2025年中考英语考前冲刺必背英语作文(七)（含答案解析）

2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文（七）
简介：
《2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文》系列文档：中考英语写作备考的专业之选。
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专业范文引领：由资深英语教育专家精心编撰范文，语言地道、结构严谨，词汇与句式丰富多样，为考生提供高质量的写作范例，引领写作方向。
深度写作指导：深入解析写作思路，精准点拨要点，标注亮点词汇与高分句型，助力考生领悟写作精髓，提升语言运用与表达能力。
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专业打造，助力考生在中考英语写作中脱颖而出，轻松斩获高分。
一、书面表达
1．初中生活即将结束，你校正在举行优秀毕业生 “Excellent Graduates” 评选。假设你是李华，请你仔细阅读下面的征选海报，选择一项自身优势并结合自身经历写一封自荐信参与评选。
注意：1.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
2.词数：100次左右。
3.开头结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Mr White,
I am writing to apply for the Excellent Graduates. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Mr White，
I am writing to apply for the Excellent Graduates.
This term, I joined the school track team and did running practice after school every day. After months of hard training, I could run much faster. In the relay race, I ran the last part and helped my team take the first place, which made me happy and proud. I know it is my effort that helps me achieve a lot in sports. I will keep working hard, not only at sports but at everything I do. I hope I can be an excellent graduate.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一封信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据征选海报完成写作，注意语言通顺、连贯，语法准确。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开篇点题，说明写信目的；
第二步，介绍自己参加田径队的经历，表达自己对未来的期待和申请成为优秀学生的想法；
第三步，表达期待。
［亮点词汇］
①take the first place取得第一名
②keep doing sth.坚持做某事
［高分句型］
①I know it is my effort that helps me achieve a lot in sports. (强调句)
②I ran the last part and helped my team take the first place, which made me happy and proud. (which引导的定语从句)
2．我国义务教育阶段实施“双减”政策以来，学生拥有更多的课余时间。为了引导学生更好地利用课余时间，增强时间管理意识，学校英语社团以 “Mak ng Better Use of Time” 为题向学生征文，请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点: (1) When do you have free time
(2) What do you often do in your free time
(3) Do you think your free time is better used Why or why not
要求： (1) 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
(2) 文章内容可适当发挥。
Making Better Use of Time
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【答案】例文
Making Better Use of Time
As a junior high school student, I have got more free time in recent years. I am always free on weekends.
When I am free, I have many activities. I usually play the piano and football. I like playing football very much. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play football on weekends. I have piano lessons twice a week. I also have plenty of time to exercise in the evening. Sometimes, my parents and I look at the stars outside.
I think my free time is better used because I do what I want to do and I balance study and entertainment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的课余时间活动，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己什么时候有空闲时间；
第二步，介绍自己空闲时间的活动；
第三步，介绍自己是否利用好自己的空闲时间以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①on weekends在周末
②plenty of大量的
③look at看
[高分句型]
①When I am free, I have many activities. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think my free time is better used because I do what I want to do and I balance study and entertainment. (because引导的原因状语从句，what引导的宾语从句)
3．假如你叫林华，你患了重感冒，昨天去看了医生，医生建议你卧床休息一天。请根据提示内容写一张请假条，向董老师请假一天。
Asking for Leave
Dear Ms. Dong,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lin Hua
【答案】例文：
Asking for Leave
Dear Ms. Dong,
I’m sorry to tell you that I have a bad cold. I went to see a doctor yesterday and he advised me to stay in bed and have a rest for a day. So I can’t go to school today. I will be back to school tomorrow if I feel better.
Yours,
Lin Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于请假条；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：明确请假的原因，语言简洁，表达了歉意和希望尽快康复的想法 。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明请假原因；
第二步，表达希望尽快康复的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①have a bad cold患重感冒；
②advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事；
③stay in bed卧床休息。
[高分句型]
①I will be back to school tomorrow if I feel better. (if引导的条件状语从句)
4．福田红树林自然保护区被誉为“深圳市的绿色长廊”。为了让学生们了解红树林的相关知识，呼吁人们关注和保护红树林， 你校计划举办“徒步研学红树林”活动（Mangrove Tour）， 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示写一封邮件，介绍此次活动，并邀请班上美国交换生Peter和你一起参加此活动。要点：
1）发出邀请；
2）活动时间和目的；
3）活动内容（至少两项）；
4）表达期待。
要求：
1）词数80左右（开头已给出, 不计入总字数）；
2）要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3）条理清楚， 语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：mangove forest红树林；migratory bird候鸟；habitat栖息地；Futian Mangrove Nature Reserve福田红树林自然保护区
Dear Peter,
How are you doing
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How are you doing I’m writing to introduce a meaningful activity to you. Our school is organizing a visit to the Futian Mangrove Nature Reserve, well-known as the “green corridor” in Shenzhen. It’s a great opportunity to immerse ourselves in nature and learn more about this unique forest.
Next Friday at 2 p.m., we will meet at the reserve, which is located in the southern part of Shenzhen. During our visit, we will take a leisurely walk through the reserve while observing the diverse mangroves and migratory birds. Additionally, a lecture about the importance of the mangroves will be given by an expert, from which we will learn that mangrove forests can not only provide habitats for birds and plants, but also fight against air pollution as the “city’s green lungs”.
I would be delighted if you could join me for this educational and enjoyable activity. It’s a chance to appreciate the beauty of nature and understand its significance to our city.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，不要遗漏内容，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题。问候对方，并告知对方自己学校举办了红树林之旅，邀请对方参加；
第二步，具体阐述活动的时间、目的和内容；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待对方的参加。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某物
②learn about了解，学习
③not only... but also...不但……而且……
④in the end最后
[高分句型]
①Next Friday at 2 p.m., we will meet at the reserve, which is located in the southern part of Shenzhen.（定语从句）
②I would be delighted if you could join me for this educational and enjoyable activity.（条件状语从句）
5．《环球时报》目前正举办以“My Country, My Pride”为题的征文活动，这个活动特别面向全球青少年，鼓励他们通过文字来介绍自己深爱的祖国。请你写一篇短文投稿，从下列提示中选择两到三点适当展开，介绍你深爱的祖国。
提示词：landscape 风景 places of interest 名胜古迹
注意：
1. 词数100左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）；
2. 短文中不得透露个人信息。
My Country, My Pride
I come from a great country, and it has a beautiful name—China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Country, My Pride
I come from a great country, and it has a beautiful name—China.
China boasts a profound history and culture. With a history of over 5000 years, it has left a rich heritage, such as the Four Great Inventions, which once had a far-reaching impact on the world. The ancient Chinese characters, calligraphy, and traditional festivals like the Spring Festival all showcase the unique charm of our culture.
In addition, China has made remarkable achievements in science and technology. In recent years, high-speed railways have become a business card of China, with their high-speed, safety, and comfort. The development of 5G technology also leads the world, bringing more convenience to people’s lives.
I’m extremely proud to be a Chinese and I believe China will have an even brighter future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，以表达对祖国的热爱和自豪为主题进行写作；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕中国的历史文化和科技成就展开描述，表达对祖国的骄傲之情。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点明自己来自伟大的国家中国，直接表明主题。
第二步，中间分别阐述中国在历史文化和科技方面的成就。在历史文化方面，列举了四大发明、汉字、书法和传统节日等；在科技方面，提及了高铁和5G技术。
第三步，结尾表达自己作为中国人的骄傲以及对祖国美好未来的信心。
[亮点词汇]
①boast拥有；自豪地拥有
②profound深厚的；深远的
③far-reaching深远的；广泛的
④remarkable显著的；非凡的
[高分句型]
①China boasts a profound history and culture.（“boast”一词生动地体现出中国拥有丰富历史文化的自豪感。）
②The Four Great Inventions, which once had a far - reaching impact on the world.（运用了“which”引导的非限定性定语从句，对四大发明的影响进行补充说明，使句子更加丰富。）
6．2023年12月22日，第78届联合国大会协商一致通过决议，将中国春节确定为联合国假日。中国文化包罗万象，作为新时代的中国青少年，我们应当了解并弘扬中华优秀传统文化。你校本月将举行中华优秀传统文化演讲比赛，届时会有许多外国友人参加。假如你是李华，请根据下面表格中的要点提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。
写作要点 参考句型
1. What do you want to introduce (china/Chinese painting…) I’d like to introduce. It’s made of/from… Not only…but also… As far as I’m concerned…
2. The basic (基本的) information of it. (material, use, meaning…)
3. Your opinion
注意：1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80~100, 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to stand here and make a speech. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for your listening.
【答案】例文
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to stand here and make a speech. I’d like to introduce Chinese paper-cutting. It is a traditional art form with a long-standing history in China. Usually, it’s made from red paper. People cut paper into various shapes, like flowers, animals, and characters. Paper-cutting is not only used to decorate houses during festivals like the Spring Festival but also carries people’s best wishes for a happy life. As far as I’m concerned, Chinese paper-cutting is a precious treasure of Chinese culture. We teenagers should learn more about it and help spread it to let more people around the world know about the charm of Chinese traditional culture.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，属于演讲稿类型，用于介绍中华优秀传统文化，体裁为说明文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：需依据给定表格要点写作，涵盖介绍中华传统文化事物、其基本信息以及个人看法，不能遗漏要点，且有字数等要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明身份和荣幸，引出要介绍的中华传统文化内容，如文中引出中国剪纸；
第二步，按照要点依次阐述。先说明中国剪纸是传统艺术形式及历史，接着介绍其制作材料、造型以及用途和蕴含意义等基本信息；
第三步，表达个人观点，强调中国剪纸的文化价值以及青少年传播文化的责任。
[亮点词汇]
① be made from 由……制成
② various shapes 各种形状
③ not only…but also 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
① As far as I’m concerned, Chinese paper-cutting is a precious treasure of Chinese culture.（As far as I’m concerned用于引出个人观点）
② We teenagers should learn more about it and help spread it to let more people around the world know about the charm of Chinese traditional culture.（and表并列，to do不定式作目的状语）
7．假设你是李明，在世界读书日活动中，你对班级同学每年课外阅读的情况进行了问卷调查。请描述以下调查结果并提出你的建议，向Teenslife杂志投稿，以更好地推动校园读书活动。
注意事项：
1. 短文须根据表格中的内容自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 表格中的原因部分非限定性内容，仅供参考，你的建议至少两条；
3. 词数在100个左右，短文首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
Dear Editor,
I did a survey about after-school reading in my class last week. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Editor,
I did a survey about after-school reading in my class last week. Here are the results.
60% of the students read only 1~3 books a year because they don’t have enough time. 25% of them read 3~10 books, mainly due to their little interest in reading. And only 15% of the students read over 10 books.
To promote after-school reading, I have some suggestions. First, we should set aside some time for reading every day, like during breaks or before going to bed. Second, the school can organize more reading activities, such as book fairs and reading competitions, to arouse students’ interest. Third, we can set up a class library so that students can easily borrow books.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信，是作者向编辑反馈班级课外阅读情况并提出建议的信件。
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：向编辑介绍班级课后阅读的调查结果，并提出促进课后阅读的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头表明自己上周对班级课后阅读情况做了调查，并引出要介绍调查结果。
第二步，中间详细阐述调查结果，即不同阅读数量区间的学生占比及原因，接着提出促进课后阅读的三条建议，包括每天预留阅读时间、学校组织阅读活动、建立班级图书馆。
第三步，结尾以书信常用格式表达写信人身份。
[亮点词汇]
①due to由于；因为
②set aside留出；拨出
③arouse激发；唤起
④set up建立
[高分句型]
①60% of the students read only 1-3 books a year because they don't have enough time.（运用“because”引导的原因状语从句，清晰地说明了学生阅读量少的原因，使句子逻辑更清晰。）
②Second, the school can organize more reading activities, such as book fairs and reading competitions, to arouse students’ interest.（使用“such as”列举具体的阅读活动，使内容更具体，“to arouse students’ interest”使用动词不定式作目的状语，明确了组织活动的目的。）
8．劳动实践有助于学生健康成长。假如你是王凯（Wang Kai），你所在的阳光中学上周在Hope Farm举办了一次助农实践活动（The Agricultural Assistance Activity），你和同学们一起参加了这次活动，请根据以下的内容提示及要求完成一封英文信件，向你的英国笔友Ben介绍此次活动的过程并分享你的感受和收获。
The Agricultural Assistance Activity
Information (活动信息) （1）时间 （2）地点 （3）出行方式
Contents (活动内容) （1）了解当地农民的生活； （2）体验一些农场劳动，比如…… （3）设计农产品推广项目，比如……
Meanings (活动意义） （1）…… （2）……
要求：
（1）不少于100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。
（3）内容必须包括以上所有要点，并根据要求补充完整。
（4）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Ben,
How’s everything going I’m writing to tell you that we took part in the agricultural assistance activity held by my school. ______________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Kai
【答案】例文①
Dear Ben,
How’s everything going I’m writing to tell you that we took part in the agricultural assistance activity held by my school. It was held on Hope Farm last Thursday. We took a bus there. As the bus arrived, all of us couldn’t wait to get off.
First, local farmers showed us around their homes so that we could have a deep understanding of their peaceful lives in the countryside. Moreover, we experienced some unforgettable farm work. For example, we learnt how to make dumplings by hand and picked the sweetest strawberries there. Finally, in order to help improve the sales of strawberries, we designed posters which could tell others about their high qualities and fresh tastes.
In a word, I think we teenagers should respect farmers and value the food in our daily life.
Yours,
Wang Kai
例文②
Dear Ben,
How’s everything going I’m writing to tell you that we took part in the agricultural assistance activity held by my school. The activity was held on Hope Farm last week, the farm is not far away and it took us only about ten minutes to walk.
When we arrived at the farm, local farmers were busy doing farm work in the fields. We greeted them cheerfully and learnt about their daily life. Then we experienced some simple farm work, such as picking apples, sowing seeds and watering vegetables. In order to help increase the sales of their good agricultural products, we also made some advertising plans, such as designing posters, showing them on vlogs and so on.
After a busy day’s work, we all considered that the activity was very meaningful, it enriched our school life and helped us understand the importance of farmers’ work.
Yours,
Wang Kai
例文③
Dear Ben,
How’s everything going I’m writing to tell you that we took part in the agricultural assistance activity held by my school. Our teachers led us to Hope Farm 30 miles away by bus. It took us over an hour to get there.
A series of activities were organized for us on that day. First, we walked around the farm and learned about the life of local farmers. Then, we experienced some farm work. For example, I helped the farmers pick the ripe fruit. Also, my classmates and I fed the animals such as chickens, ducks and so on. Finally, we were divided into groups to design some plans for agricultural products, such as making posters to advertise the products and asking the local businesses to work with the farm.
What a meaningful time we had that day! We have learned a lot of knowledge that we can’t get from books. Also, the activity helps us relax our mind and improve our practical abilities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍活动信息，如：时间、地点和出行方式；
第二步、根据提示，介绍活动内容；
第三步、分享自己的感受和收获。
[亮点词汇]
①get off下车
②show sb. around带某人四处看看
③in order to为了
④in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①Finally, in order to help improve the sales of strawberries, we designed posters which could tell others about their high qualities and fresh tastes.(which引导定语从句)
9．为讲好中国故事，传播中国声音，推动中华文化更好地走向世界，我校拟定下周五举办福州文化节活动 (Fuzhou Culture Festival)。假设你是李华，请根据以下图文提示，给外教Bob写一封邮件，向他简要介绍这次活动，并邀请他参加。词数不少于80。
Dear Bob,
How are you doing I’m writing to invite you to the Fuzhou Culture Festival in our school. Now let me tell you something about it.
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Look forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Bob,
How are you doing I’m writing to invite you to the Fuzhou Culture Festival in our school. Now let me tell you something about it.
The festival will be held in the school auditorium at 2 pm next Friday. It will start with a lecture on the long history and rich traditions of Fuzhou. After that, there will be a wonderful performance of Min Opera, which is a local art form full of unique charm. You can also enjoy various traditional handicrafts like bodiless lacquerware. What’s more, some folk snacks will be served for everyone to taste.
This festival is a great chance to experience Fuzhou culture closely. I sincerely hope you can join us and have a wonderful time.
Look forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，邀请外教来参加福州文化节；
第二步，介绍文化节举办的时间、地点、活动内容以及意义；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②what’s more此外
③have a wonderful time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①After that, there will be a wonderful performance of Min Opera, which is a local art form full of unique charm. (which引导的定语从句)
②I sincerely hope you can join us and have a wonderful time. (省略that的宾语从句)
10．假设你是李辉，你学校的英文社团正在开展以“发明改变命运，智慧创造财富”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文进行投稿。
内容包括：（1）简单介绍此项发明。（2）此项发明的影响及意义。
注意：（1）词数80-100。开头已给出，不计入总词数。（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
There have been many great inventions in history. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
There have been many great inventions in history. I think the first great invention is the one that is still very important today—the wheel. It was invented a few thousand years ago and it was made of wood at that time. However, the inventor is still unknown.
This invention has made traveling faster and made it easier to carry heavy things. With wheels, people can travel long distances to farther places. People can trade goods between different places. Besides, knowledge and culture spread all around the world. It helps humans develop in a great way.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：需依据给定提示写作，涵盖对发明的介绍以及其影响和意义，不能遗漏要点，有字数要求且开头已给定。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头承接给定语句，引出要介绍的发明——轮子，点明其在历史发明中的重要地位；
第二步，介绍轮子发明的时间、材质以及发明者未知等基本信息；接着阐述轮子在交通、贸易、文化传播等方面的影响和意义；
第三步，总结轮子这项发明对人类发展的巨大推动作用。
[亮点词汇]
① be made of 由……制成
② at that time 在那时
③ all around the world 世界各地
[高分句型]
① I think the first great invention is the one that is still very important today—the wheel.（think后为省略that的宾语从句，that引导定语从句）
② This invention has made traveling faster and made it easier to carry heavy things.（make + 宾语 + 宾补结构，“it”作形式宾语，真正宾语是后面的不定式）
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