【中考押题卷】2025年中考英语高频易错预测卷：书面表达（含解析）

书面表达
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2023春 汉阳区期中）假设你是Peter，最近在生活中遇到了一些烦恼，请根据以下内容提示问题，用英文从学业压力、亲子关系、家务劳动等几个方面写封信向报社寻求帮助。
内容提示问题：
Why do you have stress these days？
What's your problem with your parents？
Do you often do chores at home？
...
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60—80；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My problems
Dear editor，
I'd like to tell you something about my problems._________
Yours，
Peter
2．（2023 涪城区开学）假设你是李明，你的朋友Mike 打算在暑假期间来中国看望你，并来信问你所在城市的天气情况。请你给他回信，介绍你这里的天气情况。
要求：70词左右；信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
I'm glad you will come to my city.__________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Ming
3．（2023 惠阳区开学）假设你是某国际学校的中学生李华。某节英语课上，老师让同学们分享自己最喜欢的电视节目。请以"My Favourite TV Programme"为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
（1）最喜欢的电视节目；
（2）喜欢的原因；
（3）对看电视的看法。
要求：
（1）语句通顺，语法正确；
（2）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite TV Programme
There are many different kinds of programmes on TV every day.As a middle school student，
4．（2022 集贤县模拟）图示作文：寓言故事深受孩子们的喜爱，你一定读过乌鸦喝水这个寓言故事。请你根据下图提示，以"The Crow and the Pitcher"为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，在学校广播站"英语之声"栏目播出。
要求：1）语句通顺，没有语法错误；2）包含图片全部要点；3）从中你得到哪些启发，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：乌鸦 crow；口渴的 thirsty；鹅卵石pebble；罐子 pitcher
______
5．（2020秋 太康县期末）Tony作为中外文化交流的使者，从加拿大来到北京参加了近一个月的"体验中国"活动．现在，他想写封信将这里的学习和生活情况告诉远方的父母．请你根据以下提示，帮助Tony完成这封信．
提示：（1）与中国学生相互学习；周末参加体育活动；
（2）游览北京的名胜古迹；观看京剧；品尝美食；了解中国历史；
（3）喜欢这里的生活．
要求（1）语言规范，字迹工整；（2）词数：60﹣80；
（3）开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Dad and Mum，
How's it going？I hope you are in good health．I
Yours，Tony．
6．（2021 仓山区校级开学）随着社会的发展，人口问题也变得日益严重。请你根据以下提示，以"The population problems"为题，写一篇英语作文，谈谈人口过多带来的问题。词数80左右。
①big cities：heavy traffic，not enough houses The populationproblems ③resources （资源）：short of food，water，energy
②environment ④……
注意事项：
（1）必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
（2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
（3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
The population problems
7．（2021 扬州）某英文报正在举行"家乡美"为主题的征文活动，你打算以"Spring in my hometown"为题写一篇英语短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成征文。
提示：
（1）What is spring like in your hometown？
（2）What do people in your hometown usually do in spring？ （three points）
（3）How do you like your hometown in spring？ （two points）
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（3）词数：100 词左右；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Spring in my hometown
_______________
8．（2020 雅安） 现在越来越多的外国人开始学习汉语．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Frank打算学习汉语，写信询问你学习汉语的方法。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。
要点提示：
1．你的认识：汉语有用且有趣，是世界上最重要的语言之一。
2．你的建议：看汉语电视节目、听磁带；
多阅读汉语书籍；
尝试用汉语写作；
……
3．表达祝愿。
注意：
1．词数80﹣ 100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear Frank，
How's it going？You asked me about the ways of learning Chinese in your last letter
．
Yours，
Li Hua
9． 请你从以下几个方面描述你最喜欢的一部戏剧或电影。
（1）你最喜欢的戏剧或电影的名字是什么？
（2）它讲述了何时何地发生了什么事？主人公是谁？
（3）剧情的发展是怎样的？结局如何？
要求：
（1）语言连贯，逻辑合理。
（2）80 词左右。
10．大熊猫是生存在我国的珍贵的野生动物，但它们正面临灭绝的危险。你认为我们应采取哪些措施来保护它们？根据所给提示写一篇70词左右的短文，陈述你的观点。
提示：困境：过度砍伐树木以建农田或盖房子；竹子越来越少；猎人为皮毛（fur）而捕杀它们。采取措施：建立自然保护区；不买皮毛制的衣服。最后结果：大熊猫越来越多。
11．你家离学校远吗？你每天怎样去学校？是步行、骑自行车、乘坐校车还是公共汽车？以"My Best Way of Going to School"为题写一篇英语短文。
My Best Way of Going to School
12． 请针对他们的问题，给他们提出一些具体的学习建议。要求：80词左右。
Students Problems
Lin Hai My listening is very poor.My English teacher，Andy，is from Canada.He speaks too fast and I find it hard to understand him.
Huang Bin I'm afraid to speak English in class because my spoken English is bad and I'm afraid my classmates might laugh at me.
Wang Fang There are many mistakes in my compositions.I have trouble in writing.
13．我国于2009年将每年的8月8日定为"全民健身日"。今年的"全民健身日"即将来临。请你根据以下提示向学校英语报写一篇不少于80词的文章，阐述体育锻炼对我们的重要性。文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
进行体育锻炼的原因 （1）学习压力大，视力很差；（2）整天感到很累，没有足够的精力去学习
体育锻炼的方式 （1）多参加户外活动；（2）……
对体育锻炼的看法 补充1～2点
Exercise is very important to students.______
14．假如你是李杰，是潍坊的一名初中生。你的英国笔友迈克（Mike）给你发来一封电子邮件，向你询问潍坊的最佳旅游季节。请你根据下表的内容用英语给他回复一封电子邮件。
天气 春季 暖和，多风
秋季 凉爽，舒适
夏季 非常炎热，有时下雨
冬季 有点寒冷
你的建议 ①最佳旅游季节是春天或秋天②可以去参观富华游乐园、十笏园等
要求：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：富华游乐园Fuwah Park；十笏园Shihu Garden；潍坊世界风筝博物馆Weifang World Kite Museum
Dear Mike，
You asked me about the best time to travel in Weifang.
____________
Best wishes!
Li Jie
15．写一篇介绍自己家乡的英语短文。内容提示：
（1）位置（山东省东南部，靠海）；
（2）概况（它是一个约有600人的小村庄。大部分 人务农，有的人捕鱼；近十年来变化很大，人们用拖拉机 做农活，许多人家建起了新房，家中配有电视、冰箱、空 调等家用电器）；
（3）主要作物（小麦、玉米、棉花）；
（4）教育状况（村内有小学，多数农家孩子上了大 学）。
要求：
（1）要点全面，但不要逐句翻译；
（2）80词左右。
参考词汇：拖拉机tractor My home town
_______
书面表达
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2023春 汉阳区期中）假设你是Peter，最近在生活中遇到了一些烦恼，请根据以下内容提示问题，用英文从学业压力、亲子关系、家务劳动等几个方面写封信向报社寻求帮助。
内容提示问题：
Why do you have stress these days？
What's your problem with your parents？
Do you often do chores at home？
...
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60—80；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My problems
Dear editor，
I'd like to tell you something about my problems._________
Yours，
Peter
【考点】书信类；日常生活．
【答案】
My problems
Dear editor，
I'd like to tell you something about my problems.
I've been under a lot of pressure recently.Mainly because I did very badly on the recent exam.I am worried and don't know how to improve my grades.Secondly，I often quarrel with my parents because of my bad performance.These days，I seldom communicate with them.I used to do some housework at home，but these days I hardly do any housework.
Can you help me？Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Peter
【分析】【高分句型一】
I am worried and don't know how to improve my grades.我很担心，不知道如何提高我的成绩。
how to improve my grades如何提高我的成绩，是疑问词接不定式结构。
【高分句型二】
I used to do some housework at home，but these days I hardly do any housework.我过去在家做一些家务，但这些天我几乎不做任何家务。
used to do sth过去常常做某事。
【解答】
My problems
Dear editor，
I'd like to tell you something about my problems.（点题）
I've been under a lot of pressure recently.Mainly because I did very badly on the recent exam.I am worried and don't know how to improve my grades.【高分句型一】（最近为什么有压力？）Secondly，I often quarrel with my parents because of my bad performance.These days，I seldom communicate with them.（和你父母有什么问题）I used to do some housework at home，but these days I hardly do any housework.【高分句型二】（关于做家务）
Can you help me？Looking forward to your reply.（期待）
Yours，
Peter
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
2．（2023 涪城区开学）假设你是李明，你的朋友Mike 打算在暑假期间来中国看望你，并来信问你所在城市的天气情况。请你给他回信，介绍你这里的天气情况。
要求：70词左右；信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
I'm glad you will come to my city.__________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Ming
【考点】书信类；天气与气候．
【答案】Dear Mike，
I'm glad you will come to my city.Let me tell you the weather here.Usually，the summer here is from June to September.It is very hot in summer here，but in the early morning it's cool.People usually go out in the morning.In the afternoon，they often relax in the house or go swimming in the pool.At night，people go out to shop or see friends.It often rains here in summer.I hope you can enjoy the summer here.
Yours，
Li Ming
【分析】【高分句型一】
Let me tell you the weather here.让我告诉你这里的天气。let引导的祈使句。
【高分句型二】
I hope you can enjoy the summer here.我希望你能在这里过得愉快。宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike，
I'm glad you will come to my city.Let me tell you the weather here.【高分句型一】Usually，the summer here is from June to September.It is very hot in summer here，but in the early morning it's cool.People usually go out in the morning.In the afternoon，they often relax in the house or go swimming in the pool.At night，people go out to shop or see friends.It often rains here in summer.I hope you can enjoy the summer here.【高分句型二】
Yours，
Li Ming
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
3．（2023 惠阳区开学）假设你是某国际学校的中学生李华。某节英语课上，老师让同学们分享自己最喜欢的电视节目。请以"My Favourite TV Programme"为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
（1）最喜欢的电视节目；
（2）喜欢的原因；
（3）对看电视的看法。
要求：
（1）语句通顺，语法正确；
（2）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite TV Programme
There are many different kinds of programmes on TV every day.As a middle school student，
【考点】说明文；兴趣爱好．
【答案】
My Favourite TV Programme
There are many different kinds of programmes on TV every day.As a middle school student，I can watch TV only at weekends.I watch TV for two hours a week.My favourite TV programme is The World of Animals.It is on from 2：10 p.m.to 3：15 p.m.on Saturday.It tells us the life of all kinds of animals in the world.I like this programme because I am an animal lover.I want to know more about animals.From this programme I know that it is difficult for animals to survive in the wild.We should treat animals kindly.We are living on the same earth.Animals are our friends.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I like this programme because I am an animal lover.我喜欢这个节目，因为我是一个动物爱好者。
because引导原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
From this programme I know that it is difficult for animals to survive in the wild.从这个节目中，我知道动物很难在野外生存。
that引导宾语从句。
【解答】
My Favourite TV Programme
There are many different kinds of programmes on TV every day.As a middle school student，I can watch TV only at weekends.I watch TV for two hours a week.My favourite TV programme is The World of Animals.（最喜欢的节目）It is on from 2：10 p.m.to 3：15 p.m.on Saturday.It tells us the life of all kinds of animals in the world.I like this programme because I am an animal lover.【高分句型一】I want to know more about animals.（喜欢的原因）From this programme I know that it is difficult for animals to survive in the wild.【高分句型二】We should treat animals kindly.We are living on the same earth.Animals are our friends.（看法）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
4．（2022 集贤县模拟）图示作文：寓言故事深受孩子们的喜爱，你一定读过乌鸦喝水这个寓言故事。请你根据下图提示，以"The Crow and the Pitcher"为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，在学校广播站"英语之声"栏目播出。
要求：1）语句通顺，没有语法错误；2）包含图片全部要点；3）从中你得到哪些启发，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：乌鸦 crow；口渴的 thirsty；鹅卵石pebble；罐子 pitcher
______
【考点】日常生活．
【答案】
The Crow and the Pitcher
It was a hot day.A crow felt so thirsty that he looked for water everywhere.Finally，he found a pitcher.But there wasn't much water in it.His beak couldn't reach it.He was very distressed.
When he wanted to give up，he came up with an idea.He picked up a small stone and dropped it into the pitcher.Then he took another and dropped it in.Gradually，the water rose and he was able to drink the water.
How clever the crow was!
【分析】【高分句型一】：
When he wanted to give up，he came up with an idea.当他想放弃时，他想出了一个主意。want to do sth表示想做某事。
【高分句型二】：
How clever the crow was!这只乌鸦多聪明啊！句子是一个感叹句，结构：How+形容词+主语+谓语！
【解答】
The Crow and the Pitcher
It was a hot day.A crow felt so thirsty that he looked for water everywhere.Finally，he found a pitcher.But there wasn't much water in it.His beak couldn't reach it.He was very distressed.
When he wanted to give up，he came up with an idea.【高分句型一】He picked up a small stone and dropped it into the pitcher.Then he took another and dropped it in.Gradually，the water rose and he was able to drink the water.（具体介绍这个寓言故事）
How clever the crow was!【高分句型二】（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5．（2020秋 太康县期末）Tony作为中外文化交流的使者，从加拿大来到北京参加了近一个月的"体验中国"活动．现在，他想写封信将这里的学习和生活情况告诉远方的父母．请你根据以下提示，帮助Tony完成这封信．
提示：（1）与中国学生相互学习；周末参加体育活动；
（2）游览北京的名胜古迹；观看京剧；品尝美食；了解中国历史；
（3）喜欢这里的生活．
要求（1）语言规范，字迹工整；（2）词数：60﹣80；
（3）开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Dad and Mum，
How's it going？I hope you are in good health．I
Yours，Tony．
【考点】书信类．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】【高分句型一】
I saw the Beijing Opera yesterday，and I was interested in it昨天看了北京京剧，我很感兴趣．
be interested in 对…感兴趣
【高分句型二】
I enjoy living here very much我非常喜欢住在这．
enjoy doing sth 喜欢做某事．
【解答】Dear Dad and Mum，
How's it going？I hope you are in good health．I have been here in Beijing for about one month．I work and study with Chinese students．At weekends，I play different kinds of sports．（与中国学生相互学习；周末参加体育活动；）Last week，I visited some places of interest in Beijing．They are really great．I saw the Beijing Opera yesterday，and I was interested in it．【高分句型一】I ate the delicious food here．Now I have known more about Chinese history．（游览北京的名胜古迹；观看京剧；品尝美食；了解中国历史；）I enjoy living here very much．【高分句型二】（喜欢这里的生活）I hope to see you soon．
Yours，
Tony
【点评】注意题目要求，注意紧扣文章主题，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、词组及句型，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
6．（2021 仓山区校级开学）随着社会的发展，人口问题也变得日益严重。请你根据以下提示，以"The population problems"为题，写一篇英语作文，谈谈人口过多带来的问题。词数80左右。
①big cities：heavy traffic，not enough houses The populationproblems ③resources （资源）：short of food，water，energy
②environment ④……
注意事项：
（1）必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
（2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
（3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
The population problems
【考点】社会．
【答案】
The population problems
With the development of society，China is becoming stronger and stronger.However，a large population has always been a major problem in China.Especially in big cities，due to the large population，people are seriously short of food，water and energy.The traffic in most big cities is much more crowded.Public places are too crowded.There are not enough houses in big cities to accommodate the population.Therefore，people live in fewer and fewer places.And many people find it difficult to find jobs.Environmental pollution in big cities is serious.
Although China has developed rapidly and people's living standards have been greatly improved，we still have a long way to go.
【分析】【高分句型一】
With the development of society，China is becoming stronger and stronger.随着社会的发展，中国越来越强大。stronger and stronger越来越强大。
【高分句型二】
Especially in big cities，due to the large population，people are seriously short of food，water and energy.特别是在大城市，由于人口众多，人们严重缺乏食物、水和能源。短语be short of ...缺乏……。
【解答】
The population problems
With the development of society，China is becoming stronger and stronger. 【高分句型一】However，a large population has always been a major problem in China.（点明主题） Especially in big cities，due to the large population，people are seriously short of food，water and energy.（资源问题）【高分句型二】The traffic in most big cities is much more crowded. （交通问题）Public places are too crowded.There are not enough houses in big cities to accommodate the population.Therefore，people live in fewer and fewer places.And many people find it difficult to find jobs.Environmental pollution in big cities is serious。（环境问题）.Although China has developed rapidly and people's living standards have been greatly improved，we still have a long way to go.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
7．（2021 扬州）某英文报正在举行"家乡美"为主题的征文活动，你打算以"Spring in my hometown"为题写一篇英语短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成征文。
提示：
（1）What is spring like in your hometown？
（2）What do people in your hometown usually do in spring？ （three points）
（3）How do you like your hometown in spring？ （two points）
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（3）词数：100 词左右；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Spring in my hometown
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【考点】日常生活．
【答案】
Spring in my hometown
When spring comes，everything comes back to life and the climate becomes warm.People feel more comfortable than in winter.The mountains which are very high in my hometown become greener and greener.Most flowers blossom as the weather becomes warm.All of these scenes draw a beautiful picture.
People begin to climb mountains，have a picnic near rivers.They also fly kites in the parks.They try their best to be close to nature and enjoy the beauty of it.Farmers start to sow and wait for a good harvest.
As far as I am concerned，spring in my hometown is full of life and power.It gives us energy and hope.I love the spring in my hometown.
【分析】【高分句型一】
The mountains which are very high in my hometown become greener and greener.我家乡的山很高，变得越来越绿了。
which引导定语从句。
【高分句型二】
They try their best to be close to nature and enjoy the beauty of it.他们尽最大努力接近自然，享受它的美。
try one's best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事。
【解答】
Spring in my hometown
When spring comes，everything comes back to life and the climate becomes warm.People feel more comfortable than in winter.The mountains which are very high in my hometown become greener and greener.【高分句型一】Most flowers blossom as the weather becomes warm.All of these scenes draw a beautiful picture.（家乡的春天是什么样子）
People begin to climb mountains，have a picnic near rivers.They also fly kites in the parks.They try their best to be close to nature and enjoy the beauty of it.【高分句型二】Farmers start to sow and wait for a good harvest.（家乡的人在春天通常做什么）
As far as I am concerned，spring in my hometown is full of life and power.It gives us energy and hope.I love the spring in my hometown.（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
8．（2020 雅安） 现在越来越多的外国人开始学习汉语．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Frank打算学习汉语，写信询问你学习汉语的方法。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。
要点提示：
1．你的认识：汉语有用且有趣，是世界上最重要的语言之一。
2．你的建议：看汉语电视节目、听磁带；
多阅读汉语书籍；
尝试用汉语写作；
……
3．表达祝愿。
注意：
1．词数80﹣ 100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear Frank，
How's it going？You asked me about the ways of learning Chinese in your last letter
．
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】【高分句型一】
So it is necessary to learn Chinese well．所以学好汉语是必要的。
It is+形容词 to do sth做某事是……的。
【高分句型二】
First，you should spend more time learning Chinese by watching Chinese TV programs and listening to tapes．首先，你应该花更多的时间通过看中文电视节目和听磁带来学习中文。
spend…doing sth花费……做某事。
by doing sth通过做某事。
【解答】Dear Frank，
How's it going？You asked me about the ways of learning Chinese in your last letter．（点题）
I think Chinese is useful and interesting．It is one of the most important languages in the world．So it is necessary to learn Chinese well．【高分句型一】（认识）
Here are some tips on how to learn Chinese．First，you should spend more time learning Chinese by watching Chinese TV programs and listening to tapes．【高分句型二】Second，reading more Chinese books is a good way to improve Chinese．Third，you can try to write in Chinese and don't be afraid to make mistakes．（建议）
I wish you success in learning Chinese．（祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
9． 请你从以下几个方面描述你最喜欢的一部戏剧或电影。
（1）你最喜欢的戏剧或电影的名字是什么？
（2）它讲述了何时何地发生了什么事？主人公是谁？
（3）剧情的发展是怎样的？结局如何？
要求：
（1）语言连贯，逻辑合理。
（2）80 词左右。
【考点】说明文；兴趣爱好．
【答案】
My favorite film
Forrest Gump is one of the most inspirational films that leave a deep impression on me.
Forrest Gump is an American film，which is adapted from the novel written by Winston Groom.Tom Hanks stars in the film.Forrest Gump，the main character，was unfortunately born with a lower IQ，but he is an open﹣minded person with strong determination.It is unbelievable that he has achieved great success at last.Not only is he a football star，but he is also a war﹣hero and later a millionaire.
The film is filled with a tender feeling and kindness.What's more，it conveys a message that we should take a positive attitude towards life.No matter what difficulty we meet in life，we should not give up.Besides，the use of the language is striking，which also makes the film a success.
【分析】高分句型一：
Forrest Gump is an American film，which is adapted from the novel written by Winston Groom.Tom Hanks stars in the film.
译文：《阿甘正传》是一部美国电影，改编自温斯顿 格罗姆的小说。汤姆 汉克斯主演了这部电影。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：
Not only is he a football star，but he is also a war﹣hero and later a millionaire.
译文：他不仅是一个足球明星，而且还是一个战争英雄，后来成了百万富翁。
分析：这句话使用了not only置于句首，后面用部分倒装。
【解答】
My favorite film
Forrest Gump is one of the most inspirational films that leave a deep impression on me.（话题）
Forrest Gump is an American film，which is adapted from the novel written by Winston Groom.Tom Hanks stars in the film.【高分句型一】（简要介绍《阿甘正传》）Forrest Gump，the main character，was unfortunately born with a lower IQ，but he is an open﹣minded person with strong determination.It is unbelievable that he has achieved great success at last.Not only is he a football star，but he is also a war﹣hero and later a millionaire.【高分句型二】（故事情节）
The film is filled with a tender feeling and kindness.What's more，it conveys a message that we should take a positive attitude towards life.No matter what difficulty we meet in life，we should not give up.Besides，the use of the language is striking，which also makes the film a success.（评价及感悟）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．大熊猫是生存在我国的珍贵的野生动物，但它们正面临灭绝的危险。你认为我们应采取哪些措施来保护它们？根据所给提示写一篇70词左右的短文，陈述你的观点。
提示：困境：过度砍伐树木以建农田或盖房子；竹子越来越少；猎人为皮毛（fur）而捕杀它们。采取措施：建立自然保护区；不买皮毛制的衣服。最后结果：大熊猫越来越多。
【考点】说明文；环境保护．
【答案】
What can we do to protect the pandas
The Pandas live only in China.However，they are endangered now.There are some reasons.On the one hand，people are cutting down many trees to build their houses.So the bamboo is becoming less and less.On the other hand，people have hunted a lot of pandas for their fur.
I think we should do something to protect the pandas.For example，we should set up Nature Reserve.We should not buy fur clothes.And we can also learn more about pandas and tell others to protect them.If we can do these，I think the pandas will live better and better and better and there will be more and more pandas.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
I think we should do something to protect the pandas.我想为了保护熊猫我们应该采取一些措施。句子中think后面跟的是一个宾语从句。
【高分句型二】：
If we can do these，I think the pandas will live better and better and there will be more and more pandas.如果我们做了这些，我想他们的生活会更好，大熊猫将会越来越多。句子中if引导一个条件状语从句。
【解答】
What can we do to protect the pandas
The pandas are our national treasures.However，they are endangered animals.（引出话题）There are some reasons.On the one hand，people are cutting down many trees to build their houses.So the bamboo is becoming less and less.On the other hand，people have hunted a lot of pandas for their fur.（目前的困境）
I think we should do something to protect the pandas.【高分句型一】For example，we should set up Nature Reserve（自然保护区）.We should not buy fur clothes（皮衣）.And we can also learn more about pandas and tell others to protect them.（采取措施）If we can do these，I think the pandas will live better and better and there will be more and more pandas.【高分句型二】（结果）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
11．你家离学校远吗？你每天怎样去学校？是步行、骑自行车、乘坐校车还是公共汽车？以"My Best Way of Going to School"为题写一篇英语短文。
My Best Way of Going to School
【考点】说明文；交通．
【答案】
My Best Way of Going to School
I like to go to school on foot best.
First，my home is not far away from the school.
Second，on my way to school，the traffic is heavy.The street is full of bikes，motorbikes，buses and cars.I think it 's safer to go to school on foot.
Third，I also think walk is a kind of sport.I can take exercises by walking.It 's good for my health.
So it 's the best way for me to go to school on foot.
【分析】【高分句型一】
The street is full of bikes，motorbikes，buses and cars.
街上到处都是自行车、摩托车、公共汽车和汽车。
be full of充满…
【高分句型二】
So it 's the best way for me to go to school on foot.
所以对我来说步行上学是最好的方式。
it is+形容词 for sb to do sth做某事对于某人怎么样。
【解答】
My Best Way of Going to School
I like to go to school on foot best.
First，my home is not far away from the school.
Second，on my way to school，the traffic is heavy.The street is full of bikes，motorbikes，buses and cars.【高分句型一】I think it 's safer to go to school on foot.
Third，I also think walk is a kind of sport.I can take exercises by walking.It 's good for my health.
So it 's the best way for me to go to school on foot.【高分句型二】
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
12． 请针对他们的问题，给他们提出一些具体的学习建议。要求：80词左右。
Students Problems
Lin Hai My listening is very poor.My English teacher，Andy，is from Canada.He speaks too fast and I find it hard to understand him.
Huang Bin I'm afraid to speak English in class because my spoken English is bad and I'm afraid my classmates might laugh at me.
Wang Fang There are many mistakes in my compositions.I have trouble in writing.
【考点】说明文；个人情况．
【答案】I think Lin Hai should listen to tapes or English radio programmes to improve his listening.He can watch English TV programmes or English films at home.He can also ask his teacher to speak slowly.Huang Bin should speak in English as much as possible，and shouldn't be shy because no one will laugh at him.Wang Fang should try to learn English grammar well and write down the correct answers next to the mistakes in her notebooks.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think Lin Hai should listen to tapes or English radio programmes to improve his listening.我认为林海应该听磁带或英语广播节目来提高他的听力。I think+宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
Huang Bin should speak in English as much as possible，and shouldn't be shy because no one will laugh at him.黄斌应该尽可能多地说英语，不应该害羞，因为没有人会嘲笑他。because引导的原因状语从句。
【解答】I think Lin Hai should listen to tapes or English radio programmes to improve his listening. 【高分句型一】He can watch English TV programmes or English films at home.He can also ask his teacher to speak slowly.Huang Bin should speak in English as much as possible，and shouldn't be shy because no one will laugh at him. 【高分句型二】Wang Fang should try to learn English grammar well and write down the correct answers next to the mistakes in her notebooks.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
13．我国于2009年将每年的8月8日定为"全民健身日"。今年的"全民健身日"即将来临。请你根据以下提示向学校英语报写一篇不少于80词的文章，阐述体育锻炼对我们的重要性。文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
进行体育锻炼的原因 （1）学习压力大，视力很差；（2）整天感到很累，没有足够的精力去学习
体育锻炼的方式 （1）多参加户外活动；（2）……
对体育锻炼的看法 补充1～2点
Exercise is very important to students.______
【考点】说明文；安全与健康．
【答案】 Exercise is very important to students.Nowadays，students often face immense academic pressure，leading to poor eyesight and exhaustion.Without sufficient energy，it's challenging to focus on learning.
Participating in outdoor activities is one excellent way to engage in physical exercise.Additionally，regular sports activities，such as running or playing team sports，can enhance our cooperation and teamwork skills.Physical exercise is about building muscles or losing weight.It relieves stress，improves sleep quality，and even enhances our academic performance.
Let's embrace the spirit of National Fitness Day and make physical exercise a regular part of our lives.
【分析】【高分句型一】
It relieves stress，improves sleep quality，and even enhances our academic performance.
翻译：它可以缓解压力，改善睡眠质量，甚至提高我们的学习成绩。
分析：句子中应用了and连接的并列句。
【高分句型二】
Let's embrace the spirit of National Fitness Day and make physical exercise a regular part of our lives.
翻译：让我们拥抱全民健身日的精神，让体育锻炼成为我们生活的一部分。
分析：句子中应用了以动词原形开头的祈使句。
【解答】 Exercise is very important to students.Nowadays，students often face immense academic pressure，leading to poor eyesight and exhaustion.Without sufficient energy，it's challenging to focus on learning.（说明原因）
Participating in outdoor activities is one excellent way to engage in physical exercise.Additionally，regular sports activities，such as running or playing team sports，can enhance our cooperation and teamwork skills.（介绍体育锻炼的方式）Physical exercise is about building muscles or losing weight.It relieves stress，improves sleep quality，and even enhances our academic performance.【高分句型一】（表达看法）
Let's embrace the spirit of National Fitness Day and make physical exercise a regular part of our lives.【高分句型二】
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
14．假如你是李杰，是潍坊的一名初中生。你的英国笔友迈克（Mike）给你发来一封电子邮件，向你询问潍坊的最佳旅游季节。请你根据下表的内容用英语给他回复一封电子邮件。
天气 春季 暖和，多风
秋季 凉爽，舒适
夏季 非常炎热，有时下雨
冬季 有点寒冷
你的建议 ①最佳旅游季节是春天或秋天②可以去参观富华游乐园、十笏园等
要求：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：富华游乐园Fuwah Park；十笏园Shihu Garden；潍坊世界风筝博物馆Weifang World Kite Museum
Dear Mike，
You asked me about the best time to travel in Weifang.
____________
Best wishes!
Li Jie
【考点】书信类；天气与气候．
【答案】Dear Mike，
You asked me about the best time to travel in Weifang.
In my home town，it is warm and windy in spring．It is very hot and sometimes it rains in summer．It's a bit cold in winter．In autumn，it is cool and comfortable．In autumn，people often climb mountains．It's a good way to make you relaxed．At last，you can eat lots of fresh fruit．So the best time to visit my home town is in autumn or winter．The weather gets cool and the leaves in the mountains start to get gold，and then red．It's very beautiful．It's a good idea to bring your camera so you can take photos of the autumn trees here．You can also visit FFuwah Park，Shihu Garden and visit Weifang World Kite Museum ，etc.Best wishes!
Li Jie
【分析】高分句型一：
It's a good idea to bring your camera so you can take photos of the autumn trees here．
带上你的照相机是一个好主意，这样你就可以在这里拍到秋天的树木了。It's a good idea to do sth表示做某事是一个好主意。
高分句型二：
So the best time to visit my home town is in autumn．
所以来我家乡最好的旅游时间是在秋天。句子中the best time to do sth表示做某事最好的时间。
【解答】Dear Mike，
You asked me about the best time to travel in Weifang.
In my home town，it is warm and windy in spring．It is very hot and sometimes it rains in summer．It's a bit cold in winter．In autumn，it is cool and comfortable．In autumn，people often climb mountains．It's a good way to make you relaxed．At last，you can eat lots of fresh fruit．（四季的天气特征）So the best time to visit my home town is in autumn or winter．【高分句型一】（最佳旅游季节） The weather gets cool and the leaves in the mountains start to get gold，and then red．It's very beautiful．It's a good idea to bring your camera so you can take photos of the autumn trees here．【高分句型二】You can also visit FFuwah Park，Shihu Garden and visit Weifang World Kite Museum ，etc.（推荐理由） Best wishes!
Li Jie
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
15．写一篇介绍自己家乡的英语短文。内容提示：
（1）位置（山东省东南部，靠海）；
（2）概况（它是一个约有600人的小村庄。大部分 人务农，有的人捕鱼；近十年来变化很大，人们用拖拉机 做农活，许多人家建起了新房，家中配有电视、冰箱、空 调等家用电器）；
（3）主要作物（小麦、玉米、棉花）；
（4）教育状况（村内有小学，多数农家孩子上了大 学）。
要求：
（1）要点全面，但不要逐句翻译；
（2）80词左右。
参考词汇：拖拉机tractor My home town
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【考点】说明文；旅游景点．
【答案】
My Home Town
My home town is a seaside village in the southeast of Shandong.
It is a small village.There are about 600 people.Most of them are farmers.They mainly plant wheat，corn and cotton.Some of them often go fishing in the sea.
Great changes have taken place in the past ten years.Now the farmers here use tractors in their work.A lot of new buildings have appeared.Many families own fridges and some even have air﹣conditioners.In the evening they watch TV as the people in cities do.
There is a primary school in the village.Most of the farmers' children go to college now.
I love my home town.I believe she will become more and more beautiful in the future.
【分析】 【高分句型一】
In the evening they watch TV as the people in cities do.晚上他们和城里人一样看电视。watch TV看电视。
【高分句型二】
I believe she will become more and more beautiful in the future.我相信她将来会变得越来越漂亮。I believe+宾语从句。
【解答】
My Home Town
My home town is a seaside village in the southeast of Shandong.（位置）
It is a small village.There are about 600 people.Most of them are farmers.They mainly plant wheat，corn and cotton.Some of them often go fishing in the sea.（主要作物）
Great changes have taken place in the past ten years.Now the farmers here use tractors in their work.A lot of new buildings have appeared.Many families own fridges and some even have air﹣conditioners.In the evening they watch TV as the people in cities do. 【高分句型一】（概况）
There is a primary school in the village.Most of the farmers' children go to college now.（主要作物）
I love my home town.I believe she will become more and more beautiful in the future. 【高分句型二】
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