sauce and then poured it onto the roast. Finally, the waiter served a flavored roast to the guests. “What if the guests don’t like the dish ” I thought to myself.
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Just then, one of the guests asked to speak to the chef. Never before in my life had I sunk into such a nervous situation. I followed the waiter, my heart in my mouth. To my surprise, the guest stood up and held my hands. “Thanks for bringing the taste of hometown back to me,” she said in excitement. Beyond my expectation, the first night as the head chef turned out to be a great success. With a brand-new outlook, I returned to the kitchen and continued to brighten people’s lives with delicious food.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者从小喜欢烹饪，长大后成为了一名主厨，结果某天一名厨师将肉烤焦了，作者急中生智将这道菜改成了用烤鸡做了一道美味的菜，并且得到了顾客的认可。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我盯着烧焦的烤肉，急于找到解决办法。”可知，第一段可描写作者想出的办法是什么以及内心活动。
②由第二段首句内容“就在这时，一位客人要求和厨师说话。”可知，第二段可描写顾客对这道菜的反应。
2．续写线索：找到解决办法——改变菜肴——顾客要求和厨师说话——作者紧张——顾客感谢
3．词汇激活
行为类
发出：let out/give out
喜欢：like/enjoy
站起来：stand up/rise
情绪类
紧张：nervous/tense
美味：delicious/tasty
【典型句式】
[句式1] Letting out an excited scream, I cooked like an artist just the way she did. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[句式2] Never before in my life had I sunk into such a nervous situation. (运用了部分倒装)
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The easy way out isn't always easiest. I learned that lesson when I decided to treat my father to a special meal. I glanced through the cookbook and chose a menu which included homemade bread. Knowing the bread would take time, I started on it as soon as he left for work.
As I was not experienced in cooking, I thought if a dozen was good, two dozen would be better, so I doubled everything. As Dad loved oranges, I also opened a can of orange and poured it all into the bowl. Soon there was sticky dough (面团) covered with ugly yellowish marks. Realizing I had been defeated, I put the dough in the rubbish bin outside so I wouldn't have to face him laughing at my work.
I went on preparing the rest of the meal, and, when Dad got home, we sat down to Cornish chicken with rice. He tried to enjoy the meal but seemed disturbed. Twice he got up and went outside, saying he thought he heard a noise. The third time he left, I went to the windows to see what he was doing.
Looking out, I saw Dad standing about three feet from the rubbish bin, holding the lid up with a stick and looking into the container. When I came out of the house, he dropped the stick and explained that there was something alive in the rubbish bin. Picking up the stick again, he held the lid up enough for me to see. I felt cold. But I stepped closer and looked harder.
Without doubt it was my work. The hot sun had caused the dough to double in size and the. fermenting yeast (酵母) made the surface shake and sigh as though it were breathing. I had to admit what the "living thing" was and why it was there. I don't know who was more embarrassed by the whole thing, Dad or me.
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My dad tapped me gently on the shoulder, and we went inside.
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My dad tapped me gently on the shoulder, and we went inside. Sitting back to our Cornish chicken, Dad, smilingly, updated me on recent events at his work without a mere mention of the crazy dough wildly dancing outside, which served wonderfully as a gentle embarrassment reliever. However, while doing the dishes after dinner, Dad said to me with firmness in his voice, "You don't have to be an expert to make bread, but you do have to do your research before taking actions. There is no such thing as an easy way out." And that was the starting point of my journey with making the perfect bread.
At a party three months later, everyone wanted to try my bread. The rest of the night slipped away, filled with inquiries about my secret recipe. Yet, hardly was there a different answer other than, "Beauty comes from balance and patience." To be frank, that was exactly what I'd learnt during my numerous experiments. An amazing loaf of bread required suitable balance of ingredients to mix as well as enormous patience of waiting for the dough to rise. Countless were my failures to make tasty bread, every single moment of it was cherished. Along the journey, I've developed from the man whose dough sighs in a dustbin to the man whose bread makes your taste but dance.
【写作指导】本文以时间为顺序，以第一人称“我”的叙事角度，讲述了我想要为父亲制作特殊的一餐——自制面包。但由于缺乏提前准备和经验耐心，计划宣告失败，我把酵母面团丢进了垃圾桶，以免父亲知道后笑话我。谁知道酵母面团在阳光下持续发酵，表面震动和“呼吸”的模样像极了垃圾桶里有活物，以至于父亲在吃饭时一直惴惴不安，三番五次想要探寻究竟，最终我让真相大白后，场面有些尴尬。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“爸爸轻轻地拍了拍我的肩膀，我们走了进去。”可知，第一段可讲述爸爸缓解尴尬，鼓励或者教导我的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“三个月后的一次聚会上，每个人都想尝尝我的面包。”可知，第二段可描写我成功的过程或喜悦，讲述这一探索过程的感悟和经验。
2．续写线索：轻拍肩膀——缓解尴尬——教导鼓励——制作成功——快乐喜悦——经验感悟
3．词汇激活
行为类
①教导我：say to me/guide me/educate me/instruct me
②(时光)流逝：slip away/roll around/go by/pass/elapse
③充满，装满：be filled with/be full of
情绪类
①惊讶：amazed/surprised/shocked
②尴尬：awkward/with embarrassment/with discomfiture
【典型句式】
[句式1] Sitting back to our Cornish chicken, Dad, smilingly, updated me on recent events at his work without a mere mention of the crazy dough wildly dancing outside, which served wonderfully as a gentle embarrassment reliever.(综合运用句首现在分词作状语，句中副词作状语，句末非限制性定语从句)
[句式2] Yet, hardly was there a different answer other than, "Beauty comes from balance and patience."(运用了倒装句型)
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was young, the kitchen had an invisible“stop" sign put there by my mom. “No, you cannot enter here!” she always said to me. Well, I really don’t blame her as it is no place for kids.
I was just left outside in admiration, looking at what wonders the kitchen held. A few years passed by and I became very interested in food, both eating and preparing it. However, the kitchen was still out of bounds so I couldn’t experiment with cooking. But they couldn’t stop me forever now, could they
It was early morning. Mom had gone for grocery shopping and no one else was at home. Time to strike! I walked through the dining room and there was the kitchen in front of me!
I stepped inside and took in the sight in front of me—cabinets (储藏柜 ) lining a wall, the oven (炉子) occupying the central place of another wall, the dishes sparkling like diamonds. I had seen it from outside but this time it was up close. As I hadn’t had breakfast, I decided to begin my first experience as a cook by making an omelette (煎蛋) . Sure I had seen Mom do it, so how could it be hard
I searched the cabinets and finally found some eggs and onions. I knew the basics, so I began the work. I washed an onion first and then chopped it. Then came the egg. It took me two or three attempts to crack one open and into the bowl. I put the onion and some salt in the bowl too and mixed them. After that, I lighted the stove and put the frying pan on it and poured some oil in it... and poured some on the floor too, accidentally, of course! Till the pouring of the mixture into the pan, everything was going perfect—then I wondered what was used for turning the egg upside down in the pan.
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Soon, I was running all over the kitchen, searching for the cooking spoon.
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While I was busy taking the burnt egg out in a plate, someone came up behind me.
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Soon. I was running all over the kitchen, searching for the cooking spoon. I opened all the drawers but there was no sign of the spoon anywhere. Just as I was at a loss for what to do, I looked up and happened to find it hanging high up on the wall. Standing on a chair, I took down the spoon and made a rush to turn over the omelette. I managed to do that without breaking it or dropping it on the floor only to see a very nicely browned, or rather burnt, side up!
While I was busy taking the burnt egg out in a plate, someone came up behind me. It was Mom. I froze with fear. She was angry at seeing the kitchen in a mess, the drawers all open, and some oil on the floor. She found a fit punishment for me-i was to eat the burnt omelette. Sitting on the table and eating the omelette, I realized cooking was not so easy as it appeared. But I was happy with my accomplishment, even if it was a bit burnt, and even happier when Mom told me she would teach me how to cook!
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小的时候，妈妈不让他进厨房。作者对厨房感到好奇。一天，妈妈去杂货店买东西了，家里一个人也没有。作者没有吃早饭，决定开始自己的第一次经历作为一个厨师做了一份煎蛋。作者找到一些鸡蛋和洋葱，点燃了炉子开始煎蛋的故事。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“很快。我在厨房里跑来跑去，找烹饪用的勺子。”可知，第一段可描写作者找到烹饪用的勺子的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“当我正忙着从盘子里拿出烧焦的鸡蛋时，有人从我身后走来。”可知，第二段可描写作者妈妈看到作者在厨房所发生事情。
2．续写线索：好奇——发现机会——做煎蛋——找食材——点燃炉子——找勺子——妈妈发现——教做饭
3．词汇激活
行为类
①. 冲过去：make a rush to/ rush to
②. 意识到：realize/be aware of
情绪类
①.害怕：fear / fright
②.生气的：angry / cross
【典型句式】
[句式1]. Standing on a chair, I took down the spoon and made a rush to turn over the omelette.(由现在分词作状语)
[句式2]. I managed to do that without breaking it or dropping it on the floor only to see a very nicely browned, or rather burnt, side up!(由不定式作结果状语)
[句式3]. Sitting on the table and eating the omelette, I realized cooking was not so easy as it appeared.(省略连接代词that引导的宾语从句)
4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My wife, Megan, and I went out to dinner with an old friend who we had not seen for a while. There had been some talk of COVID-19 on the news, but it was early in the outbreak and people were still going about their daily routines. Even though everyone in group felt perfectly, we took precautions (预防): we washed our hands with soap and used hand sanitizer (洗手液), did not share food, and had no significantly close contact.
A few days later, our friend called and told us that she had tested positive for the coronavirus. She had felt some mild symptoms for a day or so after that dinner and was able to be tested because she is a doctor. On the following day, I started to feel a little tired and my head was a bit cloudy. I decided to stay in the master bedroom away from the rest of my family. The next morning, I woke up with a 39-degree fever. That was when we realized that I might have caught the virus from our friend.
At once, Megan called our state’s coronavirus hotline, who then called in our primary care doctor and the head of our local hospital system’s coronavirus team. We explained that we had been in contact with someone who had been tested positive, and I was having symptoms. They quickly approved me to receive a test at an urgent care center located 5 kilometer’s drive from my house. The result made my heart sink-I was also tested positive, and the local hospital didn’t have the facilities for my disease. As a mild case, I was recommended to stay home and quarantine (隔离) myself.
Following the doctor’s advice, Megan and I quarantined ourselves and our kids. With my symptoms developing, I started isolation in the bedroom, and the only interaction I had with Megan was when she brought in food. She slept on a small couch in our home office away from the kids’ rooms. She also minimized her contact with our kids in case she was carrying the virus.
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We decided to call everyone we had contacted over the course of the past week.
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Though worried about the seriousness of the virus, I knew I had to be brave
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We decided to call everyone we had contacted over the course of the past week. Megan insisted we should let them know that I had tested positive. Hard as it was to inform people that we might have given them the coronavirus, it was the responsible thing to do. To our pleasant surprise, all of our friends showed their understanding and support upon hearing the news. To cheer us up, one of my wife’s best friends even baked a cake with the letters “Stay Strong” on it and delivered it to our front door.
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Though worried about the seriousness of the virus, I knew I had to be brave. I made sure to get plenty of rest and did some exercise to stay as healthy as I could. I also managed to ease the worries of Megan and our kids during our quarantine by spending more time doing online video-chats with them. Within the following week, my fever started to fade and I could feel my head clearing. The next test showed a cheering result. It came back negative. Had it not been for the love and care from those around me, I wouldn’t have made it.
【写作指导】【导语】
本文以新冠病毒为线索，作者和妻子与一个很久未见的朋友一起吃了一顿饭，不幸的是，吃完饭不久朋友打电话说自己新冠测出来是阳性。在接下来的几天，作者也出现了发烧的症状，去医院检查也是呈阳性，但是却被医院告知要回家居家隔离。因此作者便回家将自己隔离起来，并且不跟妻子和孩子接触，避免他们也被感染上。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们决定给在过去一周接触的每个人打电话”可知，本段可以写作者给他们打电话，得到了他们的理解和鼓励，这让作者感到无比温暖。
②由第二段首句内容“尽管担心病毒的严重性，但我知道我必须要勇敢”可知，本段可以写作者是如何勇敢面对病毒，对抗病毒，最后终于痊愈以及作者对此次经历的感受。
2．续写线索：给接触的人打电话→得到他们的理解和鼓励→作者自己要勇敢面对→作者如何勇敢对抗病毒→最终痊愈→感受。
3．词汇激活：
行为类：
使振作：cheer sb. up/pull up one’s slacks/buck sb. up
减轻：ease/relieve/alleviate
确保，保证：make sure/guarantee/make certain
情绪类：
令人高兴的：cheering/joyful/pleasant/delightful
困难的：hard/difficult/tough
惊讶：surprise/amazement/astonishment
【典型句式】
【句式1】Hard as it was to inform people that we might have given them the coronavirus, it was the responsible thing to do.(运用了as引导的倒装句)
【句式2】Had it not been for the love and care from those around me, I wouldn't have made it.(运用了虚拟语气的倒装)
5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a misty morning in July, Clay and Acaimie arrived at the base of Mount Liamuiga, ready for their first honeymoon climb. They had married just five days earlier back home in Indiana, the United States.
They had their apparent differences. Acaimie had always been the worrier. Clay, on the other hand, was an optimist—always certain that things would turn out just fine. So it was Clay who wanted to take a day of their honeymoon and climb Mount Liamuiga, which is also a dead volcano—a popular destination for vacationers looking for adventure.
The couple, dressed in white T-shirts and sneakers, arrived for their journey in a rental car expecting to explore. When arriving, they found an empty dirt parking lot with just a small sign marking the beginning of the track. They made their way up anyway.
It took them nearly three hours to reach the peak, but the view made it all worthwhile. Though worn-out, they couldn't have been happier as they took a few selfies(自拍)with their cellphones, and walked around the edge of the volcano.
That's when Clay saw it: a small track, half-hidden beneath plant life, that led into the volcano's crater(火山口). A series of holes had been drilled into the rocks, with ropes that led down. For Clay, the sight was incredibly inviting. It felt like a secret entrance to a mysterious paradise(天堂，乐园). Acaimie was less enthusiastic. The track was steep, and she was afraid of heights, but she bravely followed Clay's lead. After just a few minutes of going downwards, though, she'd had enough. She told her husband she'd wait on the rocks just off the track while he went exploring. “Just be quick,” she said as she watched him set off on the rough path, zigzagging(曲折前进)while grasping the rope.
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A few minutes later, she heard a noise of something rolling downhill and a cry for help from deep within the crater.
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There was nobody when they reached the top, but fortunately she found a signal on her cellphone.
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A few minutes later, she heard a noise of something rolling downhill and a cry for help from deep within the crater. Acaimie fought back a wave of panic. Leaning forward, she figured out it was Clay. She pulled out her cellphone, only to find there was no signal. Without delay, Acaimie grabbed the rope and began climbing down the track. Finally, she spotted his white T-shirt. Getting closer, she could see his head bleeding and was in shock. She was calling for help but in vain. Determined to drag him out, she helped Clay shakily to his feet. She told him to hold the rope tightly and pushed him from behind. Step by step, they climbed with all their might.
There was nobody when they reached the top, but fortunately she found a signal on her cellphone. Instantly, she dialed 911 once again and described what had happened to her husband in a worried voice. The operator promised to send an ambulance at once and asked Acaimie to stop bleeding first. While waiting for the ambulance, Acaimie had Clay rest in a flat position, stopping the bleeding with a clean cloth. Ultimately, the paramedics came and took Clay to the hospital immediately. It was Acaimie’s bravery and wisdom that saved her husband’s life.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开。一对夫妻Clay和Acaimie打算爬死火山Liamuiga度蜜月，Acaimie虽然很担心，但是还是陪同乐观的丈夫到达山顶。随着Clay继续向下探险，Acaimie害怕了，让Clay自己一个人去。没过多久，她就听到了Clay的呼救。Clay受伤了，头部失血休克。Acaimie想办法营救，在帮助丈夫到达山顶时，通过信号微弱的手机拨打了911，并想办法止血。最后丈夫被送进了医院。Acaimie的勇敢和智慧成功挽救了丈夫的生命。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，她听到有什么东西滚下山的声音，还有从火山口深处传来的呼救声。”可知，第一段可描写Acaimie发现丈夫遇险，展开营救，帮助对方回到山顶。
②由第二段首句内容“当他们到达山顶时，没有人，但幸运的是，她发现她的手机有信号。 ”可知，第二段可描写Acaimie打求救电话，实施急救，并将丈夫送入医院。Clay成功被救。
2．续写线索：听见呼喊——电话无信号——下山营救——回到山顶——打电话救助——帮助止血——送往医院
3．词汇激活
行为类
①.帮助：help/aid/assist
②.阻止：stop/prevent
情绪类
①.恐慌：panic/fright/scare
②.担心：worried/concerned/fearful
【典型句式】[句式1]. Leaning forward, she figured out it was Clay. (现在分词作状语和宾语从句)
[句式2]. It was Acaimie’s bravery and wisdom that saved her husband’s life.(强调句型)
6.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Where’s the rest of my paper ” thundered an angry Papa Bear, storming into the living room. It didn’t take him long to find Brother Bear and the sports section.
“I just borrowed it.“ said Brother. Papa snatched it up and plumped down in his easy chair. Brother wandered into the kitchen looking for sympathy from Mama Bear. “Gee,” he said, “what’s eating him ” “Your father looks forward to his evening paper,” Mama said, “and he has a perfect right to be annoyed when half of it is missing — and furthermore, thank you not to refer to your father as him!”
She stomped out of the kitchen.
“Why not He’s a him, isn’t he Gosh,” said Brother, “what’s eating her ”
What was “eating” Mama was Sister Bear. Sister had been on the phone with Lizy Bruin for almost an hour.
“But Mama!” she protested when she was told to say good-bye.
“Don’t But Mama’ me!“ said Mama Bear. “This is not your private phone. You’ve had all day to talk to Lizy at school, and you’ll have all day to talk to her tomorrow. So hang up that phone now!”
Sister did as she was told.
“Phew!” breathed Brother as he fell into the seat beside Cousin Fred on the school bus.
“Tough morning ” asked Fred.
“You better believe it!” said Sister, taking the seat Lizzy had saved for her.
The four compared notes on the way to school. The children agreed that while there was no doubt that their parents loved them, they were a little difficult to get along with sometimes. They nagged (唠叨); they said no a lot; and they never wanted kids to have any fun.
“Hey,” said Brother as they got off the bus, “what are we going to do for the Parents Night Talent Show ” “Don’t know,” said Lizzy. “Let’s think about it”
When the four searched their brains, Brother snapped his fingers and said, “I’ve got it! Remember what we were talking about just now ” “Sure,” said Fred. “We were saying how grownups can be a big pain.”
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“Well,” said Brother, “let’s put on a play about that, and call it...”
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Despite the difficulties in the preparation, especially costumes, their big day came finally.
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【答案】“Well” said Brother “let’s put on a play about that, and call it…” “The Trouble with Grownups!” shouted all the others. “Sensational!” said Sister as they slapped hands, delighted with the idea of showing parents how hard it is being cub. Putting on a play is easier said than done. You have to write it, figure out who is going to play the parts, then memorize it. Then you have to worry about costumes and scenery. The cubs did all that. It was hard, but it was fun, and they did it all in secret. The four practiced their parts, and before they knew it, it was time for the big Parents Night Talent Show.
Despite the difficulties in the preparation, especially costumes, their big day came finally. The audience of parents laughed and laughed when they saw how they seemed to their cubs. Mama and Papa laughed until tears rolled down their cheeks. Papa laughed, too, but not as much as Mama.
They both thought the play, which was a big surprise to them, was very well done. They admitted that it helped them understand what it was like being a cub.
Later, when they were going back home, Papa said, “I have a better idea how cubs feel now.” Mama agreed.
“After all, we were cubs once ourselves,” said Mama. “And here’s a thought: You’ll be grownups someday and, each probably have cubs of your own.”
Brother and Sister thought about that for a moment. They looked at each other. Then they looked out into the distance and thought about it. It was something to think about.
【导语】本文以故事发展为线索展开，讲述了熊哥哥和熊妹妹在家里受到熊爸爸和熊妈妈的责备，在上学路上向同学佛瑞德和莉兹抱怨，四人决定把他们的生活搬上舞台，在“家长之夜才艺表演”上进行表演。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一部分首句内容“‘好吧，’熊哥哥说，‘我们就此出个剧吧，叫它……’”可知，第一部分可描写四人决定把他们的生活搬上舞台，排练“与大人的麻烦!”的过程。
②由第二部分首句内容“尽管筹备过程很困难，尤其是服装，但他们的大日子终于来了。”可知，第二部分可描写他们的表演获得成功和大人们的反应。
2．续写线索：确定剧名——精心准备——表演成功——与父母交流——开始反思
3．词汇激活
行为类
①命名，给……取名：call/name
②记住：memorize/keep in mind
③认真考虑：think about/reflect upon
情绪类
①极好的，绝妙的：sensational/wonderful
②高兴的：delighted/glad
【点睛】[高分句型1] You have to write it, figure out who is going to play the parts, then memorize it.(运用了who引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The four practiced their parts, and before they knew it, it was time for the big Parents Night Talent Show.(运用了before引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型3] They both thought the play, which was a big surprise to them, was very well done.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
7.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
LESSONS LEARNED OUTSIDE THE CLASSROOM
Mr. Gray was my history teacher in tenth grade. I couldn’t tell what kind of history he taught for two reasons: one, I never liked history, and two, my body was in class, but my mind wasn’t. Mr. Gray wasn’t the teacher who offered retakes (补考) on tests; he did so much more for me than that. He offered me a pair of ears and a shoulder to cry on.
Before Mr. Gray came along, one major event was taking place in my life. My mom told me she wanted to divorce my dad. Why then I didn’t understand. I barricaded (筑起壁垒) myself in my basement bedroom, listening to angry music and sleeping. I fell into a depression and my grades were falling. Then there was Mr. Gray.
I sat against a brick wall outside the library, knees pulled into my chest, head down, surrounded by my noisy friends that I was slowly distancing myself from, when I heard his voice: “Ever feel like you’re a fire hydrant (消防栓) and every dog in the neighborhood is stopping by to visit you ” I picked my head up and then I saw Mr. Gray.
I had heard him use this line in the classroom a few times before, when it looked like a kid was having a bad day. It usually aroused a laugh and ended there. This time was different though — he was waiting for an answer. Next thing I knew I was following him into the library.
We sat amongst the shelves of the mostly empty library for the rest of lunchtime. I don’t remember much about that first conversation other than the unconditional promise he made me of lending a pair of ears and a shoulder to cry on. What made him such a special teacher was that he saw that I was struggling and reached out to me outside of the classroom.
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1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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However, that didn’t change our classroom relationship.
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Many lunchtime library conversations followed throughout the school year.
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However, that didn’t change our classroom relationship. Every time he noticed my mind was wandering, he would call on me, trying to draw my attention back. Unsurprisingly, I still distanced myself from classmates. I still didn’t know most of the answers. But I think he knew that I was at a crossroads. Apparently, my problem needed to be addressed first outside the classroom and then in class.
More lunchtime library conversations followed throughout the school year. They always made me feel freer and I didn’t feel trapped like before. Mr. Gray who was always there unconditionally, presented me with an outlet for my pain and frustration. His presence and life wisdom enabled me to become less defensive and open up more. Gradually, the hours spent amongst the library shelves became my favorite time to take his “class”. Little as I remembered about what he taught in the history class, the lessons learned outside the classroom would never fade away.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和他十年级历史老师之间的故事。在遇到新老师之前，作者的父母离婚，他想不通，因此开始封闭自己。有一次在学校，作者蜷缩在图书馆外，觉得自己和周围的距离越来越远。历史老师发现了他，并对他说了老师常常对心情不好的学生说的笑话，这开启了两人课外的对话。此后作者经常在午饭的空余时间和老师去图书馆交流。此后，历史课上只要发现作者开小差，老师便会提醒他。虽然多数时候回答不上问题，老师并没放弃，而是继续帮助他开导他，解决学习之外，思想方面的问题。作者因为不喜欢历史，且上历史课思绪早已在教室外，并没记住老师传授的历史知识，但是老师敏锐地发现他的痛苦和沮丧，在课堂外教给了作者生活智慧，使他走出困境，这也使得这位老师对作者而言，很特别。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然而，这并没有改变我们的课堂关系。”可知，第一段可描写作者在历史课上的表现的有这样表现的原因。
②由第二段首句内容“整个学年，更多的午餐时间图书馆对话接踵而至。”可知，第二段可描写老师继续利用午餐空余时间和作者沟通，最终成功开导作者。
2．续写线索：父母离婚——心情郁闷——欠佳的状况被老师发现——老师开导——走出困境，再次敞开心扉
3．词汇激活
行为类
①.需要被解决或处理：need to be addressed/need to be handled
②.消失：fade away/disappear
③.记得：remember/recall
情绪类
①.不出所料：unsurprisingly/as expected
②.沮丧：frustration/depression
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Every time he noticed my mind was wandering, he would call on me, trying to draw my attention back.（由连接词every time引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]. Mr. Gray who was always there unconditionally, presented me with an outlet for my pain and frustration.（由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句）
8.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lucy was the only child in her family. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she gave a sigh and had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles ”
“Oh, yes, but I don’t have money on me,” she replied.
“That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man. “Come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, the smell so attractive. As she was eating, Lucy cried silently.
“What is it ” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing. Actually, I was just touched by your kindness!” said Lucy as she wiped her tears.” Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you Have you expressed your gratitude to her ”
Lucy sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered her mother’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why didn’t I think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful. Why haven’t I thanked my mum for what she has done for me ”
On the way home, Lucy made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
注意:
1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2． 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
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A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.
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Approaching the doorway, Lucy was very nervous and took a deep breath. Standing in front of the door, she was afraid whether her mother would forgive her for her rudeness. But when She thought of her mother’s familiar face and the noodle seller’s kind advice, she decided to knock on the door bravely. Her mother opened the door but Lucy was so ashamed that she didn’t know what to say.
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. Lucy couldn’t help crying and said “Sorry, mom, I know I have made a big mistake. I shouldn’t have quarreled with you. I shouldn’t have run away from home. Could you forgive me ” Lucy’s mother was moved, saying “Good girl, never mind, I also should make an apology to you for scolding at you angrily. I am very worried about you. ” Tears rolled down from both of their faces and they hugged each other tightly.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小女孩Lucy和母亲争吵后离家出走，走在街上，觉得饿了，一个卖面条的摊位前停下， 摊主人知道情况后，免费请她吃了一碗面并听她倾诉，她很感恩，摊主却告诉她：“我请你吃一碗面，你就感激我，你想想你的妈妈养大你，给你做了多少顿饭呢？”Lucy顿悟，决定回家和妈妈好好沟通。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“离家门口越来越近，”可知，第一段可描写Lucy在走到家门口进门前的心理活动。
②由第二段首句内容“头顶的轻轻抚摸把她的思绪拉回来。”可知，第二段可描写Lucy和妈妈的谈话。
2．续写线索：站在家门口——敲门——妈妈开门——承认错误——妈妈担心——拥抱
3．词汇激活
行为类
①推开门：open the door/push the door open
②哭了起来：can’t help crying/burst into tears
③向...道歉：say sorry to /apologize to
情绪类
①.羞愧/悔恨：be ashamed /feel regretful
②担心：be worried about/be concerned about
【点睛】 [高分句型1]. Standing in front of the door, she was afraid whether her mother would forgive her for her rudeness. （使用了现在分词作状语和连接词whether引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. But when She thought of her mother’s familiar face and the noodle seller’s kind advice, she decided to knock on the door bravely.（由when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3]. I shouldn’t have quarreled with you.(使用的情态动词结构shouldn’t have done 表示“本不应该做某事”)
9.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was an early winter morning. Joan was sleeping soundly when the phone rang in the living room. She rolled over and glanced at the clock on the wall—it was already nine o’clock.Every weekend morning, her mother had to work part-time in the cafe. Although Joan was still sleepy, she knew she had to get up. After all, she didn’t expect her brother Mike, who was sleeping like a log, to hear the phone. She quietly went over to the living room. When she picked up the receiver, on the other end came the warmhearted greetings,“Good morning, my Dear!”Recognizing the voice from her father, Joan was immediately surrounded by a sense of joy and the sleepiness swept away.
Joan’s father was a seaman, who rarely came back. Working on the sea was really hard.Born in a not-rich family, Joan and Mike felt the stress of life but they were happy to enjoy the family atmosphere. At school, they were straight-A students throughout the academic career and actively involved in school activities. They became the pride of the school and the envy of the students.
“Good morning, Dad, what’s up ”Joan said in an easy tone.“I have been very nice recently, my baby. Today is your mother’s birthday, and I have ordered her a cake online and it should come to the house in one and half an hour. Do remember to take the cake.”
Hearing her father’s words, Joan felt a little ashamed. How she could forget Mum’s birthday!She took a glance at the dirty clothes piled on the sofa and the oily floor that hadn’t been mopped(拖地) for a few days—There was two hours before her mother came back. She calculated they had enough time to prepare a surprise for Mum.
Thinking of this, she felt full of excitement.“Well, Dad, now I’m going to wake Mike up.We will give Mum a surprise !”
Joan hung up the phone with Dad, and hurriedly went to Mike’s room to share him her Big Cleaning plan. After listening to Joan, Mike readily accepted her idea.
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The Big Cleaning plan began.
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【答案】The Big Cleaning plan began. Joan collected the clothes from sofa and then put them in the water of a basin. After pouring in some washing liquids, she began to wash them by hand. Realizing the clothes were clean enough, Joan gently squeezed water out and hung them to dry. Meanwhile, Mike was busy mopping the floor back and forth with all his strength, really aware of what hard work his Mum had at home! They had just finished the cleaning when the express boy came to the door.
With the cake placed on the table, Mum came in. “Happy birthday, Mum!”, they greeted in chorus. Confused and surprised, Mum stood frozen. When Mum realized what had happened, a warm current rose in her heart. Staring at the clean floor and the washed clothes, she could hardly contain her excitement and hugged them tightly, “It is the best birthday gift I have ever had!” Mum said emotionally. Just then Joan took out her smartphone and took a happy video named Mum’s Birthday and sent it to Dad.
【导语】本文为一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Joan在爸爸的提醒下想起来妈妈的生日，于是和弟弟一起为妈妈准备了生日惊喜。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“大扫除计划开始了。”可知，第一段可描写Joan和弟弟是如何大扫除的。
②由第二段首句内容“蛋糕放在桌上，妈妈走了进来。”可知，第二段可描写妈妈看到Joan和弟弟大扫除以及收到蛋糕后的心理感受。
2．续写线索：Joan和弟弟在周末的早晨熟睡——Joan接到爸爸的电话，得知今天是妈妈的生日——Joan决定和弟弟一起给妈妈一个惊喜——Joan和弟弟将家里进行了大扫除——妈妈回来后看到这一切很感动，觉得这是最好的生日礼物
3．词汇激活
行为类
①开始：begin/start
②控制：contain/control
③完成：finish/complete
情绪类
①困惑的：confused/perplexed
②惊讶的：surprised/astonished/stunned
【点睛】【高分句型1】Meanwhile, Mike was busy mopping the floor back and forth with all his strength, really aware of what hard work his Mum had at home!（本句运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】When Mum realized what had happened, a warm current rose in her heart.（本句运用了when引导的状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）
10.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I live in a small but lovely neighborhood. Our house is neither large nor luxurious, but it has a fairly big garden. My father loves his garden. He planted some seeds in it and took good care of the plants, watering them, applying fertilizer, weeding and getting rid of bugs. He was never tired of doing all that stuff. But at that time, I didn’t understand why working in the dirt excited him so much.
Unfortunately, in the summer vacation before senior high school, my father was seriously injured in an accident. He had to stay in bed for a while. My mother had several business trips, so she couldn’t take care of the garden. I didn’t want my father to worry. I said that I would take care of his garden until he recovered. I assumed that the little plants would continue to grow as long as they had water, and luckily it rained fairly often, so I didn’t think much about the garden.
One Saturday morning, my father said to me, “Christine, the vegetables should be about ready to be picked. Let’s have a salad today!” I went out to the garden and was upset to see that many of the lettuce (生菜) leaves and carrots had been half eaten by bugs. There were hundreds of bugs all over them!
I panicked for a moment but then I quietly went to the nearest supermarket to buy some vegetables. When I was making the salad, my mother came home and saw the bag from the supermarket in the kitchen. I was embarrassed and admitted, “Dad would like a salad, but the garden is a disaster. I don’t want to disappoint him, so I went to the store and bought some vegetables.” My mother smiled, saying, “Honey, you know what is the right thing to do.”
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【答案】One possible version:
My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to him. “It looks so good. Your salad makes my mouth water,” Dad couldn’t wait to try it. He forked a piece into his mouth and chewed slowly, his face spreading in a satisfied smile. Giving me a thumbs-up, he said, “Little did I know you are so good at gardening. You are a man of your word.” My father kept praising me, which made my ears burning. Feeling bad about what I had done, I forced a bitter smile. How could I cheat my father
Feeling guilty, I decided to do the right thing. With tears welling up in my eyes, I told my father I didn’t live up to his expectations and that the garden was a mess. To my surprise, instead of scolding me, my father patted me on the shoulder gently and told me to turn to him if I needed any help. Under his guidance, I learned to apply fertilizer, weed and remove bugs. The vegetables became better and better day by day, and so did my father. I began to enjoy taking care of vegetables and I finally understood my father’s pleasure of working in the dirt.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者爸爸一直悉心照料着花园，可有一天受伤之后就交给作者来照料，但作者却没有花心思去做好，结果花园里的蔬菜都被虫糟蹋了。有一天作者父亲想吃自己蔬菜做出的沙拉，作者怕爸爸伤心，于是偷偷去商店买了蔬菜，后来被妈妈发现了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由续写第一段首句“当我把沙拉递给父亲时，父亲似乎很高兴”可以预测续写第一段主要内容：爸爸品尝沙拉并表扬“我”将菜园照顾地很好，而“我”却非常尴尬和羞愧。(学生也有可能在第一段续写父亲发现了端倪，揭穿了“我”，这样第二段的right thing就是“我”决定将功补过，在菜园辛勤劳作，只要能自圆其说也可以。)
②由第二段首句“感到内疚，我决定做正确的事。”可以预测：“我”向爸爸坦白了一切，而爸爸鼓励“我”将功补过。“我”学着父亲的样子在菜园劳作，同时也在这次经历中获得成长。
2．续写线索：作者父亲品尝沙拉——觉得沙拉很好并表扬作者——作者内心挣扎——告诉父亲真相——原谅作者并为作者提供帮助——爱上照顾花园中蔬菜
3．词汇激活
行为类
①.表扬：praise/speak highly of
②.强颜欢笑：forced a bitter smile /force a smiling face
③.欺骗：cheat / deceive/trick
情绪类
①.满意的：satisfied /pleased/ content
②.让我惊讶：to my surprise/to my amazement/to my astonishment
【点睛】[高分句型1]My father kept praising me, which made my ears burning. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Feeling bad about what I had done, I forced a bitter smile.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
11.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Late one evening, my constant yawns(呵欠)convinced me to retire for the night. I put on a comfortable cotton gown, turned the lights low, and crawled into bed between the cool but comfortable sheets. To ensure a good night’s rest, I called out towards the kitchen to my smart speaker, “Alexa, play sounds to sleep by.” As I gathered my cozy sheet up under my chin, I felt at peace with my cat Bella snuggled up(依偎)to me.
During the night, a heavy object landed on my stomach, causing me to scream and sit up, only to discover that it was Bella. She had a habit of waking me up to get her a snack, but the hands on the clock said 3:00 am, and I was annoyed that she had interrupted a happy dream. I fell back against the pillow and promised I’d feed her in the morning. That wasn’t acceptable to her, so she continued to walk on top of me while pressing her paws into my body.
Because that proved to be unsuccessful, she jumped over to the bedside table and deliberately used her paw to knock things on the floor, one at a time, to keep me from going back to sleep. Her efforts paid off as I looked over in the dark room and knew the smug(沾沾自喜的)look on her face conveyed a serious demand. “Get up, human. I’m ready for my nightly treat.”
Knowing she would keep disturbing me until she got her snack, I took a few minutes to focus my eyes and heard what sounded like running water or someone pressure-washing a wall. I couldn’t imagine our apartment staff doing maintenance in the middle of the night, so I assumed I had turned off the water tap. I would regret the large water bill it would bring about, so I unwillingly got up and went into the kitchen. I found nothing out of the ordinary so I continued to search with Bella following me. I checked the bathroom, where I found no running water.
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Since the sound was still evident, I realized the seriousness of the situation.
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【答案】参考范文：
Since the sound was still evident,I realized the seriousness of the situation. I thought it necessary to solve the mystery. I returned to the kitchen, where the disturbance was more obvious and stood like a statue trying to identify the sound. Despite Bella’s loud yowl, I was still able to hear the strange noise, which seemed to come from inside the wall between my apartment and the unit next door. I could feel my muscles tense up and my hands shake because I was now convinced a pipe had burst, and water could be flooding the neighboring apartment.
I didn’t see water on the wall, so I thought it wasn’t an emergency. However, one thing I had done was drag someone out of bed in the middle of the night. I walked to the end of the kitchen bar closest to the wall in question,picked up my phone, and placed my fumbling fingers on the keypad. Instantly, the reality of what was happening b
