2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文(六)
简介:
《2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文》系列文档:中考英语写作备考的专业之选。
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专业打造,助力考生在中考英语写作中脱颖而出,轻松斩获高分。
一、书面表达
1.外教Edward爱好美术,喜欢运动。他想在任教期满前再体验一次中国文化。假设你是李雷,请根据下面的要点,写一封邮件,邀请他到你家过周末。
weekend plan 内容要点 参考词汇
sports or drawing play basketball, paint, ...
experience Chinese culture make jiaozi, write with a Chinese brush (毛笔), ...
注意:
1.文中必须包含上表中的两个要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息;
3.词数:不少于 70 词;开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To Edward@
Subject Weekend Plan
Hi, Edward! I’m Li Lei. I hear that you would like to experience more about Chinese culture before going back.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Lei
【答案】例文:
Hi, Edward!
I’m Li Lei. I hear that you would like to experience more about Chinese culture before going back. So why not come to my home for the weekend I have a good plan.
As both of us like sports and drawing, let’s play basketball and paint in the morning. After that, we can practise writing with a Chinese brush together. It’s not easy but makes us peaceful. You can also sense the beauty of Chinese characters. To experience more, we are going to make jiaozi which is one of the most traditional foods in China. It must be meaningful to have jiaozi made by yourself. I’m sure you will have great fun.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏内容提示中周末计划的信息,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,邀请外教Edward到家里过周末;
第二步,具体阐述周末计划安排;
第三步,书写总结,表达“希望外教到家里过周末”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①sense the beauty of 感受……的美
②meaningful 有意义的
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①I hear that you would like to experience more about Chinese culture before going back.(that引导宾语从句)
②To experience more, we are going to make jiaozi which is one of the most traditional foods in China. (不定式表目的;which引导定语从句修饰“jiaozi”)
2.假如你是李磊,即将初三毕业。你的外国笔友Tom对你初中三年的学习和生活很感兴趣。请你结合以下问题回一封电子邮件:
1. What did you like best about your school life
2. What was the biggest problem for you as a junior student
3. Who helped you most And how
4. What do you think of your school life
要求: 1. 参考以上问题,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于 70 词(开头已经给出,但不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I’m going to graduate from junior high schoo1. I know you’re interested in how I feel about those three years of school year.
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Yours,
Li Lei
【答案】范文:
Dear Tom,
I’m going to graduate from junior high schoo1. I know you’re interested in how I feel about those three years of school year. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life.
I like the Football Club best because I’ve made quite a few friends by joining the club. Moreover, it’s an excellent chance to learn team spirit.
However, I’ve also met some problems over the three years. The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. Whenever I’m in great need, my English teacher always comes to me, so she is the person who has helped me most in the junior high school.
All in all, I enjoy my school life because it’s colorful and meaningful.
How about your school life Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇应用文;
时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”的内容,可适当再添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“就要初中毕业”引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“在学校生活中最喜欢的事情、自己最大的问题、谁帮助自己最多、怎么帮以及自己认为初中生活怎么样”等几个方面进行介绍。
第三步,书写结语。表示希望收到对方的来信。
[亮点词汇]
①quite a few相当多
②between…and…两者之间
③write to sb. 给某人写信
[高分句型]
①I like the Football Club best because I’ve made quite a few friends by joining the club.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies.(特殊疑问词+动词不定式结构)
3.为配合我区开展“创建文明城区(build a civilized county)”活动,学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容,用英语写一篇参赛短文。
提示:
1. 衣着整洁;
2. 保护环境;
3. 待人有礼,乐于助人;
4. 遵守交通规则;
5. ......
要求:
1. 词数80-120左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
How to Behave Well
In order to build a civilized county, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
How to Behave Well
In order to build a civilized city, we should try our best to behave well in the activities.
It’s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don’t throw litter or spit about. It’s good manners to say “Thank you” and “Please” and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should offer our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,说明文章主题是介绍如何表现良好;
第二步,按照提示所给内容介绍如何成为行为良好的人;
第三步,呼吁大家成为一个行为良好的人,让城市更美丽。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best尽某人最大的努力
②be friendly to sb.对某人很友好
③be ready to do sth.乐意做某事
④had better not do sth.最好不做某事
[高分句型]
①It’s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy.(it固定句式)
② For example, when we are on a bus, we should offer our seats to the old and the women with babies.(when引导的时间状语从句)
③If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.(if引导的条件状语从句)
4.在你的学校生活、家庭生活、社会活动及兴趣爱好等方面,一定发生过让你引以为豪的事情。请以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题,根据以下要求,用英语写一篇短文,记述一件令你感到自豪的事情。
要求:
1)介绍这件令你感到自豪的事情以及你感到自豪的原因;
2)语言表达准确, 语意通顺、连贯, 书写工整、规范;
3)词数100左右;
4)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
One Thing I’m Proud of
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【答案】例文
One Thing I’m Proud of
I still remember how I became good at English.
Every English class used to be like a bad dream for me. I didn’t understand my teacher most of the time. One day, the teacher talked with me and gave me some useful advice. I began to review new words from time to time, even on the way to school. I read aloud to practice pronunciation. I watched English videos and kept a diary in English. Whenever I met new words, I looked them up in a dictionary. I kept using English every day. Practice makes perfect. About two months later, I got an “A” on the final exam.
I am really proud of this experience because it helps me realize that everyone can achieve their goals through hard work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题写作;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,要求记叙让自己感到骄傲的一件事,写作时要紧扣题目,适当添加细节,使文章内容更加丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,说明记忆深刻的让自己骄傲的事;
第二步,详细介绍令自己骄傲的事——是如何擅长英语的;
第三步,表达这段经历给自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do过去常常做……
②look up查阅
③keep doing持续做……
[高分句型]
①Whenever I met new words,I looked them up in a dictionary.(时间状语从句)
②I am really proud of this experience because it helps me realize that everyone can achieve their goals through hard work.(复合从句,because引导原因状语从句,realize后跟宾语从句)
5.你校学生会正在筹办一个在线阅读社团。你想让更多人了解并加入社团。请根据以下表格提示内容,给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文,介绍开办社团的原因以及社团成员发展计划等。
Reasons to run the club ① the wide use of smartphones ② develop people’s reading interest
The plan of increasing members ask friends to introduce the club to others and ask them to join
... ...
要求:1. 参考表格提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70词。
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【答案】例文
As we all know, reading is beneficial to us. Recently, our school is planning to run an online reading club. On the one hand, with the wide use of smartphones, more and more people like reading online, so it’s necessary to run an online reading club. On the other hand, the online reading club can also develop people’s reading interest.
So how can we increase members You can ask friends to introduce the club to others and ask them to join it. If you become one of the members of the club, you can share and discuss your ideas with other members and develop the habit of reading every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为介绍在线阅读社团;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏“表格”中的提示要点,注意要点要齐全,文章不得出现你的任何真实信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题。表明“阅读对我们有益,我们学校正筹办一个在线阅读社团”,并介绍开办社团的原因;
第二步,介绍社团成员发展计划;
第三步,介绍成为社团成员的好处:与其他成员交流和讨论阅读想法和观点并能养成每天阅读的习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①be beneficial to对……有益
②on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……另一方面……
③discuss...with...与……讨论
④develop the habit of...养成……的习惯
[高分句型]
①It’s necessary to run an online reading club.(It作形式主语)
②If you become one of the members of the club, you can share and discuss your ideas with other members and develop the habit of reading every day.(If引导条件状语从句)
6.三年的初中生活即将结束,你一定有许多心里话想对父母、恩师、同学或者朋友说。某校广播站正在举行“我想对你说”为主题的征文活动,请根据以下问题提示,用英语完成征文。
提示:
(1) Who do you want to say to
(2) What will you say to him or her
(3) Why do you want to say so
注意:
1.词数: 100词左右;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、班级等信息;
3.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
I want to say “________” to ________
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【答案】例文
I want to say “I love you” to my dad
Dad, you are the best dad in the world. With your care and love, I had three happy years of my junior school life. And today I just want to say “I love you” to you.
Dad, you are always taking so good care of me that I grow up happily without getting hurt. Whenever I need your help, you will be there. Moreover, you always encourages me in time so that I can regain confidence. Above all, you are a good listener. Thank you for letting me be myself. It is your help, encouragement and listening that make a great difference to me.
On the way to my growth, you remain the sunshine all the time, which warms me, especially when in trouble. I hope that one day, just like you, when I have children of my own I can be the rock on which they stand.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,突出写作重点;注意使用一些连接词,使得上下文逻辑连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,补充题目,点明想对谁说以及说什么;
第二步,阐述为什么想说这句话,主要介绍这个人在成长路上对自己的帮助、爱护等;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的希望和决心。
[亮点词汇]
① take good care of 好好照顾
② grow up 长大
③ encourage 鼓励
④ so that 以便;所以
⑤ above all 最重要的是,尤其是
[高分句型]
① Moreover, you always encourages me in time so that I can regain confidence. (so that引导结果状语从句)
② It is your help, encouragement and listening that make a great difference to me.(强调句)
③ On the way to my growth, you remain the sunshine all the time, which warms me, especially when in trouble. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
7.2022年“设计激活世遗”国际文创大赛作品征集活动即将开始。该活动面向全球征集以世界文化遗产为主题,兼具艺术性与实用性的文创产品。假设你是以下某一件文创产品的设计者,请你用英语为你的作品写一篇推介短文,简要介绍该产品并阐述其文化内涵。
要求:
(1)文中不得出现校名、人名等真实信息;
(2)词数:110词左右;
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【答案】例文
Fans are widely known, among which folding fans are the most famous and most Chinese. In the folding fan culture, it can be said that it is the standard configuration of famous families and scholarly children. Today, I recommend folding fans.
Folding fans are easy to carry because they are foldable. They are the most popular and almost everyone has one in ancient times. The folding fan can be opened and closed freely. When it is opened, it can be used. When it is closed, it can be hidden. It has the meaning of advancing and retreating freely and being carefree.
Because the folding fan is both artistic and practical, it can not only cool the fan, but also watch and play. Its shape is simple and smooth, easy to carry, hidden in the sleeve, flying between the fingers, gently shaking the fan bone, which is unspeakably elegant and indifferent.
Folding fans is refined and elegant, with integrity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为产品推介;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:注意选择其中的一个作品作为自己的产品进行推介,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。从所给的产品中选择一件作为自己的产品,然后介绍该产品并阐述其文化内涵。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。首先提出自己要推介的产品——折扇;其次具体介绍折扇的文化内涵;接着介绍折扇的作用。
第三步:书写结语。表示“折扇是儒雅风流,气节风骨”。
[亮点词汇]
①the most famous最著名的
②the meaning of……的含义
③not only…, but also…不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①In the folding fan culture, it can be said that it is the standard configuration of famous families and scholarly children.(that引导的宾语从句)
②Folding fans is easy to carry because they are foldable.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③Its shape is simple and smooth, easy to carry, hidden in the sleeve, flying between the fingers, gently shaking the fan bone, which is unspeakably elegant and indifferent.(which引导的定语从句)
8.初中三年,或兴奋,或失落,一切过往,皆为序章。毕业之际,学校将举办以“Sharing”为主题的演讲活动。请根据下面的要点提示,与一篇演讲稿:
1.分享心情:高兴、激动、不舍;
2.分享心得:在学习、人际交往、克服困难方面的心得;
3.分享未来:暑假安排、未来目标。
注意:
1、文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息;
2、词数在80-100之间,已给出的文字不计入总词数。
Sharing
Good morning, my dear teachers and friends! It is my great honor to make a speech here. I will graduate from my school soon.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
【答案】例文
Sharing
Good morning, my dear teachers and friends! It is my great honor to make a speech here. I will graduate from my school soon. It’s hard to say farewell to all of you.
During the past three years, I realize that we should take study seriously. For myself, I always work hard in class. I listen to teachers carefully and take notes. I finish homework on time. My classmates often help with my schoolwork. With their help, I overcome lots of difficulties and become much better. I want to say thank you to all the people who have helped me.
This summer holiday, I plan to visit my grandparents in another city. And in the future, I’ll keep on studying hard and stick to my dream. I will never give up on my new journey.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出本文主题;
第二步,介绍过去三年在学习、人际交往、克服困难方面的心得;
第三步,分享暑假安排、未来目标。
[亮点词汇]
①take note记笔记
②on time按时
③keep on doing sth继续做某事
④give up放弃
[高分句型]
①It’s hard to say farewell to all of you.(动词不定式作主语)
②I want to say thank you to all the people who have helped me.(who引导定语从句)
9.在我们的学习和生活中,能够全身心地投入到一件事情中去,享受做事情的过程,是一种幸福!但求耕耘,不问收获!某英文网站正在以”全身心投入(Devotion)”为主题的征文活动。假如你是慧洁,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,包含下列问题:
1. What did you devote yourself to 2. How did you do it 3. What have you learnt from the experience ...
注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2. 词数100词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Devotion
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【答案】范文:
Five years ago, I started to devote myself to painting, which turned out to be one of the most important experiences in my life.
One day, I saw some of my schoolmates painting in the art room. The colorful pictures caught my attention immediately. I was so drawn to the beauty in front of me that I joined the Painting Club. After that, no matter whatever happened, I still was on time to each art lesson and finished each painting carefully.
By doing this, I developed my ability and decided that I wanted to completely devote myself to painting. Not only did I win countless awards but also my painting journey helped me grow into a better person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生要注意不要遗漏信息提示,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。表明自己全心投入到画画中去的观点。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。讲述自己是如何爱上绘画的以及自己的做法是怎样的。
第三步,书写结语。简单地阐述自己在这次经历中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①devote oneself to全身致力于
②in front of在……之前
③on time按时
④not only…but also… 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Five years ago, I started to devote myself to painting, which turned out to be one of the most important experiences in my life. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Not only did I win countless awards but also my painting journey helped me grow into a better person.(倒装句)
10.“研学旅行”是以组织中小学生集体旅行的方式走出校园,以各种不同的形式亲近社会与自然而开展的研究性学习与旅行体验相结合的教育活动。每个学期学校都会组织类似活动,大部分学生会参加,他们认为通过研学活动可以增加不一样的体验,也有小部分学生不参加,他们认为学习时间过于紧张,不如在学校自习。对此,你的看法是什么?请根据以下要点提示为校刊写一篇英语短文。
1、要点提示:①介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受;
②表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由(至少2点)。
2、注意事项:①短文内容应包含提示的要点,可适当增加情节,以使行文连贯;
②80词左右;
③文中不得出现个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇:研学旅行 study trip; 乘骑设施 ride
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
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【答案】例文:
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Last year, we went to the USA. We had a good time there. We made friends with them who are interested in Chinese. We studied English with them. I think a study trip is a good way for students to study.
When we have a study trip, we can visit many places of natural beauty. During the study trip, we can learn many things that we can’t learn at school. We can be served with different new food and know more things about different customs.
In my opinion, we should hold more activities like this. If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries.
I hope study trips are becoming more and more popular.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”关于研学旅行的写作要求,用英语写一篇短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写作开头已给出,点名主题,“研学旅行”现在很受学生欢迎;
第二步,介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受;
第三步,表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由;
第四步,表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②have a good time玩得高兴
③be served with向……提供
④in one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①We made friends with them who are interested in Chinese. (who引导的定语从句)
②If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries. (If引导的条件状语从句;because引导的原因状语从句)
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