【高考押题卷】2025年高考英语复习高频易错预测卷：应用文写作（含解析）
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2025年高考英语复习考前预测：应用文写作
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 文县模拟） 假如你是李华，你的英国好友Paul目前在中国学习汉语。近日，他发来邮件询问提升汉语听力的建议，请你用英语给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示理解；
（2）给出建议；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：（1）词数80左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Paul，
_______________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
2．（2025 安岳县校级二模） 花最少的时间和金钱，游览尽可能多的景点，品尝尽可能多的美食——目前这种旅行方式在中国年轻人中越来越流行。他们选择在24小时餐厅、澡堂、网吧或交通工具上过夜，以节省旅游费用。请写一篇英语短文发表在校英语报上，内容包括：
（1）你对这种旅游方式的看法；
（2）你的旅游建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Budget Travel Among Young Chinese
______
3．（2025 河南二模） 上周末，你参加了学校自行车社团组织的骑行活动。请你写一篇短文，在英语课上分享此次经历。内容包括：
（1）活动简介；
（2）你的收获。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
A cycling trip
_________________________
4．（2025 江西模拟）假定你是李华，你校下周将召开校运动会，交换生Lucus想通过短视频方式向国外学生分享本次校运动会，他咨询你的意见，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示支持；
（2）建议拍摄的内容。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucus，
Yours，
Li Hua
5．（2025 济南一模）假定你是李华，你在Global Forum上看到了Jason的求助帖。请给他回帖，内容如下：
（1）你的看法；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______
6．（2025 深圳四模）假设你是李华，你参加了学校举办的英语演讲比赛。比赛的主题是"内卷现象对学生发展的影响"。请从以下两个议题中选择一个，写一篇演讲稿。
议题选择：
A."Nei Juan" catalyzes holistic student growth.B."Nei Juan" undermines students' mental resilience.
注意：
（1）写作词数应为100个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Good morning，everyone!________
Thank you!
7．（2025 攀枝花校级二模）假定你是李华，你校将于2月7日举办第12届科技作品展览节，请你向英国交换生Mike写一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）介绍活动；
（2）邀请参加。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike，
How have you been doing recently？
Yours，
Li Hua
8．（2025 市中区校级一模）假定你是李华，你校上周五组织了一次远足活动。请给你的英国好友Charles写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）活动过程；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Charles，
I'm writing to share with you an outing I had last Friday.
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2025 仙游县一模）假定你是李华，你校上周举办了"科技文化节"，你参与了智能机器人工作坊的体验活动。请给你的美国笔友Anna写一封邮件，分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）活动的主要内容；
（2）你的收获与感悟。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
________
10．（2024秋 章丘区校级期末） 你们学校的运动会将如期举行，目前正在招募志愿者。假如你是李华，红星中学的一名学生，希望能成为其中一员，请用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容包括：
（1）个人介绍；
（2）自身优势；
（3）强烈意愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam，
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
11．（2025 青岛模拟）假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动（spring outing），现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）具体活动；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
12．（2025 青岛一模） 假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动（spring outing），现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）具体活动；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
_______________________
Yours，
Li Hua
13．（2025 宁河区校级一模）假设你是李津。你校学生会正在招募校园文化大使。你对此很感兴趣并写信申请职位。内容包括：
（1）表示兴趣；
（2）阐述自己对校园文化大使工作意义的认识（至少包括三点）；
（3）阐述自己的特产和录用后计划要做的事。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
校园文化大使Campus Culture Ambassador
14．（2025 石家庄模拟） 假定你是李华，寒假期间参加了一个剪纸课程。请给你的外国朋友Alex写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）学习的内容；
（2）收获与感想。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Alex，
___________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
15．（2025 德州一模）假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以"AI in My Life"为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）AI在你生活中的应用；
（2）你的感受和期待。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
AI in My Life
16．（2025 黄冈模拟）你班同学展开了一场题为"人工智能（Artificial Intelligence）是否能替代教师"的辩论。请你为学校English Corner写一篇文章，内容包括：
（1）正反方观点及理由；
（2）你的看法。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Can Artificial Intelligence Replace Teachers？
Recently，our class had a heated debate on whether AI can replace teachers.
17．（2025 安徽模拟） 假定你是李华，随着中文歌曲在全球流行，你的澳大利亚网友Jack发邮件想让你给他推荐一首中文歌曲。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你推荐的歌曲；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
18．（2025 中山市校级三模）假定你是李华，你校英文报最近在向全校师生征集意见和建议，你认为有必要设立一个问答专栏。请你给报纸负责人Henry写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）提出建议——增加新专栏；
（2）设立新专栏的原因及目的。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
19．（2025 安徽模拟） 假定你是李华，上周日你参加了你校组织的防火知识宣传志愿者活动。请你给外教Mr.Smith写封邮件，分享此次活动，内容包括：
（1）活动时间、地点；
（2）活动形式、内容；
（3）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
20．（2025 全国模拟）假定你是李华，在学校刚刚举行的年度Spelling Bee （英语单词拼写大赛）决赛中，你获得了一等奖，请给英国好友David写一封邮件分享你的喜悦，内容包括：
（1）赛事简介；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
_____
Looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
2025年高考英语复习考前预测：应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 文县模拟） 假如你是李华，你的英国好友Paul目前在中国学习汉语。近日，他发来邮件询问提升汉语听力的建议，请你用英语给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示理解；
（2）给出建议；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：（1）词数80左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Paul，
_______________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Paul，
Hearing that you run into difficulties with your Chinese learning，I'm writing to express my concern and offer you some advice on how to learn it well.
Your problem is so common among foreign learners that you needn't worry too much.As the saying goes，practice makes perfect!So it's a good idea to practice Chinese daily.Besides，listening to Chinese radio programs is a better choice，which can not only entertain you，but also improve your listening skills.Additionally，you can communicate with your Chinese teacher who can tell you how to improve your Chinese effectively.
I hope my advice can be helpful!Wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Hearing that you run into difficulties with your Chinese learning，I'm writing to express my concern and offer you some advice on how to learn it well.
翻译：听说你在学习中文方面遇到了困难，我写信表达我的担忧，并就如何学好中文给你一些建议。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Hearing that you run into difficulties with your Chinese learning作状语；that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Besides，listening to Chinese radio programs is a better choice，which can not only entertain you，but also improve your listening skills.
翻译：此外，听中文广播节目是一个更好的选择，它不仅可以娱乐你，还可以提高你的听力技能。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Paul，
Hearing that you run into difficulties with your Chinese learning，I'm writing to express my concern and offer you some advice on how to learn it well.【高分句型一】（表示理解）
Your problem is so common among foreign learners that you needn't worry too much.As the saying goes，practice makes perfect!So it's a good idea to practice Chinese daily.Besides，listening to Chinese radio programs is a better choice，which can not only entertain you，but also improve your listening skills.【高分句型二】Additionally，you can communicate with your Chinese teacher who can tell you how to improve your Chinese effectively.（给出建议）
I hope my advice can be helpful!Wish you all the best.（表达祝愿）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
2．（2025 安岳县校级二模） 花最少的时间和金钱，游览尽可能多的景点，品尝尽可能多的美食——目前这种旅行方式在中国年轻人中越来越流行。他们选择在24小时餐厅、澡堂、网吧或交通工具上过夜，以节省旅游费用。请写一篇英语短文发表在校英语报上，内容包括：
（1）你对这种旅游方式的看法；
（2）你的旅游建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Budget Travel Among Young Chinese
______
【答案】
Budget Travel Among Young Chinese
Budget travel is becoming increasingly popular among young Chinese.They aim to visit more places and try various cuisines while spending less time and money.
I think this is a smart way to explore the world，especially for students who have limited budgets.However，it's important to ensure safety and comfort.My advice is to plan carefully，use public transportation，and stay in affordable but secure places.Also，try local street food，which is a great way to taste the culture without breaking the bank.
Traveling on a budget can be fun and rewarding if done wisely!
【分析】高分句型一：They aim to visit more places and try various cuisines while spending less time and money.
译文：他们的目标是参观更多的地方，尝试各种美食，同时花更少的时间和金钱。
分析：这句话使用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略句。
高分句型二：I think this is a smart way to explore the world，especially for students who have limited budgets.
译文：我认为这是一种探索世界的聪明方式，尤其是对于预算有限的学生来说。
分析：这句话使用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Budget Travel Among Young Chinese
Budget travel is becoming increasingly popular among young Chinese.They aim to visit more places and try various cuisines while spending less time and money.【高分句型一】（话题）
I think this is a smart way to explore the world，especially for students who have limited budgets.【高分句型二】However，it's important to ensure safety and comfort.（对这种旅游方式的看法）My advice is to plan carefully，use public transportation，and stay in affordable but secure places.Also，try local street food，which is a great way to taste the culture without breaking the bank.（旅游建议）
Traveling on a budget can be fun and rewarding if done wisely!（总结）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
3．（2025 河南二模） 上周末，你参加了学校自行车社团组织的骑行活动。请你写一篇短文，在英语课上分享此次经历。内容包括：
（1）活动简介；
（2）你的收获。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
A cycling trip
_________________________
【答案】
A cycling trip
Last weekend，I joined a cycling activity organized by our school's cycling club.We rode along a beautiful countryside route，enjoying the fresh air and scenic views.The trip lasted for about three hours，and we took short breaks to rest and chat with each other.It was a great way to relax and connect with nature.
Through this activity，I learned the importance of teamwork and perseverance.Riding together with my classmates encouraged me to keep going even when I felt tired.I also realized how cycling can improve both physical health and mental well﹣being.This experience has inspired me to participate in more outdoor activities in the future.
【分析】高分句型一：We rode along a beautiful countryside route，enjoying the fresh air and scenic views.
译文：我们沿着一条美丽的乡村路线骑行，享受着新鲜的空气和风景。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语enjoying the fresh air and scenic views作状语。
高分句型二：I also realized how cycling can improve both physical health and mental well﹣being.
译文：我也意识到骑自行车可以改善身体健康和心理健康。
分析：这句话使用了how引导的宾语从句。
【解答】
A cycling trip
Last weekend，I joined a cycling activity organized by our school's cycling club.We rode along a beautiful countryside route，enjoying the fresh air and scenic views.【高分句型一】The trip lasted for about three hours，and we took short breaks to rest and chat with each other.It was a great way to relax and connect with nature.（活动简介）
Through this activity，I learned the importance of teamwork and perseverance.Riding together with my classmates encouraged me to keep going even when I felt tired.I also realized how cycling can improve both physical health and mental well﹣being.【高分句型二】This experience has inspired me to participate in more outdoor activities in the future.（收获）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
4．（2025 江西模拟）假定你是李华，你校下周将召开校运动会，交换生Lucus想通过短视频方式向国外学生分享本次校运动会，他咨询你的意见，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示支持；
（2）建议拍摄的内容。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucus，
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lucus，
I'm really excited to know that you plan to share our school sports meeting with overseas students through short videos.I wholeheartedly support your wonderful idea!It's a great opportunity to showcase our school spirit.
When it comes to shooting content，first of all，focus on the track and field events.The starting moment of a 100﹣meter dash，with athletes tensed up and ready to burst forward，is full of energy.The long jumpers' graceful take﹣offs and landings are also quite a sight.Besides，don't miss the team sports like basketball and football.The intense cooperation and competition among teammates can vividly display the charm of sports.Moreover，the opening ceremony is a must﹣capture.Colorful flags，energetic cheer leading performances，and students' creative formations will surely amaze the viewers.Capturing the smiles and shouts of the audience throughout the event will also add a warm touch.
I believe your videos will be a huge hit.Looking forward to seeing your great work!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm really excited to know that you plan to share our school sports meeting with overseas students through short videos.
翻译：得知您计划通过短视频与海外学生分享我们学校的运动会，我真的很兴奋。
分析：运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：When it comes to shooting content，first of all，focus on the track and field events.
翻译：说到拍摄内容，首先要关注田径项目。
分析：运用了固定句式When it comes to"当谈到...的时候"。
【解答】Dear Lucus，
I'm really excited to know that you plan to share our school sports meeting with overseas students through short videos.【高分句型一】I wholeheartedly support your wonderful idea!It's a great opportunity to showcase our school spirit.（表示支持）
When it comes to shooting content，first of all，focus on the track and field events.【高分句型二】The starting moment of a 100﹣meter dash，with athletes tensed up and ready to burst forward，is full of energy.The long jumpers' graceful take﹣offs and landings are also quite a sight.Besides，don't miss the team sports like basketball and football.The intense cooperation and competition among teammates can vividly display the charm of sports.Moreover，the opening ceremony is a must﹣capture.Colorful flags，energetic cheer leading performances，and students' creative formations will surely amaze the viewers.Capturing the smiles and shouts of the audience throughout the event will also add a warm touch.（建议拍摄的内容）
I believe your videos will be a huge hit.Looking forward to seeing your great work!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
5．（2025 济南一模）假定你是李华，你在Global Forum上看到了Jason的求助帖。请给他回帖，内容如下：
（1）你的看法；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______
【答案】Hi Jason，
I totally get your concerns about planning a future career in this AI﹣driven era.The fast﹣paced tech changes can make it tough to see a clear way ahead.Indeed，the swift pace of technological progress can sometimes seem overwhelming，but viewing AI as a helpful tool rather than a barrier is a truly wonderful way to approach it.
My advice starts by thinking about what you're good at，and what you're passionate about.Personally，our deepest interests and enthusiasms form the cornerstone of a fulfilling career.Then，look into how AI connects with those things.Luckily，there are lots of AI﹣powered platforms and online resources，which can give you personalized career advice based on your skills and dreams.Don't be afraid to try new things and stay open to opportunities.This way，you'll not only adapt but also thrive in this evolving world.
With AI on your side，you can create a unique and rewarding career path that fits you perfectly.
【分析】高分句型一：Indeed，the swift pace of technological progress can sometimes seem overwhelming，but viewing AI as a helpful tool rather than a barrier is a truly wonderful way to approach it.
翻译：事实上，技术进步的快速步伐有时似乎势不可挡，但将人工智能视为一种有用的工具而不是障碍是一种非常好的方法。
分析：本句使用了动名词短语viewing AI as a helpful tool rather than a barrier作主语。
高分句型二：Luckily，there are lots of AI﹣powered platforms and online resources，which can give you personalized career advice based on your skills and dreams.
翻译：幸运的是，有很多基于人工智能的平台和在线资源，可以根据你的技能和梦想为你提供个性化的职业建议。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Hi Jason，
I totally get your concerns about planning a future career in this AI﹣driven era.The fast﹣paced tech changes can make it tough to see a clear way ahead.Indeed，the swift pace of technological progress can sometimes seem overwhelming，but viewing AI as a helpful tool rather than a barrier is a truly wonderful way to approach it.【高分句型一】（个人看法）
My advice starts by thinking about what you're good at，and what you're passionate about.Personally，our deepest interests and enthusiasms form the cornerstone of a fulfilling career.Then，look into how AI connects with those things.Luckily，there are lots of AI﹣powered platforms and online resources，which can give you personalized career advice based on your skills and dreams.【高分句型二】Don't be afraid to try new things and stay open to opportunities.This way，you'll not only adapt but also thrive in this evolving world.（个人建议）
With AI on your side，you can create a unique and rewarding career path that fits you perfectly.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6．（2025 深圳四模）假设你是李华，你参加了学校举办的英语演讲比赛。比赛的主题是"内卷现象对学生发展的影响"。请从以下两个议题中选择一个，写一篇演讲稿。
议题选择：
A."Nei Juan" catalyzes holistic student growth.B."Nei Juan" undermines students' mental resilience.
注意：
（1）写作词数应为100个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Good morning，everyone!________
Thank you!
【答案】Good morning，everyone!
It is my honor to talk about the phenomenon of "Nei Juan" .While controversial，it can be a catalyst for holistic student growth.
In the crucible of fierce competition，students learn to manage stress，develop resilience，and enhance their problem﹣solving skills.The pressure to excel fosters a disciplined approach to learning and personal development.Moreover，the drive to stand out in a crowded field encourages creativity and innovation，which are invaluable assets in today's world.Students who successfully navigate this challenging landscape often emerge as leaders，endowed with a suite of skills that are indispensable for thriving in the intricate tapestry of a globalized economy.
In substance，although "Nei Juan" presents formidable challenges，it simultaneously opens doors to unparalleled opportunities for students to flourish and prepare for future triumphs，for it is not merely the intensity of competition but our response to it that ultimately molds our growth and shapes our destiny.
Thank you!
【分析】高分句型一：Moreover，the drive to stand out in a crowded field encourages creativity and innovation，which are invaluable assets in today's world.
译文：此外，在拥挤的领域脱颖而出的动力鼓励了创造力和创新，这是当今世界的宝贵资产。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Students who successfully navigate this challenging landscape often emerge as leaders，endowed with a suite of skills that are indispensable for thriving in the intricate tapestry of a globalized economy.
译文：成功驾驭这一充满挑战的环境的学生往往会成为领导者，拥有一套在全球化经济错综复杂的挂毯中蓬勃发展所不可或缺的技能。
分析：这句话使用了who引导的限制性定语从句，that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Good morning，everyone!
It is my honor to talk about the phenomenon of "Nei Juan" .While controversial，it can be a catalyst for holistic student growth.（话题）
In the crucible of fierce competition，students learn to manage stress，develop resilience，and enhance their problem﹣solving skills.The pressure to excel fosters a disciplined approach to learning and personal development.Moreover，the drive to stand out in a crowded field encourages creativity and innovation，which are invaluable assets in today's world.【高分句型一】Students who successfully navigate this challenging landscape often emerge as leaders，endowed with a suite of skills that are indispensable for thriving in the intricate tapestry of a globalized economy.【高分句型二】（内卷现象对学生发展的影响）
In substance，although "Nei Juan"presents formidable challenges，it simultaneously opens doors to unparalleled opportunities for students to flourish and prepare for future triumphs，for it is not merely the intensity of competition but our response to it that ultimately molds our growth and shapes our destiny.（总结）
Thank you!（感谢）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
7．（2025 攀枝花校级二模）假定你是李华，你校将于2月7日举办第12届科技作品展览节，请你向英国交换生Mike写一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）介绍活动；
（2）邀请参加。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike，
How have you been doing recently？
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike，
How have you been doing recently？With the twelfth "Science and Technology Works Exhibition" approaching，I am overjoyed to introduce to you something concerned and invite you to it as well.
Firstly，it is on February seventh that the event will be launched in our school.As desired，the exhibition will undoubtedly appeal to numerous student enthusiasts.Secondly，what we are expecting enthusiastically is
that varieties of works like solar﹣powered fan and AI﹣assisted robot cleaner will be put on exhibition.
Hopefully，you are intensely keen on what I have introduced.Your participation is greatly anticipated.Looking forward to your accepting my sincere invitation as promptly as possible.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Secondly，what we are expecting enthusiastically is that varieties of works like solar﹣powered fan and AI﹣assisted robot cleaner will be put on exhibition.
翻译：其次，我们热切期待的是，诸如太阳能风扇和人工智能辅助的机器人清洁器等各种各样的作品将被展出。
分析：what引导主语从句和that引导表语从句。
高分句型二：Hopefully，you are intensely keen on what I have introduced.
翻译：希望你对我所介绍的内容抱有浓厚的兴趣。
分析：what引导宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike，
How have you been doing recently？With the twelfth "Science and Technology Works Exhibition" approaching，I am overjoyed to introduce to you something concerned and invite you to it as well.
Firstly，it is on February seventh that the event will be launched in our school.As desired，the exhibition will undoubtedly appeal to numerous student enthusiasts.Secondly，what we are expecting enthusiastically is
that varieties of works like solar﹣powered fan and AI﹣assisted robot cleaner will be put on exhibition.【高分句型一】（介绍活动）
Hopefully，you are intensely keen on what I have introduced.【高分句型二】Your participation is greatly anticipated.Looking forward to your accepting my sincere invitation as promptly as possible.（邀请参加）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．（2025 市中区校级一模）假定你是李华，你校上周五组织了一次远足活动。请给你的英国好友Charles写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）活动过程；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Charles，
I'm writing to share with you an outing I had last Friday.
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Charles，
I'm writing to share with you an outing I had last Friday.
Our school organized this trip to a nearby nature reserve.We set off early and spent the day walking through the forest，enjoying the peaceful surroundings.The highlight of the outing was admiring the view from the hilltop.It was a perfect opportunity to relax and bond with my classmates.
Immersed in nature，I felt refreshed stepping away from schoolwork for a moment.It reminded me how important it is to slow down and appreciate the world around us.
I truly hope you can join us next time.I'd love to hear what you've been doing lately.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：We set off early and spent the day walking through the forest，enjoying the peaceful surroundings.
译文：我们很早就出发了，花了一天时间在森林里散步，享受着宁静的环境。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语enjoying the peaceful surroundings作状语。
高分句型二：Immersed in nature，I felt refreshed stepping away from schoolwork for a moment.
译文：沉浸在大自然中，暂时放下作业，我感到神清气爽。
分析：这句话使用了过去分词短语Immersed in nature作状语。
【解答】Dear Charles，
I'm writing to share with you an outing I had last Friday.（写信目的）
Our school organized this trip to a nearby nature reserve.We set off early and spent the day walking through the forest，enjoying the peaceful surroundings.【高分句型一】The highlight of the outing was admiring the view from the hilltop.It was a perfect opportunity to relax and bond with my classmates.（活动过程）
Immersed in nature，I felt refreshed stepping away from schoolwork for a moment.【高分句型二】It reminded me how important it is to slow down and appreciate the world around us.（感想）
I truly hope you can join us next time.I'd love to hear what you've been doing lately.（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
9．（2025 仙游县一模）假定你是李华，你校上周举办了"科技文化节"，你参与了智能机器人工作坊的体验活动。请给你的美国笔友Anna写一封邮件，分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）活动的主要内容；
（2）你的收获与感悟。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
________
【答案】Dear Anna，
I'm Li Hua.Our school held the "Science and Technology Culture Festival" last week.I participated in the intelligent robot workshop.I'm writing to share with you.
In the workshop，we first learned about the history and development of intelligent robots.Then，experts showed us how they are made and controlled.We even had a chance to operate some simple robots ourselves.
This experience was amazing.Not only did I gain knowledge but also I realized the importance of technology.It inspired me to study harder and pursue my interest in this field.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Then，experts showed us how they are made and controlled.
翻译：然后，专家向我们展示了它们是如何制造和控制的。
分析：本句运用了how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Not only did I gain knowledge but also I realized the importance of technology.
翻译：我不仅获得了知识，而且还意识到了科技的重要性。
分析：本句运用了"not only...but also...不但……而且……"连接对等成分，并且not only放在句首引起句子的部分倒装。
【解答】Dear Anna，
I'm Li Hua.Our school held the "Science and Technology Culture Festival" last week.I participated in the intelligent robot workshop.I'm writing to share with you.（写信目的）
In the workshop，we first learned about the history and development of intelligent robots.Then，experts showed us how they are made and controlled.【高分句型一】We even had a chance to operate some simple robots ourselves.（活动的主要内容）
This experience was amazing.Not only did I gain knowledge but also I realized the importance of technology.【高分句型二】It inspired me to study harder and pursue my interest in this field.（个人收获与感悟）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
10．（2024秋 章丘区校级期末） 你们学校的运动会将如期举行，目前正在招募志愿者。假如你是李华，红星中学的一名学生，希望能成为其中一员，请用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容包括：
（1）个人介绍；
（2）自身优势；
（3）强烈意愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam，
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Hongxing Middle School.I'm outgoing and good at communicating with others.I once organized a sports event in my school，so I have relevant experience.Moreover，I have received professional training on event support work which has further enhanced my ability to handle various situations.I'm really eager to be a volunteer for the school sports meeting.I believe I can contribute to the smooth running of the event and offer good service to participants.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I once organized a sports event in my school，so I have relevant experience.
译文：我曾经在学校组织过一次体育赛事，所以我有相关的经验。
分析：这句话使用了so引导的结果状语从句。
高分句型二：Moreover，I have received professional training on event support work which has further enhanced my ability to handle various situations.
译文：此外，我接受了活动支持工作的专业培训，这进一步提高了我处理各种情况的能力。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Hongxing Middle School.（个人介绍）I'm outgoing and good at communicating with others.I once organized a sports event in my school，so I have relevant experience.【高分句型一】Moreover，I have received professional training on event support work which has further enhanced my ability to handle various situations.【高分句型二】（自身优势）I'm really eager to be a volunteer for the school sports meeting.I believe I can contribute to the smooth running of the event and offer good service to participants.Looking forward to your reply.（强烈意愿）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
11．（2025 青岛模拟）假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动（spring outing），现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）具体活动；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
I'm glad to hear that we'll have a spring outing next Saturday.I suggest we go to the botanical garden.There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.Also，we can have a picnic in the garden.It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.I'm looking forward to the activity.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.
翻译：在那里，我们可以欣赏各种植物，了解不同的物种，这既有教育意义，又令人放松。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.
翻译：这将是我们享受户外活动和相互交流的好机会。
分析：本句使用了it作形式主语，to do不定式to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other作真正的主语。
【解答】Dear Chris，
I'm glad to hear that we'll have a spring outing next Saturday.I suggest we go to the botanical garden.There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.【高分句型一】（活动一及理由）Also，we can have a picnic in the garden.It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.【高分句型二】（活动二及理由）I'm looking forward to the activity.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
12．（2025 青岛一模） 假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动（spring outing），现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）具体活动；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
_______________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
I'm glad to hear that we'll have a spring outing next Saturday.I suggest we go to the botanical garden.There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.Also，we can have a picnic in the garden.It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.I'm looking forward to the activity.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm glad to hear that we'll have a spring outing next Saturday.
翻译：我很高兴听到我们下周六要去春游。
分析：运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.
翻译：在那里，我们可以欣赏各种植物，了解不同的物种，这既是教育又放松。
分析：运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
I'm glad to hear that we'll have a spring outing next Saturday.【高分句型一】I suggest we go to the botanical garden.There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.【高分句型二】Also，we can have a picnic in the garden.（具体活动）It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.（理由）I'm looking forward to the activity.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
13．（2025 宁河区校级一模）假设你是李津。你校学生会正在招募校园文化大使。你对此很感兴趣并写信申请职位。内容包括：
（1）表示兴趣；
（2）阐述自己对校园文化大使工作意义的认识（至少包括三点）；
（3）阐述自己的特产和录用后计划要做的事。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
校园文化大使Campus Culture Ambassador
【答案】Dear Student Union，
I am Li Jin，a sophomore from the Department of Foreign Languages.I am writing to apply for the position of Campus Culture Ambassador because I am deeply interested in promoting our school's unique culture.
I believe this role is crucial for several reasons.First，it helps spread our school's cultural heritage and traditions，enhancing students' sense of belonging.Second，it enriches campus life through various activities，fostering a vibrant atmosphere.Lastly，it serves as a bridge between students and the school，collecting feedback to improve cultural initiatives.
I am confident in my communication skills and organizational abilities.I have experience in planning school events and am passionate about our school's culture.If selected，I plan to organize cultural workshops，promote traditional festivals，and create a platform for students to share their cultural ideas.
I hope to contribute to our campus culture and look forward to the opportunity.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin
【分析】高分句型一：Second，it enriches campus life through various activities，fostering a vibrant atmosphere.
译文：其次，它通过各种活动丰富了校园生活，营造了充满活力的氛围。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语fostering a vibrant atmosphere作状语。
高分句型二：If selected，I plan to organize cultural workshops，promote traditional festivals，and create a platform for students to share their cultural ideas.
译文：如果被选中，我计划组织文化研讨会，推广传统节日，并为学生创造一个分享文化思想的平台。
分析：这句话使用了if引导的条件状语从句的省略句。
【解答】Dear Student Union，
I am Li Jin，a sophomore from the Department of Foreign Languages.I am writing to apply for the position of Campus Culture Ambassador because I am deeply interested in promoting our school's unique culture.（表示兴趣）
I believe this role is crucial for several reasons.First，it helps spread our school's cultural heritage and traditions，enhancing students' sense of belonging.Second，it enriches campus life through various activities，fostering a vibrant atmosphere.【高分句型一】Lastly，it serves as a bridge between students and the school，collecting feedback to improve cultural initiatives.（阐述自己对校园文化大使工作意义的认识）
I am confident in my communication skills and organizational abilities.I have experience in planning school events and am passionate about our school's culture.If selected，I plan to organize cultural workshops，promote traditional festivals，and create a platform for students to share their cultural ideas.【高分句型二】（阐述自己的特产和录用后计划要做的事）
I hope to contribute to our campus culture and look forward to the opportunity.（希望）
Thank you for considering my application.（感谢）
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
14．（2025 石家庄模拟） 假定你是李华，寒假期间参加了一个剪纸课程。请给你的外国朋友Alex写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）学习的内容；
（2）收获与感想。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Alex，
___________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alex，
How have you been？I'm bursting to tell you about my incredible journey learning the ancient art of paper﹣cutting this winter vacation!
In the course，I learned how to cut masterpieces out of the soft paper and discovered how these delicate artworks breathe life into Lunar New Year celebrations and wedding ceremonies.When I held the scissors，my fingers trembled like a baby bird taking its first flight.We started by tracing some simple patterns and by the end of the course，I was able to cut "double happiness" symbols.By attending the course，I felt this was more than craft lessons，but a demonstration of the ancient Chinese wisdom，decoding messages of blessings from the past.
Can't wait to hear your winter vacation experiences!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：When I held the scissors，my fingers trembled like a baby bird taking its first flight.
译文：当我拿着剪刀时，我的手指像小鸟第一次飞行一样颤抖。
分析：这句话使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：By attending the course，I felt this was more than craft lessons，but a demonstration of the ancient Chinese wisdom，decoding messages of blessings from the past.
译文：通过参加这门课程，我觉得这不仅仅是工艺课，而是中国古代智慧的展示，解读了过去的祝福信息。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语decoding messages of blessings from the past作状语。
【解答】Dear Alex，
How have you been？I'm bursting to tell you about my incredible journey learning the ancient art of paper﹣cutting this winter vacation!（写信目的）
In the course，I learned how to cut masterpieces out of the soft paper and discovered how these delicate artworks breathe life into Lunar New Year celebrations and wedding ceremonies.When I held the scissors，my fingers trembled like a baby bird taking its first flight.【高分句型一】We started by tracing some simple patterns and by the end of the course，I was able to cut "double happiness" symbols.（学习的内容）By attending the course，I felt this was more than craft lessons，but a demonstration of the ancient Chinese wisdom，decoding messages of blessings from the past.【高分句型二】（收获与感想）
Can't wait to hear your winter vacation experiences!（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
15．（2025 德州一模）假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以"AI in My Life"为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）AI在你生活中的应用；
（2）你的感受和期待。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
AI in My Life
【答案】
AI in My Life
AI has integrated into multiple aspects of my daily life.Every morning，my smart alarm clock，guided by AI，wakes me up with a customized weather forecast and the latest news.Besides，AI﹣powered learning apps like Doubao offer me explanations and study tips and efficiently aid in my English practice.
Thanks to AI，not only has my routine become more convenient，but also my academic performance has been dramatically boosted.AI has truly become a reliable helper in my life.
Full of anticipation for the future of AI，I'm eager to see AI making great leaps in fields such as healthcare and education，and continuing to shape our lives in amazing ways.
【分析】高分句型一：Every morning，my smart alarm clock，guided by AI，wakes me up with a customized weather forecast and the latest news.
翻译：每天早上，我的智能闹钟在人工智能的引导下，用定制的天气预报和最新消息叫醒我。
分析：本句运用了过去分词短语guided by AI作后置定语。
高分句型二：Thanks to AI，not only has my routine become more convenient，but also my academic performance has been dramatically boosted.
翻译：多亏了AI，不仅我的日常生活变得更加方便，而且我的学习成绩也得到了极大的提高。
分析：本句运用了"not only...but also...不但……而且……"连接对等成分，并且not only放在句首引起句子的部分倒装。
【解答】
AI in My Life
AI has integrated into multiple aspects of my daily life.Every morning，my smart alarm clock，guided by AI，wakes me up with a customized weather forecast and the latest news.【高分句型一】Besides，AI﹣powered learning apps like Doubao offer me explanations and study tips and efficiently aid in my English practice.（AI在自己的生活中的应用）
Thanks to AI，not only has my routine become more convenient，but also my academic performance has been dramatically boosted.【高分句型二】AI has truly become a reliable helper in my life.（个人感受）
Full of anticipation for the future of AI，I'm eager to see AI making great leaps in fields such as healthcare and education，and continuing to shape our lives in amazing ways.（表达期待）
【点评】 写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
16．（2025 黄冈模拟）你班同学展开了一场题为"人工智能（Artificial Intelligence）是否能替代教师"的辩论。请你为学校English Corner写一篇文章，内容包括：
（1）正反方观点及理由；
（2）你的看法。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Can Artificial Intelligence Replace Teachers？
Recently，our class had a heated debate on whether AI can replace teachers.
【答案】
Can Artificial Intelligence Replace Teachers？
Recently，our class had a heated debate on whether AI can replace teachers.Some students argue AI can replace teachers，believing AI has a vast knowledge base and can teach various subjects.Moreover，it can adapt to the learning pace and style of each student，offering personalized learning experiences.The opponents insist AI cannot replace teachers，pointing out that teachers can inspire，encourage and support students in a way that AI cannot.
In my opinion，AI cannot replace teachers.While AI is undoubtedly powerful in providing information and facilitating learning，it lacks human touch and empathy that are essential in education.
【分析】高分句型一：Some students argue AI can replace teachers，believing AI has a vast knowledge base and can teach various subjects.
翻译：一些学生认为人工智能可以取代教师，认为人工智能拥有庞大的知识库，可以教授各种科目。
分析：本句运用了省略了that的宾语从句AI can replace teachers和AI has a vast knowledge base and can teach various subjects及现在分词短语believing AI has a vast knowledge base and can teach various subjects作状语。
高分句型二：While AI is undoubtedly powerful in providing information and facilitating learning，it lacks human touch and empathy that are essential in education.
翻译：虽然人工智能在提供信息和促进学习方面无疑很强大，但它缺乏教育中必不可少的人情味和同理心。
分析：本句运用了while引导的让步状语从句和that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Can Artificial Intelligence Replace Teachers？
Recently，our class had a heated debate on whether AI can replace teachers.Some students argue AI can replace teachers，believing AI has a vast knowledge base and can teach various subjects.【高分句型一】Moreover，it can adapt to the learning pace and style of each student，offering personalized learning experiences.（正方观点及理由）The opponents insist AI cannot replace teachers，pointing out that teachers can inspire，encourage and support students in a way that AI cannot.（反方观点及理由）
In my opinion，AI cannot replace teachers.While AI is undoubtedly powerful in providing information and facilitating learning，it lacks human touch and empathy that are essential in education.【高分句型二】（个人看法）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
17．（2025 安徽模拟） 假定你是李华，随着中文歌曲在全球流行，你的澳大利亚网友Jack发邮件想让你给他推荐一首中文歌曲。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你推荐的歌曲；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack，
I' m more than glad to know that you' re interested in Chinese songs!I' d like to recommend"Big Fish" ，which is sung by singer Zhou Shen，to you.Its lyrics are like a beautiful poem，telling a touching story.Each line is carefully crafted ，painting vivid pictures in your mind.As for the melody，it's a gentle and soothing symphony.The soft notes flow like a gentle stream，gradually reaching deep into your heart，and carrying you into a world full of emotions.Moreover，it perfectly showcases the unique charm of Chinese music，with its traditional elements blended harmoniously with modern sounds.I' m sure you' ll fall in love with it.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I' d like to recommend"Big Fish" ，which is sung by singer Zhou Shen，to you.
翻译：我想向你推荐歌手周深演唱的《大鱼》。
分析：本句使用了which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Moreover，it perfectly showcases the unique charm of Chinese music，with its traditional elements blended harmoniously with modern sounds.
翻译：此外，它完美地展示了中国音乐的独特魅力，传统元素与现代声音和谐融合。
分析：本句使用了with复合结构with its traditional elements blended harmoniously with modern sounds作状语。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I' m more than glad to know that you' re interested in Chinese songs!I' d like to recommend"Big Fish" ，which is sung by singer Zhou Shen，to you.【高分句型一】（推荐歌曲）Its lyrics are like a beautiful poem，telling a touching story.Each line is carefully crafted ，painting vivid pictures in your mind.As for the melody，it's a gentle and soothing symphony.The soft notes flow like a gentle stream，gradually reaching deep into your heart，and carrying you into a world full of emotions.Moreover，it perfectly showcases the unique charm of Chinese music，with its traditional elements blended harmoniously with modern sounds.【高分句型二】I' m sure you' ll fall in love with it.（推荐理由）
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
18．（2025 中山市校级三模）假定你是李华，你校英文报最近在向全校师生征集意见和建议，你认为有必要设立一个问答专栏。请你给报纸负责人Henry写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）提出建议——增加新专栏；
（2）设立新专栏的原因及目的。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry，
I'm writing to making a suggestion.I was wondering if it might be possible to add a new column for our English newspaper.
The name of the column can be "Ask and Answer"，the aim of which is to help deal with our problems.It's true that we teenagers are surrounded with numerous problems in our study as well as in our lives.In the face of various challenges，worries and anxieties，we need comfort，encouragement and solutions.As a matter of fact，a timely suggestion can make a great difference to us.So I firmly believe such a column is not only necessary but also significant.
I sincerely hope you'll take my suggestion into consideration.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The name of the column can be "Ask and Answer"，the aim of which is to help deal with our problems.
翻译：专栏的名称可以是"问答"，其目的是帮助解决我们的问题。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：So I firmly believe such a column is not only necessary but also significant.
翻译：所以我坚信这样一个专栏不仅是必要的，而且意义重大。
分析：本句运用了省略了that的宾语从句such a column is not only necessary but also significant。
【解答】Dear Henry，
I'm writing to making a suggestion.I was wondering if it might be possible to add a new column for our English newspaper.（提出建议——增加新专栏）
The name of the column can be "Ask and Answer"，the aim of which is to help deal with our problems.【高分句型一】It's true that we teenagers are surrounded with numerous problems in our study as well as in our lives.In the face of various challenges，worries and anxieties，we need comfort，encouragement and solutions.As a matter of fact，a timely suggestion can make a great difference to us.So I firmly believe such a column is not only necessary but also significant.【高分句型二】（设立新专栏的原因及目的）
I sincerely hope you'll take my suggestion into consideration.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
19．（2025 安徽模拟） 假定你是李华，上周日你参加了你校组织的防火知识宣传志愿者活动。请你给外教Mr.Smith写封邮件，分享此次活动，内容包括：
（1）活动时间、地点；
（2）活动形式、内容；
（3）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Mr.Smith，
Last Sunday，I participated in a volunteer activity organized by our school to promote fire prevention knowledge.The event took place in the community center near our campus.
The activity was conducted in the form of interactive workshops，where we learned about fire hazards，prevention tips，and emergency response measures.We also distributed brochures and conducted simulations to raise awareness among the residents.
Through the activity，I realized the importance of fire prevention and the role we can play in our community.I felt fulfilled knowing that I had contributed to enhancing public safety.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The activity was conducted in the form of interactive workshops，where we learned about fire hazards，prevention tips，and emergency response measures.
翻译：活动以互动研讨会的形式进行，在那里我们了解了火灾隐患、预防技巧和应急响应措施。
分析：本句使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I felt fulfilled knowing that I had contributed to enhancing public safety.
翻译：知道我为加强公共安全做出了贡献，我感到很满足。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语knowing that I had contributed to enhancing public safety作状语；that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mr.Smith，
Last Sunday，I participated in a volunteer activity organized by our school to promote fire prevention knowledge.The event took place in the community center near our campus.（活动时间、地点）
The activity was conducted in the form of interactive workshops，where we learned about fire hazards，prevention tips，and emergency response measures.【高分句型一】We also distributed brochures and conducted simulations to raise awareness among the residents.（活动形式、内容）
Through the activity，I realized the importance of fire prevention and the role we can play in our community.I felt fulfilled knowing that I had contributed to enhancing public safety.【高分句型二】（感受）
Best regards，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
20．（2025 全国模拟）假定你是李华，在学校刚刚举行的年度Spelling Bee （英语单词拼写大赛）决赛中，你获得了一等奖，请给英国好友David写一封邮件分享你的喜悦，内容包括：
（1）赛事简介；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
_____
Looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David，
I'm so excited to write to you!I won the first prize in the annual Spelling Bee final at my school.
The Spelling Bee is a very interesting and intense event where all the participants need to spell various words accurately and quickly.Not only was it a test of vocabulary but also it was a battle of nerves.I feel overjoyed and incredibly proud of myself.This victory is of great significance for me，making me believe that hard work pays off.How thrilling and rewarding this event was!
Looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The Spelling Bee is a very interesting and intense event where all the participants need to spell various words accurately and quickly.
翻译：英语单词拼写大赛是一项非常有趣和激烈的活动，所有参与者都需要准确快速地拼写各种单词。
分析：本句使用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：This victory is of great significance for me，making me believe that hard work pays off.
翻译：这场胜利对我来说意义重大，让我相信努力是有回报的。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语making me believe that hard work pays off作状语及that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear David，
I'm so excited to write to you!I won the first prize in the annual Spelling Bee final at my school.（写信目的）
The Spelling Bee is a very interesting and intense event where all the participants need to spell various words accurately and quickly.【高分句型一】Not only was it a test of vocabulary but also it was a battle of nerves.（赛事简介）I feel overjoyed and incredibly proud of myself.This victory is of great significance for me，making me believe that hard work pays off.【高分句型二】（个人感受）How thrilling and rewarding this event was!
Looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
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1．（2025 文县模拟） 假如你是李华，你的英国好友Paul目前在中国学习汉语。近日，他发来邮件询问提升汉语听力的建议，请你用英语给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示理解；
（2）给出建议；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：（1）词数80左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Paul，
_______________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
2．（2025 安岳县校级二模） 花最少的时间和金钱，游览尽可能多的景点，品尝尽可能多的美食——目前这种旅行方式在中国年轻人中越来越流行。他们选择在24小时餐厅、澡堂、网吧或交通工具上过夜，以节省旅游费用。请写一篇英语短文发表在校英语报上，内容包括：
（1）你对这种旅游方式的看法；
（2）你的旅游建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Budget Travel Among Young Chinese
______
3．（2025 河南二模） 上周末，你参加了学校自行车社团组织的骑行活动。请你写一篇短文，在英语课上分享此次经历。内容包括：
（1）活动简介；
（2）你的收获。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
A cycling trip
_________________________
4．（2025 江西模拟）假定你是李华，你校下周将召开校运动会，交换生Lucus想通过短视频方式向国外学生分享本次校运动会，他咨询你的意见，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示支持；
（2）建议拍摄的内容。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucus，
Yours，
Li Hua
5．（2025 济南一模）假定你是李华，你在Global Forum上看到了Jason的求助帖。请给他回帖，内容如下：
（1）你的看法；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______
6．（2025 深圳四模）假设你是李华，你参加了学校举办的英语演讲比赛。比赛的主题是"内卷现象对学生发展的影响"。请从以下两个议题中选择一个，写一篇演讲稿。
议题选择：
A."Nei Juan" catalyzes holistic student growth.B."Nei Juan" undermines students' mental resilience.
注意：
（1）写作词数应为100个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Good morning，everyone!________
Thank you!
7．（2025 攀枝花校级二模）假定你是李华，你校将于2月7日举办第12届科技作品展览节，请你向英国交换生Mike写一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）介绍活动；
（2）邀请参加。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike，
How have you been doing recently？
Yours，
Li Hua
8．（2025 市中区校级一模）假定你是李华，你校上周五组织了一次远足活动。请给你的英国好友Charles写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）活动过程；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Charles，
I'm writing to share with you an outing I had last Friday.
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2025 仙游县一模）假定你是李华，你校上周举办了"科技文化节"，你参与了智能机器人工作坊的体验活动。请给你的美国笔友Anna写一封邮件，分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）活动的主要内容；
（2）你的收获与感悟。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
________
10．（2024秋 章丘区校级期末） 你们学校的运动会将如期举行，目前正在招募志愿者。假如你是李华，红星中学的一名学生，希望能成为其中一员，请用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容包括：
（1）个人介绍；
（2）自身优势；
（3）强烈意愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam，
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
11．（2025 青岛模拟）假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动（spring outing），现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）具体活动；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
12．（2025 青岛一模） 假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动（spring outing），现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）具体活动；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
_______________________
Yours，
Li Hua
13．（2025 宁河区校级一模）假设你是李津。你校学生会正在招募校园文化大使。你对此很感兴趣并写信申请职位。内容包括：
（1）表示兴趣；
（2）阐述自己对校园文化大使工作意义的认识（至少包括三点）；
（3）阐述自己的特产和录用后计划要做的事。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
校园文化大使Campus Culture Ambassador
14．（2025 石家庄模拟） 假定你是李华，寒假期间参加了一个剪纸课程。请给你的外国朋友Alex写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）学习的内容；
（2）收获与感想。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Alex，
___________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
15．（2025 德州一模）假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以"AI in My Life"为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）AI在你生活中的应用；
（2）你的感受和期待。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
AI in My Life
16．（2025 黄冈模拟）你班同学展开了一场题为"人工智能（Artificial Intelligence）是否能替代教师"的辩论。请你为学校English Corner写一篇文章，内容包括：
（1）正反方观点及理由；
（2）你的看法。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Can Artificial Intelligence Replace Teachers？
Recently，our class had a heated debate on whether AI can replace teachers.
17．（2025 安徽模拟） 假定你是李华，随着中文歌曲在全球流行，你的澳大利亚网友Jack发邮件想让你给他推荐一首中文歌曲。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你推荐的歌曲；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
18．（2025 中山市校级三模）假定你是李华，你校英文报最近在向全校师生征集意见和建议，你认为有必要设立一个问答专栏。请你给报纸负责人Henry写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）提出建议——增加新专栏；
（2）设立新专栏的原因及目的。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
19．（2025 安徽模拟） 假定你是李华，上周日你参加了你校组织的防火知识宣传志愿者活动。请你给外教Mr.Smith写封邮件，分享此次活动，内容包括：
（1）活动时间、地点；
（2）活动形式、内容；
（3）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
20．（2025 全国模拟）假定你是李华，在学校刚刚举行的年度Spelling Bee （英语单词拼写大赛）决赛中，你获得了一等奖，请给英国好友David写一封邮件分享你的喜悦，内容包括：
（1）赛事简介；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
_____
Looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
2025年高考英语复习考前预测：应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
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1．（2025 文县模拟） 假如你是李华，你的英国好友Paul目前在中国学习汉语。近日，他发来邮件询问提升汉语听力的建议，请你用英语给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示理解；
（2）给出建议；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：（1）词数80左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Paul，
_______________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Paul，
Hearing that you run into difficulties with your Chinese learning，I'm writing to express my concern and offer you some advice on how to learn it well.
Your problem is so common among foreign learners that you needn't worry too much.As the saying goes，practice makes perfect!So it's a good idea to practice Chinese daily.Besides，listening to Chinese radio programs is a better choice，which can not only entertain you，but also improve your listening skills.Additionally，you can communicate with your Chinese teacher who can tell you how to improve your Chinese effectively.
I hope my advice can be helpful!Wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Hearing that you run into difficulties with your Chinese learning，I'm writing to express my concern and offer you some advice on how to learn it well.
翻译：听说你在学习中文方面遇到了困难，我写信表达我的担忧，并就如何学好中文给你一些建议。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Hearing that you run into difficulties with your Chinese learning作状语；that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Besides，listening to Chinese radio programs is a better choice，which can not only entertain you，but also improve your listening skills.
翻译：此外，听中文广播节目是一个更好的选择，它不仅可以娱乐你，还可以提高你的听力技能。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Paul，
Hearing that you run into difficulties with your Chinese learning，I'm writing to express my concern and offer you some advice on how to learn it well.【高分句型一】（表示理解）
Your problem is so common among foreign learners that you needn't worry too much.As the saying goes，practice makes perfect!So it's a good idea to practice Chinese daily.Besides，listening to Chinese radio programs is a better choice，which can not only entertain you，but also improve your listening skills.【高分句型二】Additionally，you can communicate with your Chinese teacher who can tell you how to improve your Chinese effectively.（给出建议）
I hope my advice can be helpful!Wish you all the best.（表达祝愿）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
2．（2025 安岳县校级二模） 花最少的时间和金钱，游览尽可能多的景点，品尝尽可能多的美食——目前这种旅行方式在中国年轻人中越来越流行。他们选择在24小时餐厅、澡堂、网吧或交通工具上过夜，以节省旅游费用。请写一篇英语短文发表在校英语报上，内容包括：
（1）你对这种旅游方式的看法；
（2）你的旅游建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Budget Travel Among Young Chinese
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【答案】
Budget Travel Among Young Chinese
Budget travel is becoming increasingly popular among young Chinese.They aim to visit more places and try various cuisines while spending less time and money.
I think this is a smart way to explore the world，especially for students who have limited budgets.However，it's important to ensure safety and comfort.My advice is to plan carefully，use public transportation，and stay in affordable but secure places.Also，try local street food，which is a great way to taste the culture without breaking the bank.
Traveling on a budget can be fun and rewarding if done wisely!
【分析】高分句型一：They aim to visit more places and try various cuisines while spending less time and money.
译文：他们的目标是参观更多的地方，尝试各种美食，同时花更少的时间和金钱。
分析：这句话使用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略句。
高分句型二：I think this is a smart way to explore the world，especially for students who have limited budgets.
译文：我认为这是一种探索世界的聪明方式，尤其是对于预算有限的学生来说。
分析：这句话使用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Budget Travel Among Young Chinese
Budget travel is becoming increasingly popular among young Chinese.They aim to visit more places and try various cuisines while spending less time and money.【高分句型一】（话题）
I think this is a smart way to explore the world，especially for students who have limited budgets.【高分句型二】However，it's important to ensure safety and comfort.（对这种旅游方式的看法）My advice is to plan carefully，use public transportation，and stay in affordable but secure places.Also，try local street food，which is a great way to taste the culture without breaking the bank.（旅游建议）
Traveling on a budget can be fun and rewarding if done wisely!（总结）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
3．（2025 河南二模） 上周末，你参加了学校自行车社团组织的骑行活动。请你写一篇短文，在英语课上分享此次经历。内容包括：
（1）活动简介；
（2）你的收获。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
A cycling trip
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【答案】
A cycling trip
Last weekend，I joined a cycling activity organized by our school's cycling club.We rode along a beautiful countryside route，enjoying the fresh air and scenic views.The trip lasted for about three hours，and we took short breaks to rest and chat with each other.It was a great way to relax and connect with nature.
Through this activity，I learned the importance of teamwork and perseverance.Riding together with my classmates encouraged me to keep going even when I felt tired.I also realized how cycling can improve both physical health and mental well﹣being.This experience has inspired me to participate in more outdoor activities in the future.
【分析】高分句型一：We rode along a beautiful countryside route，enjoying the fresh air and scenic views.
译文：我们沿着一条美丽的乡村路线骑行，享受着新鲜的空气和风景。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语enjoying the fresh air and scenic views作状语。
高分句型二：I also realized how cycling can improve both physical health and mental well﹣being.
译文：我也意识到骑自行车可以改善身体健康和心理健康。
分析：这句话使用了how引导的宾语从句。
【解答】
A cycling trip
Last weekend，I joined a cycling activity organized by our school's cycling club.We rode along a beautiful countryside route，enjoying the fresh air and scenic views.【高分句型一】The trip lasted for about three hours，and we took short breaks to rest and chat with each other.It was a great way to relax and connect with nature.（活动简介）
Through this activity，I learned the importance of teamwork and perseverance.Riding together with my classmates encouraged me to keep going even when I felt tired.I also realized how cycling can improve both physical health and mental well﹣being.【高分句型二】This experience has inspired me to participate in more outdoor activities in the future.（收获）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
4．（2025 江西模拟）假定你是李华，你校下周将召开校运动会，交换生Lucus想通过短视频方式向国外学生分享本次校运动会，他咨询你的意见，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示支持；
（2）建议拍摄的内容。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucus，
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lucus，
I'm really excited to know that you plan to share our school sports meeting with overseas students through short videos.I wholeheartedly support your wonderful idea!It's a great opportunity to showcase our school spirit.
When it comes to shooting content，first of all，focus on the track and field events.The starting moment of a 100﹣meter dash，with athletes tensed up and ready to burst forward，is full of energy.The long jumpers' graceful take﹣offs and landings are also quite a sight.Besides，don't miss the team sports like basketball and football.The intense cooperation and competition among teammates can vividly display the charm of sports.Moreover，the opening ceremony is a must﹣capture.Colorful flags，energetic cheer leading performances，and students' creative formations will surely amaze the viewers.Capturing the smiles and shouts of the audience throughout the event will also add a warm touch.
I believe your videos will be a huge hit.Looking forward to seeing your great work!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm really excited to know that you plan to share our school sports meeting with overseas students through short videos.
翻译：得知您计划通过短视频与海外学生分享我们学校的运动会，我真的很兴奋。
分析：运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：When it comes to shooting content，first of all，focus on the track and field events.
翻译：说到拍摄内容，首先要关注田径项目。
分析：运用了固定句式When it comes to"当谈到...的时候"。
【解答】Dear Lucus，
I'm really excited to know that you plan to share our school sports meeting with overseas students through short videos.【高分句型一】I wholeheartedly support your wonderful idea!It's a great opportunity to showcase our school spirit.（表示支持）
When it comes to shooting content，first of all，focus on the track and field events.【高分句型二】The starting moment of a 100﹣meter dash，with athletes tensed up and ready to burst forward，is full of energy.The long jumpers' graceful take﹣offs and landings are also quite a sight.Besides，don't miss the team sports like basketball and football.The intense cooperation and competition among teammates can vividly display the charm of sports.Moreover，the opening ceremony is a must﹣capture.Colorful flags，energetic cheer leading performances，and students' creative formations will surely amaze the viewers.Capturing the smiles and shouts of the audience throughout the event will also add a warm touch.（建议拍摄的内容）
I believe your videos will be a huge hit.Looking forward to seeing your great work!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
5．（2025 济南一模）假定你是李华，你在Global Forum上看到了Jason的求助帖。请给他回帖，内容如下：
（1）你的看法；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______
【答案】Hi Jason，
I totally get your concerns about planning a future career in this AI﹣driven era.The fast﹣paced tech changes can make it tough to see a clear way ahead.Indeed，the swift pace of technological progress can sometimes seem overwhelming，but viewing AI as a helpful tool rather than a barrier is a truly wonderful way to approach it.
My advice starts by thinking about what you're good at，and what you're passionate about.Personally，our deepest interests and enthusiasms form the cornerstone of a fulfilling career.Then，look into how AI connects with those things.Luckily，there are lots of AI﹣powered platforms and online resources，which can give you personalized career advice based on your skills and dreams.Don't be afraid to try new things and stay open to opportunities.This way，you'll not only adapt but also thrive in this evolving world.
With AI on your side，you can create a unique and rewarding career path that fits you perfectly.
【分析】高分句型一：Indeed，the swift pace of technological progress can sometimes seem overwhelming，but viewing AI as a helpful tool rather than a barrier is a truly wonderful way to approach it.
翻译：事实上，技术进步的快速步伐有时似乎势不可挡，但将人工智能视为一种有用的工具而不是障碍是一种非常好的方法。
分析：本句使用了动名词短语viewing AI as a helpful tool rather than a barrier作主语。
高分句型二：Luckily，there are lots of AI﹣powered platforms and online resources，which can give you personalized career advice based on your skills and dreams.
翻译：幸运的是，有很多基于人工智能的平台和在线资源，可以根据你的技能和梦想为你提供个性化的职业建议。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Hi Jason，
I totally get your concerns about planning a future career in this AI﹣driven era.The fast﹣paced tech changes can make it tough to see a clear way ahead.Indeed，the swift pace of technological progress can sometimes seem overwhelming，but viewing AI as a helpful tool rather than a barrier is a truly wonderful way to approach it.【高分句型一】（个人看法）
My advice starts by thinking about what you're good at，and what you're passionate about.Personally，our deepest interests and enthusiasms form the cornerstone of a fulfilling career.Then，look into how AI connects with those things.Luckily，there are lots of AI﹣powered platforms and online resources，which can give you personalized career advice based on your skills and dreams.【高分句型二】Don't be afraid to try new things and stay open to opportunities.This way，you'll not only adapt but also thrive in this evolving world.（个人建议）
With AI on your side，you can create a unique and rewarding career path that fits you perfectly.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6．（2025 深圳四模）假设你是李华，你参加了学校举办的英语演讲比赛。比赛的主题是"内卷现象对学生发展的影响"。请从以下两个议题中选择一个，写一篇演讲稿。
议题选择：
A."Nei Juan" catalyzes holistic student growth.B."Nei Juan" undermines students' mental resilience.
注意：
（1）写作词数应为100个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Good morning，everyone!________
Thank you!
【答案】Good morning，everyone!
It is my honor to talk about the phenomenon of "Nei Juan" .While controversial，it can be a catalyst for holistic student growth.
In the crucible of fierce competition，students learn to manage stress，develop resilience，and enhance their problem﹣solving skills.The pressure to excel fosters a disciplined approach to learning and personal development.Moreover，the drive to stand out in a crowded field encourages creativity and innovation，which are invaluable assets in today's world.Students who successfully navigate this challenging landscape often emerge as leaders，endowed with a suite of skills that are indispensable for thriving in the intricate tapestry of a globalized economy.
In substance，although "Nei Juan" presents formidable challenges，it simultaneously opens doors to unparalleled opportunities for students to flourish and prepare for future triumphs，for it is not merely the intensity of competition but our response to it that ultimately molds our growth and shapes our destiny.
Thank you!
【分析】高分句型一：Moreover，the drive to stand out in a crowded field encourages creativity and innovation，which are invaluable assets in today's world.
译文：此外，在拥挤的领域脱颖而出的动力鼓励了创造力和创新，这是当今世界的宝贵资产。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Students who successfully navigate this challenging landscape often emerge as leaders，endowed with a suite of skills that are indispensable for thriving in the intricate tapestry of a globalized economy.
译文：成功驾驭这一充满挑战的环境的学生往往会成为领导者，拥有一套在全球化经济错综复杂的挂毯中蓬勃发展所不可或缺的技能。
分析：这句话使用了who引导的限制性定语从句，that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Good morning，everyone!
It is my honor to talk about the phenomenon of "Nei Juan" .While controversial，it can be a catalyst for holistic student growth.（话题）
In the crucible of fierce competition，students learn to manage stress，develop resilience，and enhance their problem﹣solving skills.The pressure to excel fosters a disciplined approach to learning and personal development.Moreover，the drive to stand out in a crowded field encourages creativity and innovation，which are invaluable assets in today's world.【高分句型一】Students who successfully navigate this challenging landscape often emerge as leaders，endowed with a suite of skills that are indispensable for thriving in the intricate tapestry of a globalized economy.【高分句型二】（内卷现象对学生发展的影响）
In substance，although "Nei Juan"presents formidable challenges，it simultaneously opens doors to unparalleled opportunities for students to flourish and prepare for future triumphs，for it is not merely the intensity of competition but our response to it that ultimately molds our growth and shapes our destiny.（总结）
Thank you!（感谢）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
7．（2025 攀枝花校级二模）假定你是李华，你校将于2月7日举办第12届科技作品展览节，请你向英国交换生Mike写一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）介绍活动；
（2）邀请参加。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike，
How have you been doing recently？
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike，
How have you been doing recently？With the twelfth "Science and Technology Works Exhibition" approaching，I am overjoyed to introduce to you something concerned and invite you to it as well.
Firstly，it is on February seventh that the event will be launched in our school.As desired，the exhibition will undoubtedly appeal to numerous student enthusiasts.Secondly，what we are expecting enthusiastically is
that varieties of works like solar﹣powered fan and AI﹣assisted robot cleaner will be put on exhibition.
Hopefully，you are intensely keen on what I have introduced.Your participation is greatly anticipated.Looking forward to your accepting my sincere invitation as promptly as possible.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Secondly，what we are expecting enthusiastically is that varieties of works like solar﹣powered fan and AI﹣assisted robot cleaner will be put on exhibition.
翻译：其次，我们热切期待的是，诸如太阳能风扇和人工智能辅助的机器人清洁器等各种各样的作品将被展出。
分析：what引导主语从句和that引导表语从句。
高分句型二：Hopefully，you are intensely keen on what I have introduced.
翻译：希望你对我所介绍的内容抱有浓厚的兴趣。
分析：what引导宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike，
How have you been doing recently？With the twelfth "Science and Technology Works Exhibition" approaching，I am overjoyed to introduce to you something concerned and invite you to it as well.
Firstly，it is on February seventh that the event will be launched in our school.As desired，the exhibition will undoubtedly appeal to numerous student enthusiasts.Secondly，what we are expecting enthusiastically is
that varieties of works like solar﹣powered fan and AI﹣assisted robot cleaner will be put on exhibition.【高分句型一】（介绍活动）
Hopefully，you are intensely keen on what I have introduced.【高分句型二】Your participation is greatly anticipated.Looking forward to your accepting my sincere invitation as promptly as possible.（邀请参加）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．（2025 市中区校级一模）假定你是李华，你校上周五组织了一次远足活动。请给你的英国好友Charles写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）活动过程；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Charles，
I'm writing to share with you an outing I had last Friday.
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Charles，
I'm writing to share with you an outing I had last Friday.
Our school organized this trip to a nearby nature reserve.We set off early and spent the day walking through the forest，enjoying the peaceful surroundings.The highlight of the outing was admiring the view from the hilltop.It was a perfect opportunity to relax and bond with my classmates.
Immersed in nature，I felt refreshed stepping away from schoolwork for a moment.It reminded me how important it is to slow down and appreciate the world around us.
I truly hope you can join us next time.I'd love to hear what you've been doing lately.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：We set off early and spent the day walking through the forest，enjoying the peaceful surroundings.
译文：我们很早就出发了，花了一天时间在森林里散步，享受着宁静的环境。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语enjoying the peaceful surroundings作状语。
高分句型二：Immersed in nature，I felt refreshed stepping away from schoolwork for a moment.
译文：沉浸在大自然中，暂时放下作业，我感到神清气爽。
分析：这句话使用了过去分词短语Immersed in nature作状语。
【解答】Dear Charles，
I'm writing to share with you an outing I had last Friday.（写信目的）
Our school organized this trip to a nearby nature reserve.We set off early and spent the day walking through the forest，enjoying the peaceful surroundings.【高分句型一】The highlight of the outing was admiring the view from the hilltop.It was a perfect opportunity to relax and bond with my classmates.（活动过程）
Immersed in nature，I felt refreshed stepping away from schoolwork for a moment.【高分句型二】It reminded me how important it is to slow down and appreciate the world around us.（感想）
I truly hope you can join us next time.I'd love to hear what you've been doing lately.（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
9．（2025 仙游县一模）假定你是李华，你校上周举办了"科技文化节"，你参与了智能机器人工作坊的体验活动。请给你的美国笔友Anna写一封邮件，分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）活动的主要内容；
（2）你的收获与感悟。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
________
【答案】Dear Anna，
I'm Li Hua.Our school held the "Science and Technology Culture Festival" last week.I participated in the intelligent robot workshop.I'm writing to share with you.
In the workshop，we first learned about the history and development of intelligent robots.Then，experts showed us how they are made and controlled.We even had a chance to operate some simple robots ourselves.
This experience was amazing.Not only did I gain knowledge but also I realized the importance of technology.It inspired me to study harder and pursue my interest in this field.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Then，experts showed us how they are made and controlled.
翻译：然后，专家向我们展示了它们是如何制造和控制的。
分析：本句运用了how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Not only did I gain knowledge but also I realized the importance of technology.
翻译：我不仅获得了知识，而且还意识到了科技的重要性。
分析：本句运用了"not only...but also...不但……而且……"连接对等成分，并且not only放在句首引起句子的部分倒装。
【解答】Dear Anna，
I'm Li Hua.Our school held the "Science and Technology Culture Festival" last week.I participated in the intelligent robot workshop.I'm writing to share with you.（写信目的）
In the workshop，we first learned about the history and development of intelligent robots.Then，experts showed us how they are made and controlled.【高分句型一】We even had a chance to operate some simple robots ourselves.（活动的主要内容）
This experience was amazing.Not only did I gain knowledge but also I realized the importance of technology.【高分句型二】It inspired me to study harder and pursue my interest in this field.（个人收获与感悟）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
10．（2024秋 章丘区校级期末） 你们学校的运动会将如期举行，目前正在招募志愿者。假如你是李华，红星中学的一名学生，希望能成为其中一员，请用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容包括：
（1）个人介绍；
（2）自身优势；
（3）强烈意愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam，
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Hongxing Middle School.I'm outgoing and good at communicating with others.I once organized a sports event in my school，so I have relevant experience.Moreover，I have received professional training on event support work which has further enhanced my ability to handle various situations.I'm really eager to be a volunteer for the school sports meeting.I believe I can contribute to the smooth running of the event and offer good service to participants.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I once organized a sports event in my school，so I have relevant experience.
译文：我曾经在学校组织过一次体育赛事，所以我有相关的经验。
分析：这句话使用了so引导的结果状语从句。
高分句型二：Moreover，I have received professional training on event support work which has further enhanced my ability to handle various situations.
译文：此外，我接受了活动支持工作的专业培训，这进一步提高了我处理各种情况的能力。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Hongxing Middle School.（个人介绍）I'm outgoing and good at communicating with others.I once organized a sports event in my school，so I have relevant experience.【高分句型一】Moreover，I have received professional training on event support work which has further enhanced my ability to handle various situations.【高分句型二】（自身优势）I'm really eager to be a volunteer for the school sports meeting.I believe I can contribute to the smooth running of the event and offer good service to participants.Looking forward to your reply.（强烈意愿）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
11．（2025 青岛模拟）假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动（spring outing），现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）具体活动；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
I'm glad to hear that we'll have a spring outing next Saturday.I suggest we go to the botanical garden.There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.Also，we can have a picnic in the garden.It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.I'm looking forward to the activity.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.
翻译：在那里，我们可以欣赏各种植物，了解不同的物种，这既有教育意义，又令人放松。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.
翻译：这将是我们享受户外活动和相互交流的好机会。
分析：本句使用了it作形式主语，to do不定式to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other作真正的主语。
【解答】Dear Chris，
I'm glad to hear that we'll have a spring outing next Saturday.I suggest we go to the botanical garden.There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.【高分句型一】（活动一及理由）Also，we can have a picnic in the garden.It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.【高分句型二】（活动二及理由）I'm looking forward to the activity.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
12．（2025 青岛一模） 假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动（spring outing），现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）具体活动；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
_______________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
I'm glad to hear that we'll have a spring outing next Saturday.I suggest we go to the botanical garden.There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.Also，we can have a picnic in the garden.It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.I'm looking forward to the activity.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm glad to hear that we'll have a spring outing next Saturday.
翻译：我很高兴听到我们下周六要去春游。
分析：运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.
翻译：在那里，我们可以欣赏各种植物，了解不同的物种，这既是教育又放松。
分析：运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
I'm glad to hear that we'll have a spring outing next Saturday.【高分句型一】I suggest we go to the botanical garden.There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.【高分句型二】Also，we can have a picnic in the garden.（具体活动）It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.（理由）I'm looking forward to the activity.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
13．（2025 宁河区校级一模）假设你是李津。你校学生会正在招募校园文化大使。你对此很感兴趣并写信申请职位。内容包括：
（1）表示兴趣；
（2）阐述自己对校园文化大使工作意义的认识（至少包括三点）；
（3）阐述自己的特产和录用后计划要做的事。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
校园文化大使Campus Culture Ambassador
【答案】Dear Student Union，
I am Li Jin，a sophomore from the Department of Foreign Languages.I am writing to apply for the position of Campus Culture Ambassador because I am deeply interested in promoting our school's unique culture.
I believe this role is crucial for several reasons.First，it helps spread our school's cultural heritage and traditions，enhancing students' sense of belonging.Second，it enriches campus life through various activities，fostering a vibrant atmosphere.Lastly，it serves as a bridge between students and the school，collecting feedback to improve cultural initiatives.
I am confident in my communication skills and organizational abilities.I have experience in planning school events and am passionate about our school's culture.If selected，I plan to organize cultural workshops，promote traditional festivals，and create a platform for students to share their cultural ideas.
I hope to contribute to our campus culture and look forward to the opportunity.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin
【分析】高分句型一：Second，it enriches campus life through various activities，fostering a vibrant atmosphere.
译文：其次，它通过各种活动丰富了校园生活，营造了充满活力的氛围。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语fostering a vibrant atmosphere作状语。
高分句型二：If selected，I plan to organize cultural workshops，promote traditional festivals，and create a platform for students to share their cultural ideas.
译文：如果被选中，我计划组织文化研讨会，推广传统节日，并为学生创造一个分享文化思想的平台。
分析：这句话使用了if引导的条件状语从句的省略句。
【解答】Dear Student Union，
I am Li Jin，a sophomore from the Department of Foreign Languages.I am writing to apply for the position of Campus Culture Ambassador because I am deeply interested in promoting our school's unique culture.（表示兴趣）
I believe this role is crucial for several reasons.First，it helps spread our school's cultural heritage and traditions，enhancing students' sense of belonging.Second，it enriches campus life through various activities，fostering a vibrant atmosphere.【高分句型一】Lastly，it serves as a bridge between students and the school，collecting feedback to improve cultural initiatives.（阐述自己对校园文化大使工作意义的认识）
I am confident in my communication skills and organizational abilities.I have experience in planning school events and am passionate about our school's culture.If selected，I plan to organize cultural workshops，promote traditional festivals，and create a platform for students to share their cultural ideas.【高分句型二】（阐述自己的特产和录用后计划要做的事）
I hope to contribute to our campus culture and look forward to the opportunity.（希望）
Thank you for considering my application.（感谢）
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
14．（2025 石家庄模拟） 假定你是李华，寒假期间参加了一个剪纸课程。请给你的外国朋友Alex写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）学习的内容；
（2）收获与感想。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Alex，
___________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alex，
How have you been？I'm bursting to tell you about my incredible journey learning the ancient art of paper﹣cutting this winter vacation!
In the course，I learned how to cut masterpieces out of the soft paper and discovered how these delicate artworks breathe life into Lunar New Year celebrations and wedding ceremonies.When I held the scissors，my fingers trembled like a baby bird taking its first flight.We started by tracing some simple patterns and by the end of the course，I was able to cut "double happiness" symbols.By attending the course，I felt this was more than craft lessons，but a demonstration of the ancient Chinese wisdom，decoding messages of blessings from the past.
Can't wait to hear your winter vacation experiences!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：When I held the scissors，my fingers trembled like a baby bird taking its first flight.
译文：当我拿着剪刀时，我的手指像小鸟第一次飞行一样颤抖。
分析：这句话使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：By attending the course，I felt this was more than craft lessons，but a demonstration of the ancient Chinese wisdom，decoding messages of blessings from the past.
译文：通过参加这门课程，我觉得这不仅仅是工艺课，而是中国古代智慧的展示，解读了过去的祝福信息。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语decoding messages of blessings from the past作状语。
【解答】Dear Alex，
How have you been？I'm bursting to tell you about my incredible journey learning the ancient art of paper﹣cutting this winter vacation!（写信目的）
In the course，I learned how to cut masterpieces out of the soft paper and discovered how these delicate artworks breathe life into Lunar New Year celebrations and wedding ceremonies.When I held the scissors，my fingers trembled like a baby bird taking its first flight.【高分句型一】We started by tracing some simple patterns and by the end of the course，I was able to cut "double happiness" symbols.（学习的内容）By attending the course，I felt this was more than craft lessons，but a demonstration of the ancient Chinese wisdom，decoding messages of blessings from the past.【高分句型二】（收获与感想）
Can't wait to hear your winter vacation experiences!（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
15．（2025 德州一模）假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以"AI in My Life"为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）AI在你生活中的应用；
（2）你的感受和期待。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
AI in My Life
【答案】
AI in My Life
AI has integrated into multiple aspects of my daily life.Every morning，my smart alarm clock，guided by AI，wakes me up with a customized weather forecast and the latest news.Besides，AI﹣powered learning apps like Doubao offer me explanations and study tips and efficiently aid in my English practice.
Thanks to AI，not only has my routine become more convenient，but also my academic performance has been dramatically boosted.AI has truly become a reliable helper in my life.
Full of anticipation for the future of AI，I'm eager to see AI making great leaps in fields such as healthcare and education，and continuing to shape our lives in amazing ways.
【分析】高分句型一：Every morning，my smart alarm clock，guided by AI，wakes me up with a customized weather forecast and the latest news.
翻译：每天早上，我的智能闹钟在人工智能的引导下，用定制的天气预报和最新消息叫醒我。
分析：本句运用了过去分词短语guided by AI作后置定语。
高分句型二：Thanks to AI，not only has my routine become more convenient，but also my academic performance has been dramatically boosted.
翻译：多亏了AI，不仅我的日常生活变得更加方便，而且我的学习成绩也得到了极大的提高。
分析：本句运用了"not only...but also...不但……而且……"连接对等成分，并且not only放在句首引起句子的部分倒装。
【解答】
AI in My Life
AI has integrated into multiple aspects of my daily life.Every morning，my smart alarm clock，guided by AI，wakes me up with a customized weather forecast and the latest news.【高分句型一】Besides，AI﹣powered learning apps like Doubao offer me explanations and study tips and efficiently aid in my English practice.（AI在自己的生活中的应用）
Thanks to AI，not only has my routine become more convenient，but also my academic performance has been dramatically boosted.【高分句型二】AI has truly become a reliable helper in my life.（个人感受）
Full of anticipation for the future of AI，I'm eager to see AI making great leaps in fields such as healthcare and education，and continuing to shape our lives in amazing ways.（表达期待）
【点评】 写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
16．（2025 黄冈模拟）你班同学展开了一场题为"人工智能（Artificial Intelligence）是否能替代教师"的辩论。请你为学校English Corner写一篇文章，内容包括：
（1）正反方观点及理由；
（2）你的看法。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Can Artificial Intelligence Replace Teachers？
Recently，our class had a heated debate on whether AI can replace teachers.
【答案】
Can Artificial Intelligence Replace Teachers？
Recently，our class had a heated debate on whether AI can replace teachers.Some students argue AI can replace teachers，believing AI has a vast knowledge base and can teach various subjects.Moreover，it can adapt to the learning pace and style of each student，offering personalized learning experiences.The opponents insist AI cannot replace teachers，pointing out that teachers can inspire，encourage and support students in a way that AI cannot.
In my opinion，AI cannot replace teachers.While AI is undoubtedly powerful in providing information and facilitating learning，it lacks human touch and empathy that are essential in education.
【分析】高分句型一：Some students argue AI can replace teachers，believing AI has a vast knowledge base and can teach various subjects.
翻译：一些学生认为人工智能可以取代教师，认为人工智能拥有庞大的知识库，可以教授各种科目。
分析：本句运用了省略了that的宾语从句AI can replace teachers和AI has a vast knowledge base and can teach various subjects及现在分词短语believing AI has a vast knowledge base and can teach various subjects作状语。
高分句型二：While AI is undoubtedly powerful in providing information and facilitating learning，it lacks human touch and empathy that are essential in education.
翻译：虽然人工智能在提供信息和促进学习方面无疑很强大，但它缺乏教育中必不可少的人情味和同理心。
分析：本句运用了while引导的让步状语从句和that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Can Artificial Intelligence Replace Teachers？
Recently，our class had a heated debate on whether AI can replace teachers.Some students argue AI can replace teachers，believing AI has a vast knowledge base and can teach various subjects.【高分句型一】Moreover，it can adapt to the learning pace and style of each student，offering personalized learning experiences.（正方观点及理由）The opponents insist AI cannot replace teachers，pointing out that teachers can inspire，encourage and support students in a way that AI cannot.（反方观点及理由）
In my opinion，AI cannot replace teachers.While AI is undoubtedly powerful in providing information and facilitating learning，it lacks human touch and empathy that are essential in education.【高分句型二】（个人看法）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
17．（2025 安徽模拟） 假定你是李华，随着中文歌曲在全球流行，你的澳大利亚网友Jack发邮件想让你给他推荐一首中文歌曲。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）你推荐的歌曲；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack，
I' m more than glad to know that you' re interested in Chinese songs!I' d like to recommend"Big Fish" ，which is sung by singer Zhou Shen，to you.Its lyrics are like a beautiful poem，telling a touching story.Each line is carefully crafted ，painting vivid pictures in your mind.As for the melody，it's a gentle and soothing symphony.The soft notes flow like a gentle stream，gradually reaching deep into your heart，and carrying you into a world full of emotions.Moreover，it perfectly showcases the unique charm of Chinese music，with its traditional elements blended harmoniously with modern sounds.I' m sure you' ll fall in love with it.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I' d like to recommend"Big Fish" ，which is sung by singer Zhou Shen，to you.
翻译：我想向你推荐歌手周深演唱的《大鱼》。
分析：本句使用了which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Moreover，it perfectly showcases the unique charm of Chinese music，with its traditional elements blended harmoniously with modern sounds.
翻译：此外，它完美地展示了中国音乐的独特魅力，传统元素与现代声音和谐融合。
分析：本句使用了with复合结构with its traditional elements blended harmoniously with modern sounds作状语。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I' m more than glad to know that you' re interested in Chinese songs!I' d like to recommend"Big Fish" ，which is sung by singer Zhou Shen，to you.【高分句型一】（推荐歌曲）Its lyrics are like a beautiful poem，telling a touching story.Each line is carefully crafted ，painting vivid pictures in your mind.As for the melody，it's a gentle and soothing symphony.The soft notes flow like a gentle stream，gradually reaching deep into your heart，and carrying you into a world full of emotions.Moreover，it perfectly showcases the unique charm of Chinese music，with its traditional elements blended harmoniously with modern sounds.【高分句型二】I' m sure you' ll fall in love with it.（推荐理由）
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
18．（2025 中山市校级三模）假定你是李华，你校英文报最近在向全校师生征集意见和建议，你认为有必要设立一个问答专栏。请你给报纸负责人Henry写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）提出建议——增加新专栏；
（2）设立新专栏的原因及目的。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry，
I'm writing to making a suggestion.I was wondering if it might be possible to add a new column for our English newspaper.
The name of the column can be "Ask and Answer"，the aim of which is to help deal with our problems.It's true that we teenagers are surrounded with numerous problems in our study as well as in our lives.In the face of various challenges，worries and anxieties，we need comfort，encouragement and solutions.As a matter of fact，a timely suggestion can make a great difference to us.So I firmly believe such a column is not only necessary but also significant.
I sincerely hope you'll take my suggestion into consideration.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The name of the column can be "Ask and Answer"，the aim of which is to help deal with our problems.
翻译：专栏的名称可以是"问答"，其目的是帮助解决我们的问题。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：So I firmly believe such a column is not only necessary but also significant.
翻译：所以我坚信这样一个专栏不仅是必要的，而且意义重大。
分析：本句运用了省略了that的宾语从句such a column is not only necessary but also significant。
【解答】Dear Henry，
I'm writing to making a suggestion.I was wondering if it might be possible to add a new column for our English newspaper.（提出建议——增加新专栏）
The name of the column can be "Ask and Answer"，the aim of which is to help deal with our problems.【高分句型一】It's true that we teenagers are surrounded with numerous problems in our study as well as in our lives.In the face of various challenges，worries and anxieties，we need comfort，encouragement and solutions.As a matter of fact，a timely suggestion can make a great difference to us.So I firmly believe such a column is not only necessary but also significant.【高分句型二】（设立新专栏的原因及目的）
I sincerely hope you'll take my suggestion into consideration.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
19．（2025 安徽模拟） 假定你是李华，上周日你参加了你校组织的防火知识宣传志愿者活动。请你给外教Mr.Smith写封邮件，分享此次活动，内容包括：
（1）活动时间、地点；
（2）活动形式、内容；
（3）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Mr.Smith，
Last Sunday，I participated in a volunteer activity organized by our school to promote fire prevention knowledge.The event took place in the community center near our campus.
The activity was conducted in the form of interactive workshops，where we learned about fire hazards，prevention tips，and emergency response measures.We also distributed brochures and conducted simulations to raise awareness among the residents.
Through the activity，I realized the importance of fire prevention and the role we can play in our community.I felt fulfilled knowing that I had contributed to enhancing public safety.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The activity was conducted in the form of interactive workshops，where we learned about fire hazards，prevention tips，and emergency response measures.
翻译：活动以互动研讨会的形式进行，在那里我们了解了火灾隐患、预防技巧和应急响应措施。
分析：本句使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I felt fulfilled knowing that I had contributed to enhancing public safety.
翻译：知道我为加强公共安全做出了贡献，我感到很满足。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语knowing that I had contributed to enhancing public safety作状语；that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mr.Smith，
Last Sunday，I participated in a volunteer activity organized by our school to promote fire prevention knowledge.The event took place in the community center near our campus.（活动时间、地点）
The activity was conducted in the form of interactive workshops，where we learned about fire hazards，prevention tips，and emergency response measures.【高分句型一】We also distributed brochures and conducted simulations to raise awareness among the residents.（活动形式、内容）
Through the activity，I realized the importance of fire prevention and the role we can play in our community.I felt fulfilled knowing that I had contributed to enhancing public safety.【高分句型二】（感受）
Best regards，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
20．（2025 全国模拟）假定你是李华，在学校刚刚举行的年度Spelling Bee （英语单词拼写大赛）决赛中，你获得了一等奖，请给英国好友David写一封邮件分享你的喜悦，内容包括：
（1）赛事简介；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
_____
Looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David，
I'm so excited to write to you!I won the first prize in the annual Spelling Bee final at my school.
The Spelling Bee is a very interesting and intense event where all the participants need to spell various words accurately and quickly.Not only was it a test of vocabulary but also it was a battle of nerves.I feel overjoyed and incredibly proud of myself.This victory is of great significance for me，making me believe that hard work pays off.How thrilling and rewarding this event was!
Looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The Spelling Bee is a very interesting and intense event where all the participants need to spell various words accurately and quickly.
翻译：英语单词拼写大赛是一项非常有趣和激烈的活动，所有参与者都需要准确快速地拼写各种单词。
分析：本句使用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：This victory is of great significance for me，making me believe that hard work pays off.
翻译：这场胜利对我来说意义重大，让我相信努力是有回报的。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语making me believe that hard work pays off作状语及that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear David，
I'm so excited to write to you!I won the first prize in the annual Spelling Bee final at my school.（写信目的）
The Spelling Bee is a very interesting and intense event where all the participants need to spell various words accurately and quickly.【高分句型一】Not only was it a test of vocabulary but also it was a battle of nerves.（赛事简介）I feel overjoyed and incredibly proud of myself.This victory is of great significance for me，making me believe that hard work pays off.【高分句型二】（个人感受）How thrilling and rewarding this event was!
Looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
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