【高考押题卷】2025年高考英语复习高频易错提高卷：应用文写作（含解析）

2025年高考英语复习新题速递之应用文写作
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 陕西二模） 假定你是李华，你和你的英国交换生好友David约好本周六晚一起去一家新开的餐馆吃饭，但你因故不能应邀前往。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示歉意；
（2）说明原因；
（3）下次再约。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear David，
_____________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
2．（2025 辽宁模拟） 假定你是校英语报记者，请用英语写一篇短文，报道学校最近组织的一次校园植树活动，并做出简单评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Planting Trees in the Campus
__________________________
3．（2025 浙江二模）假如你是李华，你们学校的校报英语论坛（English Forum）正在组织一次讨论活动。主题是"AI And Our Study"。请你写一篇英语文章投稿。
内容包括：
（1）AI用于学习的现状；
（2）你的看法或建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
4．（2025 黑龙江一模） 假定你是高三学生李华，上周四学校举办了高考百日誓师大会。请向英国朋友Chris写一封邮件，分享大会内容及你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：the 100﹣Day Pledge Ceremony百日誓师大会；
the National College Entrance Examination高考
Dear Chris，
I hope this email finds you well.___________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
5．（2025 抚顺模拟） 假定你是李华，你校正在举办以"社区服务"为主题的英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）你的一次社区服务经历；
（2）你的感悟或收获。
要求：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Community Service Experience
______
6．（2025 晋中模拟）你校英文报正在开展以社区志愿活动为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容
包括：
（1）你参加的活动；
（2）你的感受。
注意：1（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________
7．（2025 江西模拟）假定你是李华，你的英国网友Thomas在社交媒体上看到中国春节期间大门倒贴"福"字的习俗，他感到好奇并询问你。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）解释这个习俗的含义，即"福到了"；
（2）提及中国文化的博大精深；
（3）表达对他的祝福。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Thomas，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
8．（2025 甘肃一模）你校正举办主题为"我最喜欢的一首歌"的英语征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）介绍歌曲；
（2）说明喜欢的原因。
注意：
（1）题目自拟；
（2）写作词数应为80左右；
（3）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
9．（2025 江西模拟） 2025年蛇年春晚机器人扭秧歌节目吸引了全世界的关注，这是中国传统文化与现代科技的交融，给我们带来了强烈的视觉冲击，也让世界看到了中国科技的发展和进步。假定你是李华，请根据以下要求写一篇短文，并分享你的看法。
内容包括：
（1）简要介绍机器人扭秧歌的节目；
（2）谈谈节目背后的意义和影响；
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考词汇：春晚the Spring Festival Gala 秧歌舞yangko dance
What Humanoid Robots' Yangko Dance Brings us
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10．（2025 山西模拟） 你校英语俱乐部计划下周一举办以"How to Enhance Social Competitiveness"为主题的讲座，请你写一则通知。内容包括：
（1）讲座的时间、地点；
（2）注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
______
The English Club
11．（2025 河南模拟） 假定你是李华，你校将举办"科技与生活"主题演讲比赛，请你以"How to Balance Technology Use and Real﹣Life Connections"为题，写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）你的观点；
（2）具体措施。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear teachers and fellow students，
Good morning!
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12．（2025 自贡校级二模）假定你是李华，你校上周举办了"迎亚运"为主题的海报设计大赛，请为校英文报撰写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.比赛过程及结果；
2.比赛影响。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Poster Design Contest on Welcoming the Asian Games
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13．（2025 北京校级模拟） 假如你是红星中学的李华，你校开设了"中国传统文化体验"课程，请你给你的英国笔友Jim写一封信，介绍该课程的开展情况，内容包括：
（1）课程目的和内容；
（2）你的感悟。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
_____________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
14．（2025 吉林模拟）假定你是李华，在口语课上，外教Mike组织同学们讨论"能否在英语学习中使用翻译笔"。请你代表小组做总结发言，内容包括：
（1）小组观点；
（2）陈述理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello，everyone.It is an honor to represent our group in summarizing our discussion.
15．（2025 成都模拟）上周，你参加了校学生会组织的环保作品展。请给校英语报写一篇短文介绍此活动，内容包括：
1.活动过程；
2.个人感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
16．（2025 辽宁模拟）假定你是李华，想邀请你的新西兰朋友Kevin参加你校将要举行的"劳动周"相关活动．请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．活动时间；
2．活动内容（如：校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；
3．活动意义．
参考词汇：Labour Week劳动周
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
17．（2025 中山市校级模拟）假定你是李华，你刚刚参加了以"Have a More Peaceful World"为主题的国际中学生论坛。请你给英国朋友Jim写一封邮件分享此次经历，内容包括：
（1）分享你的经历；
（2）你的感想。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
________
18．（2025 萍乡模拟） 假定你是学生会主席李华，国际志愿者日（International Volunteer Day）将要到来，请以学生会的名义向全校师生写一封倡议信，号召同学们参加"互助，互爱"的志愿宣传活动，内容包括：
（1）倡议目的；
（2）活动内容；
（3）呼吁参加。
提示词：互助互爱mutual assistance and care
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______
19．（2025 龙岗区校级模拟） 假定你是李华，外教Mike准备开展读书月活动，让学生读完指定的五本英文名著，你认为这样的安排存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）说明问题；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
20．（2025 泰安一模） 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Evan发邮件说他想来中国旅游，计划在10天内游览5个省。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）他的行程安排是否可行；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Evan，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
2025年高考英语复习新题速递之应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 陕西二模） 假定你是李华，你和你的英国交换生好友David约好本周六晚一起去一家新开的餐馆吃饭，但你因故不能应邀前往。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示歉意；
（2）说明原因；
（3）下次再约。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear David，
_____________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David，
I hope this message finds you well.I'm writing to express my sincere apologies for having to cancel our dinner reservation at the new restaurant this Saturday evening.
Unfortunately，I need to rest because I've unexpectedly come down with a cold.I understand how disappointing this must be，and I truly regret any inconvenience it may cause.Let's reschedule for another time when we can both enjoy a delightful meal together.
Looking forward to your reply and our next get﹣together.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Unfortunately，I need to rest because I've unexpectedly come down with a cold.
翻译：不幸的是，我需要休息，因为我意外地感冒了。
分析：本句运用了because引导的原因状语从句。
高分句型二：Let's reschedule for another time when we can both enjoy a delightful meal together.
翻译：让我们重新安排一个时间，我们可以一起享受一顿愉快的晚餐。
分析：本句运用了when引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear David，
I hope this message finds you well.I'm writing to express my sincere apologies for having to cancel our dinner reservation at the new restaurant this Saturday evening.（表示歉意）
Unfortunately，I need to rest because I've unexpectedly come down with a cold.【高分句型一】（说明原因）I understand how disappointing this must be，and I truly regret any inconvenience it may cause.Let's reschedule for another time when we can both enjoy a delightful meal together.【高分句型二】（下次再约）
Looking forward to your reply and our next get﹣together.（表达期盼）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
2．（2025 辽宁模拟） 假定你是校英语报记者，请用英语写一篇短文，报道学校最近组织的一次校园植树活动，并做出简单评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Planting Trees in the Campus
__________________________
【答案】
Planting Trees in the Campus
The other day，a tree﹣planting activity was carried out in our school，where many students participated and showed their enthusiasm for environmental protection.
First，the organizers gave a brief presentation about the importance of tree planting.Then，the students selected different positions in the campus and dug holes to plant young trees.It was a challenging task，but everyone worked so hard with great pleasure and responsibility.
The event was a great success and I believe that with more events like this，the future of our world will be more positive and environmentally friendly.
【分析】高分句型一：The other day，a tree﹣planting activity was carried out in our school，where many students participated and showed their enthusiasm for environmental protection.
译文：前几天，我们学校开展了植树活动，许多学生参加了活动，展示了他们对环境保护的热情。
分析：这句话使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：The event was a great success and I believe that with more events like this，the future of our world will be more positive and environmentally friendly.
译文：这次活动取得了巨大的成功，我相信，随着更多这样的活动，我们世界的未来将更加积极和环保。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】
Planting Trees in the Campus
The other day，a tree﹣planting activity was carried out in our school，where many students participated and showed their enthusiasm for environmental protection.【高分句型一】（话题）
First，the organizers gave a brief presentation about the importance of tree planting.Then，the students selected different positions in the campus and dug holes to plant young trees.It was a challenging task，but everyone worked so hard with great pleasure and responsibility.（活动过程）
The event was a great success and I believe that with more events like this，the future of our world will be more positive and environmentally friendly.【高分句型二】（活动评价）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
3．（2025 浙江二模）假如你是李华，你们学校的校报英语论坛（English Forum）正在组织一次讨论活动。主题是"AI And Our Study"。请你写一篇英语文章投稿。
内容包括：
（1）AI用于学习的现状；
（2）你的看法或建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】
AI and Our Study
Nowadays，AI has become an inseparable part of study，reshaping how students learn and interact with knowledge.Many students rely on ChatGPT，Deepseek to solve math problems，practice languages，or organize study schedules.However，this convenience comes with challenges，such as over﹣dependence and ethical concerns about originality in work.
In my daily study routine，I use AI tools wisely.I rely on apps to improve writing accuracy and brainstorm essay ideas.However，I avoid over﹣dependence by cross﹣checking AI suggestions with textbooks or teacher feedback.My advice？Embrace AI as a supporter，not a replacement.Balance technology with critical thinking，and always prioritize understanding over shortcuts.AI can lighten the load，but true learning still requires your effort and curiosity.
Only by blending AI's efficiency with human creativity can we unlock greater academic potential.
【分析】高分句型一：Nowadays，AI has become an inseparable part of study，reshaping how students learn and interact with knowledge.
译文：如今，人工智能已经成为学习中不可分割的一部分，重塑了学生学习和与知识互动的方式。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语reshaping how students learn and interact with knowledge作状语。
高分句型二：Only by blending AI's efficiency with human creativity can we unlock greater academic potential.
译文：只有将人工智能的效率与人类的创造力相结合，我们才能释放出更大的学术潜力。
分析：这句话使用了only+介词短语置于句首，后面接部分倒装。
【解答】
AI and Our Study
Nowadays，AI has become an inseparable part of study，reshaping how students learn and interact with knowledge.【高分句型一】Many students rely on ChatGPT，Deepseek to solve math problems，practice languages，or organize study schedules.However，this convenience comes with challenges，such as over﹣dependence and ethical concerns about originality in work.（AI用于学习的现状）
In my daily study routine，I use AI tools wisely.I rely on apps to improve writing accuracy and brainstorm essay ideas.However，I avoid over﹣dependence by cross﹣checking AI suggestions with textbooks or teacher feedback.My advice？Embrace AI as a supporter，not a replacement.Balance technology with critical thinking，and always prioritize understanding over shortcuts.AI can lighten the load，but true learning still requires your effort and curiosity.（看法和建议）
Only by blending AI's efficiency with human creativity can we unlock greater academic potential.【高分句型二】（总结）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
4．（2025 黑龙江一模） 假定你是高三学生李华，上周四学校举办了高考百日誓师大会。请向英国朋友Chris写一封邮件，分享大会内容及你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：the 100﹣Day Pledge Ceremony百日誓师大会；
the National College Entrance Examination高考
Dear Chris，
I hope this email finds you well.___________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
I hope this email finds you well.I'm writing to share the exciting experience of the 100﹣Day Pledge Ceremony for the National College Entrance Examination in our school last Thursday.
The ceremony began with an inspiring speech by the principal，who encouraged us to strive for our dreams.Then，the teachers and students took solemn oaths.We also signed our names on a huge banner，which showed our determination.
This ceremony filled me with a strong sense of urgency and motivation.It made me realize that every day counts.I am now more focused and ready to face the challenges ahead.I'm sure the hard work will pay off.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The ceremony began with an inspiring speech by the principal，who encouraged us to strive for our dreams.
翻译：典礼以校长鼓舞人心的演讲开始，他鼓励我们为梦想而奋斗。
分析：本句运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It made me realize that every day counts.
翻译：这让我意识到每一天都很重要。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
I hope this email finds you well.I'm writing to share the exciting experience of the 100﹣Day Pledge Ceremony for the National College Entrance Examination in our school last Thursday.（写信目的）
The ceremony began with an inspiring speech by the principal，who encouraged us to strive for our dreams.【高分句型一】Then，the teachers and students took solemn oaths.We also signed our names on a huge banner，which showed our determination.（分享大会内容）
This ceremony filled me with a strong sense of urgency and motivation.It made me realize that every day counts.【高分句型二】I am now more focused and ready to face the challenges ahead.I'm sure the hard work will pay off.（个人感想）
Looking forward to hearing from you.（表达期盼）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
5．（2025 抚顺模拟） 假定你是李华，你校正在举办以"社区服务"为主题的英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）你的一次社区服务经历；
（2）你的感悟或收获。
要求：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Community Service Experience
______
【答案】
My Community Service Experience
Community service is a meaningful way to give back to society.Last month，I joined a volunteer program to help clean a local park.
My job was to collect trash，sweep the walkways，and educate visitors about environmental protection.At first，it was exhausting to walk around picking up litter under the hot sun.Some visitors ignored our reminders，which made me feel frustrated.However，with encouragement from my teammates，I kept going.Over time，more people noticed our efforts and even joined us.Seeing the park become cleaner and the visitors become more aware of their actions，I felt a great sense of accomplishment.
Through this experience，I learned the importance of teamwork and persistence.I hope more people will take part and contribute to a better world.
【分析】高分句型一：Some visitors ignored our reminders，which made me feel frustrated.
翻译：有些访客无视我们的提醒，这让我感到沮丧。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Seeing the park become cleaner and the visitors become more aware of their actions，I felt a great sense of accomplishment.
翻译：看到公园变得更干净，游客们也更加意识到自己的行为，我感到一种巨大的成就感。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语seeing the park become cleaner and the visitors become more aware of their actions作状语。
【解答】
My Community Service Experience
Community service is a meaningful way to give back to society.Last month，I joined a volunteer program to help clean a local park.
My job was to collect trash，sweep the walkways，and educate visitors about environmental protection.At first，it was exhausting to walk around picking up litter under the hot sun.Some visitors ignored our reminders，which made me feel frustrated.【高分句型一】However，with encouragement from my teammates，I kept going.Over time，more people noticed our efforts and even joined us.Seeing the park become cleaner and the visitors become more aware of their actions，I felt a great sense of accomplishment.【高分句型二】（社区服务经历）
Through this experience，I learned the importance of teamwork and persistence.I hope more people will take part and contribute to a better world.（个人感悟）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6．（2025 晋中模拟）你校英文报正在开展以社区志愿活动为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容
包括：
（1）你参加的活动；
（2）你的感受。
注意：1（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 Last weekend，I took part in a community volunteer activity with my classmates.During the activity，I cleaned the public park，picking up litter and weeding the flower beds.Moreover，offering visitors information about the park's attractions gave me a strong sense of value.After that，I visited the elderly in the community center，chatting with them and helping with small chores，and performed a play to bring them joy.
This experience was truly rewarding.It made me realize how much a small act of kindness can brighten someone's day.It is obvious that volunteering is a great way to give back and make a difference.
【分析】高分句型一：After that，I visited the elderly in the community center，chatting with them and helping with small chores，and performed a play to bring them joy.
翻译：之后，我拜访了社区中心的老人，与他们聊天，帮助他们做一些小事，并表演了一个戏剧给他们带来快乐。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语chatting with them and helping with small chores作状语。
高分句型二：It is obvious that volunteering is a great way to give back and make a difference.
翻译：很明显，志愿服务是回馈社会和有所作为的好方法。
分析：本句运用了it作形式主语，that引导的从句作真正的主语。
【解答】 Last weekend，I took part in a community volunteer activity with my classmates.During the activity，I cleaned the public park，picking up litter and weeding the flower beds.Moreover，offering visitors information about the park's attractions gave me a strong sense of value.After that，I visited the elderly in the community center，chatting with them and helping with small chores，and performed a play to bring them joy.【高分句型一】（自己参加的活动）
This experience was truly rewarding.It made me realize how much a small act of kindness can brighten someone's day.It is obvious that volunteering is a great way to give back and make a difference.【高分句型二】（个人感受）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
7．（2025 江西模拟）假定你是李华，你的英国网友Thomas在社交媒体上看到中国春节期间大门倒贴"福"字的习俗，他感到好奇并询问你。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）解释这个习俗的含义，即"福到了"；
（2）提及中国文化的博大精深；
（3）表达对他的祝福。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Thomas，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Thomas，
I'm delighted that you're curious about Chinese customs，especially the practice of posting the "Fu" character upside down on doors during the Spring Festival.As our tradition，the character "Fu"，which means "blessing" or "good fortune"，is placed upside down to indicate that blessings are arriving，as the word for "upside down" in Chinese sounds like "arriving".This custom is a clever play on words and a way to welcome good luck into the home.
Chinese culture is full of such deep and interesting traditions.I hope this gives you a small taste of our rich heritage.Wishing you a year filled with happiness and prosperity!
Best regards.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm delighted that you're curious about Chinese customs，especially the practice of posting the "Fu" character upside down on doors during the Spring Festival.
翻译：我很高兴你对中国习俗感兴趣，尤其是春节期间在门上倒贴"福"字的习俗。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：As our tradition，the character "Fu"，which means "blessing" or "good fortune"，is placed upside down to indicate that blessings are arriving，as the word for "upside down" in Chinese sounds like "arriving.
翻译：按照我们的传统，"福"字，意思是"祝福"或"好运"，被倒过来表示祝福到来，因为"倒过来"这个词在中文里听起来像"到来"。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和as引导的原因状语从句。
【解答】 Dear Thomas，
I'm delighted that you're curious about Chinese customs，especially the practice of posting the "Fu" character upside down on doors during the Spring Festival.【高分句型一】As our tradition，the character "Fu"，which means "blessing" or "good fortune"，is placed upside down to indicate that blessings are arriving，as the word for "upside down" in Chinese sounds like "arriving".【高分句型二】This custom is a clever play on words and a way to welcome good luck into the home.（解释这个习俗的含义，即"福到了"）
Chinese culture is full of such deep and interesting traditions.I hope this gives you a small taste of our rich heritage.（提及中国文化的博大精深）Wishing you a year filled with happiness and prosperity!（表达对他的祝福）
Best regards.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
8．（2025 甘肃一模）你校正举办主题为"我最喜欢的一首歌"的英语征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）介绍歌曲；
（2）说明喜欢的原因。
注意：
（1）题目自拟；
（2）写作词数应为80左右；
（3）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】
The Extraordinary "Ordinary Path"
My favourite song is "An Ordinary Path"，a Chinese song that is written by Pu Shu.Since it came out in 2014，it has received a lot of praise.It is famous for its lyrics from the heart and its nice melody，which makes people think about the journey of life，even if it seems very ordinary.I like this song because it has a strong connection with me，telling me to value the simple and real parts of life and inspiring me to face the challenges in life.
【分析】高分句型一：My favourite song is "An Ordinary Path"，a Chinese song that is written by Pu Shu.
翻译：我最喜欢的歌是《平凡的路》，这是朴树写的一首中文歌。
分析：本句运用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It is famous for its lyrics from the heart and its nice melody，which makes people think about the journey of life，even if it seems very ordinary.
翻译：它以其发自内心的歌词和优美的旋律而闻名，即使它看起来很普通，也会让人想起生命的旅程。
分析：本句运用了which引导非限制性定语从句和even if引导让步状语从句。
【解答】
The Extraordinary "Ordinary Path"
My favourite song is "An Ordinary Path"，a Chinese song that is written by Pu Shu.【高分句型一】Since it came out in 2014，it has received a lot of praise.It is famous for its lyrics from the heart and its nice melody，which makes people think about the journey of life，even if it seems very ordinary.【高分句型二】（介绍歌曲）I like this song because it has a strong connection with me，telling me to value the simple and real parts of life and inspiring me to face the challenges in life.（说明喜欢的原因）
【点评】 写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
9．（2025 江西模拟） 2025年蛇年春晚机器人扭秧歌节目吸引了全世界的关注，这是中国传统文化与现代科技的交融，给我们带来了强烈的视觉冲击，也让世界看到了中国科技的发展和进步。假定你是李华，请根据以下要求写一篇短文，并分享你的看法。
内容包括：
（1）简要介绍机器人扭秧歌的节目；
（2）谈谈节目背后的意义和影响；
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考词汇：春晚the Spring Festival Gala 秧歌舞yangko dance
What Humanoid Robots' Yangko Dance Brings us
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【答案】
What Humanoid Robots' Yangko Dance Brings us
The 2025 Spring Festival Gala was truly amazing especially the robot show，bringing us a visual feast.
On the night of January 28th，people around the world sat in front of their TVs or devices，waiting for the show.When the robots came on stage，everyone was shocked.These humanoid robots danced to the lively rhythm of the northern yangko dance.What was more surprising was that they could even twirl handkerchiefs，a traditional part of yangko.
This fantastic performance showcases the great progress of Chinese technology made during the past decades.It also shows that traditional culture can be combined with the ever﹣changing technology，which has become a hit in the global community.
【分析】高分句型一：What was more surprising was that they could even twirl handkerchiefs，a traditional part of yangko.
翻译：更令人惊讶的是，他们甚至可以旋转手帕，这是秧歌的传统部分。
分析：本句使用了what引导的主语从句及that引导的表语从句。
高分句型二：It also shows that traditional culture can be combined with the ever﹣changing technology，which has become a hit in the global community.
翻译：这也表明，传统文化可以与不断变化的技术相结合，这已成为全球社会的热门话题。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】
What Humanoid Robots' Yangko Dance Brings us
The 2025 Spring Festival Gala was truly amazing especially the robot show，bringing us a visual feast.
On the night of January 28th，people around the world sat in front of their TVs or devices，waiting for the show.When the robots came on stage，everyone was shocked.These humanoid robots danced to the lively rhythm of the northern yangko dance.What was more surprising was that they could even twirl handkerchiefs，a traditional part of yangko.【高分句型一】（简要介绍机器人扭秧歌的节目）
This fantastic performance showcases the great progress of Chinese technology made during the past decades.It also shows that traditional culture can be combined with the ever﹣changing technology，which has become a hit in the global community.【高分句型二】（谈谈节目背后的意义和影响）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．（2025 山西模拟） 你校英语俱乐部计划下周一举办以"How to Enhance Social Competitiveness"为主题的讲座，请你写一则通知。内容包括：
（1）讲座的时间、地点；
（2）注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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The English Club
【答案】
Notice
Our school is going to organize a significant lecture with the theme of "How to Enhance Social Competitiveness" next Monday.The lecture will begin at 3 pm，lasting about two hours in the school hall.Our guest speaker，a renowned expert in career development，will share insights on strategies to improve our skills and help us adapt to the fast﹣paced world.
All students are encouraged to attend the lecture.Please arrive on time and come prepared with questions you would like to ask.This is a great opportunity for us students to learn and grow.
Don't miss the chance!
The English Club
【分析】高分句型一：The lecture will begin at 3 pm，lasting about two hours in the school hall.
翻译：讲座将于下午 3 点开始，在学校礼堂举行，持续时间约为两个小时。
分析：句中运用了现在分词短语lasting about two hours in the school hall作状语。
高分句型二：Please arrive on time and come prepared with questions you would like to ask.
翻译：请准时到达，并带着你想问的问题做好准备前来。
分析：运用了省略了that的限制性定语从句 you would like to ask。
【解答】
Notice
Our school is going to organize a significant lecture with the theme of "How to Enhance Social Competitiveness" next Monday.The lecture will begin at 3 pm，lasting about two hours in the school hall.【高分句型一】（讲座的时间、地点）Our guest speaker，a renowned expert in career development，will share insights on strategies to improve our skills and help us adapt to the fast﹣paced world.
All students are encouraged to attend the lecture.Please arrive on time and come prepared with questions you would like to ask.【高分句型二】（注意事项）This is a great opportunity for us students to learn and grow.
Don't miss the chance!
The English Club
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
11．（2025 河南模拟） 假定你是李华，你校将举办"科技与生活"主题演讲比赛，请你以"How to Balance Technology Use and Real﹣Life Connections"为题，写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）你的观点；
（2）具体措施。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear teachers and fellow students，
Good morning!
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【答案】Dear teachers and fellow students，
Good morning!Today，I would like to talk about "How to Balance Technology Use and Real﹣Life Connections." In our digital age，technology is an essential part of our lives，but it can sometimes hinder our real﹣life interactions.
To achieve a balance，we can implement a few measures.First，we should set specific time limits for using devices，ensuring we allocate time for face﹣to﹣face conversations with family and friends.Second，we can organize tech﹣free gatherings，such as family dinners or outdoor activities，fostering deeper connections.
By taking these steps，we can enjoy the benefits of technology.
【分析】高分句型一：To achieve a balance，we can implement a few measures.
译文：为了达到平衡，我们可以采取一些措施。
分析：这句话使用了不定式短语To achieve a balance作目的状语。
高分句型二：Second，we can organize tech﹣free gatherings，such as family dinners or outdoor activities，fostering deeper connections.
译文：其次，我们可以组织无技术的聚会，如家庭聚餐或户外活动，培养更深层次的联系。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语fostering deeper connections作状语。
【解答】Dear teachers and fellow students，
Good morning!Today，I would like to talk about "How to Balance Technology Use and Real﹣Life Connections." In our digital age，technology is an essential part of our lives，but it can sometimes hinder our real﹣life interactions.（观点）
To achieve a balance，we can implement a few measures.【高分句型一】First，we should set specific time limits for using devices，ensuring we allocate time for face﹣to﹣face conversations with family and friends.Second，we can organize tech﹣free gatherings，such as family dinners or outdoor activities，fostering deeper connections.【高分句型二】（具体措施）
By taking these steps，we can enjoy the benefits of technology.（表达信心）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
12．（2025 自贡校级二模）假定你是李华，你校上周举办了"迎亚运"为主题的海报设计大赛，请为校英文报撰写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.比赛过程及结果；
2.比赛影响。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Poster Design Contest on Welcoming the Asian Games
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【答案】
A Poster Design Contest on Welcoming the Asian Games
Last week witnessed a poster design contest themed "Welcome the Asian Games" in our school.
More than 50 students actively participated and submitted their well﹣designed entries，including hand drawings and computer graphics.After a careful selection process，20 outstanding works were awarded for their innovative formats and fantastic ideas，which are now on display on the school website.
The contest turns out to be a big hit.Not only does it provide a platform for students to showcase their talent but also it further stimulates their eagerness to get involved in the Asian Games.
【分析】高分句型一：After a careful selection process，20 outstanding works were awarded for their innovative formats and fantastic ideas，which are now on display on the school website.
翻译：经过精心筛选，20件优秀作品因其创新的形式和奇妙的想法而获奖，这些作品目前已在学校网站上展出。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Not only does it provide a platform for students to showcase their talent but also it further stimulates their eagerness to get involved in the Asian Games.
翻译：它不仅为学生们提供了一个展示才华的平台，而且进一步激发了他们参与亚运会的热情。
分析：本句运用了否定词Not only置于句首引起的部分倒装。
【解答】
A Poster Design Contest on Welcoming the Asian Games
Last week witnessed a poster design contest themed "Welcome the Asian Games" in our school.
More than 50 students actively participated and submitted their well﹣designed entries，including hand drawings and computer graphics.After a careful selection process，20 outstanding works were awarded for their innovative formats and fantastic ideas，which are now on display on the school website.【高分句型一】（比赛过程及结果）
The contest turns out to be a big hit.Not only does it provide a platform for students to showcase their talent but also it further stimulates their eagerness to get involved in the Asian Games.【高分句型二】（比赛影响）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
13．（2025 北京校级模拟） 假如你是红星中学的李华，你校开设了"中国传统文化体验"课程，请你给你的英国笔友Jim写一封信，介绍该课程的开展情况，内容包括：
（1）课程目的和内容；
（2）你的感悟。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
_____________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
I am excited to tell you about the "Chinese Traditional Culture Experience" course that our school has recently introduced.The main purpose of this course is to help students better understand and appreciate the rich heritage of Chinese culture.The course covers a wide range of topics，including calligraphy，traditional Chinese painting，tea ceremony，and even martial arts.We also have hands﹣on activities where we get to practice these arts ourselves.
Through this course，I have gained a deeper appreciation for the beauty and depth of Chinese culture.It has made me realize how important it is to preserve and pass on these traditions to future generations.I feel more connected to my cultural roots and more proud of my heritage.
I hope you find this interesting and perhaps you can share with me some aspects of British culture that you are proud of.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：We also have hands﹣on activities where we get to practice these arts ourselves.
译文：我们也有实践活动，让我们自己练习这些艺术。
分析：这句话使用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It has made me realize how important it is to preserve and pass on these traditions to future generations.
译文：这让我意识到保护这些传统并将其传给后代是多么重要。
分析：这句话使用了how引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I am excited to tell you about the "Chinese Traditional Culture Experience" course that our school has recently introduced.The main purpose of this course is to help students better understand and appreciate the rich heritage of Chinese culture.The course covers a wide range of topics，including calligraphy，traditional Chinese painting，tea ceremony，and even martial arts.We also have hands﹣on activities where we get to practice these arts ourselves.【高分句型一】（课程目的和内容）
Through this course，I have gained a deeper appreciation for the beauty and depth of Chinese culture.It has made me realize how important it is to preserve and pass on these traditions to future generations.【高分句型二】I feel more connected to my cultural roots and more proud of my heritage.（感悟）
I hope you find this interesting and perhaps you can share with me some aspects of British culture that you are proud of.（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
14．（2025 吉林模拟）假定你是李华，在口语课上，外教Mike组织同学们讨论"能否在英语学习中使用翻译笔"。请你代表小组做总结发言，内容包括：
（1）小组观点；
（2）陈述理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello，everyone.It is an honor to represent our group in summarizing our discussion.
【答案】 Hello，everyone.It is an honor to represent our group in summarizing our discussion.Our group strongly supports the use of translation pens in English learning.We believe that this device offers several advantages that can significantly enhance the learning experience.
Firstly，translation pens are incredibly portable and convenient to use.They can be carried anywhere，which allows learners to access translations instantly.Secondly，by offering immediate feedback，translation pens can improve learning efficiency，which is particularly beneficial to beginners.Additionally，they can also be of great help in practicing reading and writing skills by providing real﹣time translation support.
In conclusion，when used as a supplementary tool to support，rather than replace active language practice，with the portability and real﹣time translation capabilities，translation pens are a valuable tool for English learners.
【分析】高分句型一：We believe that this device offers several advantages that can significantly enhance the learning experience.
翻译：我们相信这个设备提供了几个优势，可以显著提高学习体验。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句this device offers several advantages that can significantly enhance the learning experience和that引导的限制性定语从句that can significantly enhance the learning experience。
高分句型二：They can be carried anywhere，which allows learners to access translations instantly.
翻译：它们可以携带到任何地方，这使得学习者可以立即获得翻译。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】 Hello，everyone.It is an honor to represent our group in summarizing our discussion.Our group strongly supports the use of translation pens in English learning.We believe that this device offers several advantages that can significantly enhance the learning experience.【高分句型一】（小组观点）
Firstly，translation pens are incredibly portable and convenient to use.They can be carried anywhere，which allows learners to access translations instantly.【高分句型二】Secondly，by offering immediate feedback，translation pens can improve learning efficiency，which is particularly beneficial to beginners.Additionally，they can also be of great help in practicing reading and writing skills by providing real﹣time translation support.（陈述理由）
In conclusion，when used as a supplementary tool to support，rather than replace active language practice，with the portability and real﹣time translation capabilities，translation pens are a valuable tool for English learners.（总结）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
15．（2025 成都模拟）上周，你参加了校学生会组织的环保作品展。请给校英语报写一篇短文介绍此活动，内容包括：
1.活动过程；
2.个人感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】 Last week，I took part in an environmental protection works exhibition organized by the school student union.
At the exhibition，there were various works，such as paintings，handicrafts and posters，all showing different environmental protection ideas.Students walked around，admiring and discussing these works.What's more，some students actively shared the inspiration behind their works，which further deepened everyone's understanding of environmental protection.
This activity really impressed me.It not only raised my awareness of environmental protection but also let me see the creativity of my schoolmates.I hope there will be more such meaningful activities.
【分析】高分句型一：Last week，I took part in an environmental protection works exhibition organized by the school student union.
译文：上周，我参加了学校学生会组织的环保作品展。
分析：这句话使用了过去分词短语organized by the school student union作定语。
高分句型二：What's more，some students actively shared the inspiration behind their works，which further deepened everyone's understanding of environmental protection.
译文：此外，一些学生积极分享他们作品背后的灵感，进一步加深了大家对环境保护的理解。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】 Last week，I took part in an environmental protection works exhibition organized by the school student union.【高分句型一】（话题）
At the exhibition，there were various works，such as paintings，handicrafts and posters，all showing different environmental protection ideas.Students walked around，admiring and discussing these works.What's more，some students actively shared the inspiration behind their works，which further deepened everyone's understanding of environmental protection.【高分句型二】（活动过程）
This activity really impressed me.It not only raised my awareness of environmental protection but also let me see the creativity of my schoolmates.I hope there will be more such meaningful activities.（个人感受）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
16．（2025 辽宁模拟）假定你是李华，想邀请你的新西兰朋友Kevin参加你校将要举行的"劳动周"相关活动．请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．活动时间；
2．活动内容（如：校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；
3．活动意义．
参考词汇：Labour Week劳动周
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一： There will be a variety of activities which include improving the school's environment and sorting the garbage according to the new standards．
译文：将有各种各样的活动，包括改善学校的环境和按照新标准分类垃圾．
分析：这句话使用which引导定语从句，修饰 a variety of activities．
高分句型二： It is through working that we will learn to appreciate the effort of others， like the school's cleaners．
译文：正是通过工作，我们才能学会欣赏其他人的努力，比如学校的清洁工．
分析：这句话使用强调句．
【解答】Dear Kevin，
I am delighted to know that you would like to participate in our Labour Week events． Here are the details．（写信目的）
The Labour Week starts on the first day of the next month．（活动时间） There will be a variety of activities which include improving the school's environment and sorting the garbage according to the new standards．【高分句型一】The events are meant to cultivate a sense of responsibility in the students．（活动内容） It is through working that we will learn to appreciate the effort of others， like the school's cleaners．【高分句型二】（活动意义）
Please let me know if you have more questions， and I hope to see you during Labour Week．（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
17．（2025 中山市校级模拟）假定你是李华，你刚刚参加了以"Have a More Peaceful World"为主题的国际中学生论坛。请你给英国朋友Jim写一封邮件分享此次经历，内容包括：
（1）分享你的经历；
（2）你的感想。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
________
【答案】Dear Jim，
I have just participated in an forum on the theme of "Have a More Peaceful World".I'm writing to share my experience with you.
I first made a specific explanation for the advantages of owning a peaceful world.Then I focused my topic on what we can do to keep the whole world peaceful.After finishing my statement，I answered some questions raised by participants.Undoubtedly，not only did this forum enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizons，but it also inspired me to study much harder to make contributions to keeping the world more peaceful.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Then I focused my topic on what we can do to keep the whole world peaceful.
翻译：然后，我把话题集中在我们能做些什么来保持整个世界的和平上。
分析：本句使用了what引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Undoubtedly，not only did this forum enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizons，but it also inspired me to study much harder to make contributions to keeping the world more peaceful.
翻译：毫无疑问，这个论坛不仅丰富了我的知识，开阔了我的视野，也激励我更加努力地学习，为维护世界更加和平做出贡献。
分析：本句使用了not only位于句首的部分倒装。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I have just participated in an forum on the theme of "Have a More Peaceful World".I'm writing to share my experience with you.（点明主题）
I first made a specific explanation for the advantages of owning a peaceful world.Then I focused my topic on what we can do to keep the whole world peaceful.【高分句型一】After finishing my statement，I answered some questions raised by participants.（分享自己的经历） Undoubtedly，not only did this forum enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizons，but it also inspired me to study much harder to make contributions to keeping the world more peaceful.【高分句型二】（感想）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
18．（2025 萍乡模拟） 假定你是学生会主席李华，国际志愿者日（International Volunteer Day）将要到来，请以学生会的名义向全校师生写一封倡议信，号召同学们参加"互助，互爱"的志愿宣传活动，内容包括：
（1）倡议目的；
（2）活动内容；
（3）呼吁参加。
提示词：互助互爱mutual assistance and care
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______
【答案】Distinguished teachers and schoolmates，
In a bid to embrace the International Volunteer Day，I on behalf of the Student Union，appeal to all the teachers and students to actively engage in the volunteer campaign with the theme of "mutual assistance and care".
The event，which falls on December 5th，will kick off with a visit to the nursing home in our community，where we will engage in cleaning activities for the elderly and share our joy with them.Following that，we will conduct a beach clean﹣up，providing us with the opportunity to participate in garbage sorting at the coastal tourist spots.Finally，the highlight of the activity will involve fundraising for a charity program，bringing the event to a meaningful conclusion.
Rose given，fragrance in hand.Don't hesitate anymore and jump at the chance to make a brighter world!
The Student Union
【分析】高分句型一：The event，which falls on December 5th，will kick off with a visit to the nursing home in our community，where we will engage in cleaning activities for the elderly and share our joy with them.
译文：活动将于12月5日开始，首先参观我们社区的疗养院，在那里我们将为老年人开展清洁活动，并与他们分享我们的快乐。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，where引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Finally，the highlight of the activity will involve fundraising for a charity program，bringing the event to a meaningful conclusion.
译文：最后，活动的亮点将包括为慈善项目筹款，为活动画上有意义的句号。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语bringing the event to a meaningful conclusion作状语。
【解答】Distinguished teachers and schoolmates，
In a bid to embrace the International Volunteer Day，I on behalf of the Student Union，appeal to all the teachers and students to actively engage in the volunteer campaign with the theme of "mutual assistance and care".（倡议目的）
The event，which falls on December 5th，will kick off with a visit to the nursing home in our community，where we will engage in cleaning activities for the elderly and share our joy with them.【高分句型一】Following that，we will conduct a beach clean﹣up，providing us with the opportunity to participate in garbage sorting at the coastal tourist spots.Finally，the highlight of the activity will involve fundraising for a charity program，bringing the event to a meaningful conclusion.【高分句型二】（活动内容）
Rose given，fragrance in hand.Don't hesitate anymore and jump at the chance to make a brighter world!（呼吁参加）
The Student Union
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
19．（2025 龙岗区校级模拟） 假定你是李华，外教Mike准备开展读书月活动，让学生读完指定的五本英文名著，你认为这样的安排存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）说明问题；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike，
I really appreciate your effort to organize the reading month.However，requiring all students to finish five assigned classic English books may cause some issues.
Firstly，the books might be too challenging for some students，leading to stress.Secondly，limited time could discourage thorough reading.Could we adjust the plan？Maybe reduce the number to 2﹣3 books and let students choose from a list based on their interests.Alternatively，grouping students to read different books and share summaries could save time while ensuring engagement.
Thanks for considering my suggestions.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Firstly，the books might be too challenging for some students，leading to stress.
译文：首先，这些书对一些学生来说可能太具挑战性，导致压力。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语leading to stress作状语。
高分句型二：Alternatively，grouping students to read different books and share summaries could save time while ensuring engagement.
译文：或者，将学生分组阅读不同的书籍并分享摘要可以节省时间，同时确保参与度。
分析：这句话使用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略句。
【解答】Dear Mike，
I really appreciate your effort to organize the reading month.However，requiring all students to finish five assigned classic English books may cause some issues.（写信目的）
Firstly，the books might be too challenging for some students，leading to stress.【高分句型一】Secondly，limited time could discourage thorough reading.（说明问题）Could we adjust the plan？Maybe reduce the number to 2﹣3 books and let students choose from a list based on their interests.Alternatively，grouping students to read different books and share summaries could save time while ensuring engagement.【高分句型二】（提出建议）
Thanks for considering my suggestions.（感谢）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
20．（2025 泰安一模） 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Evan发邮件说他想来中国旅游，计划在10天内游览5个省。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）他的行程安排是否可行；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Evan，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Evan，
I received your email about your plan to visit five provinces in China within ten days.While it's an ambitious goal，I'd like to share some thoughts.
To be honest，covering five provinces in ten days might be quite rushed，as China is vast and travel between regions can take significant time.Instead，I suggest focusing on three provinces to ensure a more relaxed and immersive experience.For example，you could explore Beijing for its history and culture，Shanghai for its modernity，and Yunnan for its natural beauty and ethnic diversity.This allows you to enjoy each destination without feeling overwhelmed.
Let me know if you'd like further details or assistance in planning.I'm happy to help!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：To be honest，covering five provinces in ten days might be quite rushed，as China is vast and travel between regions can take significant time.
翻译：说实话，在10天内走完5个省可能会很匆忙，因为中国幅员辽阔，地区之间的旅行可能需要很长时间。
分析：运用了动名词短语covering five provinces in ten days作主语、as引导原因状语从句。
高分句型二：This allows you to enjoy each destination without feeling overwhelmed.
翻译：这可以让你享受每一个目的地，而不会感到不知所措。
分析：运用了动名词短语 feeling overwhelmed作宾语。
【解答】Dear Evan，
I received your email about your plan to visit five provinces in China within ten days.While it's an ambitious goal，I'd like to share some thoughts.
To be honest，covering five provinces in ten days might be quite rushed，as China is vast and travel between regions can take significant time.（行程安排是否可行）Instead，I suggest focusing on three provinces to ensure a more relaxed and immersive experience.【高分句型一】For example，you could explore Beijing for its history and culture，Shanghai for its modernity，and Yunnan for its natural beauty and ethnic diversity.This allows you to enjoy each destination without feeling overwhelmed.【高分句型二】（建议）
Let me know if you'd like further details or assistance in planning.I'm happy to help!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
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