2025年高考英语复习考前预测:读后续写
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 河南二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落的开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My wife Lila and I were in the middle of a heated discussion.Our 19﹣year﹣old son Andy,who was blind,wanted to attend a college far across the country.Lila was extremely worried."But how will he manage on his own?He's blind!"she exclaimed.I understood her concerns,but I believed Andy was clever,ambitious,and confident.I said,"He's nineteen.He wants to try things independently.We've done all we can for him.It's time to let him go."
Then,I brought up the story of Gertie.In the third year of our marriage,before our children were born,a pair of geese arrived at the small lake on our farm with a flock(群) of Canada geese in late April.After the flock left,these two geese stayed.We were excited when they started nesting in the southeastern corner of the lake.
However,it was about three weeks later that disaster struck.One evening,as I was taking a rest on the platform,weary from a long day on the farm,and Lila was working in the garden beside the house,we heard loud honks and wing﹣beating sounds from the lake.By the time I caught up with Lila at the nest,the male goose was dead,its neck broken.Lila found the female goose,badly injured with a broken wing,a bleeding leg,and a missing eye.I suggested putting it down,"It'll never make it.Only one eye.A broken wing.An injured leg.And if it does live,it will die of sorrow.They say that geese mate for life."
But Lila was determined to save it.And she proved me wrong.She drove the goose to the vet(兽医) that night.
Lila fixed a bed for her by the lake and for several days,Gertie,as she named her,barely moved.It was many days before she picked up eating.
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(2)请按如下格式作答。
Gertie survived but was severely disabled.____________________________
The next spring,to our surprise,Gertie came back._______________________________
2.(2025 攀枝花校级二模) In a small village,there lived a young girl named Lily who was known for her love of flowers.Her garden was a kaleidoscope of colors,filled with roses,tulips,and daffodils.But among all the flowers,there was one special rose bush with petals of the deepest red,a gift from her grandmother before she passed away.Lily believed that the petals of this rose held a magical power:each petal symbolizes the hope and passion for life.
One fateful summer,Lily was diagnosed with a rare illness.As her health worsened,so did the vibrant colors of her garden.The petals of the special rose began to fall one by one,mirroring her own physical decline.Each day,Lily would count the remaining petals,believing that when the last one fell,her time would come.
Her neighbor,an old artist named Mr.Thompson,noticed Lily's sadness and learned about the significance of the rose petals to the girl.He was a kind﹣hearted man,known for his failing to create the perfect painting﹣his "masterpiece"that he had always dreamed of but never completed.
One stormy night,as the wind howled and the rain beat against the windows,Mr.Thompson made a decision.He would paint a replica of the last petal on the rose,so realistic that it would fool even the sharpest eye.He worked throughout the night,each stroke(一笔)a dance of determination and hope.
The next morning,the last petal on the rose was still there,clinging to the stem despite the storm.Lily,weak but curious,looked out the window and saw the petal for a long time,seemingly touched by the scene.It was then that she realized the power of hope and the love that others had for her.
Days passed,and Lily's condition began to improve.The doctor,who had initially predicted that she had a slim chance of survival,was amazed at her recovery.Lily knew it was Mr.Thompson's act of kindness that gave her the will to fight.She couldn't wait to thank him.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1:Her heart pounded wildly as she opened the creaky(老朽的) door.______
Para 2:When spring came,Mr.Thompson's health condition improved in Lily's care.______
3.(2025 市中区校级一模) In a small village at the edge of an ancient forest,where the trees whispered secrets older than time itself,stood the Heartwood tree,whose vast branches stretched toward the sky.The villagers believed that the Heartwood was more than just a tree﹣it was a living guardian,protecting them from harm and ensuring their prosperity.Every year,as the Harvest Festival approached,the village elder﹣Old Mara﹣would climb its towering trunk,offering a prayer to the forest gods in exchange for the blessings of a fruitful season.
However,Old Mara,once strong and dynamic,had grown frail with age.The climb,once effortless for her,had become a challenging task,and she could no longer make it.The Heartwood had become a symbol of stability,but without Old Mara carrying on the climb,the villagers felt their future was uncertain.
Among them was Jarek,a young man who had always admired Old Mara's wisdom and the devotion she had shown to her role.He had watched her climb the tree every year,her face peaceful,as if she were one with the ancient tree and the land beneath it.Jarek had never imagined a time when she would not perform the task.Now,with the responsibility falling to him,Jarek found himself overwhelmed.He had always understood the significance of the climb,but he had never felt the weight of it so personally until now.
As the festival drew closer,the pressure increased.The villagers would ask Jarek if he was prepared.Their eyes﹣wide,earnest,and full of expectation﹣made his heart tighten.It was as though the very survival of the village rested on his shoulders.The climb was no longer just a tradition;it had become a symbol of the village's endurance,of their trust in him.And the thought of failing them worried him.The night before the festival,Jarek couldn't sleep,plagued by self﹣doubt.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At dawn,he visited Old Mara.
Jarek neared the base of the tree.
4.(2025 青岛模拟) Johnny,a 17﹣year﹣old from Whitehorse,had been competing in Cross﹣Country Skiing for five years.For many young athletes like him in Whitehorse,Yukon,the Yukon Cross﹣Country SkiChampionships were more than just a competition.It was their dream.A year ago,Johnny qualified for the Championships and successfully won a medal.
After the competition,Johnny was eager to share his experience with Hayden,his teammate and best friend.Hayden had narrowly missed qualifying for the Championships.Johnny had watched his friend train tirelessly,push himself to the limit,and always keep his big smile.Johnny knew how much the Championships meant to Hayden.
Johnny handed Hayden some colorful pins."These are pins I traded with athletes from all over Yukon,"Johnny said with a smile, "I want you to have them,so you can feel a part of the event too."
Hayden was touched, "Thanks,Johnny.This means a lot."
"Next time,"Johnny continued, "I hope you can also experience the event.I know you'll make it."
Hayden nodded, "I'll work even harder for that."
This year's Yukon Cross﹣Country Ski Championships would be held in a month.Coach Nick guided the team through daily tough training and the team made significant progress in their skating,cornering,and downhill techniques.Meanwhile,they enhanced their endurance and balance.Both Johnny and Hayden met the Championship standards.Given Johnny's rich competitive experience,Coach Nick once again qualified Johnny for this year's event and Hayden was selected as an alternate(替补).
The qualification for the competition excited Johnny,but there was always an idea staying in his mind.Johnny knew his friend had been wanting to go to the Championships for several years.This was the last chance for both of them to attend the Championships,as they would age out of the competition after this year.The thought became clear in his mind,strong and steady.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next day,Johnny went to see the coach._____
Hayden accepted the precious chance to compete in the Championships._____
5.(2025 青岛一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Johnny,a 17﹣year﹣old from Whitehorse,had been competing in Cross﹣Country Skiing for five years.For many young athletes like him in Whitehorse,Yukon,the Yukon Cross﹣Country Ski Championships were more than just a competition.It was their dream.A year ago,Johnny qualified for the Championships and successfully won a medal.
After the competition,Johnny was eager to share his experience with Hayden,his teammate and best friend.Hayden had narrowly missed qualifying for the Championships.Johnny had watched his friend train tirelessly,push himself to the limit,and always keep his big smile.Johnny knew how much the Championships meant to Hayden.
Johnny handed Hayden some colorful pins."These are pins I traded with athletes from all over Yukon,"Johnny said with a smile,"I want you to have them,so you can feel a part of the event too."
Hayden was touched,"Thanks,Johnny.This means a lot."
"Next time,"Johnny continued,"I hope you can also experience the event.I know you'll make it."
Hayden nodded,"I'll work even harder for that."
This year's Yukon Cross﹣Country Ski Championships would be held in a month.Coach Nick guided the team through daily tough training and the team made significant progress in their skating,cornering,and downhill techniques.Meanwhile,they enhanced their endurance and balance.Both Johnny and Hayden met the Championship standards.Given Johnny's rich competitive experience,Coach Nick once again qualified Johnny for this year's event and Hayden was selected as an alternate(替补).
The qualification for the competition excited Johnny,but there was always an idea staying in his mind.Johnny knew his friend had been wanting to go to the Championships for several years.This was the last chance for both of them to attend the Championships,as they would age out of the competition after this year.The thought became clear in his mind,strong and steady.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
The next day,Johnny went to see the coach.____________________
Hayden accepted the precious chance to compete in the Championships.______________________
6.(2025 唐山一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ms.Carter's classroom was always warm,even in winter.The walls were covered with student essays and faded world maps.14﹣year﹣old Jamie sat in the back row,his head hanging low and eyes fixed on his worn shoes.He hadn't turned in his assignments for several days.
"Stay after class,Jamie,"Ms.Carter said softly one December afternoon.Her voice wasn't angry﹣just worried."I know you're capable,"she said,sliding his blank notebook across the desk."But you've missed every deadline.Is there anything wrong?"
Jamie,struggling with something he couldn't express,held back his words and remained silent.Outside,raindrops tapped the windows like impatient fingers.
The next day,Ms.Carter drove to Jamie's home after school.As she knocked on a half﹣open door,she heard a child's cry.Jamie answered her knock.He was so surprised to see Ms.Carter,his face red with panic.A baby girl was on his back,and an oxygen machine hummed(嗡嗡响) beside a sofa where a weak woman slept.
"My mom..she has pneumonia(肺炎),"Jamie explained in a low voice,blocking the doorway."I have to take care of my sister after school.The daycare kicked her out last month because Mom missed payments.You see,she can't go to work now."
Ms.Carter's throat tightened.She noticed the microwave meals piled on the table.A photo on the fridge showed Jamie wearing a big smile,his mother's arms around him﹣a lifetime ago.
"Why didn't you tell me?"
"You'd think I'm lying."he said,voice shaking."But..I'll catch up on my study,I promise."
That evening,after returning home,Ms.Carter contacted a charity organization in the town and explained the family's difficult situation.The organization readily promised to help Jamie and his family.The next day,the head of the organization came to the school with funds in an envelope,which were enough to cover the expenses of daycare for at least one month.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Ms.Carter called Jamie to the office.__________________________
After school,Jamie got home and handed the envelope to his mom._____________________
7.(2025 黄冈模拟) In his spare time,a young boy named Max loved nothing more than watching his favorite cartoons on TV.He would spend hours glued to the screen,laughing at the silly behavior of the characters.He just regarded the cartoon characters as entertainment.However,a dream he had one day changed that.
In the dream,Max found that his TV was broken.He tried everything he could think of to fix it,but nothing worked.Max was depressed.How could he watch his cartoons now?As he sat in his room,feeling sorry for himself,Max heard a strange noise coming from outside.He went to investigate and found a small and brightly colored creature sitting on his windowsill(窗台).
"Who are you?"Max asked.
"I'm a cartoon character,"the creature replied.
Max couldn't believe his ears.Cartoon characters were supposed to be on TV,not on his windowsill.
The creature introduced himself as Blinky and explained that he and his friends had been forced out of the TV world by a bad guy named Zorg.They needed Max's help to defeat Zorg and return to their rightful place on the screen.
Max was hesitant at first,but he couldn't resist the opportunity to explore the TV world and meet more funny cartoon characters.He agreed to help Blinky and his friends.
Together,Max and the cartoon characters set out on a journey to defeat Zorg.Along the way to Zorg's lair(巢穴),they encountered all sorts of challenges.They had to cross dangerous rivers,climb steep mountains,and outsmart Zorg's followers.
As they traveled,Max got to know the cartoon characters better and developed friendships with them.Though Blinky and his friends were terrified sometimes,they never lost heart or thought of giving up their dream of going back to their TV world.Assisted by Max,Blinky and his friends fought their way to Zorg's lair.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After many days of travel,Max and the cartoon characters finally arrived at Zorg's lair.
Max laughed out loud,eventually waking up from his dream.
8.(2025 安徽模拟) For some years,I had been in a bad feeling,which resulted from my father,but that day,all changed.
On a Sunday in March,it was my 18th birthday,a day that was supposed to be filled with joy and celebration.My family gathered in a restaurant to celebrate it.The environment filled with laughter,the sounds of plates,and the sweet smell of freshly baked cake.My grandparents sat there,recalling my childhood.Cousins,aunts,uncles,and even a little boy at the neighboring table filled the space.Yet,lively as the atmosphere was,a heavy gap hung over the day﹣ ﹣my father wasn't there.
My father had been gone for over a decade.He was a police officer,a man of strong principles and a deep sense of duty.Years ago,he drowned while saving a child who had fallen into a rushing river.I didn't fully understand what had happened back then,but as I grew older,I began to struggle with his absence in my life.Every missed birthday,every school performance and every hurt knee felt like a betrayal(叛徒).I couldn't help but blame him.He had promised to always be there for me,yet he chose to save a stranger's child over staying with his own family.
As the party continued,I tried to hide my conflicted emotions.The guests clapped and sang as my mother brought out the cake,decorated with 18 glowing candles.Everyone's face lit up,but my mind wandered.Then,out of nowhere,a piercing cry shattered the joyful hum of the party.The little boy sitting at the table next to us,just about five years old,was choking.It seemed that he had been eating a grape and accidentally swallowed it whole.His face turned red as he struggled for air,his tiny hands clawing at his throat.Chaos erupted.His mom screamed and looked helpless.All the people present were extremely nervous.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At that moment,something inside me sprang into action.
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When I breathed a sigh of relief,the boy's parents came to me.
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9.(2025 安徽模拟) When my husband asked me what I wanted for the coming festival,I replied,"The Famous Five series."His first response was,"What's that?"I had to explain.He knew there was loss and sadness associated with moving so many times,and that I'd lost some material things along the way.What I hadn't explained quite yet was my desire to connect with my past through the books I'd enjoyed as a child.
During our elementary school years in Austria,I would frequent the British bookshop in Vienna.During those visits,I acquired all twenty﹣one books in the Famous Five series by the British author Enid Blyton.I enjoyed reading about the adventures of the"Five",which included siblings(兄妹) Julian,Dick,and Anne as well as their cousin Georgina and her dog Timmy.The stories feature funny plots centering on catching bad people﹣quite extraordinary,considering the heroes were mere teenagers!The books were my passports to adventures I'd never experienced in my own life.
Unfortunately,my family had to move to the United States quite abruptly due to a health emergency.My parents had to make difficult decisions about what to bring to America.Since books were heavy,my parents were unable to bring most of my books with them,including the Famous Five series.I was heartbroken!
Fast forward to seven years into my marriage,some seventeen years after Id left my treasured Famous Five series behind,I decided I wanted to acquire my books for a holiday.I'd been searching the Internet for the series but got disappointed,because no American book publishers or websites had the books.We could have bought them on a foreign website,but we were nervous about using our credit card that way.
The festival eventually arrived and my husband,daughter,and I sat around the table.We traditionally opened one present and each of us picked a gift.My daughter opened hers first,and then my husband.I eyed my chosen present,a colorfully wrapped box,and guessed what it might be."An elephant?"my daughter smiled."Oh,let's end the suspense!"I said and began tearing the wrapping.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It was a brown box,taped shut with clear packing tape.
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My husband looked at me,saying,"India."
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10.(2025 全国模拟)
The Popsicle Kids
A nearly empty box of Popsicles (棒冰) in the freezer,left from a grandchild's visit,caught my attention.Initially,I wanted to throw it away,but my wife suggested we give the remaining Popsicles to the neighborhood children.Her suggestion changed our life and led us to a future full of "Popsicle Kids."
My wife and I,retired on Social Security,live in an apartment complex.After careers in sales and nursing,our daily concerns revolved around aches,pains,and dinner.We often wondered what good we were to the world.
That changed dramatically after we gave away the first Popsicle.
Minutes after watching a neighbor boy,a second grader,walk away with an icy treat,our doorbell rang.An adorable blond girl,about six,smiled sweetly, "Is it true you're giving away Popsicles?"
With the box empty,we returned to our concerns.
Early the next morning,the doorbell rang repeatedly.Standing on our porch were the four children from the previous day.They vocalized their wants,chanting (有节奏地喊), "We want Popsicles!We want Popsicles!"
Looking into their eager young faces,I wondered, "What have I started?" Sensing a victory,they nodded eagerly when I explained the rules:ring the bell once,one Popsicle per day,and share something good about their day.But their thin shoulders bent downwards in disappointment when I mentioned they had to give something in return.I came to the rescue,suggesting they share something positive about their day,like what they learned at school or helping another student.Over time,new rules were added: "Ladies first," "Don't interrupt," and "Properly get rid of the sticks."
On holidays,they expressed their understanding of why the day was celebrated.Over the years,about fifty youngsters visited.Some became part of my life,like the four kids who joined me on the steps one spring to read "Where the Red Fern Grows." We discussed catching crawfish,loving pets,and family relationships.This simple act of sharing Popsicles transformed our life,bringing joy and meaning to both the children and ourselves.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One night,another boy appeared at the door,saying "I don't want a Popsicle;I just need to talk."
I've sensed it's more than Popsicles that bring these kids to our door.
11.(2025 郓城县校级一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The first day Mohamed went to a fine food store in his new neighborhood,he realized that he really wasn't in Tunisia anymore.He looked up at the menu board,which had nothing but sandwiches on it,and wondered how he was going to figure out what all of these strange names meant.Mohamed decided that he would just get dessert instead and asked the woman at the counter for ice cream in a cup.She smiled broadly and disappeared behind the big glass display case to fill his order.
While Mohamed waited,he looked at the baked goods in the case.There were sixteen kinds of bagels (百吉饼) and a few different types of cookies that Mohamed didn't recognize,but there were no pies and definitely nothing from home.Mohamed had been so excited when his parents told him they were immigrating to the United States,but now,his bravery and excitement felt a little out of place.
The woman came back to the counter with a tall paper cup.It contained a long straw and some kind of frothy (有泡沫的) drink.Mohamed,completely confused,took the cup and thanked her,considering the possibility that he had used the wrong word.
"It's the soda you ordered," she said, "an ice cream drink in a cup."
He smiled at the woman again,pointed at one of the bagels,and said, "That one,too,please," which seemed to work better.
Mohamed took the bagel and his mystery soda to a table and sat down to eat.Why was it that English had been so easy for him in his classes in Tunisia,but when it came down to actually speaking,he couldn't even get what he wanted to eat?
Later,he might find it funny that his English was so hard to figure out that he got a soda instead of the ice cream he wanted.Right now,it just felt depressing that his English was,he thought,disappointing.One mistake seemed to put everything Mohamed wanted or knew about himself impossible to reach.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:The next day,Mohamed made a plan to engage deeply in English.________
Paragraph 2:One day,he decided to return to the store where he had his first frustrating experience.________
12.(2025 德州一模) I had always wanted a dog since young.My parents were against the idea,saying that taking care of a dog was a lifetime commitment.
On my tenth birthday,Father stepped into the house and announced, "Nancy,you have a new puppy!" I shouted in delight and ran towards Father,only to find it was a toy puppy.My face fell.I turned away.Father explained, "This is a 'Think﹣It﹣Over' puppy.You should try taking care of it before deciding about a real dog."
The puppy did look like a real dog from a distance and it even had a dog smell.Inside its body was a computer programmed to make barking sounds.Father handed me a key,which could be stuck into its back to stop its barking.I accepted the puppy,which I named Friday since it was Friday that day.
That evening,my friends and I decided to take Friday to a dog café.It was freezing cold,so I wrapped it in a blanket as if it were a real dog.The computer inside could tell if someone treated it badly,like shaking or not caring for it,and I did not want that recorded.
Having waited in line,we finally got a table.The waiter,not knowing I was carrying a false puppy,asked attentively if I would need a basket with cushion.I told him, "Oh,it's not a real puppy,but..." Before I could finish my sentence,he gave me an unpleasant look,turned and served other diners who were right there to play with the café's dogs.I might have seemed unusual to him.During our meal,my friends and I received strange looks from the other dog owners in the café.We ignored them and continued with our own conversation.
After dinner,we went to a nearby shopping mall,where customers were selecting their favorites.My friends were looking at clothes,but I couldn't.The puppy I was carrying was becoming increasingly heavy.Extremely tired of Friday,I put it down in a corner and just wandered around,seeking clothes I could try on.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly,Friday started to bark like a real dog.
The moment I got home,I handed Friday to Father,tears in eyes.
13.(2025 聊城一模) On a dark stormy night,Lucy dressed in a bright yellow raincoat covered in dirty mud was sitting on her house step,waiting for her mom to come home.After she waited for an hour,she became scared.She could hear noises that made her feel lonelier and more abandoned.Various horrible thoughts rolled through her head.She thought her mom didn't want her anymore and had left her to fend for(照料) herself.She thought that something might have happened to her that would affect her life forever.Suddenly she saw lights from a car.Her face lit up but as soon as she saw the car clearly,she realized it wasn't her mom's car.
However,the car was heading straight for her.She was so afraid of being abducted(诱拐) by someone that she started to scream.She had heard so many stories from her teacher that had terrified her.Her teacher told her what happened to so many people who were abducted.She didn't want to be one of those people.She began to think about all the wonderful times she had spent with her mom.In the meantime,she began to think of what she had said to her before she left that morning.She had said that she was the worst mom and that she never wanted to see her or talk to her again in her life.How she wished she had never said any of those horrible words to her mom.
As the car came closer and closer she began to cry and realized that this might be the last time she ever saw her family again.As the mysterious figure got out of the car,she couldn't see the person's face because it was so dark.All she could see was the silver outline of the figure.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Lucy was scared half to death as the figure approached closer to her but then she heard a familiar voice.________
"That's OK,my darling,but do you like my new car?"________
14.(2025 河北模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
"How did you sleep?" my husband asked,as he poured me a cup of hot coffee.
"I had a strange dream," I said,blowing into the sweet,light brown liquid. "I was standing in the yard,and a light﹣haired dog was running toward me.I stretched my arms wide and called her Lily."
"Hmm," he said,not looking up from his paper, "wonder what it means."
We didn't have a dog and had not discussed owning one.We also didn't interpret my dream as a sign that we should go out and get one.
A week or so later,I noticed a dog rest in the corner of our yard.I assumed it belonged to one of our neighbors and thought nothing more of it.A few nights after that,we came home from a party and saw a dog lying on our porch (门廊).It was winter,and we frequently found a cat or two sleeping in the cushions (靠垫) of the furniture.It was comforting to know we were a shelter for animals that were out in those cold temperatures.We kept food and water on the porch for those passing through.So,it was no surprise that a dog might take shelter under the cover of our welcoming front porch.We had motion﹣sensing lights,so I could see how a wanderer might take that as a signal to come up the steps and rest her tired bones.
I approached the strange animal slowly.The dog lifted her head and looked at me.She was a beautiful blond husky.I reached out to pet her,but she stood up and limped (跛行) down the steps and off into the darkness.
We didn't see a collar on her,but clearly,she was hurt.I couldn't stand the thought of that sweet dog suffering in pain from an injury.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"She must be Lily,the dog appeared in my dream the other day," I said.________
We took her to the local animal hospital._____
15.(2025 黑龙江一模) Once upon a time in a vibrant city park,where the hustle and bustle of life echoed through the trees,an elderly woman named Margaret sat alone on a weathered bench.Her eyes,once bright with the joy of life,were now clouded with sorrow.The world seemed to fast﹣forward(快进) around her,and she felt as if she were a forgotten character in a play that had long ended.The loss of her beloved husband,a man who had been her rock and her world,had left a void in her heart that no one else seemed to notice or care to fill.
Margaret's days were filled with the echoes of their laughter,the warmth of his embrace,and the shared memories that haunted her.She felt like an invisible ghost in a world that had moved on without her.The park,once a place of joy and companionship,had become a reminder of what she had lost.
One particularly sunny afternoon,as the park buzzed with the energy of children at play and the chatter of their friends,a young girl named Lily skipped through the park,her laughter a melody that seemed to dance on the breeze.Her eyes sparkled with the innocence of youth,and her smile was as bright as the sun above.
As Lily passed by Margaret's bench,she noticed the elderly woman's sorrowful expression.The contrast between her own joy and Margaret's sadness struck a chord in her heart.Without any hesitation,Lily approached Margaret,her curiosity and empathy driving her to ask, "Why are you so sad?"
Margaret was taken aback(大吃一惊) by the child's directness,but there was something in Lily's eyes that invited trust.She found herself sharing her story of loss and loneliness,the words she had kept locked away for so long now tumbling out in a torrent of emotions.Lily listened intently,her young heart swelling with compassion (同情) for the woman who had once known such love and now knew such pain.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
From that moment on,Lily made it her mission to bring a spark of joy back into Margaret's life.______
As weeks turned into months,Margaret's world brightened.______
16.(2025 端州区二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During the first week of high school,one of the major headaches for Eva was finding her way in the huge school building.It was a six﹣story building.On each floor,hallways stretched in four also a library,a cafeteria,and a gym.directions,leading to classrooms,labs,and teachers' offices.Somewhere in the building,there was also a library,a cafeteria,and a gym.
Having a poor sense of direction,Eva found it impossible to get around in such a huge building.All the different hallways and rooms were too much to think about.She decided that she would memorize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest of the place didn't exist.
In her first P.E.class,Eva was shocked when Coach Pitt announced that everyone had to run one mile around the track outside.There was nothing she feared more than having to run a whole mile.To Eva, "a mile" was used to describe long distances.It was ten miles from her home to her grandfather's,and that always seemed like a long way,even in a car!
When Coach Pitt blew his whistle,Eva figured she would be left in the dust.However,while some of her classmates edged ahead,others actually fell behind. "It's just the beginning," she thought. "I'll come in last for sure."
Soon Eva began to breathe hard,with her heart pounding and legs shaking.Feeling desperate,Eva started using a mind trick on herself.She stopped thinking about the word "mile." Instead,she focused on reaching the shadow east on the track by a tree up ahead.Then she concentrated on jogging to the spot where the track curved(拐弯).After that,she tried to see if she could complete her first lap(一圈).One lap turned into two,then three,then four.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Coach Pitt said "Nice work!" to her at the finish line,Eva was surprised.________
Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building.________
17.(2025 辽宁一模) Kaylie and I had been good friends since Grade 1.Whenever we had a break,we hung out together.And the more time we spent together,the more we realized how amazingly alike we were.We both liked baking extra﹣creative cookies,we both had awesome(and sometimes annoying) younger siblings,and we both have the same favorite song and even animal—dolphin.
Last summer,we went to the Arts and Crafts Fair in our park.There were so many things to see.We didn't know where to begin.We had fun walking around the rows and rows of art booths,clothing racks and kickknack tables.I found the best polka﹣dot hat,but it cost too much.Kaylie fell in love with a yo﹣yo,but she looked at the price tag,and yup—it cost too much!To tell you the truth,we were starting to get discouraged.Just as we were about to give up on finding anything we could afford,we came to a table with gobs of gorgeous bracelets (手链)."These are so cool,"I said,picking up one with moons and stars."And look,they're in my price range!"
"Please try anything on.The beads(珠子) come from Thailand,and I string each bracelet with love.My name is Tex,"the jeweler said with a friendly smile.Then at the same moment,we both saw it!A bracelet with colorful beads shone brightly in the light,including two pink beads in the shape of dolphin,which added a playful touch to the design.It was the only bracelet like it on the table.Reaching for the bracelet together,we asked Tex if he possibly had any more dolphin bracelets just like this.To our disappointment,that was the last one.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Staring at the bracelet,both of us were hesitant.________
When we both looked at the two dolphin beads in the bracelet,our eyes lit up.________
18.(2025 无极县校级一模) A golden haze settled over the cornfields.The sun prepared to rest for the evening,and I intended to follow.Saying goodbye to the clan (宗族) I was staying with,I headed back to camp.I looked forward to setting my camera aside for an evening to reflect on my time in Ethiopia.
It wasn't long when I heard a voice behind me, "Photo,photo,photo." A young Surma boy about eight years old followed closely at my heels.I breathed a tired sigh.I had no energy to press the shutter button one more time,no matter how beautiful or eager he was.
Over the past four days,many in the camp had wanted their photograph taken.I hoped the boy would find someone else to snap his photograph,but he kept following me and saying, "Photo,photo,photo." He managed to catch my eye.With eyes wide full of hope,he asked me again with anticipation on his face.
As I looked at him,half interested,an idea for a composition flashed in my mind.
I kneeled in the cornfield and instructed the boy where to stand and how to pose.As I prepared to take the photograph,his energy suddenly shifted from eagerness to shyness to fear.
No matter what I told him to do—how to stand and how to look—I just couldn't get the shot.Frustrated,I gave up.I looked at the boy,who looked alone and awkward.He'd wanted his photograph taken,and now he'd gone camera﹣shy.
In an effort to cheer him,I clapped my hands,saying, "That was great.You were great." Others in his clan gathered around,cheering and clapping loudly.The boy's face immediately broke into a smile.I intuitively took a few shots of the moment.That photograph turned out to be better than I'd imagined.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I printed a large copy of the photograph and returned to the Surma boy's clan.________
As I left Ethiopia,I held onto the memory of the Surma boy's joyous tears and the collective hope of his clan.________
19.(2025 滁州模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a warm summer evening,my wife and I were on our way to the grocery store,when I noticed a man sitting on the pavement under a street light.Something about him made us stop.He sat motionless with his gaze blankly fixed on an object only he could see.His beard was long and messy,so was the hair on his head.A discarded advertisement banner wrapped rudely around his waist was his only protection.The vacant look in his eyes indicated he was possibly incapable of normal mental function.
We tried asking him a few questions,but he showed no signs of having heard or understood us.He just sat there,staring into the darkness,ignorant of our presence.It was quite apparent that he was a beggar in need of help and we thought a while about what we could do. "He looks starving," my wife remarked, "but there is no point in giving him money." I agreed. "We'll buy him a loaf of bread instead," I suggested.
It took us a while to finish our shopping.When we returned to the spot where we had first seen the beggar,he wasn't there.We looked around,but there was no sign of him.Disappointed,we decided to go home,wondering what to do with the loaf of bread.We'd barely gone a hundred meters when we spotted the beggar in the distance:he crossed the road and was seated with a family of migrant labourers outside a shabby tent.Surprisingly,none of the family members seemed to mind this unexpected guest's presence.In fact,he looked to be quite welcome.The family had accepted him without question,just as if he were a visiting relative or a close friend.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Curious,I stopped my motorcycle and watched with my wife.________
These were people who had no roof over their heads.________
20.(2025 长安区校级模拟)
The Price of a Dream
I grew up in a poor family with six brothers,three sisters﹣﹣a group of foster kids,my father and my wonderful mother.My parents worked day and night to keep a roof over our heads and food on our table.It's true that we had little money and few goods,but we got plenty of love and attention.I was very happy and energetic.I understood that no matter how poor a person was,he could still afford a dream.
My dream was athletics.I fell in love with baseball at an early age,a love so deep that I almost gave it my all.I practiced hard every day and that made me a little closer to my dream.By the time I was sixteen,I had made great progress:I could throw a ninety﹣mile﹣per﹣hour fast ball and hit anything that moved on the field.I was also lucky:my high school coach was Ollie Jarvis,who not only believed in me,but also taught me how to believe in myself.One particular incident (事件) with my coach Ollie Jarvis changed my life forever.
It was the summer holiday in Senior 2 and one of my friends recommended me for a summer job.This meant a chance for money in my pocket﹣ certainly,money for a new bike and new clothes,and I could also begin to save money for a house for my mother,which was what I had always dreamed of.The prospect (前景) of this summer job was attractive and I wanted to jump at this chance.Then it hit me that I would have to give up summer baseball training to deal with the work schedule.I was afraid of telling my coach,who would certainly be against my plan.I hesitated for several days.At last,I spurred (给.....打气) myself with the advice my mother often gave us, "If you make your bed,you have to lie in it." I made up my mind.
Paragraph1:
When I told my coach Ollie Jarvis,he was as angry as I expected him to be.____________
Paragraph2:
"Well," he asked, "is ﹩3.5 an hour from the summer job the price of a dream?" _________
2025年高考英语复习考前预测:读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 河南二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落的开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My wife Lila and I were in the middle of a heated discussion.Our 19﹣year﹣old son Andy,who was blind,wanted to attend a college far across the country.Lila was extremely worried."But how will he manage on his own?He's blind!"she exclaimed.I understood her concerns,but I believed Andy was clever,ambitious,and confident.I said,"He's nineteen.He wants to try things independently.We've done all we can for him.It's time to let him go."
Then,I brought up the story of Gertie.In the third year of our marriage,before our children were born,a pair of geese arrived at the small lake on our farm with a flock(群) of Canada geese in late April.After the flock left,these two geese stayed.We were excited when they started nesting in the southeastern corner of the lake.
However,it was about three weeks later that disaster struck.One evening,as I was taking a rest on the platform,weary from a long day on the farm,and Lila was working in the garden beside the house,we heard loud honks and wing﹣beating sounds from the lake.By the time I caught up with Lila at the nest,the male goose was dead,its neck broken.Lila found the female goose,badly injured with a broken wing,a bleeding leg,and a missing eye.I suggested putting it down,"It'll never make it.Only one eye.A broken wing.An injured leg.And if it does live,it will die of sorrow.They say that geese mate for life."
But Lila was determined to save it.And she proved me wrong.She drove the goose to the vet(兽医) that night.
Lila fixed a bed for her by the lake and for several days,Gertie,as she named her,barely moved.It was many days before she picked up eating.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Gertie survived but was severely disabled.____________________________
The next spring,to our surprise,Gertie came back._______________________________
【答案】 Gertie survived but was severely disabled.Despite her injuries,she gradually regained her strength with Lila's constant care.Over time,Gertie learned to adapt to her new reality,finding ways to navigate the lake with only one eye and a damaged wing.Lila's dedication to Gertie's recovery taught us both a valuable lesson about resilience and the power of hope.Gertie's determination to live despite her disabilities mirrored the strength we saw in our son Andy,who was also determined to overcome the challenges of his blindness.
The next spring,to our surprise,Gertie came back.She returned to the lake,not as the same bird she once was,but as a symbol of perseverance.Her return was a reminder that even in the face of adversity,life finds a way to continue.Lila and I watched Gertie from the platform,and in that moment,we realized that our son Andy,like Gertie,had the strength to thrive on his own.We decided to support his decision to attend college,trusting in his ability to navigate the world independently.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了作者和妻子Lila关于儿子Andy是否应该独立去上大学的讨论,并通过回忆他们曾经救助的一只受伤的鹅Gertie的故事,来探讨生命中的坚韧与希望。
高分句型一:Gertie's determination to live despite her disabilities mirrored the strength we saw in our son Andy,who was also determined to overcome the challenges of his blindness.
翻译:Gertie尽管有残疾,但她坚持生活下去的决心,反映了我们在儿子安迪身上看到的力量,安迪也决心克服失明带来的挑战。
分析:运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:Her return was a reminder that even in the face of adversity,life finds a way to continue.
翻译:她的回归提醒我们,即使面对逆境,生活也会继续下去。
分析:运用了that引导的同位语从句。
【解答】 Gertie survived but was severely disabled.Despite her injuries,she gradually regained her strength with Lila's constant care.Over time,Gertie learned to adapt to her new reality,finding ways to navigate the lake with only one eye and a damaged wing.Lila's dedication to Gertie's recovery taught us both a valuable lesson about resilience and the power of hope.Gertie's determination to live despite her disabilities mirrored the strength we saw in our son Andy,who was also determined to overcome the challenges of his blindness.【高分句型一】(描写Gertie的恢复过程,展现了生命的坚韧,并与Andy的情况形成类比)
The next spring,to our surprise,Gertie came back.She returned to the lake,not as the same bird she once was,but as a symbol of perseverance.Her return was a reminder that even in the face of adversity,life finds a way to continue.【高分句型二】Lila and I watched Gertie from the platform,and in that moment,we realized that our son Andy,like Gertie,had the strength to thrive on his own.We decided to support his decision to attend college,trusting in his ability to navigate the world independently.(描写Gertie的回归,进一步强化了主题,并促使作者和妻子最终支持Andy的决定)
【点评】读后续写,首先要阅读文章,理解材料的主旨和重要细节,注意把握材料中的人物、情节、时间和地点等信息,在确定主题和情节时注意与材料中的情节和人物保持连贯性,同时可以加入自己的想象力和创造力来丰富情节。首先写开头部分,与提供的阅读材料进行衔接,确保文章的连贯性;然后写发展部分,根据自己确定的情节发展进行拓展,可以使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析。同时,注意与前文保持逻辑上的连贯性;最后写结尾部分,总结全文,并为读者留下一定的思考空间。
2.(2025 攀枝花校级二模) In a small village,there lived a young girl named Lily who was known for her love of flowers.Her garden was a kaleidoscope of colors,filled with roses,tulips,and daffodils.But among all the flowers,there was one special rose bush with petals of the deepest red,a gift from her grandmother before she passed away.Lily believed that the petals of this rose held a magical power:each petal symbolizes the hope and passion for life.
One fateful summer,Lily was diagnosed with a rare illness.As her health worsened,so did the vibrant colors of her garden.The petals of the special rose began to fall one by one,mirroring her own physical decline.Each day,Lily would count the remaining petals,believing that when the last one fell,her time would come.
Her neighbor,an old artist named Mr.Thompson,noticed Lily's sadness and learned about the significance of the rose petals to the girl.He was a kind﹣hearted man,known for his failing to create the perfect painting﹣his "masterpiece"that he had always dreamed of but never completed.
One stormy night,as the wind howled and the rain beat against the windows,Mr.Thompson made a decision.He would paint a replica of the last petal on the rose,so realistic that it would fool even the sharpest eye.He worked throughout the night,each stroke(一笔)a dance of determination and hope.
The next morning,the last petal on the rose was still there,clinging to the stem despite the storm.Lily,weak but curious,looked out the window and saw the petal for a long time,seemingly touched by the scene.It was then that she realized the power of hope and the love that others had for her.
Days passed,and Lily's condition began to improve.The doctor,who had initially predicted that she had a slim chance of survival,was amazed at her recovery.Lily knew it was Mr.Thompson's act of kindness that gave her the will to fight.She couldn't wait to thank him.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1:Her heart pounded wildly as she opened the creaky(老朽的) door.______
Para 2:When spring came,Mr.Thompson's health condition improved in Lily's care.______
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了在一个小村庄里,住着一个名叫Lily的年轻女孩,她以爱花而闻名。在她的花园里,有一棵特别的玫瑰花丛,花瓣最红。Lily被诊断出患有一种罕见的疾病。她的邻居,一位名叫Thompson的老艺术家,注意到了Lily的悲伤,并了解了玫瑰花瓣对女孩的重要性。他在玫瑰上画最后一片花瓣的复制品,以鼓励Lily。Lily知道是Thompson先生的善举给了她战斗的意志。她迫不及待地想感谢他,拜访了Thompson先生后,他们成为了好朋友,相互陪伴和鼓励。最终,Thompson先生也重拾画笔。
高分句型一:Lily rushed and hugged him tightly,tears streaming down.
译文:莉莉冲过去,紧紧地抱住他,泪水夺眶而出。
分析:这句话使用了独立主格结构tears streaming down。
高分句型二:Inspired by Lily's boundless enthusiasm,Mr.Thompson once again picked up his brush and embarked on a new painting.
译文:受到莉莉无限热情的启发,汤普森再次拿起画笔,开始了一幅新画。
分析:这句话使用了过去分词短语Inspired by Lily's boundless enthusiasm作状语。
【解答】 Para 1:Her heart pounded wildly as she opened the creaky(老朽的) door.There stood Mr.Thompson,looking a bit tired but with a smile on his face.Lily rushed and hugged him tightly,tears streaming down.【高分句型一】 "Thank you,Mr.Thompson!Your painting gave me hope and strength," she sobbed.Mr.Thompson gently patted her back and said, "You're a strong girl,Lily.I just wanted to help." They sat down and talked for a long time,sharing their feelings.From that day on,a connection formed between the two,and Lily frequently dropped by to take care of him.(Lily来到Thompson先生家里,表达感谢,并成为朋友)
Para 2:When spring came,Mr.Thompson's health condition improved in Lily's care.The garden burst into full bloom once more.They would leisurely sit in the garden,fully immersed in the beauty of the blossoming flowers.Lily took numerous pictures of the garden and shared them with the school newspaper,using the power of hope and kindness to encourage more people.Inspired by Lily's boundless enthusiasm,Mr.Thompson once again picked up his brush and embarked on a new painting.【高分句型二】In the small village,it was their friendship,along with the garden,that evolved into a symbol of hope and fresh starts.(Lily和Thompson先生之间的相处和陪伴,以及鼓励)
【点评】读后续写是一种结合阅读和写作的考查方式,主要考查考生的理解能力、想象力、创造力和语言表达能力。在英语写作中,读后续写通常提供一段阅读材料,要求考生根据材料的内容和情节,发挥想象力,续写接下来的故事或论述。这类题型在各类英语考试中较为常见,主要考查学生的阅读理解能力、思维能力和语言表达能力。
1.选材特点:
(1)所需阅读的短文在350以内;
(2)多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
2.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:
(1)与所给短文及段落开头语衔接程度;
(2)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;
(3)上下文的连贯性。
3.(2025 市中区校级一模) In a small village at the edge of an ancient forest,where the trees whispered secrets older than time itself,stood the Heartwood tree,whose vast branches stretched toward the sky.The villagers believed that the Heartwood was more than just a tree﹣it was a living guardian,protecting them from harm and ensuring their prosperity.Every year,as the Harvest Festival approached,the village elder﹣Old Mara﹣would climb its towering trunk,offering a prayer to the forest gods in exchange for the blessings of a fruitful season.
However,Old Mara,once strong and dynamic,had grown frail with age.The climb,once effortless for her,had become a challenging task,and she could no longer make it.The Heartwood had become a symbol of stability,but without Old Mara carrying on the climb,the villagers felt their future was uncertain.
Among them was Jarek,a young man who had always admired Old Mara's wisdom and the devotion she had shown to her role.He had watched her climb the tree every year,her face peaceful,as if she were one with the ancient tree and the land beneath it.Jarek had never imagined a time when she would not perform the task.Now,with the responsibility falling to him,Jarek found himself overwhelmed.He had always understood the significance of the climb,but he had never felt the weight of it so personally until now.
As the festival drew closer,the pressure increased.The villagers would ask Jarek if he was prepared.Their eyes﹣wide,earnest,and full of expectation﹣made his heart tighten.It was as though the very survival of the village rested on his shoulders.The climb was no longer just a tradition;it had become a symbol of the village's endurance,of their trust in him.And the thought of failing them worried him.The night before the festival,Jarek couldn't sleep,plagued by self﹣doubt.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At dawn,he visited Old Mara.
Jarek neared the base of the tree.
【答案】 At dawn,he visited Old Mara.Greeting him with a gentle smile,she sensed the burden on Jarek.His heart was heavy,and it was apparent that he was not fully prepared.Old Mara patted his shoulder and said, "I believe you can do it.We trust you because you are the best. " Motivated by the one he admired,Jarek understood that all he needed was determination.The village stood behind him.After expressing gratitude and waving goodbye to Old Mara,he made his way to the Heartwood.
Jarek neared the base of the tree.With countless eyes fixed on him,Jarek started to climb.His heart raced,but his mind was clear.When he finally reached the top,Jarek offered a prayer just as Old Mara had done.It was then that the villagers erupted into applause,their faces filled with relief and hope.The cheers rang in Jarek's ears,but what struck him most was Old Mara's approving look.Now he truly realized responsibility was more than shouldering a task — it was about trust and resolve.
【分析】文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了在一个位于古老森林边缘的小村庄里,有一棵被村民们视为守护神的心木树。每年丰收节,村庄的长者老马拉都会爬上这棵树祈祷,以求得丰收。然而,随着老马拉的年迈,她已无法再完成这一攀登任务。这一重任因此落到了年轻人贾雷克身上。贾雷克一直敬佩老马拉的智慧和奉献,但面对这一突如其来的责任,他感到压力重重。随着节日的临近,村民们的期待让他倍感焦虑,他担心自己会辜负大家的信任。
高分句型一:With countless eyes fixed on him,Jarek started to climb.
译文:无数的目光注视着他,贾里克开始向上攀爬。
分析:这句话使用了with复合结构。
高分句型二:It was then that the villagers erupted into applause,their faces filled with relief and hope.
译文:就在那时,村民们爆发出热烈的掌声,他们的脸上充满了宽慰和希望。
分析:这句话使用了强调句It was+强调部分+that+其余部分,独立主格结构their faces filled with relief and hope。
【解答】 At dawn,he visited Old Mara.Greeting him with a gentle smile,she sensed the burden on Jarek.His heart was heavy,and it was apparent that he was not fully prepared.Old Mara patted his shoulder and said, "I believe you can do it.We trust you because you are the best. " Motivated by the one he admired,Jarek understood that all he needed was determination.The village stood behind him.After expressing gratitude and waving goodbye to Old Mara,he made his way to the Heartwood.(贾雷克刚开始的心境以及拜访老马拉后受到鼓励并下定决心的经过)
Jarek neared the base of the tree.With countless eyes fixed on him,Jarek started to climb.【高分句型一】His heart raced,but his mind was clear.When he finally reached the top,Jarek offered a prayer just as Old Mara had done.It was then that the villagers erupted into applause,their faces filled with relief and hope.【高分句型二】The cheers rang in Jarek's ears,but what struck him most was Old Mara's approving look.Now he truly realized responsibility was more than shouldering a task — it was about trust and resolve.(贾雷克顺利到达树顶后,村民的反应以及贾雷克的感悟)
【点评】读后续写是一种结合阅读和写作的考查方式,主要考查考生的理解能力、想象力、创造力和语言表达能力。在英语写作中,读后续写通常提供一段阅读材料,要求考生根据材料的内容和情节,发挥想象力,续写接下来的故事或论述。这类题型在各类英语考试中较为常见,主要考查学生的阅读理解能力、思维能力和语言表达能力。
1.选材特点:
(1)所需阅读的短文在350以内;
(2)多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
2.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:
(1)与所给短文及段落开头语衔接程度;
(2)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;
(3)上下文的连贯性。
4.(2025 青岛模拟) Johnny,a 17﹣year﹣old from Whitehorse,had been competing in Cross﹣Country Skiing for five years.For many young athletes like him in Whitehorse,Yukon,the Yukon Cross﹣Country SkiChampionships were more than just a competition.It was their dream.A year ago,Johnny qualified for the Championships and successfully won a medal.
After the competition,Johnny was eager to share his experience with Hayden,his teammate and best friend.Hayden had narrowly missed qualifying for the Championships.Johnny had watched his friend train tirelessly,push himself to the limit,and always keep his big smile.Johnny knew how much the Championships meant to Hayden.
Johnny handed Hayden some colorful pins."These are pins I traded with athletes from all over Yukon,"Johnny said with a smile, "I want you to have them,so you can feel a part of the event too."
Hayden was touched, "Thanks,Johnny.This means a lot."
"Next time,"Johnny continued, "I hope you can also experience the event.I know you'll make it."
Hayden nodded, "I'll work even harder for that."
This year's Yukon Cross﹣Country Ski Championships would be held in a month.Coach Nick guided the team through daily tough training and the team made significant progress in their skating,cornering,and downhill techniques.Meanwhile,they enhanced their endurance and balance.Both Johnny and Hayden met the Championship standards.Given Johnny's rich competitive experience,Coach Nick once again qualified Johnny for this year's event and Hayden was selected as an alternate(替补).
The qualification for the competition excited Johnny,but there was always an idea staying in his mind.Johnny knew his friend had been wanting to go to the Championships for several years.This was the last chance for both of them to attend the Championships,as they would age out of the competition after this year.The thought became clear in his mind,strong and steady.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next day,Johnny went to see the coach._____
Hayden accepted the precious chance to compete in the Championships._____
【答案】 The next day,Johnny went to see the coach.He told the coach that he wanted to give his qualification to Hayden.Johnny explained that this was the last chance for both of them to attend the Championships,and Hayden had been longing for it for years.He believed Hayden deserved this opportunity as he had trained so hard.The coach was moved by Johnny's selfless act.After considering Johnny's request carefully,the coach agreed to let Hayden take Johnny's place.
Hayden accepted the precious chance to compete in the Championships.He was extremely grateful to Johnny.He knew this was a once﹣in﹣a﹣lifetime opportunity,and he didn't want to let Johnny down.In the following days,Hayden trained even harder.When the Championships finally arrived,he gave it his all.Although the competition was tough,Hayden's determination and hard﹣work paid off.He performed well and achieved a great result,making both Johnny and himself proud.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了来自Whitehorse的17岁少年Johnny在越野滑雪比赛中的经历,以及他为了好友Hayden能够参加梦寐以求的Yukon Cross﹣Country Ski Championships,主动放弃自己的参赛资格,将机会让给Hayden的感人故事。
高分句型一:Although the competition was tough,Hayden's determination and hard﹣work paid off.
翻译:尽管竞争激烈,海登的决心和努力还是取得了成效。
分析:句中使用了although引导的让步状语从句。
高分句型二:He performed well and achieved a great result,making both Johnny and himself proud.
翻译:他干得很出色,取得了很大的成绩,使约翰尼和他本人都感到骄傲。
分析:句中使用了现在分词短语making both Johnny and himself proud作状语。
【解答】 The next day,Johnny went to see the coach.He told the coach that he wanted to give his qualification to Hayden.Johnny explained that this was the last chance for both of them to attend the Championships,and Hayden had been longing for it for years.He believed Hayden deserved this opportunity as he had trained so hard.The coach was moved by Johnny's selfless act.After considering Johnny's request carefully,the coach agreed to let Hayden take Johnny's place.(描写Johnny找到教练,提出将自己的参赛机会给了Hayden)
Hayden accepted the precious chance to compete in the Championships.He was extremely grateful to Johnny.He knew this was a once﹣in﹣a﹣lifetime opportunity,and he didn't want to let Johnny down.In the following days,Hayden trained even harder.When the Championships finally arrived,he gave it his all.Although the competition was tough,Hayden's determination and hard﹣work paid off.【高分句型一】He performed well and achieved a great result,making both Johnny and himself proud.【高分句型二】(描写Hayden非常感激Johnny,同时在锦标赛中取得了优异的成绩)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
要注意续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
5.(2025 青岛一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Johnny,a 17﹣year﹣old from Whitehorse,had been competing in Cross﹣Country Skiing for five years.For many young athletes like him in Whitehorse,Yukon,the Yukon Cross﹣Country Ski Championships were more than just a competition.It was their dream.A year ago,Johnny qualified for the Championships and successfully won a medal.
After the competition,Johnny was eager to share his experience with Hayden,his teammate and best friend.Hayden had narrowly missed qualifying for the Championships.Johnny had watched his friend train tirelessly,push himself to the limit,and always keep his big smile.Johnny knew how much the Championships meant to Hayden.
Johnny handed Hayden some colorful pins."These are pins I traded with athletes from all over Yukon,"Johnny said with a smile,"I want you to have them,so you can feel a part of the event too."
Hayden was touched,"Thanks,Johnny.This means a lot."
"Next time,"Johnny continued,"I hope you can also experience the event.I know you'll make it."
Hayden nodded,"I'll work even harder for that."
This year's Yukon Cross﹣Country Ski Championships would be held in a month.Coach Nick guided the team through daily tough training and the team made significant progress in their skating,cornering,and downhill techniques.Meanwhile,they enhanced their endurance and balance.Both Johnny and Hayden met the Championship standards.Given Johnny's rich competitive experience,Coach Nick once again qualified Johnny for this year's event and Hayden was selected as an alternate(替补).
The qualification for the competition excited Johnny,but there was always an idea staying in his mind.Johnny knew his friend had been wanting to go to the Championships for several years.This was the last chance for both of them to attend the Championships,as they would age out of the competition after this year.The thought became clear in his mind,strong and steady.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
The next day,Johnny went to see the coach.____________________
Hayden accepted the precious chance to compete in the Championships.______________________
【答案】 The next day,Johnny went to see the coach.He told the coach that he wanted to give his qualification to Hayden.Johnny explained that this was the last chance for both of them to attend the Championships,and Hayden had been longing for it for years.He believed Hayden deserved this opportunity as he had trained so hard.The coach was moved by Johnny's selfless act.After considering Johnny's request carefully,the coach agreed to let Hayden take Johnny's place.
Hayden accepted the precious chance to compete in the Championships.He was extremely grateful to Johnny.He knew this was a once﹣in﹣a﹣lifetime opportunity,and he didn't want to let Johnny down.In the following days,Hayden trained even harder