【高考押题卷】2025年高考英语二轮复习考前押题卷:读后续写(含解析)

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2025年高考英语二轮复习考前押题卷:读后续写
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 2月份模拟) Warren was a young man and he was doing odd jobs outside.Warren's mother called to tell him that Nana(外婆) Kitty had Alzheimer's(阿尔茨海默症).The Chicago wind blew hard into the phone,releasing tears from his eyes.So Warren quit his job and returned to his hometown to look after Kitty.
Nana Kitty's house hadn't weathered the winters too well.The middle of the roof was slumped(塌) in.The stair was missing a step.Warren felt it had been years since he'd been home,but his mom corrected him,saying it had only been sixteen months.She asked if he was going back to college,but Warren said he focused on taking care of Nana Kitty.
Upon arrival,they found Nana Kitty standing in the hallway,holding a baseball bat,looking doubtful.Warren's mom asked her to put the bat down and open the door.NanaKitty's appearance was untidy—messy white hair,nightgown,untied hiking boots.Warren remembered hiding under bushes at her house during hot summer days,listening to the sounds of insects,and his mother and grandmother talking.
Inside,the familiar smells of dust,coffee and roast chicken filled the air,bringing back memories.Nana Kitty examined Warren coldly and asked if he was homeless.Technically,he was,as he began his role as her home health assistant.
Warren helped her to the bathroom and found an old straight razor(剃须刀).He managed to shave his beard,cutting himself only once.He showed her his clean face,hoping she'd recognize him.Instead,she gently wiped his wound with toilet paper.The closeness of the gesture brought tears to his eyes.He was just twenty﹣one,a fatherless boy who had had little success in the world so far.He rested his head on her lap.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Oh little Warren,honey,don't cry,"she said softly,as if waking from a dream.______
From that moment on,Warren's days fell into a routine of looking after NanaKitty.______
2.(2025 江西一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Steger grew up in Bellingham,Washington,about an hour's drive from where he was now,trapped in the Mount Baker Ski Area.The remote place is marked by ropes and signs to warn people that they're leaving the safe zone.Steger and his three fellows had all the required equipment,a two﹣way radio and a backpack with a shovel when they started their second skiing in the morning.On that Friday run,Steger's friends were in front of him when Steger,moving through the trees,ran into trouble.
The front of his board hit a small branch hidden under new snow.Steger fell into a tree well (树坑).Before he could call for help,he was upside down in deeper snow than he'd ever been in.All he could see was blackness.One of Steger's arms was pinned next to his body.Luckily,his other arm had ended up next to his face,so he managed to push the snow away from his mouth,creating a small air pocket.To prevent snow from falling in and covering his mouth,he pulled the tip of his jacket over his face.And now all he could do was stay calm and wait to be rescued.
He figured two or so minutes had passed.Then the two﹣way radio on his shoulder crackled with messages from his friends "Where are you?Let's know if you're in front of us!" He replied and mentioned about his situation.He knew that his friends were downhill from where he was stuck.His friends were surprised and convinced him that they were on their long difficult way back up the hill to rescue him.Meanwhile,it was up to Steger to get himself out,or he'd die.
Then he felt his snowboard,still attached to his feet,move.Francis Zuber,28﹣year﹣old,had gone to Mount Baker Ski Area that Friday to ski.As he sped down the slope,Zuber caught a glimpse of something red.That's when he saw that the upside﹣down snowboard in a tree well was moving.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
"Someone might be trapped under the snow in the tree well," Zuber thought.________
Once they were out,Steger wrapped Zuber in a bear hug.________
3.(2025 昆明一模) In the beautiful town Riverview surrounded by rolling hills,lived two brothers,Jack and Tom.
They were as different as night and day—Jack,the older by two years,was a keen reader with a preference for quiet moments spent in academic books,his nose often buried in the pages of historical texts or scientific pared with him,Tom was totally different,full of energy and enthusiasm,always longing for the outdoors.He found joy that came from playing soccer and basketball.The differences between them often led to arguments,creating a gap that seemed impossible to bridge.
One summer,their parents,hoping to mend the growing divide between them,decided to send them on a camping trip in the nearby Blue Ridge Mountains.They thought that the fresh mountain air,coupled with outdoor activities,would bring them closer.
Unwillingly,the two brothers packed their bags,each secretly hoping that the other would give up at the last minute.But neither did,and soon enough,they found themselves setting up camp under a canopy(顶篷) of twinkling stars,the cool night breeze whispering through the trees.
The first few days were tense.They quarreled over insignificant matters—who should carry the water bottle,who got to choose the music during meals,and whose turn it was to gather firewood.Their unpleasant quarrel echoed(回响) through the quiet forest,breaking the peace that enveloped them.Each disagreement seemed to widen the crack between them until one evening when things took a dramatic turn.
A sudden storm rolled in.The wind howled through the trees,and rain began to pour.In the disorder of securing the tent and gathering supplies to prevent them from getting wet,Tom slipped on a muddy path and hurt his ankle badly.Struggling with extreme pain,he knew that he had to turn to Campsite medical tent.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡上相应位置作答。
Noticing his brother in such a situation,Jack's heart softened immediately.______
As Tom healed,the brothers worked together to complete the camping trip.______
4.(2025 安阳一模) I flew through the back door,excitedly announcing to my mom, "Mom,I've been nominated (提名) for the National Junior Honor Society!" My mother smiled with pride and replied, "I'm so proud of you,honey."
Together in the family room,I began filling out the application for the Honor Society.It required proof of possessing all the necessary candidate characteristics.The following day,I submitted the paperwork to my advisor and didn't give it much further thought.
Months passed,and one afternoon,as soon as I stepped off the bus,I rushed home with a letter from the school regarding the Honor Society. "Mom," I said,handing her the letter with tears welling up in my eyes, "I didn't make it.They didn't choose me." My mother hugged me and said, "Oh,honey,I'm sorry.There must have been some kind of mistake."
That night at dinner,I said sadly, "It's not fair." My mother agreed and then shared a story about her high school friend who was intelligent and kind﹣hearted but never made the National Honor Society.Despite his hurt and anger,he became a world﹣renowned lung cancer specialist,saving lives every day.
I grasped my mom's message:not being part of the Honor Society wouldn't define my future,but it was certainly painful in the moment.However,seeing most of my friends get selected made those weeks especially tough for me.I opened up to my parents about how difficult it was and declared, "This shouldn't happen to anyone else." We brainstormed ways to improve the selection process and arranged a meeting with the school principal (校长) to present our ideas.
注意:
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(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A few days later,I received a call from the principal.
Finally,my graduation arrived and the principal announced my name as an Honor Society member.
5.(2025 市中区校级模拟) Lucas had always prided himself on being the go﹣to guy for fixing things.Whether it was a leaky faucet or a broken toy,his friends knew he could tackle any problem that came his way.But today was different﹣he faced a challenge that made his palms sweat.
It was Saturday morning,and Lucas had promised his younger sister,Mia,that they would spend the day working on her science project﹣a model of the solar system.The night before,they had gone to the local craft store,excitedly picking out paints,foam(泡沫) balls,and a variety of materials.Mia could hardly contain her eagerness to present the project at school on Monday,and Lucas was determined to help her make it impressive.
However,disasters struck as they began putting together the model.Lucas had intended to use a thin piece of wood for the base,but he accidentally dropped it,and the wood ended up in two pieces.At the sight of the broken base,Lucas felt as if his heart missed a beat.Mia's face fell,and her enthusiasm faded like a distant star.
"Lucas!What are we going to do?"she exclaimed,her eyes wide with disappointment.
"Okay,let's not panic,"he replied,striving to keep his voice steady."We can fix this.Let's just think it through."
Lucas surveyed the mess on the floor.The broken pieces lay scattered next to the colorful foam balls they had painted with care.They needed a stable base for the model,but there was no extra wood on hand.Unfortunately,the craft store was closed for the weekend,and there was no way he could ask their parents for help﹣Mom and Dad were still at work.
"Mia,"Lucas suddenly said,a spark of inspiration flashing into his mind,"how about we use that old coffee table in the garage?"
注意:
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(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mia was confused by her brother's suggestion.
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"Now we can start building the model!"Mia cheered.
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6.(2025 深圳二模) In the heart of the Arctic,where the icy winds wailed like damned souls,Leucopolis,the seasoned snow explorer,embarked on his latest expedition.Beside him,Pollux,his steadfast snow dog,trotted with a loyalty as unyielding as the frozen earth beneath their feet.
The day started with a deceptive tranquility (宁静) ,the sun a mere sliver of silver against the ashen sky.But soon,the Arctic unleashed its fury—a tempest of unimaginable ferocity.The wind,a relentless and monstrous force,howled with the anguish of a thousand lost souls,while snowflakes,sharp as obsidian (黑曜石) shards,sliced through the air,obliterating all traces of the world they once knew.Leucopolis,clad in furs that seemed woefully inadequate against the onslaught,trudged through the storm,his heart a drum of mounting dread.Pollux,his beacon of companionship and hope,had been swallowed by the storm's insatiable maw,leaving behind a chasm of despair in his master's heart.Desperation clawed at Leucopolis as he called out into the maelstrom,his voice a fragile thread against the cacophony of the elements.He retraced his steps,his mind a whirlpool of fear and hope,each moment stretching into an eternity of uncertainty.Had Pollux been swept away by the wind's icy grip,or had he wandered,disoriented and alone,into the white abyss?
Just as the weight of despair threatened to crush him,a faint bark,a mere whisper amidst the storm's roar,reached his ears.Leucopolis's heart leapt,a flicker of hope igniting within him.It was Pollux!But the relief was short﹣lived.The dog was trapped,his leg caught beneath a fallen ice shelf,the cold seeping into his bones with relentless cruelty.With a surge of determination,Leucopolis fought through the storm,his hands numb and raw,to free his companion.The wind howled its defiance,the snow blinding and suffocating (窒息) ,as he worked tirelessly,his breath a ragged cloud in the frigid air.Finally,with a triumphant cry,he freed Pollux,the dog limping but alive.Yet,the ordeal was far from over.The storm showed no sign of abating,and their supplies dwindled with each passing hour.Leucopolis and Pollux pressed on,their spirits battered but unbroken,a testament to the enduring power of loyalty and love.
As the blizzard raged on,they faced the harshest of trials,their journey a testament to the indomitable will of the human spirit and the unyielding bond between man and beast.The Arctic had tested them to their limits,but their friendship,forged in the crucible of adversity,shone like a beacon in the endless white,a light of hope amidst the storm's unyielding fury.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
The storm had finally relented,surrendering to a world of crystalline stillness._______
Ahead lay the journey's next chapter,a path woven through the heart of the wilderness._______
7.(2025 广东一模) In the year when her parents determined to go their separate ways,Alice initiated the allocation of a considerable span of her time to the Polka Café,a venue that surfaced as the exclusive location where she could truly immerse herself in rumination,and her mother seemed to manifest no dissent regarding her spending the bulk of the summer there.
Antecedent to the commencement of the summer season,two momentous occurrences had materialized.The primary occurrence,without doubt,was the egress of her father from their domestic abode,and the secondary one was the disintegration of her amicable bond with Sarah.Alice was incapable of precisely identifying how their relationship had degenerated to such a deplorable state.They had been involved in a vehement quarrel at school shortly subsequent to her parents' public announcement of their irrevocable decision to part.
On every occasion when her friends questioned the non ﹣ appearance of her father,who no longer served as her escort to school each morning,Alice would unfailingly proffer the untruth,"My father is preoccupied with business engagements elsewhere."She discontinued extending invitations to them for recreational gatherings at her residence and fabricated a plethora of pretexts to evade social interaction with any other individuals."I am occupied with alternative arrangements,"she would communicate to Sarah.
On a particular day,as they were proceeding homeward from school,Sarah accosted Alice in a somewhat irritated intonation,"Alice,what is the underlying issue?Why are you refraining from engaging in dialogue with me?"Alice simulated auditory impairment and persisted in her forward movement,entertaining no inclination to deliberate on the matter with Sarah at that juncture,or with anyone else for that matter.
"I am speaking with utter earnestness,Alice.My mother has divulged the pertinent details to me,"Sarah further stated."I am cognizant of the situation unfolding with your parents."This disclosure caused Alice to come to an abrupt standstill.In reality,their habitation was in a compact community where confidential matters were notoriously short ﹣ lived,yet Alice had cherished a feeble aspiration that the news would remain under wraps for a sufficient duration to enable her to ascertain the appropriate moment to broach the subject herself.She was overcome with feelings of mortification and emotional injury,yearning to reveal the information to Sarah in accordance with her own volition.
Consumed by a surge of fury,Alice launched a verbal assault."How can you have the audacity to assert that you possess any knowledge!"she vehemently exclaimed."You are an exceedingly despicable friend.I harbor no desire to engage in any form of verbal exchange with you ever again!"
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Now it was August,and Alice sat in the Polka Café,lost in thought.
"I'm sorry too for having shouted at you," said Alice.
8.(2025 天河区模拟) School was out!I grabbed my backpack and headed to the library for my favorite weekly after﹣school activity:Writing Club.
"Hello,everyone,"said Miss Lisa,our writing club leader."Today we'll share our stories with a critique partner,who will give us helpful feedback (反馈) to improve them.Then submit your story by next week,solo or co﹣authored."
My partner was Penny.I was nervous.I had no problem coming up with great story ideas but struggled with spelling.And grammar.And punctuation.Penny,who always got perfect scores in those areas,didn't look at me as she pushed her story towards me.I read it without stopping."Wow,great story,"I told her, "I don't have any suggestions."She corrected some mistakes in my story hurriedly,and handed it back without looking at me.
"OK,time is up for today,"said Miss Lisa.Penny looked relieved.She jumped up and grabbed her backpack.Bang!Everything fell out.She quickly stuffed it back in and hurried away.
I noticed a book under the table.The description on the back matched Penny's story exactly.I couldn't believe she had copied this idea!
Outside the school,spotting Penny on a bench,I walked over."You dropped this,"I said,holding out the book and raising my eyebrows.Penny's shoulders were slumped.She sniffed and wiped her nose on her sleeve.She was crying, "Didn't know what to write!"
All of a sudden,I wasn't angry anymore.I remembered my job as her partner was to give helpful feedback,not to make her feel bad.But what should I say?
I decided to ask Mom for advice.In the kitchen,Dad chopped vegetables perfectly while Mom stirred a sauce.She offered him a taste."It's good,"Dad said, "but I think...""It needs something extra.I have an idea."Mom interjected.He handed her a measuring spoon."To get the right amount."Mom added a teaspoon of a new spice.
I realized Mom and Dad had different skills,making them a great team.With Dad's attention to detail and Mom's sense of adventure,their dinners turned out delicious.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Watching Mom and Dad cook gave me an idea to suggest to Penny._______
"What about the true story of you and me?"Penny asked me._______
9.(2025 梅州模拟) When I was an eleven﹣year﹣old boy finishing my last year of elementary school,my mom got a new job and we would need to move.It meant moving away from my friends and going to a completely different middle school than the one I thought I'd be going to.
In August,my parents and I got to take a tour of the school.That was when we learned that there weren't any buses that passed our new neighbourhood.It was actually close to the school,so that meant I would be walking to and from school every day.At the time,both of my parents worked five days a week,so they found a babysitter to be there when my two﹣year﹣old brother and I got home and watch us until my parents returned home.
The school year started,and in early September,we got a massive heatwave.The middle school was an old building and most of it was not air﹣conditioned.At the end of those days,I was tired and not in any mood to walk an additional twenty minutes in the heat,so I used snack money to call the babysitter.The babysitter,thinking he should not let me suffer in the heat,came to pick me up.
I did try to call home two more times over the next two weeks.The second time,I got the sitter again.The third time,Dad answered.He was not happy with me."It's not that hot!You shouldn't call the sitter away from the house.You have to start growing up.Walk home,and we will talk more when you get here.""Okay,"I told demanding Dad."I wouldn't call the sitter or you again to be picked up."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Last Friday,a storm was getting close when school was out._______
"How did you get home?"Mom asked,shocked._______
10.(2025 贵阳模拟) In a quiet town located between rolling hills and vast forests lived a girl named Aria.She had grown up surrounded by nature's wonders—the sparkling (波光粼粼的) river that flowed through the town,the towering trees that whispered secrets in the wind,and the fields that burst into colors every spring.Aria's favorite spot was a towering oak tree at the edge of the forest,which her grandmother used to say had been standing there for over a hundred years.
For as long as she could remember,Aria had found peace beneath its branches.It was her place where the world felt right,and everything seemed eternal.But over the years,things started to change.The village with towering trees had been replaced by a place with modern buildings and shopping centers,where plastic bags and waste can be seen everywhere.The paths hidden in the town had been turned into broad roads.Winters grew warmer,the river ran lower,and the once﹣lively fields seemed to lose their energy.Every season felt different,more unpredictable than the last.
One day,as Aria sat beneath the oak tree,she noticed something that made her upset.The tree,which had once been full of life,had begun to lose its leaves far earlier than usual.It wasn't autumn,yet the leaves were dry and brittle(脆弱的),falling one by one with wind.She pressed her hand against the trunk.It seemed weaker somehow,as if the tree was trying to hold on."Why are you losing your leaves?"Aria whispered to the oak.
Of course,the tree didn't answer,but deep down,she knew the cause.For years,Aria had heard talks of climate change—on the news,in her school,in conversations between her parents—but it always felt distant,like something happening far away.Now,it was right here in front of her,affecting the place she loved most.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Determined to find the exact answer,Aria set off to the library.________
The next day,Aria organized a meeting at the town hall,where she shared what she had learned with her friends and family.______
11.(2025 云安区模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
"You will never walk again.You will have to use a wheelchair." Unprepared for the doctor's cruel diagnosis,I heard his words fall heavily on my ears.If I had never felt hopeless before,I felt hopeless then.
A catastrophic car accident bad left me unconscious and in critical condition.I awakened to find both legs swathed in casts (被打上石膏).While I had other serious injuries,my legs were my prime concern.I couldn't imagine being disabled for the whole life and being confined to a wheelchair the rest of my life didn't fit into my plans.
Lying in my bed motionless and relying on prayer,I wondered how I could give Jasen,my ten﹣year﹣old son,hope that Mom would heal.He'd been cheerful on every visit,chattering about our previous countless park football games and expecting I could return to the game with him soon.However,I saw the fear in his eyes.Looking forward to having a totally handicapped mother and the implications of that were weighing heavily on his little shoulder.I knew he needed the ray of hope that I would not be in a wheelchair forever.Just maybe,I thought,I could use this experience to teach what to do when adversity strikes.So I kept assuring him I would rise again.His eyes sparkled with trust in me.Then my healthy training began.
At first,I taught myself to move from the bed to the wheelchair.I just made tiny movements for weeks,while getting out of the chair and back into bed proved to be more difficult.After several weeks of these ever so difficult efforts,it seemed that I couldn't make any progress.So it didn't take me long to become impatient with the torturous healthy training.I began to feel on the edge of despair and Jason seemed to sense my depression.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One visit,Jason brought the football we used to play with.________
With my son's unwavering support,I made steady progress.________
12.(2024秋 龙凤区校级期末) On a cold,snowy evening,Jack was at the corner shop,with his sole focus on the Marvel (漫威) superhero figurines (小雕像).Since then,he had diligently walked a neighbor's dog and weeded his neighbors' gardens to earn money for one figurine.Finally he had enough money for one and raced towards the corner shop.Lost in excitement,he accidentally tripped over a homeless old man seated against a wall in the cold,quickly murmuring an apology before continuing on his way.
Inside the shop,Jack glanced at the shelves displaying Hulk,Thor,Captain America,Iron Man,and other beloved heroes.His heart raced as he reached for the Spiderman.
"You're a fan,right?" a friendly voice appeared behind him.
Jack turned to see the shopkeeper,an elderly man with a warm smile. "Yes,they're amazing!" Jack said. "They're strong,and they help so many people.They have super power.I wish I could be a superhero too."
"You can be," the shopkeeper encouraged.
Surprised,Jack asked, "But how?I don't have any super power."
Smiling softly,the shopkeeper bent down,placing his hands on Jack's arms. "Why would you need them?" he replied kindly. "See that woman over there?She needs to take care of three children.However,she still actively helps the elderly in the community.And do you know Jimmy?He is a firefighter who has saved countless lives.Being a hero isn't about super power;it's about what's in your heart."
Locking eyes with Jack,the shopkeeper smiled. "You don't need super power to be a hero.It starts with your heart."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hearing what the shopkeeper said,Jack was lost in thought.
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With relief,Jack found the homeless old man still sitting against the wall.
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13.(2024秋 广州期末)
The Last﹣Minute Purchase
Me work in a jewellery(珠宝) store?It was hard to imagine.I didn't wear any accessories,not even a watch.However,I was a teenager who needed money and the store had a help﹣wanted sign in the window.My lack of interest in jewellery was reflected in my sales.After two weeks,George,my boss,brought out the sales figures.I was dead last.
The closer we got to Christmas,the busier the store got.True to form,many customers rushed into the store desperate to find the perfect gift for their loved ones.Of course,we had just what they wanted,showing them the more expensive items and only showing lower﹣priced ones if they asked.
About a half﹣hour before closing,a young girl came into the store with a worried look.I asked if I could help her."I want to buy a gift for my mom,"she said."It has to be something very special.""What can you tell me about your mom?"I asked."She's beautiful."she replied.My next question was how much money she had to spend."Six dollars."—that was still not much money,even though this happened way back when I was a teenager.
I knew we had some options in her price range.I patiently showed her several pieces.Nothing seemed special enough for the young girl's mom.The store was filling up,with wallets being flipped out like a shootout.George's eyes followed me like searchlights looking for enemy aircraft.
Finally,like the star in the east,a pair of earrings appeared."They're perfect.My mom will love these."the little girl gasped.It came to $4.98.As I started to put the earrings in a bag,two big,brown eyes sparkled at me with great joy—the joy of this season.
"Could you gift﹣wrap them,please?"she requested.I got out one of the store's special boxes,wrapped the earrings in gold paper,put a red ribbon around it.The gift looked beautiful,fit for the best mom in the world.She must have been the best mom in the world.What other kind of mother would raise such a wonderful child?
注意:
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(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Head held high,the girl danced out of the store,delighted like a little deer._____
George stared at me with wide eyes—though it was Christmas,he wasn't merry at all._____
14.(2024秋 湖南期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Me work in a jewelry store?It was hard to imagine.However,I was a teenager who needed money and the store had a help﹣wanted sign in the window.They hired me,despite my lack of experience.
My lack of interest in jewelry was reflected in my sales.After two weeks,George,my boss,brought out the sales figures.I was dead last.
Embarrassed,I approached him for advice.George leaned forward,his voice low but confident,"The key to success,"he began,"is to spot the customers likely to spend more and buy the pricier items."
I listened attentively.
He continued,"Once you've got them,make it quick.Show them a few high﹣end pieces,get their decision,and close the deal.Time is money,and you don't want to waste it on customers who are just browsing(逛商店)."
I frowned,"I thought our job was to help customers find the perfect gift,something meaningful for their loved ones."
George chuckled(轻笑),a knowing smile playing on his lips."This is business."
Business?Perhaps,the art of selling was truly about speed and efficiency,rather than connection and care.In the next few days,George tried hard to show me how to do business in the "right"way.
Then another weekend came.Many customers rushed into the store,desperate to find the perfect gift for their loved ones.Of course,we had just what they wanted,showing them the more expensive items and only showing lower﹣priced ones if they asked.
About a half﹣hour before closing,a young girl came into the store with a worried look.She wore an old jacket and looked quite ordinary.
"I want a gift for my best friend,"she said."It has to be something very special."
My next question was how much money she had to spend.
"Six dollars."
Six dollars!I glanced at George,who shook his head slightly,showing me clearly that this girl wasn't the right "guest"and that I should get rid of her as soon as possible.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But I just couldn't ignore the worry in the girl's eyes.________
It seemed that I wasted much time on a sale of$5.98,but it taught me much.________
15.(2025 端州区二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During the first week of high school,one of the major headaches for Eva was finding her way in the huge school building.It was a six﹣story building.On each floor,hallways stretched in four also a library,a cafeteria,and a gym.directions,leading to classrooms,labs,and teachers' offices.Somewhere in the building,there was also a library,a cafeteria,and a gym.
Having a poor sense of direction,Eva found it impossible to get around in such a huge building.All the different hallways and rooms were too much to think about.She decided that she would memorize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest of the place didn't exist.
In her first P.E.class,Eva was shocked when Coach Pitt announced that everyone had to run one mile around the track outside.There was nothing she feared more than having to run a whole mile.To Eva, "a mile" was used to describe long distances.It was ten miles from her home to her grandfather's,and that always seemed like a long way,even in a car!
When Coach Pitt blew his whistle,Eva figured she would be left in the dust.However,while some of her classmates edged ahead,others actually fell behind. "It's just the beginning," she thought. "I'll come in last for sure."
Soon Eva began to breathe hard,with her heart pounding and legs shaking.Feeling desperate,Eva started using a mind trick on herself.She stopped thinking about the word "mile." Instead,she focused on reaching the shadow east on the track by a tree up ahead.Then she concentrated on jogging to the spot where the track curved(拐弯).After that,she tried to see if she could complete her first lap(一圈).One lap turned into two,then three,then four.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Coach Pitt said "Nice work!" to her at the finish line,Eva was surprised.________
Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building.________
16.(2025 南京模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The little country schoolhouse was heated by an old﹣fashioned coal stove.A little boy had the job of coming to school early each day to start the fire and warm the room before his teacher and classmates arrived.
One morning they arrived to find the schoolhouse in flames.
They dragged the unconscious little boy out of the burning building more dead than alive.He had major burns over the lower half of his body and was taken to the nearby county hospital.
From his bed the terribly burned,semi﹣conscious little boy faintly heard the doctor talking to his mother.The doctor told his mother that her son would possibly die for the terrible fire had damaged the lower half of his body.
But the brave boy didn't want to die.He made up his mind that he would survive.Somehow,to the amazement of the physician,he did survive.When the mortal(致命的) danger was past,he again heard the doctor and his mother speaking quietly.The mother was told that since the fire had destroyed so much flesh in his legs,he was doomed (注定)to be unable to walk properly with no use at all of his lower limbs.
Once more the brave boy made up his mind.He would walk.But unfortunately from the waist down,he had no motor ability.His thin legs just dangled (悬垂) there,all but lifeless.
Ultimately he was released from the hospital.Every day his mother would massage his little legs,but there was no feeling,no control,nothing.Yet his determination that he would walk was as strong as ever.
When he wasn't in bed,he was confined(离不开) to a wheelchair.One sunny day his mother wheeled him out into the yard with a fence around its edge to get some fresh air.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
This day,instead of sitting still,he threw himself from the chair.________
Using the fence as his support,he raised himself up slowly.________
17.(2025 新疆一模) I lived in a small town and I had three best friends,Danny,Mia,and Ruby.We loved to play together after school and our favorite pastime was flying colorful kites in the open field near the large oak tree (橡树) .
One sunny Saturday,we met up to play.We all had our kites ready,beautifully decorated with bright colors and patterns.The wind was just right,so it was a perfect day to let our kites soar (翱翔).After a while,we decided to have a competition—who could fly the kite the highest.The field echoed (回响) with our joyful laughter as we each took turns,our eyes gleaming with anticipation.However,as I let my kite fly high up into the sky,a gust of wind blew it off course.It got tangled (使缠结) in the branches of the large oak tree that stood tall in the field.I was disappointed but determined.I decided to climb the tree to rescue my kite.My friends looked at me nervously as I started my climb,the tree towering over them.
As I climbed higher and higher,the others watched with bated breath (屏住呼吸).They were worried but also a little excited.After all,it was quite an adventure to see me climbing so high.Suddenly,I felt something wrong.I was stuck!The branch I was standing on was slippery and I couldn't seem to move.My friends looked at me with wide,scared eyes.They didn't know how to help me.They just shouted words of encouragement,assuring me that I could do it.
I tried my best to move,but I was scared and my heart was pounding hard.Suddenly,I lost my footing and fell!My friends gasped in shock.Fortunately,I didn't fall from a high height,but it was enough to hurt my arm badly.I cried out in pain.Mia and Ruby quickly ran over to me while Danny ran to fetch an adult.I was sobbing,my arm throbbing with pain.My friends were there by my side,comforting me.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The townsfolk (镇民) soon arrived and their expressions etched with concern and alarm.
______
But they failed to make me happy because of the pain.
______
18.(2024秋 运城期末) Grandma's lively farm had always been a paradise where Emma had great fun during vocation!But this time,her grandma couldn't get out of bed!She fell ill.
"Don't worry," Emma told her grandma, "I' ll look after everything!" She knew how to feed all the animals:it was easy!Food pellets (丸) for the chickens and ducks.Oats (燕麦) for the horse.Plenty of grass for the four sheep and the goat.
She could also water the vegetables and collect eggs from the chicken coop.
"What a great help you are," Grandma said when Emma brought her a bowl of soup for lunch.
"It's no trouble!" Emma smiled.
"I'll have to get up soon," Grandma sighed. "Dolly will need milking." Dolly the goat had to be milked every day.In fact,she would come outside and bleat (咩咩叫) when it was time!But Emma thought that her grandma still looked pale and shaky…
"I can do it!" Emma said confidently.She hadn't tried milking yet,but she had watched Grandma closely!Grandma would always put on her special dress and straw hat,get the bucket from the tool shed (棚),get Dolly to the milking shed,and get everything done.
When Dolly bleated to be milked,Emma went out to see her.She expected the goat to follow her to the milking shed like she did with Grandma,but the animal just stood there.
"Come on,Dolly," Emma said. "I'm milking you today.Grandma's sick,so we have to work together."
Dolly just bleated impatiently,moving her feet uncomfortably.
"Maybe I need to speak more firmly," Emma thought. "Now listen,Dolly.I want you to follow me to the milking shed,right now!" But Dolly wandered across the yard!
"Hey,come back here!" Emma called.Dolly stopped and turned around.She didn't like this little stranger.Grandma never yelled at her!Emma was at a loss what to do next.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
All at once,an idea popped into her head.
______
Just at that moment,Grandma's dresses and the straw hat hanging over a chair caught her sight.
______
19.(2025 张家界模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语,续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tom adored dogs very much and he always fed the homeless dogs,enjoying the company of those lovely animals.
It was a nice holiday.Tom's parents sent him to his Aunt's house,where there was a a little dog called KiKi.The dog had golden fur which felt very comfortable,like touching the soft cotton.Every time KiKi saw Tom,it would leap to its feet wagging his tail and his eyes sparkling with excitement.
However,KiKi was unhappy in the house He was not given his meals on time,nor was he taken for a walk.KiKi was always shouted at and abused all day."Your aunt bought KiKi so that the dog could protect her house from thieves,but actually she doesn't love him",a neighbour of Tom's aunt told him one day.
Tom felt sad.At night he could hear KiKi make mournful sounds in the cold."Why don't you make a coat for your pet?"Tom paused and said,"He feels cold."His aunt answered,"I have much better things to do.It's just a dog!"
One day Tom went out for a walk with KiKi,when a fierce storm started.Tom ran to take shelter in a sweet shop.It was only after a few minutes that he realized that KiKi was not with him. "The storm separated us",Tom was sad,telling his aunt."I searched the entire place with the help of the sweet shop owner but I couldn't find him."Tom's aunt posted an advertisement in the paper.After all she had spent a lot of money buying KiKi and did not want to lose him.
It was a half﹣hour ride by bus.The middle﹣aged lady who greeted KiKi was a motherly sort of a woman.She and her husband had answered Tom's aunt's advertisement in the paper.Since Tom's aunt was out on official tour,Tom had been sent to check on the dog,"He is asleep."the lady said."Come and have a look.It is so cute,just like our dead dog,CiCi.We love him so much."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:Tom went into the room and looked at the dog.That's the lost dog he was looking for.________
Paragraph2:After a moment of hesitation,Tom struggled to say that the dog was not his aunts.________
20.(2025 河源模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Rudi Gonsalves could barely contain his excitement as he sped downhill.It was the first day of his holiday in the Romanian ski resort of Poiana Brasov and he was 6,000 feet up one of its highest mountains,breathing in the cleanest air.
Weather and snow conditions were perfect.An experienced skier,he tackled the difficult "black" run with ease,knees gently bent to meet the uneven surface of the snow.
Rudi,a part﹣time youth worker from Epsom Downs,Surrey,regularly booked a winter holiday with his wife Sue.But Sue was scared of heights and could not overcome her sense of foreboding as the skiing season approached.
So this time Rudi,a keen sportsman and fit for his 57 years,had come alone.
As he snaked his way down the mountain on that March afternoon last year,snowflakes began to fall—lightly at first,then more heavily until the clouds blotted out the sun entirely,transforming everything into a ghostly whiteness.
He could just make out other skiers descending the slopes as fast as they could.I'd better stay close to them for safety,he decided.This could be tricky.
Straining to see ahead,Rudi was only vaguely aware of a looming outline lumbering up the mountain.
"Did anyone see me fall?Where am I?"
He looked around him,trying to get his bearings,but in every direction there was only the same vast whiteness.
Then he took out his gold watch,a treasured present from his wife.It not only told him the time,1.54pm,it also seemed to give him strength.
It was getting dark when Rudi finally gave up his attempt to scale the mountain and decided to head downhill instead.He knew it would mean moving away from the best route back to his hotel,but there seemed to be no alternative.
Despair began to dog Rudi as he faced up to the reality of spending a night in the open.It was 5.30 pm and the temperature was dropping fast.He began to shiver,his teeth chattering uncontrollably.He felt very alone.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After three hours he was very tired,colder than he had ever felt.________
He was barely aware of two horses drawing a wagon along the lane towards him.________
2025年高考英语二轮复习考前押题卷:读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 2月份模拟) Warren was a young man and he was doing odd jobs outside.Warren's mother called to tell him that Nana(外婆) Kitty had Alzheimer's(阿尔茨海默症).The Chicago wind blew hard into the phone,releasing tears from his eyes.So Warren quit his job and returned to his hometown to look after Kitty.
Nana Kitty's house hadn't weathered the winters too well.The middle of the roof was slumped(塌) in.The stair was missing a step.Warren felt it had been years since he'd been home,but his mom corrected him,saying it had only been sixteen months.She asked if he was going back to college,but Warren said he focused on taking care of Nana Kitty.
Upon arrival,they found Nana Kitty standing in the hallway,holding a baseball bat,looking doubtful.Warren's mom asked her to put the bat down and open the door.NanaKitty's appearance was untidy—messy white hair,nightgown,untied hiking boots.Warren remembered hiding under bushes at her house during hot summer days,listening to the sounds of insects,and his mother and grandmother talking.
Inside,the familiar smells of dust,coffee and roast chicken filled the air,bringing back memories.Nana Kitty examined Warren coldly and asked if he was homeless.Technically,he was,as he began his role as her home health assistant.
Warren helped her to the bathroom and found an old straight razor(剃须刀).He managed to shave his beard,cutting himself only once.He showed her his clean face,hoping she'd recognize him.Instead,she gently wiped his wound with toilet paper.The closeness of the gesture brought tears to his eyes.He was just twenty﹣one,a fatherless boy who had had little success in the world so far.He rested his head on her lap.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Oh little Warren,honey,don't cry,"she said softly,as if waking from a dream.______
From that moment on,Warren's days fell into a routine of looking after NanaKitty.______
【答案】 "Oh little Warren,honey,don't cry," she said softly,as if waking from a dream.Her voice was filled with warmth and comfort,a reminder of the love she once showered upon him.She gently stroked his hair,her touch soothing his battered heart.Her eyes,though clouded by Alzheimer's,seemed to hold a flicker of recognition,a fleeting moment of clarity that brought them both a sense of peace. "I'm here now,Nana.I'll take care of you," Warren whispered,his voice breaking but filled with determination.
From that moment on,Warren's days fell into a routine of looking after NanaKitty.He cooked her favorite meals,cleaned the house,and took her for walks in the garden.As the days passed,he found joy in the simple things—her laughter at his silly jokes,her content smile as she watched him work.NanaKitty's condition fluctuated,but Warren remained patient and devoted.He learned to cherish every moment,treasuring the bond that had been rekindled between them.Through his care,he discovered a sense of purpose and fulfillment that he had never known before.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文,沃伦得知外婆患阿尔茨海默症后,辞去工作回家照顾。外婆家破旧不堪,她认不出沃伦。沃伦为她剃须时受伤,外婆温柔地为他擦拭伤口,沃伦感动落泪。
高分句型一:He learned to cherish every moment,treasuring the bond that had been rekindled between them.
翻译:他学会了珍惜每一刻,珍惜他们之间重新点燃的纽带。
分析:本句使用了现在分词短语treasuring the bond that had been rekindled between them作状语;that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:Through his care,he discovered a sense of purpose and fulfillment that he had never known before.
翻译:通过他的关怀,他发现了一种前所未有的使命感和满足感。
分析:本句使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】 "Oh little Warren,honey,don't cry," she said softly,as if waking from a dream.Her voice was filled with warmth and comfort,a reminder of the love she once showered upon him.She gently stroked his hair,her touch soothing his battered heart.Her eyes,though clouded by Alzheimer's,seemed to hold a flicker of recognition,a fleeting moment of clarity that brought them both a sense of peace. "I'm here now,Nana.I'll take care of you," Warren whispered,his voice breaking but filled with determination.(外婆温柔安慰沃伦,她的声音和触摸让他感到温暖,她眼中闪过一丝认出的光芒,沃伦承诺会照顾她)
From that moment on,Warren's days fell into a routine of looking after NanaKitty.He cooked her favorite meals,cleaned the house,and took her for walks in the garden.As the days passed,he found joy in the simple things—her laughter at his silly jokes,her content smile as she watched him work.NanaKitty's condition fluctuated,but Warren remained patient and devoted.He learned to cherish every moment,treasuring the bond that had been rekindled between them.【高分句型一】Through his care,he discovered a sense of purpose and fulfillment that he had never known before.【高分句型二】(沃伦照顾外婆的生活起居,从简单的事情中找到快乐,外婆的状况起伏不定,但他始终保持耐心和奉献,发现了前所未有的目标和满足感。)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
2.(2025 江西一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Steger grew up in Bellingham,Washington,about an hour's drive from where he was now,trapped in the Mount Baker Ski Area.The remote place is marked by ropes and signs to warn people that they're leaving the safe zone.Steger and his three fellows had all the required equipment,a two﹣way radio and a backpack with a shovel when they started their second skiing in the morning.On that Friday run,Steger's friends were in front of him when Steger,moving through the trees,ran into trouble.
The front of his board hit a small branch hidden under new snow.Steger fell into a tree well (树坑).Before he could call for help,he was upside down in deeper snow than he'd ever been in.All he could see was blackness.One of Steger's arms was pinned next to his body.Luckily,his other arm had ended up next to his face,so he managed to push the snow away from his mouth,creating a small air pocket.To prevent snow from falling in and covering his mouth,he pulled the tip of his jacket over his face.And now all he could do was stay calm and wait to be rescued.
He figured two or so minutes had passed.Then the two﹣way radio on his shoulder crackled with messages from his friends "Where are you?Let's know if you're in front of us!" He replied and mentioned about his situation.He knew that his friends were downhill from where he was stuck.His friends were surprised and convinced him that they were on their long difficult way back up the hill to rescue him.Meanwhile,it was up to Steger to get himself out,or he'd die.
Then he felt his snowboard,still attached to his feet,move.Francis Zuber,28﹣year﹣old,had gone to Mount Baker Ski Area that Friday to ski.As he sped down the slope,Zuber caught a glimpse of something red.That's when he saw that the upside﹣down snowboard in a tree well was moving.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
"Someone might be trapped under the snow in the tree well," Zuber thought.________
Once they were out,Steger wrapped Zuber in a bear hug.________
【答案】 "Someone might be trapped under the snow in the tree well," Zuber thought.Without hesitation,he quickly skied towards the moving snowboard.When he got closer,he shouted, "Is anyone there?" Steger heard his voice and replied loudly.Zuber realized the situation was urgent.He took out the shovel from his backpack and started to dig the snow around the tree well.The snow was hard,but he didn't give up.After several minutes of hard work,he finally saw Steger's face.With great effort,he pulled Steger out of the snow.
Once they were out,Steger wrapped Zuber in a bear hug. "Thank you so much!You saved my life," Steger said,his voice full of emotion.Just then,Steger's friends arrived.They were shocked to see Steger safe and sound.They all expressed their gratitude to Zuber,saying that his help was a lifesaver.Zuber smiled and said, "I'm just glad I could help.It's what anyone would do in that situation." Then,they all sat down for a while,sharing their experiences and feelings.After that,they skied down the mountain together,with a new friendship formed among them.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Steger在贝克山滑雪时遭遇意外,掉进树坑被困雪中,他通过自救暂时维持生命并与朋友取得联系,此时Zuber看到了他移动的滑雪板,一场救援即将展开的故事。
高分句型一:They all expressed their gratitude to Zuber,saying that his help was a lifesaver.
翻译:他们都对祖伯表达了感激之情,称他的帮助是救命之恩。
分析:本句运用了现在分词短语saying that his help was a lifesaver作伴随状语和that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:It's what anyone would do in that situation.
翻译:任何人在这种情况下都会这么做。
分析:本句运用了what引导的表语从句。
【解答】 "Someone might be trapped under the snow in the tree well," Zuber thought.Without hesitation,he quickly skied towards the moving snowboard.When he got closer,he shouted, "Is anyone there?" Steger heard his voice and replied loudly.Zuber realized the situation was urgent.He took out the shovel from his backpack and started to dig the snow around the tree well.The snow was hard,but he didn't give up.After several minutes of hard work,he finally saw Steger's face.With great effort,he pulled Steger out of the snow.(描写了Zuber确定有人被困后,迅速采取行动进行救援的经过。他可能先是大声呼喊确认被困者位置,接着利用自己携带的工具,如铲子,艰难地挖掘积雪,在挖掘过程中遇到积雪坚硬、挖掘空间受限等困难,但他凭借坚定的决心和不懈的努力,最终成功救出斯泰格)
Once they were out,Steger wrapped Zuber in a bear hug. "Thank you so much!You saved my life," Steger said,his voice full of emotion.Just then,Steger's friends arrived.They were shocked to see Steger safe and sound.They all expressed their gratitude to Zuber,saying that his help was a lifesaver.【高分句型一】Zuber smiled and said, "I'm just glad I could help.It's what anyone would do in that situation.【高分句型二】" Then,they all sat down for a while,sharing their experiences and feelings.After that,they skied down the mountain together,with a new friendship formed among them.(描写了Steger获救后对Zuber表达深深感激,随后他的朋友们赶到,大家一起向Zuber致谢,之后他们交流此次经历的感受,最后一起滑雪下山,在这个过程中他们建立起了新的友谊)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
3.(2025 昆明一模) In the beautiful town Riverview surrounded by rolling hills,lived two brothers,Jack and Tom.
They were as different as night and day—Jack,the older by two years,was a keen reader with a preference for quiet moments spent in academic books,his nose often buried in the pages of historical texts or scientific pared with him,Tom was totally different,full of energy and enthusiasm,always longing for the outdoors.He found joy that came from playing soccer and basketball.The differences between them often led to arguments,creating a gap that seemed impossible to bridge.
One summer,their parents,hoping to mend the growing divide between them,decided to send them on a camping trip in the nearby Blue Ridge Mountains.They thought that the fresh mountain air,coupled with outdoor activities,would bring them closer.
Unwillingly,the two brothers packed their bags,each secretly hoping that the other would give up at the last minute.But neither did,and soon enough,they found themselves setting up camp under a canopy(顶篷) of twinkling stars,the cool night breeze whispering through the trees.
The first few days were tense.They quarreled over insignificant matters—who should carry the water bottle,who got to choose the music during meals,and whose turn it was to gather firewood.Their unpleasant quarrel echoed(回响) through the quiet forest,breaking the peace that enveloped them.Each disagreement seemed to widen the crack between them until one evening when things took a dramatic turn.
A sudden storm rolled in.The wind howled through the trees,and rain began to pour.In the disorder of securing the tent and gathering supplies to prevent them from getting wet,Tom slipped on a muddy path and hurt his ankle badly.Struggling with extreme pain,he knew that he had to turn to Campsite medical tent.
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(2)请按如下格式在答题卡上相应位置作答。
Noticing his brother in such a situation,Jack's heart softened immediately.______
As Tom healed,the brothers worked together to complete the camping trip.______
【答案】 Noticing his brother in such a situation,Jack's heart softened immediately.Forgetting their previous disputes,he rushed to Tom's side,carefully lifting him up and supporting him as they made their way to the medical tent.Inside,Jack gently laid Tom down and helped him apply an ice pack to his injured ankle.Jack's actions spoke louder than words,showing Tom that despite their differences,he cared deeply for his brother's well﹣being.For the first time in a long while,Tom felt a warmth that transcended their disagreements.
As Tom healed,the brothers worked together to complete the camping trip.They shared responsibilities more evenly,finding joy in tasks they once viewed as burdensome.Jack took charge of navigating through the forest trails while Tom,despite his injury,offered encouragement and moral support.As the days went by,their bond grew stronger,and they realized that despite their contrasting interests,they could still find common ground.By the end of the trip,the gap that once seemed impossible to bridge had narrowed significantly,replaced by a deeper understanding and appreciation for each other.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了杰克和汤姆是两兄弟,杰克是汤姆的哥哥,喜欢安静地读学术书籍,而汤姆充满活力和热情,总是渴望户外活动。他们之间的分歧经常导致争吵,造成似乎无法弥合的鸿沟。一年夏天,他们的父母希望弥合他们之间日益加深的分歧,决定送他们去附近的蓝岭山脉露营。结果在营地里汤姆扭伤了脚踝,杰克及时给予帮助,最终两人也因为这次经历加深了感情。
高分句型一:Forgetting their previous disputes,he rushed to Tom's side,carefully lifting him up and supporting him as they made their way to the medical tent.
翻译:他忘记了之前的争执,冲到汤姆身边,小心翼翼地把他扶起来,扶着他朝医疗帐篷走去。
分析:本句运用了现在分词短语Forgetting their previous disputes作状语,现在分词短语carefully lifting him up and supporting him作状语,as引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二:For the first time in a long while,Tom felt a warmth that transcended their disagreements.
翻译:很长一段时间以来,汤姆第一次感到一种温暖,这种温暖超越了他们之间的分歧。
分析:本句运用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】 Noticing his brother in such a situation,Jack's heart softened immediately.Forgetting their previous disputes,he rushed to Tom's side,carefully lifting him up and supporting him as they made their way to the medical tent.【高分句型一】Inside,Jack gently laid Tom down and helped him apply an ice pack to his injured ankle.Jack's actions spoke louder than words,showing Tom that despite their differences,he cared deeply for his brother's well﹣being.For the first time in a long while,Tom felt a warmth that transcended their disagreements.【高分句型二】(描写了杰克主动帮助汤姆,汤姆感到温暖)
As Tom healed,the brothers worked together to complete the camping trip.They shared responsibilities more evenly,finding joy in tasks they once viewed as burdensome.Jack took charge of navigating through the forest trails while Tom,despite his injury,offered encouragement and moral support.As the days went by,their bond grew stronger,and they realized that despite their contrasting interests,they could still find common ground.By the end of the trip,the gap that once seemed impossible to bridge had narrowed significantly,replaced by a deeper understanding and appreciation for each other.(描写了两人的感情得到了加深,对彼此更深层次的理解和欣赏)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
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(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
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4.(2025 安阳一模) I flew through the back door,excitedly announcing to my mom, "Mom,I've been nominated (提名) for the National Junior Honor Society!" My mother smiled with pride and replied, "I'm so proud of you,honey."
Together in the family room,I began filling out the application for the Honor Society.It required proof of possessing all the necessary candidate characteristics.The following day,I submitted the paperwork to my advisor and didn't give it much further thought.
Months passed,and one afternoon,as soon as I stepped off the bus,I rushed home with a letter from the school regarding the Honor Society. "Mom," I said,handing her the letter with tears welling up in my eyes, "I didn't make it.They didn't choose me." My mother hugged me and said, "Oh,honey,I'm sorry.There must have been some kind of mistake."
That night at dinner,I said sadly, "It's not fair." My mother agreed and then shared a story about her high school friend who was intelligent and kind﹣hearted but never made the National Honor Society.Despite his hurt and anger,he became a world﹣renowned lung cancer specialist,saving lives every day.
I grasped my mom's message:not being part of the Honor Society wouldn't define my future,but it was certainly painful in the moment.However,seeing most of my friends get selected made those weeks especially tough for me.I opened up to my parents about how difficult it was and declared, "This shouldn't happen to anyone else." We brainstormed ways to improve the selection process and arranged a meeting with the school principal (校长) to present our ideas.
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(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A few days later,I received a call from the principal.
Finally,my graduation arrived and the principal announced my name as an Honor Society member.
【答案】 A few days later,I received a call from the principal.He told me that our suggestions were valuable and the committee was going to take some of them.I felt proud that I had helped future students.More importantly,he admitted that they had made some mistakes in their work.They re﹣examined my application and decided to accept me as a member of the Honor Society.What a pleasant surprise!No words can convey how thrilled I was at that moment.
Finally,my graduation arrived and the principal announced my name as an Honor Society member.Overwhelmed with excitement,I jumped up and ran onto the stage.I had long been convinced that everyone needed to seize every chance to make their voice heard and make their presence felt.Then I said something like this:Being a member of the Honor Society means a lot to me.However,what matters more is what we can do to make a difference to other people's lives.
【分析】本文以作者申请加入荣誉生会为线索展开,讲述了作者兴奋地告诉妈妈自己被提名的事,并提交了申请表。几个月后,她得知自己未被选中,非常伤心。妈妈安慰她,并分享了一个朋友的故事,说明即使落选也能取得成就,但看到朋友们被选中,作者仍然很痛苦。作者与父母讨论后,提出改进选拔过程的建议,并与校长会面。校长采纳了部分建议,重新审查她的申请,最终接受她加入荣誉生会。在毕业典礼上,作者被宣布为荣誉生会会员,并强调改变他人生活比这个身份本身更重要。
高分句型一:More importantly,he admitted that they had made some mistakes in their work.
翻译:更重要的是,他承认他们在工作中犯了一些错误。
分析:本句运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:However,what matters more is what we can do to make a difference to other people's lives.
翻译:然而,更重要的是我们能做些什么来改变别人的生活。
分析:本句运用了两个what引导的主语从句。
【解答】 A few days later,I received a call from the principal.He told me that our suggestions were valuable and the committee was going to take some of them.I felt proud that I had helped future students.More importantly,he admitted that they had made some mistakes in their work.【高分句型一】They re﹣examined my application and decided to accept me as a member of the Honor Society.What a pleasant surprise!No words can convey how thrilled I was at that moment.(描写了校长认可作者的建议的价值,重新审查作者的申请,并通过了该申请)
Finally,my graduation arrived and the principal announced my name as an Honor Society member.Overwhelmed with excitement,I jumped up and ran onto the stage.I had long been convinced that everyone needed to seize every chance to make their voice heard and make their presence felt.Then I said something like this:Being a member of the Honor Society means a lot to me.However,what matters more is what we can do to make a difference to other people's lives.【高分句型二】(描写了作者激动地走上舞台,对自己能够表达想法,用自己的行动带来改变而开心)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定