【中考真题汇编】专项查漏补缺：09书面表达（含答案解析）-2025年中考英语

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【中考真题汇编】专项查漏补缺：09书面表达-2025年中考英语
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．（2024·北京西城·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom与你交流如何安排课余生活，请你用英语回复一封邮件，向他介绍你通常在课余时间做什么及原因。
提示词语：enjoy, sports, relax, stress
提示问题：·How do you spend your spare time
Explain your reasons.
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to tell you something about my spare time.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2025·山东枣庄·二模）我们常说，劳动最光荣。刷一次碗，洗一次衣服，做一次大扫除，不仅能让父母感到欣慰，也能锻炼我们的动手能力，培养我们的责任感和自信心。请根据下面的要点提示以“Help with Some Housework”为题写一篇英语作文。
要点：
1. 你是否经常帮助父母做家务？
2. 你觉得做家务对自己、对家庭有什么好处？
3. 描述一次做家务的经历及你的感想。
要求：
1. 包含以上要点；
2. 条理清晰，行文流畅；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名等信息；
4. 词数80~100。
Help with Some Housework
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3．（2025·山东枣庄·二模）阅读下面文章，请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于80词。把答案写在答题卡上相应位置。
When you receive an invitation from others, please make sure if there is RSVP on it. Some people may ask, “What is RSVP ” In fact, it is a short form of French words “Respondez sil vous plait”. It means that the sender (寄件人) wants to know if you’ll go to their event and you’re expected to give your answer. If you receive an invitation with RSVP on it, you should reply to the host as soon as possible.
Many people don’t reply to the host because they think it might upset (使生气) the host if their answer is “No”. However, this usually causes more trouble than a simple no. For example, if the host is unclear about the number of the guests, they won’t know how much food to order or how many seats to prepare.
A reasonable (合理的) RSVP often has a deadline (最终期限), which is about two or four weeks before the event. If you want to go to the event but can’t be sure about it, it’s best to refuse. You can tell the host why you can’t go.
Usually, invitation with RSVP will tell you how to reply. A formal (正式的) invitation, such as a wedding invitation, will have a reply card that you can return in an envelope (信封). You can write your answer on the reply card. Informal invitations, on the other hand, may have a telephone number, an email address, texting address, or other ways to reply, with instructions.
1. What does RSVP mean
2. Why don’t many people reply to the host
3. When is the deadline to reply
4. How can you reply to an invitation with RSVP
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4．（2025·四川内江·二模）近年来中学生的身体健康越来越受到重视，体育锻炼在学校教学中的重要性也日渐突出。假定你是李华，你校英语校报正在开展主题为“我运动，我健康”的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向校报投稿。
内容包括：
1.学校对体育锻炼的重视：
（1）学生每天上一节体育课；
（2）要求学生每天不少于一小时的锻炼时间；
2.你的运动方式（两种）；
3.你对体育锻炼的看法：
（1）……
（2）……
要求：
1.内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；
2.语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
4.词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Nowadays, schools pay attention to the students’ physical exercise very much. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s do more sports. In this way, we can be healthy and happy every day.
5．（2024·山东青岛·模拟预测）最近校园欺凌事件再次成为舆论焦点，你们班也开展了相关讨论。请根据以下要点以“Say NO to School-bullying”为题，为学校网站写一篇英语文章。
内容包括：
1. 欺凌行为的危害；
2. 提出至少两条建议，号召一起努力阻止校园暴力。
要求：
1.内容包括以上要点,可适当增加细节；
2.词数 80-100 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
Say NO to School-bullying
Recently, school-bullying is a hot topic again.
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6．（2024·广东深圳·模拟预测）双减政策的发布加上深圳市开展课后服务后，学生多了很多空闲时间。假如你是班长李华， 你将进行题为“如何保持健康校园生活”的发言。请你结合以下要点，用英语写一篇短文来介绍如何保持健康的校园生活。
参考词汇：课后服务 after-school service
Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua, the class monitor of Class Two, Grade Nine. I am going to make a speech about......
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7．（2024·广东深圳·二模）4月23日是“世界读书日”。你校英语社团计划开展主题为“体验英语文学之美”的英语读书会活动。假设你是被邀请的分享嘉宾李华，请根据以下提示为该活动准备一份发言稿。
内容要点：
1. 分享你喜欢的英语书籍类型及原因；
2. 介绍英语阅读的重要性（至少两点）；
3. 呼吁大家多读书。
要求：
1. 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯；
4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。
Boys and girls,
It’s my honor to share with you my reading experiences.
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That’s all! Thank you!
8．（2025·重庆沙坪坝·一模）随着科技的发展，机器人进入人类家庭，成为我们生活中的好帮手。人类似乎对机器人也有很多的依赖。这到底是好事还是坏事呢？请根据以下图片顺序完整讲述一个故事，文中要体现主人公Frank的变化和感悟。
要求：
1.80-120词；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校名称。
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9．（2025·河南平顶山·二模）一方水土养一方人，也孕育出丰富多彩的家乡文化。作为河南学子，你心目中最喜爱的家乡文化标志是什么 (例如：剪纸，泥塑，豫剧，功夫，烩面等)？请以“My Favorite Cultural Symbol”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
1.你最喜爱的家乡文化标志是什么；
2.你为什么最喜爱这个家乡文化标志；
3.你为推广家乡文化打算做哪些事情。
要求：
1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2.词数100左右。
My Favorite Cultural Symbol
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10．（2025·辽宁铁岭·一模）随着环境问题日益严重，保护地球已成为每个人的责任。作为中学生，我们也能为环保贡献力量。请以“Small Actions, Big Changes”为题，写一篇80—100词左右的英语短文。
内容包括：
(1)简述身边的环境问题(如垃圾、空气污染等)；
(2)提出至少三个日常环保建议(如节约用水、垃圾分类等)；
(3)呼吁大家共同行动。
要求：
(1)包括提示中所有的写作要点；
(2)条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
(3)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
(4)题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Small Actions, Big Changes
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now.
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11．（2025·甘肃陇南·模拟预测）“以爱为笔，绘就地球生机”。4月22日是世界地球日，作为中学生的我们也应为保护地球贡献自己的力量，请你根据下面的表格写一篇关于保护环境爱护地球的文章。
症状 土地沙化、河流污染、全球气温升高……
原因 砍伐树木、工厂排放废水废气……
应对措施 多植树、阻止工厂乱排废气废水……
要求： 1. 词数80词左右；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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12．（2025·广东广州·一模）上周学校开展了一项关于初三学生学业压力的调查活动。假设你是校报小记者李华，请根据以下思维导图，简述同学们在学习中遇到的问题并分享你的建议。
注意：
1.词数80 词左右(开头已给出，不计入词数)
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Last week, a survey on study pressure was carried out among Grade 9 students in our school.
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13．（2024·北京海淀·模拟预测）根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50 词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
积极求助是一种生活智慧。它能帮我们找到方向，带我们走出迷茫。
某英文网站正在开展以“积极求助”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你向他人求助的一次经历，以及你的收获。
提示词语：problem, encourage, explain, improve, confidence
提示问题：
·What is your story of asking for help
·What have you learned from it
Asking for help plays an important role in our life.
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14．（2025·辽宁朝阳·一模）假定你是李辉，你的英国朋友Eric对你们学校研发的新型AI（人工智能）机器人非常感兴趣。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：
（1）介绍新型AI机器人在日常生活中的一个应用；
（2）询问他对AI机器人的看法；
（3）期待他的回复。
注意：
（1）词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going I wanted to share something fascinating with you about AI robots.
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15．（2025·四川眉山·模拟预测）自从国家推行“双减”政策以来，学生有了更多的课余时间开展课外活动。你校英语社团将举办“怎样让我们的课余生活更有意义？”的演讲比赛，请你以“How to make our spare time more meaningful ”为主题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，分享你的课外活动和感受。
内容要点：1. 参加志愿者活动，如：看望老人，……；
2. 参加俱乐部，如：音乐俱乐部，……；
3. ……（至少补充两项活动）；
4. 你的感受。
注意：1. 词数80-100，已经给出的部分不计入总词数；
2. 演讲稿必须包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
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《【中考真题汇编】专项查漏补缺：09书面表达-2025年中考英语》参考答案
1．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to tell you something about my spare time.
I usually enjoy playing sports during my spare time. Playing sports with my friends allows us to bond and build stronger relationships. I spend some of my free time reading English books and magazines, too. I like English because it can widen my field of vision and provide me with a lot of knowledge. It is also a tool that can help me communicate with foreigners.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，主要介绍自己的课余生活，考生应注意标点符号及大小写等问题，避免语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。说明写信的目的；
第二步，具体介绍自己课余生活的安排以及这么安排的原因；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
②widen my field of vision 扩大我的眼界
③communicate with ... 与……沟通
[高分句型]
①I like English because it can widen my field of vision and provide me with a lot of knowledge.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②It is also a tool that can help me communicate with foreigners.（that引导的定语从句）
2．例文
Help with Some Housework
I often help my parents with housework. For example, I wash dishes, sweep the floor, and tidy my room every week. Doing housework is good for both me and my family. It helps me develop responsibility and learn life skills. Also, sharing chores makes my parents happy and our home cleaner. Last Sunday, I cleaned the kitchen alone. I wiped the table, washed the sink, and organized the fridge. Though tired, I felt proud when my mom smiled and said, “Thank you!”
This experience taught me that even small efforts can make a big difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己经常帮忙做家务；
第二步，根据题干的要点，描述做家务的好处和自己做家务的经历；
第三步，分享收获并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①for example 例如
②make a big difference 产生很大影响
[高分句型]
①Doing housework is good for both me and my family.（动名词作主语）
②This experience taught me that even small efforts can make a big difference.（宾语从句）
3．例文
When receiving an invitation with RSVP, which means the sender expects a reply about attendance, one should respond promptly. Many avoid answering due to fear of saying “no”, but this often creates more issues. A reasonable RSVP has a deadline two to four weeks before the event. If unsure about attending, it’s better to decline with an explanation. Formal invitations provide a reply card, while informal ones offer contact details for response.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇小作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明“RSVP”的含义；
第二步，根据题干的要点，简单回答题干中的相应问题；
[亮点词汇]
①avoid doing避免做某事
②due to由于
[高分句型]
①When receiving an invitation with RSVP, which means the sender expects a reply about attendance, one should respond promptly.（非限制性定语从句，时间状语从句）
②If unsure about attending, it’s better to decline with an explanation.（if引导的条件状语从句）
4．例文
Nowadays, schools pay attention to the students’ physical exercise very much. In our school, we have a P.E. class every day. Besides, we are required to exercise for at least one hour daily to stay healthy.
I enjoy different kinds of sports. My favorite is running because it helps me relax and build endurance. I usually run in the morning before class. I also like playing basketball with my friends after school. It’s not only fun but also improves teamwork.
In my opinion, exercise is very important. First, it keeps us strong and energetic. Second, it helps reduce stress and makes us happier. If we exercise regularly, we can study better and enjoy life more.
Let’s do more sports. In this way, we can be healthy and happy every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据题目要求，完整包含了学校对体育锻炼的重视、个人运动方式和看法三个要点，并进行了适当扩展；
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍学校对体育锻炼的重视；
第二步：描述个人喜欢的两种运动方式；
第三步：阐述对体育锻炼的看法；
第四步：总结呼吁多做运动。
[亮点词汇]
① pay attention to 关注
② build endurance 增强耐力
③ reduce stress 减轻压力
④ regularly 定期地
⑤ energetic 精力充沛的
[高分句型]
If we exercise regularly, we can study better and enjoy life more.（if引导的条件状语从句）
5．例文
Say NO to School-bullying
Recently, school-bullying is a hot topic again. Students showed their fear and parents and teachers also expressed their great concern about it. Our class had a heated discussion and we have reached some agreements on how to solve the problem .
School-bullying can cause severe physical injuries to the victims, leaving them with both immediate pain and potential long-term health problems. We should try every effort to prevent school-bullying from happening. First, if we meet with school-bulling, we should not answer violence with violence, because it will result in more fighting. Instead, we should tell our teachers or parents about it. They will help us deal with it well and protect us from the bad guys. More importantly, the whole society should pay more attention to both physical and mental health of adolescents .
All in all, every student should behave himself and keep away from school-bullying .
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据班会讨论，指明校园欺凌的危害，提出阻止校园欺凌的建议，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明校园欺凌再次成为焦点，自己班级针对校园欺凌进行了一次主题班会，引出下文；
第二步，说明校园欺凌的危害，给出关于阻止校园欺凌的建议，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，号召大家一起抵制校园欺凌，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①try every effort to do sth. 尽一切努力做某事
②prevent sth. from doing 阻止某事发生
③deal with 处理，应对
[高分句型]
①First, if we meet with school-bulling, we should not answer violence with violence, because it will result in more fighting.（原因状语从句）
②School-bullying can cause severe physical injuries to the victims, leaving them with both immediate pain and potential long-term health problems.（现在分词作状语）
6．例文
Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua, the class monitor of Class Two, Grade Nine. I am going to make a speech about how to have a healthy school life. Here is my advice.
First, when we have a rest during the classes, we can go to the playground and do exercise. It is a good way to play football or play basketball. We can try running as well. Everyone should go out of the classroom and breathe the fresh air so that we can have a healthy body and we can study better. Second, during the after-school service, we can join a club and take part in the activities. I have joined the Rocket Club and have learnt how to make and launch a rocket. It is a wonderful experience. We can make as many friends as we can and do some meaningful activities together. About our homework, we can finish the homework at school, and then we needn’t do any homework at home. We can have more free time to do the things we like to do. If we meet some problems in our homework, it is a good idea to ask for help from the teachers or classmates. They can help us at once and solve our problem immediately.
In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy school life!
Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，引出话题；
第二步、根据提示，介绍如何保持健康的校园生活；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make a speech作演讲
②as well也
③take part in参加
④at once立即
[高分句型]
①Everyone should go out of the classroom and breathe the fresh air so that we can have a healthy body and we can study better. (目的状语从句)
7．例文
Boys and girls,
It’s my honor to share with you my reading experiences. I’m crazy about English science fiction novels. They feature imaginative plots and creative ideas, which transport me to different universes and inspire my creativity. English reading matters a lot. It helps improve our language skills, including vocabulary and grammar. Also, it allows us to explore diverse cultures, making us more open-minded. Besides, English reading is a great stress reliever. After a tiring day, reading an interesting English story can take our minds off worries. Let’s read more English books and enjoy the beauty of English literature. Let the magic of words accompany us every day.
That’s all! Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇发言稿，属于应用文；
② 时态：时态主要使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：需依据给定的三个内容要点（分享喜欢的英语书籍类型及原因、介绍英语阅读重要性至少两点、呼吁多读书）进行写作，且要满足词数、格式等要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇表明荣幸分享阅读经历，引出喜欢的英语书籍类型。文中作者直接表明自己热衷于英语科幻小说；
第二步：阐述喜欢英语科幻小说的原因（富有想象力的情节和创意，能将自己带入不同宇宙并激发创造力），接着从三个方面介绍英语阅读的重要性（提升语言技能，包括词汇和语法；探索多元文化，使人更豁达；缓解压力，让人忘却烦恼）；
第三步：发出呼吁，号召大家多读英语书，享受英语文学之美，让文字的魅力伴随每一天。
[亮点词汇]
① be crazy about 热衷于
② matter a lot 非常重要
③ allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
[高分句型]
① They feature imaginative plots and creative ideas, which transport me to different universes and inspire my creativity.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
② Also, it allows us to explore diverse cultures, making us more open-minded.（现在分词making作状语）
8．例文
Frank was excited when a robot entered his home. It cooked delicious meals and cleaned the house. Over time, Frank became lazy. He let the robot do almost everything for him. One day, the robot stopped working, and Frank felt helpless. He realized that he should not rely on it too much. He needed to learn new skills and take care of his own life.
In the end, Frank decided to use the robot wisely, enjoying its help but also keeping his independence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据图片顺序叙述Frank拥有机器人后的生活变化；
第二步，通过生活发生的变化总结出Frank的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①over time随着时间推移
②rely on依赖
③take care of照顾
④in the end最后
[高分句型]
①Frank was excited when a robot entered his home. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②He realized that he should not rely on it too much. (that引导的宾语从句)
9．范文：
My Favorite Cultural Symbol
When it comes to my favorite cultural symbol, Henan Opera never fails to rank first in my mind. It symbolizes the richness of traditional Chinese culture.
There are many reasons why I like it best. The first is its use of vivid colors in makeup. Each color represents specific meanings, which expresses various information to the audience. Second, it has a unique singing style. Actors usually use singing skills to express emotions and characters’ thoughts. Last, the performances often present beautiful costumes. They are not only pleasant to look at, but also show characters’ personalities.
To promote our traditional culture, I plan to set up a club and call on my friends to learn this art form. What’s more, we can make videos and post them on the Internet to spread it. It should be considered as a historical and artistic treasure.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生写作时应注意要按材料要求写，需按要求介绍最喜爱的家乡文化标志、喜爱原因及推广打算，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己最喜爱的家乡文化标志是豫剧；
第二步，从妆容色彩、演唱风格、表演服饰等方面阐述喜爱豫剧的原因；
第三步，说明为推广家乡文化打算成立俱乐部、号召朋友学习并制作视频上网传播等做法。
[亮点词汇]
① rank first 位居第一
② make up 化妆
③ set up 建立
④ call on sb. to do sth. 号召某人做某事
[高分句型]
① When it comes to my favorite cultural symbol, Henan Opera never fails to rank first in my mind. (含有时间状语从句的复合句)
② Each color represents specific meanings, which expresses various information to the audience. (含有定语从句的复合句)
10．例文
Small Actions, Big Changes
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now. Nowadays, we can see rubbish everywhere, and the air is badly polluted. These environmental problems are threatening our lives.
As middle school students, we can do many things to protect the environment. First, we should save water by turning off the tap in time. Second, we can sort the waste properly to recycle more things. Third, we’d better choose public transportation, like buses and subways, instead of cars.
Let’s take these small actions right now. With everyone’s efforts, we can make a big change and create a better world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：简述身边的环境问题，提出日常环保建议，并呼吁大家共同行动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头指出地球是我们唯一的家园，目前正面临环境问题，需要我们的帮助，引出话题；
第二步，中间具体阐述中学生可以采取的环保行动，如及时关水龙头节约用水、正确垃圾分类、选择公共交通出行等；
第三步，结尾呼吁大家立刻行动起来，强调通过每个人的努力能带来大改变，创造美好世界。
[亮点词汇]
①threatening有威胁性的
②sort分类
③public transportation公共交通
[高分句型]
①These environmental problems are threatening our lives.（使用现在进行时）
②With everyone’s efforts, we can make a big change and create a better world.（运用“with+名词所有格+名词”的结构）
11．例文
As we all know, our environment is getting worse and worse. There are many reasons for it. People cut down too many trees and throw rubbish here and there. Factories let out their waste water into the rivers. This has caused some serious problems. For example, the land is sandy; the river is polluted; even the temperature of the Earth is rising. Also, there are too many cars in the street. The air is polluted and less clean than before.
What shall we do to save it My suggestions are as follows. To begin with, we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories pouring waste into the air or rivers. What’s more, when we go out, we can use sharing bikes or take buses instead of taking cars. As students, we must start small things. At school we can use both sides of paper. At home we also can use used water to water flowers. They can save energy and be good for our Earth.
We have only one Earth, and we should do everything to protect it, or we’ll regret.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“表格提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明环境污染的原因；
第二步，介绍环境污染导致的一些后果；
第三步，最后给出相应的应对措施。
[亮点词汇]
①As we all know众所周知
②let out释放（水、空气等）
③To begin with首先
④What’s more更重要的是
⑤instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①Also, there are too many cars in the street.（there be句型）
②What’s more, when we go out, we can use sharing bikes or take buses instead of taking cars.（时间状语从句）
12．例文：
Last week, a survey on study pressure was carried out among Grade 9 students in our school. Many students find it hard to manage time properly. They are often overwhelmed by a large amount of homework and lack a reasonable schedule. Also, some students haven’t adopted effective learning methods, making their study less efficient.
In my view, first, making a detailed plan is crucial. It helps allocate time for different subjects and rest. Second, explore suitable learning methods, like summarizing key points and making mind-maps. Additionally, take breaks during study to relax. With these ways, we can better handle study pressure.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，根据提示内容分享调查结果；
第三步，补充自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①a large amount of... 大量的……
②In my view 在我看来
③take breaks 休息
[高分句型]
①Many students find it hard to manage time properly.（“find it+adj. to do sth”结构）
②Also, some students haven’t adopted effective learning methods, making their study less efficient.（句中现在分词结构表示结果）
13．例文
Asking for help plays an important role in our life. It can help us find our way and lead us out of confusion.
Once, I had a big problem with my English writing. I didn’t know how to improve it. So I turned to my English teacher. She not only patiently explained the writing skills to me but also encouraged me. With her help, I practiced a lot and my writing has improved a lot.
I’ve learned that when we’re in trouble, we shouldn’t be afraid to ask for help. People around us can offer useful advice which helps us solve problems and gain confidence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：介绍自己向他人求助的一次经历以及收获，说明积极求助的重要性，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指明积极求助的重要性，引出下文；
第二步，介绍自己向他人求助的一次经历，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，分享自己的收获，注意用词准确，行文流畅。
[亮点词汇]
①find one’s way 找到方向
②turn to sb. 向某人求助
③be afraid to do sth. 害怕做某事
[高分句型]
①I’ve learned that when we’re in trouble, we shouldn’t be afraid to ask for help.（宾语从句）
②People around us can offer useful advice which helps us solve problems and gain confidence.（定语从句）
14．例文
Dear Eric,
How is everything going I wanted to share something fascinating with you about AI robots.
Recently, our school has developed a new type of AI robots that is being used in everyday life to assist students with their studies. This robot can provide personalized tutoring, help with homework, and even give quizzes to test our knowledge. It’s really amazing how it can adapt to each student’s learning style and pace.
I’d like to know your thoughts on AI robots. Do you think they will become more common in schools in the future How do you feel about having an AI assistant for your studies
I’m looking forward to hearing your opinion on this. It would be great to know how you perceive the role of AI in education.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，部分使用“现在完成时”；
③提示：向朋友分享学校新开发的AI机器人情况，并询问朋友对AI机器人在学校应用的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头问候朋友并表明写信目的，要分享关于AI机器人的趣事。
第二步，中间详细介绍学校新开发的AI机器人在日常生活中辅助学生学习的功能，如提供个性化辅导、帮助做作业、进行知识测验等，还提到其能适应学生的学习风格和节奏。
第三步，结尾询问朋友对AI机器人的看法，包括是否认为其未来在学校会更普遍，以及对有AI学习助手的感受，并表达期待朋友的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①fascinating迷人的；极有吸引力的
②personalized个性化的
③adapt to适应
[高分句型]
①This robot can provide personalized tutoring, help with homework, and even give quizzes to test our knowledge.（并列结构）
②It’s really amazing how it can adapt to each student’s learning style and pace.（it作形式主语）
15．例文
Dear friends,
Since the “Double Reduction” policy was carried out, we have had more spare time to enjoy after-school activities. Now let me tell you how I make my spare time more meaningful.
First, we can take part in more voluntary work, such as visiting the old and chatting with them. Second, we can join different clubs like music clubs or sports clubs. Third, it’s good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Fourth, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.
Through these activities, I’ve learned teamwork and responsibility. They make me happy and confident.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步：根据提示，分享自己的课外活动和感受；
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out实施
②take part in参加
③get close to接近
[高分句型]
①Now let me tell you how I make my spare time more meaningful.(how引导宾语从句)
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