中考英语作文专题复习 饮食与健康
例题:
例1:亚冬会的成功举办掀起了全民运动热潮,我校因此开展“我运动我健康”的主题征文活动,请根据以下提示和要求,以“Let’s Do Sports”为题,写一篇短文投稿,谈论自己最喜欢的运动与原因,周末运动计划,并呼吁大家积极参加体育运动,强身健体。
提示:
(1) What’s your favorite sport
(2) What does it bring to you
(3) What’s your sports plan for your weekends
要求:
(1)词数80词左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总数);
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Let’s Do Sports
Sports play an important role in our life. _______________________________________________________
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【思路点拨】
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
【例文】
Let’s Do Sports
Sports play an important role in our life. My favorite sport is basketball. It not only helps me stay healthy but also teaches me teamwork and perseverance. Every weekend, I plan to play basketball with my friends in the park for two hours. It’s a great way to relax and have fun after a busy week.
I believe doing sports regularly can improve our physical and mental health. So, let’s all get active and enjoy the benefits of sports! Remember, a healthy body leads to a happy life.
【亮点词汇】
① help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
② plan to do计划做
③ physical and mental health身心健康
【高分句型】
I believe doing sports regularly can improve our physical and mental health. (宾语从句)
【结构布局】
第一步,介绍你最喜欢的运动是什么;
第二步,介绍这个运动给你带来了什么以及你对周末的计划;
第三步,最后总结。
例2:假如你叫李华,你们班要开展关于食品安全的主题班会,请你根据以下图示,用英语写一篇演讲稿。词数 80词左右。
注意事项:
(1)必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear friends,
It's an honor to share my opinions on food safety. _________________________________________________
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That's all. Thank you!
【思路点拨】本文要求根据图片内容提示,写一篇关于食品安全的演讲稿。文章主要使用一般现在时和第一人称。要点提示已给出,动笔前,应明确写作要点,不能遗漏,并对要点做适当的思路拓展,以充实文章内容。写作时,要注意词汇的使用和句式的选择,必要时可使用一些高级词汇和句式结构(宾语从句、定语从句等)为文章添色。
【例文】
Dear friends,
It's an honor to share my opinions on food safety. Food safety is necessary for a happy and healthy life. ①To ensure the safety of the food we eat, we can take some simple but effective measures.
Firstly, we should pay attention to the food we eat. Avoid any spoiled food. Also, we must wash our hands before meals. Secondly, we should be careful when eating out. ②It is a good idea to use serving chopsticks. And we can never try to eat wild animals. Thirdly, we should cook the food properly and keep it in a safe place.
In conclusion, food safety is a matter of great concern for everyone. We can foster healthy habits to help ensure a safer and healthier food environment.
That's all. Thank you!
【亮点词汇】
①pay attention to …注意……
②be careful小心
【高分句型】
①To ensure the safety of the food we eat, we can take some simple but effective measures.(使用了省略关系词that所引导的定语从句)
②It is a good idea to use serving chopsticks.(It作形式主语,后面的动词不定式短语作真正的主语)
【结构布局】
开头:写上称呼语并点明主题——分享关于食品安全的观点;
中心:介绍一些确保食品安全的简单但有效的措施;
结尾:写上感谢语。
例3:在不同的国家,人们有不同的餐饮习惯。请你根据下面的表格和要求写一篇短文,介绍中国和印度不同的餐饮习惯。
Countries Eating habits
China not point to others; not put chopsticks straight in the bowl...
India eat with right hands; mix the foods; not leave food on the plate
要求:
(1) 短文应使用所给的写作提示,条理清楚,行文连贯;
(2) 80-120词,可适当发挥;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名、地名和校名。
In different countries, people have different eating habits. Let's look at the differences between China and India. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】本文是一篇说明文,主要话题是介绍中国和印度不同的餐饮习惯。时态用一般现在时,人称以第二人称为主。写作时注意词汇的正确选择合句型的准确使用,可适当添加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯。
【例文】
In different countries, people have different eating habits. Let's look at the differences between China and India.
In China, we eat with chopsticks But don't use them to point to others It is impolite. You shouldn't put them straight into your bowl, either. When people have a meal, the old usually start eating first. And remember not to talk with your mouth full of food. in India, people eat with their right hands. They think eating with right hands makes the food more delicious. Their hands can easily mix different foods together. And you'd better not leave food on your plate when you are going to leave the table.
All in all, when in Rome, do as the Romans do. So you can enjoy your food in a foreign country.
【亮点词汇】
①eating habits饮食习惯;
②(be) full of充满
③had better not do最好不做
④All in all总的来说
【高分句型】
①When people have a meal, the old usually start eating first.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②They think eating with right hands makes the food more delicious.(省略that的宾语从句)
【结构布局】
引言:引出话题——国家不同餐饮习俗不同
中心:具体描述中国与印度不同的餐饮习惯
结尾:总结并发表评论。
例4:你所就读的学校公众号以“How to keep healthy ”为题向全校进行征稿,请你写一份宣传稿。
内容包括:
(1)描述一项你最喜欢的运动以及你喜欢它的原因。
(2)就如何保持身心健康给同学提一些建议。
(3)呼吁同学要积极锻炼身体和要以乐观的心态面对生活。
作文要求:
(1)不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名;
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
How to keep healthy
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【思路点拨】本文是一篇提示作文,要求根据所给提示,写一篇作文,介绍如何保持健康。写作时,时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主。写作时,要注意词汇的使用和句式的选择,必要时可使用一些高级词汇和句式结构为文章添色。
【例文】
How to keep healthy
I think being in good health is important in life. First, we can keep healthy by doing sports. ①I like playing football very much because it can not only build up my body but also help me make good friends. Second, we need to have enough rest and sleep well every day. We must eat healthy faod, like vegetables, fruit and so on. Finally, we should keep in a good mood all the time.
All in all, it's of great importance to lead a healthy lifestyle. We should try our best to keep healthy.
【亮点词汇】
①build up增强体质;
②of great importance非常重要;
③try one's best尽某人最大努力。
【高分句型】
①I like playing football very much because it can not only build up my body but also help me make good friends.(because引导原因状语从句)
【结构布局】
引言:开门见山,点明健康的重要性;
中心:介绍自己喜欢的运动,提出关于保持健康的建议;
结尾:再次强调健康的重要性。
练习:
良好的睡眠对学生的健康和学习都有积极的影响。假如你是张华,最近校英语社正在就“The Importance of Enough Sleep”举行征文活动。请根据表格内容写一篇短文投稿,先谈谈睡眠的重要性,介绍一下你每天的睡眠时间和不能获得充足睡眠的原因,最后就如何改善学生的睡眠提出合理的建议。
写作要点 参考句型
(1)Why is it important to have enough sleep It s important for us to... I often... I plan to... ...
(2)Do you have enough sleep If not, why
(3)What can you do to improve your sleep
要求:
(1)短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点,条理清楚;行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
(3)词数80-120,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
The Importance of Enough Sleep
Sleep is very important for our health and learning. When we sleep well,___________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe by making small changes, we can improve the quality of our sleep and feel better.
练习示例与解析
【思路点拨】这是一篇介绍充足睡眠的重要性的作文,句意用一般现在时和第一人称进行写作,注意句型和衔接词的使用,使文章通顺连贯,词数在120左右即可。
【例文】
The Importance of Enough Sleep
Sleep is very important for our health and learning. ①When we sleep well, our bodies and minds feel good. We have more energy and can study better during the day. ②However, if we don't get enough sleep, it can affect us in many ways.
Personally, I try to get around 8 hours of sleep every night, but sometimes it's hard. Sometimes I stay up late watching TV or using my phone. Other times, I feel stressed or worried and it's hard to relax and fall asleep.
To improve my sleep, first I plan to turn off all screens at least an hour before bedtime. This helps my brain to relax and get ready for sleep. I also try to create a calm and comfortable sleep environment in my bedroom.
I believe by making small changes, we can improve the quality of our sleep and feel better.
【亮点词汇】
①stay up late熬夜;
②try to do sth尝试做某事;
③turn off关掉;
④at least 至少;
【高分句型】
①When we sleep well, our bodies and minds feel good.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②However, if we don't get enough sleep, it can affect us in many ways.(if引导的条件状语从句)
【结构布局】
开头:总起开头,开篇点题;
中心:介绍为什么睡眠充足是重要的,自己睡眠是否充足,如何改善睡眠等;
结尾:总结全文,发表看法。