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【高考真题汇编】热点压轴题专项训练:写作题-2025年高考英语
1.(2025·四川德阳·三模)你班英语课开展“Embracing Imperfection: The Courage to Grow Through Mistakes”为题的小组讨论活动,请代表小组用英语写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.小组观点;
2.组员事例及小组建议。
注意:
1.写作词数80词左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear classmates,
Our group believes that
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Let’s embrace our mistakes and grow together!
Thank you.
2.(2025·江西·三模)假如你是李华,你校计划引进兴趣社团入校,培养同学们的兴趣爱好。请你给校长Mr.Chris写一封信,要点如下:
1.介绍你认为适合引入的社团;2.给出理由。
注意:
1. 字数80词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Chris,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3.(2025·天津·一模)假设你是晨光中学的李津,你校近期举办了“航天科技主题展”(Aerospace Technology Exhibition),通过图片和视频等多种方式,展示了中国航天事业的飞速发展和伟大成就。请你以“Reaching for the Stars”为题,为学校公众号英文栏目写一篇活动报道。
内容提示:
(1)主题展的主要内容(天宫空间站建设、月球探测成果、航天工作者贡献等);
(2)师生们对展览活动的反响;
(3)你参观展览后的感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:月球探测 lunar exploration;自主创新 independent innovation
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4.(2025·广东深圳·二模)口语课上,外教组织同学们讨论:“假如你可以带一件现代物品穿越到古代,你会带什么?”请你准备一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.简介物品;
2.你的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello, everyone!
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5.(2025·广东茂名·二模)假定你是李华,你校交换生Tom即将参加社区举办的“探访古村落”(Ancient Village Tour)活动,来邮件邀请你参加并咨询你的建议。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
Ancient Village Tour Starting Point: Maple Bridge Time: 9 am -12 am, Saturday, April 26 Distance: About 5 kilometers Don’t miss it!
1.接受邀请;
2.提出建议;
3.表达期待。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.(2025·河北保定·模拟预测)近期,校英文报正在举办题为“Is it Good to Pursue Perfection ”的征文活动,请结合自身或他人经历,写一篇文章投稿,内容包括:
1. 你的看法;
2. 你的理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Is it Good to Pursue Perfection
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7.(2025·湖南娄底·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校英语社团举办主题为“My hometown in My Eyes”的短视频征集活动,你们小组的作品成功入选,你的外教老师Mark邀请你们小组在英语课上分享。内容包括:
1. 创作历程;
2. 创作心得。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hi, everyone!
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Thanks for your listening!
8.(2025·福建莆田·模拟预测)你校英语报正在征稿“我最喜爱的电影”,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你最喜爱的电影;
2.说明理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favorite Film
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9.(2025·河南新乡·二模)假定你是李华,你校本期的交换生Paul打算进行“Citywalk(城市漫步)”。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐路线;
2. 表达期望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Paul,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10.(2025·甘肃平凉·模拟预测)你班将举行一个题为“We Are Protagonists (主角) Working for a Better Tomorrow”的英语告别晚会,请你准备一份发言稿,内容包括:
1. 开场白;
2. 提出倡议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good evening, everyone!
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Thank you!
11.(2025·山东·二模)假如你是李华,本周末国外友好学校师生代表将参观你校的高中生心理发展指导中心。请用英文准备一篇解说词。内容包括:
1. 相关介绍;
2. 作用影响。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Distinguished friends,
Welcome to our mental health support center.
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12.(2025·上海徐汇·二模)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below.
56. 假设你是明启中学的高三学生王磊,你在社区公告栏看到一则消息,社区正在征集关于“如何丰富老年人退休生活”的意见。请你给社区负责人写一封信,内容包括:
(1) 对社区如何丰富老年人退休生活提出建议;
(2) 提出这些建议的理由。
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13.(2025·重庆·三模)假定你是李华,你校英文报正在开展一个主题为“A Friend to Be Grateful For”的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 遇到的困难;
2. 朋友的帮助。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Friend to Be Grateful For
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14.(2025·北京·模拟预测)在中国传统文化中,“勤俭持家”、“尊老爱幼”、“诚实守信”等家风(family traditions)对于构建和谐家庭,营造文明社会起到了至关重要的作用。假设你经常浏览的某个英语论坛正在进行主题为“What kind of family tradition do we need most ”的讨论。请你用英语写一篇短文参与讨论,主要内容如下:
1. 家风的重要性;2. 选择你认为最重要的一条家风并说明理由(至少两个)。
注意:1.词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:勤俭持家:diligence and thrift 孝敬父母:filial piety towards parents
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15.(2025·浙江·三模)你校上周举办“中国古代诗词进校园”中英文化弥合活动。请你记录这次活动并投稿到校英文报上,具体要求如下:
1. 结合具体中国古代诗词记录活动内容;
2. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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《【高考真题汇编】热点压轴题专项训练:写作题-2025年高考英语》参考答案
1.Dear classmates,
Our group believes that mistakes help us become stronger and smarter if we face them bravely.
One member shared her story. Last month, she made many grammar mistakes in an English essay. But she picked up her courage to ask her teacher for help and practiced every day. Finally, she made great progress in the next test. So mistakes can lead to growth.
To handle mistakes well, we suggest a three-step way. First, stay calm when making a mistake. Second, find the cause and fix it. Third, share your struggles with friends and you’ll realize everyone learns through errors. To conclude, we should not always aim for perfection, but keep moving forward.
Let’s embrace our mistakes and grow together!
Thank you.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。英语课要开展“Embracing Imperfection: The Courage to Grow Through Mistakes”为题的小组讨论活动,要求考生代表小组用英语写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
勇敢地:bravely→courageously
向某人求助:ask sb. for help→turn to sb. for help
处理:handle→tackle
意识到:realize→be aware of
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last month, she made many grammar mistakes in an English essay.
拓展句: Last month, she made many grammar mistakes in an English essay, which made her upset.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 To handle mistakes well, we suggest a three-step way. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】 Third, share your struggles with friends and you’ll realize everyone learns through errors.(运用了固定句型“祈使句+and+陈述句”)
2.Dear Mr. Chris,
I’m Li Hua, a senior student passionate about campus activities. Learning that our school plans to introduce new clubs, I’d like to recommend two options: a Calligraphy Club and a Robotics Club.
The Calligraphy Club would allow students to immerse in traditional Chinese culture, enhancing aesthetic appreciation and cultivating patience. Meanwhile, the Robotics Club aligns with technological trends, enabling participants to acquire practical coding skills and stimulate innovation. Both initiatives combine educational value with fun, catering to diverse interests while fostering holistic development.
Thank you for considering my suggestions. I believe these clubs will enrich our campus life significantly.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给校长Mr.Chris写一封信,介绍你认为适合引入的社团并给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热情的:passionate→enthusiastic
允许:allow→permit
提高:enhance→boost
与此同时:meanwhile→in the meantime
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The Calligraphy Club would allow students to immerse in traditional Chinese culture, enhancing aesthetic appreciation and cultivating patience.
拓展句:The Calligraphy Club would allow students to immerse in traditional Chinese culture, which would enhance aesthetic appreciation and cultivate patience.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that our school plans to introduce new clubs, I’d like to recommend two options: a Calligraphy Club and a Robotics Club. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe these clubs will enrich our campus life significantly. (运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句作believe的宾语)
3.One possible version:
Reaching for the Stars Our school recently held an Aerospace Technology Exhibition, showcasing China’s remarkable achievements in space exploration. The exhibition featured stunning images and videos of the Tiangong Space Station, highlighting its construction and scientific missions. Visitors also learned about lunar exploration, including the Chang’e missions, and the dedication of Chinese aerospace scientists through independent innovation.
Both teachers and students were deeply impressed. Many said they felt proud of China’s rapid progress in space technology. Some students even expressed interest in pursuing careers in aerospace after seeing the inspiring stories of scientists and astronauts.
Personally, I was amazed by how far China has come in space exploration. The exhibition not only broadened my knowledge but also strengthened my belief that with hard work and creativity, we can achieve even greater milestones in the future.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生以“Reaching for the Stars”为题,为学校公众号英文栏目写一篇活动报道,报道学校近期举办的“航天科技主题展”(Aerospace Technology Exhibition)的情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold →host
成就:achievement →accomplishment
强调:highlight →emphasize
以……为骄傲:feel proud of →take pride in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The exhibition featured stunning images and videos of the Tiangong Space Station, highlighting its construction and scientific missions.
拓展句:The exhibition featured stunning images and videos of the Tiangong Space Station, which highlighted its construction and scientific missions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Personally, I was amazed by how far China has come in space exploration. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The exhibition not only broadened my knowledge but also strengthened my belief that with hard work and creativity, we can achieve even greater milestones in the future.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
4.Possible versions:
参考范文一:
Hello, everyone! If I could travel back to ancient times and bring one modern item, I’d bring a solar-powered flashlight. It is a lighting device that uses solar energy to charge its batteries. When exposed to sunlight, the solar panel will convert the light energy into electrical energy, which is then stored in the flashlight’s batteries.
In ancient times, lighting was often limited to torches, candles, or oil lamps, which were inconvenient and carried the risk of fire. A solar-powered flashlight would provide a clean and long-lasting source of light, reducing the reliance on flammable materials. Besides, it would enable ancient people to engage in a wider variety of activities, such as traveling at night or working in dark places.
Just imagine how amazed people would be to see such a useful device!
参考范文二:
Hello, everyone! If allowed to bring one modern item to ancient times, I would choose the tiny infection-fighting medicine — small in size yet powerful in impact.
In times when minor wounds often led to deaths due to poor medical care, this portable medicine could save lives by preventing deadly infections caused by battle injuries or common illnesses. Additionally, it would inspire deeper medical exploration. Once the basic production methods are shared, people might advance their understanding of disease prevention, potentially reshaping health practices throughout history.
In short, antibiotics represents hope and progress. They not only address immediate survival needs but also plant early seeds for scientific curiosity that could blossom into groundbreaking discoveries. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“假如你可以带一件现代物品穿越到古代,你会带什么?”为话题,写一篇发言稿。
【详解】(范文1)
1.词汇积累
减少:reduce→cut down
装备:device→equipment
惊讶的:amazed→surprised
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:A solar-powered flashlight would provide a clean and long-lasting source of light, reducing the reliance on flammable materials.
拓展句:A solar-powered flashlight would provide a clean and long-lasting source of light, which can reducing the reliance on flammable materials.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If I could travel back to ancient times and bring one modern item, I’d bring a solar-powered flashlight.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】When exposed to sunlight, the solar panel will convert the light energy into electrical energy, which is then stored in the flashlight’s batteries.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
5.Dear Tom,
Thank you for inviting me to the Ancient Village Tour! I’d love to join you for this meaningful and fascinating event. It’s a great opportunity to learn more about local culture and history while enjoying the scenic countryside.
To make the tour more enjoyable, I suggest bringing a camera to capture the beautiful views and interesting moments along the way. Since the journey is about 5 kilometers, wearing comfortable walking shoes and bringing water would be helpful. It would be wise to prepare a small notebook to jot down any interesting stories or facts we learn during the visit.
Look forward to meeting you at Maple Bridge at 9 am on Saturday!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份回复邮件,接受邀请、提出建议并表达对参加“探访古村落”活动的期待。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会:opportunity → chance
令人愉快的:enjoyable → pleasant
建议:suggest → recommend
明智的:wise → smart
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To make the tour more enjoyable, I suggest bringing a camera to capture the beautiful views and interesting moments along the way.
拓展句:To make the tour more enjoyable, I suggest that we bring a camera to capture the beautiful views and interesting moments along the way.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It would be wise to prepare a small notebook to jot down any interesting stories or facts we learn during the visit. (运用了省略关系代词that/which的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Since the journey is about 5 kilometers, wearing comfortable walking shoes and bringing water would be helpful. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
6.
Is it Good to Pursue Perfection
I believe it’s good to pursue perfection to some extent.
Once, I aimed for perfection when preparing for an English speech contest. I polished my script repeatedly, practiced pronunciation, and adjusted my body language. As a result, I won first prize.
Perfectionism drives us to surpass ourselves, opening doors to extraordinary results. Also, the process of striving for perfection helps cultivate crucial qualities like perseverance. However, we mustn’t overdo it. Being excessively focused on perfection may lead to burnout.
In conclusion, we should embrace the pursuit of perfection in a balanced way, leveraging it to achieve greater success.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生结合自身或他人经历,写一篇文章,就“Is it Good to Pursue Perfection ”这一话题提出自己的看法,并说明理由,向校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:contest → competition
结果:as a result → as a consequence
培养:cultivate → develop
导致:lead to → result in
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:Perfectionism drives us to surpass ourselves, opening doors to extraordinary results.
拓展句:It is perfectionism that drives us to surpass ourselves, opening doors to extraordinary results.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I believe it’s good to pursue perfection to some extent.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Once, I aimed for perfection when preparing for an English speech contest.(运用了when引导状语从句的省略)
7.Hi, everyone!
I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown. To start with, we had a heated discussion and made a plan carefully. After that, we made every effort to collect information in different ways. For example, we talked to our elders, who told us stories about traditional food and famous people. Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown.
From this experience, we have gained a lot. Above all, we now understand our local culture better. In addition, our English has improved greatly. Last but not least, we’ve realized how important good teamwork is!
Thanks for your listening!
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你校英语社团举办主题为“My hometown in My Eyes”的短视频征集活动,你们小组的作品成功入选,要求考生在英语课上分享创作历程和创作心得。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的:happy→glad
首先:to start with→to begin with
例如:for example→for instance
重要的:important→significant
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To start with, we had a heated discussion and made a plan carefully.
拓展句:To start with, we had a heated discussion during which we carefully made a plan.
【点睛】[高分句型1]For example, we talked to our elders, who told us stories about traditional food and famous people.(who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
8.One possible version:
My Favorite Film
Among countless cinematic masterpieces, Ne Zha 2 directed by Jiao Zi (Yang Yu) stands as my favorite film. Here are the reasons why I like it.
Of the leading characters, Ne Zha mirrors contemporary struggles. He fights prejudice while questioning fate. His iconic line —“I am not what the heavens control! ” — is very popular among the young generations. Ne Zha 2 delivers a profound message about self-identity and societal change. It is not only entertainment but also a cultural movement. It teaches me that embracing one’s uniqueness can rewrite one’s destiny and future.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿,介绍自己最喜欢的电影并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢:like→be fond of
数不清的:countless→innumerable
接受:embrace→jump at
独特性:uniqueness→peculiarity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Among countless cinematic masterpieces, Ne Zha 2 directed by Jiao Zi (Yang Yu) stands as my favorite film.
拓展句:Among countless cinematic masterpieces, Ne Zha 2 which is directed by Jiao Zi (Yang Yu) stands as my favorite film.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Among countless cinematic masterpieces, Ne Zha 2 directed by Jiao Zi (Yang Yu) stands as my favorite film.(运用了过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2]
It teaches me that embracing one’s uniqueness can rewrite one’s destiny and future.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
9.Dear Paul,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’ll take a city walk in China! Chongqing is a fantastic choice, and I can’t wait to travel to the city with you.
I highly recommend starting at Jiefangbei, the bustling heart of downtown. Then we can head to Hongyadong, where you can see the unique architecture that resembles something out of a fantasy movie. Next, we can wander through Ciqikou, an ancient town filled with traditional teahouses and delicious local snacks. Finally, let’s take a night cruise on the Yangtze River to enjoy the stunning city lights.
I hope this trip will give you a taste of Chongqing’s vibrant culture. I believe you’ll have an incredible time exploring every corner of this amazing city. Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Paul写一封邮件,推荐城市漫步路线,并表达期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:thrilled → excited
选择:choice → selection
充满:filled with → full of
最终:finally → eventually
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Next, we can wander through Ciqikou, an ancient town filled with traditional teahouses and delicious local snacks.
拓展句:Next, we can wander through Ciqikou, an ancient town which is filled with traditional teahouses and delicious local snacks.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Then we can head to Hongyadong, where you can see the unique architecture that resembles something out of a fantasy movie.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句,that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I hope this trip will give you a taste of Chongqing’s vibrant culture. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
10.Good evening, everyone!
Standing here tonight, I am filled with a mix of emotions-both sadness and excitement. I feel sad because I must bid farewell to my dear teachers and classmates, uncertain of when we will meet again. Yet, I am also excited because, in the coming months, some of us will go to universities, while others may pursue their passions in different ways.
Whatever path we choose, we are protagonists. So let us move forward with courage and determination, and work together for a better tomorrow.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。班级将举行一个题为“We Are Protagonists (主角) Working for a Better Tomorrow”的英语告别晚会,要求考生准备一份发言稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
悲伤:sadness→sorrow
激动:excitement→thrill
选择:choose→select
告别:bid farewell to→say goodbye to
2. 句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:I feel sad because I must bid farewell to my dear teachers and classmates, uncertain of when we will meet again.
拓展句:I feel sad because I have to bid farewell to my dear teachers and classmates, and I am uncertain about the time when we will meet again.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Yet, I am also excited because, in the coming months, some of us will go to universities, while others may pursue their passions in different ways.(because引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]Whatever path we choose, we are protagonists.(whatever引导的让步状语从句)
11.Distinguished friends,
Welcome to our mental health support center. It’s a great honor to introduce this special part of our campus to you today. Our center was established to support students’ mental well-being and personal growth. It includes counseling rooms, relaxation areas, and activity spaces designed to create a safe and comfortable environment. Professional psychologists and teachers are available here to provide guidance, whether students face academic stress, emotional challenges, or social difficulties.
The center plays a vital role in our school life. It helps students build resilience, improve self-awareness, and develop healthy coping skills. Many students have shared how the center has positively impacted their confidence and happiness
Thank you for coming, and enjoy the tour!
【导语】这是一篇应用文。本周末国外友好学校师生代表将参观你校的高中生心理发展指导中心。请用英文准备一篇解说词。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
建立:established→set up
提供:provide→offer
重要的:vital→crucial
帮助:help→assist
2.句式拓展:
合并简单句
原句:The center plays a vital role in our school life. It helps students build resilience, improve self-awareness, and develop healthy coping skills..
拓展句:The center plays a vital role in our school life, which helps students build resilience, improve self-awareness, and develop healthy coping skills.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Professional psychologists and teachers are available here to provide guidance, whether students face academic stress, emotional challenges, or social difficulties.(运用了whether....or引导的让步状语从句 )
【高分句型 2】Many students have shared how the center has positively impacted their confidence and happiness(运用了how引导的宾语从句 )
12.Dear Community Manager,
My name is Wang Lei, a senior student from Mingqi High School. After reading the notice about improving retirees’ lives, I’d like to share some suggestions.
Firstly, organizing hobby classes (e.g., painting, gardening) could help seniors learn new skills, which keeps their minds active and fosters social connections. Secondly, regular health workshops or exercise sessions like Tai Chi would enhance physical well-being and prevent diseases. Additionally, creating volunteer opportunities, such as mentoring children, allows retirees to share their experience, boosting their sense of purpose.
These activities address both mental and physical needs while combating loneliness. Seniors deserve fulfilling lives, and community support plays a vital role.
Thank you for considering my ideas.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Lei
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你在社区公告栏看到一则消息,社区正在征集关于“如何丰富老年人退休生活”的意见,要求考生给社区负责人写一封信提出建议并给出理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议:suggestion→advice
首先:firstly→to begin with
保持:keep→stay
提高:enhance→promote
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Secondly, regular health workshops or exercise sessions like Tai Chi would enhance physical well-being and prevent diseases.
拓展句:Secondly, if we were to organize regular health workshops or exercise sessions like Tai Chi, it would enhance seniors' physical well-being and help prevent diseases.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Firstly, organizing hobby classes (e.g., painting, gardening) could help seniors learn new skills, which keeps their minds active and fosters social connections.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Additionally, creating volunteer opportunities, such as mentoring children, allows retirees to share their experience, boosting their sense of purpose.(动名词作主语)
13.范文:
A Friend to Be Grateful For
Life is a journey filled with obstacles, and I faced a significant one when tackling a challenging science project last year. It seemed insurmountable, leaving me feeling lost and anxious.
That’s when Naomi, my classmate, stepped in. She guided me through the maze of the project, breaking it down into smaller, more manageable tasks. Together, we delved into the library’s resources, our discussions sparking insights that illuminated the path ahead. Eventually, she helped me develop resilience and ultimately led to the successful completion of the project.
Naomi’s steadfast help and unwavering support was instrumental in my triumph in the project. In the grand journey of life, she is the friend I’m deeply grateful for, a true blessing I’ll always hold dear.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生以“A Friend to Be Grateful For”为题写一篇短文,描述遇到的困难以及朋友的帮助,向校英文报投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
障碍;阻碍:obstacle → barrier
重大的;重要的:significant → considerable
处理;应对:tackle → deal with
引发;激起:spark → trigger
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It seemed insurmountable, leaving me feeling lost and anxious.
拓展句:It seemed insurmountable, which left me feeling lost and anxious.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Life is a journey filled with obstacles, and I faced a significant one when tackling a challenging science project last year. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略)
【高分句型2】That’s when Naomi, my classmate, stepped in. (运用了when引导的表语从句)
14.
In traditional Chinese culture, family traditions play a vital role in building harmonious families and a civilized society. Among them, I think filial piety towards parents is the most essential.
Firstly, respecting and taking good care of parents is not only a moral obligation but also a way to express our gratitude for their love and sacrifice. Secondly, setting an example of filial piety helps children understand the importance of family values, which will contribute to creating a loving and respectful family atmosphere. When everyone in the family practices filial piety, it not only strengthens family bonds but also promotes social harmony, because such positive energy will spread to the whole society.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以主题为“What kind of family tradition do we need most ”文章进行投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
在……起作用:play a role in→play part in
重要的:vital→crucial
照顾:take care of→look after
表达:express→convey
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Firstly, respecting and taking good care of parents is not only a moral obligation but also a way to express our gratitude for their love and sacrifice.
拓展句:Firstly, not only is respecting and taking good care of parents a moral obligation, but it is also a way to express our gratitude for their love and sacrifice.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, setting an example of filial piety helps children understand the importance of family values, which will contribute to creating a loving and respectful family atmosphere.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】When everyone in the family practices filial piety, it not only strengthens family bonds but also promotes social harmony, because such positive energy will spread to the whole society.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句,because引导的原因状语从句)
15.范文
When Verses Build Bridges: A Chronicle of Cultural Harmony
Last week’s “Ancient Poetry Immersion” event unveiled the timeless charm of Chinese classics while weaving cultural threads between East and West. Designed to foster cross-cultural empathy, the activity transformed our campus into an aesthetic dialogue platform.
Students staged bilingual poetry recitals, breathing life into Li Bai’s “Toasting the moon, my shadow makes us three” with immersive projections. Calligraphy workshops decoded Wang Wei’s landscape imagery through brushstrokes and VR technology, allowing international peers to grasp “empty mountains echoing with rain” beyond linguistic barriers. The highlight was collaborative translation contests, where teams reinterpreted Su Shi’s philosophical resilience in “How can we fear life’s winds and rains ” through modern slam poetry.
As Du Fu envisioned “Words that startle heaven and earth,” this poetic rendezvous proved cultural boundaries dissolve when hearts resonate with universal beauty. The echoes of quatrains shall continue nurturing our shared humanity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生记录“中国古代诗词进校园”中英文化弥合活动并投稿到校英文报上。
【详解】1.词汇积累
展示:unveil→unfold
培养:foster→cultivate
掌握:grasp→master
比赛:contest→competition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Calligraphy workshops decoded Wang Wei’s landscape imagery through brushstrokes and VR technology, allowing international peers to grasp “empty mountains echoing with rain” beyond linguistic barriers.
拓展句:Calligraphy workshops decoded Wang Wei’s landscape imagery through brushstrokes and VR technology, which allowed international peers to grasp “empty mountains echoing with rain” beyond linguistic barriers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last week’s “Ancient Poetry Immersion” event unveiled the timeless charm of Chinese classics while weaving cultural threads between East and West.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句省略句)
【高分句型2】The highlight was collaborative translation contests, where teams reinterpreted Su Shi’s philosophical resilience in “How can we fear life’s winds and rains ” through modern slam poetry.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
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