2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文(十二)
简介:
《2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文》系列文档:中考英语写作备考的专业之选。
精准贴合考纲:深度剖析中考英语写作考纲要求,涵盖记叙文、议论文、应用文等全题型,精准匹配考试场景,助力考生有的放矢地备考。
专业范文引领:由资深英语教育专家精心编撰范文,语言地道、结构严谨,词汇与句式丰富多样,为考生提供高质量的写作范例,引领写作方向。
深度写作指导:深入解析写作思路,精准点拨要点,标注亮点词汇与高分句型,助力考生领悟写作精髓,提升语言运用与表达能力。
高效背诵积累:考前冲刺必备,篇幅精炼,便于考生快速背诵,积累实用词汇与句式,灵活运用到考试写作中,提高答题效率与质量。
专业打造,助力考生在中考英语写作中脱颖而出,轻松斩获高分。
一、书面表达
1.某英文网站正在开展以“A Memorable School Event”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下内容提示,用英文写一篇短文投稿,介绍一次令你难忘的学校活动。
1.活动的名称和时间;
2.活动的具体内容;
3.你在活动中的经历和感受;
4.这次活动给你带来的影响。
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I’m excited to share a memorable school event with you. It was the School Sports Meeting held last month.
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【答案】例文
I’m excited to share a memorable school event with you. It was the School Sports Meeting held last month. The festival lasted for a week and was filled with various activities. There were art exhibitions displaying.
I participated in the painting competition. I spent days preparing my work, carefully choosing the theme and colors. When the results were announced, I was so nervous. To my great joy, I won the first prize. I felt extremely proud and it was a huge confidence boost.
This event not only allowed me to show my artistic talent but also made me more confident. It also inspired me to explore more in the field of art. Whenever I think of it, I’m filled with a sense of achievement.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,按题目要求叙述活动的名称,时间和内容。
第二步,根据提示内容描述活动带来的感受和影响。
[亮点词汇]
①be filled with 充满
②not only…but also… 不仅……而且……
③a sense of achievement 成就感
[高分句型]
①There were art exhibitions displaying.(there be句型)
②When the results were announced, I was so nervous.(when引导的时间状语从句)
2.张宜的英国朋友Ken正在学习中国古典故事,他来信向你询问相关的知识。请你根据下面所给的要点提示,以张宜的名义回复。
要点提示:
What’s your favorite Chinese ancient story
What does it talk about
注意:文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;词数100左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
备选故事:愚公移山Yu Gong Moves a Mountain;
女娲补天Nu Wa Repairs the Sky;
西游记Journey to the West;
后羿射日Hou Yi Shoots the Suns
Dear Ken,
I’m glad to learn that you are interested in Chinese ancient stories. Now let me share my favorite one with you.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Yi
【答案】例文:
Dear Ken,
I’m glad to learn that you are interested in Chinese ancient stories. Now let me share my favorite one with you.
My favorite story is Yu Gong Moves a Mountain. It revolves around an old man named Yu Gong. In front of his house stood two enormous mountains. These mountains were so huge that they made it extremely difficult for his family to travel. Despite being old and facing numerous challenges, Yu Gong decided to move the mountains together with his family. Some people laughed at him, thinking his idea was completely impossible. They believed that the task was far beyond their capabilities. But Yu Gong held onto his belief. He firmly thought that as long as they persevered and kept working hard, they could surely achieve their goal. This story tells us a profound truth: with unwavering perseverance, we have the power to overcome any difficulty that comes to us.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Yi
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信;
② 时态:时态为 “一般现在时” 和 “一般过去时”;
③ 提示:依据题目所给提示,明确分享了最喜欢的中国古代故事,并详细阐述故事内容及传达的道理,避免遗漏关键信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇表明很高兴得知Ken对中国古代故事感兴趣,愿意分享自己最喜欢的故事;
第二步,指出最喜欢的故事是《愚公移山》,详细介绍此故事
第三步,点明故事告诉我们只要有坚定不移的毅力就能克服困难的道理。
[亮点词汇]
① revolve around 围绕;以……为中心
② hold onto 坚持;紧紧抓住
[高分句型]
① In front of his house stood two enormous mountains.(倒装句)
② These mountains were so huge that they made it extremely difficult for his family to travel.(so...that...引导结果状语从句)
3.当今,微博在人们的日常生活中已经成为一种时尚,成为一种必不可少的交流工具,但过度或不当的使用不仅浪费时间、精力和金钱,还会影响生活的和谐。请根据下图提示,用英语写一篇短文,对图片所示现象加以分析,并谈谈你的观点和理由(至少两点)。
注意:
词数60左右
1. 可进行必要的想象和发挥,但不要逐句翻译。
2. 参考词汇:微博microblog;时尚fashion
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【答案】
Microblog, as its name indicates, is a kind of blog, which is more and more widely used by a growing number of young people to find fun in life in their spare time to relieve the pressure from study, to get well-informed of the latest news and so on.
There is no denying the fact that it has become a symbol of fashion and brought much convenience to our life. With a computer or a cell phone, we can text whatever we like, and immediately people who are concerned about us may receive it. Not only can we respond to it immediately, we can also type some words in reply to them should we be interested.
While blog has become a trend, we should take care not to take too much time and energy to it because we can’t afford to. Therefore, we should use microblog reasonably, and let the microblog serve us better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文。
②时态:一般现在时。
③提示:先认真观察图片,然后适当发挥,注意从两方面进行论述,将使用微博的优缺点介绍清楚。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,介绍什么是微博。
第二步,介绍使用微博的优缺点。
第三步,阐述注意事项,作出总结。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②spare time空闲时间
③a symbol of一种……的象征
[高分句型]
①There is no denying the fact that it has become a symbol of fashion and brought much convenience to our life. (there be句型)
②With a computer or a cell phone, we can text whatever we like, and immediately people who are concerned about us may receive it. (who引导定语从句)
4.Topic Today
ABC English 校园版邀你投稿!
My English Study Plan
假如你是李明,打算向 ABC English 投稿,谈你的英语学习计划。请根据以下内容提示用英语完成稿件。
内容提示:
Why do you study English How will you study English
Will you talk with any English-speaker Something more about your study plan.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校;词数 60~80;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My English Study Plan
I will put more time and energy into English study.
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【答案】例文
My English Study Plan
I will put more time and energy into English study. I study English for the reasons as follows. For one thing, English, as an international language is a very important tool in communication with foreigners. For another, English can broaden our horizons since most texts of many fields on the Internet are written in English. I will study English by memorizing a lot of words, listening to English music and practicing spoken English as much as possible. Besides, I will talk with an English-speaking native if I can get such a chance, because it’s a good opportunity to put what I have learned into practice.
All in all, I will do my best to study English and I’m sure I will make much progress.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:需依据给定提示完成写作,涵盖学习英语的原因、学习方法、是否与英语母语者交流以及更多学习计划相关内容,不能遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇表明会投入更多时间精力学习英语,引出下文;
第二步:阐述学习英语的原因,如英语是国际交流重要工具、能拓宽视野等;接着介绍学习方法,像记单词、听英语音乐、练口语等;还提及若有机会会和英语母语者交流及原因;
第三步:总结会尽力学习英语并相信会取得进步。
[亮点词汇]
① put…into… 投入(时间、精力等)
② broaden one’s horizons 拓宽视野
③ as much as possible 尽可能多地
[高分句型]
① For another, English can broaden our horizons since most texts of many fields on the Internet are written in English.(since引导原因状语从句)
② Besides, I will talk with an English-speaking native if I can get such a chance, because it’s a good opportunity to put what I have learned into practice.(if引导条件状语从句,because引导原因状语从句)
5.假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展以“Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语短文进行投稿,介绍自己喜欢的运动并谈谈运动带来的好处以及你是如何坚持做运动的。内容提示:
What sports do you like
What are the benefits of doing sports
How can you keep doing sports
Something more about your ideas.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;标题 和首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
As the saying goes,exercise is to the body what reading is to the mind.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Enjoy sports, and it will make our life colorful!
【答案】例文
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
As the saying goes, exercise is to the body what reading is to the mind. I’m a soccer lover. I enjoy playing football with my friends in free time and it brings me much fun. There is no doubt that doing sports is extremely helpful to us. It can build up our bodies and keep us healthy and strong, and also sharpen our willpower. What’s more, exercising can help to relax ourselves and shape our confidence, which helps us better handle study stress.
To keep doing sports, we should love sports first because love is the greatest power. Second, making a plan is very important. It makes doing sports more effective. Last but not least, it’s a good choice to do sports with a partner who shares the same interest, as we can cheer each other on and make progress together.
Enjoy sports, and it will make our life colorful!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:文章要点已经给出,按照话题展开阐述,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己喜欢的运动项目;
第二步,从身体锻炼、心理调节两方面论述运动的好处,同时给出坚持运动的具体方法,包括热爱运动、制定计划和结伴运动;
第三步,总结并升华主题,强调享受运动对生活的积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
① build up 增强;建立
② What’s more 而且;此外
③ Last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
④ sharpen one’s willpower 磨炼意志力
⑤ cheer...on 为……加油打气
[高分句型]
① There is no doubt that doing sports is helpful to us.(同位语从句 )
② What’s more, exercising can help to relax ourselves and shape our confidence, which helps us better handle study stress.(定语从句)
③ Last but not least, it’s a good choice to do sports with a partner who shares the same interest, as we can cheer each other on and make progress together.(定语从句)
6.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack发来邮件,想了解中国的茶文化、饮茶的好处,以及想亲身体验中国茶文化。请你根据以下内容给他回一封邮件,并邀请他来体验茶文化。
Subject: Chinese Tea Culture
To: Li Hua
From: Jack
Dear Li Hua,
Long time no see! I miss you so much. I’m writing to tell you that I’m really interested in Chinese tea culture. Could you please introduce something about the tea culture What are the benefits (好处) of drinking tea I’ve also heard that the best way to learn more about Chinese tea culture is to experience it by myself. So is there any chance for me I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Jack
Subject: Chinese Tea Culture
To: Jack
From: Li Hua
Dear Jack,
Long time no see! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
1. 词数在100词左右,邮件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可以适当发挥;
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
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【答案】范文
Subject: Chinese Tea Culture
To: Jack
From: Li Hua
Dear Jack,
Long time no see! I’m so glad to hear that you’re interested in Chinese tea culture.
Chinese tea culture has a long history of over 4,000 years. There are many types of tea, such as green tea, black tea, and oolong tea. Each tea has its unique flavor and health benefits. Drinking tea is not only a daily habit but also a way to relax and enjoy life. It has many health benefits, like improving digestion and reducing stress.
If you want to experience Chinese tea culture, I’d love to invite you to visit China. We can visit tea plantations, watch traditional tea ceremonies, and even try making tea ourselves. It will be a wonderful and unforgettable experience!
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是邮件;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:考生应注意不要遗漏书信中的几个问题,均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴你对中国茶文化感兴趣。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照书信中的问题——茶文化知识、喝茶的好处、想体验茶文化等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
②look forward to doing sth.期望做某事
③such as比如
[高分句型]
①Drinking tea is not only a daily habit but also a way to relax and enjoy life. (not only...but also...用法)
②If you want to experience Chinese tea culture, I’d love to invite you to visit China. (If引导的条件状语从句)
7.假如你是李明,即将参加主题为 “My Coming Summer Holiday” 的英语口语比赛,请你写一篇参赛稿。
内容提示:What are you going to do to keep healthy How will you care about your parents
Will you read any books Why or why not Something more about the holiday.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校;100 词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Coming Summer Holiday
Hello, everyone! I’m happy to take part in the spoken English competition.
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【答案】例文:
My Coming Summer Holiday
Hello, everyone! I’m happy to take part in the spoken English competition. I have a plan for my holiday. As we all know, health is very important, so I should keep on exercising and get enough sleep to keep fit. To have meaningful holiday, I prefer to read more classics and spend less time on computer. I can show my love and care to my parents by sharing some housework. I also want to make more friends to enrich my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般将来时态和一般现在时态;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,引出主题:点明参加英语竞赛并概述暑假计划;
第二步:具体阐述计划,包括健康管理、学习提升、 家庭责任和社交拓展等方面;
第三步:书写结语,表达活动让假期更有意义。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②As we all know众所周知
③keep on doing sth.坚持做某事
④prefer to更喜欢
[高分句型]
①To have meaningful holiday, I prefer to read more classics and spend less time on computer.(动词不定式做目的状语)
8.Write a passage in at least 60 words on the topic of “A different holiday”.以“一个不同的假期”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。
你有什么不同的假期经历?请结合你自身的经历来聊一聊这个不同假期中你所做的事和你的感想。(注意:文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。)
A different holiday
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【答案】例文:
A different holiday
The winter holiday of 2020 was different due to the rapid spread of Covid-19 and almost everyone had to stay indoors. While most people were complaining, I made full use of the time. I read every day to keep the boredom away and learnt some new things. In addition, I started to grow vegetables on my balcony. Though the tomatoes I grew were so tiny that I couldn’t even make a nice dish, I still had much fun taking care of them. I am very glad that I participated in different activities during the difficult time. These rewarding hobbies made that holiday a special one.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:需结合自身经历,围绕“一个与众不同的假期”进行写作,不能出现个人信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍不同的假期是什么时候;
第二步,具体介绍假期中所做的事情;
第三步,介绍对于这个不同的假期的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①due to由于
②make full use of充分利用
③keep the boredom away远离无聊
[高分句型]
Though the tomatoes I grew were so tiny that I couldn’t even make a nice dish, I still had much fun taking care of them. (让步状语从句、“so...that”引导结果状语从句)
9.短视频在青少年中广受欢迎,它们能够带来积极影响(如娱乐放松、学习新技能)和潜在的问题(如浪费时间、沉迷风险)。请以“Short Videos:Fun or Harmful ”为题,根据以下要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要求:1.结合自身或身边事例,谈谈你对青少年看短视频这一现象、的看法;
2.提出合理使用短视频的建议(如设定观看时间、选择优质内容);
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
4.词数100左右。
参考词汇:entertainment (娱乐) addiction (沉迷) viewing limit (观看限制) high-quality (高质量的)
Short Videos: Fun or Harmful
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【答案】例文
Short Videos: Fun or Harmful
Short videos are very popular with teenagers today. They offer quick entertainment and can help us learn new skills. However, there are growing concerns that excessive use may lead to time-wasting and even addiction.
I have noticed that many of my friends enjoy watching short videos to relax and laugh. Some even learn new recipes or dance moves. But I have also seen them spend hours on their phones, which can lead to addiction and get in the way of their studies.
To use short videos wisely, I suggest setting a viewing limit each day and choosing high-quality content that inspires creativity. By doing this, we can enjoy the fun while avoiding the negative effects of addiction.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,结合身边事例,谈谈对青少年看短视频这一现象、的看法;
第二步,提出合理使用短视频的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be popular with受……欢迎
②lead to导致
③get in the way of妨碍
[高分句型]
①However, there are growing concerns that excessive use may lead to time-wasting and even addiction.(定语从句)
②I have noticed that many of my friends enjoy watching short videos to relax and laugh.(宾语从句)
10.初中三年是我们成长的重要阶段,你一定有很多苦乐参半的 (bittersweet) 经历。学校英文校报“青春记忆”专栏正在征集关于“初中三年的苦与乐”为主题的文章。请你以英文投稿,分享一件在初中经历的苦乐参半的往事,并谈谈你的收获。
提示词:painful, challenge, help, growth
提示问题:
●What was your bittersweet experience in the junior high school Please describe it.
●What have you learnt from the experience
The 3-year junior high school is important to all of us and it is filled with various experiences.
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【答案】例文
The 3-year junior high school is important to all of us and it is filled with various experiences. One of the years was painful and unforgettable.
When I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and I almost gave it up. I met a lot of challenges. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it.
I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. She is a light on my path of growth. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③提示:根据提示写作。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:承接给出的开头,点明有苦乐参半的经历;
第二步:详细描述事情的起因、经过和结果等;
第三步:介绍自己从经历中学到的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①do well in在某方面做得好
②had a talk with与……谈话
③Since then从那以后
[高分句型]
①When I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. (When引导的时间状语从句)
②As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. (As soon as引导的时间状语从句)
③I think it is a happy thing to help others. (省略that的宾语从句)
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